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sakuzyo - AXION

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Jenny
2,200 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
Jenny
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sonntag, 22. April 2012 at 00:30:34

Artist: sakuzyo
Title: AXION
Source: BMS
Tags: BOF2011 BOF bms of fighters 2011 Jacob theowest
BPM: 160
Filesize: 14762kb
Play Time: 01:57
Difficulties Available:
  1. Another (5 stars, 461 notes)
  2. Hyper (4,97 stars, 308 notes)
  3. Jacob's Normal (3,01 stars, 123 notes)
  4. theowest's Extra (5 stars, 464 notes)
Download: sakuzyo - AXION
Download: sakuzyo - AXION (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
March 31th '12: ReDL, new video;
Old one can be found here: http://www.mediafire.com/?0xzxj5mjdaub6bo

2 hours of spontaneous youtube-searching and mapping got me to this~
Let's see what I'll end up with here.

Normal - Done (Guest Diff by Jacob)
Hyper - Done
Another - Done
Extra - Done (Guest Diff by theowest)

Pretty video is pretty!
Last edited by Jenny , edited 31 times in total.
giO-
giO-
Hello there~

i just got your map randomly before :D

General

mp3 is 320kbps aka unrankable, here you go 192kbps mp3 http://puu.sh/leFt
then resnap

Offset 1900

Disable CountDown in all difficulties

Don't need to put "sakuzyo" on tags, he's already the author

Another

Little suggestion about this part
00:27:362 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) -
do something different changing something


Good Luck and nice choose~ :D
Charles445
Elite Mapper II: Aspirant / osu! Paragon
2,881 posts
Joined March 2009
Charles445
pm me ingame and I'll talk to you about them streams

EDIT: You kd'ed this? To those wondering we talked about stream readability and jumps within streams. Made a lot of changes. okey
theowest
osu! Alumni
6,891 posts
Joined January 2009
theowest
Hi. theowest's diff is under construction.

Here's some BGs you should consider using:

































source

If you like more than one, you could use different ones for different diffs.
Low
2,006 posts
Joined July 2011
Low
Hey. I'll make the normal for you if you want.
Jenny
2,200 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
Jenny
OMG UNRANKABLE NINJASPINNERZZZZZZZ
Low
2,006 posts
Joined July 2011
Low
add a kiai fountain at 00:25:900. so sexy

no kd.
theowest
osu! Alumni
6,891 posts
Joined January 2009
theowest
remove all kai here

01:39:400

Low
2,006 posts
Joined July 2011
Low
Here's normal.

Download: sakuzyo - AXION (Jenny) [Jacob's Normal].osu
Low
2,006 posts
Joined July 2011
Low
[General]

Add my username to the tags.

[Hyper]

+1 HP drain.
00:07:900 (1) - Remove finish from the head of the slider. It lingers too long.
00:16:900 (9) - ^
00:19:900 (1) - ^
00:22:900 - Make the hitsound here normal instead of soft.
00:27:962 (2) - Surely this could be rearranged to not touch the HP bar.
00:57:775 (3) - Replace this slider with a note. Easier to read.
01:30:775 (1) - Remove finish. The beat at this part of the song is really short, so a finish just makes the beat sound longer.
01:31:150 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Make this more readable - try using some sliders so that first time players can hit the notes accurately and get an idea of what to expect for the next play.
01:19:056 (4) - Shorten this slider by one tick and add a note at 01:19:525
01:22:056 (6) - Delete this note. It's harder to read than 01:23:556 (2) because the last one uses stream polarity to make it easy to read.
01:47:462 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Space these to make them easier to read.
01:57:400 (1) - Move this closer toward the center of the beatmap - it looks awkward just hanging out there on the side.

[Another]

00:07:900 (1) - Remove finish.
00:16:900 (3) - ^
00:19:900 (1) - ^
00:22:900 (4) - ^
01:57:025 (1) - Delete this note and extend the spinner behind it by one tick.
Jenny
2,200 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
Jenny
applied everything except the note after spin in Another; there's clearly a double-beat and that's achieved best like it is now, even though it's hard for most people (I don't see why afterspin-notes are soo hard for people)
Panoroma
44 posts
Joined October 2010
Panoroma
I noticed the video still had audio in it, so I've removed it for ya. I reconverted the video as well, I got two different versions.
H.264 version: http://puu.sh/nfz3
FLV1 version: http://puu.sh/nfzf

Choose which one you like best :3
theowest
osu! Alumni
6,891 posts
Joined January 2009
theowest

Jenny wrote:

applied everything except the note after spin in Another; there's clearly a double-beat and that's achieved best like it is now, even though it's hard for most people (I don't see why afterspin-notes are soo hard for people)
they're not. Some people just seem to relax after spinning a spinner. You really don't have to remove any beats after that last spinner.
Low
2,006 posts
Joined July 2011
Low
I'll mod this again later to see if I missed anything.
LunarSakuya
osu! Alumni
1,704 posts
Joined August 2011
LunarSakuya
hello

General
00:25:900 - Cut the kiai time short at the end of the spinner, a kiai time with no notes makes no sense; theowest's diff is okay with this
...And kiai times need to be consistent for all diffs of course
-Combo colors need to be the same in every diff (theowest's is different)

Jacob's Normal
00:29:275 (4) - Spacing
00:37:900 (4) - Spacing
Open up AIMod and check the spacing errors
00:39:400 (1) - Add finish at beginning
00:46:150 (2,3,4) - Make a slider instead http://puu.sh/omWN
01:39:400 (1) - Delete NC?
01:43:150 (1,2) - normals should avoid tricky spacing like this

Hyper
00:04:900 (8) - NC
00:10:900 (7) - ^
00:16:900 (9) - ^
01:00:400 (7) - NC to indicate SV change
01:10:900 (1,2,3,4) - Move this combo down a bit so you don't have to awkwardly squeeze the (4) at the top; and same with the next combo
01:24:400 (6) - NC?
01:27:400 (5) - NC
01:30:775 (1) - Pull this note closer to 01:30:587 (9), gives space
01:51:025 (3,4) - Spacing

Another
00:42:400 (1) - Move further away
01:47:462 (1) - Too high lol
01:51:306 (5) - NC
01:57:025 (1) - Too close to the spinner, I can't get it xD (Edit: well after reading the previous posts, I guess you can ignore this)

theowest's Extra
You use more than 3 slider speeds, but I still don't know if that's unrankable or not
00:25:900 (1) - Shorten spinner to red tick
00:52:337 (5,6,7) - Spacing too extreme for this part?
01:15:025 (1) - Too close to spinner (Edit: same with above)
01:34:900 (1) - Delete NC and place it on the next note
01:44:650 (8) - NC

Good luck!! Loved the video
theowest
osu! Alumni
6,891 posts
Joined January 2009
theowest

LunarSakuya wrote:

hello
theowest's Extra
You use more than 3 slider speeds, but I still don't know if that's unrankable or not FALSE. I use 3, not more than that.
00:25:900 (1) - Shorten spinner to red tick sure
00:52:337 (5,6,7) - Spacing too extreme for this part? ok
01:15:025 (1) - Too close to spinner (Edit: same with above) ok
01:34:900 (1) - Delete NC and place it on the next note Ok.
01:44:650 (8) - NC ok

Good luck!! Loved the video
Update http://puu.sh/onrV
Tshemmp
1,405 posts
Joined June 2011
Tshemmp
General
Remove the .osb-file, it has no use.

theowest's Extra
Kiai time should be the same in all diffs. Fix this here?
And I want to point out that you use more than 3 SVs here (1,2 and 1,0 and 0,75 and 0,5). It doesn't bother me, but I just wanted to say.

Another
00:49:337 - (4) move this one grid left (spacing is too low)
01:47:462 - (1) touches HP bar

Hyper
00:24:400 - (4) repeat arrow is not visible (covered with hitburst of (2))
01:30:775 - (1) touches HP bar
01:48:025 - distance between (3) and (4) is the same as between (4) and (5), but the time difference is different. This is only a Hyper, so I recommend adjusting the spacing (this goes for (2)/(6) as well).

this diff looks very lesjuh-ish :D

Jacob's Normal
Iirc slider tick rate should be the same in all diffs. So set this to 1 here?

00:02:087 - unused Inheriting Section
00:08:087 - ^
01:14:931 - ^
01:39:212 - ^
01:46:900 - ^
01:47:462 - ^


Edit: I totally forgot to star your map >.<
Last edited by Tshemmp , edited 3 times in total.
theowest
osu! Alumni
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Joined January 2009
theowest
You can do that for me Jenny.
Low
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Joined July 2011
Low
baka.

SPOILER
osu file format v9

[General]
AudioFilename: axion.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 51362
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.9
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8

[Metadata]
Title:AXION
Artist:sakuzyo
Creator:Jenny
Version:Jacob's Normal
Source:BMS
Tags:BOF2011 BOF bms of fighters 2011 Jacob theowest

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:2

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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
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//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
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[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
Joined July 2011
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
nice song, just M4M and star

Theowest

  1. 00:21:306 (4) - remove note
  2. 00:21:400 (5) - ^ jump, fits music more.
  3. 00:47:837 (4) - hard to see this o.o
  4. 00:51:400 (1) - change the color of this part o.o can't see approach circles clearly, if you play with video
  5. 01:15:025 (1) - no don't do this ...
  6. 01:25:900 (1,2,3,4,1) - like this? http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot341.jpg
Another

  1. 00:47:087 (2) - remove this note
  2. 01:15:025 (1) - no please don't do this ...
  3. 01:22:525 (5,6) - slider..?
  4. 01:33:400 (10) - less spacing here, it's 3/4 -> 1/2
  5. 01:37:525 (3) - ctrl+r
  6. 01:47:462 (1) - it's too high 0.0
  7. 01:57:025 (1) - no please don't..
Hyper

  1. 00:24:400 (4) - unrankable reverse arrow ..
  2. 01:24:400 (6,7,8) - this stream is too much for a Hyper diff i think
  3. 01:34:525 (2) - spacing
  4. 01:54:400 (2,3,4,5,6) - too hard for hyper diff..
Normal

  1. 00:18:775 (2) - nove slider point 4 to (440,232)
  2. 01:43:900 (2) - don't antijump on normal just stack it
that's all

Good luck~
theowest
osu! Alumni
6,891 posts
Joined January 2009
theowest
I'm going to wait for you to update my difficulty before I change anything.
PROGUY
osu! Alumni
936 posts
Joined October 2010
PROGUY
Hi there. From #modreqs. Epic song choice :)

[Jacob's Normal]
00:58:900 Is this spinner really necessary here? I really don't recommend it. Please replace it with sliders or something.
01:31:150 Remove the break and add sliders to match the song.

[Hyper]
01:21:775 (4,5) Remove 5 and make 4 become a long note, like this (click me).
01:50:650 (1,2) I'm unsure if you're trying to make a jump here or not. If you're not, distance should be x1.3 here, not x0.8.

[theowest's Extra]
01:33:025 (1,2,3,4,5) Use beat snap divisor 1/3 here and remove 4. Something like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/289533

[Another]
Hm, no problem here I guess.

I hope this helps. :)
theowest
osu! Alumni
6,891 posts
Joined January 2009
theowest
update

http://puu.sh/pfdf
Low
2,006 posts
Joined July 2011
Low
Update from all of the mods. Jenny, pay more attention to this map please :<.

Download: sakuzyo - AXION (Jenny) [Jacob's Normal].osu
Low
2,006 posts
Joined July 2011
Low
Another update. Fixed some weird spinners and tuned up other stuff.

Download: sakuzyo - AXION (Jenny) [Jacob's Normal].osu
theowest
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theowest
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