TheVileOne wrote:

Normal

00:22:235 (5) - This loop plays weird. I don't like it. I think reducing the slider to 1/1 and adding a note to the red tick will fix the flow. I actually like this loop,sorry :<
00:23:890 (1,2,3) - Sliders aren't properly aligned. It's done on purpose for having a better flow
00:50:787 (1,2,3,4) - Comment: I love this. Thanks ^^
00:55:132 (4,5) - Not properly aligned? Fixed
00:58:442 (5,6) - Not aligned It's done on purpose for having a better flow
01:15:201 (1,2) - ^ ^
01:24:718 (6,1) - ^ ^

Philippines wrote:

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• Insane

1. 00:26:373 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - One grid up to maintain spacing til the new combo start. you're right, fixed o/
   
   
2. 00:40:856 (3) - Move 2nd point 4 grids right for better blanket effect. done!
   
   
3. 00:46:649 (1) - Move one grid down and one left so the spacing is consistent.. done

kajiyatta wrote:

Insane
00:29:270(1) I think this is better http://puu.sh/wBx7
00:52:028(1) it's up to you this placement like this http://puu.sh/wBxf

good map I think so give star~

Snowy Dream wrote:

[Insane]
00:27:201 - finish Nu, there is a whistle here and a finish sounds bad
00:37:132 - ^ K, removed whistle and added finish
00:30:511 (1) - ^ Nu
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Great mapset :3
Go for rank

kajiyatta wrote:

Easy
01:18:925(2) remove finish and add whistle Done
01:22:235(2) ^ ^
01:13:546(3) this is good I think http://puu.sh/wBwX No

1. Il BG è un pò- battagliero? in confronto all'aria dolce che ispira la canzone

1. perchè non usi mettere il tuo nome? Leader?
2. [Rhythm]
   
   1. 00:18:511 (1) - Visto che lo spinner non segue esageratamente la musica, ti consiglierei di mapparlo così
      
   2. 00:55:752 (3) - Ti consiglierei da farlo 2/1 invece di 1/1. In modo do seguire meglio il gorgheggio
      
      SPOILER

      
   3. 01:00:304 (1) - Per essere tirchi: in realtà finisce 1/6 dopo(01:02:649)
   4. 01:08:994 (3) - Stesso consiglio dato in precedenza: allungalo a 2/1, così segui quel gorgheggio awesome
      
      SPOILER

      (AR0 per evitare di fare due screen)
      
3. [Graphic]
   
   1. Se hai sostituito lo spinner, puoi anche cambiare la posizione delle prime note: sembra meglio provare a "curvare" le posizioni
      
      SPOILER

      
      
      
      via veloce
      

      88,152,15615,1,2
      68,240,16028,1,0
      132,308,16442,1,2
      220,300,16856,1,0
      312,276,17270,2,0,B|279:190|190:210,1,150,4|0
      312,276,18511,2,0,B|344:361|429:341,2,150
      348,192,20166,1,0

   2. 00:30:511 (2) - blankettalo al (3)?
      
      SPOILER

      
      00:35:477 (3) - Penso tu volessi fare un wiggle del genere.. no?
      
      SPOILER

      

1. Sei migliorato un bel pò O.O. Lo stile assomiglia a quello di Armin e cesc :3
2. [Rhythm]
   
   1. 00:18:097 (x) - chiunque penserebbe ci sia una nota qui...
      
      SPOILER

      
   2. 00:54:304 (x) - Il problema del symmetry mapping e il forzare certi ritmi... questo non so come aggiustarlo facendo rimanere la simmetria senza cambiare il ritmo
      
      SPOILER

      

1. [Rhythm]
   
   1. 01:02:787 (7,8,1) - Ctrl + R'ed rhythm will play better in all senses. you should move them if you do it.
   2. 01:14:373 (2,3,1,2) - ^
2. [Graphic]
   
   1. There are some really underworked sliders. Examples:
   2. 00:17:270 (1,2,4) - Round the border more "normally", without squaring them
      
      SPOILER

      
   3. 00:55:132 (5) - Badly Blanketed
      
      SPOILER

      
      00:55:959 (7) - ^ too

1. [Rhythm]
   
   1. 00:17:615 (1) - Lo stream è realmente un stream di violino da 1/6 se vuoi overmappare e undermappare altre parti, ti lascio il terreno libero. lo stream di violino parte da 00:17:615 (1), il numero di ripetiioni è lo stesso.
      00:29:683 (4,5,6,7) - Situazione simile. c'è uno stream di violino da 1/6 su 00:29:683 (4,x,x,5), Ma non c'è niente su 00:29:993 (6). Ma c'è su 00:30:097 (7,x,x) - Stream da 1/4. Fullmappata così
      
      00:46:649 (1) - è da 1/6. Stesso violino.
      00:52:028 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Avrei usato uno slider rallentato e dei salti estremi per mapparla invece di overmappare così tanto. De gustibus.
2. Graphic
   
   1. 00:17:890 (2) - Alza il waypoint del mezzo di 2 grid 4 (aka 1 grid 3) e otterrai un perfetto sliderblanket con poco lavoro.
   2. 00:22:649 (4,5) - Aggiusta il blanket.
      
      SPOILER

      
      ^ Di blanket da aggiustare ce ne sono diversi

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ Chewin ~ Hi Rika chan <3

Mod time for PM - igame ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]

1. Add 'opening' in tags. Yea, added

[Hinacle]

1. OD+1 much better. I don't think hinacle will fix this, because this is an hard and he used OD 5 in this guest too: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/43471 So I keep it :3

[-kevincela-'s Normal]

1. HP+1 or 2 much better.
2. 00:24:511 - Add whistle.
3. 01:08:373 - ^
4. 00:50:787 (1) - This circle should move to 00:50:580,sound much better.

Kevin fixed some and he passed his guest in game, but I know he didn't follow the 3rd point to don't break the symmetry with the next elements.

[Easy]

1. AR-1(4 is hard play for beginner). Okay
2. 00:18:511 (1) - Spinner after first note hard for beginner,
   So i think end to 00:19:752 - much better. Yes you are right, fixed this

That's all ~ Clean mapset and nice song :3

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~

[Colours]
Combo1 : 211,65,102
Combo2 : 0,222,240
Combo3 : 248,186,44
Combo4 : 238,238,238

Kawayi Rika wrote:

OK ~ Much better now :3

Rebubbled ~!