1. Quiescence_Lv.21 - 4Key (4.3 stars, 1731 notes)
2. reset - 4Key (3.97 stars, 1496 notes)
3. Serenity_Lv.16 - 4Key (3.46 stars, 1421 notes)
4. Tranquility_Lv.18 - 4Key (3.75 stars, 1554 notes)

puxtu wrote:

8/8 gr8 spr8 m8 5/7
[general]
- you might wanna compress a.jpg, it's over 1mb fix
- can I have your metadata source since I'm not really sure about this https://osu.ppy.sh/b/297410
- the rest are cool
[Lull_Lv.7]
2HD4EZ 2EZ4NM
00:35:434 (35434|3) - 00:39:223 (39223|0) - missing W, intended? I don't think so noep all fix
01:31:013 (91013|3) - chords done
02:07:644 - confusion is real. instead of layering that synth sound, just layer the 1/2 beat is perfectly fine imo layered to drums
[Rest_Lv.9]
00:10:171 - do you have to layer that hi-hat sounds in this calm part? it feels a lil bit too much removed hi hat sounds all the way till 00:19:013 (19013|3) -
01:20:908 (80908|0) - chords chorded the highlighted note but didnt chord the section here since im following the violin and imo doesnt have merit for chords or maybe youre just saying chords for the first note idk
[Repose_Lv.13]
01:07:487 (67487|1) - pls it hurts gg hand balance fixed i guess
01:20:908 (80908|0) - chords yup just the highlighted note fixed

...the first 3 diffs are fine, nice flow overall gg next 3 diffs

[Serenity_Lv16]
so many jumps ; _ ;
00:10:171 - normal diff full layered the hi-hat sounds, but not in this diff? felt as if the density here is already enough with the layering of piano drum and kick so yeah no hi hat layering here
00:40:487 (40487|1) - 01:20:908 (80908|3) - 01:42:381 (102381|3) - triplet chords here done
02:04:487 (124487|1) - maybe it's just me but I think the stream starts here, no? tooo hush hush to start in such an easier diff added LN doe
[Tranquility_Lv.18]
00:40:487 (40487|0) - 01:20:908 (80908|0) - 01:42:381 (102381|0) - chords done
02:04:487 (124487|2) - stream where yeah boi used LN
[Quiescence_Lv.21]
00:40:487 (40487|0) - 00:50:592 (50592|2,50592|1) - chords done
01:00:697 (60697|0) - shift+w -> E idk what that does to the hitsound lol i sux at HS did it anyway
01:42:381 (102381|0) - are you jejjin jej

Mia_Rose wrote:

Lull_Lv7 Difficulty

1. I really recommend using a Hp drain of 7 instead of 6,5, it´s like the minimum anyone would suggest you for the most easy map of your set set 7
2. 00:30:697 (30697|1,30855|3) - if you invert these both notes, it will be more comfortable for beginners duo the finger movement so the hold ends with a single by using the left hand only nice catch done
3. 01:03:223 (63223|3,63381|2,63539|1,63697|0) - you can also invert this stair to bring in variety, since your last stair has the exact same pattern cleaned up area a bit
4. 02:07:644 (127644|3,127644|2,128118|0,128118|2,128750|0,128750|1,129381|3,129381|0,130171|2,130171|3,130644|0,130644|1,131276|3,131276|2,131908|1,131908|0,132697|1,132697|2) - I recommend placing the single notes between the holdings to fit with the bass and snare of the track, it doesn't fit the rhythm properly idk if i made it too hard for beginner beginners but i guess its fine for beginners
   
   The map can be played smoothly though, also the holding patterns look difficult, but are playable for beginners and are a nice little challenge I guess

sounds great i guess

rest_lv9

1. here I recommend increasing the overall difficulty a little, to 7,5 for example, since this map is a little bit more difficult than lv7 used 7.smth but its near 5 i guess
2. 01:48:697 (108697|2,108697|3,108855|0,108855|1,109013|3,109013|2,109171|0,109329|2,109487|0,109487|1,109644|2,109644|3,109802|0,109960|1) - this pattern feels way too hard for 2,2 stars in my opinion, something that fits better in 2,5-3, you use it multiple times in the end idk but i guess its easier to see them like this
   
   
   
   should seem easier to hit now
   
   Overall really smooth map, I really enjoy playing it thanks for liking it

Lv13

1. here I recommend using an overall difficulty of 8 instead of 7,5 used 8

As conclusion, smooth maps that don't even need any major changes, they have enough potential to get ranked soon one can dream dreams.

puxtu wrote:

Dude you forgot to add dot at Lv16

Crusts wrote:

Hi from my queue hi

Column :
1|2|3|4

Serenity

00:10:644 (10644|2) - change to LN end at 00:10:802 -ok so over here i don't intend to use LNs cuz the synth sounds really instantaneous and i didn't intend to use LNs here. all suggestions asking for LNs will therefore be left empty(unless i feel it fits proper)
00:13:171 (13171|1) - ^ end at 00:13:329 -
00:14:592 (14592|1) - delete piano there
00:14:434 - add a LN at 2 end at 00:14:671 - seems perfectly legit but i don't wish to follow violin here so yeah i wont take it
00:15:697 (15697|2) - change to LN end at 00:15:934 -
00:18:223 - add a LN at 3 end at 00:18:460 -
00:20:750 - ^ end at 00:20:987 - ctrl+h
00:25:802 - ^ at 2 end at 00:26:039 -
00:30:855 - ^ at 2 end at 00:31:092 -
00:33:381 - ^ at 3 end at 00:33:618 -
00:35:908 - ^ at 1 end at 00:36:144 -
00:36:223 (36223|0) - move to 2 it would be nice if you were to provide a reason for time being it'll stay the same
00:38:434 - add a LN at 2 end at 00:38:671 -
01:22:644 (82644|3) - end at 01:22:960 -
01:23:908 (83908|0) - end at 01:24:223 -
01:24:697 (84697|0) - end at 01:25:013 -
01:26:434 (86434|3) - end at 01:26:750 -
01:27:697 (87697|0) - end at 01:28:013 - you'd have to know that the violins here are actually 1/2 long, as the drastic lowering in volume tells us so (just check every single LN you mentioned). i understand the rationale doe, but i'm not accepting any of the suggestions unless you convince otherwise that these LNs are actually 1/1 long.

Rest

00:00:223 - add note at 2
00:00:381 - ^ at 1
00:05:276 - ^
00:05:434 - ^ at 4 followed piano all the way
00:15:381 - ^ at 1
00:16:644 - ^ at 4 kicks=doubles, piano=singles, no other sounds followed here.
00:50:592 - ^ at 2 done
01:51:223 (111223|0,111223|1,111381|2,111539|3,111697|1,112013|0,112013|3,112171|2,112250|1,112329|0) - CTRL + H u fokin wot mate after all the whole section repeats twice the it reverses here 01:56:276 (116276|3,116750|2,117066|0,121329|3,121802|2) - so yeah
01:52:408 (112408|3) - move to 2 this would happen

well that's conclude my mod hope it's helpful :3 it was certainly interesting
GL on ranked and love the music <3 thanks for mod <3

Frim4503 wrote:

Col : 1|2|3|4|5|6|7

General

1. BG : ok
2. Mp3 : ok
3. Hitsound : add other sound for hs whatchu mean by other sounds yeah i mightve skimped on the HSing but fuck hitsounds amirite is there a requirement as to how many sounds you need to use or
4. Difficulty : ok
5. Timing: ok
6. AI Mod : unchek widescreen support in ‘Lull_Lv.7’ done

Lull_Lv.7

• 
  00:22:487 (22487|0) -better to move this to 2. See 00:22:013 (22013|2,22171|0,22329|3) - done
  00:24:697 (24697|1) -mvoe to 3 done
  00:25:329 (25329|2) -^4
  00:25:802 (25802|3) -^3
  ^following pitch more better all done
  00:29:750 (29750|0) -move to 2
  00:31:171 (31171|1) -^3
  00:34:171 (34171|3) -^2
  ^for better pitch all done
  01:42:381 (102381|1) -make double for impact fyesx

Rest_Lv.9

• 
  00:05:118 (5118|2) -move to 2 fyxex
  00:19:802 (19802|2) -add another note in 1 for clap sound LN in the way
  00:20:118 (20118|0,20276|1) -swap col. For better pattern 1,2 kept the stack
  01:03:697 (63697|2) -move to for. Following pitch
  01:05:118 (65118|1) -move to 1
  01:06:539 (66539|0,66697|0) -move to 2 ell doen

Repose_Lv.13

• 
  00:08:434 (8434|3) -move to 3. For better pitch
  00:11:434 (11434|0) -move to 2. For hand balance
  00:12:539 (12539|3) -^3
  00:14:434 (14434|3) -^3 all den
  00:19:013 - try this http://puu.sh/n6ijl/84f222062f.png for better pattern and pitch guess i did something similar
  00:26:276 (26276|3) -make double cuz is a clap same like 00:25:013 (25013|2,25013|1,25644|2,25644|1) - done
  00:50:750 (50750|0) -move to 3. To reduce note in col. 1
  00:53:276 (53276|1) -^3
  00:55:802 (55802|3) -move to 3 all above is intentional
  00:54:066 (54066|1) - this part supposed have double cuz in pre. Pattern you follow piano. Better to follow piano until the end of this section don’t suddenly change following drum or you can change by following drum from the start of the section throughout the last section and this one there wasnt an emphasis on the piano it was all just drums and claps and and synthy minty sound. in this section i followed that synth and used doubles for the drums and claps, since the stacks are enough to give the synth an impact.

Side Note

• 
  02:07:644 -02:12:697 - better to remove this kiai time cuz it doesn’t have any meaning in the song. Also I don’t think it a chorus well kiai isnt just for choruses, if you were to check the higher diffs here this is the part where the layering gets really intense. since the synth itself is pretty intense in the section i thought it would be touche to have kiai here.
  02:22:802 -better to end the note in here cuz the song is stop in here too i may sound as if im lazy (i am) but i felt the ending piano was a nice ending sequence to the map so yeah there you go

Mod Done

frozencyclone wrote:

lets start hi

fix this in all diff http://puu.sh/n7hcB/fd0b90ff75.jpg itsa warning not a ranking requirement

Lull_Lv.7

00:30:066 add 1 i think
00:34:644 ^ im not following claps or drums here
00:51:381 consider to delete this, this sound is low. i guess you mean its soft? its not really that soft is it
01:56:118 add 1 lmao i missed this fixed

Rest_Lv.9

01:01:013 add 1 not here doe
keep the consistency at this 01:44:434 - 01:44:592 .. delete 01:44:434 (104434|3) and add 1 at 01:44:592 i will choose 3 LNs in the way, 1 note = clap or drum beat here
01:45:539 delete note for 1/2 stream consistency
01:46:960 (106960|0) delete. 01:47:118 piano sounds here i think as above LNs in the way 1 note = drum beat or clap

Quiescence_Lv.21

00:39:381 - until 00:40:329 - just make it cleandone
02:12:776 - until 02:22:802 - why u make it clean? i suggest u too make the piano note (i think ) like this img1, this img2, this img3, this img4, also this
img5 and this is the last img6 lmao i explained this above, i felt as if the ending piano sequence is perfect as the end screen background music so i chose not the map that section

and last 1, why u only make a few long note? in the music there are so many piano sound ._. long notes are the bane of my existence, and seeing how every single LN laden map i made was heavily criticized i opted for a more linear layering, which resulted in this mapping. i like streams anyway, so its kind of a win-win situation you know

*ps : i'm newbie in modding other map, but i'm trying my best and i still don't know how to make the time directly into song time ._. its ok people learn just remember to have heart in all that you do and im sure youll do well
And that's all, the other is fine. But if u still want me to mod it, it's okay i'll do it it would be great if you were to look through the others but i guess theres too many diffs to cover lmao its entirely up to you though

-[Apple]- wrote:

Hello,from my queue!
Nice song!

here's my mod

[General]
Title: OK!
Artist: OK!
Disabled countdown: OK!
Widescreen support: OK!
Hitsound: OK!

[Serenity_Lv.16]
00:03:381 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4564076 Better to follow the pitch. dont wish for a runningman here due to the fact that even the highest diff doesnt feature 4 note stacking. i built the chords here on the basis that each and every piano note is fundamentally different from each other, which explains the lack of too much stacking here
00:05:118 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4564082 ^ shifted one note, had to take note of the underlying, lower-pitched piano and also take into account the higher pitched one
00:22:092 (22092|3,22250|1) - Ghost notes? 00:22:171 (22171|2) - There is correctly follow the hit-hat. But i don't know what are you following for on 00:22:092 - lower hitsounds to 0%, put music to 100% and use an earpiece. there is a slight synth beat in the music that i layered these notes to. didnt want to miss them out due to the fact that they are actually there, as subtle as they are.

** You need pay attention on ln's using in this diff ** for lv.16 or lv.21? most LNs are used for violin pulls and the like.

[Quiescence_Lv.21]
00:44:671 (44671|1,44829|1) - Ghost notes or following the hit-hat? yup, the synth is still there, as subtle as it can be
01:21:855 (81855|2) - Change to 1 There's weird. In my opinion low pitch put on the left and high pitch on the right.
There and later you best to follow the pitch. For better. understand your concern. thing is i built this part on the fact that these notes are being pulled on a violin, and each individual pull is separate from each other. which builds patterns which use all 4 columns, i.e. 01:22:171 (82171|1,82329|0,82487|3,82644|2) - and 01:23:276 (83276|3,83434|1,83592|2,83750|0). these arent entirely built to be pitch relevant, because that is secondary in this case.

And you just put double notes with kick,triple notes with snare that's okay. But why you put all about kick and snare to triple notes,That's weird.
if you are talking about the chorus section 01:42:381 (102381|1,102381|0,102381|3) - , the main principle there is that synths hold the greatest priority. which makes all synth beats either have a triple (if its a instantaneous one, i.e. 01:42:539 (102539|3,102539|0,102539|1,102697|0,102697|3,102697|1) - and 01:43:644 (103644|1,103644|3,103644|0,103802|0,103802|2,103802|1,103960|0,103960|3,103960|1) - ) or if the synth beat is a long pull/high pitched pull, be a dense handstream (i.e. long pull: 01:46:250 (106250|1,106329|3,106329|2,106408|0,106487|2,106487|1,106566|0,106644|3,106644|1,106723|2,106802|3,106881|1,106960|0,106960|3,106960|2,107039|1) - and higher pitched: 01:49:408 (109408|2,109487|0,109487|3,109566|1,109644|3,109644|2,109723|0) - ). i had the synths in mind, and the intention was to layer to them as greatly as possible, as that is my main goal here. as aforementioned, therefore the snares and kicks were basically ignored in a sense.

GL! thanks for the mod and star and suggestions <333333333333333333333333333333333333333

PnX wrote:

From PnX's modding queue
Very amazing map! thanks mate

Serenity_Lv.16
02:04:487 - I think It should be a single note instead of slider was made to make up for the pretty muffled stream synth sounds that are followed just right after the LN

Quiescence_Lv.21
00:52:329 (52329|1,52329|0,52408|3,52408|2) - Don't know four of these (a ghosted note?) its repeating, check with 25% playback
00:52:566 - I didn't sure that you neglect it or intend that. So,
00:52:487 (52487|0,52487|1,52566|2,52566|3) - This could be worked without 00:52:329 (52329|0,52329|1,52408|3,52408|2) if you were to check this whole section here there was only emphasis on two things: the minty synth 00:53:276 (53276|2,53276|0,53434|2,53434|0,53434|3,53592|2,53592|3) - and the hihat sounds 00:53:750 (53750|1,53829|3,53908|2) - so there wasnt any intention whatsoever to follow the subtle, more bubbly synth in the music for the section.
00:55:092 (55092|3) - This one might be added triples = claps, doubles= synth/drum beats
01:17:987 (77987|1) - this one should be removed nice catch, all relevant parts edited

Sorry if my mods are not as good as it could be. anything helps, dont worry about it
This seems like to be a perfect map. It was very hard to find an error , also I cannot help in pitch so much. So, This was the best I could do now.

Never-mind, Good Luck >.<! thanks for the mod <3

Chocox wrote:

Nivrad00 wrote:

from Nivrad's Mania Queue

I love the different backgrounds and diff titles, they're very thematically appropriate. Your jack (or stack) use seems very purposeful as well. Nice difficulty curves. I don't know much about 4k and you seem like a very competent charter, so... no other comments. Good work! asdfasdfas great that my intentions were clear to you. seems like i did something right here. thanks mate
[Lull_Lv.7]
00:30:697 - this note is inconsistent with previous and following patterns, but I suppose the piano might be slightly louder in this one. removed
[Rest_Lv.9]
hm mmmmm
[Repose_Lv.13]
00:00:066 - should this be a single note? I don't hear the bass layer here i guess the lower pitched piano sound can be debated against, but for consistency's sake id rather keep it
shouldn't 00:23:592 - be single and 00:23:750 - be double lmao i stuped fyx
01:23:118 - I don't hear strings here done
[Serenity_Lv.16]
00:15:066 - if you're only mapping piano, kick, and snare in this section, this might be a ghost note it is fyx
00:28:802 - should be a triple? (for snare) fyx
00:39:223 - er, should this be a double? I see that it's the end of the section so you might want to emphasize it, but it felt incorrect while I was testplaying bc it looks exactly the same as snare on the previous beat... but it's not a snare. ;n; yup kinda looks weird also the 1/2 thrill like pattern beside turns me off so fyx
00:40:487 - to 00:50:592 - you're putting doubles on every melody synth and every snare, right? personally I found this layering very confusing... while I was testplaying I couldn't figure out what you were trying to map. perhaps try something else? edited part, all synths are doubles now
01:53:434 - add note for snare fyxe
[Tranquility_Lv.18]
00:30:066 - triple for snare? I see that the stream might have taken up too much room to add another note, but at 00:32:592 - and other places you did a triple for snare even with a stream going on doen
00:39:223 - maybe make a double? same reason as on Lv.16 done
00:40:487 - to 00:50:592 - same layering thing as Lv.16 all triples are snares, drum beats are neglected, synth beats are doubles.
01:53:434 - add note for snare done
[Quiescence_Lv.21]
"This diff is no easy feat, and is probably a little overmapped in my opinion."
https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/sAN62ZV.png woooo weeee
00:15:223 - is this triple on accident? yup
01:42:381 - when I saw this wall of notes coming down, I was suddenly reminded of a tidal wave coming in, like in the BG. helps that notes in my skin are blue and white. very beautiful moment o/ im very glad that my intentions were shown through when you where playing the map. there are plenty of interpretations of mapping, but yet here i am happy that youve managed to capture whatever i set out to accomplish. truly amazing, thank you.

lejel wrote:

[From queue] good evening
I'm extremely sorry that I'm not that good at modding all and any opinions are valuable to me

But here's what i found :3
column 1|2|3|4

Found no mistakes that are really meaningful in Lull_Lv.7 so I'll pass that one :3

Rest_Lv.9

00:39:223 and 00:39:855 I suggest jumps really nothing giving it the distinction to be doubles except for the fact that this part lacks the background layer of music.
00:52:329 It's pretty confusing for me, suddenly changed following the higher notes intrument. I suggest to define which one to follow. If you still decide to follow the high notes, this is how i suggest (I randomly put the notes, so it's up to you in which column you want to put them in :3)
i see where you are coming from, but i cant really decide whether or not this part is confusing id see whether or not it is
01:00:302 remove this, and if you want, you can add hold from 01:00:223 - 01:00:381
02:09:381 LN should start from 02:09:223 and remove the single note there first following the lead of 00:55:171 (55171|2,55329|1,55408|0,55487|3,55566|2,55644|0) - i did edit this part so yeah
02:10:644 and 02:11:908 same with ^ if you were to listen to this section here you could see that i tried a 1234, 1, 1234 kinda of beat to follow with the drums and snares. since ive already established that the LNs appear on the 2 note, i decided to stick to it.

Repose_Lv.13

00:50:908 add in column 4 in this section, all doubles = snare or drum, singles = synth, LNs = select synths
01:00:302 remove this diff is a step up from the old one, after all these long pulls of the synth are in 1/4s
01:21:281 - 01:21:697 - 01:22:644 - 01:22:960 - 01:23:908 - etc. I expect doubles XD completely separate section, meant to emphasize on the now very obvious violin pulls. its the minimalistic kind of thing i was going for here, even in the higher diffs.

Serenity_Lv.16

00:52:487 i suggest single this time its doubles = synths, dums, snares. no exceptions aside from the long pulls of synths
00:53:750 single :3 see above explanation
00:54:539 and 00:54:657 singles all the way~~ ^^^^

Mianhaeyoo (sorry) if it isn't as good as expected but I've tried my best its ok anything helps
It's a good map i gotta say I pretty like it that there aren't much things i gotta mod XD a lotta people say that, but im not even sure about it myself lmao
Anyway thank you for queuing at my page ^^ thank you for modding <3

Rivals_7 wrote:

Hi o/ From my queue hi somehow i managed to miss your mod lmao

1|2|3|4

Some mod might be has been mentioned above

[General]

"lull" is "lullaby"? why dont you complete the sentence xD http://dictionary.cambridge.org/dictionary/english/lull

change OD on "rest Lv9" to 7,2 or something. also why is the hardest 3 diff have the same HP OD xD lmao i messed up somewhere fixed

[Quiescence Lv. 21]

00:03:381 - http://puu.sh/nndtB/81fc46e1c9.jpg
I guess this could be more accurate to the pitch i missed this too somehow fixed

00:10:487 (10487|2) - 00:11:750 (11750|2) - intentionnaly missing W? Sounds its like - 00:11:118 (11118|0) - and others. There is more like this though

00:12:855 (12855|1) - remove W? if its intentional, why - 00:11:592 (11592|1) - 00:10:329 (10329|2) - etc doesnt? for 00:12:697 (12697|1,12855|1,13013|3,13171|0) - there are piano sounds, but for everything else you highlighted there arent any piano sounds.

00:17:118 (17118|1) - move to 1, seems it doesnt suit well because its jacking with a totally different instrument - 00:17:276 (17276|1) -

00:18:381 (18381|3) - to 1, likely the same reason above ^ well i wasnt too particular about whether or not there were1/2 stacks here because this is the hardest diff but since you mentioned it why not just remove them altogether

00:20:276 (20276|2) - separate the HS. dione

00:30:302 - the 1/4 noise still continues, add note nope it doesnt

00:32:829 - ^ having no earphones must suck

00:40:092 - 00:40:250 - seems worthy to be mapped, the sfx still continue. so add note here was the original for this section, but i felt that the significance of 00:40:013 (40013|1,40171|2,40329|3,40487|2) - is diminished by the filling in of 1/4s, so i decided against it. after all the 1/4s there are barellyyyy audible even on 25% with headpones, so yeah.

00:40:644 (40644|2) - this is low synth, it shouldnt be double. delete
00:41:750 (41750|3) - ^
00:41:434 (41434|2) - ^
00:50:434 (50434|3) - ^
00:50:750 (50750|2) - ^
00:52:329 (52329|0,52408|3) - ^
it will makes this diff overmapped
(I didnt point it all tho, surely you can notice something similar) idk about the whole overmapping thing. maybe it is a little dumpy, but these are pretty easy to clean up i guess. ill do these later if time need be

01:09:934 (69934|2,70013|0,70250|3) - how about 2|3|3 repectively? just suggesting wanted to have a thrill kind of feel to these patterns here

01:19:802 - missing synth feecx

01:42:381 (102381|3,102539|3,102855|3,102855|2) - wut? overmap m8. and srsly - 01:42:855 (102855|3,102855|1,102855|2) - there is not even enough noise for 3 notes.

idk about kiai section here, triple chordjack is just...... weird here. refer to above reply, also id mention that if time is proper ill see if i will clean it up a bit

02:02:592 - this could be triple-d. also you can add some SVs starting from here to follow the songs feel didnt want SVs, didnt want minijacks. i tried SVs once, i hated them

[Tranquilty Lv.18]

00:06:223 (6223|1,6381|2,6381|3) - 4|23 respectively, for variation made it slightly different, but kept the 3 note stacks

01:24:855 - missing an LN ignoring the background pulls in this case, only mapping to the obvious ones

[Repose Lv. 13]

01:24:855 - missing instrument? same as above

01:42:697 (102697|0) - better move it to 3, its not the same instrument like - 01:42:381 (102381|0,102539|0) - so no need to be jacked, this is applied to all similar pattern in kiai maybe i did it, idk im not particular about the placement of the notes in this sense because what i like to focus on now here is the stacking of the notes so

sorry if my mod is quite poor now, I dont use earphones now ;w; dont worry, anything helps
Good luck Since when touhou have song like this? lol when touhou wasnt shit (it never wasnt doe)

Lenfried- wrote:

yay good music

great rice. No mod for you. That's how good it is.

*throw le stars

yudhajs wrote:

Hi im new at modding
let's start

col |1|2|3|4

Lull_lv.7

00:04:487 make LN stops at 00:05:118 to represent the long piano sound
00:09:539 make LN stops at 00:10:171 same reason
00:14:592 make LN stops at 00:15:223 same reason
00:24:697 make LN stops at 00:25:329 same reason
00:29:750 make LN stops at 00:30:381 again to represent the long piano sound
00:34:802 make LN stops at 00:35:434 same reason all above rejected, LNs are here to follow the sub piano sounds on 1/2s, not as filler for long piano notes.
00:29:592 delete como estas theres a synth sound there
00:33:066 |4 move to 00:33:066 |3 done, also dont put them | right beside the timing points kinda messes them up a bit
00:39:223 LN here stops at 00:39:855 was following the bubbly synth in the music
00:39:855 make LN stops at 00:40:487 is the above the same as this lol
if you make pattern like that in 00:03:855 do it the same at 01:04:487 onwards (the one that have same sound)
again if you make pattern like that in 01:10:802 do it the same at 01:31:013 onwards (the one that have same sound) missed that section, fixed a couple of things

Rest_Lv.9

00:04:487 make LN stops at 00:05:118 you know what's the reason
00:09:539 Make LN stops at 00:10:171
00:39:855 |3 move to 00:39:855 |2 and add LN stops at 00:40:487 all above rejected, LNs are here to follow the sub piano sounds on 1/2s, not as filler for long piano notes.
00:00:855 |1 move to 00:00:855 |2 avoid unnecessary jacks (notes in 1 line)
00:03:066 |4 move to 00:03:066 |2 jacks are intentionallllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll
00:05:908 until 00:06:381 make it stairs and again same reason as above avoid unnecessary jacks they are intneitoetantionallllll feelsbadman
00:20:434 |1 move to 00:20:434|2 in ten tion alz
starting from there remove the jacks (when there is a jack of course) (move the note) 00:20:276 until 00:39:223 asfadfsadsfasdafsadfsadfsa
00:39:223 make double see what you mean, dont wish to make this an impact because what id like to focus on here is the minimalistic feel of the piano notes here
jack again here 01:01:487 avoid jacks lanoitnentni
01:03:381 add a note
01:03:539 same ^
01:08:434 add a note
01:08:513 same ^
01:10:171 you know what am i gonna say
01:19:644 you know what am i gonna say maybe it didnt seem too clear so ill just make it certain here: i dont want LNs here because itll just clog things up, and given how i already mentioned that i use LNs to follow the 1/2 sub piano notes, i didnt put LNs here. anyway i did edit this section according to what i drew from your mod so yeah

the main topic here that is your beatmap has the same problem so it will be easier to fix that beatmap asdffasdfsf
overall good map thanks i guess
P.S if that beatmap is a hard diff you can add jacks they arent hard to hit you know

rinaldi28 wrote:

HI mod from my queue hi

1|2|3|4

Lull_Lv.7

00:53:276 (53276|3,53434|1) - delete ? nope
00:53:118 - add LN end 00:53:592 -
00:55:644 - ^
00:58:171 - ^ not meant to be easy as fuck, notes are needed to follow the diff curve properly

01:45:066 (105066|1,105223|3) - delete ?
01:44:908 - add LN ? end 01:45:381 -
01:47:434 - ^ end 01:47:908 -
01:49:960 - add LN end 01:50:434 -
01:52:644 (112644|2,112802|0) - delete ?
01:52:487 - add LN end 01:52:960 -
01:55:013 - ^ end 01:55:487 -
01:57:539 - ^ end 01:58:013 -
02:00:066 - ^ end 02:00:539 - look above for explanation^^ all rejected as of now

Rest_Lv.9

00:39:223 - add LN ? end 00:40:487 - wanted just a singular note to signify the piano note
01:19:644 - ^ same as above
01:39:855 - ^ following drums here, everything is secondary
01:42:381 (102381|3,102539|3,103644|2,103802|0) - why not same ? rearranged
01:46:171 (106171|1,106329|3) - ^ this ?
01:51:223 (111223|1,111381|2) - ^ this ?
01:53:750 (113750|1,113908|3) - ^ this ?
01:56:276 (116276|2,116434|0) - ^ in the long run i tend to ignore pitch shifts since adhering to them strictly causes issues in how it flows so
02:07:171 (127171|1,127171|2) - move to 1 and 4 done

I think this diff Repose_Lv.13 is fine no problem this diff idk what to say to that

sorry for my mod im newbie in modding no problem at least you did your part
and sorry bad English xD seemed rudimentary enough to get the point across well

Good Luck thanks i guess

Protastic101 wrote:

Hello~ From my queue. Sorry for the long delay. no mind

General

Suggest OD for Rest be 7. sticking with 7.5
Suggest OD for Repose be 7.5 changed to 7.7
Suggest HP for Tranquility be 8. it is 8? lmao

Rest Lv_9

01:45:539 (105539|2) - I'm kind of iffy on this note. I feel like it's a ghost note, because there's only a sound ending here, not starting, so remove? there is this hihat? sound where the note is, well to be more precise there's 3. removing them makes the whole stream here kinda feel weird, since the start of the hihat? sound is pretty loud.
01:31:013 to 01:41:118 - In Lull, this section was all doubles on the downbeat. In this difficulty, they're doubles on the even downbeat and singles on the odd downbeat. Because this is supposed to be harder, I would make this whole section doubles on the downbeat, and in Lull, change it to doubles on even down beats, and singles on odd downbeats. blame my incompetency i somehow missed this lmao

Repose Lv_13

00:55:250 (55250|1) - Remove, I'm pretty sure this is a ghost note.
01:00:302 (60302|3) - ^^ it isnt tbh, there is this certain stagger to the pull here that i wanted to follow, and given how its a higher-pitch synth i decided on having streams for this part. see lv.21
01:08:434 (68434|2,68434|0) - Change to single, I think the piano plays a single note in the song, so you don't need to make it a double.
01:08:592 (68592|0,68592|3) - ^^ more of a continuity issue than a impact one. kinda decided that all piano beats here are doubles, to save the deciphering of each note to their own individuality.
01:31:013 to 01:41:118 - This section has the same structure as Lull, save for a triple at the beginning. I'd suggest something like this Where the 2nd downbeat of each measure has 2 1/4 snaps following it. The same could apply to Tranquility, but keep the triples. did something to something, now it should be different for each diff
01:44:039 (104039|2) - Remove, ghost note? background synth
01:59:513 - Add note? Ignore if you're following the synth. doubles=clap, singles=drum/synth
02:02:197 (122197|2) - Remove, ghost note. the stagger in the synth should be more obvious here

Tranquility Lv_18

00:32:513 (32513|3) - Remove, ghost note. background synth, isnt obvious but its there
00:36:066 - Add note here? shifted the one from below, its supposed to be up one tick lol
00:37:092 (37092|1) - Remove, ghost note. feex
01:31:013 to 01:41:118 - Same thing as I said in Repose, but keep the triples. should be done

I love this song. Have a star *pew pew* thankz for zee star <3

Please update your post threat in my mod queue after you check my mod

Shiro-neechan wrote:

Hello there! Request from queue.
I'm still beginner at modding but i hope you like my mod. lets see shall we

4k Column Pattern: | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |

Rest_Lv.9

01:44:592 - add one note. LN in the way
01:46:487 - add one note. lnenenenene
01:47:118 - add one note. lnnnnnnnnnnn
01:47:197 (107197|1,107276|0,107355|3) - delete this and change to long note from 01:47:118 to 01:47:355. its the chorus, and im not really aiming for a terribly easy diff here, since id have to take into account the diff gap
01:51:539 - add one note. ln
01:52:171 - add one note NL
01:52:250 (112250|1,112250|1,112329|0,112408|3) - delete this and change to long note from 01:52:171 to 01:52:408. see above
01:54:697 - add one note. ln
01:56:592 - add one note. lenen
01:57:223 - add one note. dy/dx= LN
01:57:302 (117302|2,117381|3,117460|0) - delete this and change to long note from 01:57:223 to 01:57:460. cee abave
02:08:276 - add one note.
02:09:539 - add one note.
02:10:802 - add one note.
02:12:066 - add one note. yeah ill stop responding here im running out of things to reply with

you know, id strongly suggest you try and understand why certain things are placed in certain ways in any map, and then work your way up from there. finding out the purpose of the mapper isnt too hard, but it isnt easy either. only when you understand where the mapper comes from only then you can suggest applicable and relevant fixes and add in your own opinions.

for example, all above add notes suggestions are completely cancelled out due to the fact that this is a easy diff, and LN play with doubles in them is not appreciated that much, at least in my opinion. maybe if you could justify your reasoning behind why do you think this should be that, then it would become much easier for me to understand where you are coming from and actually take into account your point of view.

Repose_Lv.13

01:48:855 (108855|1) - move to column 4 misinterpretation of 3 note stacks, they are to follow the synth, not the drum beats. due to this all suggestions here are negated, and it isnt fair to you since im pretty sure you have your own justifications for them but what can i do you didnt write them down.
01:53:908 (113908|2) - move to column 2
01:56:276 (116276|3,116434|2,116434|2) - move to column 2.
01:56:750 (116750|2) - move to column 4 you kinda reminded me to fix something else here doe
01:58:960 (118960|0) - move to column 3

yeah same thing as whatever i said above, try not to just give one-liners and leave it at that, make your thinking processes more clear and succinct to the mapper, makes the consideration and also application of the mod infinitely easier.

Please update your post threat in my mod queue after you check my mod

Raveille wrote:

hi hi im a modder hi

|1|2|3|4|

Lv9

00:19:802 - double done
00:53:118 - change 1 note to hold until 00:53:592 - the notes already cover the synth
00:53:434 (53434|0) - change to 4 back and forth, meant to reflect the synth in the song, more patterns like these can be found for similar sections
00:53:592 - hold until 00:53:750 - didnt want to clog section with 1/4 LNs, after all ive established the fact here that the short and sweet synths represent the notes

Lv13

01:48:697 (108697|3,108855|1) - change both notes to 1 seems like a lot of people miss out on the fact the the stacks here represent the synths, not the drums. representation of drums are only present in the higher diffs. fixed other stuff you reminded me for doe

Lv16

00:41:592 - triple
00:44:118 - triple
00:46:644 - triple
00:49:171 - triple all above rejected, transition from the streams with the hands to jumps here supposed to represent the change in flow to follow the synths
02:04:487 (124487|2) - hold change to normal note covers the pretty muffled synth sounds the next jumpstream follows

Lv18

01:53:197 (113197|2,113276|1,113276|3,113434|1,113434|2,113434|3) - a little uncomfortable for me here, maybe change
01:53:197 (113197|2) - to 2, 01:53:276 (113276|1) - to 3 done
02:04:487 (124487|3) - hold change to normal note... why Lv21 does not have long note? >_> as stated in 16, as for the inclusion of streams for 21 its just cuz 21 is supposed to be the hardest diff so subbing the LNs out for streams kinda exemplifies the difficulty

Lv21

00:56:750 (56750|0,56908|0,57066|0,57223|0,57381|0,57539|0) - a bit exhaustive in this column? maybe switch some notes over to other cols was intentional, listen to the back and forth of the synths.did edit this part doe should be much easier to see the stackings
02:12:697 - want a hold here ....? noep

jeez is this song good (and modded so well i can't mod better XD) , plz ranked T_T good luck thanks for the modz, idk whether rank is even possible for me though

Edit: fuck it gonna shoot a star here, this is just too good, also SG power thanks for the star too, and yeah its kinda hard to come across someone from SG on here sometimes

Davin Fortune wrote:

Hi o/ hi

Mod request via queue

MOD STATUS : FINISHED
Note : Never apply when it's unfinished :3

Column : 1-2-3-4-5-6-7-8-9

REPOSE

I use 5% on hitsound, so the real piano sound from mp3 will heard to judge the pattern

00:00:381 - make this into 1 consider the volume is lower than 00:00:539 - (keep the one at col 1 for pitch stuff)(look at 00:01:171 (1171|3,1329|1,1329|0) - as reference for this mod) yeah but theres a lower pitched piano following along the higher pitched one at a lower octave at parts like 00:00:066 (66|3,66|2,223|0,223|1,381|2,381|0,539|3,539|1) - and 00:01:329 (1329|0,1329|1) - so thats why theyre doubles

00:02:434 (2434|2) - move to 2, since it's the repeative with 00:02:118 (2118|1) - i choose playability over pitch but meh since its suggested why not

00:07:487 (7487|1) - ^ ee

00:02:750 (2750|3,2908|0) - delete this, i want to keep them in a note and in that pattern. Left into only a note(col 2 and col 3 one) cause the drum isn't deep as 00:02:592 (2592|0,2592|3,3066|0,3066|3) - same rationale as above, but i see whatchu mean. whr them drums doe

00:07:802 (7802|0,7802|2,7960|1,7960|3) - ^ ee

00:05:434 - delete the notes at here, cause it's ghost and i try to test it and it's good without it what mate theres piano there piano theres what

00:15:066 (15066|0) - delete this, the sound you want to notice is a part of the chord 00:14:908 (14908|1,14908|2) - , just give you note that it's different with other note like 00:14:434 (14434|2,15697|3) - after the drum they are covered with piano its the same sound as 00:14:592 (14592|0,14671|1) - ,also ensures continuity with the streams of 1/2 here

00:25:092 (25092|3) - ^ ee

00:21:934 (21934|2,22013|3,22092|0,22171|1,22250|2,22329|3) - why suddenly it become unconsistant pattern like this!?, this pattern will call as fine if you follow other pattern 00:23:276 (23276|2,23434|1,23513|2,23592|3,23750|1,23750|0) -

00:24:460 (24460|0,24539|1,24618|2,24697|3,24776|1,24855|0) - ^

00:26:987 (26987|2,27066|1,27144|0,27223|3,27302|2,27381|1) - ^ woo swole mate but theres a synth sound there

00:25:171 (25171|0) - i think just move this to other column, like 4 is nice since it will make it look like a short trill this wasnt what i wanted to go for

00:28:960 (28960|2) - ^ ee

00:29:513 (29513|0,29592|2,29987|0) - delete pls, ghost here :3 yup synth

Continue Later '-'

Okay FAK THE MOD IS MISSING CAUSE I DID A MISTAKE, >.> erm so what am i supposed to do then
sorry im done!, i mod this tired af and it's missing i guess its fine? never mind from what i gathered it seems as though you didnt like modding this either

Abraxos wrote:

Okay FAK THE MOD IS MISSING CAUSE I DID A MISTAKE, >.> erm so what am i supposed to do then
sorry im done!, i mod this tired af and it's missing i guess its fine? never mind from what i gathered it seems as though you didnt like modding this either

thanks for the mod

DixonBlackwing wrote:

nah Abraaaaaaaa :3 a link to eter's userpage?
M4M

[Lull_Lv.7]
00:19:802 - maybe delete this? considering that you didn't make doubles for other sound that's quite strong. yeah and im supposed to have a note with a crash at 00:20:276 (20276|1) - too all done btw
00:26:592 (26592|0,26750|0) - Move these to the right 1 time? because of the way you map at 00:29:118 (29118|2) - dk what that links to but i guess i fixed it
00:55:329 - make this part similar with 02:02:276 (122276|0) - ? done
01:06:223 (66223|2) - move to 1? kinda weird with the jack since section similar with this doesn't mapped jacked before. have i never? for consistency's sake i changed it so never mind then
02:01:329 - add this? you also add at 00:39:223 - 01:19:644 - selected two are LNs that follow the piano, while the one you suggested i add follows the synth. bass beats being irrelevant, i placed notes there to give the piano there the impact it needs, whilst the one suggested i decided that i wanted it to follow the synths closer, not the piano. so yeah.

[Quiescence_Lv.21]
00:26:592 (26592|0,26750|0,26908|0,27223|0,27381|0,27539|0) - rip my left index hand, move 00:26:592 (26592|0,26750|0) - to 2, it's more comfortable to hit, and left hand doesn't get tired easily. triple stacks are intentional, follows the drum i did re-arrange the stacks here to alleviate the bias doe
00:30:934 - miss 1/4? because in this section you started to follow 1/4 ... 1/4s in this section follow A) hihat sounds and B) the bubbly synth made more obvious here 00:32:039 (32039|2,32118|1,32197|3,32276|1,32355|0) -
00:46:171 - add, high pitch melody, similar like 00:43:644 - done
00:52:408 (52408|3,52408|2) - TBH, this kind of double notes using is questionable for me, yes it has a sound, but it's almost barely heard.. please considered this. i have to admit, it might be a little dumpy. what i do intend to know is whether or not these patterns are inherently disgusting to play, and from my testplays i dont feel like so. if you can convince me otherwise that this pattern does not accurately reflect the music at the point and is bad to play then ill change it. after all, on 25% there is a visible stagger in the pull of the synth there, so theres that.
01:00:223 - i would recommend to add here, melody sound, and at the end of LN. done
01:01:487 (61487|0,61644|0) - move this to 3, and then move 01:01:802 (61802|1) - to 1. i know you want to keep consistency with 01:06:539 - , but my left hand ;w; should be less biased now
01:04:171 (64171|0,64171|1) - move to 3-4? the pitch suited for it imo. done
01:05:355 - missing 1/4 sound? residual sound from 01:05:276 (65276|0) - , i did follow this sound back then but i decided against it
01:13:171 - delete one note? deon
01:41:434 (101434|3,101908|2) - Ctrl+G /my ocd strikes again ;w; lmao done
01:42:381 - please need cymbal ;w; but theres the finish at 01:42:381 (102381|3) - ?
01:49:960 (109960|1,109960|0) - to 3-4? because at the sound like this, you started the doubles at different column than 01:50:118 (110118|1,110118|0) - true, done
01:53:908 (113908|1) - move this to 4? omg ;w; cleaned up this section
01:57:855 (117855|1) - i would move this to 3 because of 01:52:802 (112802|3,112802|2) - , and then move 01:58:013 (118013|3) - to 2? oo nice done

[Tranquility_Lv.18]
00:59:908 (59908|1) - delete this, lv 21 doesn't have note. done
01:19:644 (79644|1) - 1 one is enough for me, because there's already LN, and to differentiate from 01:20:908 - done
02:02:118 - This part is jumptrill, while 01:00:223 - = single stream? end of chorus, decided to end it off on a high note
02:04:487 (124487|0) - move to 2? just for the neatness. lol ok

[Repose_Lv.13]
00:25:644 (25644|1,25802|3) - Ctrl+G this? make a bit different with 00:25:013 (25013|2,25013|1) - ,and more flowy. woooo
00:40:644 (40644|1) - move to 1? this kind of 00:40:487 (40487|1,40487|2,40644|2,40644|1) - is ... yeah.. done
00:51:223 (51223|0) - move this to 3, and then move 00:51:381 (51381|1) - to 1? mini one hand trill after triple jack is kinda.. done
01:42:697 (102697|1) - at least move this to 3? having 01:42:381 (102381|0,102381|1,102539|0,102697|1,102697|0) - maybe isn't that great idea. done

[Rest_Lv.09]
00:35:434 - personally i would move the jack at column 4, something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4783184 ? because there's already 00:34:171 (34171|0,34329|0) - good point
00:39:223 - why not cover with LN? there's other places where you didn't cover this too, maybe intentional, but cover would filling it better for me. maybe me, but the piano here indicates the instantaneous press of the piano key, so the gap is like how the sounds resonates you know what i mean
00:56:434 (56434|0) - move this to 2? the flow would make much more sense. done
01:09:066 (69066|2,69223|1,69381|0,69539|3) - Ctrl+H this? similar to how you did 00:06:855 (6855|3,7013|2,7171|1,7329|0) - and 00:08:434 (8434|0,8592|1,8750|2,8908|3) - done
02:01:329 - not add? :v deon

Ok i forgot lv.16, but rip my brain XD.. rip 16
Good luck for your map, you should get it ranked thanks for the mod, and yeah ill try to see which bn is gracious enough to follow up with my map

Sorry my mod is too cancerous you may even feed it to the salmon , how to mod like you abra senpai ;w;

DixonBlackwing wrote:

nah Abraaaaaaaa :3

Sorry my mod is too cancerous you may even feed it to the salmon , how to mod like you abra senpai ;w;

your mod had the most number of green highlights out of the 3rd page, so thats a good thing. or maybe it just shows how retarded narrowminded stubborn i am. anywho its still a great mod, pretty much seemed to helped clean up the remainder of stuff left festering in the charts. thanks again zz

ByeForNow wrote:

Late mod, yurushite kudasai! ><;; hii

Please note that these are only suggestion, always feel free to reject them.
Since there's bookmark being used in the editor, ▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄ = Bookmark
The mods doesn't really have much explanation because it's all mostly pattern and pitch check.
Other than that, let's begin.

Mod

Column 4k = 1|2|3|4

Lull_Lv.7

Done through IRC

01:09 ByeForNow: Soo I was wondering
01:10 ByeForNow: IRC for awhile?
01:10 Abraxos: yea
01:10 Abraxos: oh ok
01:10 *ByeForNow is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/888941 An - artcore JINJA [Lull_Lv.7]]
01:10 Abraxos: if thats easier to handle
01:10 ByeForNow: I dunno if some of my mods will still be applicable, we'll see
01:10 ByeForNow: xD
01:11 Abraxos: we'll see then
01:11 ByeForNow: First of all, 00:00:066 - 01:10:802 - I think the whole thing is fine except for some notes for piano sounds.
01:11 ByeForNow: Hence most mods for this part will be for the piano sound and pattern.
01:11 Abraxos: hm ok
01:11 ByeForNow: 00:00:855 (855|1,1013|0,1171|2,1329|3) - Move to 1,2,4,3 accordingly? Feels better?
01:12 Abraxos: hm
01:12 Abraxos: originally 00:00:855 (855|1,1013|0) - was a jack
01:12 Abraxos: 00:01:013 (1013|0,1171|2) -
01:12 Abraxos: and the pitch difference was exemplified by the gap
01:13 Abraxos: i tried to keep that exemplification by keeping the gap there so
01:13 ByeForNow: At first I thought maybe it should be a jack too but then
01:13 Abraxos: i see what you mean doe the simplification of the stairs
01:13 ByeForNow: I kept your request where just to help improving the maps to be smoother
01:13 ByeForNow: Which is
01:13 ByeForNow: spreading of notes
01:13 ByeForNow: so yeah
01:14 Abraxos: hm
01:14 Abraxos: i understand
01:14 Abraxos: i do still want to keep that gap so
01:15 Abraxos: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4784269
01:15 Abraxos: should be more direct to play then
01:15 ByeForNow: Ah okay
01:15 Abraxos: i shoulve done the staggering on the second plane
01:15 Abraxos: hm
01:16 Abraxos: yeah should be ok there now
01:18 ByeForNow: 00:03:381 (3381|2,3539|1,3697|0,3855|3) - Move to 2,3,4,2 accordingly?
01:18 ByeForNow: I think it'll still be smooth
01:18 ByeForNow: just a little correcting on pitch.
01:19 Abraxos: done
01:19 Abraxos: i did 2 3 4 1 doe
01:19 Abraxos: it is smoother yea
01:19 Abraxos: than before i mean
01:22 ByeForNow: 00:06:855 - 00:07:487 - Try this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4784309
01:23 Abraxos: done something similar, shifted the LN on top
01:23 Abraxos: to 1
01:24 ByeForNow: 00:08:434 (8434|0,8592|1,8750|2,8908|3) - Move to 1,3,2,4 accordingly? Feels better?
01:24 Abraxos: oo
01:24 Abraxos: done
01:25 ByeForNow: 00:09:539 (9539|0) - Move to 3? Feels better.
01:25 Abraxos: yup
01:25 Abraxos: done
01:26 ByeForNow: 00:11:276 (11276|0,11434|3) - Move to 3,1 accordingly? Feels better.
01:27 Abraxos: hm
01:27 Abraxos: seems fine
01:27 Abraxos: done
01:27 ByeForNow: 00:13:013 (13013|2,13171|0) - Move to 2,3 accordingly? Feels better.
01:28 Abraxos: done
01:29 ByeForNow: 00:13:644 (13644|0,13802|1,13960|3) - Move to 2,4,1? Feels better.
01:29 Abraxos: ^^
01:29 ByeForNow: Oh
01:30 Abraxos: ?
01:30 ByeForNow: What does your ' ^^ ' mean? xD
01:30 Abraxos: same as above LOL
01:30 ByeForNow: lmao LOL
01:30 ByeForNow: Silly me
01:30 Abraxos: mainly id accept these arrangements because i dont really have much to say or defend in lower difficulties
01:31 ByeForNow: 00:15:223 (15223|1,15697|0) - LN at 1 and note at 2? Feels better
01:31 Abraxos: yup done
01:32 ByeForNow: 00:16:013 (16013|3,16171|0,16329|2,16487|3) - Move to 3,2,4,1 accordingly? Feels better.
01:33 Abraxos: done
01:34 ByeForNow: 00:28:329 (28329|0) - Move to 3? Feels better.
01:35 Abraxos: done
01:35 Abraxos: re-arranged the streams above it too
01:35 ByeForNow: From where to where?
01:35 ByeForNow: Oh nvm
01:35 ByeForNow: xDDD
01:36 Abraxos: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4784378
01:36 Abraxos: oh lol okden
01:36 ByeForNow: Ah okay that works :3
01:37 ByeForNow: 00:33:381 (33381|0) - Move to 3?
01:37 ByeForNow: All the mods reason is ' Feels better ' so I don't think I'll need to keep repeating it. xDD
01:38 Abraxos: yeah dont worry im accepting everything too
01:38 Abraxos: done
01:38 ByeForNow: 00:34:802 (34802|0) - Move to 3
01:38 Abraxos: ^^
01:39 ByeForNow: 00:38:908 (38908|1,39066|2) - Move to 3,2 accordingly?
01:39 Abraxos: done
01:40 ByeForNow: 00:51:066 (51066|3) - Move to 2?
01:41 Abraxos: done
01:41 ByeForNow: 00:51:539 (51539|0) - Move to 3
01:42 Abraxos: `should be ok
01:43 ByeForNow: 00:57:539 (57539|0,57697|2,57855|1,58013|3) - Move to 3,2,1,3 accordingly?
01:43 Abraxos: yep done
01:44 ByeForNow: 01:00:381 - Missing LN? Refer to 00:55:171 (55171|1,55329|3,55644|2) - 
01:44 Abraxos: yeah my mistake lmao
01:45 ByeForNow: 01:01:802 (61802|0,61960|2) - Move to 3,1 accordingly?
01:46 Abraxos: wheee done
01:46 ByeForNow: 01:06:539 (66539|3,66697|2,66855|1,67013|0) - Move to 3,1,4,3 accordingly?
01:47 Abraxos: done
01:47 ByeForNow: 01:08:750 (68750|0) - Move to 3?
01:47 Abraxos: ^^^
01:48 ByeForNow: 01:10:802 - 01:20:908 - Is fine to me in my opinion
01:48 ByeForNow: Just a question out of curiousity
01:48 Abraxos: ?
01:48 ByeForNow: 01:10:802 - 01:19:329 - Are the notes placed in a pattern?
01:49 Abraxos: a expanded kind of jumpstream i would guess
01:49 Abraxos: i didnt want to have any 3 note stacks mainly
01:50 ByeForNow: Ah okay.
01:50 ByeForNow: I'm not exactly confident about this because of many instruments layering but
01:50 ByeForNow: 01:23:118 - Should add a note?
01:51 ByeForNow: 01:24:855 - Here too
01:51 Abraxos: thats the sub violinist
01:51 Abraxos: wanted to follow the most prominent one to emphasize the singularity of this section
01:51 Abraxos: i.e. the violin pulls
01:54 ByeForNow: 01:28:013 - 01:28:960 - Sounds just like 01:22:960 - 01:23:908 - in my opinion
01:54 ByeForNow: But the first part I listed has 7 notes
01:54 ByeForNow: The second part I listed only has 6 notes.
01:55 ByeForNow: 01:28:013 (88013|2,88171|3,88329|0,88487|1,88644|2,88802|3,88960|0) - , 01:22:960 (82960|2,83276|3,83434|0,83592|1,83750|3,83908|0) - 
01:55 Abraxos: id have to disagree there
01:56 ByeForNow: Mmm okay, understood.
01:56 Abraxos: the only thing that i could substantiate is 01:28:013 (88013|2,88171|3,88329|0,88487|1,88644|2,88802|3,88960|0) -
01:56 Abraxos: i mean
01:56 Abraxos: 01:29:449 -
01:57 ByeForNow: Alright
01:57 ByeForNow: 01:26:434 (86434|0) - Move to 2?
01:58 Abraxos: yup
01:58 ByeForNow: 01:27:539 (87539|2,87697|1) - Move to 2,3 accordingly?
01:59 Abraxos: done
01:59 ByeForNow: 01:31:013 - 01:42:381 - Is fine in my opinion.
01:59 Abraxos: hm ok
02:00 ByeForNow: 01:45:381 (105381|2) - Move to 1?
02:00 Abraxos: done
02:01 ByeForNow: 01:47:592 (107592|3,107750|2,107908|0) - Move to 2,1,4 accordingly?
02:01 Abraxos: yea
02:02 ByeForNow: 02:02:592 - 02:06:855 - This part
02:02 ByeForNow: No offence but it feels... kinda plain? DX
02:03 Abraxos: true
02:03 Abraxos: but i cant really afford to do anything else in terms of placing notes
02:04 ByeForNow: There's actually pitch in that part I think?
02:04 Abraxos: maybe i could shift some of them around so they come down less expected
02:04 Abraxos: there is
02:05 Abraxos: i dont really think pitch shifting there is necessary doe since what i was following was the bass after all
02:05 ByeForNow: Ahhh
02:05 ByeForNow: That explains it
02:05 Abraxos: but if you do have suggestions then i wanna see
02:06 ByeForNow: Alright soo
02:06 Abraxos: soooo
02:06 ByeForNow: I'll tell you to shift the notes around until the end of the timing I listed and you can take a look about it?
02:06 Abraxos: yeah why not
02:06 ByeForNow: 02:03:066 (123066|1) - Move to 4
02:06 ByeForNow: 02:03:539 (123539|1,123539|2) - Move one column to the right
02:07 ByeForNow: 02:04:013 (124013|3,124013|2) - Arrange as 12 jump
02:07 ByeForNow: 02:04:487 (124487|2) - Move to 4
02:07 ByeForNow: 02:04:960 (124960|1) - Move to 3
02:07 ByeForNow: 02:05:908 (125908|2) - Move to 2
02:08 ByeForNow: 02:06:855 (126855|1) - Move to 3
02:08 ByeForNow: There.
02:09 Abraxos: should be done
02:09 ByeForNow: Wait change of plans a little at the last part
02:09 ByeForNow: 02:06:381 - as 34 jump
02:09 ByeForNow: 02:06:855 - as 12 jump
02:10 Abraxos: o ok
02:10 ByeForNow: Mhm.
02:10 ByeForNow: Aaaand
02:10 ByeForNow: Done for Lull.
02:10 ByeForNow: =3
02:11 Abraxos: are you going to mod the others? cuz if so id suggest you post on the forums
02:11 ByeForNow: Yeah I'm editing the others
02:11 ByeForNow: tomorrow's a public holiday so
02:11 Abraxos: o ok
02:11 Abraxos: yeah
02:11 Abraxos: true
02:11 ByeForNow: I can finally catch my breath from school and mod -_-
02:12 Abraxos: thats good

to make things easier ill just reply with e in colors to signify yes, no (if no theres most likely a reason that was mentioned above) or just pure blue like this one (idk what to call cases like these)

Rest_Lv.9

00:01:329 (1329|3) - Move to 2? Feels better? 00:01:329 (1329|3) - roughly same pitch as 00:00:539 (539|3) - so i tried to keep them in the same column. move something else though, should flow better
00:01:960 (1960|1,2118|3) - Move to 4,2 accordingly? Feels better?
00:02:118 (2118|1) - Move to 3? Feels better?
00:03:066 (3066|3) - Move to 3? Feels better?
00:03:697 (3697|0,3855|3) - Move to 4,3 accordingly? Feels better?
If above is accepted, 00:04:487 (4487|2) - Move to 2? Feels better?
00:05:118 (5118|1) - Move to 3? Feels better?
00:09:539 (9539|0) - Move to 2? Feels better? all above accepted, also moved some notes here so it flows better, should be good now.

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00:10:329 - Add note? Piano sound? 00:00:066 (66|3,223|1,381|0,539|3) - Part sounds similar to this?
00:15:381 - Add note? Piano sound? ^ and above, not really a piano sound there so nope
00:11:276 (11276|0,11434|3) - Move to 3,1 accordingly? Feels better? rearranged
00:12:697 - 00:13:171 - Try this? https://i.gyazo.com/dc0397b5c101464a7d1 ... a79be1.png e
00:14:276 (14276|1) - Move to 1? Feels better? e
00:14:592 (14592|3) - Move to 3? ^ doesnt fit right with me, makes stacks
00:14:908 (14908|0) - Move to 4? ^ e
00:15:539 (15539|3,15697|0) - Ctrl+H? Feels better? e
00:17:118 (17118|2,17276|3) - Move to 4,3 accordingly? Feels better? e
00:20:750 (20750|1,20908|0) - Move to 1,2 accordingly? Feels better? e
00:27:855 (27855|3,28013|3) - Move to column 3? Feels better? e
If above mod is accepted, 00:28:171 (28171|2) - Move to 2? e
00:41:434 (41434|1,41434|0,41592|3,41592|2,41750|0,41750|1,41908|3,41908|2) - Ctrl+H? Feels better? is there a difference lmao
00:42:539 (42539|1,42539|0) - Move as 24 or 34 jump? Feels better? column 1 too empty at this point
00:44:750 (44750|3,44750|2,45066|0,45066|1) - Ctrl+H? Feels better? i kinda think of pitch way differently from the rest, my ascending and descending order of it varies from section to section, and in this case i had these spaced out jumps go to the left, the thrills to the right (kind of)
00:52:329 (52329|1,52644|2,52960|3) - Ctrl+H then move one column to the right? Feels better? e
00:56:434 (56434|1) - Move to 1? Feels better? e
00:56:908 - 00:58:171 - Try this? https://i.gyazo.com/7458df36521d3d6cd91 ... 93b92c.png recognized the issue here, rearranged so it reads easier.
00:58:487 (58487|2) - Move to 4? Feels better? moved in accordance with above

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01:01:802 (61802|1,61960|0) - Move one column to the right? Feels better? e
01:04:171 (64171|3,64329|1,64487|2) - Move to 2,4,3 accordingly? Feels better? e
If above is accepted, 01:05:118 (65118|0) - Move to 2? Feels better? e
01:06:539 (66539|1,66697|1,66855|2,67013|3) - Move to 1,1,4,3 accordingly? Feels better? e
01:09:066 (69066|1,69223|2,69381|3,69539|0) - Move to 3,2,1,2 accordingly? Feels better? moved differently

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01:10:802 - 01:20:908 - I think it's okay, no suggestion yay

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01:20:908 (80908|1) - Move to 3? Feels better? e
01:21:697 (81697|3,81855|0) - Ctrl+H? Feels better? e

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01:36:381 (96381|2,96381|0,96697|3,96697|1) - Ctrl+H? Feels better? no diff to me
01:40:802 (100802|1,100802|0) - Move one column to the right? Feels better? changed in own way, didnt want 3 note stacking
01:41:908 (101908|1) - Move to 3? Feels better? e

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01:43:960 (103960|2) - Move to 2 then, 01:44:118 (104118|1,104434|3,104434|2,104592|0,104750|3) - Ctrl+H? then, 01:44:434 (104434|0,104592|3) - move to 4,3 accordingly? Feels better. changed own way, tried pitch stuff doe
01:48:855 (108855|1,108855|0) - Switch place with one another, Feels better with LN placed at 1 instead? Not sure actually because I liked
01:58:802 e(118802|1,118802|0,118960|2,118960|3,119118|0,119118|1,119276|3,119434|1,119592|2,119592|3,119750|1,119750|0,119908|3) - better as the LNs were placed according to the pitch.
02:01:013 (121013|0,121171|1) - Move to 2,1 accordingly? Feels better. e

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02:02:592 - 02:06:855 - Feels plain, you can do something like what I suggested for 'Lull' difficulty at this part. e
02:07:487 (127487|2,127487|1) - Move as 14 Jump? Feels better than placing it as a jack. e

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02:08:118 - 02:08:750 - Something's wrong here I think? Refer to your Lull difficulty, I think there's 3 different pitch piano sounds. should make more sense now

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Repose_Lv.13

00:00:381 (381|2,381|0,539|3,539|1) - Ctrl+H? Feels better? i really see no difference tbh
00:03:066 (3066|0,3066|3) - Move as 23 jump? Feels better? e
00:05:908 (5908|1,6066|1,6223|0,6381|2,6381|3) - Rearrange as this? https://i.gyazo.com/c6b8e08f65a62016e3d ... 96d103.png Feels better? something like that in the image
00:08:434 (8434|2,8592|1,8750|3) - Move to 4,3,2 accordingly? Feels better? e
00:09:539 (9539|3) - Move to 3? Feels better? e

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00:13:329 (13329|1,13408|0,13487|2) - Move to 4,3,1 accordingly? Feels better? e
00:15:855 (15855|0,15934|2,16013|1) - Move one column to the right? Feels better? e
If above is accepted, 00:16:171 (16171|3) - Move to 2? Feels better? e
00:18:460 (18460|1,18539|0) - Move one column to the right? Feels better, following 00:17:118 (17118|0,17197|1,17276|2) - no harm in staggering this stream imo
00:19:487 - 00:19:802 - Try this? https://i.gyazo.com/8683cdd1e465b803d87 ... 903662.png Feels better? e
00:21:855 - 00:22:644 - Try this? https://i.gyazo.com/dce45e96149f071c289 ... a466bd.png Feels better? the synths dont really show a certain distinction in pitch that i want to laboriously stick to
If above is accepted, 00:22:802 (22802|1) - Move to 1 for spread. e
00:23:513 (23513|2,23592|3) - Move to 4,3? Feels better? e
00:24:381 - 00:24:855 - Try this? https://i.gyazo.com/c1f4fc3cd292b3ca869 ... 771bfd.png Feels better? e, also another reason: i wouldnt really want these streams to have thrills in them, however small, since i wanted to go for a more flowy kind of thing with them
00:27:539 (27539|0) - Move to 3? Feels better? e
00:29:592 (29592|2,29671|3,29750|0,29829|1,29908|2) - Re-arrange as this? https://i.gyazo.com/456d3d685c0a5a433fb ... f6ecb7.png Feels better? e
If above is accepted, 00:30:223 (30223|0) - Move to 4 for spread. e
00:31:960 - 00:32:750 - Try this? https://i.gyazo.com/1150cfa9a686a2f6334 ... 0ea368.png e
00:35:039 (35039|3,35118|0,35118|2,35197|1) - Rearrange as 3,12,3 accordingly? Feels better? e
00:39:776 (39776|1,39855|2) - Ctrl+H? Feels better? e
00:40:802 (40802|3) - Move to 3? Feels better? e
00:41:908 (41908|2) - Move to 4? Feels better, following 00:41:592 (41592|0,41592|3) - and above: i didnt want 3 note stacks, also at this point i didnt adhere to pitch as strictly as before so
00:42:539 (42539|1,42539|0) - Move one column to the right? Feels better? e
If above is accepted, 00:43:013 (43013|1,43013|2) - Move one column to the right? Feels better? and above: didnt want those spaced out thrill kind of pattern, also the jacks are spread out with that config.
00:43:802 (43802|3) - Move to 1? Feels better? e
If above is accepted, 00:43:960 (43960|0,43960|2,44118|0,44118|1) - Move one column to the right and 00:44:276 e(44276|3,44276|1,44434|3,44434|2) - Move one column to the left? Feels better? e
00:50:750 (50750|0) - Move to 2? Feels better? triple stack follows synth in this section
00:52:487 (52487|1) - Move to 3? Feels better? no jacks with LNs plz
00:53:434 (53434|0,53434|1,53592|3,53592|2) - Ctrl+H? Feels better? e
00:55:408 (55408|0,55487|1,55566|2,55644|0) - Move to 2,1,2,3 accordingly? Feels better? e
00:57:855 (57855|2,58013|0) - Move to 2,3 accordingly? Feels better? no drum following here, all synths
If above is accepted, 00:58:171 (58171|1) - Move to 1? Feels better? e

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01:06:539 (66539|3,66539|1,66697|1,66697|3) - Move one column to the left? Feels better, correcting piano pitch? e
01:09:066 (69066|1,69066|2,69223|3,69223|2) - Ctrl+H then move one column to the right? Feels better? e
01:10:171 (70171|0,70171|1) - Move one column to the right? Feels better? e

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01:10:802 - 01:20:908 - Is okay I think, no suggestion. hi

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01:22:329 (82329|2,82487|3) - Ctrl+H then move two columns to the right? Feels better? e

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01:41:118 (101118|2,101276|1,101434|0) - Ctrl+H then move one clumn to the left? Feels better? e

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01:43:960 (103960|3,103960|0,104039|2,104118|1,104197|0,104276|3,104355|2,104434|0) - Something feels wrong here, no similar pattern was found later at 01:54:066 - lmao what am i doing here fixed
01:46:171 (106171|1,106329|1) - Move to 3,2 accordingly? For consistency. triple stacks follow synth so i did still remove this doe since im stupid and carried diffs over wrongly
01:46:881 (106881|1) - Delete and 01:47:039 - Add note? Is this a wrong snap? Refering to 00:55:013 - 00:55:644 - e
01:51:934 (111934|0) - Delete and 01:52:092 - Add note? Same reason as above ^ e
01:56:987 (116987|3) - Delete and 01:57:144 - Add note? ^ and above two: 01:46:802 (106802|0,106881|1,106960|2) - follow hithat, 01:47:118 (107118|2,107118|3,107197|1,107276|0,107355|2,107434|3) - the staggering synth pull sound

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02:01:329 - 02:07:644 - No suggestions, I think it's ok. hey

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02:07:644 - 02:12:697 - I think it's ok too so no suggestion. weee

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from this point on my style loses its adherence with pitch and opts for a more flowy/rigid logic that sometimes might clash with yours. you could already see some of it above, so yeah

Serenity_Lv.16

00:00:539 (539|2) - Move to 2? Feels better, following 00:00:066 (66|1,66|3) - opting for all chords to have jacks
00:01:329 (1329|1) - Move to 1? Feels better. didnt want jacking here doe
00:03:697 (3697|2,3697|1,3855|1,3855|3) - Ctrl+G? Feels better. e
00:06:381 (6381|2) - Move to 4? Feels better. e
00:08:434 (8434|0,8434|1,8592|1,8592|2,8750|2,8750|3) - Ctrl+H? Feels better. did something similar, changed the 3 note jack doe

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00:13:171 (13171|1) - Move to 3? Feels better. too right-hand biased
00:19:013 - 00:19:802 - Try this? https://i.gyazo.com/021a4850c51f978f746 ... f3f068.png Feels better? yiss
00:22:013 (22013|0) - Move to 3? Feels better? creates anchors
00:29:987 (29987|0,30066|1) - Ctrl+G? Feels better? e
If above is accepted, 00:30:223 (30223|0) - Move to 2? Feels better? e
00:32:750 (32750|0) - Move to 2? Feels better? e
00:34:723 (34723|0,34802|3) - Move to 3,2 accordingly? Feels better? fyi this is an anchor which is pretty biased on the hand that plays it imo so thats why i didnt want to move these
If above is accepted, 00:34:960 (34960|2,35039|3,35118|2) - Move to 4,3,4 accordingly then 00:35:276 (35276|0) - Move to 3? Feels better? e
00:37:723 (37723|0,37802|1) - Move one column to the right? Feels better, because 00:37:250 (37250|0,37329|1,37487|0,37566|1,37723|0,37802|1) - e
00:39:776 (39776|1,39855|2) - Ctrl+H? Feels better? e
00:41:908 (41908|2) - Move to 4? Following 00:41:592 (41592|0,41592|3) - e
00:46:802 (46802|3) - Move to 3? Following 00:46:487 (46487|1,46487|3,46644|1,46644|0) - e
00:52:329 (52329|2) - Move to 2? Feels better? e
00:55:408 (55408|0,55487|1,55566|2,55644|0) - Move to 2,1,2,3 accordingly? Feels better? e
00:56:908 (56908|3,56908|2,57066|0,57066|1,57223|2,57223|3,57381|0,57381|1) - Ctrl+H? Feels better. no diff tbh
00:57:539 - 00:58:013 - Try this? https://i.gyazo.com/debf071b0391d27c939 ... 2e2ebc.png e

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01:01:802 (61802|0,61802|1,61960|2,61960|3) - Ctrl+H? Feels better? e
01:10:013 (70013|0,70171|3,70171|2) - Move to 3,12 accordingly? Feels better? e

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01:10:802 - 01:20:908 - Is okay so I don't have any suggestion. hello

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01:26:276 (86276|2,86434|3) - Ctrl+G? Feels better? e
01:27:381 (87381|2,87539|1,87697|0) - Ctrl+H? Feels better? e
01:29:592 (89592|0) - Move to 3? Feels better? e
01:30:223 (90223|1,90539|2,90855|3) - Move to 4,3,2 accordingly then 01:31:013 (91013|1,91013|0,91013|2) - Rearrange as 134 hand? Feels better? the obsession with pitch is real

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01:32:908 (92908|3,92908|1) - Rearrange as 23 jump? Following 01:33:539 (93539|2,93539|1) - , feels better? no difference again for me imo
01:36:066 (96066|2) - Move to 1? Feels better? e
01:39:539 (99539|1) - Move to 1? Feels better? e
01:40:802 (100802|2) - Move to 4? Feels better? e
01:41:908 (101908|0) - Move to 3? Feels better? diff. column from notes below

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01:47:276 (107276|0) - Move to 3? e
01:47:118 (107118|3,107118|0,107118|2,107197|1,107276|2,107355|3,107434|1,107434|2) - Ctrl+H? Feels better? e
01:57:223 (117223|3,117223|2,117223|1,117302|0,117381|1,117460|2,117539|3,117539|0) - Ctrl+H? Feels better? diff. in direction of streams gives variety
02:00:539 (120539|0,120539|1) - Rearrange as 24 jump? Feels better? give right hand break plz

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02:03:539 (123539|2,123539|1,123539|0) - Ctrl+H? Feels better? e
02:06:223 (126223|3) - Move to 2? Feels better e
02:06:539 (126539|3,126618|0,126697|1,126776|2) - Ctrl+H then first note move to 2? Feels better. e
02:06:776 (126776|2,126855|3,127013|2,127092|3,127250|2,127329|3,127487|2,127566|3,127723|2,127802|3) - What
So,
02:07:250 (127250|2,127329|3) - Ctrl+H then move two columns to the right? Feels better.
02:07:723 (127723|3) - Move to 1? Feels better your suggestion had too many anchors so i edited them out myself. didnt want this stream to have too many thrills anyway which suggests the pretty fairly linear kind of streams here
02:07:644 - 02:08:118 - Try this? https://i.gyazo.com/bfe441ecd1439c84d6f ... d5c1ca.png e
02:08:434 (128434|3,128513|2,128592|1) - Move to 3,2,3 accordingly? Feels better? e
02:09:302 (129302|3,129381|2) - Ctrl+H then move two columns to the right? Feels better? e
02:10:013 (130013|2,130092|3) - Move to 4,3 accordingly? Feels better e
If above is accepted, 02:10:644 - 02:11:434 - Try this? https://i.gyazo.com/d05a342dd6789b037c4 ... 946b75.png above two: same reason as above, i do not want anchors doing things here like throwing people off when they play the streams.

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Tranquility_Lv.18

Not much mod because it's pretty much reversed version of Serenity so mostly I only checked the added different 1/4 streams. Sorry! >< its fine


00:09:539 (9539|1,9539|3) - Move as 23 jump? Feels better? e

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00:13:329 (13329|2,13408|3,13487|1) - Move to 4,2,3 accordingly? Feels better? e
00:19:013 - 00:19:802 - Try this? https://i.gyazo.com/375d221ccf30aae11ca ... 927fa3.png Feels better? no change this time, its a higher diff
00:41:592 (41592|2,41750|1,41750|0) - Ctrl+H? Feels better? no anchors pliz
00:46:171 (46171|2) - Move to 1? Feels better? e
If above is accepted, 00:46:329 (46329|1,46487|2,46487|0,46644|1,46644|2,46644|3) - Ctrl+H? Feels better. e
00:48:066 (48066|1,48066|2,48223|2,48223|3) - Ctrl+H? then move one column to the right? Feels better. e
00:51:855 - 00:52:329 - Try this? https://i.gyazo.com/c59158fdee9fb58271c ... d22336.png Feels better. e
00:52:960 (52960|3) - Move to 1? Feels better. e
00:59:908 - Add note? Refer to Serenity difficulty e

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01:00:697 - 01:31:013 - Not really modding here because it's reversed version of 'Serenity'

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01:31:013 - 01:42:381 - I think it's okay so no suggestion. and all above: changed a bit here and there, should at least be a bit different from the lv16 one now

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01:42:381 - 02:01:329 - ^ e

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02:07:644 - 02:12:697 - Although a little similar to 'Serenity' I think it's good so no suggestions. thats great

I feel so bad for giving you this crappy quality mod for this difficulty, should've checked this difficulty first before Serenity :/ Sorry! >< dont worry, i did edit the ending streams a bit so it reads better i guess.

Quiescence_Lv.21

00:00:855 (855|3,855|1,1013|1,1013|3) - Move one column to right left then, 00:01:171 (1171|0,1171|3) - Rearrange as 24 jump? Feels better? understand your point, but i didnt make this diff out solely sticking to pitch. i had 3 note stacks for patterns like these cause i kept thinking of how a pianist would play these notes with one hand, so the conclusion i drew from that is that the fingers of whom do three times the work, since it still has to press the notes, difference being pressing the ones on the far end. i know that sounds weird but thats just how i interpret this section.
00:07:013 (7013|1,7013|0,7171|2,7171|1) - Ctrl+G then 00:07:329 (7329|3,7329|2) - Move one column to the left? Feels better? e

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00:16:329 (16329|2) - Move to 2 then, 00:16:487 (16487|1,16644|1) - Move one column to the right? Following pattern of 00:15:223 (15223|3,15223|1,15381|3,15381|1) - did this to the one after this
00:22:013 (22013|3,22092|0) - Move to 3,4 accordingly? Feels better? anchors again
00:24:618 (24618|0,24697|3) - Move to 4,3 accordingly? Feels better? e
00:27:539 (27539|1,27618|0,27697|1) - Move to 1,2,3 accordingly? Feels better? e
00:29:592 (29592|0,29671|2,29750|1,29829|3) - Move to 3,2,3,4? Feels better? e
00:34:487 (34487|2,34566|3) - Ctrl+G? Feels better? only want one triple stack
00:37:250 (37250|3) - Move to 2? Feels better? e
00:42:302 (42302|0,42381|1) - Ctrl+G? Feels better? section now emphasizes the violins so the triple stacking for drums arent here
00:57:539 (57539|0,57539|1,57697|1,57697|2,57855|0,57855|3,57855|2) - Ctrl+H? Feels better? e

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01:00:697 - 01:20:908 - Wow, I like this part. So not much suggestions o thanks

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01:17:829 (77829|3,77908|2) - Move one column to the left? Feels better. following hihat, wanted to differentiate from the bubbly synth

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01:23:750 (83750|0,83908|3,84223|2,84539|1) - Ctrl+H? Feels better. e
01:29:276 (89276|0) - Move to 3? Feels better. e

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01:35:513 (95513|2,95592|3) - Ctrl+G? Following 01:34:171 (94171|3,94171|2,94250|0,94329|1) - Pattern. e
01:37:960 (97960|3,98118|2) - Ctrl+G? Following 01:36:697 (96697|3,96697|1,96776|2,96855|0) - Pattern. e
01:38:276 (98276|2,98276|1,98276|3) - Ctrl+H? Feels better. e

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01:44:513 (104513|0,104592|1,104671|0) - Ctrl+H then move two columns to the left then, 01:44:750 (104750|1) - Move to 1? Feels better. didnt want to extend the thrill for so long
01:46:408 (106408|0,106487|1,106566|0) - Ctrl+H then move two columns to the left? Feels better. e
01:46:802 (106802|3,106881|2) - Ctrl+G then 01:46:960 (106960|1,106960|0) - 01:46:960 (106960|1) - Move to 3? Feels better. current pattern enters into jumpthrill better
01:51:302 (111302|2,111381|3) - Ctrl+G? Feels better? e
01:56:513 (116513|0,116592|1,116671|0,116750|1) - Ctrl+G? Feels better? no diff tbh

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02:01:329 - 02:07:644 - Is okay in my opinion so no suggestions. Nice work. thanks

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02:07:644 - 02:12:697 - ^ <3
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Good luck and I hope it gets ranked soon! _ ( :3