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[Luxord]
503 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
[Luxord]
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Παρασκευή, 20 Ιουλίου 2012 at 11:24:24 πμ

Artist: f(x)
Title: Electric Shock
Tags: NoTime2Cry Collab
BPM: 125
Filesize: 5434kb
Play Time: 03:13
Difficulties Available:
  1. Collab (4,97 stars, 581 notes)
  2. Kiyoshi's Rush (4,98 stars, 589 notes)
Download: f(x) - Electric Shock
Download: f(x) - Electric Shock (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
Collab - Done
Kiyoshi's Rush - Done
SB by NoTime2Cry

For Approve!

Changes
SPOILER
Offset Change @ 20.06.2012
Some Placing & AR change, Fixed the Time lines @ 21.06.2012
Mods mods mods <3 - Updated with the latest Mod posts.
Last edited by [Luxord] , edited 14 times in total.
Ryu_old
Ryu_old
SPOILER
17:03 <KiyoshiX101> : Hey
17:03 <Ryu> : hi :3
17:03 <KiyoshiX101> : you have some time for a mod o:
17:03 <KiyoshiX101> : ?
17:04 <Ryu> : sure
17:04 *KiyoshiX101 is listening to (f(x) - Electric Shock)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/53114]
17:04 <KiyoshiX101> : Thank you <3 xD
17:08 <Ryu> : nowmod?
17:08 <KiyoshiX101> : If you want ^^
17:08 <Ryu> : ok :3 btw
17:08 <Ryu> : i like sb
17:09 <KiyoshiX101> : o: xD
17:10 <Ryu> : did u use hitsounds
17:10 <Ryu> : ?
17:10 <KiyoshiX101> : on my diff yes
17:10 <KiyoshiX101> : on collab not much
17:10 <KiyoshiX101> : I think
17:10 <Ryu> : ah
17:10 <KiyoshiX101> : XD
17:12 <Ryu> : 00:11:412 - clap
17:12 <Ryu> : 00:12:132 - ^
17:12 <Ryu> : 00:12:852 - ^
17:12 <Ryu> : 00:13:572 - ^
17:12 <Ryu> : 00:15:012 - ^
17:13 <Ryu> : 00:16:212 - ^
17:13 <Ryu> : 00:17:892
17:13 <Ryu> : 00:19:332 - ^
17:13 <Ryu> : 00:21:252 - ^
17:13 <Ryu> : 00:22:692 - ^
17:14 <Ryu> : 00:23:652 - ^
17:15 <Ryu> : 01:10:452 (1,2,3) - make a bit beatiful xD
17:16 <Ryu> : http://puu.sh/Cyeb
17:16 <Ryu> : 01:28:212 (2,3,4) - - ^
17:17 <Ryu> : 01:55:092 (1,2,3) - make the same with 01:56:052 (1,2,3) -
17:18 <Ryu> : 02:24:132 - remove
17:19 <Ryu> : nice map, but i dont like kpop xD
17:19 <KiyoshiX101> : XD
17:19 <KiyoshiX101> : Which diff are those?
17:19 <KiyoshiX101> : xD
17:19 <Ryu> : collab
17:19 <KiyoshiX101> : kk sec
17:20 <Ryu> : AR = 8
17:20 <Ryu> : ur diff
17:21 <Ryu> : WAIT ur diff
17:21 <Ryu> : is collab too o.o?
17:21 <KiyoshiX101> : Nope
17:21 <KiyoshiX101> : it's just the SB
17:21 <Ryu> : ah
17:21 <Ryu> : xD
17:21 <KiyoshiX101> : Shows up to all diffs
17:21 <KiyoshiX101> : xD
17:21 <Ryu> : but u can remove it i guess
17:24 <Ryu> : ur diff is nice one
17:24 <Ryu> : nothin wrong
17:24 <Ryu> : finished C: just change AR
17:24 <Ryu> : to 8
17:26 <Ryu> : afkman

DAFUQ IM THE FIRST.

map is perfect. really. good luck /o/ and ask to mod ur map here 60
Roxas
osu! Alumni
1,354 posts
Joined August 2011
Roxas
Modding from the queue ;3

COLLAB

00:03:492 (3) - clap
00:05:412 (3) - ^
00:07:332 (1) - ^
00:24:852 (1,2,3) - whistle
00:26:292 (6) - clap
00:26:772 (1,2,3) - whistle
00:28:212 (6,7) - clap
00:28:692 (1,2,3) - whistle
00:30:132 (5) - clap (end slider)
00:31:332 (9) - whistle
00:32:052 (11) - clap
00:33:252 (4) - whistle (start slider)
00:33:972 (5) - clap (start slider)
00:35:172 (8) - whistle (start slider)
00:35:892 (9) - clap
00:37:092 (5) - whistle (start slider)
00:37:812 (6) - clap
00:39:012 (10) - whistle
00:39:732 (1) - clap in the repeat
00:40:212 (2) - ^
00:42:372 (6) - clap
00:44:292 (3) - ^
00:46:212 (8) - ^
00:47:172 (10) - ^
00:48:132 (2) - ^
00:54:852 (7) - ^
00:55:812 (10) - ^
01:12:132 (2) - whistle
(add whistle 01:13:092, 01:14:052, 01:15:012 and ohters after... Until 01:27:492)
01:28:212 (2,3,4) - clap
01:30:132 (3,4,5) - ^
01:32:292 (2,4) - ^
01:33:972 (1,2,3) - ^
01:35:412 (7) - whistle
01:35:892 (8,9) - clap (end slider)
01:37:332 (2) - whistle
01:37:692 (3,4) - clap (in the 3 only end slider)
01:39:252 (8) - whistle
01:39:732 (1,2,3) - clap
01:41:172 (7,9) - whistle
02:12:012 (4,5,6,7) - ^


00:30:612 (6) - New combo
00:34:452 (6) - NC
00:40:932 (3) - NC
00:42:852 (7) - NC
00:43:332 (1) - Remove combo
DerekMcD
1,484 posts
Joined February 2009
DerekMcD
Just Collab...

[Collab]

00:21:252 (12) - Move 2 grids up.
00:25:572 (5) - Do you like this? http://puu.sh/CEfP
00:27:492 (5) - ^ http://puu.sh/CEhO
01:05:892 (8) - I believe you should remove one dot and fix this slider...
01:07:812 (8) - ^
01:18:372 (3) - Move one grid right.
01:20:052 (2,4,6,8,10) - Are not the oppesite same as the odds ( 01:19:812 (1,3,5,7,9,11) )... Fix this...
01:28:452 (4) - Overlapping 01:28:332 (3)...
01:30:372 (5) - ^ 01:30:252 (4)
02:44:772 (3) - Adjust the slider.
02:45:732 (4) - ^
02:46:692 (5) - ^
02:47:652 (6) - ^
tiper
tiper
Collab:
00:33:972 (5,1,2) - do this, it looks better

00:30:612 (1,2,3,4) -

00:46:452 (10,11,12) -

01:19:812 (1) - dip beat lower
01:37:692 (3) - +1 repeat
01:50:772 - add a beat here
01:50:772 (11) - bad intersect
02:27:252 (1,2,3) - very big spacing
marshallracer
1,601 posts
Joined December 2010
marshallracer
[General]
BG is 1228x767, maybe find another bg with 1024x768
set preview times on both diffs consistenly
set countdown in both diffs to 2
Make tags being the same in both diffs
The storyboard belongs into the Collab diff. and does not need to appear in Kiyoshi's Rush diff.

[Collab]
no
..
00:28:692 (1,2,3,4) - probably just me, but this one's kinda crazy
00:58:212 (10,1,2,3) - NOOOOOO ... I'll slay the person who won't fix this bad spacing
01:03:972 (9,1,2,3) - yeah, hardly readable overlapping
01:22:452 (1,2) - fix spacing, else it seems like a small stream
01:26:292 (6,7,8) - spacing & readability .. please fix it somehow like this (hope you can see what I mean, and after this you won't need to fix spacing since the jumps then seems pretty much ok)
01:59:652 (10,1,2,3) - same as 00:58:212 since it's copypasted
02:26:052 (8) - ewww, no
02:39:972 (9,1) - fix this overlapping
02:41:652 (4,5,6) - can't you place it differently?
03:06:492 (1) - way too short spinner, map something different there
03:11:532 (17,18,19,20,21) - errr .. on what is this mapped? it's surely NOT following the music

[Kiyoshi's Rush]
i'll just mention the things here which I dislike the most
01:14:532 (1,1) - place them further apart
01:58:452 (4,5,6,1,2,3) - hardly readable
02:08:052 (1,2) - WHAT & WHY? <_< it's TOTALLY unreadable (sorry if i'm exagerrating)
02:09:972 (1,2) - ^
02:58:692 (1) - way too short spinner
03:13:692 (1) - this one's very short, too


I .. kinda had the feeling the were out of ideas towards the end of your map .. I share your "pain", but it also seemed like you just wanted to make it as hard and as fast as you could ..

BUT THE SONG MAKES ME GO *dance* so I'm not that disappointed as your mapset was still playable
pimp
1,417 posts
Joined April 2010
pimp
general

use the same tags in both diff

remove electric shock f(x)from tags

collab

00:15:252 (3,4,5,6) - i think this pattern is a bit simple
00:40:932 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - this is too simple, follow the voice here too?
00:58:212 (10,1) - try to dont overlap here?
01:03:972 (9,1,2) - the slider is overlapping the circles (its really invisible if you play with hidden)
01:04:332 - i dont get the purpose of this inherit, remove it?
01:42:372 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - same as 00:40:932
02:36:132 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) ^
03:06:492 - this spinner is too short, autoplay must to be able to do at least 2000 bonus spin


Kiyoshi's Rush

set a preview point for it

00:41:412 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this is too simple, follow the voice here too?
01:42:372 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - ^
00:56:184 - remove the useless inherit here
01:57:624 - ^
02:58:692 - spiner is too short, and lacks a new combo.
03:13:692 - ^
03:14:532 - inherit here, end the kiai
Tur00
608 posts
Joined November 2011
Tur00
[Collab]

03:14:532 (1) - delete this note. dont sound very good :$

[Kiyoshi's Rush]

03:14:532 (1) - same of the collab lvl.

This is all xD
if you want dont give me kudos
All , my mod is very little u_U
Tur00
608 posts
Joined November 2011
Tur00
2 kudos for it xDDDDD!


Thanks :3
AndreasHD
478 posts
Joined June 2010
AndreasHD
Cool map! fun to play, and I hope it gets ranked after some changes.
Good luck!
Amethyst Wolf
184 posts
Joined April 2010
Amethyst Wolf
From my modding queue

[Thing before I mod]
First of all, my english is poor.
I'm not a great modder, so my modding may not help you so much.
I'm modding in grid level 4.
If I put a ?, feel free to ignore it.
If I put a ., please face it.
If I put a (FF), that means "remember to Fix Following notes."

[Collab]
00:38:412 (8) - why the prev distance is 0.71x but the next is 0.64?
01:28:692 (5) - try put it at x:464 y:240?

[Kiyoshi's Rush]
- called Kiyoshi's Rush but this is collab again...lol
00:47:172 (5,7) - 0.4x for no reason?
[Luxord]
503 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
[Luxord]

Amethyst Wolf wrote:

From my modding queue

[Thing before I mod]
First of all, my english is poor.
I'm not a great modder, so my modding may not help you so much.
I'm modding in grid level 4.
If I put a ?, feel free to ignore it.
If I put a ., please face it.
If I put a (FF), that means "remember to Fix Following notes."

[Collab]
00:38:412 (8) - why the prev distance is 0.71x but the next is 0.64? - Made it as more precise as I could :c
01:28:692 (5) - try put it at x:464 y:240? - Long jump but works for me o:
-
[Kiyoshi's Rush]
- called Kiyoshi's Rush but this is collab again...lol
00:47:172 (5,7) - 0.4x for no reason? - Didn't understand this one >.<
Thanks for your mod! :3
Amethyst Wolf
184 posts
Joined April 2010
Amethyst Wolf

KiyoshiX101 wrote:

Amethyst Wolf wrote:

00:47:172 (5,7) - 0.4x for no reason? - Didn't understand this one >.<
Thanks for your mod! :3
I mean 0.4x distance
[Luxord]
503 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
[Luxord]
:o

Amethyst Wolf wrote:

I mean 0.4x distance
I don't see what's wrong with it o: just small distance after a jump, you'd like to suggest something else?
Amethyst Wolf
184 posts
Joined April 2010
Amethyst Wolf

KiyoshiX101 wrote:

:o

Amethyst Wolf wrote:

I mean 0.4x distance
I don't see what's wrong with it o: just small distance after a jump, you'd like to suggest something else?
If you think it's okay, it's okay.
dawnbreeze_old
17 posts
Joined March 2012
dawnbreeze_old
[GENERAL]
- Close letterbox during break.
- I think the speed of countdown should be double.
- Find another BG? Cause your background size is 1228 x 767. (Recommended: 1024x768)

[COMMENT]
- Never playing Approved map and Insane diff before, Sorry... =,="
- Have a nice day~
Naichatta
751 posts
Joined July 2010
Naichatta
hi there :3 From your queue

[General]

Set PreviewTime please

[Collab]

00:12:132 (7) - add NC?
00:15:972 (1) - ^
00:19:812 (6) - ^
00:23:652 (7) - ^
00:44:772 (5) - ^
00:45:732 (7) - ^
00:50:052 (6) - ^
00:54:612 (6) - ^
01:03:972 (9,1) - switch NC
01:36:372 (9) - put at x:480 y271
01:50:052 (10,1) - switch NC
03:08:532 (7) - hidden arrowpoints (unrankable)

[Kiyoshi's Rush]
OD+1 it's better imo


Resnap please

00:07:692 (1) - remove NC?
00:39:732 (6) - add NC?
00:42:852 (4) - ^
00:44:292 (7) - ^
00:50:052 (4) - ^
00:51:252 (1) - ^
01:02:292 (1,1) - remove NC?
01:15:012 (1) - ^
02:00:132 (1) - ^
02:17:292 (7) - add NC?
02:18:852 (5) - ^

good luck~ :)
[Luxord]
503 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
[Luxord]
Thank you very very very very muuuch <33 :3
tetsutaro
3,863 posts
Joined February 2008
tetsutaro
Hi! This mod is for my modding queue

General
Let's not waste time: your maps are too f***ing difficult for me (4.97* & 4.98*)
I even failed halfway in Half-time mode.
The song is good, the vocals has great voices…
All in all it is a very well chosen song for an osu mapset, but the high difficulty will scare away a lot of people.

Yet the two difficulties are themselves very well made (in the high- level tier)
The time-wise placement of notes matches the vocal nicely.
Although the pattern can be confusing at times, this proves to be a great challenge for the more able players in the osu community. These two diffs will be approved without much problem.

The only suggestion I could give is to make new, easier difficulties (not exceeding 4.5* in difficulty) for the less experienced players. This can be done by
:arrow: keeping distance snap
:arrow: reducing slider velocity
:arrow: straightening knotted sliders
No changes to the general note placement have to be done.
If you need help on making easier diffs, feel free to contact me.
[Luxord]
503 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
[Luxord]

tetsutaro wrote:

Hi! This mod is for my modding queue

General
Let's not waste time: your maps are too f***ing difficult for me (4.97* & 4.98*)
I even failed halfway in Half-time mode.
The song is good, the vocals has great voices…
All in all it is a very well chosen song for an osu mapset, but the high difficulty will scare away a lot of people.

Yet the two difficulties are themselves very well made (in the high- level tier)
The time-wise placement of notes matches the vocal nicely.
Although the pattern can be confusing at times, this proves to be a great challenge for the more able players in the osu community. These two diffs will be approved without much problem.

The only suggestion I could give is to make new, easier difficulties (not exceeding 4.5* in difficulty) for the less experienced players. This can be done by
:arrow: keeping distance snap
:arrow: reducing slider velocity
:arrow: straightening knotted sliders
No changes to the general note placement have to be done.
If you need help on making easier diffs, feel free to contact me.
Thanks a lot for your comments and your suggestions, I would use them to make an esier difficulty but this map is going for Approve Status, no Ranked status.

Thanks a lot for your time :3
Gotori
81 posts
Joined September 2010
Gotori
nice. i love this song <3
haena_old
5 posts
Joined August 2014
haena_old

KiyoshiX101 wrote:

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Παρασκευή, 20 Ιουλίου 2012 at 11:24:24 πμ

Artist: f(x)
Title: Electric Shock
Tags: NoTime2Cry Collab
BPM: 125
Filesize: 5434kb
Play Time: 03:13
Difficulties Available:
  1. Collab (4,97 stars, 581 notes)
  2. Kiyoshi's Rush (4,98 stars, 589 notes)
Download: f(x) - Electric Shock
Download: f(x) - Electric Shock (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
Collab - Done
Kiyoshi's Rush - Done
SB by NoTime2Cry

For Approve!

Changes
SPOILER
Offset Change @ 20.06.2012
Some Placing & AR change, Fixed the Time lines @ 21.06.2012
Mods mods mods <3 - Updated with the latest Mod posts.
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