cRyo[iceeicee] wrote:

very good note, star~

SPOILER

AoiX wrote:

Bakemonogatari Project...interesting
but...what's up with the video? I think it should be 16:9 and it's not in correct scale now.Also the video not have enough quality with this file size.
I can offer you Video service if you want~

[Insane]
01:28:052 (3) - make it like this http://puu.sh/vbNI

[fumis]
N:C1 not fit the music during 00:00:625 ~ 00:05:767
00:07:139 (x) - add circle
00:12:967 (x) - ^
00:40:396 (2) - put like this: http://puu.sh/vbOv

[Normal]
N:C1 not fit the music during 00:00:625 ~ 00:05:767
00:04:567 (4) - seem better like this: http://puu.sh/vbPj
it's not a good idea to use 2.00x SV in normal

Melophobia wrote:

As requested

[General]
http://puu.sh/vy1Z

あとくりえいたーずわーどに色々突っ込みたい

[Easy]
もう少し難しく作った方がバランスいいかな

00:00:625 - 音量めっちゃでかい
00:04:739 (1) - 赤線から始める方が音に合ってる気がします
00:15:710 (1) - ^
00:19:139 (2,3) - spacing
00:32:167 (1) - こっちも赤線で
01:11:253 (5) - clap
01:22:225 - ここにカスタムのwhistle
01:28:053 - spinnerいきましょう

[Normal]
00:00:625 - Easyに同じ
00:09:539 (2,3) - わたし、気になります (spacingがやや広いのが)
00:21:025 (5,6,7) - whistleつけてみては？　あと6にfinish忘れてるたぶん
00:26:510 (5,6,7) - ^
00:28:053 (1) - 始点finish
00:42:967 (4,5,6) - ^^
00:44:510 (1) - 始点finish

[fumis]
00:00:625 - 音量が大きすぎです
00:04:567 (1) - normal-hitwhistle2がいい感じの音なのでそれを終点に。
00:31:996 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - BPM高いのでこのstreamはHard相当のdiffには通らないです
00:44:510 (3) - 始点finish
00:55:139 (1) - 00:04:567 (1) - に同じ
01:00:967 (1) - finish
01:06:110 (3) - ^^
01:22:224 (9) - ^
01:28:052 (1) - 5%使うならsoftで

[Insane]
00:13:653 (7,1,2) - 音的に(7,1)のspacingも広くて良いと思います

(ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉ☆

1. delete .osb and full submit
2. your silence hitsounds are 0KB, change to this http://puu.sh/vK6M
3. fix taiko diff's PreviewTime
4. add 01:22:567, BPM of 175.000 on Easy diff
5. start taiko #1 kiai from 00:55:482? like other diffs
6. check out Letterbox during breaks
7. add 'KanaRin' in tags

1. 00:02:682 (3) - stack notes will be hard to read in Easy diff
2. 00:11:253 (5) - ^
3. 00:31:482 - whistle
4. 00:43:825 (4) - ^
5. 01:18:110 (1,2,1,2) - looks really awkward now, how about trying this?
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:28:053 - add 2/1 slider? will be fit with music like Normal diff

1. because it's pretty hard, i'd use Large circle size
2. 01:04:910 (1,2,3,4,1) - this slider stream will be really hard to play for noob players
3. 01:12:625 (2,3,4,5) - ^

1. is it a Hard diff? i'd recommend to use 1.5x SV instead of 2.0x. it's really fast now..
2. since the SV is really fast, use AR8
3. 00:32:425 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - replace with hold sliders
4. 00:43:824 (3) - unexpected, keep your distance or at least NC it
5. 01:07:996 (2) - ^

1. 00:39:539 (4) - 1.9x plz, i missed it orz

Star Stream wrote:

From my Q~

[General]

1. delete .osb and full submit
2. your silence hitsounds are 0KB, change to this http://puu.sh/vK6M
3. fix taiko diff's PreviewTime
4. add 01:22:567, BPM of 175.000 on Easy diff
5. start taiko #1 kiai from 00:55:482? like other diffs
6. check out Letterbox during breaks
7. add 'KanaRin' in tags

[Easy]

1. 00:02:682 (3) - stack notes will be hard to read in Easy diff
2. 00:11:253 (5) - ^
3. 00:31:482 - whistle
4. 00:43:825 (4) - ^
5. 01:18:110 (1,2,1,2) - looks really awkward now, how about trying this?
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:28:053 - add 2/1 slider? will be fit with music like Normal diff

[Normal]

1. because it's pretty hard, i'd use Large circle size
2. 01:04:910 (1,2,3,4,1) - this slider stream will be really hard to play for noob players
3. 01:12:625 (2,3,4,5) - ^

[fumis]

1. is it a Hard diff? i'd recommend to use 1.5x SV instead of 2.0x. it's really fast now..
2. since the SV is really fast, use AR8
3. 00:32:425 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - replace with hold sliders
4. 00:43:824 (3) - unexpected, keep your distance or at least NC it
5. 01:07:996 (2) - ^

[Insane]

1. 00:39:539 (4) - 1.9x plz, i missed it orz

Good luck with rank~

Jupiter wrote:

mod req　ありがと！

[Insane]
00:14:853 (2) - NC?
00:15:367 (3) - NC?
00:17:767 (3) - reverse slider?

[fumis]
00:18:282 (4) - NC
00:18:453 (1) - RNC
01:21:367 (1) - NC

[Normal]
goooood

[Easy]
01:28:053 - add spinner?

譜面綺麗すぎ～～
あんど　すたー

Philippines wrote:

• General

1. Inconsistent Preview Time. Taiko Diff's Preview time should be 55139.
   
   
2. Kiai on Taiko Diff should start on 00:55:482.
   
   
3. Easy is missing a 2nd Red Timing Section. Don't forget to resnap.

• Easy

1. Add a spinner on the end?

• Normal

1. Approach Rate +1.

• Fumis

1. 00:07:310 (1) - Remove new combo.
   
   
2. 00:32:425 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Try to add at least a reverse slider somewhere. Keep in mind, this is a hard diff.
   
   
3. 00:38:167 (2,3,4,5) - Inconsistent Spacing.
   
   
4. 00:58:910 (1) - Remove new combo.
   
   
5. 01:01:996 (1) - ^.

• Insane

1. Seems fine.

1. You forgot to add tag "KanaRin"
2. The video ratio should be 16:9, not 4:3. Also it have not good quality for big size.
   I made it for you that has better quality and ratio 16:9. Here you are.
   EDIT : Change the name of extension from mp4 to avi. >A<
3. Perhaps add offset to 01:17:425 to fix metronome(7/4)?

ykcarrot wrote:

Hi there
Since you Hincle has been made solid mapset, so here is just simple mod I did.



[General]

1. You forgot to add tag "KanaRin"
2. The video ratio should be 16:9, not 4:3. Also it have not good quality for big size.
   I made it for you that has better quality and ratio 16:9. Here you are.
   EDIT : Change the name of extension from mp4 to avi. >A<
3. Perhaps add offset to 01:17:425 to fix metronome(7/4)?

[Insane]
00:13:310 (6) - NC
00:13:996 (1) - Remove NC
00:59:596 (5) - NC


[fumis]
00:09:882 (5) - NC
00:16:910 (4) - NC. Bcuz that spacing fits lyrics. And to be consistent with 00:22:396 (1)
00:17:082 (1) - Remove NC
00:18:282 (4) - NC to be consistent with 00:23:767 (1)
00:18:453 (1) - Remove NC
01:10:567 (7) - NC


[Normal]
01:28:052 (5) - Add whistle to slide(body)


[Easy]
01:19:825 (1) - Maybe remove NC? I think it will be more readable
01:22:567 - Add offset
01:28:053 - Add a slider http://puu.sh/yfg7


Good luck ;D
ofc star~*

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ Hinacle ~

Mod time for my Queue ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]

1. Add 'opening' in tags.
2. Close Letterbox pls.
3. I see 'normal-sliderslide.wav,normal-sliderslide2.wav' already fail,change other pls.

[Insane]

1. 00:26:853 (2) - Add new combo and Remove 00:26:510 (1).

[Easy]

1. 01:22:567 - You are forgot add red line to here.

That's all ~ Nice mapset and moe song ~

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~

Kawayi Rika wrote:

OK ~ Good job ~

Good luck with rank ~

Tarantino wrote:

I really like this map. You did a great job here~

I just came to say that your offset is a bit wrong, and it annoyed me a bit while playing haha.
I think the offset should be 617 or 618, -7 or -8ms from your current offset.






And a little typo you might want to fix

wmfchris wrote:

- N:C1 whistle is same as the N deafult whistle...why do you put an excess file there?
- It's odd that the hard is called "fumis" while easy is called easy but the same mapper mapped them. Use [fumis' hard] and [fumis' easy].

[Hard]
00:14:682 (2) - stack on the beginning of (1) instead of the ending like coming (3,4)?
00:26:339 (8) - [Nazi] left 1 grid lv4 for proper spacing
00:46:910 (2) - (136,184) for correct spacing, I don't see the reason to make this one farther
01:02:853 (4) - place this in the middle of (3,5) (e.g. 296,80) otherwise the jump of (3,4,5) looks a bit odd

[Taiko]
00:12:367 - the duplet sounds odd here and it didn't appear elsewhere in the song so better remove it

sounds nice, but get it SP+12 first............

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Recheck ~ no kds pls ~

[General]

1. Pls fix 'Title,TitleUnicode,Artist,ArtistUnicode' to same.
2. Double note stack on same point in hard diff(Shift+Ctrl+A check pls).

Kawayi Rika wrote:

OK ~ Looks all fine now ~

Let's go again :3

Andrea wrote:

~fumis' easy~

Rename it to "fumis' Easy".

~fumis' hard~

Rename it to "fumis' Hard".

00:52:739 (1,1,1) - I don't think this new combo spam is really necessary.

~Insane~

01:08:853 (1,2,3,4,5) - I really dislike how this stream sounds.

Andrea wrote:

Much better :3

Ranked~