1. Hard (3,36 stars, 387 notes)
2. Normal (1,31 stars, 210 notes)

wantuole wrote:

[General]
nothing
[Easy]
00:05:271 (1) - use "ctrl+h", Overlap 00:01:673 (2) Ok.
00:16:066 (2) - new slider in middle, not good for look Ok.
00:53:898 (1) - move a little up Can't see why o.o
01:56:929 (2) - use "ctrl+h", Overlap 01:54:530 (4) Ok.
02:56:946 - vol down 10%~15% I think it's fine.
03:57:815 (2) - in middle No because it would see bad due to the spacing.
[Hard]
cs+1 a little empty for hard I think 5 is not a problem in a slow and easy map like this.
01:44:937 (1,2,3,4,5) - look for empty, overlap is more empty Seems fine for me.
01:53:631 (6,7) - ^ ^
03:11:062 (2) - new slider like 03:10:161 (1), use "ctrl+h" No.
04:34:567 (2) - new slider, get a green line and slider custom 0.5 is butter Used 0,75x instead.

Taris wrote:

[Normal]

00:10:069 (1) - I think this is suppose to be lined up in the middle, so if you could line this note in the middle in the middle it would make the following pattern much nicer. Yes, this should be in the middle.
00:53:296 (3,1) - You should line these up, to as the same reason My intention was to make a triangle between 2,3,1 so no changes.
02:08:926 (1) - I don't quite understand why you put NC here, But if you have a reason for doing this, then you can leave it be, but I suggest you remove it. Removed.
03:27:215 (1) - ^ ^
02:58:148 (1) - Add a whistle to the end? Trying to follow your hit sound pattern and It fits there quite well to be honest Ok.
03:36:815 (1) - Clap at start? Yes, I forgot to add here.

[Hard]

00:49:689 (2,3) - Why not turn into a slider? Ok.
00:53:898 (2) - Add Whistle? Sounds good.
01:19:712 (1,2,3,4,5) - The pentagon shape can look much nicer here. It's perfectly done, just rotated.
02:05:319 (1) - Clap at start? No.
02:13:736 (8) - Clap the end No, it should be in the start, and I forgot it xD.
02:42:530 (5) - Remove the reverse? and put the spinner after this, the spinner seem be a little late to me, vocal wise. No.
02:52:141 (1) - Maybe add clap here?
03:00:250 (4,1,2,3,4,5) - They are not lined up right. makes it not look nice.
02:59:349 (3) - Add Whistle to the start Ok.
03:10:161 (1,2) - Line them up like this http://puu.sh/18kVp for the purpose of symmetry and structure and add whistle at reverse Ok.
03:33:215 (2) - Add clap? No.
03:51:815 (7) - Add a clap to the end ^

-[NYAN]- wrote:

General
i think the normal diff should rename “Easy”，hard should change “Normal” ，if this maps you want to rank，please make a hard diff~~
No, they are actually ok, since this is a really calm song. And some patterns of Hard diff are hard for a Normal.

Normal

01:36:537 (1) - slider near note too close This is fine.

Hard

02:42:530 (5) - this slider can remove retrace and this slider 02:43:882 (1) - can move to 02:43:732 - No.

Nagisawa wrote:

Normal
01:04:719 (2) - http://puu.sh/199nD Ok, deleted these two extra points.
01:20:914 (3) - x:244 y:212 Why? seems a lot better in the middle.
01:49:734 (1) - maybe whislte on slider star? sounds good. Not necessary imo.

Hard
01:03:517 - maybe add a note? looks good. http://puu.sh/199w5 http://puu.sh/199wc Ok.

Kuroneko-sHerald wrote:

This song reminds me this map. Indeed, both are really calm songs.

[General]
Hard has a video but there isn't a video. Open the osu file and remove Video,0,"chiisana tenohira.avi" Oh, done.

[Normal]
01:35:335 (1,2) - Maybe delete (2) and add another repeat to (1). Not necessary.
02:48:537 (1) - This spinner needs new combo. It already has.

[Hard]
04:23:580 (2) - I just don't get this slider placement. It's totally different from the rest of map.
I suggest something like this: That seems bad imo.

SPOILER

04:31:670 (2,3) - A bit of spacing here? (stack with 04:33:779 (1) - maybe) Seems bored if I stack, timing change here, so the spacing is different.

Sonnyc wrote:

Normal:
00:13:067 (5) - Put this at (256,208)? Well, repeating is boring.. Ok.
00:55:701 (2) - Delete Whistle Why? sounds good.
01:20:914 (3) - Delete Whistle at the end Ok.
01:54:530 (4) - ^ No, this one fits good.
02:28:133 (1) - Delete NC Ok.
02:35:331 (1) - ^ Ok.
02:43:882 (1) - Error..? Drag to 02:43:732 Fixed.
03:27:215 (3) - Well, here, you should NC this, but then follow these NCs at the previous part I did.
04:32:368 (2) - Delete Whistle No.
04:34:567 (2) - ^ at the end ^

Hard:
00:16:066 (2) - Delete Whistle at the start Ok.
01:01:713 (6) - Stacking on (4) doesn't look like a good idea to me.. Moved.
03:17:915 (2,3) - Though this will break the distance, pulling 2 Grids up will make a better shape I know, but I don't want to break the distance.
04:32:368 (3) - Delete Whistle No.
04:34:567 (2) - Add Whistle at the Start Added in the end instead, like Normal diff.

Dark Fang wrote:

[General]

02:38:927 - I think that's offset is incorrect. I think offset is here 02:38:960 just suggestion I think offset is fine.

[Noramal]

00:00:474 (1) - add Whistle at head like others? Sounds bad.
00:47:284 (5) - add Whistle at tail? ^
01:06:523 (4) - ^ ^
01:56:329 (1) - Remove Whistle? Ok.
01:56:929 (2) - add Whistle? Ok.
04:18:429 - why don't you Change volume lower than now? I think 15% is good. 15% is really low imo.

[Hard]

00:35:277 (1) - add Whistle? Ok.
02:32:932 (8) - That slider's arrow coverd by 02:32:032 (6) - this circle's hitbuster. why don't you move that? Moved.
03:17:915 (2,3) - why don't you 2 grid up this circles? that looks good if you move to that I don't want to break spacing.
03:41:615 (1) - why don't you make stack with 03:40:415 (5) ? Ok.
04:18:429 - volume 15%. same as Normal diff 15% is really low imo.
04:28:970 (1) - Remove NC? No.

Darksonic wrote:

we tan rapido te van a rankear lrpm

jaja felicitaciones capo!

Ayu wrote:

Such a good song, but I can't say I like the map. In fact, I find it very ugly.

Ayu wrote:

My map has 21 mods and 31 SP pls rank

Such a good song, but I can't say I like the map. In fact, I find it very ugly.

Andrea wrote:

Ayu wrote:

My map has 21 mods and 31 SP pls rank

Such a good song, but I can't say I like the map. In fact, I find it very ugly.

Try yourself making a better one then (:

Ayu wrote:

But, yeah, darksonic is a chat-op anyway so it pretty much makes sense why he gets his maps ranked.

1. BPM is doubled.
2. 00:01:073 (3,4,5) - Sliders like this should be starting on the downbeat. But since you have the BPM doubled it was more difficult for you to grasp that idea. [Hard]

Mikarunoel131 wrote:

Sometimes it feels like some people here have an VIP status |D

Andrea wrote:

Try yourself making a better one then (:

AngelHoney wrote:

Andrea wrote:

Try yourself making a better one then (:

^^b

Mercurial wrote:

Mikarunoel131 wrote:

Sometimes it feels like some people here have an VIP status |D

There's not a VIP status or something.

If you are a famous mapper, the mods will comes without any advisement, just keep mapping, keep ranking your maps and you'll be recognized in the whole mapping community.

Mongeed wrote:

Mercurial wrote:

There's not a VIP status or something.

If you are a famous mapper, the mods will comes without any advisement, just keep mapping, keep ranking your maps and you'll be recognized in the whole mapping community.

As someone with ranked maps, it's easy to say, yeah. But, it's hard to get noticed as a mapper if there's no MAT/BAT available, because they're all "Busy".

I'm not talking for myself.

tetsutaro wrote:

By reflex I thought it was similar to the Aqua Timez one...

Just a question before modding: Is that all the difficulties?
Because only a Normal + Hard would not probably get