04:17 Shurelia: actually please give it a try now.
04:17 Shurelia: a feedback from old legend would be nice
04:18 YTYuyu: ok 1 sec i need to close my editing
04:18 YTYuyu: software
04:19 *YTYuyu is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1133804 Orange Heart(cv:Honda Mariko) Neptune(cv:Tanaka Rie) - Mousou Katharsis [Cool]]
04:25 Shurelia: seems you enjoyed it. :d
04:25 YTYuyu: actually no i felt more uncomfortable playing than enjoyed ;w;
04:26 Shurelia: hm?
04:26 Shurelia: probably the sudden SV jumps , I think.
04:28 YTYuyu: 00:53:925 (2,3,4) - the flow here feels off. i felt no link between the pattern and vocals x_x
04:28 YTYuyu: 3,4 mainly
04:28 Shurelia: true
04:28 Shurelia: I felt that too.
04:28 Shurelia: any suggestion?
04:29 YTYuyu: hold on give me a sec
04:30 YTYuyu:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6644326 <---- that
04:30 YTYuyu: it feels more comfortable and links to the song nicely
04:30 YTYuyu: the last 2 notes are 5,6
04:30 Shurelia: make it straight then. Alright.
04:31 YTYuyu: 00:59:779 (2) - missing a clap?
04:32 Shurelia: right
04:32 YTYuyu: 01:09:291 (1) - this i do not like. i see what you're following but the speed up makes it surprising to follow considering the shape
04:32 Shurelia: hmm
04:33 Shurelia: i'd really to keep this as the map's symbol.
04:33 Shurelia: but I've received a lot of complains already.
04:33 Shurelia: the thing is.
04:33 Shurelia: I'm bad on making slider ;w;
04:33 YTYuyu: if you can make it smaller it could work
04:33 Shurelia: 1.2 SV could be better?
04:33 Shurelia: current is 1.5
04:34 Shurelia: *would
04:34 YTYuyu: yea 1.2 works
04:34 YTYuyu: it has a nice flow to the vocals
04:35 YTYuyu: 01:22:462 (1) - err hitsound mistake?
04:35 Shurelia: new looks :
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/664434604:35 Shurelia: better?
04:36 YTYuyu: mhm better
04:36 Shurelia: what do you mean HS mistake?
04:36 YTYuyu: you have the whistle on the slider border
04:36 YTYuyu: causinfg both ends to make a whistle
04:37 YTYuyu: causing*
04:37 Shurelia: oh lol
04:37 Shurelia: sorry
04:37 YTYuyu: 01:45:876 (1,2) - stack this...it's all in 1 word and it's repeating the same character "koko"
04:38 Shurelia: true
04:38 YTYuyu: 01:49:534 (1,2,3,4,5) - err you can't do better?
04:38 Shurelia: stacked but made the jump from 2 > 1 higher.
04:38 Shurelia: right hmm
04:38 Shurelia: since I want to DS changing so..
04:38 Shurelia: let's see..
04:40 Shurelia: how's this ?
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/664436504:40 YTYuyu: no it still feels off o.o...i thought it'd be fine as well
04:40 YTYuyu: try a star
04:41 YTYuyu:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/664437104:44 Shurelia: naah not possible.
04:44 Shurelia: did this instead
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/664438304:45 Shurelia: repeat zig-zag or whatecer it called.
04:45 Shurelia: looks visually ok for me
04:45 YTYuyu: yea i get it
04:45 YTYuyu: should be fine
04:45 YTYuyu: 01:55:753 (2,3) - is the spacing intentional?
04:45 Shurelia: yep.
04:45 YTYuyu: there's a slight pitch in the vocals
04:45 Shurelia: All of the similar parts too.
04:45 Shurelia: on the 3 right?
04:46 Shurelia: but I prefer to make it all go lower.
04:47 YTYuyu: ahh i get it...this doesn't look visually appealing though...not in general but this part
04:47 Shurelia: hmm if you say so
04:48 YTYuyu:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6644389 try that
04:49 Shurelia: done
04:49 Shurelia: followed yours
04:50 YTYuyu: 02:33:254 (4,3,6,3) - why not some variety in this?
04:51 YTYuyu: for the 1st and 3rd slider switch to 2 notes to make it more appealing....just a suggestion
04:51 Shurelia: like what?
04:51 Shurelia: aah
04:51 Shurelia: not want player to suddenly doing 1/8 triplet
04:51 YTYuyu: ok fair point we'll leave it
04:52 YTYuyu: 02:51:729 (2,5) - missing hitsounds?
04:52 YTYuyu: claps to be specific
04:53 Shurelia: lol
04:53 Shurelia: ncie catch
04:53 YTYuyu: 02:53:925 (1) - end it at 02:55:388. you'd be following that beat instead of forcing the player to continue spinning
04:54 Shurelia: and leave it empty?
04:54 Shurelia: yeah, good thing
04:55 YTYuyu: 02:56:851 (1) - it's to setup for this note
04:55 Shurelia: indeed
04:55 YTYuyu: 03:29:046 (6) - space this out. you'd keep the flow going instead of halting it
04:57 Shurelia: right
04:57 YTYuyu: 03:34:534 (4,5) - i can see what you're doing but can you space it out to make it more appealing. it looks cluttered ;w;
04:57 Shurelia: it's suddenlt triplet .
04:58 YTYuyu: ahh ok then i see
04:58 Shurelia: space it out hmm
04:59 Shurelia:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6644420 ?
04:59 YTYuyu: yea that works
05:00 YTYuyu: that's all i can find
05:00 YTYuyu: if you want i can post for an irc mod
05:01 Shurelia: go for it.
05:01 YTYuyu: .savelog
05:02 YTYuyu: wait how do you save the long? D:
05:02 YTYuyu: i haven't done this in a while x_x
05:02 Shurelia: lol
05:02 Shurelia: " /savelog'
05:02 Shurelia: hahaha XD