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Topic Starter
Ignacio_old

eveless wrote:

[Insane]

00:51:299 (4,5,6) - i think these must be further than 3 since 3456 read like 4 1/2 rhythem
02:06:958 (2) - let it more further than 02:06:464 (5,6)
02:07:288 (3) - New combo
02:21:958 (T) - add volume here . before the kiai let the volume to increase progressively

[Aenna]

maybe a bit hard than a "hard" . delete hard from the diff's name...
OD+1?

others are fine

good map

thanks for your mod <33
Roddie
Hi

General:
  1. I've mentioned in private chat that Guerra's Easy has a different BPM. So I assume its all fixed now? :3
Guerra's Easy:
  1. 00:00:665 (1)-Add a finish on the beginning and add a clap on the end.
  2. 00:05:969 (1)-Add a finish on the beginning.
  3. 00:08:607 (3)-^?
  4. 00:11:244 (1)-^
  5. 00:16:519 (1)-^
  6. 00:19:156 (3)-^?
  7. 00:21:958 (1)-Remove that clap and then add a finish instead.
  8. 00:32:178 (1)-Add a finish on that reverse arrow?
  9. 00:37:783 (2)-Remove that clap from the beginning and then add finish instead.
  10. 00:42:892 (1)-Add a finish.
  11. 00:50:969 (5)-Remove that clap from the end and then add a clap on that reverse arrow.
  12. 00:53:442 (1, 2, 4, 6)- On 1,Add a finish on the beginning. On 2 and 4, add claps on both of them. And on 6, add a finish on the end?
  13. 00:58:213 (1)-Remove that clap from the reverse arrow and then add a clap on the beginning.
  14. 01:04:156 (1)-Add a finish on the beginning.
  15. 01:12:398 (2, 4)-Add a clap on 2. And on 4, add a clap on the reverse arrow.
  16. 01:14:706 (1)-Add a finish on the beginning.
Verdi's Normal+:

Hm... Seems alright to me.

Aenna:

This one too.

Insane:
  1. 00:00:695 (2)-Add a finish on the beginning.
  2. 00:21:958 (2)-^
  3. 00:30:530-Whoa, man. xD Its a little difficult to reach. :(. I know its an insane but could you fix the spacing on that please? xD
  4. 00:32:508 (1)-Add a finish on the beginning.
  5. 00:37:618 (6)-Add a finish on that reverse arrow.
  6. 01:56:903 (1)-Add a finish on the beginning.
  7. 02:02:013 (5)-Add a finish on that reverse arrow.
Nicely done. 8-)

Good luck getting this ranked!

Star!
Topic Starter
Ignacio_old
thanks bro <33
Masana
nice jump :)

good luck~
mooai
good map :)
star~~

Not advice, I'm sorry...xD
Please do its best!!
Topic Starter
Ignacio_old
thanks Colored & mooai :3
NatsumeRin
Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
lepidon's diff set lead-in to 1500ms, but others set at 1000ms, make them the same?
there's no time for countdown, remove the unused countdown plz~
offset:+10
maybe you should cut the mp3... 0 0

[Guerra's Easy]
notes are not snapped.
AR+1?
00:23:603 (4) - clap at the end?
00:39:424 (1) - clap?
00:50:302 (4) - 1 grid left nazi = =
00:52:618 - add a note? (finish)
01:01:838 (6) - i suggest reduce 2 repeat, and leave 01:03:167 a single circle, to make the "sudden end" feeling more strong.
01:14:693 (1,2) - make the on the same line?
01:21:629 (4) - start 1/2 earlier would sounds better.

[Verdi's Normal+]
00:22:123 (1) - make this note 1/2 earlier (vocal start there)
00:38:772 - add a note? (clap) if you do so, 00:39:266 (6) - switch the clap at the beginning to the end.
01:00:035 (3) - maybe the beats here should be like this?

01:09:101 (8) - 1 grid right nazi.
01:46:354 (6) - finish? and maybe new combo?

[lepidon - Taiko Oni!]
00:07:288 (7) - big don
00:08:607 (15) - ^
00:17:838 (6,12,19) - ^
00:32:013 (27) - kat
01:13:717 - add a don?

[Aenna]
00:07:287 (1) - miss a finish here?
00:17:838 (1) - finish at the beginning to keep consistency
01:24:101 (2) & 01:24:596 (1)'s beginning - clap?
01:45:942 - add a note?
very nice.

[Insane]
00:05:969 (3) - finish at the beginning plz?
00:07:288 (3) & 00:08:607 (3) & 00:09:925 (3) - ^, a nice series of finish imo
00:16:519 (6) & 00:17:838 (4) & 00:19:156 (1) & 00:20:475 (1) - ^
00:31:354 (1,3) - finish?
00:36:299 (2,3) - lol nice
00:42:068 (5) - add a green line with Normal C2 (55~60 volume) here and see if it works fine =w=
01:24:101 (2) & 01:24:761 (1) - clap?
02:05:969 (4) - clap at the end?
02:37:288 - add a note? (maybe somewhere around the 3 before)

nice done guys.
lepidopodus
Topic Starter
Ignacio_old
thank you so much for your mod Natsu :3

thanks lepidon :3
Aenna
Topic Starter
Ignacio_old

Aenna wrote:

~
thx :3
Verdisphena
ElxBeta
you asked for this?

(>^-^)>
sitemii
nice map~
Topic Starter
Ignacio_old

tainaka ritu wrote:

nice map~
thanks :3
Revengexsoyah
Hola vengo a modear
solo sugerencias porsiaaa (ONLY SUGGESTIONS)

~Guerra's Easy~
00:03:342 : more simetric D: ugly slider
01:08:122 : clap ?

ahora en español xD

~Verdi's Normal~
00:21:968 : finish?
01:09:111 : un grid a la izq?
me gusta como mapea el verdi ql <3


again english D:

~ Aenna ~
test slider tick rate 2 D: (?)
VERY FINE AND CUTE SPACING <3

Español ?

~Insane~
00:22:793 (5) : podrias ponerlo derecho
y nada mas porque esta muy buenisima la diffie

MOD QL ordinario pero era porke estaba aburrido xD
pero te dejo estrella por dedicacion , mapeas muy bien
chao IgnaciOoOoOOoOOO~~~~
Topic Starter
Ignacio_old

Revengexsoyah wrote:

Hola vengo a modear
solo sugerencias porsiaaa (ONLY SUGGESTIONS)

~Guerra's Easy~
00:03:342 : more simetric D: ugly slider
01:08:122 : clap ?

ahora en español xD

~Verdi's Normal~
00:21:968 : finish?
01:09:111 : un grid a la izq?
me gusta como mapea el verdi ql <3


again english D:

~ Aenna ~
test slider tick rate 2 D: (?)
VERY FINE AND CUTE SPACING <3

Español ?

~Insane~
00:22:793 (5) : podrias ponerlo derecho
y nada mas porque esta muy buenisima la diffie

MOD QL ordinario pero era porke estaba aburrido xD
pero te dejo estrella por dedicacion , mapeas muy bien
chao IgnaciOoOoOOoOOO~~~~
np, siempre es bienvenido un mod :3
Gracias
Magicphoenix
[Guerra's Easy]
00:03:241 (1,2) - ugly... [not important^^]
00:31:199 - remove finish
00:39:441 (1) - Move that to 00:40:430 - 00:42:243 and add a slider 00:39:771?
00:53:452 (1) - No jumps in [Easy]!
^ ^ ^ (1,2) - spacing
01:21:309 (4) - make this prettier please :<

[Verdi's Normal+]

(nazi) 00:01:199 - 1 grid left
^ 00:06:474 (3) - 1 grid down
Mh there are many little-little spacing problems, use Distance Snap on the notes again and snap them right >~<
00:45:045 (5) - make the last slider waypoint 1 grid up

[Aenna]

perfect = =

[Insane]

This diff is s-so ...cool *w*

00:16:529 (6) - new combo => 00:17:353 (1) remove nc => 00:17:848 (4) nc
00:28:891 (7) - new combo => 00:29:386 (1) remove nc ? :<
00:36:391 (2,3) - OMFG MASTURBATION SLIDER <333
00:37:298 (4) - nc? her voice is lowering : x
00:48:177 (6) - nc = =?
01:30:375 (5) - ^ => remove @01:31:199 => nc @ 01:31:694
01:33:012 (3) - ^ [i can see the pattern but i think it looks better that way^^]
01:40:924 (6) - ^ => remove @01:41:419 => 01:42:243 NC
01:43:562 (8) - NC => remove @01:44:056 => NC 01:44:880 => remove 01:45:540
02:19:166 (5) - NC
02:20:485 (9) - ^ => 02:21:144 remove => 02:21:804 nc

The combos are really random for me, but it's probably my imagination ;w;
Sry if the combo-suggestions are useless ><' [you should better ask jericho? _:S]



STAR ~
Topic Starter
Ignacio_old

Magicphoenix wrote:

[Guerra's Easy]
00:03:241 (1,2) - ugly... [not important^^]
00:31:199 - remove finish
00:39:441 (1) - Move that to 00:40:430 - 00:42:243 and add a slider 00:39:771?
00:53:452 (1) - No jumps in [Easy]!
^ ^ ^ (1,2) - spacing
01:21:309 (4) - make this prettier please :<

[Verdi's Normal+]

(nazi) 00:01:199 - 1 grid left
^ 00:06:474 (3) - 1 grid down
Mh there are many little-little spacing problems, use Distance Snap on the notes again and snap them right >~<
00:45:045 (5) - make the last slider waypoint 1 grid up

[Aenna]

perfect = =

[Insane]

This diff is s-so ...cool *w*

00:16:529 (6) - new combo => 00:17:353 (1) remove nc => 00:17:848 (4) nc
00:28:891 (7) - new combo => 00:29:386 (1) remove nc ? :<
00:36:391 (2,3) - OMFG MASTURBATION SLIDER <333
00:37:298 (4) - nc? her voice is lowering :x
00:48:177 (6) - nc = =?
01:30:375 (5) - ^ => remove @01:31:199 => nc @ 01:31:694
01:33:012 (3) - ^ [i can see the pattern but i think it looks better that way^^]
01:40:924 (6) - ^ => remove @01:41:419 => 01:42:243 NC
01:43:562 (8) - NC => remove @01:44:056 => NC 01:44:880 => remove 01:45:540
02:19:166 (5) - NC
02:20:485 (9) - ^ => 02:21:144 remove => 02:21:804 nc

The combos are really random for me, but it's probably my imagination ;w;
Sry if the combo-suggestions are useless ><' [you should better ask jericho? _:S]



STAR ~

thx~
Guerra
Verdisphena

Magicphoenix wrote:


[Verdi's Normal+]

(nazi) 00:01:199 - 1 grid left
^ 00:06:474 (3) - 1 grid down
Mh there are many little-little spacing problems, use Distance Snap on the notes again and snap them right >~<
00:45:045 (5) - make the last slider waypoint 1 grid up No
Astom
[general]
-cortal el mp3
-asegurate que todas las diff. tenga preview point y que sea el mismo.

[lepidon! - Taiko oni]
-change offset to 870

[Verdi's Normal+]
-00:04:661 - agrega un circle con finish
-00:05:979 (1) - finish
-00:08:617 finish
-00:11:254 finish
-00:16:529 finish
-00:20:485 - agrega un circle
-00:29:221 (5) - borra el slider completo, agrega un circle en 00:29:221 y otro en 00:29:551, luego un slider de 00:29:716 a 00:30:045.
-00:32:023 (6) - mover a 00:32:188, quita el clap del ultimo beat y agrega finish.
-00:45:045 (5) - borrar, agrega un circle en 00:45:045 y un slider de 00:45:210 a 00:45:540, agrega finish al final del slider.
-00:46:364 (2) - borrar, agre un circle en 00:46:364 y un slider de 00:46:529 a 00:46:859.
-00:50:979 (1) - borrar, agrega un slider de 00:50:979 a 00:51:968 y otro de 00:52:133 a 00:53:452 finish al final
-01:04:166 finish
-01:30:375 finish
-01:35:650 finish
-01:39:606 (4) - finish
-01:40:915 finish

[Insane]
-faltan hitsounds.
Sure
oh.. this is nao <3

Add tags : nao, Demetori, #001
Album title doesn't go into source. Remove it and tag instead.
Topic Starter
Ignacio_old

ykcarrot wrote:

oh.. this is nao <3

Add tags : nao, Demetori, #001
Album title doesn't go into source. Remove it and tag instead.

Done, thanks ykcarrot :3
Verdisphena

Astom wrote:

[Verdi's Normal+]
-00:04:661 - agrega un circle con finish no
-00:05:979 (1) - finish ok
-00:08:617 finish ok
-00:11:254 finish no
-00:16:529 finish ok
-00:20:485 - agrega un circle no
-00:29:221 (5) - borra el slider completo, agrega un circle en 00:29:221 y otro en 00:29:551, luego un slider de 00:29:716 a 00:30:045. no
-00:32:023 (6) - mover a 00:32:188, quita el clap del ultimo beat y agrega finish. ok
-00:45:045 (5) - borrar, agrega un circle en 00:45:045 y un slider de 00:45:210 a 00:45:540, agrega finish al final del slider. no
-00:46:364 (2) - borrar, agre un circle en 00:46:364 y un slider de 00:46:529 a 00:46:859. no
-00:50:979 (1) - borrar, agrega un slider de 00:50:979 a 00:51:968 y otro de 00:52:133 a 00:53:452 finish al final no
-01:04:166 finishOk
-01:30:375 finish ^
-01:35:650 finish ^
-01:39:606 (4) - finish ^
-01:40:915 finish ^
Download: DystopiaGround - True Theory of Inheritance (Ignacio) [Verdi's Normal+].osu
YGOkid8
General:
- Guerra's Easy has a different Preview Time from the rest. Make the same.
- lepidon! - Taiko Oni has a different audio-lead in. Make the same.

Guerra's Easy:
- Reduce Approach Rate to the lowest? The slider velocity's really slow, and the Approach Rate is a bit fast for the slider velocity. Alternately, Guerra can remap with a faster slider velocity, but whatever you feel is better.

lepidon! - Taiko Oni:
- Another fantastic Taiko diff. by lepidopodus :)

Insane:
00:05:979 (3,4) - Flip Vertically? IMO, it plays better.
00:35:979 (1,2,3,4) - These aren't perfectly stacked, and look ugly when playing.
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Absolutely amazing map. Though it would've been better if you had mapped most of the diffs. yourself. I mean, can you really call it YOUR map with most of the diffs. not yours? Nevertheless, I was pretty impressed, so have my stars.
lepidopodus
Topic Starter
Ignacio_old

YGOkid8 wrote:

General:
- Guerra's Easy has a different Preview Time from the rest. Make the same.
- lepidon! - Taiko Oni has a different audio-lead in. Make the same.

Guerra's Easy:
- Reduce Approach Rate to the lowest? The slider velocity's really slow, and the Approach Rate is a bit fast for the slider velocity. Alternately, Guerra can remap with a faster slider velocity, but whatever you feel is better.

lepidon! - Taiko Oni:
- Another fantastic Taiko diff. by lepidopodus :)

Insane:
00:05:979 (3,4) - Flip Vertically? IMO, it plays better.
00:35:979 (1,2,3,4) - These aren't perfectly stacked, and look ugly when playing.
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Absolutely amazing map. Though it would've been better if you had mapped most of the diffs. yourself. I mean, can you really call it YOUR map with most of the diffs. not yours? Nevertheless, I was pretty impressed, so have my stars.

Thanks, all fixed :D
lepidopodus
Uh, Ignacio I uploaded fixed ver. of my Taiko diff in previous post, please check it.
Topic Starter
Ignacio_old

lepidopodus wrote:

Uh, Ignacio I uploaded fixed ver. of my Taiko diff in previous post, please check it.
oh okay, fixed :D
m i z u k i
:oops:
YGOkid8
looking back on this, the difficulty for this map is actually quite hard. [E][H][I][I] (not including Taiko)...
personally, i don't like it. for me, it should be at most [N][H][H][I] or [E][N][I][I]...

iono... me gonna ask other MATs ~

EDIT: it's rankable, but it'd be much better if Verdi's Normal+ was just a plain Normal instead, but eh.

TIME FOR RE-MOD!!

General:
- lepidon! - Taiko Oni diff's Preview Time is different from the other diffs. Make it the same.
- The Audio Lead-In time for ^'s diff. is different again =.=
- Any Source at all?

Guerra's Easy:
00:08:617 (3) - New Combo.
00:13:891 (4) - ^
00:19:166 (3) - ^

00:45:045 (3,4) - Spacing?
00:39:441 (1) - End at 00:41:749 instead.

Verdi's Normal+:
01:01:199 (1) - No New Combo.
01:03:837 (1) - Delete this note?
01:04:166 (1) - If you didn't do the above, remove the New Combo.

...That's it :D
Topic Starter
Ignacio_old

YGOkid8 wrote:

- Any Source at all?
I can't found any source, and all fixed :D

thx for mod :3
YGOkid8
lepidopodus' diff's Audio Lead-In is off by 15 milliseconds :P

no kudosu! for this post.
Topic Starter
Ignacio_old

YGOkid8 wrote:

lepidopodus' diff's Audio Lead-In is off by 15 milliseconds :P

no kudosu! for this post.
lol I didn't notice, fixed :D
YGOkid8
~
Topic Starter
Ignacio_old

YGOkid8 wrote:

~
thanks~ :D :D
giO-
star :)
Andrea
[Overall]

The mp3 ends on a really bad way, can you do a fade out of it please? Remember to full submit after this fix.

[Difficulties]

[Guerra's Easy]

Disable the unused Countdown.


[Verdi's Normal+]

Disable the unused Countdown.


[lepidon! Taiko Oni]

Disable the unused Countdown.


[Aenna]

Disable the unused Countdown.


[Insane]

Disable the unused Countdown.


Wonderful.
Topic Starter
Ignacio_old

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Overall]

The mp3 ends on a really bad way, can you do a fade out of it please? Remember to full submit after this fix.

I tried changing the mp3 but I was too hard so I just left it like that.. sorry
:D

[Difficulties]

[Guerra's Easy]

Disable the unused Countdown.


[Verdi's Normal+]

Disable the unused Countdown.


[lepidon! Taiko Oni]

Disable the unused Countdown.


[Aenna]

Disable the unused Countdown.


[Insane]

Disable the unused Countdown.


Wonderful.

All fixed
Andrea
Here is your new mp3 with improved quality and a nice fade out ^^

Change the offset to 900 after changing your mp3 and resnap everything (All notes, green lines, etc.)

Remember to restart osu! when you change the mp3 file.
Topic Starter
Ignacio_old

osuplayer111 wrote:

Here is your new mp3 with improved quality and a nice fade out ^^

Change the offset to 900 after changing your mp3 and resnap everything (All notes, green lines, etc.)

Remember to restart osu! when you change the mp3 file.

Thanks for the mp3 and offset :3
Andrea
Much better.

Re-Bubbled~
Verdisphena
BAKA IGNACIO BAKA ヽ(`Д´)ノ
baka :cry:
Muya
:D
Foster Don
IGNACIO BANNED D:

:( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :(
:cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry:
Guerra
ç.ç
Orgol
T.T
Verdisphena
:/
Aenna
BAN..
Krisom
Guys, it's not necesary to make a drama over a ban in a bubbled map. If the next BAT thinks this map is ready, it shall be ranked. If not, then you guys can blame the last guy who gave a bubble :3
Andrea

Krisom wrote:

Guys, it's not necesary to make a drama over a ban in a bubbled map. If the next BAT thinks this map is ready, it shall be ranked. If not, then you guys can blame the last guy who gave a bubble :3
Ahem, did you called me?
Astom

osuplayer111 wrote:

Krisom wrote:

Guys, it's not necesary to make a drama over a ban in a bubbled map. If the next BAT thinks this map is ready, it shall be ranked. If not, then you guys can blame the last guy who gave a bubble :3
Ahem, did you called me?
Well is ignacio's fault be banned, but I think than the song can be ranked anyway :o I hope.
Cristian
EPIC!!
Larto
Verdi's Normal+:
00:43:427 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1) - Are you serious? completely silent hitsoudns for a part this long? For no real reason I can identify at all? =| Better have been an accident. I thought we made clear that silent hitsounds are unrankable for longer sections.

That being said, I don't really like shortened difficulties anyways. That's not an unrankable issue, but damn do I hate shortened maps. Damn. The rest of this mapset is fine though.
Topic Starter
Ignacio_old
yes, this was an accident, neither me or osuplayer111 noticed, sorry.

fixed~
mycyber
support Ignacio & the map ~.~
~star~
Larto
Yes yes.
Verdisphena
=w=
abalee
why not add a break to reduce the score @ insane :/
well that's my own opinion...
Topic Starter
Ignacio_old

abalee wrote:

why not add a break to reduce the score @ insane :/
well that's my own opinion...

done.
momoco
nice song and map~~~
abalee
If I got it fast I guess I could gave a heart...

Well sorry only a bubble..
YGOkid8

Ignacio wrote:

- Special thanks to YGOkid8 and Andrea for the mp3.
why do i get thanks for the mp3? o.o
and why isn't this ranked yet
Topic Starter
Ignacio_old
happy30 for the BG
Andrea for the mp3
YGOkid8 for the support :D

and why isn't this ranked yet
D:
YGOkid8
oh, ok. can you reword it a bit? cause at the moment, it sounds like i helped with mp3, and i hate false credit @.@
eg. i dunno:
- Thanks for YGOkid8 for the support :D
- Also thanks to Andrea for the mp3 :)

or something like that :P
Topic Starter
Ignacio_old
okk fixed :)
YGOkid8
taking another look first.

Guerra's Easy:
01:21:339 (4) - Ugly. Delete this and the next (1) and replace with:
288,88,81339,2,0,B|256:112|240:152|256:192|288:216|288:216|320:240|336:280|320:320|288:344,1,299.999999999999
184,280,83976,5,4

Verdi's Normal+:
00:23:976 (6) - Ugly. Delete this and replace with:
336,168,23976,2,0,B|408:152|448:224|408:296|336:280,1,220

There's too many other things in this diff. I find ugly, so not going to bother posting :(

That's it. Fix and I'll rebubble.
Verdisphena

YGOkid8 wrote:

Verdi's Normal+:
00:23:976 (6) - Ugly nou. Delete this and replace with:
336,168,23976,2,0,B|408:152|448:224|408:296|336:280,1,220
Download: DystopiaGround - True Theory of Inheritance (Ignacio) [Verdi's Normal+].osu
Topic Starter
Ignacio_old
thanks again YGOkid :)
YGOkid8
rebubbled.
abalee
OK GO.
Verdisphena
FINALLY
ignacio culiao
NatsumeRin
oh yes.

Edit:...emm... missing the tags for guest diff mappers. any BAT can hax edit it?
SapphireGhost

Good map.
kanpakyin
Nao <3
happy30
Finally :3

and it's novelty, not pop
Andrea
Fixed both tags and genre ;)
Magicphoenix
Finally ranked ! :D
Congrats
Topic Starter
Ignacio_old
Thanks everyone !
dNextGen
can i has the album name pls
Sure

dNextGen wrote:

can i has the album name pls
DystopiaGround #001

http://dg-nao.jp/disco.html

You can check this song, track No.2
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