1. Coook's Insane (4.68 stars, 333 notes)
2. Drop's Easy (1.53 stars, 97 notes)
3. Gaia's Hard (3.2 stars, 239 notes)
4. Normal (2.05 stars, 132 notes)

RifdiAN wrote:

Some Problems!

1. This map has uninherited timing points that conflict with other diff that has to be fixed! Check AIMod in editor (ctrl+shift+a) All uninherited timing points must be the same each map After this you have to resnap all notes to the ticks.

Yes, I am now aware of this. I'll update the map with same timing points a bit later.

2. Easy diff HAS to be below 1.5 stars, you can try leveling it down by converting 2 circle into sliders, make the distance snap closer, slowing down the SV (this could be troublesome so i'd rather remap :V)

Not sure about this. I'll check with Gaia later on. He has few ranked maps, so he should know better than me.

3. Try making your audio preview the same throughout the mapset to make it tidier.

I guess I missed one or two diff for that particular procedure

Unless number 1 and 2 is fixed, i can't mod any further.

Synpoo wrote:

Greetings from #modreqs !

[General]
00:50:595 - start kiai here
01:12:769 - end kiai either here or
01:13:095 - here (not really sure where's best)

I'll consider it. I don't think having kiai is in ranking criteria. XD


[Normal]
Hitsounding on this diff is really off, consider redoing it.

Deleted all the hitsounds... I'll do it again!

00:34:943 (6,7) - make these symmetrical, they currently look a little ugly
Done.
00:34:943 (6) - NC
Done.
00:47:986 (5) - NC
Done.
00:49:127 - add a note, inconsistent compared to how the rest of this part is mapped
Done. Used slider instead.
00:50:595 (10) - NC
Done.
00:58:421 (6) - NC
Done.
01:20:432 (3) - should be a whole beat long
Err...
01:21:573 (1) - move this to the next white tick and place a note here, it makes more sense i think
Err... I'll let someone try out and change it!

Thank you very much!

1. Fix the artist on Coook's insane
2. Could benefit from a kiai

1. AR is a bit low, could be increased to a 2 or even 3
2. 00:03:638 (1) - I don't think you should end this on a strong beat like that, I suggest shortening it to 00:04:943
3. 00:06:899 - to 00:19:290 - I'm not too sure about the rhythm you've got here, I feel following the guitar would sound the best as its quite dominant but that also involves a lot of red ticks, being an easy diff it may be hard to incorporate. Just my opinion.
4. 00:13:747 - single here?
5. try swapping 00:21:899 (1) - with 00:23:203 (3) - on the timeline and deleting 00:22:877 (2) - this way you can cover the vocals with a single slider which sounds a bit better.
6. 00:32:334 (1) - this slider could be shortened by 1/1 since there's a much more dominant beat on 00:32:660 -
7. 00:33:312 (2) - try re-positioning this for better flow.
8. 00:37:877 - single here? strong beat that shouldn't be missed
9. 01:02:334 (3) - Try something else instead of this, sounds awkward as 01:02:660 - and 01:02:986 - are much more dominant than 01:02:823 -
10. 01:20:269 (4) - avoid stacking on easier diffs, hard to read for newbies

1. AR too low, increase to 4/5 plz (especially since the next diff is 8)
2. 00:07:551 (3) - assuming you're following the guitar, this slider should start here 00:07:388 - sounds a bit off otherwise
3. 00:10:160 (3) - same story here, it should start 00:09:997 -
4. 00:12:769 (3) - ^
5. 00:21:410 (6) - try avoid stacking on normal diffs, hard to read for newbies
6. 00:33:475 (3,4,5) - maybe a bit complex for a normal, try this?
   
   example

   
7. 00:44:073 - reckon you should map this space
8. 00:50:595 (1) - hmm try this instead
   
   example

   
9. 00:53:203 (1) - ^
10. 00:55:812 (1) - try this, sounds a little better imo
    
    example

    
11. 00:59:399 (2) - move this forward by 1/2 and put a single at 00:59:399 -
12. 01:01:029 (1) - same as 00:50:595 (1)
13. 01:03:638 (1) - try this
    
    example

    
14. 01:17:823 (3) - & 01:20:432 (3) - extend by 1/2
15. in case you aren't already, I strongly suggest you use DS as generally with normals you should keep your spacing consistent. Some areas a bit off here and there which should be fixed.
16. I also suggest spending some time making everything a little more polished and prettier.

1. tick widescreen support
2. 00:13:747 (7) - and 00:49:616 (8) - silent slider end might sound better
3. could't find much worth mentioning sorry qq, solid map.

1. 00:06:491 (2) - hmm i feel this 1/4 note is a bit unnecessary as nothing in the music really supports them being there. This applies to all the other ones as well
2. 00:07:387 (1) - reduce by 1/2 so it matches the guitar?
3. 00:10:648 (3) - switch to a 1/2 slider maybe, that 1/1 gap sounds odd
4. 00:12:605 (1,2,3) - same story here, sliders may sound better, also note those guitar notes drag on for 1/2
5. 00:15:540 (4) - single here?
6. 00:22:877 (6,7,8) - would be fine as two singles I thinks, same goes for the following ones
7. 00:54:344 (4) - try this
   
   example

   
8. 00:56:627 (4,5,6) - try this
   
   example

   
9. 01:05:105 (5,6,7) - same problem here, imo these gaps shouldn't be here in an insane diff
10. 01:24:507 (1) - you could probably map more of this instead of a long slider
11. 01:24:507 (1) - slider should end here 01:28:258 -

moph wrote:

hiya o/ as requested
[General]

1. Fix the artist on Coook's insane
2. Could benefit from a kiai

[Normal]

1. AR too low, increase to 4/5 plz (especially since the next diff is 8)
   I was wondering about that too
   
2. 00:07:551 (3) - assuming you're following the guitar, this slider should start here 00:07:388 - sounds a bit off otherwise
   Yes. This sounds much better
   
3. 00:10:160 (3) - same story here, it should start 00:09:997 -
   Yes
   
4. 00:12:769 (3) - ^
   Yes.
   
5. 00:21:410 (6) - try avoid stacking on normal diffs, hard to read for newbies
   changed!, i left easy stackings still though
   
6. 00:33:475 (3,4,5) - maybe a bit complex for a normal, try this?
   
   example

   
   Changed!
   
7. 00:44:073 - reckon you should map this space
   used slider!
   
8. 00:50:595 (1) - hmm try this instead
   
   example

   
   yes
   
9. 00:53:203 (1) - ^
   yes
   
10. 00:55:812 (1) - try this, sounds a little better imo
    
    example

    
    yes
    
11. 00:59:399 (2) - move this forward by 1/2 and put a single at 00:59:399 -
    done
    
12. 01:01:029 (1) - same as 00:50:595 (1)
    done
    
13. 01:03:638 (1) - try this
    
    example

    
    done
    
14. 01:17:823 (3) - & 01:20:432 (3) - extend by 1/2
    done
    
15. in case you aren't already, I strongly suggest you use DS as generally with normals you should keep your spacing consistent. Some areas a bit off here and there which should be fixed.
    in progress
    
16. I also suggest spending some time making everything a little more polished and prettier.

In progress XD

Good luck, hope this was helpful!

Wow! Thanks moph.

Rumia- wrote:

from my modding queue~

[Normal]
00:19:943 (3) - i think its nicer to use constant ds https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2962598
Thanks~
00:52:062 (3) - i think its better to remove this one , would be nicer to play with the vocal emphasis
Yes,yes

good luck ~
Thanks~

ReeChelly wrote:

Hi, from my queue :3
Just short lol, almost perfect

[Insane]
Good, but check all blanket please~~

[Hard]
00:19:290 (1) - move NC to 00:19:616 (2)

00:42:116 (4) - blanket 00:42:606 (5) -

Cookiesi wrote:

Thanks, but I wonder if you'll get denied for kudosu if I give you one. This is certainly helpful, but just tad too short D:

ReeChelly wrote:

Hi, from my queue :3
Just short lol, almost perfect

[Insane]
Good, but check all blanket please~~

[Hard]
00:19:290 (1) - move NC to 00:19:616 (2)

00:42:116 (4) - blanket 00:42:606 (5) -

Gaia wrote:

Rumiaiaiaiaiaiaiaiaiaia

Rumia- wrote:

from my modding queue~

[Gaiaiaiaiaiaiaiaiaiaiaiaiaia's Hard]
00:12:279 (2) - might wanna move this up to make a proper blanket ? nah :p

SPOILER

00:29:725 (1,2) - prefer to stact this offset antijumps yeyeyeyeye
00:42:116 (4,5) - blanket ? ww dont like blanketing that much :s
01:25:160 (2) - how about mirror this so it doesnt make unnecessary overlap I LOVE OVERLAP

SPOILER

01:26:790 (6,1) - swap nc huh? but the downbeat is on the slider (and has more emphasis too)

good luck ~

ReeChelly

ReeChelly wrote:

Hi, from my queue :3
Just short lol, almost perfect

[Insane]
Good, but check all blanket please~~

[Hard]
00:19:290 (1) - move NC to 00:19:616 (2) breaks my consistency :c

00:42:116 (4) - blanket 00:42:606 (5) - dont like blanketing that much

thanks for modding but srry for no change orz

made some of my own changes tho

SPOILER

osu file format v14

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Countdown: 0
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[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.8

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TitleUnicode:My Secret (TV Size)
Artist:Saaya Mizuno
ArtistUnicode:水野 佐彩
Creator:Cookiesi
Version:Gaia's Hard
Source:Kaichou wa Maid-sama!
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Spaghetti wrote:

Heyo
[Coook's Insane]
00:05:431 (1,2) - does not flow at all, either just make it one repeating slider.
00:05:921 (1,2,3,4) - confusing pattern, doesn't really play well
00:07:224 (3) - stack under 00:07:877 (5) - or vice versa
00:14:725 (2) - plays better as a 1/4 slider
00:17:333 (3) - ^
00:13:583 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - remove the NC, it really makes no sense and it's still part of the buildup of 00:12:606 (1,2,3) -
00:40:811 (3) - Copy 00:40:485 (2) - and Ctrl JH (Don't forget to add the repeat )
00:42:768 (1) - rotate the slider around the selection so the end somewhat stacks under 00:42:442 (6) -
00:48:964 (3) - NC (Or take out the NC at 00:48:474 (1,2) - and place one at 00:48:964 (3)) -
00:49:453 (4) - ^ (unless you go with the second option)
00:50:268 (1,2,3,4) - remove the NC, it really makes no sense and it's still part of the buildup of 00:49:942 (1,2) - before the kiai time.
00:50:594 (1) - Would fit better as a 1/4 slider for the boom *snap* sound the drums provide at the kiai.
00:57:279 (1,2) - Is that jump really necessary? If anything, stack the 1/8 slider under the start of the 1/4 slider.
00:59:561 (5,6,7,8,1,2) - Weird NC, just place it at the beginning of the stream.
01:02:496 (5) - NC?(If so, fix the distance between this and 01:02:659 (6) - so it's even with the distace between 01:02:170 (4) - and this.)
01:02:985 (7) - Stack under the end of 01:03:311 (9) -
01:06:083 (11) - Fix so spacing 01:05:920 (10,11,1) - is all even.
01:11:138 (7,8,9,10) - New measure and melody shift, NC.
01:23:040 (6) - NC

Great job! Very fun map to play and I hope you reach whatever goals your aiming for with this

Thanks~
EDIT: 2lazy for grammar, rip periods/caps