1. Hinacle's Hard (4,65 stars, 197 notes)
2. Insane (4,96 stars, 259 notes)
3. Normal (2,8 stars, 111 notes)

1. You added some timing sections with 5% volume. 5% volume is unrankable. You should raise it up at least to 15%. You decreased it at the end of a spinner, and it makes sense so it's ok.
2. The bg is so bright that making an SB would be great idea, imo.

1. 00:08:121 (2) - Here's missing a whistle.
2. 00:11:210 (1) - I don't think that making jumps in a Normal is a good idea. I'm against this because this is your easiest difficulty. If you had an easy, this would be a different history.
3. 00:31:945 (4) - ^
4. 00:36:357 (1,2,3) - You should move this notes in a way that they don't get covered by the spinner-osu so that beginners can read and see the pattern better:
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:39:445 (1) - Another jump. Removing jumps would mean remap so you should add a Easy diff instead to avoid this. I can map one for you if you want.
6. 00:58:085 (1) - This spinner starts way too early after 00:57:092 (1). You should consider moving it a bit away.
7. 01:14:739 (1) - A finish here sounds very good to me. How about adding it?
8. 01:18:269 (1) - ^
9. 01:20:033 (3) - Hm. This MIGHT be confusing for beginners if you're going to keep your mapset as it is. I suggest you to remove 1 repeat of this slider and add a note at 01:21:357. Beginners may think that this slider has 1 repeat like your previous ones.
10. 01:25:327 (1) - I personally dislike notes a so.. low volume. I suggest you to increase it a bit. I guess that you did this intentionally to keep following the calm voice, but I find it annoying and kinda monotonous when I click notes and they don't have any sound.
11. 01:33:378 (1) - Same thing about spinner starting way too early after clicking a note.
12. 01:36:798 (1) - A finish here would fit perfectly with the song in my opinion.
    
    Nice difficulty. I just don't agree about jumps and so many consecutive long spinners.

1. 00:21:577 (1) - I think that this nc is inconsistent with your previous ones. I suggest you to remove nc here and add then add it to 00:21:798 (3) instead for consistency. This also will avoid that high combo number (10).
2. 00:30:621 (5) - Same thing about combos. You always add a nc when you use a clap hitsound so I suggest you to add a nc here, remove nc of 00:31:724 (1) and then add nc to 00:32:386 (6).
3. 00:34:151 (1) - If I'm not wrong, here's a missing clap (with clap I mean this kind of clap -> 00:32:386 (1))
4. 00:41:210 (1) - ^ I also suggest you to replace this note and (2) with a slider to follow better the voice.
5. 00:57:092 (6) - A nc here fits nice with the music imo. I suggest you to add it.
6. 01:39:445 (5) - The vocals end here, and here's a kinda loud sound, so a hitfinish would logical.
   
   Really good difficulty.

1. 00:09:445 (1) - Here's a missing clap. That's why this slider sounds so.. empty.
2. 00:20:916 (1) - I don't really get the purpose of this change of volume, but I personally dislike it because it is all off a sudden. Sounds weird in my opinion.
3. 00:42:533 (8) - I suggest you to add a NC here. Fits with the music and avoids that high combo number (10).
4. 00:44:739 (1) - This slider looks awkward because your previous pattern was symmetric, so this weird slider makes it look like this. You should make it symmetrical too.
5. 00:49:151 (2) - Same thing about the change of volume.
6. 01:14:739 (1) - A finish here sounds great with the music to me. Perhaps add it?
7. 01:18:269 (1) - ^
8. 01:36:908 (1) - ^
   
   Another great difficulty. I'm still wondering the reason of those volume changes but it's ok, I guess.

Kei wrote:

Hi. Mod request taken from #modreqs.

[General]

1. You added some timing sections with 5% volume. 5% volume is unrankable. You should raise it up at least to 15%. You decreased it at the end of a spinner, and it makes sense so it's ok.
2. The bg is so bright that making an SB would be great idea, imo. Lazy to make one -w-

[Normal]

1. 00:08:121 (2) - Here's missing a whistle. true, added
2. 00:11:210 (1) - I don't think that making jumps in a Normal is a good idea. I'm against this because this is your easiest difficulty. If you had an easy, this would be a different history. fixed
3. 00:31:945 (4) - ^ ^
4. 00:36:357 (1,2,3) - You should move this notes in a way that they don't get covered by the spinner-osu so that beginners can read and see the pattern better: I reduced the spinner and added a circle on the long white tick so it's also symmetric with 00:37:680 (1,2,3,4). It should be ok now
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:39:445 (1) - Another jump. Removing jumps would mean remap so you should add a Easy diff instead to avoid this. I can map one for you if you want. Fixed ç_ç I did these jumps 'cause it was my intention to make an easy diff too but so lazy.
6. 00:58:085 (1) - This spinner starts way too early after 00:57:092 (1). You should consider moving it a bit away. Nah it's ok. It's just a spinner and I could keep it in this way
7. 01:14:739 (1) - A finish here sounds very good to me. How about adding it? Good catch bt I prefer to keep clap here
8. 01:18:269 (1) - ^ ^
9. 01:20:033 (3) - Hm. This MIGHT be confusing for beginners if you're going to keep your mapset as it is. I suggest you to remove 1 repeat of this slider and add a note at 01:21:357. Beginners may think that this slider has 1 repeat like your previous ones. Right! Fixed
10. 01:25:327 (1) - I personally dislike notes a so.. low volume. I suggest you to increase it a bit. I guess that you did this intentionally to keep following the calm voice, but I find it annoying and kinda monotonous when I click notes and they don't have any sound. For now I keep it, and I will see, thank you
11. 01:33:378 (1) - Same thing about spinner starting way too early after clicking a note. Same I wrote above
12. 01:36:798 (1) - A finish here would fit perfectly with the song in my opinion. Really nice, added ;3
    
    Nice difficulty. I just don't agree about jumps and so many consecutive long spinners.

[Hinacle's Hard]

1. 00:21:577 (1) - I think that this nc is inconsistent with your previous ones. I suggest you to remove nc here and add then add it to 00:21:798 (3) instead for consistency. This also will avoid that high combo number (10).
2. 00:30:621 (5) - Same thing about combos. You always add a nc when you use a clap hitsound so I suggest you to add a nc here, remove nc of 00:31:724 (1) and then add nc to 00:32:386 (6).
3. 00:34:151 (1) - If I'm not wrong, here's a missing clap (with clap I mean this kind of clap -> 00:32:386 (1))
4. 00:41:210 (1) - ^ I also suggest you to replace this note and (2) with a slider to follow better the voice.
5. 00:57:092 (6) - A nc here fits nice with the music imo. I suggest you to add it.
6. 01:39:445 (5) - The vocals end here, and here's a kinda loud sound, so a hitfinish would logical.
   
   Really good difficulty.

[Insane]

1. 00:09:445 (1) - Here's a missing clap. That's why this slider sounds so.. empty. yea ;;
2. 00:20:916 (1) - I don't really get the purpose of this change of volume, but I personally dislike it because it is all off a sudden. Sounds weird in my opinion. it's good imho c.c I keep it
3. 00:42:533 (8) - I suggest you to add a NC here. Fits with the music and avoids that high combo number (10). New combo is good here. Infact I tried to use new combo somewhere for the long combo. And here its very nice, thanks!
4. 00:44:739 (1) - This slider looks awkward because your previous pattern was symmetric, so this weird slider makes it look like this. You should make it symmetrical too. I tried, but to overlap the tail with 00:42:974 (3) this means I can't overlap head too with 00:42:754 (2) :\ Btw I tried again making it less curves and.. it should be ok now
5. 00:49:151 (2) - Same thing about the change of volume. same thing I wrote above
6. 01:14:739 (1) - A finish here sounds great with the music to me. Perhaps add it? uhuh k removed clap and added finish
7. 01:18:269 (1) - ^ ^
8. 01:36:908 (1) - ^ ^
   
   Another great difficulty. I'm still wondering the reason of those volume changes but it's ok, I guess.

That's all. Overall, this mapset is very good. To make it more solid, you should add an Easy. Have a star from me, and good luck! :3

Maddy wrote:

Hey.

[Insane]

00:08:563 (3) - Il movimento è contrario, io farei http://puu.sh/C20C Non sono d'accordo, l'ho fatto così di proposito per far apparire la map più.. "estesa" ;p
00:19:371 (8) - In DT sarebbe molto divertente un reverse jump, http://puu.sh/C217 Ho tolto l'overlap ma non ho fatto come mostra il tuo screen che non mi piace :3 Editato in un altro modo
01:05:916 (5) - Niente clap/finish? True story, added
01:07:680 (1) - ^ ^
01:12:313 (1,2,3) - Sarebbe meglio mettere un pattern a triangolo, per renderla piu' divertente. Nu
01:31:504 (6,7,1) - Siccome lo slider non avrebbe tanto senso mettere NC, dato che queste 3 note hanno lo stesso beat, metti NC sul (6) e togli dallo slider.
Risistema il pattern. Disapprovo siccome lo slider segue new combo insieme al nuovo vocal

[Normal]

00:21:798 (1) - Slider orribili xD NOOO COME OSI ç_ç <3 Lascio.

GL :3

KersiTyan wrote:

Hi~ from in-game PM xD
Sorry for my little mod >w<

[Insane]

00:01:504 - whistle oki
00:01:945 - remove nope D:
00:02:386 (3,5) - whistle nop
00:02:827 (4,6) - remove ^ sorry it follows my hitsound pattern çwç
00:28:857 - remove clap and add finish? it sounds better >w< ya k
00:34:151 - clap (N:C) added clap but not nc
00:51:798 - ^ added
01:09:445 - ^ ^

[Normal]

00:05:916 - clap Maybe I removed it o.o added lol
00:31:945 (4) - remove clap yes
01:07:239 (6) - ^ ^
01:09:445 - clap? yup
01:21:378 - remove this note mh? o.o
01:39:555 - too hard for beginners :c You are not the first that say this D: Okay, I dediced to make an "M" slider (from the name of MAMI) and.. it should be k now ;3

That's all i have found, sorry :c i love Madoka, nice map <3 Good luck ~

Illumined wrote:

Thank you for requesting via Illumined's Modding Queue (･∀･)

Normal
00:10:769 (1) - I doubt there will be complains about these notes. It's too near to spinner. removed
00:21:357 (1) - If you're not removing them, try whistle here. \:D/ I removed the first but I'll keep this, added whistle
00:27:092 (1,2) - Not balanced. (btw (1) should have sth wrong: http://puu.sh/Cq5x&#41; oh what lol fixed
00:49:592 - Unused section. removed
00:57:092 (1) - Reduce for volume for finish a little bit? Sounds too harsh. @_@ Nu it's k
01:05:916 (5) - Kinda ugly, try to move the 2nd point to centre. k

SPOILER

01:14:739 (1) - Not symmetrical Try Ctrl+H to flip it horizontally and fix. ( 01:16:504 (2) - this also) done
01:18:269 (1) - ^, I guess you may keep grid snap on while drawing these sliders. why? buh, k.
01:24:445 - Move this section to spinner's end? Since it affects the volume while spinning. ehm, I don't need to do that lol
01:25:327 - to 01:33:269 - Volume...:\ uh. I wonder such a low volume here...Increase to 30? Increased to 40% like hinacle's diff
01:39:445 - Unused section.
01:35:916 (1) - M \:D/ Other diffs had A, M and I, am I correct? /slap No, since there are just 3 diff D:

Insane
00:42:974 (3) - Try clap instead. Not a right place to use finish yes
00:44:739 - Seems missing a clap. added
00:48:710 (1,2) - Similar suggestion with Hinacle's Hard on 0:59:739 (3,4,5,6) - , feel like to use normal hitsounds here. not for me, since there is a whistle too
00:49:592 - Unused section. removed
00:53:563 (6) - Same as 00:42:974 (3) - ^
00:59:739 - , 00:59:960 - , 01:00:180 - Keep these with a relatively clear hitsounds here due to drums. used normal volume 40%
01:00:511 (5,1) - This spacing doesn't match the song much, yea? i think it's good o.o
01:25:327 - Same with Normal. k
01:35:916 - Ahhhh Neither A, M nor I here! ﾟ(ﾟ´Д｀ﾟ)ﾟ orz çwç

Pretty nice mapset! Good luck (´∀｀*)

1. 00:12:974 (3) - Visto che negli slider in precedenza hai usato waypoint rossi,perchè non li usi anche qui?
2. 00:31:945 (4,1,2,3) - Per mantenere la simmetria,potresti riarragiare il pattern così
3. 01:07:239 (6,1) - Il blanket qui non è proprio esatto,non tutte le parti son equidistanti. Per fixare,fai qualcosa del genere (se vuoi però puoi evitare di fixare,visto che questo è piuttosto nazi)
4. 01:25:327 (1) - Come 00:12:974 (3) -

1. 00:31:724 (1,2,3) - Manual stack here,since this stack is covering a bit the end of 00:32:386 (5) - ?
   Awesome as always,good job

1. 00:09:004 (4,5,6) - Magari potresti mettere questa tripletta a x:72 y:336 per renderlo equidistante con 00:08:563 (3) - e 00:09:445 (1) -
2. 00:23:342 (4) - 1 grid left per centrare il blanket con 00:23:563 (1) - ?
3. 00:39:114 - Sezione timing non usata,rimuovila

-kevincela- wrote:

[Normal]

1. 00:12:974 (3) - Visto che negli slider in precedenza hai usato waypoint rossi,perchè non li usi anche qui? Perchè quelli sono simmetrici l'un l'altro, mentre questo è forever alone >: Lascio così xD
2. 00:31:945 (4,1,2,3) - Per mantenere la simmetria,potresti riarragiare il pattern così Nice! k
3. 01:07:239 (6,1) - Il blanket qui non è proprio esatto,non tutte le parti son equidistanti. Per fixare,fai qualcosa del genere (se vuoi però puoi evitare di fixare,visto che questo è piuttosto nazi) Migliorato un po'
4. 01:25:327 (1) - Come 00:12:974 (3) - Stessa risposta

[Insane]

1. 00:09:004 (4,5,6) - Magari potresti mettere questa tripletta a x:72 y:336 per renderlo equidistante con 00:08:563 (3) - e 00:09:445 (1) - k
2. 00:23:342 (4) - 1 grid left per centrare il blanket con 00:23:563 (1) - ? k
3. 00:39:114 - Sezione timing non usata,rimuovila k

Sono piacevolmente sorpreso,vedo che sei migliorato molto nel mapping! Prendi questa mod come un'insieme di suggerimenti,visto che di sbagliato non c'è poi tanto Grazie <3

Lizbeth wrote:

Hi~

justitiam should be capitalized. D:

Same circle size for all diffs? why not make circle size bigger in normal diff? You are right, k <3

[Insane]
01:28:416 (4,5,6) - I think this doesn't fit, I suggest something like this: http://puu.sh/CDkO okay :3
Nice diff btw<3

[Normal]
Generally fine, I dont see anything confusing on layout, but I think slider velocity could be lower. Since this is the easiest diff on the set. If you had an easy this wouldn't bug me though. I think this SV is fine >w<

That's all for now~

spboxer3 wrote:

deny as Kokatsu's request
and sorry for delay to your mod ><
I will clean my mod list asap~

Normal

Hinacle's Hard

1. First of all I'd suggest you check the symmetry of your sliders. Most are slightly asymmetric, and this bothered me very much while playing. I would also suggest to use new combos only on big white ticks to make the hitsounding more efficient:
   
   1. 00:04:151 (5,1) - Remove the new combo from (1) and add it to (5).
   2. 00:14:739 (5,1) - Same.
   3. 00:42:974 (5,1) - Same.
   4. 00:53:563 (6,1) - Remove the new combo from (1) and add it to (6).
   5. 01:10:989 (1,2) - Add a new combo on (2) and remove the first new combo.
2. Few other things too:
   
   1. 00:08:563 (1) - It would be better to make this spinner start 1/1 later and place a circle where it started. It will be more consistent with the rest of the diff (since you do that later), and right now, the absence of any sound at 00:08:563 - feels weird because there is something in the song.
   2. 00:19:151 (1) - Same.
   3. 00:21:357 (1) - This note is very faint in the song, and you nearly silenced it in the map, which feels weird. I would rather suggest to remove it, as it would give a better effect to the kiai fountain.
   4. 00:21:798 (1,3) - Why these weird shapes and their sharp angle ? Make the sliders blanket the approach circle from 00:23:121 (2) - instead ?
   5. 00:27:092 (1) - To make the map a bit more consistent, I'd suggest to remove this new combo and the hitsound on this. The comboing will be more consistent (in length) this way, and since there isn't the sound in the song that calls for the normal hitsound, the hitsounding will be more consistent as well.
   6. 00:31:945 (4) - Don't give this one a normal hitsound, it kind of ruins the next normal finish.
   7. 00:33:710 (1) - This spinner is pretty short for a Normal. Also, it starts where there should have been a circle to finish 00:32:386 (1,2,3) - . Make it a long slider instead ? If you don't, be careful, as 00:35:916 (1,2,3,4) - are hidden under the text that pops out after completing the spinner.
   8. 00:38:562 (4,1) - Here again, it would sound better and make the kiai fountain better to remove the normal sampleset and finish from (4) and use a finish on (1).
   9. 00:40:327 (2) - The whistle position here sounds weird. Make it whistle-normal to go with the vocals ?
   10. 01:00:180 (1) - This note is very faint in the song, and you nearly silenced it in the map, which feels weird. I would rather suggest to remove it, as it would give a better effect to the kiai fountain.
   11. 01:03:930 (1) - This slider feels weird. There is a pretty long time to wait to reach it (3/2) and it breaks the comboing (as there should be a new combo on 01:04:151 - ). Move it 1/2 back, remove its new combo, and add a circle at 01:04:151 - with a new combo ?
   12. 01:07:239 (6) - Did you missplace the section ? I'm pretty sure this is not supposed to have a normal sampleset.
   13. 01:08:563 (2) - The lact of hitsound on this sounds weird. Use a whistle on the slider's head ?
   14. 01:08:563 (2,3) - I'm going to be blunt but this overlap is ugly. There is plenty of space around (2), so I'm sure you can make a non-overlapping version of this pattern.
   15. 01:12:092 (3) - The lack of hitsounds here feels a bit blank. Add a whistle on both ends of the slider (without using a sliderwhistle) ?

1. For the sake of symmetry, and to make your slow downs readable, please use tick rate 2.
2. This is close to being overmapped. None of these 1/4 make any sense at all and almost all of these jumps are unreasonable. At least it offers a good spread between Normal and Insane, so I'm just going to turn a blind eye on that. There are still a few jumps I would like to see fixed:
   
   1. 00:24:445 (9,10,1) - I kind of understand why you put a jump here but the jump is wrong. If anything, it should be on 00:25:107 (10,1) - but not on 00:24:445 (9,10) - . Right now, it only looks like broken spacing for the sake of visibility, which is not a good thing.
   2. 00:29:739 (3,4,5) - Same goes for this. That exactly looks like a pattern you made for the sake of it, with no real musical backup.
   3. 00:32:386 (5) - I don't get the jumps before but w/e. I expected a finish on this slider's head.
   4. 00:39:445 (1) - Expected a normal finish instead of a soft finish here.
   5. 00:42:092 (4,5,1) - This spacing was clearly broken for the sake of visuals. Don't do that. There is enough room to keep the spacing consistent and there is absolutely no reason to have a jump here.
   6. 01:00:621 (1) - Expected a normal-finish here.
   7. 01:11:210 (1) - Same.
   8. 01:35:916 (1) - Make this slider symmetric ? It won't be very hard and it will make it look much better.
   For the expected finishes, when you switch from one sampleset to another, and add jumps and/or triples, you're switching the kind of flow you use, and that's supposed to have an end - usually with a finish. In many cases, you deny that end and break your flow because of that.

1. AR8 OD6 is stupid. This is a free SS and makes the map kind of boring to play. Please raise the OD to at least 7.
2. If you want your slow downs to be rankable, you need to use tick rate 2.
3. 00:04:592 (2,3,4,5,6) - This part is pretty neutral in the song, I don't see why you would add such a big jump to it.
4. 00:12:974 (1,2,3,4) - Why would you break the spacing like that for no reason at all ? D:
5. 00:18:269 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - These jumps are huuuuuuuge... I understand why you placed jumps here but these are too big for what they are meant to do.
6. 00:20:916 (1,2) - Same.
7. 00:24:886 (6,1) - ... Same.
8. 00:45:401 (2,3,4,5,6) - Any reason why you break the spacing ? =(
9. 00:46:504 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Here again, these jumps are quite big.
10. 01:07:680 (1) - Add a finish on this slider's head ?
11. 01:12:313 (1,2,3) - Why these notes ? They come too soon after the spinner, are hidden by its hitburst, and sound weird. I find it better to remove them so that the focus is entirely on the spinners, thus the vocals.

Odaril wrote:

Oh man it's been such a long time. Can I still do this ?...

Anyway, please answer to this mod providing reasons for the fixes you didn't apply.
If you have any question, feel free to ask me in-game.

General

Normal

1. First of all I'd suggest you check the symmetry of your sliders. Most are slightly asymmetric, and this bothered me very much while playing. I would also suggest to use new combos only on big white ticks to make the hitsounding more efficient: I just followed the vocal and sound.
   
   1. 00:04:151 (5,1) - Remove the new combo from (1) and add it to (5). It follows voice
   2. 00:14:739 (5,1) - Same. ^
   3. 00:42:974 (5,1) - Same. ^
   4. 00:53:563 (6,1) - Remove the new combo from (1) and add it to (6). ^ Here it's also useless to use NC for symmetry with 00:52:680 (4,5)
   5. 01:10:989 (1,2) - Add a new combo on (2) and remove the first new combo.
2. Few other things too:
   
   1. 00:08:563 (1) - It would be better to make this spinner start 1/1 later and place a circle where it started. It will be more consistent with the rest of the diff (since you do that later), and right now, the absence of any sound at 00:08:563 - feels weird because there is something in the song. Maybe you are right, but really I'm following the vocal here and.. the vocal just starts on this point.
   2. 00:19:151 (1) - Same. ^
   3. 00:21:357 (1) - This note is very faint in the song, and you nearly silenced it in the map, which feels weird. I would rather suggest to remove it, as it would give a better effect to the kiai fountain. I agree, just cuz it's too soon after the spinner for the easiest diff of my mapset
   4. 00:21:798 (1,3) - Why these weird shapes and their sharp angle ? Make the sliders blanket the approach circle from 00:23:121 (2) - instead ? Nope, I like this slider and so I'll keep it. I think it's awesome just because it's particular.
   5. 00:27:092 (1) - To make the map a bit more consistent, I'd suggest to remove this new combo and the hitsound on this. The comboing will be more consistent (in length) this way, and since there isn't the sound in the song that calls for the normal hitsound, the hitsounding will be more consistent as well. I really don't understand the problem Odaril. The vocal starts here and I followed the same pattern 00:25:327 (1,2)
   6. 00:31:945 (4) - Don't give this one a normal hitsound, it kind of ruins the next normal finish. Agree.
   7. 00:33:710 (1) - This spinner is pretty short for a Normal. Also, it starts where there should have been a circle to finish 00:32:386 (1,2,3) - . Make it a long slider instead ? If you don't, be careful, as 00:35:916 (1,2,3,4) - are hidden under the text that pops out after completing the spinner.You would be right if after the spinner was placed a circle. But it isn't, so I think it's ok for a normal.
   8. 00:38:562 (4,1) - Here again, it would sound better and make the kiai fountain better to remove the normal sampleset and finish from (4) and use a finish on (1). The normal mapset is just used on the tail of the slider (4). And make it consistency with the other diff I just used a finish here that fits very good imho. A finish on the (1) has been already used.
   9. 00:40:327 (2) - The whistle position here sounds weird. Make it whistle-normal to go with the vocals ? Normal whistle? omg no :\ This is my pattern hitsounds with next part
   10. 01:00:180 (1) - This note is very faint in the song, and you nearly silenced it in the map, which feels weird. I would rather suggest to remove it, as it would give a better effect to the kiai fountain. Removed
   11. 01:03:930 (1) - This slider feels weird. There is a pretty long time to wait to reach it (3/2) and it breaks the comboing (as there should be a new combo on 01:04:151 - ). Move it 1/2 back, remove its new combo, and add a circle at 01:04:151 - with a new combo ? It simply is following the vocal.
   12. 01:07:239 (6) - Did you missplace the section ? I'm pretty sure this is not supposed to have a normal sampleset. My mistake, fixed, I decided to add a soft whistle with 30% volume here.
   13. 01:08:563 (2) - The lact of hitsound on this sounds weird. Use a whistle on the slider's head ? It sounds too loud to me
   14. 01:08:563 (2,3) - I'm going to be blunt but this overlap is ugly. There is plenty of space around (2), so I'm sure you can make a non-overlapping version of this pattern. I like it.
   15. 01:12:092 (3) - The lack of hitsounds here feels a bit blank. Add a whistle on both ends of the slider (without using a sliderwhistle) ? No, just because it follows the same hitsound pattern of the next part

Insane

1. AR8 OD6 is stupid. This is a free SS and makes the map kind of boring to play. Please raise the OD to at least 7. There is no reason to say that it's stupid. I just missed it, fixed -.-
2. If you want your slow downs to be rankable, you need to use tick rate 2. aehm nope
3. 00:04:592 (2,3,4,5,6) - This part is pretty neutral in the song, I don't see why you would add such a big jump to it.Moved the triplet 00:05:033 (3,4,5) -
4. 00:12:974 (1,2,3,4) - Why would you break the spacing like that for no reason at all ? D: Plz I don't want my map has to have the same spacing everywhere. It's just awesome in this way.
5. 00:18:269 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - These jumps are huuuuuuuge... I understand why you placed jumps here but these are too big for what they are meant to do. Not true. It first fits the song and for a second reason everyone played it with DT without problems.
6. 00:20:916 (1,2) - Same. I can see you want the same spacing everywhere. Really, this is an insane, the jump is good, fits the song, doesn't create any kind of problem, and mapping good doesn't mean that everyone has to use distance snap in every part.
7. 00:24:886 (6,1) - ... Same. I don't understand why you hate jumps lolol..
8. 00:45:401 (2,3,4,5,6) - Any reason why you break the spacing ? =( yea, I wrote it above
9. 00:46:504 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Here again, these jumps are quite big. These jumps are simply okay, playable with DT without problem, and circle are placed to create a triangle.
10. 01:07:680 (1) - Add a finish on this slider's head ? Okay.
11. 01:12:313 (1,2,3) - Why these notes ? They come too soon after the spinner, are hidden by its hitburst, and sound weird. I find it better to remove them so that the focus is entirely on the spinners, thus the vocals. You aren't the first that tell it me. Fixed making something

I'm sad neither you nor Hinacle went for a 1/1 hitnormal pattern starting from 00:11:210 - . I'm sure it would sound pretty amazing. =(

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