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JP - Boku ni Invitation (TV size) [Osu|CatchTheBeat]

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HappyRocket88
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on jueves, 23 de junio de 2016 at 11:12:40

Artist: JP
Title: Boku ni Invitation (TV size)
Source: しろくまカフェ
Tags: ezek Voli MkGuh Jusenkyo opening Shirokuma Café Sloth ナマケモノ Pengin ペンギン Panda パンダ Sasako 笹子 Grizzly グリズリ Polar Bear シロクマ Llama ラマ John Paul Lam Yoshiharu Shiina
BPM: 131,2
Filesize: 18099kb
Play Time: 01:29
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (2,77 stars, 183 notes)
  2. Insane (3,45 stars, 229 notes)
  3. Jusen's Rain (3,31 stars, 259 notes)
  4. Mk's Normal (2 stars, 127 notes)
  5. Rockezek's Easy (1,38 stars, 74 notes)
  6. Voli's Special Blend (3,84 stars, 235 notes)
Download: JP - Boku ni Invitation (TV size)
Download: JP - Boku ni Invitation (TV size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Guys above are really good mappers. =w=/



Full Version Here


By ezek and me.
By Mkguh
By Voli
By Jusenkyo

Very thanks to newtoniorock8 for his platter! Download newtoniorock8's Platter here
Tons of thanks to Renia Xenophere for his Insane! Download Renia Xenophere's Insane here

Shirokuma Cafe Party

Make sure to check these openings/endings too!



Metadata Confirmation Here

IamKwaN wrote:

Unicode Title: ボクにインビテーション (TV size)
Romanised Title: Boku ni Invitation (TV size)

from the OST booklet
My sincere thanks go to
  1. ezek for providing the super video and overall helping with skinning =w=
  2. Voli for making the first banner and helping out with the skin too. °v°)/
  3. BoatKrab for making the renovated banner. >w</
  4. IamKwan for the metadata clarification. \:D/
Anime Information
Shirokuma Cafe


Shirokuma Cafe is a Japanese manga series by Aloha Higa. It revolves around the everyday lives of a group of animals mingling with humans at a café run by a polar bear. An anime adaptation by Studio Pierrot aired in Japan between April 2012 and March 2013. While it never received an official international release (mostly due to its heavy emphasis on puns), it is available on the streaming website Crunchyroll alongside the television broadcast for global audiences.

Genre: Slice of life, slapstick

Star Rating:
Watch it here: here
Read the manga: here
ZekeyHache
/me dances

sir, this is private.
18:32 ezek: klik
18:56 HappyRocket88: Ezek!
18:56 HappyRocket88: Tengo una insane \o.o/
18:56 ezek: :OOO
18:56 ezek: donde?
18:56 HappyRocket88: ¿Te podría pedir un testplay? >w<
18:57 ezek: sure~
18:57 ezek: aunque soy malo para las insanes xD
18:57 ezek: pero ya sabes que todo por ti :)
18:57 ezek: yu solo mandame sin preguntar~
18:57 *HappyRocket88 is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/871599 JP - Boku ni Invitation (TV Size)]
18:57 HappyRocket88: >w</
18:57 ezek: downloading~
18:57 ezek: 100%
18:59 HappyRocket88: ay
18:59 HappyRocket88: espera
19:00 ezek: me estan hablando irl
19:00 ezek: 30 secs
19:00 ezek: listo~
19:00 ezek: estas ahi?
19:00 HappyRocket88: sep
19:00 HappyRocket88: Sólo que...
19:01 ezek: hm?
19:01 HappyRocket88: no era necesario
19:01 HappyRocket88: que dieras retry
19:01 HappyRocket88: XD
19:01 ezek: xD
19:02 HappyRocket88: ayyy kdfsalkdf
19:02 HappyRocket88: XD
19:02 HappyRocket88: por alguna razón
19:02 HappyRocket88: estoy sonriendo ><sakhdfasdf
19:03 ezek: nice~ aunque tu estilo en ocasiones lo siento rarito, talvez soy yo :p
19:03 HappyRocket88: Gracias por el testplay, ezek >w</
19:03 HappyRocket88: Al menos la pudiste pasar >w<
19:03 ezek: ahora con el osz ya puedo buscarte bien el video :D
19:03 ezek: la puedo jugar mejor, es que estaba jugando con el humo
19:05 HappyRocket88: ayy
19:05 HappyRocket88: nice A :D
19:05 ezek: 00:49:695 (2) - Hermoso *.*
19:07 ezek: 00:43:750 (1,2,3) - simetria forzada ?)
19:08 HappyRocket88: hahahah
19:08 HappyRocket88: XD
19:08 HappyRocket88: YES! XD
19:11 ezek: 01:01:928 (7,1) - Fluyen mejor [http://puu.sh/miPi4/178f87f94d.jpg asi] ~
19:12 HappyRocket88: ohhhh
19:12 HappyRocket88: nice!
19:12 HappyRocket88: dun
19:18 ezek: 01:23:536 (5) - Deberia ser igual a 01:23:994 (1) - Quedaria [http://puu.sh/miPAW/03a525c1eb.jpg asi]
19:18 ezek: Se ve mejor imo
19:19 ezek: puedes copiar 01:23:994 (1) - y hacerle Ctrl+h, Ctrl+J y Ctrl+G
19:20 ezek: asi lo hacer rapido y bonito~
19:20 ezek: Haces*
19:20 HappyRocket88: dun!
19:20 HappyRocket88: :o
19:22 ezek: 01:26:280 (2) - Personalmente, me gusta mas [http://puu.sh/miPPS/01642430da.jpg asi] por como se siente
19:24 HappyRocket88: dun!
19:24 ezek: y por ultimo, la resolucion de tu BG no es aceptable, no es por la calidad, es por la resolucion. Te recomiendo usar una 1366x768
19:26 HappyRocket88: ay
19:26 HappyRocket88: XD
19:26 HappyRocket88: Necesitaré buscar
19:26 HappyRocket88: cosas de Shirokuma café
19:26 HappyRocket88: XD
19:26 ezek: se van a venir mas cosas, yo no soy muy bueno modeando~
19:27 ezek: quieres que postee el log?
19:27 HappyRocket88: sure >w</
19:27 ezek: :D
ErunamoJAZZ
irc
22:08 ErunamoJAZZ: lol
22:09 ErunamoJAZZ: pinche tableta
22:09 HappyRocket88: :o
22:09 HappyRocket88: ¿es tan dura?
22:09 HappyRocket88: ahh
22:09 HappyRocket88: Xd
22:09 ErunamoJAZZ: no taaanto
22:09 ErunamoJAZZ: pero..
22:09 ErunamoJAZZ: ese espaciado está muy exagerado
22:09 ErunamoJAZZ: lol
22:09 ErunamoJAZZ: es una mezcla entre mapa chino y Saten
22:09 HappyRocket88: See... algunos jumps
22:09 HappyRocket88: los siento overdone
22:09 HappyRocket88: HAHAHA
22:09 HappyRocket88: indeed
22:09 HappyRocket88: XD
22:09 ErunamoJAZZ: muchos*
22:11 HappyRocket88: quisiera arreglarlos
22:11 HappyRocket88: pero no se me ocurre
22:11 HappyRocket88: que hacer
22:11 HappyRocket88: XD
22:11 ErunamoJAZZ: seguir el rirmo?
22:11 ErunamoJAZZ: lol
22:12 ErunamoJAZZ: el mapa me acordó de este
22:12 *ErunamoJAZZ is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/136319 Fujiwara Marina - Zettai Daisuki (Short Ver.)]
22:13 HappyRocket88: Yo tome referencias de este
22:13 *HappyRocket88 is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/112817 Yousei Teikoku - Senketsu no Chikai]
22:13 HappyRocket88: XDDDDDD
22:14 ErunamoJAZZ: Saten mapea muy bacano
22:14 ErunamoJAZZ: pero, una cosa es una canción a 200bpm, y otra una a 130 :P
22:14 HappyRocket88: hahahha
22:14 HappyRocket88: XD
22:14 HappyRocket88: Que forma tan
22:14 HappyRocket88: sútil de decirlo
22:14 HappyRocket88: xD
22:15 ErunamoJAZZ: ud sabe que yo la estimo mucho, no voy a ser tan tosco pa decirle algo asó
22:15 ErunamoJAZZ: así
22:15 ErunamoJAZZ: ^^
22:15 ErunamoJAZZ: a su insane, hay partes que podríaponerle más notas
22:15 HappyRocket88: :o
22:16 HappyRocket88: dónde dónde! Xd
22:16 ErunamoJAZZ: y del espaciado, es que se sienten exagerados por lo lento de la canción, supongo
22:16 ErunamoJAZZ: 00:05:221 -
22:16 ErunamoJAZZ: acorte el slider y ponga una nota acá
22:17 HappyRocket88: dun!
22:17 ErunamoJAZZ: 00:08:308 -
22:17 ErunamoJAZZ: 00:10:594 -
22:18 ErunamoJAZZ: 00:15:625 -
22:18 ErunamoJAZZ: en casi todos los espacios mejor dicho (?
22:18 HappyRocket88: XDD
22:18 ErunamoJAZZ: 00:28:658 - acabelo acá, y pone nota luego
22:19 ErunamoJAZZ: 00:48:094 (2) - overmap
22:20 ErunamoJAZZ: 00:53:811 (3,4) - Ctrrl + G
22:20 HappyRocket88: Vale, hay unos espacios que los deje así intencionalmente porque no escuchaba batería. XD
22:20 ErunamoJAZZ: 01:00:442 -
22:21 ErunamoJAZZ: sí, aunque en casi todo creo que se siente más la voz
22:22 HappyRocket88: vaya, ese del ctrl g se oye genial!
22:22 ErunamoJAZZ: eso con el ritmo
22:22 ErunamoJAZZ: ya con lo otro...
22:22 ErunamoJAZZ: le toca ud misma
22:22 HappyRocket88: yep
22:22 ErunamoJAZZ: FIND A WAY, HAPPY
22:22 ErunamoJAZZ: :3
22:22 HappyRocket88: miraré como coloco las notas. XD
22:22 HappyRocket88: Gracias por el mod, Eru! >w</
22:22 HappyRocket88: XD
22:23 ErunamoJAZZ: conque no exagere los jumps, le va bien
22:23 ErunamoJAZZ: si quiere, fijese en algo que hice en el mapa de yousei
22:23 *ErunamoJAZZ is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/721420 Yousei Teikoku - Kami, Nozomu sekai to hakoniwa gensou - Intro [EruJazz]]
22:24 HappyRocket88: xd
22:24 HappyRocket88: CS 3 o 2.5 creo
22:24 ErunamoJAZZ: pero no eso
22:24 ErunamoJAZZ: jajaja
22:24 ErunamoJAZZ: pere
22:25 ErunamoJAZZ: miento, eso no lo hice en ese mapa
22:25 ErunamoJAZZ: agg
22:26 ErunamoJAZZ: osea, la cosa de subirle la velocidad a los sliders, pero bajar el espaciado
22:26 ErunamoJAZZ: eso puede ser util, quizás
22:26 ErunamoJAZZ: asdas
22:26 ErunamoJAZZ: no sé
22:26 HappyRocket88: es que
22:26 HappyRocket88: el SV es altísimo XDD
22:26 HappyRocket88: No sé que estaba pendejiando en el timing
22:26 HappyRocket88: xD
22:27 ErunamoJAZZ: jajaja
22:27 ErunamoJAZZ: o..
22:27 ErunamoJAZZ: puede pensar en mapear para DT
22:27 ErunamoJAZZ: :P
22:27 *ErunamoJAZZ is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/308908 yanaginagi - Vidro Moyou]
22:30 ErunamoJAZZ: bueno, chao
22:30 ErunamoJAZZ: mañana hay que trabajar
22:31 HappyRocket88: Sino le da pereza mañana de
22:31 HappyRocket88: postear el log >w<
22:31 HappyRocket88: Se lo agradecería. o.o7
22:31 HappyRocket88: Buenas noches, Eru!


Underforest
¡Hola! Moderación que no es de IRC.
Estoy de vuelta, ahora moderando la versión TV Size.

General
  1. Inconsistency in video offset: Mapset: 185 / Voli's Special Blend: 189
  2. Inconsistency in BG sizes: Required: 1366x768 / Unrankable: i.jpg, people.jpg
  3. Inconsistency in title: Romanised: Boku ni Invitation (TV Size) / Unicode: ボクにインビテーション TV size is missing in Unicode title
  4. Elimina el .osb, no sirve para nada
  5. Easy and Mk's Normal - 00:01:667 - delete green line, is useless
  6. Sugiero poner un normal-sliderslide.wav / soft-sliderslide.wav que esté en silencio. Es decir, para que la deslizada no suene tan mal.
  7. Si bien el set ya tiene todas las dificultades, entonces mueve esto como mapa pendiente
Easy
  1. El HP debe ser 2.
  2. 00:07:154 (2) - Está mal la forma de en medio
  3. 00:27:276 (1) - Este deslizador es extraño Ya no, es hermoso
  4. 00:32:764 (3) - No topa con la barra de vida, pero casi lo hace, muévelo un poco
  5. 00:52:886 - Imo este descanso no debería terminar aquí, haz que termine por default
  6. 01:14:837 (1) - No es buena idea esta "M"
  7. Buen mapeo, pero el DS de este map está muy distanciado :?
Mk's Normal
  1. ボクã«インビテーション? What is this? Just fix it cause the title and source is conflicting
  2. I can mod in Portuguese but I'm too lazy to do that (?
  3. 00:03:496 (1,2,3) - DS problem
  4. 00:23:389 (3,2) - Overlap
  5. 00:36:423 (3) - No beat in 00:36:766 there, so, don't need for a reverse slider.
  6. 01:03:633 - Hit circle here
  7. 01:07:520 (1) - Not good shape
  8. 01:13:008 (3) - Is touching HP bar
  9. 01:27:642 (1,2) - Remove whistle and leave clap enabled
  10. 01:29:471 (1) - Finish is not good for the song
Advanced
  1. Está bien
Hard
  1. 00:14:243 (4,1,2,3,4,5) - No se si poner saltos es una buena idea
  2. 00:29:106 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Lo mismo
  3. 00:30:477 (7) - Este deslizador debería terminar en el tick rojo
  4. 00:40:081 (1) - Mueve esto a x:32 y:196, ya que esto está muy pegado con este deslizador: 00:39:167 (3)
  5. 00:57:231 (4,5,6) - Elimina esto y que ahí empieze la ruleta para un buen flujo rítmico
  6. 00:57:917 (1) - La ruleta debe terminar en el tick blanco
  7. 01:13:923 - 01:29:471 - ¿?
Insane
  1. 00:15:853 (6,7) - Pienso que las vocales no dan ritmo
  2. 00:19:969 (1) - Se superpone a si mismo
  3. 00:24:085 (2) - Mueve esto a x:230 y:82, esto para lograr un buen flujo rítmico
  4. 00:32:774 (1) - Casi topa con la barra de vida, muévelo un poco hacia abajo
  5. 00:49:695 (2) - (esto x3 veces), ¡Feliz navidaaaad! (léase con voz de Santa :'v) Creo que este deslizador no se ve bien para los jugadores
  6. 00:53:811 (3) - Lo mismo que 00:32:774 (1)
  7. 00:57:241 (3,4,5,6) - Recomiendo eliminar esto y que en ese tiempo, empieze la ruleta. Eso mejoraría el ritmo, imo.
  8. 01:02:500 (2) - Quita el silbido, no suena bien :(
  9. 01:10:274 (4) - Muy largo, recomiendo 2 deslizadores en vez de esto.
  10. 01:26:737 (3,4) - Nada, solo me gustan estos deslizadores, especialmente por que son una familia y unos hermanos :roll:
  11. 01:28:109 (2,3) - Estos 2 círculos están muy lejos de este salto: 01:28:795 (4,5,6)
  12. 01:29:024 (5) - Mueve esto a x:157 y:220 para que el salto se vea bien.
  13. 01:29:481 (1) - Agrega un sonido final.
Voli's Special Bland
  1. 00:01:667 (1) - This slider should be end on red tick
  2. 00:45:569 (5) - Put NC
  3. 00:49:685 (3) - This is not symmetrical
  4. 01:11:179 (1,3) - Same
  5. 01:11:179 (1,3,1,2,3) - Not neccesary so many finish
  6. 01:29:472 (8) - I suggest remove finish
Feedback
No eres malo/a haciendo Expertos (Insane), solo que necesitas mejorar un poco para futuros mapas. De todas formas, debo admitir que está muy bien hecho.
Buena suerte con tu café (mapa). ;)
Mekki
Can i make easy or hard? >v<
snz
I Can Make One Extra Or Taiko GD? This Map Is Too Bad!
Kyouren
Awh Rocket, you don't ask me for GD Dx
Mekki
I fixed somethings by myself, and cause Rocket said O3O

Mk's Normal aaaaaaaaaaaa sdsdsdsadksadsadçlsadjmakçldjmsakçldjm
osu file format v14

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[Metadata]
Title:Boku ni Invitation (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:ボクã«インビテーション
Artist:JP
ArtistUnicode:JP
Creator:HappyRocket88
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Underforest
(modding anterior)
Akitoshi
some small suggestions
feel free to ignore them lol

[Mk's Normal]
  1. 00:23:389 (3,2) - stack?
  2. 00:38:252 (1,1) - these 2/1 slider reverse makes a bit boring in this diff imo (since it has the low bpm the 2/1 sliders are pretty long)
  3. 01:07:520 (1) - newbs are used to follow the simple curved or linear sliders so consider to change the slider like this
  4. 01:18:496 (1) - ^
[Hard]
  1. 00:22:246 (3,5) - nazi
  2. 00:41:682 (6,7,1) - it will be nice if they have same DS on this triple.
  3. jump spacing 00:53:801 (3,4) - between 00:54:487 (5,1) - should be same will be nice imo
  4. 01:01:575 (4,5,1) - this triple should same distance regardless of impact of the beat
  5. 01:16:667 (1,4) - stack?
  6. 01:20:325 (1) - pretty hard to read lol. you can change slider's shape like this
[Insane]
  1. 00:02:581 (4) - y:179 to make it same y-axis with 00:01:667 (1) -
  2. 00:14:471 (1,3) - should be same how 00:14:700 (2,4) - was aligned, or vice-versa.
  3. 00:24:075 (2) - and 00:24:761 (4) - should be same distance with their previous slider. It was pretty obvious to see the difference of their distance by looking their followpoints so ye
  4. 00:53:343 (2,4) - avoid touching these even though they're slight
  5. 00:59:746 (2) - maybe it will better if this distance will equal with 00:59:517 (1,3) - since 00:59:974 - don't really emphasize the strength of the song itself
  6. 01:19:410 (3,4) - can see that it's random compared to 01:18:496 (1,2) - , try copypasta the one of their slider then rotate to make it clean-looking or at least they have similar shape.
let me support you even though my mod is bad af ;3
Mekki
Underforest
Mk's Normal
  1. ボクã«インビテーション? What is this? Just fix it cause the title and source is conflicting Baka puush!
  2. I can mod in Portuguese but I'm too lazy to do that (? /me cries
  3. 00:03:496 (1,2,3) - DS problem It is not a problem, it's just because of the stack
  4. 00:23:389 (3,2) - Overlap
  5. 00:36:423 (3) - No beat in 00:36:766 there, so, don't need for a reverse slider. Well, there is a very low beat, i'll keep it for now, if someone else complain, i might change it :3
  6. 01:03:633 - Hit circle here I prefer keeping without notes, since it has a instrumental part there, not vocals.
  7. 01:07:520 (1) - Not good shape Right, fixed.
  8. 01:13:008 (3) - Is touching HP bar It is not https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4279547
  9. 01:27:642 (1,2) - Remove whistle and leave clap enabled Right :3
  10. 01:29:471 (1) - Finish is not good for the song O3O
tY!

Re-editaré este post cuando el easy este terminado :) Atenta[/quote]

-AKiTOSHI-

-AKiTOSHi- wrote:

some small suggestions
feel free to ignore them lol

[Mk's Normal]
  1. 00:23:389 (3,2) - stack? Nah
  2. 00:38:252 (1,1) - these 2/1 slider reverse makes a bit boring in this diff imo (since it has the low bpm the 2/1 sliders are pretty long) Let's say, the song at this part, is boring too.
  3. 01:07:520 (1) - newbs are used to follow the simple curved or linear sliders so consider to change the slider like right.this
  4. 01:18:496 (1) - ^ ^

Ma update o3o
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: i like chess.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 59517
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.5
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 89481
DistanceSpacing: 1.25
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Boku ni Invitation (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:ボクにインビテーション
Artist:JP
ArtistUnicode:JP
Creator:HappyRocket88
Version:Mk's Normal
Source:しろくまカフェ
Tags:
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BeatmapSetID:400613

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2.5
CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:4.5
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

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:)
grumd
[special blend]
00:00:981 (1,2,3,1) -
if you look at these 4 objects, you will see that the distance between 1-2-3 is almost the same as the slider (1) length. basically when you are playing this diff for the first time you will think that since these circles are 1/2, the slider will be 1/2 too. when playing i basically moved my cursor too fast, got 100 there and missed the next slider after that.
i suggest you to use spacing around 1.0-1.2 here to make it easier to understand. this will also fit the song really well because in the beginning of the song there's only vocals and no music, so this part is pretty calm and should not contain jumps.
http://i.imgur.com/cvu1Umo.png
00:04:410 (3,4) -
a small flow problem you might want to fix. see, your curved slider suggests a curve the player should follow, but the circle next to it doesn't follow it. http://i.imgur.com/xmAuvpi.png it's nice to have the circle fit the slider curve.
suggestion: http://i.imgur.com/C0l2HFe.png
00:12:185 (1,2) -
these two sliders are too close for a 1/1, better do this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4302697
00:21:331 (4,5) - 00:24:990 (3,4) - 00:25:904 (2,3) - 00:17:673 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
these circles are placed at a 0.9x distance making it effectively an anti-jump. you have to move your cursor a bit slower than usual which doesn't flow well and feels a bit bad; better use 1.0x-1.2x spacing here
00:33:679 (3) -
same flow thing as at 00:04:410 (3,4) -
rotate the slider a bit, like this http://i.imgur.com/IG7u0Zw.png
00:30:935 - to 00:45:569 -
i feel like this part with the way vocals and music sound will look a lot better if you made the sliders even slower.
0.6x or 0.5x slider velocity would fit in this part more.
00:45:569 (1) - 00:47:170 (3) -
well, i overall do not really like the way you made some sliders in this diff, but this one is particularly too bad. this sudden turn with an edge just makes no sense, why can't you make it a smooth slider? vocals fit it very well
01:01:918 -
that's up to you, but for example at this point you could add a note (to make a triple). you have a few places in this part of the diff where you could add more triples, just look it through
01:25:356 (6) - this thing touches the health bar, consider moving it down

[insane]
00:04:410 (5,6,7,1) -
the spacing is inconsistent, 00:05:211 (7) - this circle has prev 1.10x and next 1.40x
00:19:731 (6) -
i know you wanted to make a blanket, but as a result you have 0.77x spacing. make it around 1.0x
http://i.imgur.com/81irV43.png
00:20:645 (3,4,5) -
same here, these all objects should not be so close to each other, it creates clutter and doesn't look good
00:24:304 (3,4) -
do not use 0.8x spacing please. it means that the player will have to move his cursor slower than he did it when following the slider. this breaks the flow and feels kinda bad
00:27:734 (2,3) -
same
00:31:849 (3) -
you could move this one a bit closer to the previous circle to make a triangle
http://i.imgur.com/WV8yY6h.png
00:37:109 (2,3) - 00:39:167 (3,4) - 00:40:081 (1,2) - 00:43:511 (4,1) -
your spacing in this part is very inconsistent, it changes from 0.9x to 1.2x randomly
00:53:801 (3) -
this slider shape is just strange? why not use a circular slider?
00:54:258 (4,5) - 00:54:715 (1,2) - 00:57:002 (2,3,4,5) -
again they are placed too close to each other which creates an uncomfortable antijump
i am not going to keep pointing out these mistakes with bad spacing. but there a lot of them in this map later.

[hard]
okay i can't continue sorry.
this map has very very inconsistent spacing which can be easily fixed by using distance snap
00:30:477 (7,1) - also some weird overlaps
but i just can't mod it in this unpolished state with a lot of strange spacing changes
00:45:340 (4) - http://i.imgur.com/YjeevIV.png just look at this, why?
no, sorry, i can't continue, i tried my best

conclusion:
please use distance snap when you don't want to make a jump
Voli

grumd wrote:

[special blend]
00:00:981 (1,2,3,1) -
if you look at these 4 objects, you will see that the distance between 1-2-3 is almost the same as the slider (1) length. basically when you are playing this diff for the first time you will think that since these circles are 1/2, the slider will be 1/2 too. when playing i basically moved my cursor too fast, got 100 there and missed the next slider after that.
i suggest you to use spacing around 1.0-1.2 here to make it easier to understand. this will also fit the song really well because in the beginning of the song there's only vocals and no music, so this part is pretty calm and should not contain jumps.
http://i.imgur.com/cvu1Umo.png fixed
00:04:410 (3,4) -
a small flow problem you might want to fix. see, your curved slider suggests a curve the player should follow, but the circle next to it doesn't follow it. http://i.imgur.com/xmAuvpi.png it's nice to have the circle fit the slider curve.
suggestion: http://i.imgur.com/C0l2HFe.png fixed
00:12:185 (1,2) -
these two sliders are too close for a 1/1, better do this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4302697
00:21:331 (4,5) - 00:24:990 (3,4) - 00:25:904 (2,3) - 00:17:673 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - fixed
these circles are placed at a 0.9x distance making it effectively an anti-jump. you have to move your cursor a bit slower than usual which doesn't flow well and feels a bit bad; better use 1.0x-1.2x spacing here the spacing there plays well and matches the intensity of the vocals, also simply changing the spacing here will kill the map's structure, no change
00:33:679 (3) -
same flow thing as at 00:04:410 (3,4) -
rotate the slider a bit, like this http://i.imgur.com/IG7u0Zw.png fixed
00:30:935 - to 00:45:569 -
i feel like this part with the way vocals and music sound will look a lot better if you made the sliders even slower.
0.6x or 0.5x slider velocity would fit in this part more. they're slow enough right now D:
00:45:569 (1) - 00:47:170 (3) -
well, i overall do not really like the way you made some sliders in this diff, but this one is particularly too bad. this sudden turn with an edge just makes no sense, why can't you make it a smooth slider? vocals fit it very well you're right, changed the first one into a smooth shape but the second one fits well in my opinion due to the small pitch shift in the vocals there.
01:01:918 -
that's up to you, but for example at this point you could add a note (to make a triple). you have a few places in this part of the diff where you could add more triples, just look it through I see what you mean, but I'd rather accentuate the vocals on these places by not adding a triple, the drum sounds there aren't that audible. There are other places though where the drum riff thingy is more audible and they have their respective triples, such as 01:07:063 (6,1,2) - .
01:25:356 (6) - this thing touches the health bar, consider moving it down fixed by altering the slider shape making it point a bit more downwards.
thanks for the mod Grumd :D
PS: use image boxes rather than pasting the links here, I accidentally clicked on one instead of opening it in a new tab and boom there goes my reply gahhh

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90,54,57688,1,8,3:0:0:0:
164,226,57917,1,10,3:0:0:0:
201,54,58146,1,8,3:0:0:0:
265,270,58374,1,8,3:0:0:0:
313,46,58603,1,8,3:0:0:0:
313,46,59517,5,0,0:0:0:0:
326,233,59746,1,0,0:0:0:0:
149,135,59974,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,20,60203,6,0,P|416:108|476:208,1,206.250006294251,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,288,60660,2,0,P|404:284|368:336,1,137.500004196167,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,264,61118,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,332,61346,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,264,61575,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,136,61804,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,44,62032,6,0,P|72:120|28:176,1,137.500004196167,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,140,62490,2,0,P|208:84|181:18,1,137.500004196167,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,244,62947,2,0,P|167:223|238:233,1,137.500004196167,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,272,63404,1,8,0:0:0:0:
440,272,63862,6,0,B|444:200|444:200|460:128,1,137.500004196167,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,320,64319,1,8,0:0:0:0:
213,136,64548,2,0,B|228:200|228:200|232:272,1,137.500004196167
424,68,65005,1,0,0:0:0:0:
213,136,65234,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,320,65462,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,100,65691,5,0,0:0:0:0:
232,272,65920,1,0,0:0:0:0:
443,340,66148,1,8,0:0:0:0:
232,272,66377,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,32,66606,2,0,P|408:108|352:184,1,137.500004196167
232,272,67063,2,0,B|164:256|164:256|68:280,1,137.500004196167,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,352,67406,5,0,0:0:0:0:
24,352,67520,2,0,B|12:308|12:308|20:272|20:272|4:208,1,137.500004196167,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,272,67977,2,0,P|312:288|376:264,1,137.500004196167,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,100,68435,2,0,P|104:84|40:108,1,137.500004196167
232,272,68892,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,220,69121,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,68,69349,5,0,0:0:0:0:
136,224,69578,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,288,69807,1,8,0:0:0:0:
500,128,70035,1,0,0:0:0:0:
238,135,70264,2,0,P|242:207|222:303,1,137.500004196167
423,33,70721,2,0,B|350:41|350:41|287:69,1,137.500004196167,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
89,32,71179,6,0,B|89:124|53:207|53:207|92:295,1,275.000008392334,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,56,71865,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,295,72093,2,0,B|458:207|458:207|422:124|422:32,1,275.000008392334,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,56,72779,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,240,73008,6,0,L|32:364,2,137.500004196167,4|0|12,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,56,73694,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,288,73923,2,0,P|196:212|36:200,1,275.000008392334,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,288,74609,1,0,0:0:0:0:
357,60,74837,6,0,P|365:136|385:204,1,137.500004196167,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,240,75295,2,0,P|129:173|136:105,1,137.500004196167,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,280,75752,1,0,0:0:0:0:
357,60,75981,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,105,76209,1,8,0:0:0:0:
360,336,76438,5,0,0:0:0:0:
360,336,76552,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,336,76667,2,0,P|356:268|360:192,1,137.500004196167
136,105,77124,2,0,B|204:93|204:93|284:105,1,137.500004196167,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
481,170,77581,1,0,0:0:0:0:
357,60,77810,1,0,0:0:0:0:
271,262,78038,2,0,B|203:274|203:274|136:264,1,137.500004196167,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
357,60,78496,6,0,B|374:90|374:138|374:138|334:204|349:268|349:268|408:329,1,275.000008392334,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
175,262,79182,1,0,0:0:0:0:
221,45,79410,2,0,P|290:44|363:62,1,137.500004196167
235,313,79868,2,0,P|180:341|96:263,1,137.500004196167,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
51,221,80211,5,0,0:0:0:0:
51,221,80325,2,0,B|64:155|64:155|47:77,1,137.500004196167
312,45,80782,2,0,L|354:175,1,137.500004196167,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,154,81240,1,0,0:0:0:0:
235,313,81468,1,0,0:0:0:0:
151,26,81697,2,0,P|184:85|195:153,1,137.500004196167,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
426,316,82154,6,0,B|393:196|480:176|419:45,1,275.000008392334,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,82840,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,72,83069,2,0,P|64:144|44:228,1,137.500004196167
233,327,83526,2,0,P|241:255|261:171,1,137.500004196167,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,84,83869,5,0,0:0:0:0:
288,84,83984,2,0,B|220:76|220:76|144:92,1,137.500004196167
233,327,84441,2,0,B|301:335|301:335|377:319,1,137.500004196167,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,192,84898,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,320,85127,1,0,0:0:0:0:
357,103,85356,2,0,P|341:35|261:17,1,137.500004196167,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,284,85813,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,128,86042,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,284,86270,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,128,86499,1,0,0:0:0:0:
8,232,86727,2,0,P|-8:308|44:360,1,137.500004196167,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,140,87185,2,0,P|115:76|79:19,1,137.500004196167,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,100,87642,6,0,L|364:262,1,137.500004196167,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,24,88099,1,8,0:0:0:0:
146,237,88328,2,0,L|136:100,1,137.500004196167
376,100,88785,1,0,0:0:0:0:
135,99,89014,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,328,89243,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,328,89358,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,328,89472,1,4,0:0:0:0:
grumd
PS: use image boxes rather than pasting the links here, I accidentally clicked on one instead of opening it in a new tab and boom there goes my reply gahhh
google chrome usually saves what you were writing in text boxes when you press "back" :p
if you're using a different browser maybe you'll want to move to chrome just because of that :D
but yeah i'll use boxes now, thanks
Voli

grumd wrote:

PS: use image boxes rather than pasting the links here, I accidentally clicked on one instead of opening it in a new tab and boom there goes my reply gahhh
google chrome usually saves what you were writing in text boxes when you press "back" :p
if you're using a different browser maybe you'll want to move to chrome just because of that :D
but yeah i'll use boxes now, thanks
firefox master race
*flies*
Underforest
He re-editado todo mi modding en un solo post. Está en la página 1 para que no se vea tan mal y para evitar silences.
Topic Starter
HappyRocket88
ye!!! Muchas gracias Alejo. o.o7
ZekeyHache
Hermoso slider~
Zyl
Mod in-game
Topic Starter
HappyRocket88

Trent83 wrote:

Mod in-game
Here I provided the log since the mapper was lazy to post it
2016-01-14 14:43 Trent83: Happy una pregunta podrias echarle un ojo a un mapa mio solo por encima porfa :3
2016-01-14 14:43 Trent83: ?
2016-01-14 14:43 HappyRocket88: es que
2016-01-14 14:43 HappyRocket88: su lo miro por encima
2016-01-14 14:43 HappyRocket88: seguro encuentro muchas cosas
2016-01-14 14:43 HappyRocket88: XD
2016-01-14 14:43 HappyRocket88: entnces es mejor
2016-01-14 14:43 HappyRocket88: hacer un mod completo papi
2016-01-14 14:43 Trent83: Solo por encima xDD
2016-01-14 14:44 Trent83: Moddeariasme?
2016-01-14 14:44 Trent83: xDD
2016-01-14 14:45 HappyRocket88: XD
2016-01-14 14:45 HappyRocket88: actualemente ando
2016-01-14 14:45 HappyRocket88: trabajando en el mio
2016-01-14 14:46 HappyRocket88: si quieres hacemos m4m
2016-01-14 14:46 Trent83: Ok
2016-01-14 14:46 Trent83: Claro
2016-01-14 14:46 Trent83: pasame el mapa
2016-01-14 14:46 Trent83: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/875275 Kawaragi Shiho - Shun [Easy]]
2016-01-14 14:49 HappyRocket88: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/874323 JP - Boku ni Invitation (TV Size) [Easy]]
2016-01-14 14:49 HappyRocket88: el mio tiene
2016-01-14 14:49 HappyRocket88: 6 dificultades creo
2016-01-14 14:49 HappyRocket88: pero es un tv size
2016-01-14 14:49 HappyRocket88: xD
2016-01-14 14:55 Trent83: Mah
2016-01-14 14:55 Trent83: es un tv size
2016-01-14 14:55 Trent83: lo hare
2016-01-14 14:55 El fondo *-*
2016-01-14 14:57 HappyRocket88: yeee
2016-01-14 14:57 HappyRocket88: XD
2016-01-14 14:59 Trent83: Estoy modeandole a una de las personas mas dificiles que existen ._.
2016-01-14 14:59 Trent83: y no eres tu xD
2016-01-14 14:59 Trent83: estoy que muero
2016-01-14 14:59 Trent83: ya que se cree el beatmapper del año y ni un calificado tiene
2016-01-14 14:59 HappyRocket88: :o
2016-01-14 14:59 Trent83: TODO ME LO CONTRADICE (lo peor es que hizo un overmapped o varios...)
2016-01-14 15:01 Trent83: cierto que ya voy a tu mapa xDD
2016-01-14 15:01 Trent83: Lo peor es que no sabe que es overmapping y me contradice estoy arto ._.
2016-01-14 15:03 Trent83: Tu tvsize
2016-01-14 15:03 Trent83: Amo la cancion!
2016-01-14 15:03 Trent83: de que es o que
2016-01-14 15:06 HappyRocket88: Es de
2016-01-14 15:06 HappyRocket88: un anime
2016-01-14 15:06 HappyRocket88: Shirokuma cafe
2016-01-14 15:06 HappyRocket88: para ser ma´s preciso <3
2016-01-14 15:07 Trent83: Lo vere
2016-01-14 15:07 Trent83: mas tarde xD
2016-01-14 15:07 Trent83: Aqui
2016-01-14 15:07 Trent83: voy para el easy
2016-01-14 15:11 Trent83: No se como decirtelo
2016-01-14 15:11 Trent83: PERO ME ENCANTO EL EASY!
2016-01-14 15:11 Trent83: en el easy no veo ningun problema
2016-01-14 15:11 Trent83: todo esta muy bien ordenado y bien hecho
2016-01-14 15:12 Trent83: Estoy en el normal :3
2016-01-14 15:12 Trent83: 00:07:383 (2) - que te parece si aqui ponemos un hitcircle
2016-01-14 15:12 Trent83: ?
2016-01-14 15:14 Trent83: Solo pondria eso en el normal
2016-01-14 15:14 Trent83: I gual me encanto
2016-01-14 15:15 HappyRocket88: ohhh
2016-01-14 15:15 HappyRocket88: si quieres
2016-01-14 15:16 Trent83: 01:05:462 (4,1,2,3,4,5) - Esto es mi cosa preferida en un mapa :3
2016-01-14 15:16 HappyRocket88: puedes postear el mod
2016-01-14 15:16 Trent83: jaja no tranquilo
2016-01-14 15:19 Trent83: maldito que mappeas muy bien
2016-01-14 15:19 Trent83: solo el cirdcl
2016-01-14 15:19 Trent83: no puedo encontrarle nada xD
2016-01-14 15:20 Trent83: circle del normal xDD
2016-01-14 15:23 Trent83: El hard e insane estan bien a lo que veo
2016-01-14 15:26 Trent83: 01:25:813 (1,2,3,4) - (voli) no crees que estos bebes estan un pelito lejos?
2016-01-14 15:34 HappyRocket88: no pero igual
2016-01-14 15:34 HappyRocket88: me gustaría darte
2016-01-14 15:34 HappyRocket88: kudosu
2016-01-14 15:34 HappyRocket88: <3
2016-01-14 15:35 Trent83: Cuando lei "me gustaria darte" me asuste xDD
2016-01-14 15:35 HappyRocket88: :o
2016-01-14 15:35 HappyRocket88: ¿Qué pensaste que te iba a decir?
2016-01-14 15:35 HappyRocket88: XD
2016-01-14 15:36 Trent83: pense que dirias otra cosa xDDD
2016-01-14 15:38 Trent83: listo ahi te publique xD
Mekki
Auxent
m4m.

General:
I highly recommend to use a hitsounds on a sliderticks in a easier diffs. It would sound a lot of better.

Easy:
- 00:05:325 (1,2) - This could be blanketed better.
- 00:24:532 (2,3) - ^ (the end of the slider is quite off)
- 00:34:593 (1) - Make the beginning anchor & ending anchor symmetrical (y:260)
- 01:16:667 (2) - Move this slider to x:400 y:220 for better flow + better blanket
Otherwise looks great (:

Normal:
- 00:54:715 (1,2) - Inconsistent combos.
- 01:20:325 (1) - ^
- 01:27:642 (1,2,3) - ^
Otherwise seems totally fine. I like it \ ^^ /

Advanced:
- 00:28:191 (3,1) - I really don't like the overlap here. What about turning it around 90* and rebuild this pattern 00:29:106 (1,2,3,4) - ?
- 00:32:764 (1,3,4,1) - This isn't snapped with a slider 00:32:764 (1) - correctly + it's really hard visible during the gameplay.
- 00:39:852 (4,2) - not snapped properly
- 00:40:081 (1,3,4,1) - ^
- 00:57:002 (2,3,4,5,1) - What about replacing this pattern with spinner. It plays kinda awkward especially at the last note.
- 01:01:804 (4,5,1) - how about snapping them together?

Hard:
- 00:07:154 (1,2) - What about using the same pattern instead of different? (I would choose a pattern no.2)
- 00:13:328 (2,2) - is this on purpose? if not, fix the stack.
- 00:27:734 (2,1) - ^
- 00:56:545 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Why so sudden change of DS?
- 01:03:862 (1) - What about a cleaner pattern like this?

Insane:
- 00:30:477 (6,2) - Sorry but this one looks pretty ugly. Mind if you stack it?

I checked the last diff too and it seems fine to me.
good luck.
Mekki
fixed all ^^ rocket will fix for me, so i don't need to send the code, since combos it's an easy thing or i'm really lazy to send the code wtf
Monstrata
[General]

  • 00:46:712 -00:47:627 - - Timing seems off here. Like it slows down slightly.
[Voli's Special Blend]

  1. 00:12:185 (1,2) - I didn't really like these repeat sliders. The rhythm was too simple, and it didn't put any emphasis onto the vocals because of the slider-ends. I would remove the repeat and add a circle. You can make the curved slider blanket the circle too.
  2. 00:19:045 (7,8) - and 00:20:417 (2,3) - The spacing isn't really congruent with the regular spacing you use for unstressed notes like 00:17:673 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 00:21:331 (4,5) - 00:24:990 (3,4) - etc... It looks kinda nazi, but keeping the spacing really gives a sense of structure to your map.
  3. 00:22:246 (2,3) - This was just awkward to play. I think you're going for a flowbreak here for emphasis but I think maintaining flow here is better since you use another flowbreak 2 beats later. Too many flowbreaks in a short time isn't good :P.
  4. 00:59:974 (3,1) - Just personally, starting a kiai with a flowbreak feels bad imo. Can you make this slider curve the other way? (rightward) so theres some visual flow to it?
  5. 01:03:633 - You can map this ;c.
  6. 01:10:264 (5,6) - Really not getting the jump here. 6 isn't especially important in the song so mapping this jump + flowbreak is really unnecesary.
  7. 01:13:008 (1) - Circles please. This is kiai xP.
  8. 01:17:124 (4) - Really cool keyboard sounds in the bg you can focus on if you make this two circles instead of a slider.
  9. 01:21:468 (5,6) - This is too much emphasis :P the jump is nearly cross screen and its a really flow-breaking jump. It's exaggerated for the sound its following.
[Insane]
  1. 00:05:211 (7) - This 1/4 is barely audible. It's too early in the song to introduce 1/4 rhythm imo... and spacing just makkes it way too noticeable for something that is barely audible.
  2. 00:08:869 (7) - Same here. I would avoid introducing 1/4 rhythm until the song picks up because yea these 1/4's are barely audible, yet you give them fairly large spacing.
  3. 00:09:898 (3,1) - Spacing is awkward here because Right before this pattern you use a lot of 1/2 jumps that look visually very similar to this pattern.
  4. 00:08:069 (5,6) - and 00:08:984 (1,2) - . I would just remove the repeat and add another slider instead so 00:10:356 - is clickable. There's a sound on the red tick too which could match a slider-end.
  5. 00:15:386 (5,6) - Nothing suggests this jump in the music :P.
  6. 00:19:959 (1,2,3) - This flow is really linear which makes it difficult to snap to and properly emphasize. Angle changes are nicer.
  7. 00:23:389 (6,1) - Okay, the jump here is good but then you use even bigger spacing on 00:24:075 (2,3) - so it makes this seem weird in terms of emphasis. Like why the spacing increase all of a sudden. The spacing concept here doesn't seem right.
  8. 00:25:447 (1,2,3) - Why is the spacing so big here but then so small for 00:27:734 (2,3) -
  9. 00:30:935 (1,2,3,4,1) - Spacing here os so small compared to 00:34:593 (1,2,3,4,1) -
  10. 00:49:685 (2) - This is pretty cool! nice to see someone who can make loop sliders correctly xD. Just one thing, I would recomment making the head-part of the slider curved as well, instead of straight as it is right now.
  11. 00:53:343 (2,4) - Overlaps don't look good when you're using really big cross-screen patterns like this. It gives the map a kind of claustrophobic feel since you go from really large spaces to overlaps xP
  12. 01:07:520 (1,3) - Mind not overlapping? Also fix the blanket between 2 and 3. You could rotate slider 3 like ~ 20 degrees to avoid the overlap cuz it looks cluttered.
  13. 01:14:837 (1,3) - Same thing about the overlapping since you don't overlap 01:15:295 (2,4) - so the symmetry looks off too xP.
  14. 01:18:038 (8,9,1) - This movement is really weird. Can you position 9 elsewhere so the flow makes more sense? The spacing i think, ehh its bettter if you spaced apart but if you want an anti-jump here its fine. But either fix the spacing to be more predictable to the rest of the jump pattern, or fix the flow. (Or both :D).
  15. 01:23:069 (3,4) - Space these out just a bit more, theyre too close together compared to your other circle patterns. Even something like this 01:25:356 (6,7) - is better.
[Hard]

  1. 00:05:096 (6) - This is barely audible as a note. You can map it i guess, but its more fitting if you make this a slider-end. Basically, 00:04:410 (5) - Make this two 1/2 sliders instead. That way both white ticks are clickable.
  2. 00:27:048 (4,1) - This jump doesn't make sense cuz you are following the vocals in creating emphasis, but there is no vocal emphasis onto 1.
  3. 00:30:477 (7) - Can you not use a slider this overbent? xP it looks bad because the slider-head and slider-tail are overlapping.
  4. 00:36:423 (1,4) - Would look cool if you could make these symmetrical, like flat. instead of slanted.
  5. 00:44:654 (3,1) - Slider-border overlap just makes this pattern look unpolished.
  6. 00:56:545 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Weird that you decrease spacing leading up to the kiai. Music is building up and theres some synth sounds that pop up after
  7. 00:57:459 - . Increasing the spacing makes more sense with the music.
  8. 01:01:575 (5,6,7,1) - I don't think this jump + flowbreak triplet is appropriate on hard. The jump is okay, but the triplet being bent away from the flow makes this pattern really difficult to land on a Hard. Make it flow better or reduce spacing.
  9. 01:02:947 (3,1) - Just saying, but these kinds of blankets don't really look good xPP. I would just reduce Slider 1 to a 1/2 slider that way you can make 01:04:319 - a circle instead.
[Advanced]

  1. 00:27:276 (1,3) - Could improve this blanket xD.
  2. 00:28:191 (3,1) - I really don't recommend this pattern though, because the slider-body of 3 is covering a lot of Slider 1's tail which makes this really hard to interpret for beginners.
  3. 00:34:365 (3,4) - I would stack triplets on an Advanced instead of space them. Stacks are much easier to play than spaced stuff, especially when you're using 1.40x spacing here..
  4. 00:51:971 (2) - This slider doesn't really begin on anything. I would just make the wave slider you had earlier even larger to account for inaudible beats you're currently mapping...
  5. 01:01:804 (4,5,1) - Please don't space them like this... This is an Advanced. Stack them. Use spaced triplets on Hard or something. You're following distance snap too rigidly. Not everything needs to be spaced exactly the same, especially not triplets :P.
  6. 01:16:667 (1,3) - This is really hard to read because 3 is almost completely covered by slider 1.
    01:19:868 (4) - Just make this 1/2 :P the 3/4 slider won't really be appreciated by people playing this level of difficulty, and you're skipping a clearly audible red tick. Not worth it imo.
[Mk's Normal]

  1. 00:36:423 (3) - There's nothing actually being captured on the bluetick... I would just use a 3/2 slider.
  2. 01:22:612 (2,3) - Ugly blanket.
Nice difficulty.

[Rockezek's Easy]
  1. 00:07:154 (2) - This bump really isn't necessary :P The slider is too short for this to actually be appreciated, it just makes the sliderball shake for a second.
  2. 01:05:691 (3,4,5,6) - Too many circles in a row on an Easy :P I wouldn't go over 3. It makes the clicking rhythm too dense.
Could use some work on spacing/emphasis consistency on higher diffs. Overall not bad. Get some more mods though! Good luck
Zectro
I'll wait until you apply stuff from monstrata :>

You can msg me ingame when you did so \.w./
Mekki

Monstrata wrote:

[Mk's Normal]
  1. 00:36:423 (3) - There's nothing actually being captured on the bluetick... I would just use a 3/2 slider. o3o
  2. 01:22:612 (2,3) - Ugly blanket. now it's beautiful <3
Nice difficulty. Thank you, MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMonstrata M M M :3
I LIKE PASTAAAAA
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Intone
Hello senpai hnnnnnngh *finished modding*

Rockezek's Easy
01:26:727 (1,2,3) snuggle a little better? :D

01:29:840 (1) remove nc. Its the last note so I don't think you need it.

Mk's Normal
00:01:936 (1,2,3) snnuggle a bit? :D

00:07:296 (1) remove NC i think this feels weird here
00:08:047 (3) flip to curve other way, it snuggles with 2 better and leads better into (4)
00:12:070 (4,5) snuggle the 5 into the 4 here? :D Like the earlier one, pretty much just opposite way
01:01:317 (1,2) snuggle 2 into 1?
01:09:277 (3) flip to curve other ways? a little awk the way it leads into the 4

Advanced
00:02:009 (2,3) snuggles? :D

00:12:338 (6) hmm I don't really like the placement here, maybe move downwards?
00:30:360 (4) hmm not sure about this one. Looks nicer (see img) but might be awk to play? XD

00:52:954 (2,3) overlap 2+3 onto the 1 slider and NC the (2), remove NC on (1)? Placement here feels awkward when compared with the beat, as 2->3->1 are all different distance snaps
01:03:343 (1) nneeds to be a little higher! Too close to the 3, its touching :X

Hard
00:05:709 (1,2) snuggles? :D

00:30:592 (1) nitpicking a little here but its just a littttttle too close to the 7
01:07:872 (6,7,1) i would just stack it on top of the (1). The little curve kind of interferes with (2)
01:09:314 (4,5,6) if you chose to stack^ then stack this too for consistency
01:21:752 (6,7,1) ^
01:26:688 (3,5,6) hiiiiii i'm nitpicking again but these are a little too close D:

Insane
00:09:098 (2) try to overlap it onto the end of (5)?
00:21:952 (2) overlap onto (4) for prettiness? :D End of (5) too.
00:38:581 (4,2) overlap ennnd of 2 onto 4 circle?
01:22:040 (9) i thinnk something like this will work better and look nicer rather than the overlap on (2)

01:30:500 (1) remove nc. Last nonte so I dont think you need it

Voli's Special Blend

00:38:820 (1) curve other way will work better to lead into (2) i think
01:18:245 (6) might want to reshape this slider since it makes space for the (4) but not the (7) so it looks a little awk

^_^
OOPS I WAS MODDINNG YOUR MAP WHEN ASKING FOR A MODREQ ON MY MAP AND ACCIDENTALLY LINKED YOUR MAP :X
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Topic Starter
HappyRocket88

pkhg wrote:

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Underforest

Underforest wrote:

¡Hola! Moderación que no es de IRC.
Estoy de vuelta, ahora moderando la versión TV Size.

General
  1. Inconsistency in video offset: Mapset: 185 / Voli's Special Blend: 189 done!
  2. Inconsistency in BG sizes: Required: 1366x768 / Unrankable: i.jpg, people.jpg esto no es realmente necesario. Si la bg se encuentra entre las rezoluciones de 16:9 o 4:3 juega perfecto. \:D/
  3. Inconsistency in title: Romanised: Boku ni Invitation (TV Size) / Unicode: ボクにインビテーション TV size is missing in Unicode title yeah! :c fixed!
  4. Elimina el .osb, no sirve para nada ese way se desapareció
  5. Easy and Mk's Normal - 00:01:667 - delete green line, is useless deleted them
  6. Sugiero poner un normal-sliderslide.wav / soft-sliderslide.wav que esté en silencio. Es decir, para que la deslizada no suene tan mal. no creo que suene tan mal. este encaja bien con el sonido del fondo imo
  7. Si bien el set ya tiene todas las dificultades, entonces mueve esto como mapa pendiente dun!
Easy
  1. El HP debe ser 2. totalmente de acuerdo
  2. 00:07:154 (2) - Está mal la forma de en medio yeah :/
  3. 00:27:276 (1) - Este deslizador es extraño Ya no, es hermoso \:D/
  4. 00:32:764 (3) - No topa con la barra de vida, pero casi lo hace, muévelo un poco ay dioj mio, casi se me pasa xd
  5. 00:52:886 - Imo este descanso no debería terminar aquí, haz que termine por default es realmente necvesario? o.o
  6. 01:14:837 (1) - No es buena idea esta "M" why not? xd
  7. Buen mapeo, pero el DS de este map está muy distanciado. yeah 1.30 killed me xd
Hard
  1. 00:14:243 (4,1,2,3,4,5) - No se si poner saltos es una buena idea. why not? :c
  2. 00:29:106 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Lo mismo yo considero que esas partes deben tener jumps ya que la canción es demasiado intensa ahí imo
  3. 00:30:477 (7) - Este deslizador debería terminar en el tick rojo sure!
  4. 00:40:081 (1) - Mueve esto a x:32 y:196, ya que esto está muy pegado con este deslizador: 00:39:167 (3) done!
  5. 00:57:231 (4,5,6) - Elimina esto y que ahí empieze la ruleta para un buen flujo rítmico arreglado nene!
  6. 00:57:917 (1) - La ruleta debe terminar en el tick blanco why? hay alguna regla que no permite terminar spinners en ticks rojos? ;w;
  7. 01:13:923 - 01:29:471 - ¿? ?¿
Insane
  1. 00:15:853 (6,7) - Pienso que las vocales no dan ritmo cierto. arreglado papi.
  2. 00:19:969 (1) - Se superpone a si mismo te daría la razón si fuese una dificultad menor, no es mayor problema sobre dificultades mayores amigu
  3. 00:24:085 (2) - Mueve esto a x:230 y:82, esto para lograr un buen flujo rítmico. ohhh! genial! cambiado y denunciado!
  4. 00:32:774 (1) - Casi topa con la barra de vida, muévelo un poco hacia abajo. definitivamente la mayoría son rebeldes. xd arreglado!
  5. 00:49:695 (2) - (esto x3 veces), ¡Feliz navidaaaad! (léase con voz de Santa :'v) Creo que este deslizador no se ve bien para los jugadores tienes alguna idea mejor? /w\
  6. 00:53:811 (3) - Lo mismo que 00:32:774 (1) fixed!
  7. 00:57:241 (3,4,5,6) - Recomiendo eliminar esto y que en ese tiempo, empieze la ruleta. Eso mejoraría el ritmo, imo. totalmente de acuerdo
  8. 01:02:500 (2) - Quita el silbido, no suena bien :( XDD se me paso, qué random! XD
  9. 01:10:274 (4) - Muy largo, recomiendo 2 deslizadores en vez de esto. creo que es por el sv. no le veo el problema si fluye bien. :c
  10. 01:26:737 (3,4) - Nada, solo me gustan estos deslizadores, especialmente por que son una familia y unos hermanos :roll: gemelos separados al nacer mameh
  11. 01:28:109 (2,3) - Estos 2 círculos están muy lejos de este salto: 01:28:795 (4,5,6) yeah. :/
  12. 01:29:024 (5) - Mueve esto a x:157 y:220 para que el salto se vea bien. sure!
  13. 01:29:481 (1) - Agrega un sonido final. mi mamá dijo que sonaba bien con el finish \:D/

Feedback
No eres malo/a haciendo Expertos (Insane), solo que necesitas mejorar un poco para futuros mapas. De todas formas, debo admitir que está muy bien hecho.
Buena suerte con tu café (mapa). Gracias pro el feedback papi
Akitoshi

Akitoshi wrote:

some small suggestions
feel free to ignore them lol no, you deserve the same attention as any person! D: believe more on your skills!

[Hard]
  1. 00:22:246 (3,5) - nazi yeh :/
  2. 00:41:682 (6,7,1) - it will be nice if they have same DS on this triple. totally agree! o.o7
  3. jump spacing 00:53:801 (3,4) - between 00:54:487 (5,1) - should be same will be nice imo le jump is kawaii nao >u<
  4. 01:01:575 (4,5,1) - this triple should same distance regardless of impact of the beat Bum Bum yeah fixed bum bum!
  5. 01:16:667 (1,4) - stack? mom?
  6. 01:20:325 (1) - pretty hard to read lol. you can change slider's shape like this
wao! looks really fancy! changed! \:D/

[Insane]
  1. 00:02:581 (4) - y:179 to make it same y-axis with 00:01:667 (1) - yeah XD
  2. 00:14:471 (1,3) - should be same how 00:14:700 (2,4) - was aligned, or vice-versa. i want you
  3. 00:24:075 (2) - and 00:24:761 (4) - should be same distance with their previous slider. It was pretty obvious to see the difference of their distance by looking their followpoints so ye totally agree
  4. 00:53:343 (2,4) - avoid touching these even though they're slight nice eye! :oo
  5. 00:59:746 (2) - maybe it will better if this distance will equal with 00:59:517 (1,3) - since 00:59:974 - don't really emphasize the strength of the song itself yeah the previous one looks really clutter
  6. 01:19:410 (3,4) - can see that it's random compared to 01:18:496 (1,2) - , try copypasta the one of their slider then rotate to make it clean-looking or at least they have similar shape. wat a mess i did here. xd changed!
let me support you even though my mod is bad af ;3 thank you so much for the star! >w</
grumd

grumd wrote:

[insane]
00:04:410 (5,6,7,1) -
the spacing is inconsistent, 00:05:211 (7) - this circle has prev 1.10x and next 1.40x yeah what a mess! ;w;
00:19:731 (6) -
i know you wanted to make a blanket, but as a result you have 0.77x spacing. make it around 1.0x
http://i.imgur.com/81irV43.png oh, indeed, really nice suggestion!
00:20:645 (3,4,5) -
same here, these all objects should not be so close to each other, it creates clutter and doesn't look good ugh, tried to make this pattern cleaner ;w;
00:24:304 (3,4) -
do not use 0.8x spacing please. it means that the player will have to move his cursor slower than he did it when following the slider. this breaks the flow and feels kinda bad done!
00:27:734 (2,3) -
same yeah /u\
00:31:849 (3) -
you could move this one a bit closer to the previous circle to make a triangle totally agree! XD
http://i.imgur.com/WV8yY6h.png
00:37:109 (2,3) - 00:39:167 (3,4) - 00:40:081 (1,2) - 00:43:511 (4,1) -
your spacing in this part is very inconsistent, it changes from 0.9x to 1.2x randomly uy! nice cacth!
00:53:801 (3) -
this slider shape is just strange? why not use a circular slider?
00:54:258 (4,5) - 00:54:715 (1,2) - 00:57:002 (2,3,4,5) -
again they are placed too close to each other which creates an uncomfortable antijump
i am not going to keep pointing out these mistakes with bad spacing. but there a lot of them in this map later.
tried to re-arrange the patterning here. hope it look better to your eyes. ;w;

[hard]
okay i can't continue sorry.
this map has very very inconsistent spacing which can be easily fixed by using distance snap
00:30:477 (7,1) - also some weird overlaps
but i just can't mod it in this unpolished state with a lot of strange spacing changes
00:45:340 (4) - http://i.imgur.com/YjeevIV.png just look at this, why?
no, sorry, i can't continue, i tried my best

conclusion:
please use distance snap when you don't want to make a jump best advice i've ever received thank you so much! >w</
Auxent

Auxent wrote:

m4m.

General:
I highly recommend to use a hitsounds on a sliderticks in a easier diffs. It would sound a lot of better. yeah, indeed it sound way better, thanks! >w</

Easy:
- 00:05:325 (1,2) - This could be blanketed better. actually it was way off before, XD hope it looks nicer to your eyes!
- 00:24:532 (2,3) - ^ (the end of the slider is quite off) well I tried to use 1/1 sliders everywhere so i hope it's not a big problem. ;w;
- 00:34:593 (1) - Make the beginning anchor & ending anchor symmetrical (y:260) nazi but yeah XD
- 01:16:667 (2) - Move this slider to x:400 y:220 for better flow + better blanket YUS! awesome >w</
Otherwise looks great (: <3

Advanced:
- 00:28:191 (3,1) - I really don't like the overlap here. What about turning it around 90* and rebuild this pattern 00:29:106 (1,2,3,4) - ? yeah, re-arranged as suggested! XD
- 00:32:764 (1,3,4,1) - This isn't snapped with a slider 00:32:764 (1) - correctly + it's really hard visible during the gameplay. yeah, indeed 3/4 sliders sounded way off here. XD
- 00:39:852 (4,2) - not snapped properly yeah fixed!
- 00:40:081 (1,3,4,1) - ^
- 00:57:002 (2,3,4,5,1) - What about replacing this pattern with spinner. It plays kinda awkward especially at the last note. Used now a 6/1 sliders which follows the vocals. >u<
- 01:01:804 (4,5,1) - how about snapping them together? yeah, nice suggestion!

Hard:
- 00:07:154 (1,2) - What about using the same pattern instead of different? (I would choose a pattern no.2) this one is intentional. ;w; there's a slight sound in the red tick so that's why i ended doing that
- 00:13:328 (2,2) - is this on purpose? if not, fix the stack. yeah, they're stacked now.
- 00:27:734 (2,1) - ^
- 00:56:545 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Why so sudden change of DS? this is the best part ayyy ;w;
- 01:03:862 (1) - What about a cleaner pattern like this totally agree! o.o7?

Insane:
- 00:30:477 (6,2) - Sorry but this one looks pretty ugly. Mind if you stack it? yeah XD

I checked the last diff too and it seems fine to me.
good luck. TY so much!
Monstrata

Monstrata wrote:

[General]

  • 00:46:712 -00:47:627 - - Timing seems off here. Like it slows down slightly.
[Insane]
  1. 00:05:211 (7) - This 1/4 is barely audible. It's too early in the song to introduce 1/4 rhythm imo... and spacing just makkes it way too noticeable for something that is barely audible. tried to keep consistency with the upcoming patterns here, despite it's not that audible it makes sense if it made them consistent, ;w; does it look that bad?
  2. 00:08:869 (7) - Same here. I would avoid introducing 1/4 rhythm until the song picks up because yea these 1/4's are barely audible, yet you give them fairly large spacing. read above
  3. 00:09:898 (3,1) - Spacing is awkward here because Right before this pattern you use a lot of 1/2 jumps that look visually very similar to this pattern. dun!
  4. 00:08:069 (5,6) - and 00:08:984 (1,2) - . I would just remove the repeat and add another slider instead so 00:10:356 - is clickable. There's a sound on the red tick too which could match a slider-end.
  5. 00:15:386 (5,6) - Nothing suggests this jump in the music :P. yeah, re-arranged this pattern. XD
  6. 00:19:959 (1,2,3) - This flow is really linear which makes it difficult to snap to and properly emphasize. Angle changes are nicer. YUSS! really nice suggestion!
  7. 00:23:389 (6,1) - Okay, the jump here is good but then you use even bigger spacing on 00:24:075 (2,3) - so it makes this seem weird in terms of emphasis. Like why the spacing increase all of a sudden. The spacing concept here doesn't seem right. yeah tried to use DS here. >u<
  8. 00:25:447 (1,2,3) - Why is the spacing so big here but then so small for 00:27:734 (2,3) - inb4 vocals, despite it's the same segment. ;w;
  9. 00:30:935 (1,2,3,4,1) - Spacing here os so small compared to 00:34:593 (1,2,3,4,1) - this one was rather intentional. :> does it flow that bad?
  10. 00:49:685 (2) - This is pretty cool! nice to see someone who can make loop sliders correctly xD. Just one thing, I would recomment making the head-part of the slider curved as well, instead of straight as it is right now. will considerate >u<
  11. 00:53:343 (2,4) - Overlaps don't look good when you're using really big cross-screen patterns like this. It gives the map a kind of claustrophobic feel since you go from really large spaces to overlaps xP what a thought! o.o changed!
  12. 01:07:520 (1,3) - Mind not overlapping? Also fix the blanket between 2 and 3. You could rotate slider 3 like ~ 20 degrees to avoid the overlap cuz it looks cluttered. des-overlapped! XD
  13. 01:14:837 (1,3) - Same thing about the overlapping since you don't overlap 01:15:295 (2,4) - so the symmetry looks off too xP. dun
  14. 01:18:038 (8,9,1) - This movement is really weird. Can you position 9 elsewhere so the flow makes more sense? The spacing i think, ehh its bettter if you spaced apart but if you want an anti-jump here its fine. But either fix the spacing to be more predictable to the rest of the jump pattern, or fix the flow. (Or both :D).
  15. 01:23:069 (3,4) - Space these out just a bit more, theyre too close together compared to your other circle patterns. Even something like this 01:25:356 (6,7) - is better.
[Hard]

  1. 00:05:096 (6) - This is barely audible as a note. You can map it i guess, but its more fitting if you make this a slider-end. Basically, 00:04:410 (5) - Make this two 1/2 sliders instead. That way both white ticks are clickable. totally agree, removed
  2. 00:27:048 (4,1) - This jump doesn't make sense cuz you are following the vocals in creating emphasis, but there is no vocal emphasis onto 1. indeed, i wasn't paying attention to highlight vocals, i just kept consistent the way the DS increases among every new measure though, so i hope it's not a big problem here.
  3. 00:30:477 (7) - Can you not use a slider this overbent? xP it looks bad because the slider-head and slider-tail are overlapping. ayy but it doesn't flow that bad XD
  4. 00:36:423 (1,4) - Would look cool if you could make these symmetrical, like flat. instead of slanted. Here I wanted to create a slight slider following the vocals though
  5. 00:44:654 (3,1) - Slider-border overlap just makes this pattern look unpolished. But it's following DS ;w;
  6. 00:56:545 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Weird that you decrease spacing leading up to the kiai. Music is building up and theres some synth sounds that pop up after
  7. 00:57:459 - . Increasing the spacing makes more sense with the music. I'll think about it later, the concern here is that following the vocals the "oooooo" goes in a way that reduces his intensity while it passed over the segment, so decreasing the DS should make more sense following that statement though
  8. 01:01:575 (5,6,7,1) - I don't think this jump + flowbreak triplet is appropriate on hard. The jump is okay, but the triplet being bent away from the flow makes this pattern really difficult to land on a Hard. Make it flow better or reduce spacing. dun! flow is slightly better now!
  9. 01:02:947 (3,1) - Just saying, but these kinds of blankets don't really look good xPP. I would just reduce Slider 1 to a 1/2 slider that way you can make 01:04:319 - a circle instead. yeah, hope it flows better now >u<
[Advanced]

  1. 00:27:276 (1,3) - Could improve this blanket xD. nazi but yeah. :>
  2. 00:28:191 (3,1) - I really don't recommend this pattern though, because the slider-body of 3 is covering a lot of Slider 1's tail which makes this really hard to interpret for beginners. Ay, but this isn't a diff for beginners. ;w;
  3. 00:34:365 (3,4) - I would stack triplets on an Advanced instead of space them. Stacks are much easier to play than spaced stuff, especially when you're using 1.40x spacing here.. yep! o.o7
  4. 00:51:971 (2) - This slider doesn't really begin on anything. I would just make the wave slider you had earlier even larger to account for inaudible beats you're currently mapping... yeah. :/ tried to add two notes following the vocals later on >u<
  5. 01:01:804 (4,5,1) - Please don't space them like this... This is an Advanced. Stack them. Use spaced triplets on Hard or something. You're following distance snap too rigidly. Not everything needs to be spaced exactly the same, especially not triplets :P. yeah, fixed those super bad spaced triplets. xD
  6. 01:16:667 (1,3) - This is really hard to read because 3 is almost completely covered by slider 1. Ay, but the AR allows players to see it properly after clicking (1) imo. ;w;
    01:19:868 (4) - Just make this 1/2 :P the 3/4 slider won't really be appreciated by people playing this level of difficulty, and you're skipping a clearly audible red tick. Not worth it imo. yeah, totally agree
[Rockezek's Easy]
  1. 00:07:154 (2) - This bump really isn't necessary :P The slider is too short for this to actually be appreciated, it just makes the sliderball shake for a second. I tried to make it different because it follows the changes of the vocals over the red ticks. /u\
  2. 01:05:691 (3,4,5,6) - Too many circles in a row on an Easy :P I wouldn't go over 3. It makes the clicking rhythm too dense. holy mother! You're right! XD
Could use some work on spacing/emphasis consistency on higher diffs. Overall not bad. Get some more mods though! Good luck
Intone
Easy
Didn't try to "blanket" them because it would mess up the flow a bit. /u\ and tried to follow the NC every two measures, hence, that last note MUST have NC. XD
Hard
Tried to don't stack object in this difficulty because it might be similar to the Advanced so the idea was to create something different. /w\ Rest suggestions were applied. thanks! >w</
Insane
The screen you just posted looks so amazing! so I tried to do that with the pattern! indeed, it flows very good nao. >u< as well as Hard, didn't try to overlap since I tried to avoid them all over this difficulty. XD
pkhg
Mekki
LOL
Cowboy
Hey, dou you want CtB diff or the mapset are done?:^)
Underforest

HappyRocket88 wrote:

ohhh! genial! cambiado y denunciado!
LOL XDDDDDDDDDD
Monstrata
"00:44:654 (3,1) - Slider-border overlap just makes this pattern look unpolished. But it's following DS ;w;"

The reason people are nitpicky with DS is to avoid poor visual patterns like this:
Right now you're following Distance Snap too closely, and it's jeopardizing the visual structure of your sliders, which defeats the purpose of having a consistent DS in the first place. The same goes with stacks. In editor, stacks will "appear" to be the same DS but in-game they won't.

Basically, use your judgement when looking at visual patterns. Don't blindly follow DS, especially if it creates poor visual patterns, because the reason for a consistent DS is to create visually pleasing structures. Beginners are not going to misread a pattern just because the DS is 1.05x instead of 1.00x.
Zectro
It's my time I see! :D

[General]
  1. Files unused:
    inputoverlay-background.png
    inputoverlay-key.png
  2. This song makes me happy :3
[Rockezek's Easy]
  1. 00:04:868 (3,1,2) - I guess this blanket can be improved.
  2. 00:14:014 - Is there a reason for no whistle here?
  3. 00:27:276 (1) - Uh I think one end is longer than the other
  4. 01:03:404 (4,1) - Fix blanket ;)
  5. 01:21:240 (3,1) - Aaa I feel like these should be blanketed somehow, also I think the middle anchor point of 01:22:154 (1) - should be a bit more to the upper right
[Mk's Normal]
  1. 00:03:267 (4) - Center this better between 00:02:581 (3,1) -
  2. 00:08:755 (4) - Try 1 pixel to the left
  3. 00:21:331 (3) - Try 2 pixels to the left
  4. 00:28:191 (2) - 2 pixels down
  5. Best nazi mod, no but really though, there were just only a few positioning issues like that. See for yourself if I missed anything
[Advanced]
  1. 00:35:508 (3) - This looks so weird since it's not symmetrical s:
  2. 01:02:032 (1,3) - Overlapping, making them look bad ;_;
  3. 01:02:947 (3,1) - Why did you blanket them to touch aaafuiywesuih it doesn't look good at all to me :s
  4. Please have the same distance between 01:18:496 (1,2) - as 01:18:953 (2,3) -
[Hard]
  1. 00:06:697 (3) - One pixel to the left
  2. 00:30:249 (6,7) - This looks kinda ugly.. try coming up with something different. If you can't, it's fine though.
  3. 00:31:621 (2) - Two pixels to the left ;w;
  4. 00:48:999 (2) - Fix blankeeet :D
[Insane]
  1. 00:52:886 (1,3) - Blanket properly
[Voli's Special Blend]
  1. Pretty much ready
---

I mean after you have fixed the issues in the lower difficulties you can definetly call bns for it.
It's a pretty simple/straight forward map, and a good one too. So I wish you good luck!
Cowboy
Heeya /owo/


GD Request
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Voli

Monstrata wrote:

[General]
[Voli's Special Blend]

  1. 00:12:185 (1,2) - I didn't really like these repeat sliders. The rhythm was too simple, and it didn't put any emphasis onto the vocals because of the slider-ends. I would remove the repeat and add a circle. You can make the curved slider blanket the circle too. fixed
  2. 00:19:045 (7,8) - and 00:20:417 (2,3) - The spacing isn't really congruent with the regular spacing you use for unstressed notes like 00:17:673 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 00:21:331 (4,5) - 00:24:990 (3,4) - etc... It looks kinda nazi, but keeping the spacing really gives a sense of structure to your map. ya i agree, fixed all instances
  3. 00:22:246 (2,3) - This was just awkward to play. I think you're going for a flowbreak here for emphasis but I think maintaining flow here is better since you use another flowbreak 2 beats later. Too many flowbreaks in a short time isn't good :P. applied your example, looks nice!
  4. 00:59:974 (3,1) - Just personally, starting a kiai with a flowbreak feels bad imo. Can you make this slider curve the other way? (rightward) so theres some visual flow to it? sure
  5. 01:03:633 - You can map this ;c. ehhh i initially did this intentionally to put more emphasis on the vocals after the small break there, but looking at it again, adding a circle doesnt really hurt.
  6. 01:10:264 (5,6) - Really not getting the jump here. 6 isn't especially important in the song so mapping this jump + flowbreak is really unnecesary. i ctrl+g'd 01:10:264 (5) - so that its less of a jump/flowbreak.
  7. 01:13:008 (1) - Circles please. This is kiai xP. ok
  8. 01:17:124 (4) - Really cool keyboard sounds in the bg you can focus on if you make this two circles instead of a slider. bahh too much circlespam there, I find the slider better here, (it does still sort of focus on the keyboard sounds? and patternsss
  9. 01:21:468 (5,6) - This is too much emphasis :P the jump is nearly cross screen and its a really flow-breaking jump. It's exaggerated for the sound its following. fixed
Thanks Monstrata! ;)
Mekki
Intone

Intone wrote:

Hello senpai hnnnnnngh *finished modding*

[Mk's Normal]
00:01:936 (1,2,3) snnuggle a bit? :D Nah, i like my currently pattern, it flows good already.

00:07:296 (1) remove NC i think this feels weird here Are you aware that you linked a note that is without nc, right?
00:08:047 (3) flip to curve other way, it snuggles with 2 better and leads better into (4) Meh, i like my overlap, and it would spoil the aesthetics of my pattern.
00:12:070 (4,5) snuggle the 5 into the 4 here? :D Like the earlier one, pretty much just opposite way Nah, same as first.
01:01:317 (1,2) snuggle 2 into 1? ^
01:09:277 (3) flip to curve other ways? a little awk the way it leads into the 4 I might fix it if more people complain about that, no fixes for now.

Zectro

Zectro wrote:

It's my time I see! :D

[Mk's Normal]
  1. 00:03:267 (4) - Center this better between 00:02:581 (3,1) - Lol, this is very nazi XD but fixed.
  2. 00:08:755 (4) - Try 1 pixel to the left LOOOOOL, this isn't necessary, it's fine as it is.
  3. 00:21:331 (3) - Try 2 pixels to the left ^
  4. 00:28:191 (2) - 2 pixels down ^^
  5. Best nazi mod, no but really though, there were just only a few positioning issues like that. See for yourself if I missed anything Yeah, really nazi XD

ty for modding <3
osu file format v14

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Voli

Intone wrote:

Voli's Special Blend
yayaya!
00:38:820 (1) curve other way will work better to lead into (2) i think fixed
01:18:245 (6) might want to reshape this slider since it makes space for the (4) but not the (7) so it looks a little awk wat thats fine imo
thanks Intone!

woops forgot to post both mod replies in1 post but oh well MORE POST COUNT! WOO xd

coddddddde
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Cowboy
Update~


Change the icon xD (http://puu.sh/mDFnD/02d02919d4.png)

Renamed "Jusen's Light Rain"

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Title:Boku ni Invitation (TV size)
TitleUnicode:ボクにインビテーション (TV size)
Artist:JP
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Creator:HappyRocket88
Version:Jusen's Light Rain
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Tags:ezek Voli MkGuh Jusenkyo opening Shirokuma Cafe Sloth ナマケモノ Penguin ペンギン Panda パンダ Sasako 笹子 Grizzly グリズリ Polar Bear シロクマ Llama ラマ John Paul Lam Yoshiharu Shiina
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Kagetsu
[General]
  1. 00:01:667 - inherited point en el mismo lugar que un timing point D: se repite en muchas diffs, asi que lo pondre en general xd muy importante
[Insane]
SPOILER
  1. en terminos generales el spacing es algo raro a traves de esta diff... por ejemplo 00:02:124 (2,3) - empiezas utilizando 1,5 entre estos 2 pero luego 00:03:038 (5,6) - tienen 1,65 entre si... quizas deberias revisar eso
  2. 00:04:182 (4) - yo lo moveria a x:183 y:118 para mejor flow
  3. 00:06:697 (5,6) - spacing raro aqui... no es el mismo que entre 00:06:468 (4,5) -... podrias mover 00:06:926 (6) - a x:34 y:174 para que tenga el mismo spacing con 00:06:011 (3,5) -
  4. 00:14:929 (3,7) - un poco feo ese overlap para mi gusto xd
  5. 00:32:535 (4) - spacing
  6. 00:33:450 (2,3) - ctrl+g quizas? para enfatizar la voz
  7. 00:37:337 (3) - no se si es un blanket... pero igual lo pondre en el mod, por si acaso xd
  8. 00:40:767 (2) - spacing... si lo pones en x:310 y:87 podria quedar bien
  9. 01:01:804 (6,2) - hmmm... no me gusta mucho ese overlap, pero es opinion personal xd
  10. 01:11:865 (3,4) - este overlap si lo encuentro demasiado feo xD... que tal si mueves 01:11:865 (3) - a x:156 y:239?
  11. 01:21:697 (8,9) - ctrl+g? enfatiza mejor el nc
  12. 01:23:069 (3,4) - spacing raro... por ejemplo aqui 01:21:697 (8,9) - usaste 0,75x y luego 0,6 no es muy consistente xd... yo moveria 01:23:298 (4) - a x:81 y:309, con esto quedaria bien en spacing y el flow no seria tan lineal
  13. 01:25:356 (6,7) - ^ lo mismo que arriba... moveria 01:25:356 (6) - a x:243 y:247 , 01:25:584 (7) - a x:318 y:320
  14. 01:26:270 (2,3) - haz que el spacing entre estos 2 objetos sea mayor... algo asi deberia verse mejor
  15. 01:26:727 (3,4) - sinceramente no me gusta mucho este patron xd, quizas podrias intentar algo asi

[Hard]
SPOILER
  1. 00:02:352 (2) - spacing, podrias moverlo un poco mas abajo, y asi no se toparia con 00:03:038 (4) -
  2. desde 00:21:331 - hasta 00:23:389 (6) - esta mapeado con 1,1x... es intencional? xd venias usando 1x, asi que quedaria mejor con eso
  3. 00:31:621 (2) - spacing inconsistente, ademas de que no hace un buen blanket con 00:31:849 (3) -
  4. 00:35:279 (2) - si no vas a hacer un jump, seria mejor que fueran iguales xd, dejalo en 1,1x
  5. 00:42:596 (2) - ^
  6. 00:43:511 (4) - moveria esto a x:231, y:354 para que tuviera el mismo spacing con la cola de 00:43:740 (1) -
  7. 00:49:685 (1) - usa 1,6x
  8. 00:56:545 (1,2,3) - son realmente necesarios estos jumps? ademas de que los angulos entre ellos son muy dificiles para una hard en mi opinion xd, quizas podrias reemplazarlo con un spinner en esa parte, ademas asi seria consistente con la insane
  9. 00:59:517 (1,2,3) - el spacing es muy pequeño, y es porque el inherited point en esa parte tiene a los slider en 0,9... podrias incluso hacer unos jumps con esos 3

[Advanced]
SPOILER
  1. 00:11:270 (3,6) - uhg, no me gustan ese tipo de cosas xd, pero es estilo personal en todo caso
  2. 00:45:569 (1) - se que el aimod diria que esta bien en spacing (por la velocidad del slider), pero se podria hacer missread aqui

[Normal]

[Easy]
SPOILER
  1. 00:45:569 - este break es muy largo, deberias considerar mapear esta parte xd (considerando que es tv size)

ok... i got tired, maybe i'll return to mod Voli's diff someday

gl
Lasse
Hi Rocket and guestmappers :v
M4M from your queue

General

  1. why does hard not have an animal as bg like all other diffs :(
  2. checked your custom hitosunds and they seemed fine, even though the normal-slidertick feels slightly delayed, as you can see here: http://i.imgur.com/KaOHIB9.jpg it's not 100% silent and less than 5ms and it is also the default normal-hitwhistle so it is fine (+ the fact that it is a sldiertick and thus not clickable anyways).
    If you want a slightly more responsive version, feel free to use this:
    http://puu.sh/mGT2t/a94175a7fe.zip
    (also cut off some inuadible stuff from the end to make it a bit smaller)
  3. how about using a silenced normal-sliderslide.wav? would fit well

Voli's Special Blend

  1. how about using ar~8.2 instead? I understand you want it higher than the slightly easier Insane but 8.4 seems a bit high for the density and the way it is mapped/structured makes it fine to read with 8-8.2 already
  2. 00:09:898 (3) - personally think ctrl-j on this would look nicer here and fit the patterns better
  3. 00:11:727 - vocal is so strong here, 1/2 slider + circle would fit better, 1/1 slider feels weird here imo
  4. 00:14:014 (5) - as much as I love symmetry, this really would be nicer with more spacing, right now it looks like a 1/2 since visually it is spaced the same as 00:13:557 (4) - maybe you could move 00:12:185 (1,2,3,4) - a bit down and/or this a bit up to make it clearer without affecting the symmetry
  5. 00:15:386 (5) - this 1/1 slider felt weird to me, as the music changes on the middle of it with introduction of new vocals and all, how about a 1/2 repeating slider instead? Keep the same tapping rhythm but puts this on a reverse instead of a slidertick which is more fitting.
  6. 00:29:792 (4) - doesnt really sound stroger than the other parts of this pattern, so why the huge spacing increase? Best solution to change this without messing up the "blanketed perfectly centered hitcircle" would be moving 00:29:563 (3) -
    also 00:30:477 (5) - suddenly has such a low spacing even though it doesn't seem weaker or anything
  7. 00:45:569 (5) - you nc every 4/1 before, so why not here? It even has a change in music + new sv, so there are even more reasons to if consistency alone wasn't enough
  8. 01:08:892 (5,5) - ctrl-h on this would look nice as it visually fits better with the movement before, even though both will be played the same by 99% of the players
  9. 01:13:465 (3) - why did you suddenly choose to overlap those instead of stacking like you did before? It's not a problem, I just want to know :p
  10. 01:20:325 (2,3) - using the same shapes here would go well with the whole symmetry focused style of the map

Insane

  1. 00:03:038 (5,6) - way lower ds with such a wide angle is really awkward to play as it needs quite some control of momentum, evening out the ds a bit more (doesnt have to be equal) or making the angle sharper like <=90° would play nicer
  2. 00:08:069 (5) - same as I said about the 1/1 slider ending on a strong vocal on Voli's diff: "vocal is so strong here, 1/2 slider + circle would fit better, 1/1 slider feels weird here imo"
  3. 00:10:356 - this high pitched sound + vocal would feel much nicer if clickable, it's pretty much the same as 00:12:642 (1,4) - etc.
  4. 00:15:615 (6) - could you at least space it a bit more? The change is vocals/music is emphasized enough by the change in pattern and all, such a drastic change in spacing feel a bit awkward, maybe try it like this http://i.imgur.com/IQNcHy3.jpg
  5. 00:16:301 (1) - similar to the last, but since so much is based around this it seems fine to stay like that
  6. 00:40:081 (1,2,3) - same "huge spacing change on wide/open angle" as at the start
  7. 00:42:596 (2) - a straight line with non-equal spacing plays really awkward as you need to change speed while moving in a straight line which is way harder and unnatural than doing it on an angle
  8. 00:49:685 (2) - wow I really like this slider, but you could smooth out the curve at the end a bit, since players spend quite some time on this ist is pretty noticeable during gameplay actually, try using only 2 grey nodes for that last curve and it should be smoother: http://i.imgur.com/OfOHvNJ.jpg


Hard

  1. 00:15:386 (5) - suggesting to make this a 1/2 with reverse instead, for reasoning look at what I wrote for this on voli's diff
  2. 00:41:682 (6) - spacing and also the pattern feels a bit strange, how about moving 6 into the middle of the square and adjusting the following ones?
  3. 00:56:545 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - why is this getting smaller when the music is building up? using a pattern like this in reverse would fit way better


Advanced

  1. 00:28:191 (3,1) - doesnt seem like sth for an advanced diff as it hides so much of the second slider making it a bit awkward to read
  2. 00:43:740 (1) - what's up with this slider? It looks so weird, a simple curve would be so much nicer
  3. 00:45:340 (4) - actually equal spacing for 3-4-1 would look way better, I mean it says equal cause of the sv change, but it's not visually equal and looks really strange
  4. 00:49:685 (1) - could try to make this more symmetrical or at least smooth it out a bit as it currently doesn't look that nice


Mk's Normal

  1. 00:03:496 (1,2) - autostacking makes for a really ugly overlap here http://i.imgur.com/LEsJK1c.jpg, manually moving it down a bit would look way cleaner


Rockezek's Easy

  1. 00:07:154 (2) - slider is bit short for such a shape imo, looks weird
  2. 00:32:764 (3,4,1) - having 1 visually closer to 3 than 3-4 i with this ar s a bit bad to read for such a low difficulty, consider moving 1 down or sth

good luck ranking this
hope my mod could help you
Little
M4M

[General]
  1. Just my opinion, but I think the combo colours don't go very well together. You have some light colours, some dark colours, and a grey, which make weird contrast with each other. I think it will look nicer if you choose all light colours and get rid of the grey, maybe like this: http://puu.sh/mGTHl/9205c8e0c3.png
[Rockezek's Easy]
  1. 00:15:386 - Hitsounds from the beginning to this point are too quiet. At some points they are barely audible. I recommend increasing the volume of each of those sections by at least 5%.
  2. 00:01:667 (1) - This slider shape can be a lot cleaner if you move the white nodes so they are equidistant from the ndoes before and after them, and aligned through the red node: http://puu.sh/mGSbw/281def7e72.jpg
  3. 00:27:276 (1) - Shape is uneven, and can be improved. In Easy maps, players are more likely to notice aesthetic things because they have more time to see it, so try to keep it as clean as possible.
  4. 00:52:886 - I don't think it makes much sense to pull the end of the break here. It's way too early, and be awkward to the player anticipating the next object. I think you should leave the break end at the default. Alternatively, you could start mapping at 00:52:886
  5. 00:55:630 (1) - Better to end the spinner at 00:58:374 because the last drum hit is there.
  6. 01:22:154 (1) - You can make this shape nicer too, by making the white nodes equidistant from their neighbouring nodes and getting the ticks to align with the corners: http://puu.sh/mGTfv/83aecd02e4.jpg
[Mk's Normal]
  1. 00:01:667 (1) - I don't see the benefit of using bezier sliders for this when you can achieve perfectly round sliders with three-point sliders. Same for 00:06:011 (2) and 00:16:301 (1) and 01:05:691 (5,6) and 01:18:496 (1) There are more, but I don't think I need to point out all of them. Using three-point slider is easier and can make cleaner curve for these cases.
  2. 00:18:816 (2,3) - Your distance spacing deviates significantly here. Try to make it closer to 1.25x.
  3. 00:25:447 (4) - New combo here would match your combo pattern.
  4. 00:41:910 (1) - This slider is overlapping with the hp bar, which could be distracting for players. I recommend moving it down slightly to avoid this.
[Advanced]
  1. Difference in difficulty between the verse and the chorus is pretty big. Probably fine though...
  2. 00:14:471 (1,2,3,4) - This shape is actually quite awkward to play because it's hard to control movement on wide angles like 00:14:471 (1,2,3) and also the spacing increased 00:13:557 (4,5,1) in a straight flow. I think that if you want to make increased spacing, it would flow better to make the spacing increase on a sharp angle. My suggestion is to move (1) down to stack with (3). I think this kind of sharp angled pattern will fit the feeling of the music better and more comfortable to play.
  3. 00:35:508 (3) - You can try to make this shape neater: http://puu.sh/mGW1P/80c3b2043f.jpg
  4. 00:43:740 (1) - I don't understand why you chose to use this shape here. The length isn't enough for the player to be able to see what you were doing. It will just look messy when they are playing.
  5. 00:45:340 (4,1) - Slightly awkward flow break because (4) isn't aligned with the path of (1). It would be better if it was closer to this: http://puu.sh/mGWhf/ab31d6c84e.jpg
  6. 00:49:685 (1) - The shape of this slider is not clean. Try to make each half more circular, and the area around the red node should be smoother. It should look something like this: http://puu.sh/mGX1v/4a2e8087b2.jpg
  7. 00:57:002 (2) - Better to put an eye in the loop: http://puu.sh/mGXf0/e2ccce107b.jpg
[Hard]
  1. 00:49:685 (1) - The shape looks weird. I think you should try to make it so the end of the slider is blanketed by the round part.
  2. 00:59:517 (1,2,3) - Feels better this way in my opinion: http://puu.sh/mH0Q0/6a5dbe5a1f.jpg
[Insane]
  1. 00:20:645 (3,4,5) - Flow here is awkward. It would be better to make it rounder by moving (4) down.
  2. 00:24:075 (2,3,4) - Feels weird that the spacing (3,4) is small. It breaks the flow a bit. I think you should try to change (4,5,6) like this: http://puu.sh/mH1jG/82af145c6b.jpg
  3. 01:01:575 (5,6) - I like this feeling of this better: http://puu.sh/mH1wE/93824e9f29.jpg
[Voli's Special Blend]
  1. 00:01:667 (1) - I don't see any reason for extending this slider to the blue tick. It doesn't fit the music at all.
  2. 00:40:996 (3) - Maybe this flow will be smoother: http://puu.sh/mH2er/3e8238b7fc.jpg
  3. 01:21:240 (4,5,6) - The flow here is quite awkward. I think you should consider moving (5) to the left.
  4. 01:25:127 (5,6) - This flow is also awkward because (5) doesn't align well with the path of (6), forcing the player to move their cursor in a S-shape. It would be better to move (5) like this: http://puu.sh/mH2tu/b740a9b88c.jpg
Good luck!
Topic Starter
HappyRocket88
Replies
Zectro

Zectro wrote:

[General]
  1. Files unused:
    inputoverlay-background.png
    inputoverlay-key.png

    Those are the ones you see when you click the objects at the right side. :3
  2. This song makes me happy :3 <3
[Rockezek's Easy]
  1. 00:04:868 (3,1,2) - I guess this blanket can be improved. fixed!
  2. 00:14:014 - Is there a reason for no whistle here? Nice catchy papi!
  3. 00:27:276 (1) - Uh I think one end is longer than the other The intention here was to make a 3/1 slider to give variety to the mapset.
  4. 01:03:404 (4,1) - Fix blanket ;) ayyy :c
  5. 01:21:240 (3,1) - Aaa I feel like these should be blanketed somehow, also I think the middle anchor point of 01:22:154 (1) - should be a bit more to the upper right totally agree!
[Advanced]
  1. 00:35:508 (3) - This looks so weird since it's not symmetrical s: nuu never intended to make this thing symmetric
  2. 01:02:032 (1,3) - Overlapping, making them look bad ;_; ay, but players can easily see them after the slider-tal (1) ends. ;w;
  3. 01:02:947 (3,1) - Why did you blanket them to touch aaafuiywesuih it doesn't look good at all to me :s FIXENDND!
  4. Please have the same distance between 01:18:496 (1,2) - as 01:18:953 (2,3) - \o.o/ now they're twins!
[Hard]
  1. 00:06:697 (3) - One pixel to the left one pixel here, one pixel there
  2. 00:30:249 (6,7) - This looks kinda ugly.. try coming up with something different. If you can't, it's fine though. Tried something else. I hope it looks better to your eyes. >u<
  3. 00:31:621 (2) - Two pixels to the left ;w; yep!
  4. 00:48:999 (2) - Fix blankeeet :D D: /w\
[Insane]
  1. 00:52:886 (1,3) - Blanket properly Blanketed them properly papu


I mean after you have fixed the issues in the lower difficulties you can definetly call bns for it.
It's a pretty simple/straight forward map, and a good one too. So I wish you good luck! Thank you so much for the input! >w<
Kagetsu
Fixed everything from my parts! WAO Super helpful mod. >u< Thank you very much!
Lasse

Lasse wrote:

Hi Rocket and guestmappers :v
M4M from your queue

General

  1. why does hard not have an animal as bg like all other diffs :( because the bg from the hard is one of the main characters of the anime though. ;w;
  2. checked your custom hitosunds and they seemed fine, even though the normal-slidertick feels slightly delayed, as you can see here: http://i.imgur.com/KaOHIB9.jpg it's not 100% silent and less than 5ms and it is also the default normal-hitwhistle so it is fine (+ the fact that it is a sldiertick and thus not clickable anyways).
    If you want a slightly more responsive version, feel free to use this:
    http://puu.sh/mGT2t/a94175a7fe.zip ohhhh! Thank you so much! >w</
    (also cut off some inuadible stuff from the end to make it a bit smaller)
  3. how about using a silenced normal-sliderslide.wav? would fit well I tried it, but... I suck at hitsounding things. ;w;

Insane

  1. 00:03:038 (5,6) - way lower ds with such a wide angle is really awkward to play as it needs quite some control of momentum, evening out the ds a bit more (doesnt have to be equal) or making the angle sharper like <=90° would play nicer fixed !o.o/
  2. 00:08:069 (5) - same as I said about the 1/1 slider ending on a strong vocal on Voli's diff: "vocal is so strong here, 1/2 slider + circle would fit better, 1/1 slider feels weird here imo" yep! o:
  3. 00:10:356 - this high pitched sound + vocal would feel much nicer if clickable, it's pretty much the same as 00:12:642 (1,4) - etc. totally agree! >w</
  4. 00:15:615 (6) - could you at least space it a bit more? The change is vocals/music is emphasized enough by the change in pattern and all, such a drastic change in spacing feel a bit awkward, maybe try it like this http://i.imgur.com/IQNcHy3.jpg YUS! Now it looks better
  5. 00:16:301 (1) - similar to the last, but since so much is based around this it seems fine to stay like that ay, this balnket doesn't look that bad. ;w;
  6. 00:40:081 (1,2,3) - same "huge spacing change on wide/open angle" as at the start I guess I found a way to make them look fancy ;w;
  7. 00:42:596 (2) - a straight line with non-equal spacing plays really awkward as you need to change speed while moving in a straight line which is way harder and unnatural than doing it on an angle wao, nice catch! Thank you so much!
  8. 00:49:685 (2) - wow I really like this slider, but you could smooth out the curve at the end a bit, since players spend quite some time on this ist is pretty noticeable during gameplay actually, try using only 2 grey nodes for that last curve and it should be smoother: http://i.imgur.com/OfOHvNJ.jpg YEP D: Now it looks prettier. >u<

Hard

  1. 00:15:386 (5) - suggesting to make this a 1/2 with reverse instead, for reasoning look at what I wrote for this on voli's diff dun!
  2. 00:41:682 (6) - spacing and also the pattern feels a bit strange, how about moving 6 into the middle of the square and adjusting the following ones? yeah. XDD
  3. 00:56:545 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - why is this getting smaller when the music is building up? using a pattern like this in reverse would fit way better. I got this suggestion from Monstrata's suggestion so I guess it's better to fix it. >w<

Advanced

  1. 00:28:191 (3,1) - doesnt seem like sth for an advanced diff as it hides so much of the second slider making it a bit awkward to read. I think it's totally fine for players after the slider ends the whole sliderpath of the slider (3) to approach one (1) properly.
  2. 00:43:740 (1) - what's up with this slider? It looks so weird, a simple curve would be so much nicer It looks weird in the editor but not so much in gameplay, please. ;w;
  3. 00:45:340 (4) - actually equal spacing for 3-4-1 would look way better, I mean it says equal cause of the sv change, but it's not visually equal and looks really strange TUS totally agree!
  4. 00:49:685 (1) - could try to make this more symmetrical or at least smooth it out a bit as it currently doesn't look that nice ayyy ;w; fixed!

Rockezek's Easy

  1. 00:07:154 (2) - slider is bit short for such a shape imo, looks weird It's not that noticeable in game though and it gives some variety to the map. I don't think newbies might find this slider unreadable though. /u\
  2. 00:32:764 (3,4,1) - having 1 visually closer to 3 than 3-4 i with this ar s a bit bad to read for such a low difficulty, consider moving 1 down or sth waaa.... re-positioning all the next objects. x.x

good luck ranking this
hope my mod could help you <3
Little

Little wrote:

M4M

[General]
  1. Just my opinion, but I think the combo colours don't go very well together. You have some light colours, some dark colours, and a grey, which make weird contrast with each other. I think it will look nicer if you choose all light colours and get rid of the grey, maybe like this: http://puu.sh/mGTHl/9205c8e0c3.png wooooo! Super nice suggestion! >w</
[Rockezek's Easy]
  1. 00:15:386 - Hitsounds from the beginning to this point are too quiet. At some points they are barely audible. I recommend increasing the volume of each of those sections by at least 5%. The idea of having the rounded numbers is to avoided the sliderslide to sound among the notes. So I don't think players would need to increase the vol to hear the hitsounds of this part though.
  2. 00:01:667 (1) - This slider shape can be a lot cleaner if you move the white nodes so they are equidistant from the ndoes before and after them, and aligned through the red node: http://puu.sh/mGSbw/281def7e72.jpg Hope it looks nicer to your eyes!
  3. 00:27:276 (1) - Shape is uneven, and can be improved. In Easy maps, players are more likely to notice aesthetic things because they have more time to see it, so try to keep it as clean as possible. I have to disagree because this slider is way intentional. In game players can clearly see where the slider starts and ends without any problem imo.
  4. 00:52:886 - I don't think it makes much sense to pull the end of the break here. It's way too early, and be awkward to the player anticipating the next object. I think you should leave the break end at the default. Alternatively, you could start mapping at 00:52:886 The idea of this easy was to make somethign different aside from the break the Normal manages.
  5. 00:55:630 (1) - Better to end the spinner at 00:58:374 because the last drum hit is there. Tried to follow vocals here though. /u\
  6. 01:22:154 (1) - You can make this shape nicer too, by making the white nodes equidistant from their neighbouring nodes and getting the ticks to align with the corners: http://puu.sh/mGTfv/83aecd02e4.jpg totally agree!
[Advanced]
  1. Difference in difficulty between the verse and the chorus is pretty big. Probably fine though... o.o
  2. 00:14:471 (1,2,3,4) - This shape is actually quite awkward to play because it's hard to control movement on wide angles like 00:14:471 (1,2,3) and also the spacing increased 00:13:557 (4,5,1) in a straight flow. I think that if you want to make increased spacing, it would flow better to make the spacing increase on a sharp angle. My suggestion is to move (1) down to stack with (3). I think this kind of sharp angled pattern will fit the feeling of the music better and more comfortable to play. YAS! thank you so much! now it floes better <u<
  3. 00:35:508 (3) - You can try to make this shape neater: http://puu.sh/mGW1P/80c3b2043f.jpg Yee! I tried... XD
  4. 00:43:740 (1) - I don't understand why you chose to use this shape here. The length isn't enough for the player to be able to see what you were doing. It will just look messy when they are playing. I tested it many times and I honestly believe it doesn't look that but since players can clearly see where the slider starts and ends.
  5. 00:45:340 (4,1) - Slightly awkward flow break because (4) isn't aligned with the path of (1). It would be better if it was closer to this: http://puu.sh/mGWhf/ab31d6c84e.jpg agree!
  6. 00:49:685 (1) - The shape of this slider is not clean. Try to make each half more circular, and the area around the red node should be smoother. It should look something like this: http://puu.sh/mGX1v/4a2e8087b2.jpg Those nodes made me crazy x.x
  7. 00:57:002 (2) - Better to put an eye in the loop: http://puu.sh/mGXf0/e2ccce107b.jpg XDDDDD


[Hard]
  1. 00:49:685 (1) - The shape looks weird. I think you should try to make it so the end of the slider is blanketed by the round part. ayyy the shape. Fixed!
  2. 00:59:517 (1,2,3) - Feels better this way in my opinion: http://puu.sh/mH0Q0/6a5dbe5a1f.jpg The idea here was to allow players to go from 3 -> 1 easily caring at the same time with the DS.
[Insane]
  1. 00:20:645 (3,4,5) - Flow here is awkward. It would be better to make it rounder by moving (4) down. totally agree!
  2. 00:24:075 (2,3,4) - Feels weird that the spacing (3,4) is small. It breaks the flow a bit. I think you should try to change (4,5,6) like this: http://puu.sh/mH1jG/82af145c6b.jpg wao! thank you so much!
  3. 01:01:575 (5,6) - I like this feeling of this better: http://puu.sh/mH1wE/93824e9f29.jpg yep!
Good luck! <3
Mekki
Lasse

Lasse wrote:

Mk's Normal

  1. 00:03:496 (1,2) - autostacking makes for a really ugly overlap here http://i.imgur.com/LEsJK1c.jpg, manually moving it down a bit would look way iT'S already fine imo.

Little

Little wrote:

M4M

[Mk's Normal]
  1. 00:01:667 (1) - I don't see the benefit of using bezier sliders for this when you can achieve perfectly round sliders with three-point sliders. Same for 00:06:011 (2) and 00:16:301 (1) and 01:05:691 (5,6) and 01:18:496 (1) There are more, but I don't think I need to point out all of them. Using three-point slider is easier and can make cleaner curve for these cases. Nupe, i love do those sliders, they are so beautiful and nice. I won't change them NEVAH. Sorry.
  2. 00:18:816 (2,3) - Your distance spacing deviates significantly here. Try to make it closer to 1.25x. Right, fixed.
  3. 00:25:447 (4) - New combo here would match your combo pattern. true
  4. 00:41:910 (1) - This slider is overlapping with the hp bar, which could be distracting for players. I recommend moving it down slightly to avoid this. Fixed.

Ty for modding

Café
osu file format v14

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Razor Sharp
Last part of my m4m!
  • Jusen's Light Rain

    LOL nice BG!
  1. 00:04:868 (4,1) - This distance is simply too high! Decreas this to atleast x76 for (1) to avoid a timing jump like this!
  2. 00:12:185 (4) - Try to move this to x256 as a hyper here does not fit the song at all, and also keeps the pattern you have.
  3. 00:14:243 (3,1) - The hyper here should not be here. Try to move (3) too x264 to keep the flow!
  4. 00:15:157 (4,5,1) - Current hyper is from (4) to (5), but should be from (5) to (1) if you want to have hyper here. Here is my suggestion: Move (4) to x124 and (1) too x424. This fits much better!
  5. 00:16:301 (3) - NC this maybe?
  6. 00:30:820 (4) - There is no sound here. Therefore this note should be deleted to avoid DQ due to overmap!
  7. 00:38:023 (4,5,6,1) - 1/4 hyper followed by a movement change is no good for rain. Would suggest to either remove the hyper, or make (1) move to the left instead of right.
  8. 00:53:115 (4,1) - This hyper too, its too early in the buildup to have it!
  9. 00:55:401 (3,4) - ^
  10. 00:56:773 (3,4) - ^
  11. 00:57:002 (4,1,2,3) - Try to make it like this instead:

    It fits much better, and plays out real nice!
  12. 00:58:831 (1) - If you decide to do as i suggested above, move this to x312 to improve the flow!
  13. 01:06:148 (2,3) - This distance is too small. Move (3) more to the right, and make the slider more straight to improve this!
  14. 01:10:035 (2,3) - And this is a too huge gap! Highly suggest to decrease it!
  15. 01:12:322 (3,1,2) - Both distances it too high! Move (1) too x200 to fix this!
  16. 01:23:298 (3,4) - And this distance is too high too. Decrease it.
  17. 01:23:984 (2) - Try to have this at x80 instead. To make a better flow here!
  18. 01:29:357 (2) - And this one is easy to miss imo, try to move it to x392 to improve this a little, and make it easier to handle!

    Nice difficulty!

Good luck!
Cowboy

Razor Sharp wrote:

Last part of my m4m!
  • Jusen's Light Rain

    LOL nice BG!
  1. 00:04:868 (4,1) - This distance is simply too high! Decreas this to atleast x76 for (1) to avoid a timing jump like this!
  2. 00:12:185 (4) - Try to move this to x256 as a hyper here does not fit the song at all, and also keeps the pattern you have.
  3. 00:14:243 (3,1) - The hyper here should not be here. Try to move (3) too x264 to keep the flow!
  4. 00:15:157 (4,5,1) - Current hyper is from (4) to (5), but should be from (5) to (1) if you want to have hyper here. Here is my suggestion: Move (4) to x124 and (1) too x424. This fits much better!
  5. 00:16:301 (3) - NC this maybe?
  6. 00:30:820 (4) - There is no sound here. Therefore this note should be deleted to avoid DQ due to overmap!
  7. 00:38:023 (4,5,6,1) - 1/4 hyper followed by a movement change is no good for rain. Would suggest to either remove the hyper, or make (1) move to the left instead of right.
  8. 00:53:115 (4,1) - This hyper too, its too early in the buildup to have it!
  9. 00:55:401 (3,4) - ^
  10. 00:56:773 (3,4) - ^
  11. 00:57:002 (4,1,2,3) - Try to make it like this instead:

    It fits much better, and plays out real nice!
  12. 00:58:831 (1) - If you decide to do as i suggested above, move this to x312 to improve the flow!
  13. 01:06:148 (2,3) - This distance is too small. Move (3) more to the right, and make the slider more straight to improve this!
  14. 01:10:035 (2,3) - And this is a too huge gap! Highly suggest to decrease it!
  15. 01:12:322 (3,1,2) - Both distances it too high! Move (1) too x200 to fix this!
  16. 01:23:298 (3,4) - And this distance is too high too. Decrease it.
  17. 01:23:984 (2) - Try to have this at x80 instead. To make a better flow here!
  18. 01:29:357 (2) - And this one is easy to miss imo, try to move it to x392 to improve this a little, and make it easier to handle!

    Nice difficulty!

Good luck!
Thanks for the mod Mod applied~

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Voli
Lasse

Voli's Special Blend

  1. how about using ar~8.2 instead? I understand you want it higher than the slightly easier Insane but 8.4 seems a bit high for the density and the way it is mapped/structured makes it fine to read with 8-8.2 already i disagree, I already downscaled it from 8,8 because THAT was too high in my opinion, but the way the map is structured with certain jump patterns make the map way more comfortable to play on a slightly higher AR in my opinion. No change here.
  2. 00:09:898 (3) - personally think ctrl-j on this would look nicer here and fit the patterns better [color=#00800]nope, that breaks the triangular pattern and would create uneven spacing! also I like the flow between 00:09:898 (3,4) - better as it is right now[/color]
  3. 00:11:727 - vocal is so strong here, 1/2 slider + circle would fit better, 1/1 slider feels weird here imo i prefer less circles in this part than where the instruments kick in, also doing that would break my pattern D:
  4. 00:14:014 (5) - as much as I love symmetry, this really would be nicer with more spacing, right now it looks like a 1/2 since visually it is spaced the same as 00:13:557 (4) - maybe you could move 00:12:185 (1,2,3,4) - a bit down and/or this a bit up to make it clearer without affecting the symmetry true, moved the vertical slider upwards
  5. 00:15:386 (5) - this 1/1 slider felt weird to me, as the music changes on the middle of it with introduction of new vocals and all, how about a 1/2 repeating slider instead? Keep the same tapping rhythm but puts this on a reverse instead of a slidertick which is more fitting. fixed
  6. 00:29:792 (4) - doesnt really sound stroger than the other parts of this pattern, so why the huge spacing increase? Best solution to change this without messing up the "blanketed perfectly centered hitcircle" would be moving 00:29:563 (3) - vocal introduction!
    also 00:30:477 (5) - suddenly has such a low spacing even though it doesn't seem weaker or anything pitch clearly goes down there for me
  7. 00:45:569 (5) - you nc every 4/1 before, so why not here? It even has a change in music + new sv, so there are even more reasons to if consistency alone wasn't enough woops, that was a stray one, fixed
  8. 01:08:892 (5,5) - ctrl-h on this would look nice as it visually fits better with the movement before, even though both will be played the same by 99% of the players uhh that will kinda kill the look of the pattern and make an ugly overlap with 01:07:977 (3) -
  9. 01:13:465 (3) - why did you suddenly choose to overlap those instead of stacking like you did before? It's not a problem, I just want to know :p because of the fast paced/high spacing jumps here I feel like lightly overlapping them would be easier to read, I stacked the notes in slower/less intense parts of the map
  10. 01:20:325 (2,3) - using the same shapes here would go well with the whole symmetry focused style of the map i liked to accentuate the pitch/weird synths there idk really how to explain this better but ya this was intentional

Little
[Voli's Special Blend]
  1. 00:01:667 (1) - I don't see any reason for extending this slider to the blue tick. It doesn't fit the music at all. it does in my opinion, I hear a long vocal that makes this slider fitting
  2. 00:40:996 (3) - Maybe this flow will be smoother: http://puu.sh/mH2er/3e8238b7fc.jpg it flows fine as it is, and thats a HUGE jump on a part with next to no emphasis D:
  3. 01:21:240 (4,5,6) - The flow here is quite awkward. I think you should consider moving (5) to the left. fixed
  4. 01:25:127 (5,6) - This flow is also awkward because (5) doesn't align well with the path of (6), forcing the player to move their cursor in a S-shape. It would be better to move (5) like this: http://puu.sh/mH2tu/b740a9b88c.jpg fixed, even though that slightly breaks the spacing consistency, I agree it flows better and thus its a worthy sacrifice 8D

Thanks for the mods! :D

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-Sh1n1-
lool que mrd razor se me adelanto :c si hay algo que no encaje en mi mod solo lo omites, ya que yo suelo hacer mis mods offline porque no tengo internet en casa, D: dissapointed~~

Hola happy rocket, vengo a darte una manita a pedido de jusenkyo, uwu que buena cancion, porque no me invitastes a hacerte una diff :c malo D:



Mod in spanish requested by Jusenkyo

General


  1. Omg amo el BG y la cancion lool :3
  2. por lo que veo cogistes la base de la diff de Voli, esta bien, pero para la proxima no lo hagas ya que si te fijas en las lineas verdes nunca llegas a usar la velocidad del slider en 1.00 y para ser ctb diff no me parece bien ya que tus sliders salen muy chicos y en el kiai por el contrario tus frutas salen muy separadas al usar 1.10, va a ser trabajasoso si lo cambias a 1.00 a estas alturas porque vas a tener que trabajar en los espacios denuevo y va a ser como si lo remapearas, no se ve mal asi que esto solo te lo digo para tus futuros proyectos.
  3. 00:45:340 - la linea verde que esta aqui no tiene ninguna utilidad ya que es exactamente igual a la linea sobre 00:30:935 - (creo que happyrocket tambien puede hacerce cargo de esto)

Jusen's Light Rain


  1. para ser el comienzo de la cancion siempre tienes que ir de menos a mas, en este caso te sugiero reducir la distancia entre 00:01:438 (3,4) - a 2.02x de paso para mantener consistencia con tus patrones proximos, un ejemplo de distancia puede ser 00:03:038 (3,4) -
  2. 00:03:267 (4,1) - la distancia entre ambas notas es muy corta, si la agrandas quedaria genial.
  3. 00:04:868 (4,1) - no se si tu intencion aqui fue agregar un hyperdash, por la gran distancia que dejaste, yo te recomendaria que si lo agreges ya que hay una tonada muy alta en comparacion a otras en 00:05:325 -
  4. 00:08:526 (4,5) - el apilado ahi se ve mal, yo te recomiendo mover 00:08:755 (5) - hacia x:120, depaso vas a arreglar el salto con hyperdash que deberia haber entre 00:08:755 (5,1) -
  5. 00:13:099 (1) - debio ir hacia el otro lado mas o menos por x:392 ya que al jugarlo se siente demasiado pegado a 00:12:185 (4) -, si aplicas esto no olvides reacomodar tus siguientes notas, presiona Ctrl+H en 00:14:014 (2,3,1,2,3,4,5) -, luego muevelas hacia x:116.
  6. 00:19:731 (4,1) - reduce un poco la distancia aqui sin perder el hyperdash entre 00:20:417 (2,3) -
  7. 00:30:820 (4,5) - wow, la distancia es demasiado larga, tienes que acortarla, esto es unranked.
  8. 00:34:365 (2,3,4) - no me parece motivo de hyperdash pero tampoco quiero que las estrellas bajen en esta diff o parecera platter, lo unico que te voy a aconsejar es que agrandes la distancia entre 00:34:593 (4,1) - tal como lo hicistes con 00:35:508 (3,4) -
  9. 00:38:252 (6) - deberia ser en x:304, ya que el hyperdash es forzado, deberias usar la minima distancia para conseguir un hyperdash, y tal como te dije en el punto anterior, las distancias entre 00:38:252 (6,1) - deberian ir alrededor de 1.50x como 00:35:508 (3,4) - (mismo ejemplo)
  10. 00:58:831 (1,2) - siento que esas notas estan muy separadas y la mayoria podria fallar, pero no vallas a eliminar el hyperdash que hay entre 00:59:060 (2,3) -
  11. 01:01:804 (2,3) - no se porque evitastes una nota en medio de esas dos? debistes haber guardado consistencia con 01:03:404 (3,1,2,3) - 01:07:063 (1,2,3,4) - etc, para solucionar esto yo te recomiendo lo siguiente:
    1.- 01:01:804 (2) - muevelo hacia x:272
    2.- 01:01:918 - agrega una nota en x:220
    3.- 01:02:032 (4) - muevelo hacia x:392
  12. 01:07:292 (2,3) - parece demasiado recto, que tal si mueves 01:07:406 (3) - hacia x:380?
  13. 01:09:349 (1,2) - el final del slider con 01:10:035 (2) - se ven como si estuvieran apilados y para colmo pusistes un gran salto sin hyperdash en 01:10:264 -, esa trancicion hace que sea un poco dificil, el jump entre 01:10:035 (2,3) - podria estar bien siempre y cuando le agreges mas distancia a 01:09:349 (1,2) -
  14. 01:16:895 (1,2,3,4) - mi consejo hacia esta parte seria que mantuvieras consistencia con 01:20:554 (1,2,3,4) - ya que suena completamente igual. Ahora si derrepente quieres mantener siquiera un hyperdash te recomiendo que sea entre 01:16:895 (1,2) - los demas no deberian
  15. 01:20:554 (1,2) - bueno con respecto a lo que te dije anteriormente, depende a lo que apliques en 01:16:895 (1,2,3,4) - tambien lo puedes aplicar aqui
  16. 01:23:526 (4,1,2) - porque el apiliado? en ctb se ve muy mal a menos que detras del apliado se encuentre un hyperdash, que en este caso no lo tienes
  17. 01:27:413 (3,1) - pudo haber un hyperdash para enfatizar el finish (cymbal)
  18. 01:29:357 (2) - muevelo hacia x:384 para evitar ese apilado tan molesto

Good Luck
Cowboy
Thanks Razor & Sh1n1 Again xD

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