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Hollow Wings
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017年1月11日 at 20:59:49

Artist: Hollow Wings
Title: Wo Zhen De Shou Shang Le
Tags: 张学友 Jacky Cheung 热 王菀之 Ivana 中国香港 Hong Kong fanzhen0019
BPM: 136.3
Filesize: 5604kb
Play Time: 03:24
Difficulties Available:
  1. fanzhen's Hard (1.97 stars, 202 notes)
  2. Hurted Lin (3.56 stars, 364 notes)
  3. Insane (2.67 stars, 263 notes)
  4. Normal (1.66 stars, 208 notes)
Download: Hollow Wings - Wo Zhen De Shou Shang Le
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Hollow Wings 我真的受伤了

bg by me

fanzhen's Hard by fanzhen0019

"wait... give me a sec... "

very old record here... check folder below please ↓

"Hurted Lin"
从前有一个叫鳞的女孩子,她喜欢着她身边一个叫羽的男孩子。
Once upon a time, there was a girl named "Lin", she adored her nearby boy named "Yu".

她从来不敢跟他说,因为她只会躲在水里游泳,她怕那个翱翔于天际的身影。
However, she was so coward that she never told that, because she can only hide in the water, being afraid of that shadow in the sky.

终于到了他们离别的时候了,那个男孩子对她说,不。
Eventually it came the time they must say farewell, that boy just gave the word "No."

从前有一个叫鳞的女孩子,她喜欢过她身边一个叫羽的男孩子。
Once upon a time, there was a girl named "Lin", she had adored her nearby boy named "Yu".

她的手里拿着一张纸,上面写着:“我的名字叫作‘Hurted Yu’。”
a slip slipped from her fins, saying "My name is 'Hurted Yu'."

(the word "Hurted" is like proper adjective from real life's story, not some grammar tricks. i know past tense of "hurt" is just "hurt", do not offer me English lesson anymore, thanks)
Len
n1ce
Enon
god tier singer
Bara-
Omg
Such a beautiful voice <3
Lyawi
anna apple

Hollow Wings wrote:

"wait... give me a sec... "
Ekin
good voice
Alexia-
<3
Kibbleru
o. i had this from a while back xd
unko
It better as ar6 because then i can hr it
Otosaka-Yu
哦哦哦哦哦哦1111111
Kite
00:12:841 (4) - a bit early; 00:12:880 - 1/8 tick sounds better but need to shorten slider to 1/8 too so it lands on the next red line
01:50:775 (1) - too early; sounds more accurate on 01:50:830 - 1/8 tick
01:57:046 (2) - too early; better on 01:57:101 - 1/16 tick and shorten so slider repeat is on 01:57:182 -

02:36:300 (2) - this slider seems problematic to me for a few reasons; it doesnt start on anything audible, and has a bit misleading spacing coming from 02:36:081 (1) -
I think the best solution would be to move the slider to 02:36:518 - and remove 02:36:955 (3) - or
ctrl+g the slider, because a jump from 2 -> 3 plays better than 1 -> 2 and the spacing isnt that misleading

02:39:796 (2) - the same applies to this slider but it's not as problematic as the first one so it would be fine to keep it as it is

love the voice~
__Ag
??干嘛
sahuang
wudi
Depths
Absolutely Amazing
Signum
Beautiful voice.
Joe Castle
I love your voice hollow wings!
Grim Rapper
Imma give you a star, cuz why not
cuz this is a chill song for chill creative creator
prepare for shit mod cuz i'm still too weak for your maps xd

If this piece masterpiece got ranked, the whole community will be ashamed by called a creative woman f*ckin cancer mapper without checking their dignity beforehand
Hollow Delta
fanzhen's Hard
SPOILER
00:01:435 (1,2) - The distance between these notes is lesser than the spacing between these: 00:03:196 (1,2) - And these notes have lower pitch, yet have more spacing. Shouldn't the spacing of these 2 pairs be reverted? As in, the first pair has more space, while the second pair has less spacing?
00:17:372 - And 00:17:808 - could have notes here, because they both sound important. But at the same time, I can see your understanding with why they're not there, so I'll leave that one up to you.
01:01:264 (2) - I understand why you did these overlaps, and I'll agree it looks good, but since this is the second time a part like this has been heard, shouldn't be as intense as the last one? Playing it as much easier than the last verse like this.
01:37:561 - Isn't important, but could you map this break? With my logic, more notes and drain time = More fun.
02:25:170 (2) - Same logic as 01:01:264 (2) - Again, up to you.

Hurted Lin
SPOILER
00:06:717 (2,3) - ctrl + g. (The spacing is inconsistent at this part, so this is a good option if you want to keep the pattern, and add some difficulty to it.)
00:08:478 (2) - Whoa, big jump! Bring this circle closer to 00:07:598 (1) - a little bit?
01:28:384 (1) - I can see the logic in this being part of an overlap, but it's not very challenging. ctrl + g?
Grim Rapper
Time for sh*t mod
is it okay to double post? (although the time length is pretty far =p)
Hurted Lin
01:49:254 (3,4) - Change it to slider?
02:18:996 (3) - Longer slider?
02:27:847 (2) - I think [http://puu.sh/re2Xs/e14a9c12d1.jpg] is better
03:03:771 - Add a slider?
03:05:111 - Add another slider following the next one?

fanzhen's Hard
Where's the red-points slider? Is this really fanzhen map?
01:03:558 (1) - I'd prefer [url][http://puu.sh/re3k4/8286cdb48b.jpg[/url]] (following the vocal than the beat behind it)
01:34:533 (4) - I'd prefer [http://puu.sh/re3qA/fdb872325a.jpg] (same reason above)
02:10:777 (2) - Shorten slider? (like [http://puu.sh/re3wB/b72f61af76.jpg])
(the following mod below might annoyed you, IDK if you're intentionally left it blank, or you didn't finish it yet, but here we go)
03:11:858 - add a slider
03:13:211 - add a note
03:13:635 - add a slider
03:14:622 - add a note
03:15:599 - add a slider
03:17:563 - add a slider
03:19:744 - add a spinner

Props for the vocal for such an amazing talent on singing ;)b
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