1. 00:09:445 (1) - Move the new combo on 00:08:112 (3) -,since you have been using this NC pattern for the previous ones?
2. 01:10:778 (2) - I suggest you to make make this just like 01:09:445 (1) - but flipped vertically

1. 00:08:612 - Useless green timing section,remove it
2. 00:23:778 (4) - Allign this with 00:22:778 (3) - by moving it just 1 grid right
   There are various little spacing errors,like 00:17:445 (3) -,00:41:445 (3) - or 00:54:778 (3) -,but for the rest this diff is pretty much fine. Good work! ^^

• Awesome and clean diff,nothing found! Good job,again ^^

1. 00:21:111 (7) - Put this at x:174 y:200 to make it equidistant to 00:20:945 (6,8) -
2. 00:36:445 (6,7,8,9) - What if you consider this entire pattern a jump and do something like this? It would pretty much be better to play.
3. 01:08:778 (7) - Move this 1 grid right to make better the blanket with 01:08:612 (6) - ?
4. 01:10:278 (2) - Again,move this at x:316 y:168 to make this equidistant to 01:09:445 (1,3) - ?

1. spinner-background.png , spinner-metre.png 's size is incorret , their size should be 1023x692 , and you need to Full Submit after you fix
2. Add tags "ed15" to tags , and add D-51's members' name to tags ?

1. Unrankable stuff
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   1. Nothing
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
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   1. 00:09:445 (2,3,1) - ( Nazi ) Tiny spacing issue
   　
3. Hitsounds
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2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
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   1. Many different spacing on this difficulty , use Shift+Ctrl+A to check find them
   　
3. Hitsounds
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   1. Nothing

1. Unrankable stuff
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   1. Nothing
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
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   1. 00:07:945 (6) - Move two grid up to make the spacing the same like other pattern
   2. 00:16:112 (1) - This flow is very bad for me , try this
      
      Photo

      

      162,187,16112,6,0,B|248:208|220:284|316:292,1,180,4|8

   3. 00:23:111 (5) - Spacing issue
   　
3. Hitsounds
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   1. Nothing

1. Unrankable stuff
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2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
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   1. 00:04:112 (2,3) - This jump is too huge IMO
   2. 00:49:112 (3) - Ctrl+R to get a better flow
   3. 01:24:945 (7,8,9) - Jump here is not a good idea...
   　
3. Hitsounds
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   1. Nothing

1. 00:10:112 (4,5,6) - i think http://puu.sh/Hn0Q is better
2. 00:14:445 (2) - i think this distance gives confusion, so you should change this
3. 00:17:112 (2) - ^
4. 00:19:778 (2) - ^
5. 00:58:778 (1) - hmm... i think this distance is not good. because slow speed slider is doesn't match with a jump
6. 01:09:445 (1) - ^

1. 00:00:112 (1,2,3,4) - i think this distance is not so good. you should change this
2. 00:09:445 (4) - i think this distance gives confusion, so you should change this
3. 00:11:778 (2) - ^
4. 00:15:778 (8) - ^
5. 00:17:445 (3) - ^
6. 00:19:945 (1,2) - hmm... i think this slider doesn't follow music. how about this pattern ? http://puu.sh/HmfM
7. 00:23:111 (5) - ^
8. 00:24:111 (1) - ^
9. 00:26:278 - add note
10. 00:32:945 (3,4,5) - i think it will be much better if you do this http://puu.sh/HmpR
11. 00:29:111 (4,5,6,1) - i think this distance gives confusion, so you should change this
12. 00:30:445 (2) - ^
13. 00:35:778 (2) - ^
14. 00:38:445 (3) - ^
15. 00:41:112 (2) - ^
16. 00:42:445 (5) - ^
17. 00:45:112 (5) - ^
18. 00:46:612 - add note
19. 00:50:445 (5) - - i think this distance gives confusion, so you should change this
20. 01:01:112 (6) - ^
21. 01:17:112 (4) - ^
22. 01:17:445 (1) - ^
23. 01:18:445 (2) - ^
24. 01:21:111 (2) - ^
25. 01:22:445 (5) - ^
26. 01:23:778 (2) - ^

1. 00:15:778 (4) - remove note
2. 00:24:112 (2) - move to more upper side and we can easy to aim
3. 00:25:112 (2) - remove reverse because beginners will want some short break
4. 00:30:778 (3) - remove this slider and put not at 00:30:778 and 00:31:445 so that make short break at 00:31:112
5. 00:36:112 (3) - ^ i think vocal is sure here, but we need some rest...
6. 00:42:445 (4) - remove note, same reason as above
7. 00:47:778 (4) - ^
8. 00:51:778 (2,4) - ^
9. 00:58:445 (4) - ^
10. 01:03:778 (4) - ^
11. 01:09:111 (4) - ^
12. 01:13:445 (3,4) - i think this flow is not so good
13. 01:14:445 (4) - remove note
14. 01:19:778 (4) - ^

1. 00:10:445 (3) - 00:13:111 (3) - 00:13:445 (1) - 00:14:445 (2) - 00:14:778 (3) - 00:24:112 (1) - 00:41:778 (2) - 00:54:445 (2) - 00:54:778 (3) - 00:55:778 (4) - 00:56:111 (1) - 01:05:111 (2) - 01:05:445 (3) - 01:06:445 (4) - 01:06:778 (1) - 01:08:445 (2) - 01:08:778 (3) - 01:09:445 (1) -
   distance 1.00 1.60...? i think you should unify all distance
2. 00:10:445 (3) - 00:13:111 (3) - 00:14:445 (2) - 00:54:445 (2) - 00:55:778 (4) - 01:05:111 (2) - 01:06:445 (4) - 01:08:445 (2) - remove this note. its hard to play for beginners

Hinsvar wrote:

One hit, 71 miss.

...Wow. Are you sure his mod is THAT useless?

Anyway, one more star.

Not like my mods are useful, anyway (lol)

RikiH_ wrote:

Hi from my queue o/
Sorry for late D:

Easy

00:44:778 (3) - NC? nope, too short combo set if I do this

Normal

00:07:445 (3) - I don't like this slider's shape...

Hard

00:29:445 (1) - Make this slider symmetric
00:58:778 (1) - This slider...

Insane

00:06:778 (3) - NC sorry, nope
01:12:112 (1) - Please change this slider...

I don't like some sliders but this is a very good map, I can't find big problems. Good luck!

Aleks719 wrote:

~puff~

Sorry, i have come with reasons for popping

General
Video Offset is "-600", guess you know how to fix it for every diff. that's too much, will broke between the lyric in video and music D: -100 much better imo.. I know you told this because video in beginning.. but that's the original >_<
spinner-background.png has a size 1.32mb. Skinned elements with size more than 1mb are unrankable. Recompress it or change. done
BG looks bad, you know it. won't force to change, just added another opinion noooo ;_;

Insane
HP+1, now it's same as in Hard ok
01:12:112 (1) - change it please, looks too bad between nice sliders D: changed into curve shape -_-||

Hard
00:19:945 (1) - imo, should be only one reverse, as in Insane ok
00:58:778 (1) - change it please too D: okay -_-|||

Normal
01:13:445 (3,4,1) - smaaall spacing issue, btw if you want to leave it, change spacing between combos, not inside~ fix spacing .-.
and look on this diff from my side. Slider-note-slider-note-slider-note-... all the time. Try to make it more interesting? well, I have no idea ;;

Easy
01:04:111 (1) - 1.6x instead of 1.0... kinda speed up done~

Hinsvar wrote:

>Ranked in 10 days.