1. EZ - 4Key (1.48 stars, 326 notes)
2. HD - 4Key (3.44 stars, 918 notes)
3. MX - 4Key (4.58 stars, 1206 notes)
4. NM - 4Key (2.24 stars, 616 notes)

Kawawa wrote:

Chat mod

20:35 *Kawawa is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1015482 ARForest - Lantinid [MX]]
20:36 Wonki: 저30초만여
20:41 Kawawa: 전 아무래도
20:41 Kawawa: mx랑 shd를
20:41 Kawawa: 병합시키는게 나을거같은데
20:41 Kawawa: shd에 무리하게 있는 몇몇파트를
20:41 Kawawa: mx쪽에서 불러오면
20:41 Kawawa: 4.8성가량이되는게
20:41 Kawawa: 이게 더 완벽해질거라고 생각되서 
20:42 Wonki: 그럴까여?
20:42 Kawawa: 넹
20:42 Kawawa: 그게 나을거같아요 MX SHD는
20:42 Kawawa: SHD에서 불필요하게 있는잭 쪽에
20:42 Wonki: 어케합치지
20:42 Kawawa: MX쪽으로 가져오고
20:42 Kawawa: 버스트는 되도록 SHD꺼 유지하되 잭정도만
20:42 Kawawa: MX처럼 개선하면
20:43 Wonki: mx를 지우고 그럼 shd에서 고쳐보져
20:44 Wonki: 그럼딱히
20:44 Wonki: mx는볼필요없는거네여
20:44 Kawawa: 넹
20:44 Wonki: shd만 수정하면되겠네여
20:44 Kawawa: shd를 수정하는쪽으로 볼까여
20:44 Kawawa: 노말하드를 볼까요
20:44 Wonki: 수정하는게좋겠져
20:44 *Kawawa is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1009227 ARForest - Lantinid [SHD]]
20:45 Kawawa: 00:20:398 (20398|0) - 
20:45 Kawawa: 여거 지워주시는게 나을듯
20:45 Kawawa: 00:20:844 - 그게 결국 여기와 동일해서
20:46 Wonki: 예
20:46 Wonki: 지웠어여
20:46 Kawawa: 00:25:968 (25968|0,26042|0) - 이런부분을보면
20:46 Kawawa: MX와 SHD의 차이를 볼수 있는데
20:46 Kawawa: 오히려 이런부분에서
20:46 Kawawa: MX식으로 킵해주는게 더 부드럽지 않을까여
20:47 Wonki: 그러져
20:47 Wonki: 저3개노트는
20:47 Wonki: 마무리나시작지점만
20:47 Wonki: 하는걸로할까여
20:47 Kawawa: 네
20:47 Kawawa: 12 34 12
20:47 Kawawa: 패턴도 좋긴한데
20:47 Kawawa: 12 12 34
20:47 Kawawa: 로하셔도되요
20:47 Kawawa: 왜냐면 앞에
20:47 Kawawa: 12 12이게
20:47 Kawawa: 같은 베이스 드럼이라
20:47 Kawawa: 잭으로 두실순 있어서
20:48 Wonki: 1212 연속으로하는게
20:48 Wonki: 더힘들거같아여근데
20:48 Kawawa: 넹
20:48 Kawawa: 12 34 12가 더 부드럽긴해요
20:48 Kawawa: 00:26:933 - 여기는 잭 유지하셔도 되구요, 왜냐면 메인타이밍 섹션이 시작되니
20:48 Kawawa: 근데 이건 제안이라서, 부드럽게 재생되는걸 원하신다면
20:48 Kawawa: 물론 여기 노트1개 삭제하심 되구여
20:49 Wonki: 부드럽게하져
20:49 Kawawa: 00:28:790 -  00:29:978 - 
20:49 Kawawa: 여기는 동일한파트이니
20:49 Kawawa: 00:29:978 - 여기서 추가하셔도 될듯
20:49 Kawawa: 00:30:795 (30795|3,31092|0) - 
20:49 Kawawa: 00:31:389 (31389|3) - 
20:50 Wonki: 넹
20:50 Wonki: 다했어여
20:50 Kawawa: 이부분은 대강
20:50 Kawawa: http://puu.sh/pSbIU/ce5d34e14a.jpg
20:50 Kawawa: 이런식으로 하시면 될듯한데
20:50 Wonki: 예
20:50 Wonki: 그렇게하져
20:51 Kawawa: 00:36:438 - 이부분부터
20:51 Kawawa: 나오는 스트림파트를
20:51 Kawawa: mx식으로
20:51 Kawawa: 바꾸시면 될듯한데
20:51 Kawawa: HD에선 여기서부터 모드 1놋식 스트림을 짰구 드럼을 무시했는데
20:52 Kawawa: MX가 사라지면서 SHD가 그걸 대체하게 될거니깐
20:52 Kawawa: 드럼쪽에 3,23,2 보다는 2,1,2,1로 가면서
20:52 Kawawa: 00:36:438 - 여기 심볼쪽에 4코드가 아닌 3코드로
20:52 Kawawa: 유지되게끔 변경하면 
20:52 Kawawa: 될듯
20:52 Kawawa: 무슨말인지 이해가 되시나요?
20:53 Wonki: 예
20:53 Wonki: 잠시만여
20:53 Wonki: 그냥
20:54 Wonki: mx꺼배껴올까여
20:54 Kawawa: 예
20:54 Kawawa: 00:41:191 - 여기까지
20:58 Kawawa: 다되면 
20:58 Kawawa: 말씀하십시오!
20:58 Kawawa: 끼요오옹ㅂ
20:59 Kawawa: 아 왜 피곤한가 싶었는데 벌써 9시네 무슨
20:59 Wonki: 예예옝끼욥
20:59 Wonki: ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
21:01 Wonki: 끝
21:01 Kawawa: 그러면 
21:01 Kawawa: 그 파트에서 보면
21:02 Kawawa: 00:36:438 - 여기 2노트니깐 3노트로 추가하시구
21:02 Kawawa: 00:38:814 - 여기도 추가
21:02 Wonki: 조금씩바꿔야되네여
21:02 Kawawa: 00:41:191 - 여기서도 1개추가
21:02 Kawawa: 넹
21:02 Wonki: 바꿈여
21:02 Wonki: 다했으여!
21:04 Kawawa: 굳
21:05 Kawawa: 00:59:012 (59012|1,59012|0,59087|2,59087|1,59161|2,59161|3,59458|1,59458|0,59532|1,59532|2,59606|2,59606|3) - 
21:05 Kawawa: 전 이게 문제인거같은데
21:06 Wonki: http://puu.sh/pScpy/1359c3e728.jpg
21:06 Kawawa: 01:00:200 (60200|1) - 여것도 지우는게 나을듯
21:06 Wonki: 이런식으로바꿀까여?
21:06 Kawawa: 심볼로 터지는것도 아니라서
21:06 Wonki: 그래여
21:07 Kawawa: 음
21:07 Kawawa: http://puu.sh/pScqO/12ab6d65c8.jpg
21:07 Kawawa: 제가 표시한부분이
21:07 Kawawa: 동일한 음악구조이니
21:07 Kawawa: 저런식으로 동일하게 표현해주면 더 느낌이 살듯해요
21:07 Wonki: 앞에하나를
21:07 Wonki: 지우는게괜찮긴하네여
21:09 Kawawa: 01:24:260 - 여기서 시작되는 스트림도
21:09 Kawawa: MX식으로 바꿔주시면
21:09 Kawawa: 01:31:092 - 여기까지요
21:10 Wonki: 드럽게길다
21:10 Wonki: 해오겠심다
21:10 Kawawa: 감바뗴
21:17 Wonki: 만세
21:17 Wonki: 다함
21:17 Kawawa: 수고하셨오.
21:17 Kawawa: 그거 그냥 
21:17 Kawawa: mx엣거
21:17 Kawawa: 드래그하고 컨트롤 C한담에
21:17 Wonki: 예.
21:17 Kawawa: SHD로 넘어와서
21:17 Kawawa: 노트 그 부분삭제하고
21:18 Wonki: 해봤는데
21:18 Wonki: 안대여
21:18 Wonki: ㅋㅋㅋㅋ
21:18 Kawawa: 엥 
21:18 Kawawa: 전 되는데
21:18 Kawawa: 뭐징
21:18 Kawawa: 01:31:092 - 
21:18 Wonki: 잉
21:18 Kawawa: 딱 여기까지만 하셨쪄
21:18 Wonki: 예
21:18 Kawawa: 01:31:760 (91760|2,92057|1,92205|2) - 
21:18 Kawawa: 여기 삭제해주시면 될듯
21:19 Wonki: 예
21:19 Wonki: 뒤에또노가다해야되네
21:19 Kawawa: 01:33:765 - ~ 01:38:220 - 
21:19 Kawawa: 노가다
21:19 Kawawa: 끄억
21:20 Wonki: 에휴씌보르
21:20 Kawawa: ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
21:20 Wonki: 갑니다
21:20 Kawawa: ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
21:21 Wonki: 컨트롤c v안대여
21:21 Kawawa: 음?
21:21 Kawawa: 돠ㅣ는데
21:21 Kawawa: 뭐징
21:25 Wonki: 끝
21:26 Kawawa: 01:39:037 (99037|3,99186|3,99334|0,99557|0) - 
21:26 Kawawa: 01:40:002 (100002|3,100077|2,100225|1) - 
21:26 Kawawa: 01:40:671 (100671|1,100819|0,100968|2,101116|3,101265|0) - 
21:27 Kawawa: 뭐이런식으로
21:27 Kawawa: 차감해서
21:27 Kawawa: 좀 줄이면 될듯하네여
21:27 Kawawa: 01:41:562 (101562|1,101859|1,102007|1,102156|0,102304|0) - 
21:28 Wonki: 수술완료
21:32 Kawawa: 4.67이면
21:32 Kawawa: 딱좋네요
21:32 Kawawa: nm 2.2 hd 3.4
21:32 Kawawa: mx 4.6
21:32 Kawawa: 딱딱 1.2씩증가하니
21:32 Wonki: 굿굿하네여

[ S a k u r a ] wrote:

M4M: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/348572
[EZ]
00:01:092 (1092|3) - move to 00:01:240 -
00:36:438 - add a note
00:38:963 - suggest to add a note
00:59:012 (59012|0,59309|1) - Suggest to change it to note, 00:59:309 (59309|1) - the sound of this actually extends until 00:59:903 -

[NM]
00:21:587 (21587|1) - LN should start 00:21:438 -
00:38:963 - suggest to add a note
00:51:884 (51884|3) - move to 00:51:735 -
00:53:369 (53369|1) - move to 00:53:517 -
01:02:725 - 01:02:874 - add
01:05:101 - 01:05:250 - ^
01:07:478 - 01:07:626 - 01:07:775 - ^
01:09:854 - 01:10:002 - 01:10:151 - ^
01:12:230 - 01:12:379 - 01:14:606 - 01:14:755 -

[HD]
00:36:438 - add

[MX]
00:59:384 - remove one
01:29:012 - add

Good Luck!

- Ly0572 - wrote:

hi wonki~
req from my sh♥ty queue

ez

00:19:656 (19656|1) - move to 3
00:23:369 (23369|0,23666|2) - ctrl+j better flow
00:29:903 (29903|2,30200|1) - ^
01:33:171 (93171|1,93319|2,93468|3,93765|0,93765|1) - hard for ez diff | suggestion http://puu.sh/q2bFd/0a0b2ee049.png
01:34:062 (94062|2) - move to 2

nm

00:36:290 - add to 2
00:45:497 - add to 2
00:45:795 - ^ 4
00:46:092 - ^ 3
00:50:101 (50101|1) - move to 4
00:50:101 (50101|3) - add to 3
00:50:398 (50398|2) - move to 2
00:50:547 - add to 4
00:50:695 (50695|0) - move to 3 or 4
01:07:775 - add to 2
01:10:151 - ^ 3
01:32:874 (92874|1) - much better if u delete this

hd

00:05:547 (5547|1,5993|0) - ctrl+j
01:08:517 - add to 3
01:12:824 - ^ 3
01:13:270 - ^ 1

-[ AmiShici ]- wrote:

Hiii Wonki!

M4M from your queue

4K=1~4

Click Me!

• [MX]

1. 00:22:181 - add note? for give cymbal impact
2. 00:23:814 - add note for kick? like as 00:23:369 (23369|0,23369|1,23517|2,23517|3,24111|3,24111|2,24408|1,24408|0) -
3. 00:24:408 (24408|0,24408|1,24557|0,24557|1) - i suggest to make different columb. to make better feel. maybe :
   00:24:483 (24483|3) - to 3
   00:24:557 (24557|1) - to 4
4. 00:39:260 (39260|0,39260|3,39408|3,39408|0) - Avoid map like this pls. since different sound. so better to dont make it in same columb - changed
   Suggest : 00:38:814 - http://puu.sh/q7OHK/5d9fff8bd8.jpg
5. 01:23:889 (83889|2,83889|3,83963|0,83963|3,83963|1,83963|2) -
6. 01:32:131 (92131|3) - move to 3? to make different with 01:31:983 (91983|0,91983|3) -
7. 01:41:488 (101488|0) - delete?
   
   [HD]
8. 00:23:814 - double? kick like as 00:23:369 (23369|0,23369|1,23517|3,23517|2,24111|2,24111|0,24408|1,24408|2) - changed
9. 00:28:567 - ^ -^
10. 00:52:923 - add kick like as 00:51:587 (51587|1,51587|3,51735|2,51735|0) - ; 00:53:963 (53963|1,53963|0,54111|3,54111|2) - -^
11. 00:54:854 - ^ -^
12. 01:28:567 - add kick like as 01:26:191 (86191|1,86191|0) -
13. 01:38:072 - ^

Goodluck 'w')b

Suzuko-P wrote:

Hi! From Suzuko-P's Modding Queue
M4M Request
(Sorry for late mod orz)

Column 1|2|3|4

NM

00:39:111 (39111|3,39111|2) - Why it's double notes?- stress drum sound I saw 00:38:814 (38814|2,38814|3) and 00:40:002 (40002|3,40002|2) was cymbal sound,and double notes that i mentioned it wasn't have that sound for my suggestion
01:41:785 - It is a loud snare sound and almost end of map,so my suggest of note is like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5671577
01:46:983 (106983|0) - It's same key pitch as 01:46:537 (106537|3,107428|3) so it should be at column 4 (If the map style is hand-balancing is okay)
01:25:002 (85002|1) - Is it Ghost-key? I can't hear any drum or melody on it (If you delete this,other should delete too,I saw it's many Ghost-key on pattern ( (01:25:894 (85894|1) and 01:27:379 (87379|3) ) so it's your choice )

Good Luck!

DE-CADE wrote:

[General]

- Important! about the source

https://itunes.apple.com/jp/app/zyon-rh ... ?l=en&mt=8 | Zyon RhythmGame
https://play.google.com/store/apps/deta ... atrax.zyon | Zyon RhythmGame
https://soundcloud.com/arforest/lantinidin-zyon | Zyon 載音
https://www.facebook.com/aquatraxzyon/ | Zyon 載音

You can use Zyon 載音 or Zyon RhythmGame , its fine since both are stated from aquatrax company. but i prefer you to change the source into Zyon RhythmGame since the game company (aquatrax) use it for the app name on android

- You have done better on the hitsound, but one think to do is raise it up into 50%

[MX]

00:21:215 (21215|2) - Move to 4, as you mapped at the next sound without small jack like this

00:22:700 - Add to 3, missing note for hat sound

00:26:042 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6644261 rearrange some parts here , it could be more balance for play

00:30:349 (30349|3) - Move to 3 and try to rearrange this doubles 00:30:646 (30646|0,30646|1,30720|3,30720|2,30795|0,30795|1) - into 14 23 14, for some reason it can be more specific on mapping instead of only using double tril 12 34 ..

00:35:844 - pls rearrange this part https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6644280 double = snare triple = crash/cymbal

00:55:745 - Try something more about the double trill here https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6644288

01:16:983 (76983|2) - Delete this because we seen this as double and it should be only one note for the piano like this 01:17:428 (77428|1) - an end of LN isn't counted as note
01:19:359 (79359|3,79507|0,79656|1) - Delete, same reason

01:22:552 (82552|1) - Move to 1, its very fit for small jacks here the blip sound provide good reason for it and 01:22:700 - Add to 4 because u missed the hat sound here

01:32:428 - Add to 4 for cymbal

01:40:299 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6644323 that double after 1/8 stair is not good to play imo for this diff, try to make it more easier to play
01:42:750 (102750|3) - Delete for same reason above

[HD]

00:19:804 - Add to 2 for cymbal

00:27:824 (27824|1) - Move to 1 and then 00:27:973 - Add note to 2

00:36:438 - Add to 4 for cymbal

00:55:745 - I feel its off to play like this, try to remap some part osu.ppy.sh/ss/6644369

00:57:824 - Add to 1
00:59:606 - Add to 3

00:59:978 (59978|2,60052|0,60126|2) - change into stair 234

other diffs is fine, Im out of words anyway lool

DE-CADE wrote:

Good for you

KittyAdventure wrote:

Gratzz! :3

Another Lie wrote:

Did i mistaken for something? H as NM?