1. Another (4.95 stars, 409 notes)
2. Beginner (2.16 stars, 103 notes)
3. Hyper (4.73 stars, 319 notes)
4. Normal (3.97 stars, 170 notes)
5. Oni (4.94 stars, 655 notes)

3er123 wrote:

Normal
00:38:998 (5) - hm...ugly fixed it up a bit.
00:48:451 (3) - add there slider 00:49:179 - to this time no.
01:11:019 (1,2,3,4,5) - slider no.
01:31:370 (3,4) - oh so hard not that hard.

Hyper
00:15:001 (4) - wry no.
01:04:477 (7) - ^ no.

anzo-nii wrote:

[Normal]
* 01:21:195 (1,2): I think normal players can't notice jumps like this yet, change it to something else.


[Hyper]
* Approach Rate somewhat slow, make it 7.
* 00:15:001 (4) - Make this slider look nicer... here it is: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/264137
* 01:21:740 (2) - Can't easily notice the reverse arrow of the slider under the first one. (especially if snaking sliders is turned off) Fix this one... http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/264156
* 01:11:019 (5,6,7,8) - Antijumps do not fit in this part of the song. They're better far (or more farther) to each other.
* 01:57:537 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^

• Seems to be okay

• 00:37:726 (3) - The slider doesn't fit in here. My Proposal: 00:36:089 (1) shorten it by 1/4 | Move 00:36:998 (2) back to 00:36:817 | Move 00:37:726 (3) back to 00:37:544 My Idea( Added Circle on 00:36:635)
  00:43:543 (3) - Same thing here
  01:18:287 (1) - Mediocre players might be unable to cope with this short slider followed by a circle. Make a tripple instead.

• 
  00:39:907 (6) - Played it several times in a row and it just don't fit in the flow although i get why you had to placed it there. Move it forward to 00:40:089

• 00:04:093 (1) - 00:05:184 (7) The Spacement of this circle 00:04:639 (4) doesn't really fit into the speed and flow of the beginng slow part and it could also be mistaken that it does not belong to the 1/4 stream as it is that far spaced from 00:04:457 (3) and 00:04:820 (5) , but that's jsut my personal view.
  01:38:639 (1) - Really evil tread, i like it , although i needed a third try to understand the order :S
  01:47:361 (1) - 01:48:633 (8) - Maybe warn the player with some kind of storyboarding or new combocolour, just an optional idea, no need to change (i love the jumps).

Loli Cjj wrote:

#modreqs
I loves DDR and this should be modded (*Q*o)o

=General=
I don't find a big problema here...

=Easy=
1. 00:09:184 (1) - How about if the spinner starts at (00:09:911)?

=Normal=
1. There are so many big jumps. I'm afraid new player can't do it nicely.

example of big jumps

01:24:102 (1,2)
01:27:009 (1,2)
01:29:917 (1,2)
01:35:732 (1,2)
01:48:088 (3,4,5,6) < This also confuses a bit imo

All of these jumps are actually beautiful, but maybe trim the spacing to make it better.
2. 00:41:907 (1) - Maybe it will looks more neat if it turns like this? http://puu.sh/nBhT
3. 00:44:816 (5) - It's somehow overlapped by previous object. Flip horizontally would help this time.
4. 01:06:658 (3) - Perhaps like this? http://puu.sh/nBkq
5.01:31:370 (3) - This? http://puu.sh/nBm3
*Idk if you really making the slider shape like that (no.2,4, and 5), but I'm trying to make it more symmetric.

=Hard=
It seems that I don't find anything..

=Another=
Pass.

=Taiko Oni=
1. Hitsound should be N 80%
2. 01:26:646 (424,425) - kdd instead of kd?

Lovely song. Good luck :>

mrkyee wrote:

Everything following are just proposals, unless i marked it red, then i consider it as disturbing and you should probably change it.

General:
01:47:361 (1) From my point of view,the kiai time doesn't fit here,you can place it 00:59:390 (1), since there is the increase of bpm and where the "fast" part starts or even here 01:12:473 (1) (would fit here perfectly), since the voices comes more into the foreground.

Beginner:

• Seems to be okay

Normal:

• 00:37:726 (3) - The slider doesn't fit in here. My Proposal: 00:36:089 (1) shorten it by 1/4 | Move 00:36:998 (2) back to 00:36:817 | Move 00:37:726 (3) back to 00:37:544 My Idea( Added Circle on 00:36:635)
  00:43:543 (3) - Same thing here
  01:18:287 (1) - Mediocre players might be unable to cope with this short slider followed by a circle. Make a tripple instead.

Hyper

• 
  00:39:907 (6) - Played it several times in a row and it just don't fit in the flow although i get why you had to placed it there. Move it forward to 00:40:089

Another

• 00:04:093 (1) - 00:05:184 (7) The Spacement of this circle 00:04:639 (4) doesn't really fit into the speed and flow of the beginng slow part and it could also be mistaken that it does not belong to the 1/4 stream as it is that far spaced from 00:04:457 (3) and 00:04:820 (5) , but that's jsut my personal view.
  01:38:639 (1) - Really evil tread, i like it , although i needed a third try to understand the order :S
  01:47:361 (1) - 01:48:633 (8) - Maybe warn the player with some kind of storyboarding or new combocolour, just an optional idea, no need to change (i love the jumps).

That's it:
To sum up, i enyojed playing your map and i like your style. Keep up the good work.
I hope my modding was not that bad

Thanks for the mods guys!!

Bass wrote:

[General]

Fine

[Beginner]

00:59:390 - end - slider speed is too fast, could you tone down it by at least 0,75x please

1. 01:40:093 (4,5,1,2,1,2,3,4) - imo I'd rearrange this, i don't know if it's just me but this is a bit confusing for easy.

[Normal]

1. 00:38:998 (6) - I just wonder why spacing between this and the end of 00:38:271 (5) - is bigger that previous notes if that's still 1/2
2. 00:59:390 (1) - end - again too fast sliders also no need to put that jump in Normal
3. 01:03:751 (3,4,5,1) - i find this very confusing, especially with slow AR
4. 01:11:019 (1,2,3,4,5) - this is too much for Normal
5. 01:14:653 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - I wouldn't recommend something like that for Normal
6. 01:24:102 (1,2) - jump too big for Normal
7. 01:27:009 (1,2) - same
8. 01:40:093 (1,2,3,4,5) - please don't put something like that in Normal
9. 01:47:361 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - confusing for Normal

Eh.. I think distance between notes in 165 bpm section might be too big...

[Hyper]

1. 00:07:002 (5,6,7) - doesn't look nice imo
2. 00:30:272 (1,2,3) - ^
3. 01:06:658 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this is not good idea
4. 01:08:838 (3,4,5) - ahh
5. 01:16:107 (3,4,5) - well look , 3 and 4 covers slider repeat which might cause real confusion
6. 01:18:287 (1,2,3,4) - these slider doesn't look nice
7. 01:44:090 (4,5,1) - uh
8. 01:44:817 (2,3,4) - hhh

[Another]

1. 00:04:639 (4) - new combo

TheVileOne wrote:

General

A custom spinner would be nice for this song.

Audio leadins are inconsistent according to ai-BAT. Make flatout 2 seconds for all songs that have lead-in.

Beginner

Modder Comments

Structurally sound, not much to say

01:34:278 (3,4,1) - Why increase spacing?
01:41:546 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - I don't like how close together these approach circles appear.
01:54:993 (1) - This combo isn't necessary (I would set the combos here like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/340642 It looks better at least.
01:54:993 (2,3,4) - Perhaps place like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/340646

Normal

Modder Comments

I can't say I like the jumps that occur from opposite a slider end like this 01:29:917 (1,2) - in a Normal. Those spacings are a little much for a Normal in general IMO.

00:37:544 (4) - This just doesn't sound right not mapped on that vocal. Move 1/4th back.
00:37:907 - You might want to add a note here too.
00:40:452 (8) - New combo. Combos in Normals shouldn't go that high. (Also add whistle and remove whistle on next note?)
00:43:543 (3,4,5,6) - Move this combo over 2 units with distance snap. Also I think it would be better if you added a better curve to the notes. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/340663
00:56:451 (1,2,3) - Perhaps this would be better? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/340681
00:59:390 (1,2,3) - Sliders don't form a pattern
01:03:751 - this sounds like a 2 beat vocal. Maybe make a 2 beat long slider if you can make it work?
01:06:658 (3,4) - I think these sliders should be more similar.
01:14:653 (5,6,7,8,9) - Better stack.
01:27:009 (1,2) - A little far for a Normal
01:29:917 (1,2) - ^
01:35:732 (1,2) - ^
01:47:361 (1,2,3,4,5) - Don't have a pattern like this in a Normal
01:48:815 (5,6,7) - Spacing, 7 isn't centered
01:52:449 (5) - I would prefer this wasn't where 3 is, but IDK what you would do to change it.

Hyper

Modder Comments

Intro is unbearably slow for a Hyper. Some intuitive jumps might make it more exciting.

00:01:185 (1,2,3,4) - You got my hopes up with this. The pacing was nice and then a barrage of sliders slowed it way down. I really would have a jump for one part and then just have the rest of it spaced normally.
00:09:184 (2,3) - Not lined up
00:14:274 (3,4) - Add whistles to the start of both of these.
A lot of this intro would sound nice with some extra whistles thrown in.
00:25:182 (4,5,6) - spacing?
00:27:363 (1,2,3) - ^
00:41:180 (9,10,1) - This has bad flow. Please stream out that slider. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/340693
00:41:907 (1) - Highly suggest you make this just a single note. Slider is too slow.
00:43:543 (1) - too slow.... Split it into notes.
00:44:816 (11,12,13,14,15) - Spacing should be equal
00:55:905 (8) - Delete. It's not mapped to anything.
01:04:477 (7,8) - looks weird...
01:11:019 (5,6) - This jump is unnecessary. I would prefer you not have one here. If you want a jump, it shouldn't be as large and would resemble a jump stream and I would suggest that either the whole combo be spaced the same or the start of it be a new combo.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/340698 < example Although 5 would be a new combo.

01:19:741 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Note spam comes out of nowhere. I thought I was remotely following the lyrics, so spamming the beat is just a flow killer. I would really suggest remapping this.
01:48:088 (3) - Make a half beat slider?
01:50:268 (5,6,7) - Random slider shapes?

Another

Modder Comments

This is a solid map, although there are several patterns that don't seem to flow well. Please address them. I think I was unable to completely give this the mod it requires, so get more opinions on this difficulty.

00:08:275 - Add note?
00:17:183 (8,9) - I don't quite like the shape of this pattern. Make sliders more rounded?
00:56:269 (4) - This isn't mapped to anything. Please delete.
01:01:207 (7,8,9,10,11) - Why is this pattern so pointed? 8,9,10 are spaced differently.
01:13:199 (5) - Unreadable, because it's obscured by hitburst. Please make readable.
01:38:275 (7,8) - This is not a jump sound.
01:38:275 (6,7,1,2,3) - I believe there needs to be more sliders here. There's more notes than actual beats.
01:57:537 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - There's a lot of spacing lumps in this. Maybe make the spacing more consistent?



Conclusion

This song needs some alternate opinions. If you fix the thing in red I will star this.

Leorda wrote:

Yo


[Beginner]
* AR +1?

01:03:024 (2) - Make this slider curve?
01:47:361 (1) - Don't put the slider on center of spinner. Otherwise, beginners can't see which is the head slider


[Normal]
* AR +1

00:38:998 (7,1) - Swap new combo?
00:44:816 (7) - New combo?
01:22:285 (3,4) - If you do this, players will confuse which is head slider and tail slider. I suggest you to spread this out
01:48:451 (4) - Move 1 grid right to allign the pattern (Nazi)


[Hyper]
00:38:998 (5) - New combo
01:11:019 (5) - ^


[Another]
* Set the audio lead-in to "2000". Fix this using notepad

01:22:830 (4,6,8) - Move 1 grid left for fix the pattern
01:34:278 (1,2,3,4,1) - This pattern is doesn't look like a star pattern


Good luck~

TheMoonBunny wrote:

[Normal]
00:58:996 (4) - This circle is under the slider. Please move it from under slider to a more noticeable place. ◕ ‿‿ ◕ okay crimmi~~

Leorda wrote:

Yo

_tear wrote:

Couldn't play Taiko if my life depended on it, so standard diffs only

General
Slider ends aren't aligned. The shapes are fine and playable, but perfectly aligned ends add a nice feeling of symmetry, which would go well with symmetrical patterns in the mapset. Not easily fixable at this point, but a guideline for your future maps.

Easy
Nice

Normal
00:47:724 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This section could be more interesting with some of the circles "bridged" with sliders
00:58:996 (4) - Annoying spacing, why not 1 grid right + 1 grid down?

Hyper
01:05:204 (1,2,3,4) - The first two sliders are at a slightly different angle than the last two
01:08:838 (3,4,5) - Doesn't form a nice square
01:20:104 (2,3) - Different angle again
01:22:285 (3,4) - This could be blanketed nicer

Another
01:35:459 (6) - I'd either remove this circle or add an extra one, 6 is a strange number of circles for a stream and nothing musically supports the odd length