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Sakamoto Maaya - Loop (TV Size)

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hoLysoup

x847606653 wrote:

下载不能,full sunbmit一下?
fixed
x847606653
kiai太长。
MOD不出什么,不好意思._.
Mystica
tsubasa記憶深刻lol
Mio_chan
They are all suggestions =] Don't give me kudosu if you find my modding not useful~_~

[Easy]
00:24:133 (4) - I think this kind of rhythm is hard for newbie...
00:28:839 (4) - ^
01:17:369 (1) - Remove new combo?

[Normal]
00:18:545 (3) - New combo?
00:34:722 - Add a note?


[Hard]
00:18:545 (4) - New combo?
00:24:574 (2) - Make the slider a blanketing one like this?
If you change this, change 00:23:251 (1) too since these two sliders are identical
01:01:486 (2) - I think this play better if it is put further from one, it's up to you =]
01:06:192 (2) - ^ (Maybe ctrl+R?)
01:13:545 (2) - Move the start of the slider to x:244 y:132?
01:17:369 (1) - Remove new combo?

Nice & relaxing map :) Star~
sherrie__fay
mod here

Red : Unrankable/error staff that you must fix them
Blue : Important things that I think you'd better fix
Black : Just suggestions

[General]

01:17:369 (1) - 轉盤尾消音(?

[Easy]

00:18:545 (2,3) - (2)滑條尾和(3)沒有聲音沒關係嗎
01:17:369 (1) - 這裡音量小一點 30%左右(?

[Normal]

01:17:369 (5) - 和[E]一樣的位置0 0 而且不+NC嗎

[Hard]

00:38:986 (2) - /_\很是不喜歡這個位置..可以的話我更能接受把(1)(2)合成一個slider
01:17:369 (1) - ..


CLAMP我的嫁
快rank掉讓我嫁
YTYuyu
Alright let's see what I can find. Mod requested on my queue.

Bold: unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comment. Just putting this for fun :P

[General]
change the dimensions for the spinner metre and the spinner BG. it should be at 1023x692.
i think it'd look better if you can get rid of the letterbox in the BG. if you can show the full BG, it'll look nicer that way.
you should have a video for this. i've seen the ending and it's pretty nice. add it so that players might watch this anime judging by the ending.

[Easy]
i suggest AR2 because since this is a slow song, i think AR3 would look too fast for beginners.
00:02:074 (1) - add a finish at the beginning. you'll hear the sound of the cymbals at the beginning of the song, or you can replace the whistle for a finish. same reason.
00:18:545 (2) - do Ctrl+J. you'll make a blanket for the previous slider.
00:22:074 (2,4) - since you have a whistle at the beginning of (3), add it at the beginning of (2,4) to keep the consistency. i think it sounds a lot nicer if you do this.
00:29:722 (4) - do Ctrl+H for a smoother flow for beginners.
00:44:427 (1) - try to stack this on the repeat arrow of (1). i think it'll look neater and it'll flow smoother during gameplay.
00:46:780 (3,4) - add finishes at the end of (3) and at (4). if you listen carefully you'll hear the cymbals.
00:58:472 - please tell me that this unsnapped line is intentional. if not re-snap it back to the white tick or the blue tick. it bothers me a bit when lines like this aren't unsnapped unless you give me a reason why it's unsnapped.
01:07:957 (1) - i don't like where this note is at all. the overlap makes it look bad during gameplay. move it below (4) so that can form a blanket.
01:09:722 (2) - replace the whistle for a finish. same reason as 00:46:780.


[Normal]
00:02:074 (1) - same as easy.
00:07:663 (2) - same as 00:18:545 on easy.
00:11:486 (1,2) - i might be wrong but i think these 2 sliders look different. if i'm right, make 1 slider look the same as the other slider for a smoother flow to the next note.
00:18:545 (3) - you should space this note out so that this combo would flow a lot smoother. the stack might throw off players.
00:26:780 (2) - add a whistle at the beginning for consistency in whistles.
00:47:369 (5) - add a finish at the end. you'll hear the sound of the cymbals and it'll sound empty without it.
00:48:545 (7) - same as above but you can replace the clap for a finish or add a finish with the clap.
00:53:839 (1) - replace the whistle for a finish. same reason as 00:47:369.
00:58:472 - same as easy.
01:01:780 (4) - i don't like this repeat slider. right when it reaches the repeat, it ruins the flow in vocals. so remove the repeat and add a 1/2 slider to follow vocals a lot smoothly.
01:06:192 (3) - same as 00:48:545.
01:07:369 (5) - ^
01:19:307 - unsnapped line. ik that this isn't intentional. re-snap it back to the blue line. again it bothers me a bit when i see things like this.
01:22:074 (2) - make this a NC for consistency with the other diffs.

[Hard]
00:11:486 (1) - either replace the whistle for a finish or add a finish with the whistle. you'll hear the sound of cymbals.
00:15:604 (3) - maybe if you can align this to the end of the slider, i think it'll flow a lot smoother to the next note.
00:53:839 (7) - make this a NC. the melody it follows the long pause and if you listen carefully, the tone of the vocals change.
01:04:427 (5) - *nazi* maybe you can stack this note perfectly under the slider? it kind of looks bad during gameplay if a note isn't stacked perfectly unless it's manual stacking.

I guess that's it, but i think that this mapset can improve with more finishes. i heard several cymbals at this song and i suggest that you add them to match the cymbals. GL :D
Lizbeth
This song<3

Add TRC to tags maybe?
I didnt like the letterbox in the BG but, oh well /cries
Aren't you gonna add hitcircle, hitcircleoverlay, etc??

[Hard]
01:06:780 (3) - New combo
lovely<3

[Normal]
00:49:133 (1,2) - I dont like these two slider, I feel them out of flow, maybe you should do something else here, something where you dont need to use slider tick with custom sounds.
00:53:839 (1,3) - Same for these two.
01:19:722 (1,2) - and same here
aside from that, loved it~

[Easy]
00:56:192 (2) - this slider doesnt really fits... there is a strong sound here 00:56:780 - and 00:57:369 - , and you're ignoring them completely.
01:19:722 (1,1) - I'd do this in normal aswell, fits more.~

That's all for now, good mapset~
Leorda
Hi there

[Skinning]
* Add hitcircle.png, hitcircleoverlay.png, and reversearrow.png for complete set of hitcircle?


[Easy]
00:38:545 (1) - New combo for preventing of new combo bug


[Normal]
00:16:192 (1) - The repeating slider is touch the HP Bar


[Hard]
00:53:251 (4) - Clap???
01:02:663 (5) - ^
01:15:899 (7) - Unsnapped note


That's all I got
Topic Starter
hoLysoup
fixed all mods~
new skin
update TAT''
My Angel Kitteh
Requested mod :3

Let's see~

[Easy]

00:21:780 how about circle at x:308 y:64 ?
00:22:957 ^ at x:152 y:172
00:24:133 ^ at x:180 y:316
00:26:486 ^ at x:420 y:212
00:27:663 ^ at x:204 y:120
00:29:427 ^
00:43:545 ^ at x:112 y:144
01:02:074 would be better if you decrease this slider and add a reverse arrow
01:07:074 empty place, add circle
01:11:780 ^

[Normal]

For normal too small circle size, but it's not so important.
00:25:310 feels empty, add circle to x:260 y:316
00:30:016 ^ to x:172 y:148
00:39:427 ^ to the beginning of the slider at 00:39:722
00:51:192 add circle
00:58:251 add circle at x:176 y:204
01:21:486 ^ to x:256 y:192

[Hard]

00:03:251 add circle to the beginning of the slider at 00:03:398
00:05:604 ^ of the slider at 00:05:751
00:07:957 ^ of the slider at 00:08:104
00:10:310 ^ of the slider at 00:10:457
00:12:663 ^ of the slider at 00:12:810
00:24:427 ^ of the slider at 00:24:574
00:26:780 ^ of the slider at 00:26:927
01:06:045 add circle
01:21:486 add circle to x:256 y:92

Beautiful map and song, good luck :3
Atema
Hi ! From my modding queue :)

General

- I love the skin !

Easy

01:17:369 (1) - 1 grid left to put it in the middle ?

Normal

01:17:369 (5) - 1 grid down to be aligned with the previous ones ?
01:19:722 (1,1) - The end is the same as the Easy one, maybe could you change it a bit ?

Hard

- HP Drain 7 instead of 6 ?


That’s all I was able to find, great mapset !
Good luck, I hope this will be ranked soon ! :)
Topic Starter
hoLysoup
update~
Kotone
8 star now.
go bubble
kanpakyin
这张图让我想起烤多猫 :D

http://osu.ppy.sh/s/19231
Chewin
[Easy]
01:26:192 (1) - lol you should to move the second green line to 91486 so the spinner ends with 5% volume

[Normal]
01:26:192 (1) - Same of Easy, use 5% volume

[Hard]
00:26:780 (2) - Remove clap and reduce this slider and move it 1/4 before:

00:48:839 (1) - Remove NC
00:49:133 (3) - Add NC
01:07:663 (1) - Remove NC
01:07:957 (3) - Add NC
01:18:545 Add circle overlapping it with 01:17:369 (1)
01:26:192 (1) - Same I wrote above

That's all, good luck!
Topic Starter
hoLysoup
哇 bakaying + kpy! :>
kodomonoyume
好怀念o.o

偶去把kpy抓来给个bubble > <
Topic Starter
hoLysoup

kodomonoyume wrote:

好怀念o.o

偶去把kpy抓来给个bubble > <
快去! :>

more skin updates~
Kawayi Rika
Hi ~ hoLysoup ~ :)

Mod time for my Queue ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]


  1. Setting Audioreadin 500,much better with start.
  2. 'spinner-clear','spinner-osu','spinner-spin'skin file really transparent,please change other.

[Normal]


  1. 00:04:427 (1) - This slider should end to 00:04:869.
  2. 00:09:133 (1) - Same as above.

That's all ~ pretty nice mapset and song ~

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~
;)
Topic Starter
hoLysoup

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ hoLysoup ~ :)

Mod time for my Queue ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]


  1. Setting Audioreadin 500,much better with start.
  2. 'spinner-clear','spinner-osu','spinner-spin'skin file really transparent,please change other.
all fixed~

[Normal]


  1. 00:04:427 (1) - This slider should end to 00:04:869. fixed :<
  2. 00:09:133 (1) - Same as above.
^

That's all ~ pretty nice mapset and song ~

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~
;)
:> 恩~
Kawayi Rika
OK ~ Good job ~

Good luck with rank ~


Andrea
Pretty nice.

Ranked~
Stefan
Congrats o/
Mythol
yeah !
gratz soup~
YTYuyu
oh my that was quick :o. congratz on the rank ;)
merchat7
grats!
LunarSakuya
Tsubasa!! <33 congraaaattsss
No_Gu
gratz
Akemi_Homura
Congratz~ :3
kosiga
Congratulations~~ :) :)
S o r d a
congratz!
Lizbeth
Congratz :)
DarknessAngel
congratz ~ >3</
Meowcenaries
grats
Thite
grats~ :)
cRyo[iceeicee]
Graaats !! ♥(ノ´∀`)♥
Gamu
omedeto :D
miss_master_old
Good song~
^v^
banvi
Congratulations :D
xsrsbsns
grats~
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