This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年2月15日 at 上午 01:59:47

Artist: Four Season
Title: Minamikaze Dramatic (TV Size)
Source: Natsuiro Kiseki
Tags: ending ed sphere Kotobuki Minako Takagaki Ayahi Tomatsu Haruka Toyosaki Aki ms0543724 gina bossandy boss
BPM: 127
Filesize: 17649kb
Play Time: 01:41
Difficulties Available:

1. Boss Taiko Oni (4.83 stars, 347 notes)
2. Easy (1.62 stars, 75 notes)
3. GiNa's Normal (3.98 stars, 121 notes)
4. Hard (4.75 stars, 201 notes)

Download: Four Season - Minamikaze Dramatic (TV Size)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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**#4 Map!
夏色キセキ / 夏色奇蹟(Natsuiro Kiseki) ED2
Another ED map(click me)

hello, from timing help

offset just a bit late, my test play got 0ms late on offset: 17925 (-23 on current)
that is all, re-snap all notes, green timelines, preview time

I love this song <3 it's possible for me to make an Insane diff for this ww?

minami no kaze wa mirai mu-ki~

Vicho-kun wrote:

I love this song <3 it's possible for me to make an Insane diff for this ww?

minami no kaze wa mirai mu-ki~

Of course, you can :3

[General]
-拿掉"Letterbox during breaks" (song setup -> Storyboarding)

[Hard]
00:45:326 (3) - x:296 y:56
00:45:562 (4) - x:232 y:104
01:41:074 - kiai在這結束應該比較好

然後我想做Normal，不過我最近沒梗;w;
可以的話請讓我拖久一點吧 （我要去補完這個動畫）

GiNa wrote:

[General]
-拿掉"Letterbox during breaks" (song setup -> Storyboarding) Fixed

[Hard]
00:45:326 (3) - x:296 y:56 Fixed
00:45:562 (4) - x:232 y:104Fixed
01:41:074 - kiai在這結束應該比較好Ok~Fixed

然後我想做Normal，不過我最近沒梗;w; 好哇~
可以的話請讓我拖久一點吧 （我要去補完這個動畫） OK的~XD

感謝Mod

Hi! I can make a Extra Hard or Normal Guest diff?

KuronumaSawako wrote:

Hi! I can make a Extra Hard or Normal Guest diff?

Sorry>_< , there are 5 diffs now (4osu +1taiko)

I think 5 diffs are enough for a TV Size map.

Yo 先mod下xDD
　
　
[ General]
　

1. 其實BG可以找到更好的 現在這樣的果斷是動畫截圖

　
[ Easy]
　

1. 00:25:484 (1) - 結尾用finish感覺有點太突兀了 改成clap吧
2. 00:31:862 (3) - 這裡有一點小高音 建議加個whistle在頭跟尾 結尾的finish拿掉 它應該是加在 00:33:043 (1) 才對
3. 00:46:271 (1) - 這finish明顯是在00:48:161 蛋市改了後面的object會跟spinner太接近 所以建議你改成這樣 :
   
4. 00:59:499 (1) - 在01:01:389結束吧 然後再01:02:334 , 01:02:806 , 01:03:279 各加個東西 ( 管他slider還note )
5. 01:07:058 (1) - 開頭finish
6. 01:10:838 (1) - ^
7. 01:13:673 - 加個note 跟著vocal
8. 01:14:617 (1) - 開頭finish
9. 01:16:507 (3) - 結尾finish刪除改成clap 然後01:18:397 (1) - 加finish
10. 01:21:232 - Same as 01:13:673
11. 01:22:176 (1) - 開頭finish
12. 01:24:066 (3,1) - Same as 01:16:507
13. 01:29:736 (1) - finish
14. 01:37:295 (1) - 開頭finish
15. 很不錯的Easy xDD

　
[ Hard]
　

1. 這難度的hitsounds mod跟Easy差不多 我就不多說了
2. 00:27:373 (1) - 這NC對你的NC style來說是多餘的 因為00:42:491 (4) - 沒有NC
3. 00:46:153 (1) - 加個whistle?
4. 00:55:484 (1,2) - 加個clap感覺蠻有fu的

　
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哇 做的很不錯呢!!!
對了 Taiko diff 完成了~
Good Luck :3

bossandy wrote:

SPOILER

Yo 先mod下xDD
　

1. 紅 : 是我覺得一並要改的
2. 藍 : 建議 但個人認為要改的
3. 黑 : 就單純建議

　
[ General]
　

1. 其實BG可以找到更好的 現在這樣的果斷是動畫截圖 Ok,換張了

　
[ Easy]
　

1. 00:25:484 (1) - 結尾用finish感覺有點太突兀了 改成clap吧
2. 00:31:862 (3) - 這裡有一點小高音 建議加個whistle在頭跟尾 結尾的finish拿掉 它應該是加在 00:33:043 (1) 才對
3. 00:46:271 (1) - 這finish明顯是在00:48:161 蛋市改了後面的object會跟spinner太接近 所以建議你改成這樣 :
   
4. 00:59:499 (1) - 在01:01:389結束吧 然後再01:02:334 , 01:02:806 , 01:03:279 各加個東西 ( 管他slider還note )
5. 01:07:058 (1) - 開頭finish
6. 01:10:838 (1) - ^
7. 01:13:673 - 加個note 跟著vocal
8. 01:14:617 (1) - 開頭finish
9. 01:16:507 (3) - 結尾finish刪除改成clap 然後01:18:397 (1) - 加finish
10. 01:21:232 - Same as 01:13:673
11. 01:22:176 (1) - 開頭finish
12. 01:24:066 (3,1) - Same as 01:16:507
13. 01:29:736 (1) - finish
14. 01:37:295 (1) - 開頭finish
15. 很不錯的Easy xDD

　
[ Hard]
　

1. 這難度的hitsounds mod跟Easy差不多 我就不多說了
2. 00:27:373 (1) - 這NC對你的NC style來說是多餘的 因為00:42:491 (4) - 沒有NC
3. 00:46:153 (1) - 加個whistle? 我感覺這裡沒什麼聲音,所以沒加
4. 00:55:484 (1,2) - 加個clap感覺蠻有fu的

　
其他都fixed

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哇 做的很不錯呢!!! :D
對了 Taiko diff 完成了~

Here is the Taiko BG ( 記得這個BG要改名成Taiko BG喔 )

Good Luck :3

感謝star & mod & guest diff XD

lolz I was mapping my diff for this but as I can see you already make an insane by yourself xd ok..

Hi~ from my queue

Let's go~~

[General]
●kiai time end ~ 01:3:405 -

[Easy]
●00:25:484 (1) - add whistle on the slider's head ?
●00:27:373 (2) - same,here
●00:31:862 (3) - add clap on the slider's head ? delete whistle.
●00:44:381 (1) - add finish or whistle on the slider's head ?
●01:03:751 (2) - add whistle on the slider's repaet ?
●01:05:641 (4) - ^
●01:10:365 - add note? and,add clap,here
●01:12:255 (4) - add whistle on the slider's repaet ?
●01:24:066 (3) - add whistle on the slider's head ?

[GiNa's Normal]
●Circle size +1?
●00:21:704 (2) - add whistle on the slider's head ?
●00:29:736 (2) - like this?http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/337386
●00:59:027 (3) - add finish on the slider's end ?
●00:59:736 (1) - add finish?
●01:04:932 (6) - add whistle?
●01:12:964 (1) - add whistle on the slider's head ?
●01:25:956 (1) - add finish on the slider's head ?

[Hard]
●00:20:759 (6) - add whistle?
●00:24:539 (5) - ^
●00:59:617 (1) - spinner ~ 01:01:389 -
●01:06:113 (9) - delete clap on the slider's head ? and add whistle on the slider's head ?
●01:13:673 (7) - add whistle?
●01:21:232 (8) - ^

good map set

nice song <3

good luck ~

Hello!

General

1. Fix the artist, please. S should be capitalized. So, artist should be Four Season. How-to-change. Oh, and don't forget to change the name of the topic C:
2. 01:35:405 - I'd better end kiai here D:

Easy

AR, HP - 1, please.

1. 00:27:373 (2) - maybe make slider similar to 00:25:484 (1) - ? And add finishes on the beginning. As you have same part with it here: 00:40:602 (1,2) -
2. 00:53:830 (1) - personally, I don't like this shape. Try something like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:53:830 (1) - also, remove finish from the end
4. 00:55:720 (1) - and add here finish
5. 01:03:751 (2) - I don't like how it touches 01:02:334 (1) -. Maybe move it like here:
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:05:641 (4) - also, stack it with 01:03:279 (1) -, and move 01:05:169 (3) - quite right and down by distance snap.
   
   SPOILER

   

GiNa's Normal

HP -1, please.

1. 00:19:814 (3) - maybe curve it? As 00:17:925 (1,2) - curved too.
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:34:932 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - what a hard rhythm you have here! I suggest to rearrange it in this way at least:
   
   SPOILER

   
   00:36:586 (6) - remove this note and make slider from 00:37:531 - till 00:38:239 - .
3. 01:07:058 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2) - ^ Again, hard. Rearrange in this way:
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:18:161 (4) - remove this note, you have hard rhythms for normal :<
5. 01:25:011 (3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - that's again! Make this ><:
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:07:058 (1) - also, finish here
7. 01:10:838 (1) - ^
8. 01:14:617 (1) - ^
9. 01:15:562 (3) - ^ to the end
10. 01:22:176 (1) - ^ to the beginning
11. 01:25:956 (1) - ^
12. Also, why not make kiai times similar to other diffs?

Hard

1. 00:24:539 (5) - whistle
2. Oh, I complained about Normal diff, that it's too hard... And now I see quite easy Hard xD
3. 00:24:775 - add notes here and 00:25:247 - here
4. 00:36:586 - ^
5. 00:35:405 (5) - whistle to the end!
6. 00:38:712 (6) - ^
7. 00:40:365 - note?
8. 00:46:153 (1) - I'd finish spinner at 00:47:925 - and add a finish xD
9. 00:59:617 (1) - finish spinner at 01:01:389 - and remove finish
10. 01:13:673 (7) - clap? as you have it here 01:06:113 (9) -
11. 01:21:232 (8) - ^
12. 01:28:791 (9) - ^
13. Oh, easy was just a beginning of a Hard ;3

Nice map!
Good luck!

Sorry I forgot what I had fixed, so I didn't reply every single one of them Orz
And thanks !
http://puu.sh/zPQF

Reiji-RJ wrote:

Hello!

General

1. Fix the artist, please. S should be capitalized. So, artist should be Four Season. How-to-change. Oh, and don't forget to change the name of the topic C: Ok, I think you are right. Fixed.!
2. 01:35:405 - I'd better end kiai here D: No

Easy

AR, HP - 1, please. I think it is fine for now

1. 00:27:373 (2) - maybe make slider similar to 00:25:484 (1) - ? And add finishes on the beginning. As you have same part with it here: 00:40:602 (1,2) - fixed
2. 00:53:830 (1) - personally, I don't like this shape. Try something like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
   fixed
3. 00:53:830 (1) - also, remove finish from the end fixed
4. 00:55:720 (1) - and add here finishfixed
5. 01:03:751 (2) - I don't like how it touches 01:02:334 (1) -. Maybe move it like here:
   
   SPOILER

   
   fixed
6. 01:05:641 (4) - also, stack it with 01:03:279 (1) -, and move 01:05:169 (3) - quite right and down by distance snap. fixed
   
   SPOILER

   

Hard

1. 00:24:539 (5) - whistle fixed
2. Oh, I complained about Normal diff, that it's too hard... And now I see quite easy Hard xD Okay I add some note xD
3. 00:24:775 - add notes here and 00:25:247 - here fixed
4. 00:36:586 - ^ fixed
5. 00:35:405 (5) - whistle to the end! fixed
6. 00:38:712 (6) - ^ fixed
7. 00:40:365 - note? fixed
8. 00:46:153 (1) - I'd finish spinner at 00:47:925 - and add a finish xD No, I follow the lyrics
9. 00:59:617 (1) - finish spinner at 01:01:389 - and remove finish fixed
10. 01:13:673 (7) - clap? as you have it here 01:06:113 (9) - I change to whistle
11. 01:21:232 (8) - ^ ^
12. 01:28:791 (9) - ^ ^
13. Oh, easy was just a beginning of a Hard ;3 xD

Nice map!
Good luck!

Thanks~

alacat wrote:

Hi~ from my queue

Let's go~~

[General]
●kiai time end ~ 01:3:405 - no, I open kiai time with lyrics

[Easy]
●00:25:484 (1) - add whistle on the slider's head ?
●00:27:373 (2) - same,here
●00:31:862 (3) - add clap on the slider's head ? delete whistle.
●00:44:381 (1) - add finish or whistle on the slider's head ?
●01:03:751 (2) - add whistle on the slider's repaet ?
●01:05:641 (4) - ^
●01:10:365 - add note? and,add clap,here
●01:12:255 (4) - add whistle on the slider's repaet ?
●01:24:066 (3) - add whistle on the slider's head ?

all fixed, and change some hitsound ^^

[Hard]
●00:20:759 (6) - add whistle? fixed
●00:24:539 (5) - ^ fixed
●00:59:617 (1) - spinner ~ 01:01:389 - I follow to lyrics so no change
●01:06:113 (9) - delete clap on the slider's head ? and add whistle on the slider's head ? fixed
●01:13:673 (7) - add whistle?fixed
●01:21:232 (8) - ^fixed

good map set

nice song <3

good luck ~

Thanks~

request from in-game ~





GJ & GL
Have a star ~ ☆

hi from our mod Q ^.^

Insane

00:31:862 - make this slider shorter and and 2 notes http://puu.sh/Aqy6 really sound better
00:32:806 - add note here
01:01:153 - end spinner on big white tick
01:30:090 - remove this note
01:35:405 - end kiai time here
01:37:295 - start new kiai time

Hard

00:25:247 - remove this note >.< it the superfluous
00:38:712(1) - this slider very highly, yuo should to lower it bcz it not conveniently for game
01:24:302(2) - i think better remove this note to support the following interval
01:35:405 - end kiai time here
01:37:295 - start new kiai time

Normal

01:35:405 - end kiai time here
01:37:295 - start new kiai time

Easy

00:53:830 - remove red tick on slider http://puu.sh/AqES
01:35:405 - end kiai time here
01:37:295 - start new kiai time

It's all for me~~ good luck)

Katty Pie's mod


DarknessAngel's mod

Hi~

Easy:
00:21:704 (1) - Remove Finish, add whistle

GiNa's Normal:
00:29:736 (2,1) - Overlap
01:07:767 (2,1) - Overlap

Hard:
00:21:704 (1) - Remove finish at the beginning of slider and add whistle

Insane:
00:21:232 (4) - 1 grid down

That's all... Sorry for my nazi mod, but, the map is so cool n.n
Sorry for my bad English, I hope you serve something.
Good song, good luck~

Fenya wrote:

Hi~

Easy:
00:21:704 (1) - Remove Finish, add whistle hmm~ whistle is work better than finish here~Fixed

Hard:
00:21:704 (1) - Remove finish at the beginning of slider and add whistle ^

Insane:
00:21:232 (4) - 1 grid down Fixed

That's all... Sorry for my nazi mod, but, the map is so cool n.n
Sorry for my bad English, I hope you serve something.
Good song, good luck~ Thanks:)

Thanks mod

[Easy]
00:22:176 (2) - You could curve it creating a blanket with 00:23:121 (3)
00:44:381 (1) - ^
01:02:334 (1) - Instead to use 2 circles here I suggest you to make a 1/1 slider.
I think this triangle 01:02:334 (1,2,1) with new combo on 01:03:279 (1) is bad to see.
01:21:232 (3) - Blanket?
01:37:295 (1) - ^

[GiNa's Normal]
00:25:011 (4) - Finish at the end
00:25:720 (1) - I don't like this slider immediately after 00:25:011 (4) since this is a Normal diff. Reduce of 1/2 it and move to 00:25:956:

This diff needs more work imho.

[Hard]
Good job here :3

[Insane]
00:25:247 (1) - Add finish on the tail
00:34:224 (3) - CTRL + R and move it to x:428 y:140 to improve the blanket with the previous slider
00:46:153 (1) - Extend this spinner till the next red tick 00:47:925 and add a finish on it. This is perfect since it's the insane diff
00:47:925 If you don't follow the suggestion about the spinner, add a circle with finish here
01:37:295 (1) - Move it further from 01:36:822 (3)? even if it's an insane this could be counfusing to play..

That's all! You need a star here to reach +8 sp ;3
Have my star and good luck

Fenya wrote:

GiNa's Normal:
00:29:736 (2,1) - Overlap　I did ths one on purpose
01:07:767 (2,1) - Overlap　Fixed

Chewin wrote:

[GiNa's Normal]
00:25:011 (4) - Finish at the end　Fixed
00:25:720 (1) - I don't like this slider immediately after 00:25:011 (4) since this is a Normal diff. Reduce of 1/2 it and move to 00:25:956:
　Okay. Fixed some other ones like this
This diff needs more work imho.　I mean ... seriously, if I don't put 1/2, how could this be a REAL Normal ? Do you mean that you want me just reduce everything to 1/1 and make this like an Easy diff ? Perhaps the BPM of this song is not high, 1/2 shouldn't be too hard.

Here:
http://puu.sh/BFMu

hi ^^

General
Nice

Easy
00:22:176 (2) - Curve it to blanket (3) maybe http://puu.sh/BFXc
00:53:830 (1) - Delete the angle in the slider, looks a little awkward
Very nice, there are other potential blankets but it's up to you

GiNa's Normal
00:48:161 (1) - NC, unrankable bug
00:54:302 (3,4) - Make this a slider? since (5) is a slider and in the same combo if that matters lol
01:08:712 - Add something here to keep the flow of vocals, maybe a slider connecting (3)
<3

Hard
00:20:759 (3,4) - Highlight both and move to x:80 y:256 if you want a more perfect square, optional lol
00:24:539 (1,3) - Whistles, fits the bg music
00:42:491 (1) - Stack this on (2) like you did with 00:40:602 (1,2)
00:48:633 (1) - NC, unrankable bug
00:55:011 (8) - Add clap, the bg music for (9) is the same as (8)

Insane
00:20:287 (2) - Try this rhythm, note placement is an idea http://puu.sh/BGin
00:26:901 (4) - Place like this so (3) blankets it http://puu.sh/BGjf like 00:27:373 (1,3)
01:25:247 (4,5) - Use default clap for these


Very cute map!

LunarSakuya wrote:

hi ^^　Hello, "me" xD
GiNa's Normal
00:48:161 (1) - NC, unrankable bug　Fixed
00:54:302 (3,4) - Make this a slider? since (5) is a slider and in the same combo if that matters lol　I changed them to a slider
01:08:712 - Add something here to keep the flow of vocals, maybe a slider connecting (3)　Fixed
<3　<333333

Latest version here:
http://puu.sh/BGqU

Chewin wrote:

[Easy]
00:22:176 (2) - You could curve it creating a blanket with 00:23:121 (3) Fixed

SPOILER

00:44:381 (1) - ^ Fixed

SPOILER

or

01:02:334 (1) - Instead to use 2 circles here I suggest you to make a 1/1 slider. I think 2 circles are work better than a 1/1 slider here.
I think this triangle 01:02:334 (1,2,1) with new combo on 01:03:279 (1) is bad to see. I think it's fine now:3 no changed
01:21:232 (3) - Blanket? Fixed

SPOILER

01:37:295 (1) - ^

[Hard]
Good job here :3 :D

[Insane]
00:25:247 (1) - Add finish on the tail Fixed
00:34:224 (3) - CTRL + R and move it to x:428 y:140 to improve the blanket with the previous slider Fixed
00:46:153 (1) - Extend this spinner till the next red tick 00:47:925 and add a finish on it. This is perfect since it's the insane diff I add a note here
00:47:925 If you don't follow the suggestion about the spinner, add a circle with finish here ^
01:37:295 (1) - Move it further from 01:36:822 (3)? even if it's an insane this could be counfusing to play.. Fixed the spacing

That's all! You need a star here to reach +8 sp ;3 Thanks mod & star
Have my star and good luck

Thanks

LunarSakuya wrote:

hi ^^

General
Nice

Easy
00:22:176 (2) - Curve it to blanket (3) maybe http://puu.sh/BFXc Fixed
00:53:830 (1) - Delete the angle in the slider, looks a little awkward Fixed
Very nice, there are other potential blankets but it's up to you ok

Hard
00:20:759 (3,4) - Highlight both and move to x:80 y:256 if you want a more perfect square, optional lol I think it is fine now
00:24:539 (1,3) - Whistles, fits the bg music ok
00:42:491 (1) - Stack this on (2) like you did with 00:40:602 (1,2) Fixed
00:48:633 (1) - NC, unrankable bug Fixed
00:55:011 (8) - Add clap, the bg music for (9) is the same as (8) ok

Insane
00:20:287 (2) - Try this rhythm, note placement is an idea http://puu.sh/BGin Fixed
00:26:901 (4) - Place like this so (3) blankets it http://puu.sh/BGjf like 00:27:373 (1,3) Fixed
01:25:247 (4,5) - Use default clap for these Fixed


Very cute map!

Thanks mod

Hi~ mod from my queue~

[Insane]

00:20:995 - remove whistle
00:21:704 - remove finish, add here 00:23:594
00:24:893 (3,5) - remove whistle
00:39:657 - add whistle
00:39:775 (2,4) - remove whistle
01:05:169 - add whistle
01:21:704 - remove whistle

[Hard]

00:29:263 (1) - add finish
00:36:822 (1) - remove finish, add here 00:38:712

Others diffs are fine ;3

Good luck~

KersiTyan wrote:

Hi~ mod from my queue~

[Insane]

00:20:995 - remove whistleFixed
00:21:704 - remove finish, add here 00:23:594 only remove finish
00:24:893 (3,5) - remove whistle Fixed
00:39:657 - add whistle Fixed
00:39:775 (2,4) - remove whistle Fixed
01:05:169 - add whistle Fixed
01:21:704 - remove whistle Fixed

[Hard]

00:29:263 (1) - add finish Fixed
00:36:822 (1) - remove finish, add here 00:38:712 x

Others diffs are fine ;3

Good luck~

Thanks your hitsound mod

Hi~ From my Queue
Almost Modding is Suggestion so you can ignore this



Good luck!

HelloSCV wrote:

Hi~ From my Queue
Almost Modding is Suggestion so you can ignore this

SPOILER

Easy
HP -1? x
01:41:074 (5) - NC Fixed

Hard
OD -1 x
01:16:507 (1) - add finish ^
01:30:444 - ^ ^
01:41:192 (1) - ^ ^

Insane
OD -1 HP -1 x
01:16:507 (1) - add finish ^
01:41:192 (1) - ^ ^

Good luck!

Thanks mod!!

Yo 補齊mod xD
　
　
[ GiNa's Normal]
　

1. 00:21:232 (1,2) - Swap New Combo 現在這樣的New Combo沒有跟著歌詞NC也沒有跟著音樂NC 感覺像是亂擺的
2. 00:30:680 (1,2) - Swap New Combo , 因為00:30:444 (3,1) - 是連在一起的 然後00:31:625 (2,3) - 有新的一句歌詞 所以這裡Swap一下是個很好的選擇
3. 00:38:712 (3,1) - Same as 00:21:232 (1,2) -
4. 01:10:129 (2) - 感覺這個slider把repeat去掉比較好
5. 沒了 這難度做的不錯ㄟ Nothing more to point out! Good Job!!! 姐姐

　
[ Insane]
　

1. 00:31:862 (2) - 這00:30:444 (4,5,1) - 都在轉圈 所以這個slider也跟著轉圈可以有更順暢的移動 像這樣 但是要不要改就看你摟 (a黑
   
   Picture

   
2. 00:47:925 (1,2) - 這兩個的音量可能有點太大聲導致再playing的時候聽起來怪怪的 試試volume 40% 感覺更好
3. 好了 都是nazi 代表這難度做的很好!!!! Good Job too xD!!!

　
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ya 就這些 加油吧!!
Good Luck again :3

bossandy wrote:

Yo 補齊mod xD
　

1. Red : I think you must to fix.
2. Blue : Need to discuss.
3. Black : Just suggest or nazi.

　
[ Insane]
　

1. 00:31:862 (2) - 這00:30:444 (4,5,1) - 都在轉圈 所以這個slider也跟著轉圈可以有更順暢的移動 像這樣 但是要不要改就看你摟 (a黑沒改，我覺得長的slider 這樣拉一圈感覺有點擠
   
   Picture

   
   
   
   
2. 00:47:925 (1,2) - 這兩個的音量可能有點太大聲導致再playing的時候聽起來怪怪的 試試volume 40% 感覺更好 Ok~我改了，這裡的確太大聲了 (不過我改成30%)
3. 好了 都是nazi 代表這難度做的很好!!!! Good Job too xD!!!

　
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ya 就這些 加油吧!!
Good Luck again :3

謝謝囉

Done everything, here
http://puu.sh/CGA2

以後我就不會再改了，有mod的話請自行修改你認為需要的吧
我把mod requests清一清後就沒有時間了

GiNa wrote:

Done everything, here
http://puu.sh/CGA2

以後我就不會再改了，有mod的話請自行修改你認為需要的吧
我把mod requests清一清後就沒有時間了

Ok

了解 :3

Here we go from my modding queue :3

Easy

HP Drain maybe -1 *

Normal (Guest Diff)
good GiNa <3

Hard
<3 nothing to mod

Bossandy Taiko Oni
not sweet oni? >w<

Insane
nothing to mod T_T

note: * = suggestion for helping

from my queue


Insane

1. i think ar and od is fine don't change plz
2. 00:42:491 (2) - move the last slider point 1 grid up
3. 00:53:358 (3) - move last slider point 2 grids down to line up with next note
4. 01:24:539 (3,4) - you can improve the slider blanket
5. 01:28:791 (3,4) - why not long slider? i think it fits better
6. 01:41:074 (1) - new combo (before long spinner at the end, it's better)

Hard

1. 我觉得insane都是ar7了hard是不是应该用ar6比较好不然没差别了
2. 00:17:925 (1,3) - slider blanket
3. 00:36:586 (5) - 去掉比较舒服
4. 00:37:531 (4,5) - 太弯了不好看
5. 00:53:830 (5,6,7,8,9) - hard的话是不是叠一下
6. 算了没啥问题...

Normal

1. 00:36:113 (4,5,6) - use repeat slider here...
2. 01:17:688 (2,3,4) - ^
3. 00:38:712 (1,2,3,4) - this shape looks weird...

Easy

1. 00:53:830 (1) - 第三个点往上两格

that's all

Good luck~

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

from my queue


Insane

1. i think ar and od is fine don't change plz ok
2. 00:42:491 (2) - move the last slider point 1 grid up Fixed
3. 00:53:358 (3) - move last slider point 2 grids down to line up with next note Fixed
4. 01:24:539 (3,4) - you can improve the slider blanket Fixed
5. 01:28:791 (3,4) - why not long slider? i think it fits better Fixed
6. 01:41:074 (1) - new combo (before long spinner at the end, it's better) Fixed

Hard

1. 我觉得insane都是ar7了hard是不是应该用ar6比较好不然没差别了 -1了
2. 00:17:925 (1,3) - slider blanket
3. 00:36:586 (5) - 去掉比较舒服 我換成slider
4. 00:37:531 (4,5) - 太弯了不好看 Fixed
5. 00:53:830 (5,6,7,8,9) - hard的话是不是叠一下 已經疊了不是? o.o
6. 算了没啥问题...

Normal

1. 00:36:113 (4,5,6) - use repeat slider here... x
2. 01:17:688 (2,3,4) - ^ x
3. 00:38:712 (1,2,3,4) - this shape looks weird... Fixed

Easy

1. 00:53:830 (1) - 第三个点往上两格Fixed

that's all

Good luck~

謝謝Mod

frans_niko wrote:

Here we go from my modding queue :3

Easy

HP Drain maybe -1 *

Normal (Guest Diff)
good GiNa <3

Hard
<3 nothing to mod

Bossandy Taiko Oni
not sweet oni? >w<

Insane
nothing to mod T_T

note: * = suggestion for helping

sorry, I dont change anything D:

Thanks

Thank you for requesting via Illumined's Modding Queue (･∀･)






It's better to remove Hard, then add a harder Insane. Since the diff spread is like E>N>N+>H
But anyway, it's just an opinion, seems ready for ranking! Good luck.

Illumined wrote:

Thank you for requesting via Illumined's Modding Queue (･∀･)

General

1. Lack of whistles, so boring with claps and few of whistles only D:maybe... But i have no idea now ;_;

Easy
01:16:507 - Missing a finishFixed

GiNa's Normal
00:31:153 - Whistle? Fixed
00:38:712 (1,2,3,4) - Rearrange with a square pattern. changed
00:48:161 (1) - Here's a bug, please new comboFixed

Insane

1. Feel like a Hard O_o lol

00:47:925 (1,2) - Raise up the volume to 40%, sounds too soft >_< Fixed
00:53:358 - Missing a clapFixed
01:30:208 (3) - Move whistle to slider's tailFixed

It's better to remove Hard, then add a harder Insane. Since the diff spread is like E>N>N+>H I think its fine now.
But anyway, it's just an opinion, seems ready for ranking! Good luck.

Thanks mod

OK!! DONE.

-REMOVE INSANE DIFF
-REMAP HARD DIFF
-UPDATE EASY DIFF
-ADD 2 NEW BG FOR EASY DIFF & HARD DIFF

http://puu.sh/1xegk
只改了一點東西

From my queue ~


Nice map, good luck for rank ~

[General]

1. Japanese Title : 南風ドラマチック (TV Size)
2. Video offset : 450ms

[Hard]
00:26:192 (1) - Remove NC. Seems unnecessary.
00:34:932 (7) - Add NC to be consistent with 00:19:814 (1)
00:38:712 (6) - Add NC to be consistent with 00:23:594 (1)
00:39:893 (1) - Of course remove NC from this
00:40:602 (4) - Then add NC here
00:41:310 (1) - And remove NC
00:51:940 (5) - NC
00:53:121 (1) - Remove NC
00:53:358 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:01:389 - That finish sound a bit loud imo, maybe reduce the volume by 20%?
01:25:956 (1) - Missed adding finish to its head?
01:36:350 (1) - Look at this picture. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/533288 Its position isn't good due to spinner-osu. Move it to somewhere proper.

Pretty good except those minor NCing problems.


[GiNa's Normal]

1. Missed background video.

00:23:121 (1) - Remove NC and Add NC to the next note.
01:01:862 (1) - Look at this picture. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/533291 Its position isn't good due to spinner-osu. Move it to somewhere proper.


[Easy]
00:50:995 (1) - Remove NC and Add NC to the next note.
01:36:350 (1) - ;_; http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/533310


[Boss Taiko Oni]
00:47:925 (1) - D ? A cymbal sound is on here


Good luck

A little random mod

[General]

This can be unrankable and I want to see this ranked, but not with this. Try to use this mp3 http://puu.sh/1DCdV There is not voice from anime, so it's much better and it's only song with songs voice. Please use it even if fixing timing won't be so much easy, if you'd ask me ingame, I can fix it for you. Quality of song is higher too. New offset would be 20368 and if you want I'll fix green lines for you. But use this mp3 and I'll star it too. It's nice map.

[Boss Taiko Oni]

00:24:302 (1,1,1) - I feel ddk here better (listen to song, there is something like bells in this part, I like following it here)
00:39:421 (1,1,1) - ^
00:47:925 (1) - Finish too, because it's exactly the same sound like 00:48:161 (2)

[Easy]

00:18:043 - (timing) Delete this timing point and set C1 on redline on 00:17:925. Always remove unnecessary things.
00:23:594 (4) - Repeat on start is imo nice
00:40:602 (1,2) - (on all diffs (without kiai of course))Move this pattern on 187;241 to make consistent distance between these: 00:38:712 (3,4,1)
Since it's kiai, you can use more hitsound so consider adding whistle on these, it's consistent so don't worry:
01:03:279
01:05:169
01:07:058
01:08:003
01:08:948
01:09:893
01:10:838
01:11:783
01:14:617
01:15:562
01:16:507
01:18:397
01:21:232
01:22:176
01:23:121
01:25:956
01:26:901
01:27:846
01:29:736
01:32:570
01:37:295
01:38:239
01:39:184

[Normal]

00:22:413 (2) - Add a center point on 418;155 for neat shape
00:45:562 (3) - Move it on 24;216, it doesn't look very correctly when it's so randomly placed.
01:21:232 (3) - Move it on 186;189, the same reason as ^
01:27:373 (3,4) - Fix the overlap
01:18:397 - (timing) Make here a same effect like on easy (kiai mountain)
01:35:405 - (timing) ^

[Hard]

00:27:610 (2) - Ctrl+H and keep it on 224;212. It's better direction of flow.
00:29:736 (2,3) - Swap these two, because it will break flow when the slider is first. Btw. keep the circle under slider start and don't forget to swap hitsounds.
00:50:995 (3,4) - Rotate about 5° and don't forget to check Selection Centre. It's more smooth when it's rotated and flows better then.
01:36:350 (1,2,3) - Move it like this:
01:36:350 (1) - 476;186
01:36:586 (2) - 405;272
01:36:822 (3) - 367;166
I've recommended it to make consistent distance between 01:36:822 (3,1) and this antijump flows good imo.
01:41:074 (1) - Move it on 256;192 because it's last note before the spinner and this stack breaks flow.

Thanks Kiyro,ykcarrot,and dragonxcz's mod

fixed & changed some stuff

To dragonxcz :

dragonxcz wrote:

A little random mod
[General]

This can be unrankable and I want to see this ranked, but not with this. Try to use this mp3 http://puu.sh/1DCdV There is not voice from anime, so it's much better and it's only song with songs voice. Please use it even if fixing timing won't be so much easy, if you'd ask me ingame, I can fix it for you. Quality of song is higher too. New offset would be 20368 and if you want I'll fix green lines for you. But use this mp3 and I'll star it too. It's nice map.

1) I think a song song with anime voice is rankable.
This map has too, and it is ranked. (Map : http://osu.ppy.sh/b/133745)

2) Your mp3 http://puu.sh/1DCdV isnt TV Size Version(01:37~ 01:51 are different). Also your mp3 cant match the video.
And I cant find the other quality mp3

so, I cant change the mp3 >_<

H i , Random Taiko modding .

These are all suggestion. If you don't like them , you could ignore .

| d = don | k = kat | D = BIG DON | K = BIG KAT | re = remove |

[ Boss Taiko Oni]

1. Use the "Normal" audio sample set.
   　
2. 00:40:602 (1) - D
3. 00:43:436 - add a d
4. 00:43:791 - add a d
5. 00:50:995 - add a d
6. 01:17:806 - add a d

　
nice taiko diff ~
　
star ~ ★
　
good luck ~

http://puu.sh/1Gwch
~~~

Updated~

Hi from the Queue!

General

Right timing:
1. Offset: 17.937ms BPM: 127,00
BG3.jpg doesnt have the same size as BG1 and BG2, fix this

Easy

Nothing

Normal

00:52:885 - Add circle to give better transition
00:59:617 (1) - Should end at 01:00:917 - so players have time to prepare for incomming elements

Hard

00:30:917 (5) - NC remove next


Thats it, not much but fix it please, nice map! Send me a forum PM if you want my recheck

BounceBabe wrote:

Hi from the Queue! HI~

General

Right timing:
1. Offset: 17.937ms BPM: 127,00 Okay~ I changed the offset to 17937(+12).
BG3.jpg doesnt have the same size as BG1 and BG2, fix this[/color] Fixed to 800x600

Easy

Nothing

Hard

00:30:917 (5) - NC remove next Fixed


Thats it, not much but fix it please, nice map! Send me a forum PM if you want my recheck

Fixed & Updated.

thanks your mod~

BounceBabe wrote:

Normal

00:52:885 - Add circle to give better transition
00:59:617 (1) - Should end at 01:00:917 - so players have time to prepare for incomming elements

Only added a circle
It's weird to end the slider there, it doesn't fit imo

http://puu.sh/1Nl3r

Updated!

thanks GiNa

This is fine now how it is, will add you to his list then! Good luck

Hello EmPao~
Modding from my queue.

[General]

1. I think a slidertick clap for offbeats that fall in the middle of sliders would be nice to have, especially in the easy diff.

[Easy]

Map Design

1. 00:30:220 (2) - Hm, I think the flow here might be a bit nicer if we used Ctrl-G on this slider and then moved the 00:31:874 (3) upwards.
   
   

Hitsounds

1. 00:59:511 (1) - The whistle on the end of the spinner is very noisy to me. It would be much better as a default soft finish just like you have in the hard diff.
   
   
2. 01:44:393 - Consider having the spinner increase greatly in volume here to go along with that spinner like noise in the music. It sounds pretty neat and might be a fun way to end the map.

Pretty much flawless diff, but a slidertick clap would make it sounds more interesting imo.

[Gina's Normal]

Map Design

1. 00:18:881 (2) - A bit nazi, but I think you can make these sliders fit together better. Move the 2 to (308,232). This way the 2's approach circle lines up nicely with the curve of the 1 and looks nicer in gameplay.
   
   
2. 00:23:133 (3) - To me, it would be better if the 3 was at 00:22:897 to follow the vocals. Maybe replace the 2 with a single circle and move the 3 there, and add a circle at 00:23:606. This will play along with the vocals very well. And I don't like your current placement with the 2 and 3 because it causes a bad overlap with the 00:24:078 (1,2,3) and should be changed imo.
   
   
   Placement suggestion:
   
   
   
3. 00:42:740 (2,3) - For a bit nicer flow here, you could flip the 3 around so that it has similar flow to the 00:40:850 (2,3).
   
   
   It would require a minor rearranging of the circles before the spinner, but that's a small price to pay for a nicer flow considering there are only a few sliders there.
   
   
4. 00:55:023 (4,1,2) - Eh, maybe make a nicer flow here like you have at 00:52:897 (5,1,2) by moving the 1 and 2 down to form a nice triangle.
   
   
   
   
5. 01:32:582 (1,2) - Maybe move these to the left a bit because the 1 is a bit too close to the HP bar for my liking and the approach circle can be somewhat hidden by it.
   
   
6. 01:37:307 (2) - Maybe add a NC here to accompany the vocal line starting just like is done in the other diffs. To me, it's a bit strange to have the 01:36:362 (1) and 01:37:307 (2) in the same combo because they are mapped to completely different things.

Hitsounds

1. 00:17:937 (1) - I think a finish might better on the head of this slider. A finish is used here in the other diffs, plus you use a finish at spots like 00:33:055 (1) which have the same sort of transition sound in the music.
   
   
2. 00:48:173 (1) - Hm, to me it would be better to use the SC:1 finish here instead of the default soft finish. It just fits what the music is doing much better. This is also what is done in the other diffs.
   
   
3. 00:59:748 (1) - Consider adding a default soft finish onto the end of this spinner. It sounds very nice to me.
   
   
4. 01:01:874 (1,2) - Hmm, too many whistles imo. It would be better to me if we just had whistles on the white ticks here. It would sound a bit nicer and would setup rhythm for the kiai time nicely after playing that spinner.
   
   
5. 01:29:748 (1) - The custom finish fits better here imo with the background music.
   
   
6. 01:33:527 (1) - Consider adding the custom finish to the end of this spinner like in the other diffs. I think it fits very well with the cheering.
   
   
7. 01:44:393 - Same as easy, maybe raise the volume for the spinner here.

[Hard]

Map Design

1. 00:25:259 (1) - Consider removing the NC from here and adding it to 00:25:732 (2) to follow the vocals better and to be consistent with 00:40:377 (4,1).
   
   
2. 00:55:732 (3) - To me, this slider would look better if it were just straight because it would fit inbetween the 00:56:440 (4,5) perfectly.
   
   

Hitsounds

1. 00:17:937 (1) - Hm, the custom finish is a bit noisy on the head to me. Maybe use the default soft finish here like in the easy, I think it fits a bit better.
   
   
2. 00:46:165 (1) - How about adding a clap to the end of the spinner here just like is done in the normal diff. I think it fits nicely with the clap in the music.
   
   
3. 00:55:496 (1,2) - These two claps aren't necessary imo. They are a bit noisy and are taking focus away from the nice soft claps that we had at 00:55:023 (4,5) which fit the music well.
   
   
4. 00:58:566 (5) - Consider adding a whistle to the repeat of this slider to make the 1/3 rhythm a bit more obvious.
   
   
5. 01:01:874 (1) - Missing whistles on this slider imo. Maybe one on the head and the tail, or just one on the tail. Up to you.

Nice map. It fits the song very well.


Ok I hope that helps a bit.

UnitedWeSin wrote:

Hello EmPao~ Hi /
Modding from my queue.

[General]

1. I think a slidertick clap for offbeats that fall in the middle of sliders would be nice to have, especially in the easy diff.

Okay, I add them in easy diff.

[Easy]

Map Design

1. 00:30:220 (2) - Hm, I think the flow here might be a bit nicer if we used Ctrl-G on this slider and then moved the 00:31:874 (3) upwards. No change, I think its ok.
   
   

Hitsounds

1. 00:59:511 (1) - The whistle on the end of the spinner is very noisy to me. It would be much better as a default soft finish just like you have in the hard diff. Fixed
   
   
2. 01:44:393 - Consider having the spinner increase greatly in volume here to go along with that spinner like noise in the music. It sounds pretty neat and might be a fun way to end the map.No o.o

Pretty much flawless diff, but a slidertick clap would make it sounds more interesting imo. Thanks

[Hard]

Map Design

1. 00:25:259 (1) - Consider removing the NC from here and adding it to 00:25:732 (2) to follow the vocals better and to be consistent with 00:40:377 (4,1). Fixed
   
   
2. 00:55:732 (3) - To me, this slider would look better if it were just straight because it would fit inbetween the 00:56:440 (4,5) perfectly. Fixed
   
   

Hitsounds

1. 00:17:937 (1) - Hm, the custom finish is a bit noisy on the head to me. Maybe use the default soft finish here like in the easy, I think it fits a bit better. Okay, I changed to the default soft-finish.
   
   
2. 00:46:165 (1) - How about adding a clap to the end of the spinner here just like is done in the normal diff. I think it fits nicely with the clap in the music.Fixed
   
   
3. 00:55:496 (1,2) - These two claps aren't necessary imo. They are a bit noisy and are taking focus away from the nice soft claps that we had at 00:55:023 (4,5) which fit the music well. No change, I think these two claps fits to the lyrics.
   
   
4. 00:58:566 (5) - Consider adding a whistle to the repeat of this slider to make the 1/3 rhythm a bit more obvious.Fixed
   
   
5. 01:01:874 (1) - Missing whistles on this slider imo. Maybe one on the head and the tail, or just one on the tail. Up to you.Okay,I add a whistle on the tail.

Nice map. It fits the song very well.


Ok I hope that helps a bit.

Thanks your mod

我知道我很廢 一直忘記改...Sorry 話說太古BG已經是Unrankable了 所以隨便拿張其他難度的BG來代替吧
改好記得把原本的TaikoBG從資料夾裏刪除喔

bossandy wrote:

我知道我很廢 一直忘記改...Sorry 話說太古BG已經是Unrankable了 所以隨便拿張其他難度的BG來代替吧
改好記得把原本的TaikoBG從資料夾裏刪除喔

改好&上傳了>_<

我也很廢一直找不到mod/mat xD

[Easy]
01:36:362 (1) - I want to ask why this is new combo <_<

[Boss Taiko Oni]
Where is video o.o// No video to this diff?
Some notes are unsnapped O_O
Add Japanese title please~

Maps are great :p

minyeob wrote:

[Easy]
01:36:362 (1) - I want to ask why this is new combo <_< removed. I misplace it >_<

[Boss Taiko Oni]
Where is video o.o// No video to this diff? Fixed
Some notes are unsnapped O_O Fixed
Add Japanese title please~Fixed

Maps are great :p

Thanks mod

General:


Easy:


GiNa normal:


Hard:


nice map

Natsu wrote:

General:

SPOILER

Kiai
Inconsistency in Kiai Times: no change.it is ok,since "Normal" is guest diff

[Easy] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:03:291, ends on 01:18:291
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:18:409, ends on 01:35:299
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:35:417, ends on 01:41:086

[GiNa's Normal] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:03:291, ends on 01:41:086

[Hard] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:03:291, ends on 01:18:291
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:18:409, ends on 01:35:299
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:35:417, ends on 01:41:086

Easy:

SPOILER

00:33:527 make a curve slider plz Okay, looks better
00:59:511 add finish no, no sounds there
01:41:086 ^ ^
Nice diff thanks

Hard:

SPOILER

01:14:157 move 5 to x:84 y: 144 to be perfectly stacked with 2 the spacing is 1.2x in this diff , you cant stacked with 2.(it will be 1.0x) sorry no change
01:41:204 add finish no, I explained above

nice map

thanks for mod

http://puu.sh/1Ti8B
Lazy reply lol

Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue

1. Red - Important or Issue
   
2. Blue - You'd better fix them
   
3. Black - Normal Suggestions

[General]
Inconsistency in Kiai Times: (Keep these the same)
- [Easy] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:03:291, ends on 01:18:291
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:18:409, ends on 01:35:299
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:35:417, ends on 01:41:086

- [GiNa's Normal] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:03:291, ends on 01:41:086

- [Hard] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:03:291, ends on 01:18:291
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:18:409, ends on 01:35:299
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:35:417, ends on 01:41:086

[Easy]

1. 00:55:259 - Default clap is not bad though.... I like C1 clap better since this default clap appears suddenly, it makes me feel a bit uncomfortable.
2. 01:05:653 (4) - Since the vocal "mu-ki" here, I suggest a circle on 01:05:653 and a 1/1 slider from 01:06:125.

[GiNa's Normal]

1. OD+1 or +2? OD3 is a bit low for a normal diff in my view.
2. 01:33:527 (1) - Missing finish here? I guess it could sound better if you add finish to this spinner.

[Hard]

1. 00:59:629 (1) - It is not a downbeat in my view. So finish here is not a good choice, you'd better add whistle instead then it would sound better :p

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That's all.
Excellent!

Snowy Dream wrote:

Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue

1. Red - Important or Issue
   
2. Blue - You'd better fix them
   
3. Black - Normal Suggestions

[General]
Inconsistency in Kiai Times: (Keep these the same) 沒改,Normal是guest diff, kiai不統一是可以的o.o
- [Easy] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:03:291, ends on 01:18:291
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:18:409, ends on 01:35:299
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:35:417, ends on 01:41:086

- [GiNa's Normal] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:03:291, ends on 01:41:086

- [Hard] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:03:291, ends on 01:18:291
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:18:409, ends on 01:35:299
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:35:417, ends on 01:41:086

[Easy]

1. 00:55:259 - Default clap is not bad though.... I like C1 clap better since this default clap appears suddenly, it makes me feel a bit uncomfortable.改成C1 clap了
2. 01:05:653 (4) - Since the vocal "mu-ki" here, I suggest a circle on 01:05:653 and a 1/1 slider from 01:06:125.no,我是複製01:03:763 (2) 去map的

[Hard]

1. 00:59:629 (1) - It is not a downbeat in my view. So finish here is not a good choice, you'd better add whistle instead then it would sound better :p改成whistle了

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That's all.
Excellent!

謝謝mod和star

[General/All diffs]
None

[Easy]
00:31:874 (3) - remove this clap?sounds a little noisy
00:42:503 (2) - if you want to stress this downbeat.a whistle is enough
00:59:511 (1) - end at 01:01:165 sounds better
01:02:346 (1,2,1) - imo,this will make a better sense http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/590209 ( add clap to 2 and remove 1
01:05:653 (4) - add whistle in the end to stress the vocal?
01:13:685 (5) - ^ so does the same pattern behind
01:36:362 (1) - make it central

[Gina]
00:24:078 (1) - don't overlap with 00:23:133 (3) -
00:31:637 (1) - here is no drum sound in the music,so maybe remove clap
00:41:086 (3) - place this at 00:40:141 (4) - plays better..but it needs a large change,so change it or not is up to you
00:58:094 (1,2,3) - sth like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/590217
01:02:818 normal-hitnormal here sounds better
01:07:070 (1) - finish in the head
01:16:992 (1) - move a little to avoid overlaping with 01:15:574 (3) - ?
01:26:677 (2,3,4) - they are not in the same line

[Hard]
00:25:141 (3) - I think this note is a little unnecessary
00:31:637 here is no drum sound in the music,so maybe remove clap
00:55:141 add a note with normal-hitnormal?I can hear base drum here
00:55:496 (1,2) - these claps don't make sense
00:58:330 (3,4) - ^
01:06:125 (4) - same as Easy
01:37:307 (1) - Though I read this pattern...I still think you should move it away..

The mapset is neat and easy to play.but some flows are still not so good,keep trying!