1. Easy (1.48 stars, 93 notes)
2. Hard (2.88 stars, 170 notes)
3. Mikaela's Yuichiro (3.21 stars, 219 notes)
4. Normal (1.87 stars, 128 notes)

General
I think Klai time should start here 00:55:671

Easy
It may seems a lot, but most of them are just hitsound suggestions. You can fix them in no time

1. 00:19:293 (3) this note overlaps with (4). There shouldn't be neither stacking nor overlapping in easy diff.
2. 00:55:143 (1,2,3) add clap on tail of each note
3. 00:58:978 (1) clap on head and tail
4. 01:00:868( 3) clap
5. 01:01:340 (4) ^ tail
6. 01:03:230 (2,3,4) ^ tail
7. 01:06:537 (1,2,3) ^ tail. Well, you get the idea. Every time snare hits, add clap
8. 01:08:899 (4) all clap
9. 01:10:316 (5) clap head
10. 01:12:206 (1) clap
11. 01:12:679 (3) clap tail
12. 01:15:041 (2,3,4) clap head
13. 01:18:820 (2,3,4) ^
14. 01:18:348 (1) "finish" hitsound
15. 01:19:293 (2,3,4) clap tail
16. 01:22:600 (5) ^
17. 00:42:324 (3) Move it 1 tick back. It will match with vocal "no~"
18. 00:43:387 add slider here 2 ticks. Fill the vocal

Normal

1. 00:05:119 move (2) to here. Then add note at next white tick
2. 00:05:828 move (4) to here. Then reflect tail
3. 00:51:891 (8) You can make more symmetric heart slider. Take a look at this guide t/37194

Hard

1. 00:55:671 (4) one long slider ?
2. 01:07:954 (4) NC ?. It's snare's turn, also use normal sample set. It suits better imo.
3. 01:25:671 (9) last note seems inaudible. Maybe because of custom hitsound ?

Padge14 wrote:

Small Review of the map

Easy

01:00:395 (2,3) - I woud really avoid stacking notes on easy diffs. Did one time, and modders said "nope" :3
I think there is still work on it, but im not the best to judge ¨Easy¨songs stack fix

Normal

00:13:860 (7) - - Maybe you want to put the same distance snap just like from here 00:12:915 (5) - to here 00:13:387 (6) -
01:19:529 (3,4,1) - Maybe you want to put the same distance snap just like from here 00:14:332 (1) - to here 00:15:041 (2) -
I think there is still work on it, but im not the best to judge ¨Normal above 2stars¨songs fix, AiMod doesn't show that

Hard

00:42:442 (3) - Maybe add a note oh
00:42:915 (5) - Maybe add a note oh
00:58:978 (1) - Maybe add a new combo added
01:11:970 (3) - Maybe put them futher yah
01:12:915 (5) - Same ^
01:13:860 (1) - ^ ^
01:15:750 (4) - ^ ^
01:17:639 (7) - ^ ^
01:21:419 (1) - ^ ^
01:24:726 (8) - Maybe add a repetition added
Maybe try to have better snap betwen each note, I only list some of them I am working on it now~

Mikaela's

01:05:119 (2) - and other [...] don't understand [...] Maybe put it further
Try to have better snap between each notes. I am working on it now~

makemek wrote:

From MakeMEK's Modding Queue

General
I think Klai time should start here 00:55:671 yah, indeed

Easy
It may seems a lot, but most of them are just hitsound suggestions. You can fix them in no time

1. 00:19:293 (3) this note overlaps with (4). There shouldn't be neither stacking nor overlapping in easy diff. fix
2. 00:55:143 (1,2,3) add clap on tail of each note added
3. 00:58:978 (1) clap on head and tail I have just clap on whole slider
4. 01:00:868( 3) clap decide to clap on both 2 and 3
5. 01:01:340 (4) ^ tail clap on head
6. 01:03:230 (2,3,4) ^ tail clap on head
7. 01:06:537 (1,2,3) ^ tail. Well, you get the idea. Every time snare hits, add clap added
8. 01:08:899 (4) all clap added
9. 01:10:316 (5) clap head added
10. 01:12:206 (1) clap added
11. 01:12:679 (3) clap tail added
12. 01:15:041 (2,3,4) clap head added
13. 01:18:820 (2,3,4) ^ added
14. 01:18:348 (1) "finish" hitsound added
15. 01:19:293 (2,3,4) clap tail added
16. 01:22:600 (5) ^ added
17. 00:42:324 (3) Move it 1 tick back. It will match with vocal "no~" moved. it match no lights i guess. the lyrics is no suns no lights maybe lol
18. 00:43:387 add slider here 2 ticks. Fill the vocal added

Normal

1. 00:05:119 move (2) to here. Then add note at next white tick fix
2. 00:05:828 move (4) to here. Then reflect tail reflected. why move?
3. 00:51:891 (8) You can make more symmetric heart slider. Take a look at this guide t/37194 i prefer an unsymmetric heart slider

Hard

1. 00:55:671 (4) one long slider ? changed
2. 01:07:954 (4) NC ?. It's snare's turn, also use normal sample set. It suits better imo. fix, but i use drum, it sounds better for me
3. 01:25:671 (9) last note seems inaudible. Maybe because of custom hitsound ? use drum instead

Good Luck

1. The first note is less than 2000ms after the start of the song at 00:00:868 (1) so you should add 1200ms to AudioLeadIn in the .osu file for each diff so there's at least 2 seconds lead in before the first note to provide enough time for the player to settle. The line you want to edit is "AudioLeadIn: 0", which should be the second entry under "General". Just change the 0 to 1200 and you should be fine.
2. I'd like to see some custom combo colours, since the default ones don't really look that good to me on your current bg. I'd consider using blue, purple, brown and yellow (RBG values are below if you want to see what I came up with)
   
   SPOILER

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 255,255,60
   Combo2 : 64,0,128
   Combo3 : 0,0,128
   Combo4 : 174,87,0

3. Other than that, everything looks okay to me (though I'm no expert on metadata for Japanese music)

Easy

You use a lot of 1/2 sliders and 1/2 spacing in this diff, which isn't really recommended. From the osu! wiki page on Easy diffs:

Avoid using sliders that only use 1/2 of a beat in the time line. The rhythm these are conveying are often easily covered by extending a previous slider. 1/2 repeat sliders are just plain confusing to new players since they won't know when the slider will stop repeating.

Because of the low SV and DS, the slider heads and tails overlap each other, as do 1/2 spaced notes on the timeline, which is very confusing to newer players. You should either:

1. Replace the 1/2 sliders with either single circles for short notes and drum beats (such as 00:05:356 (2) - and 00:06:773 (4) -)
2. Combine 1/2 sliders and circles together into 1/1 sliders (such as 00:14:096 (1,2) -)
3. Remove the repeat on your 1/2 repeat sliders (00:15:041 (3) -)
4. Or remove entirely and extend some of your existing sliders (00:28:505 (1,2) -)

These are just some suggestions, so I'll let you decide what to do in each case (this is your map after all!)

Also, you use a lot of linear sliders here, which are kinda plain imo. I'd try making some of the longer ones especially into curved sliders for variety and try making them blanket some of the other notes.

00:00:868 (1) - Try and move the first note closer to the centre of the playfield to give new players more time to react

00:02:757 (3,1) - It's not a good idea to stack after just one note on Easy diffs, since it's unexpected and may be difficult for a beginner to read. I think this would look and flow nicer if 00:04:647 (1) was moved to somewhere like [x-392,y-296] instead

00:03:702 (4) - Move to [x-196,y-298] and move the tail anchor point to [x-292,y-332] to make this blanket a little neater

00:15:986 (4,5) - If you still want to keep some linear sliders, try making them into parallel or symmetrical pairs. To do this here, move the tail of (5) to [x-240,y-296]

00:18:348 (2,3) - Curve (2) more to create a nice blanket around (3)

00:19:293 (3,4) - Don't stack notes in Easy and Normal, especially for a 1/2 spacing like this. It will confuse beginners a lot. For this reason, DS must be enabled at all times.

00:20:238 (5,1) - Give (5) a little more curve to blanket (1) like this:


00:21:655 (1,2,3,4,1) - Flow is really awkward here - you have zig-zags, slider overlaps, variable DS... Try and make your flow more curved to create a more easily readable pattern

00:31:104 (4) - Move the tail to [x-272,y-288] to create a better blanket around 00:30:159 (3) - also, try and avoid the stack at 00:30:159 (3,5)

00:34:883 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - This section feels very cramped, with notes and slider bodies overlapping each other, notes too close together, and a really strange flow. You have lots of room to play with, so make use of it!

00:45:277 (6,7) - Curve (6) more to create a better blanket around (7)

00:46:222 (7) - NC here and remove from 00:46:458 (1) for the downbeat

00:50:001 (4) - NC here too, since the combo gets quite long otherwise

00:57:560 (3,4) - Same as 00:45:277 (6,7) - this could be blanketed better

00:58:978 (1,2) - Same as 00:19:293 (3,4) - avoid stacking

01:02:285 (6) - NC here and remove from 01:02:521 (1) for the start of the vocal line, then NC at 01:04:647 (5) to split the vocal line into two even combos (it's too long for just one)

From here until the end of the kiai, you use quite a lot of clap hitsounds, which can get very overbearing. You'll probably want to keep claps on even white ticks on, e.g. 01:03:702 (3,5) and the head of 01:05:592 (7) etc.

01:10:553 (1) - There's still a great drum track here, so I don't see why you switch to whistles instead of claps. It seems a bit plain to me.

01:08:899 (5,6,7,1) - Way too cramped. You really shouldn't be using 1/2 spacing in Easy, let alone consecutively like this as it's just too hard. I would just make these into 2 1/1 sliders instead and a circle

01:20:238 (4,7) - NC on both of these for the downbeat, and to keep the combo length down

01:23:308 (1) - To me, this sounds better ending on the downbeat at 01:25:907