Midasmens wrote:

Hi~ Midas here....
Request from my queue

General
Your BG image is nearly 1M~~ Please resize it.. / I asked to breeze and 691KB it's fine, then..
Clap sound seems never find it......Add some clap please...or use your custom sound to replace it..... It isn't mandatory to use claps in a beatmaps.. >w<

Insane
00:46:649 (1,2,3) - spacing
01:19:752 (4) - NC
01:23:063 (4) - ^
01:28:442 (1) - Silence

No change but thanks anyways :3

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Jupiter wrote:

Hi,mod from my queue

[Insane]
00:36:718 (5) - NC nu, it follow the vocal
00:36:925 (1) - RNC ^
00:53:270 (5) - remove whistle k!
00:53:477 (7) - add whistle k

Katsuri wrote:

[tags&source]
the normal difficulty is the only one that doesn't have tags and source, you should add tags and source to it. Yes I know, he linked me his guest without tags when I have added it before -.- Fixed.
[insane]
00:32:580 (2) - this note is a bit hidden by the note bursts, and the should play a lot unintuitive, because this jump comes really sudden, and is diffilcuty to read because it's hidden. consider moving it a bit down, like this or anything that help avoiding the trouble on hitting it. okay
01:02:994 (1,2,3,4) - maybe it would flow better if you select 01:03:408 (3,4) - and then press ctrl+r. nah I keep it
01:20:373 (6) - maybe it would sound better if add a whistle on the repeat of this slider, it would break a bit the rhythm.
01:23:684 (6) - same thing as above. added whistles here, it sounds really good :3
well, consider setting tick rate to 2, it will keep the constant 1/2 rhythm during your sliders. No, I want to keep 1 >w<

Midasmens wrote:

Easy
00:38:787 (1) - remove NC

TheVileOne wrote:

Normal

00:22:235 (5) - This loop plays weird. I don't like it. I think reducing the slider to 1/1 and adding a note to the red tick will fix the flow. I actually like this loop,sorry :<
00:23:890 (1,2,3) - Sliders aren't properly aligned. It's done on purpose for having a better flow
00:50:787 (1,2,3,4) - Comment: I love this. Thanks ^^
00:55:132 (4,5) - Not properly aligned? Fixed
00:58:442 (5,6) - Not aligned It's done on purpose for having a better flow
01:15:201 (1,2) - ^ ^
01:24:718 (6,1) - ^ ^

Philippines wrote:

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• Insane

1. 00:26:373 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - One grid up to maintain spacing til the new combo start. you're right, fixed o/
   
   
2. 00:40:856 (3) - Move 2nd point 4 grids right for better blanket effect. done!
   
   
3. 00:46:649 (1) - Move one grid down and one left so the spacing is consistent.. done

kajiyatta wrote:

Insane
00:29:270(1) I think this is better http://puu.sh/wBx7
00:52:028(1) it's up to you this placement like this http://puu.sh/wBxf

good map I think so give star~

Snowy Dream wrote:

[Insane]
00:27:201 - finish Nu, there is a whistle here and a finish sounds bad
00:37:132 - ^ K, removed whistle and added finish
00:30:511 (1) - ^ Nu
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Great mapset :3
Go for rank

kajiyatta wrote:

Easy
01:18:925(2) remove finish and add whistle Done
01:22:235(2) ^ ^
01:13:546(3) this is good I think http://puu.sh/wBwX No

1. Il BG è un pò- battagliero? in confronto all'aria dolce che ispira la canzone

1. perchè non usi mettere il tuo nome? Leader?
2. [Rhythm]
   
   1. 00:18:511 (1) - Visto che lo spinner non segue esageratamente la musica, ti consiglierei di mapparlo così
      
   2. 00:55:752 (3) - Ti consiglierei da farlo 2/1 invece di 1/1. In modo do seguire meglio il gorgheggio
      
      SPOILER

      
   3. 01:00:304 (1) - Per essere tirchi: in realtà finisce 1/6 dopo(01:02:649)
   4. 01:08:994 (3) - Stesso consiglio dato in precedenza: allungalo a 2/1, così segui quel gorgheggio awesome
      
      SPOILER

      (AR0 per evitare di fare due screen)
      
3. [Graphic]
   
   1. Se hai sostituito lo spinner, puoi anche cambiare la posizione delle prime note: sembra meglio provare a "curvare" le posizioni
      
      SPOILER

      
      
      
      via veloce
      

      88,152,15615,1,2
      68,240,16028,1,0
      132,308,16442,1,2
      220,300,16856,1,0
      312,276,17270,2,0,B|279:190|190:210,1,150,4|0
      312,276,18511,2,0,B|344:361|429:341,2,150
      348,192,20166,1,0

   2. 00:30:511 (2) - blankettalo al (3)?
      
      SPOILER

      
      00:35:477 (3) - Penso tu volessi fare un wiggle del genere.. no?
      
      SPOILER

      

1. Sei migliorato un bel pò O.O. Lo stile assomiglia a quello di Armin e cesc :3
2. [Rhythm]
   
   1. 00:18:097 (x) - chiunque penserebbe ci sia una nota qui...
      
      SPOILER

      
   2. 00:54:304 (x) - Il problema del symmetry mapping e il forzare certi ritmi... questo non so come aggiustarlo facendo rimanere la simmetria senza cambiare il ritmo
      
      SPOILER

      

1. [Rhythm]
   
   1. 01:02:787 (7,8,1) - Ctrl + R'ed rhythm will play better in all senses. you should move them if you do it.
   2. 01:14:373 (2,3,1,2) - ^
2. [Graphic]
   
   1. There are some really underworked sliders. Examples:
   2. 00:17:270 (1,2,4) - Round the border more "normally", without squaring them
      
      SPOILER

      
   3. 00:55:132 (5) - Badly Blanketed
      
      SPOILER

      
      00:55:959 (7) - ^ too

1. [Rhythm]
   
   1. 00:17:615 (1) - Lo stream è realmente un stream di violino da 1/6 se vuoi overmappare e undermappare altre parti, ti lascio il terreno libero. lo stream di violino parte da 00:17:615 (1), il numero di ripetiioni è lo stesso.
      00:29:683 (4,5,6,7) - Situazione simile. c'è uno stream di violino da 1/6 su 00:29:683 (4,x,x,5), Ma non c'è niente su 00:29:993 (6). Ma c'è su 00:30:097 (7,x,x) - Stream da 1/4. Fullmappata così
      
      00:46:649 (1) - è da 1/6. Stesso violino.
      00:52:028 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Avrei usato uno slider rallentato e dei salti estremi per mapparla invece di overmappare così tanto. De gustibus.
2. Graphic
   
   1. 00:17:890 (2) - Alza il waypoint del mezzo di 2 grid 4 (aka 1 grid 3) e otterrai un perfetto sliderblanket con poco lavoro.
   2. 00:22:649 (4,5) - Aggiusta il blanket.
      
      SPOILER

      
      ^ Di blanket da aggiustare ce ne sono diversi

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ Chewin ~ Hi Rika chan <3

Mod time for PM - igame ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]

1. Add 'opening' in tags. Yea, added

[Hinacle]

1. OD+1 much better. I don't think hinacle will fix this, because this is an hard and he used OD 5 in this guest too: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/43471 So I keep it :3

[-kevincela-'s Normal]

1. HP+1 or 2 much better.
2. 00:24:511 - Add whistle.
3. 01:08:373 - ^
4. 00:50:787 (1) - This circle should move to 00:50:580,sound much better.

Kevin fixed some and he passed his guest in game, but I know he didn't follow the 3rd point to don't break the symmetry with the next elements.

[Easy]

1. AR-1(4 is hard play for beginner). Okay
2. 00:18:511 (1) - Spinner after first note hard for beginner,
   So i think end to 00:19:752 - much better. Yes you are right, fixed this

That's all ~ Clean mapset and nice song :3

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~

[Colours]
Combo1 : 211,65,102
Combo2 : 0,222,240
Combo3 : 248,186,44
Combo4 : 238,238,238

Kawayi Rika wrote:

OK ~ Much better now :3

Rebubbled ~!

Colin Hou wrote:

hi you lost the ! mark in your source

Colin Hou wrote:

hi you lost the ! mark in your source