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Hashimoto Chinami, Ogura Yui, Kanemoto Hisako - BINKAN Atten

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Abe Nana
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014년 8월 19일 화요일 at 오후 7:05:50

Artist: Hashimoto Chinami, Ogura Yui, Kanemoto Hisako
Title: BINKAN Attention(TV-size)
Source: 最近、妹のようすがちょっとおかしいんだが。
Tags: Recently My Sister Is Unusual saikin imouto no yousu ga chotto okashiin daga imocho opening OP TV size koreapenguin
BPM: 175
Filesize: 8264kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.65 stars, 120 notes)
  2. Hard (3.56 stars, 262 notes)
  3. Insane (4.8 stars, 354 notes)
  4. K.Penguin's Normal (1.95 stars, 145 notes)
Download: Hashimoto Chinami, Ogura Yui, Kanemoto Hisako - BINKAN Attention(TV-size)
Download: Hashimoto Chinami, Ogura Yui, Kanemoto Hisako - BINKAN Attention(TV-size) (no video)
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Thanks to Momochikun to MP3 & Video


My first 'Anti Distance beatmap'


Easy - 100%
Normal - 100% koreapenguin
Hard - 100%
Insane - 100%
Last edited by Abe Nana , edited 46 times in total.
Quilt
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Quilt
かわいい
最近、-Chata-のようすがちょっとおかしいんだが
Abe Nana
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Joined March 2011
Topic Starter
Abe Nana

Quilt wrote:

かわいい
最近、-Chata-のようすがちょっとおかしいんだが
最近、妹のようすがちょっと犯しいんだが
Dark Fang
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Dark Fang
change title to "BINKAN?あてんしょん(TV-size)"

Proof
Abe Nana
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Abe Nana

Dark Fang wrote:

change title to "BINKAN?あてんしょん(TV-size)"

Proof

존귀
Dark Fang
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Dark Fang

-Chata- wrote:

존귀
zzz
koreapenguin
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Joined March 2012
koreapenguin
Normal
osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: ImoCho.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 500
PreviewTime: 61348
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 24663,72663,78834
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.1

[Metadata]
Title:BINKAN Attention(TV-size)
TitleUnicode:BINKAN♡あてんしょん(TV-size)
Artist:Hashimoto Chinami, Ogura Yui & Kanemoto Hisako
ArtistUnicode:橋本ちなみ, 小倉唯 & 金元寿子
Creator:-Chata-
Version:K.Penguin's Normal
Source:最近、妹のようすがちょっとおかしいんだが。
Tags:Recently My Sister Is Unusual saikin imouto no yousu ga chotto okashiin daga imocho opening OP TV size
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:1.16
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Imocho.png",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
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61348,-100,4,2,1,65,0,0
62377,-100,4,2,2,70,0,1
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73348,-100,4,2,2,70,0,1
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[Colours]
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Combo2 : 255,157,206
Combo3 : 255,125,125

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Normal is done :3 late sorry
iyasine
1,135 posts
Joined January 2012
iyasine
ちゃたさん ぺんぺん やっほ～(~o~)/　リクエストありがとうございます :D

[Easy]
  1. 00:17:120 (1,2,3) - デザインの提案。(3)番までの流れが少し窮屈かなと思ったのでこんなのはいかがでしょう？
    img & code
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    272,254,18148,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    211,332,18491,2,0,P|173:278|180:213,1,135,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  2. 00:11:977 ~ 00:15:405 - clap追加の提案。ドラムのスネアに合わせて付けてみてはいかがでしょう？
    hitsounding
    00:11:977 (2) - add clap ?
    00:12:663 - ^
    00:13:348 - ^
    00:14:034 - ^
    00:14:720 (1) - ここはwhistle → clap . whistleを付けるなら手前の00:14:377 - ここだと思います。
    00:15:405 - add clap ?
  3. 00:18:148 (2) - clap合うと思います。
  4. 00:26:548 - vocalのアタックに合わせてwhistleいかがでしょう？
  5. 00:31:348 - ここはclapではなく S:C1のwhistleを使ってvocalをfrowしたほうがいいと思います。手前の00:31:177 - ここでスネアが鳴っているので少々混乱します。
  6. 00:33:063 - whistle ?
  7. 01:01:691 - vocalの音程が比較的高めなのでwhistleを付けてもいいと思います。
  8. 01:13:005 - clap ?
[K.Penguin's Normal]
  1. 01:11:120 - whistle ?
    very nice!
[Hard]
  1. 00:04:263 - clap ?
  2. 00:04:948 - whistle ?
  3. 00:05:463 - whistle → clap
  4. 00:05:634 - whistle ?
  5. 00:13:005 - ^
  6. 00:19:691 - ^
  7. 01:01:691 - ^
  8. 01:28:263 (1) - ここのdistanceですが、手前の(5)~(6)へのdistanceと区別がつきにくいので、x 1.3くらい飛ばしてもいいかと。アンチジャンプにするにしても(6)にスタックさせるか、distanceを x 0.1~ x 0.2 まで縮めたほうがいいと思います。
[Insane]
  1. 00:22:263 (2) - add NC ? slider速度がx 0.5 から x 1.0に戻るのでプレイヤー視点から見ると色を分けてくれたほうがプレイしやすくて嬉しいです :D
  2. 00:05:805 (6,1) - このようなslider end stack の配置が多くありましたが、これを使う場合stackさせたサークルの後の配置にすこし気を配る必要があります。
    例えば00:05:805 (6,1,2) - このように延長線上に x1.35で(2)がある場合(1)とほぼ同時に目に入ってくるので少しリズムが狂います。
    逆に00:17:120 (1,2,3) - ここみたいに(3)が結構離れていて視点から外れるときは読みやすく処理しやすいです。最近気づいたんですがこれを意識するとかなりend stackの使い分けしやすいのでオススメです ;)
以上です！ちゃたさん ぺんぺん ふぁいと～°˖✧◝( ˘ω˘ )◜✧˖°
Abe Nana
1,148 posts
Joined March 2011
Topic Starter
Abe Nana
All fixedです

ありがとうございました°˖✧◝( ˘ω˘ )◜✧˖°
- H i N a -
- H i N a -
Hi~ from my queue


Easy

00:20:205 (1) - remove clap ?
00:35:120 (3) - I think slider should end at 00:35:634 to follow the rhythm
01:06:835 (4) - remove finish ?


K.Penguin's Normal

00:40:263 (4) - slider should be end at 00:40:605


Hard

00:16:091 (1) - remove finish ?
01:06:834 (1,2,3) - ^
01:16:948 (1) - remove clap on the start slider to follow music sound


Insane

01:02:034 (3,4) - I think 1/4 slider is better than 1/8
01:04:948 (1,2) - remove clap ?
01:06:320 (7) - remove whistle ?
01:15:920 (2,3) - remove clap ?
01:20:805 (4) - ^
01:22:777 (1,2) - ^


Hope it help you

Good Luck :D
Satellite
3,683 posts
Joined June 2012
Satellite
Hi you are M4M request.

[Easy]
  1. 00:04:091 (2) - 後ろにclapを追加?
  2. 00:05:463 (4) - Finishも追加したほうがフィットするかも
  3. 00:09:920 (2) - 後ろにFinishも追加したほうがいいかも
  4. 00:15:748 (3) - add Finish
  5. 00:22:605 (1) - ^
[K.Penguin's Normal]
  1. too many all notes unsnapped. you should be check AIMOD~
  2. AR+1
[Hard]
  1. 00:05:462 (5) - 視点にFinish追加
  2. 00:11:377 (3) - 私ならremove sliderします、ちょっとHardにしては難しいような・・・・サビのパートより音が多いし音に合っててもここにはフィットしてないかも
  3. 00:29:120 (5) - ちょっとDSのズレが目立つかも
  4. 00:59:463 (1,3) - ここの2つのスライダーの後ろにFinishいれたらフィットすると思う
  5. 01:01:863 (2) - Overmapping.音がないように思えたので remove noteしたほうがbetter.
  6. 01:02:205 (4) - ^
[Insane]
  1. 00:10:263 (1) - add Finish
  2. 00:40:263 (3) - 終点のwhistleはないほうがいいかも？
  3. 00:44:205 (5) - ここも視点にFinishあるほうがいいかも？
  4. 00:58:948 (4,2) - Hardで指摘したように2個頭にFinish入れたほうが合うかも？
Nice mapだよ!! 頑張って~ :)
Abe Nana
1,148 posts
Joined March 2011
Topic Starter
Abe Nana

- H i N a - wrote:

Hi~ from my queue


Easy

00:20:205 (1) - remove clap ?
00:35:120 (3) - I think slider should end at 00:35:634 to follow the rhythm nope
01:06:835 (4) - remove finish ? nope. I'll keep same as Insane


K.Penguin's Normal

00:40:263 (4) - slider should be end at 00:40:605


Hard

00:16:091 (1) - remove finish ? nope
01:06:834 (1,2,3) - ^ nope
01:16:948 (1) - remove clap on the start slider to follow music sound nope


Insane

01:02:034 (3,4) - I think 1/4 slider is better than 1/8
01:04:948 (1,2) - remove clap ?
01:06:320 (7) - remove whistle ?
01:15:920 (2,3) - remove clap ?
01:20:805 (4) - ^
01:22:777 (1,2) - ^
all nope.. sorry


Hope it help you

Good Luck :D

Satellite wrote:

Hi you are M4M request.

[Easy]
  1. 00:04:091 (2) - 後ろにclapを追加?
  2. 00:05:463 (4) - Finishも追加したほうがフィットするかも
  3. 00:09:920 (2) - 後ろにFinishも追加したほうがいいかも
  4. 00:15:748 (3) - add Finish
  5. 00:22:605 (1) - ^
[K.Penguin's Normal]
  1. too many all notes unsnapped. you should be check AIMOD~
  2. AR+1
[Hard]
  1. 00:05:462 (5) - 視点にFinish追加
  2. 00:11:377 (3) - 私ならremove sliderします、ちょっとHardにしては難しいような・・・・サビのパートより音が多いし音に合っててもここにはフィットしてないかも
  3. 00:29:120 (5) - ちょっとDSのズレが目立つかも　（？３？）
  4. 00:59:463 (1,3) - ここの2つのスライダーの後ろにFinishいれたらフィットすると思う
  5. 01:01:863 (2) - Overmapping.音がないように思えたので remove noteしたほうがbetter.
  6. 01:02:205 (4) - ^ nope. ちょんちょんって音がしてるので
[Insane]
  1. 00:10:263 (1) - add Finish
  2. 00:40:263 (3) - 終点のwhistleはないほうがいいかも？　このままで
  3. 00:44:205 (5) - ここも視点にFinishあるほうがいいかも？
  4. 00:58:948 (4,2) - Hardで指摘したように2個頭にFinish入れたほうが合うかも？
Nice mapだよ!! 頑張って~ :)
thanks for mod ^3^
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
Annyeonghaseyo

[Easy]
00:30:663 (3) - New combo for new emphase?

[K.Penguin's Normal]
00:40:263 (4) - Add 1 repeating slider since this note seems following the vocal...
00:55:177 (2) - Add clap? You seems forgot it
01:26:034 (1) - Too far from center of spinner. This could be difficult for beginners to reach this note. Please make it closer to make it easier

[Hard]
00:09:920 (7) - Spacing looks bit far from previous one
00:16:091 (1,2) - Swap new combo for new emphasing of music
01:04:263 (2) - Arrange the slider like this to make a blanket slider a better flow? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1786907
01:09:063 (1) - Why clap here? The music itself doesn't hit a snare here btw
01:21:063 (2,3) - Swap the placement? Because I thought that this pattern is a zigzag one. Well, that's my opinion btw

Good luck....
wring
596 posts
Joined February 2010
wring
from in-game

[Easy]
HP+1
00:02:720 (4) - ctrl+gしたほうが好きです、そのあとのずれはまとめてずらせばいいと思います
00:29:463 (2) - 00:29:291 - ここからスタートにしたほうがいい感じかも、終わりは延ばしてください
00:29:291 (2) - endにSC1whistleのほうが合ってる
00:33:063 (1) - こっち向きはどうでしょう
01:16:777 (2) - blanketしましょう
01:28:348 - 01:28:777 - 使わない緑線なので消しましょう

[K.Penguin's Normal]
looks too many New Combo there, suggested remove some
00:02:720 (2) - use SC1 for this?
00:13:691 (3) - move to and start from 00:13:863 - ? It sound better
00:15:063 (2) - miss putting
00:44:548 (1) - remove whistle and add clap
00:49:520 - add note?

[Hard]
00:06:834 (3) - 下向かせて少しジャンプさせないですか
00:31:348 (4,5) - こういう音取りはどうでしょう
00:37:863 (3) - ここにスライダー00:39:405 (2) - ctrl+hjしたやつを使いませんか？
01:17:463 (2) - スペーシングがちょっと気になります

[Insane]
00:08:034 (5) - 少しだけ左下にずらしてスタックしないようにするのはどうでしょう 00:00:662 (1,3) - ここみたいな感じで
00:25:177 (2) - whistle on end
00:55:177 (2,3) - 前の00:54:491 (2,3) - が結構離れているのに、ここがそれよりもだいぶ近いのが気になります。もっとジャンプさせたほうが自然？ あるいは00:54:834 (1) - の頭にスタックさせるのもあり
00:56:548 (5) - ここは普通にスタックさせていいと思います
00:59:120 (5) - ctrl+gして00:58:263 (1) - にスタックあるいはちょいズレさせるのはどうでしょう
01:18:663 (8,9) - whistle?


yoshi
Abe Nana
1,148 posts
Joined March 2011
Topic Starter
Abe Nana

Leorda wrote:

Annyeonghaseyo

[Easy]
00:30:663 (3) - New combo for new emphase?

[K.Penguin's Normal]
00:40:263 (4) - Add 1 repeating slider since this note seems following the vocal...nope... jsut take keeping now
00:55:177 (2) - Add clap? You seems forgot it
01:26:034 (1) - Too far from center of spinner. This could be difficult for beginners to reach this note. Please make it closer to make it easier

[Hard]
00:09:920 (7) - Spacing looks bit far from previous one
00:16:091 (1,2) - Swap new combo for new emphasing of music
01:04:263 (2) - Arrange the slider like this to make a blanket slider a better flow? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1786907 nope. isn't my style
01:09:063 (1) - Why clap here? The music itself doesn't hit a snare here btw I was intended make rhythm
01:21:063 (2,3) - Swap the placement? Because I thought that this pattern is a zigzag one. Well, that's my opinion btw

Good luck....

wring wrote:

from in-game

[Easy]
HP+1
00:02:720 (4) - ctrl+gしたほうが好きです、そのあとのずれはまとめてずらせばいいと思います
00:29:463 (2) - 00:29:291 - ここからスタートにしたほうがいい感じかも、終わりは延ばしてください
00:29:291 (2) - endにSC1whistleのほうが合ってる nope
00:33:063 (1) - こっち向きはどうでしょう
01:16:777 (2) - blanketしましょう
01:28:348 - 01:28:777 - 使わない緑線なので消しましょう

[K.Penguin's Normal]
looks too many New Combo there, suggested remove some
00:02:720 (2) - use SC1 for this? nope
00:13:691 (3) - move to and start from 00:13:863 - ? It sound better
00:15:063 (2) - miss putting ?3?
00:44:548 (1) - remove whistle and add clap
00:49:520 - add note?

[Hard]
00:06:834 (3) - 下向かせて少しジャンプさせないですか
00:31:348 (4,5) - こういう音取りはどうでしょう
00:37:863 (3) - ここにスライダー00:39:405 (2) - ctrl+hjしたやつを使いませんか？
01:17:463 (2) - スペーシングがちょっと気になります スペーシングはあってるけどちょっと向き変え

[Insane]
00:08:034 (5) - 少しだけ左下にずらしてスタックしないようにするのはどうでしょう 00:00:662 (1,3) - ここみたいな感じで
00:25:177 (2) - whistle on end
00:55:177 (2,3) - 前の00:54:491 (2,3) - が結構離れているのに、ここがそれよりもだいぶ近いのが気になります。もっとジャンプさせたほうが自然？ あるいは00:54:834 (1) - の頭にスタックさせるのもあり
00:56:548 (5) - ここは普通にスタックさせていいと思いますとりあえずこのまま
00:59:120 (5) - ctrl+gして00:58:263 (1) - にスタックあるいはちょいズレさせるのはどうでしょうてょっと難易度が曖昧な気がします
01:18:663 (8,9) - whistle?


yoshi
thanks for modders (^3^)
rui
1,388 posts
Joined February 2009
rui
from modreqs Irc
In my mod. You can ignore me

[General]
00:11:634 ここで音量上がるので少し変化をもたせたい。最初ボリューム60%ではじめて、ここで65%に変えるほうがいいと思う。

[Easy]
Easyにしては赤線でのリバースを使い過ぎに思えるかな。少し減らしたほうがいいと思うよ。
少なくとも00:48:148 (2) - 00:48:834 (3) - の２連続Easyでは難しすぎると思うから(2)は白→白のスライダーに変えたほうがいいよ

[K.Penguin's Norma]
00:08:034 (2) - You should use the same pattern as ever.Because cause confusion http://puu.sh/9Z9xX.jpg
00:23:291 (2) - This distance cause confusion.You should use x1.0 distance.
00:39:405 (2,3,4) - How about this pattern ? http://puu.sh/9Zapf.jpg
00:50:720 (2) - this revers is not fit imo. How about this ? http://puu.sh/9ZaH6.jpg
01:06:491 (X) - add note and 01:06:663 (1) - delete this note.

[Hard]
00:46:263 (2,3,4) - Insaneと同じ
00:19:348 (3) - このスライダーも終点を青線まで延ばしたほうが纏まりがあっていいと思う

[Insane]
00:46:263 (3,4,5) - 60% 65% 70%と音量変化させるのはどう? 00:47:291 (1) - で65%に戻すのも忘れずに
00:48:491 (1,2,3) - 00:48:491 (1) - を青線までにして赤線→白→赤は単発にすることを強くお勧めします。今のままだとバックの音とずれてるように思えます。例えば俺ならこんな感じ。http://puu.sh/9Z7bP.jpg(赤(1)はピンク(4)にスタックしてます。)

特にmodすることもありませんでした以上です。頑張ってね～ヽ(´∀｀*)ﾉ
Abe Nana
1,148 posts
Joined March 2011
Topic Starter
Abe Nana

rui wrote:

from modreqs Irc
In my mod. You can ignore me

[General]
00:11:634 ここで音量上がるので少し変化をもたせたい。最初ボリューム60%ではじめて、ここで65%に変えるほうがいいと思う。

[Easy]
Easyにしては赤線でのリバースを使い過ぎに思えるかな。少し減らしたほうがいいと思うよ。
少なくとも00:48:148 (2) - 00:48:834 (3) - の２連続Easyでは難しすぎると思うから(2)は白→白のスライダーに変えたほうがいいよ　 いけるとおもう。このまま

[K.Penguin's Norma]
00:08:034 (2) - You should use the same pattern as ever.Because cause confusion http://puu.sh/9Z9xX.jpg　今のままがいいと思うので
00:23:291 (2) - This distance cause confusion.You should use x1.0 distance.
00:39:405 (2,3,4) - How about this pattern ? http://puu.sh/9Zapf.jpg
00:50:720 (2) - this revers is not fit imo. How about this ? http://puu.sh/9ZaH6.jpg
01:06:491 (X) - add note and 01:06:663 (1) - delete this note. このままがあってる

[Hard]
00:46:263 (2,3,4) - Insaneと同じ
00:19:348 (3) - このスライダーも終点を青線まで延ばしたほうが纏まりがあっていいと思う　nope

[Insane]
00:46:263 (3,4,5) - 60% 65% 70%と音量変化させるのはどう? 00:47:291 (1) - で65%に戻すのも忘れずに
00:48:491 (1,2,3) - 00:48:491 (1) - を青線までにして赤線→白→赤は単発にすることを強くお勧めします。今のままだとバックの音とずれてるように思えます。例えば俺ならこんな感じ。http://puu.sh/9Z7bP.jpg(赤(1)はピンク(4)にスタックしてます。) nope. ハードの方は難しすぎるしそうやると後ろの音とあわなくて違和感もある

特にmodすることもありませんでした以上です。頑張ってね～ヽ(´∀｀*)ﾉ
thanks!
Joon
1,359 posts
Joined June 2009
Joon
Hi

Hit sound modding

[Easy]
fine

[K.Penguin's Normal]
fine

[Hard]
fine

[Insane]
fine

리듬&히트 사운드와 관련해서는 문제점이 없습니다.
Good luck
Beige
Elite Mapper
2,191 posts
Joined February 2011
Beige
As your request!

[General]

Fine

[Easy]
  1. 01:14:720 (3) - 제안입니다, 마지막 점을 한칸만 올려보세요.
[Normal]
  1. 00:34:948 (1) - 나지모딩, 마지막 점을 (360,136)으로 옮겨보세요.
  2. 00:45:748 (3) - 흠... 이것 또한 나지모딩 일 수도 있지만, (4) 슬라이더를 복사 하셔서 두번 돌리시고 만드시면 더 좋은 흐름을 만들 수 있습니다. (4)는 다음 노트를 덮기 위해 한 것임을 알기에...
  3. 00:49:863 (1) - 딱히 필요 없어보이지만... 플레이 하다보면 뭔가 덧나보이는 것 같아서요 ㅋㅋ... 이 슬라이더 끝을 (3)이랑 스택시켜보세요. 만약 스택 시키셨으면, 그 전 노트와 다음 노트 옮기시는거 잊지마세요!
  4. 01:04:948 (3) - 뉴콤보 지우시는게 좋을 것 같습니다. 음이 끝나는 부분이 슬라이더 끝 부분이기는 한데 개인적으로 보기는 좀 어색한것 같습니다.
[Hard]

재밌게 잘만드셨음 bb

[Insane]
  1. 00:12:663 (4) - 좋은 흐름을 위해 이렇게 해보세요~
  2. 00:56:548 (5) - 스택 시키니까 리듬감이 없어보입니다. 적당히 거리를 두어보시면 더 재밌는 패턴이 나올 것 같습니다.
  3. 01:01:691 (2) - 앞 슬라이더의 변속을 알기 위해 뉴콤보 해주시는것 어떨까요?
  4. 01:24:234 (6,1) - 좋은 연타 흐름을 위해서 (6)은 오른쪽으로 한 칸 (1)은 오른쪽으로 2칸 가보세요~
  5. 01:28:263 (4) - 노래의 끝을 알리는 뉴콤은 어떨까요? 하드에서는 뉴콤보를 하셨는데...

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Abe Nana
1,148 posts
Joined March 2011
Topic Starter
Abe Nana

W h i t e wrote:

As your request!

[General]

Fine

[Easy]
  1. 01:14:720 (3) - 제안입니다, 마지막 점을 한칸만 올려보세요.

[Hard]

재밌게 잘만드셨음 bb

[Insane]
  1. 00:12:663 (4) - 좋은 흐름을 위해 이렇게 해보세요~ nope
  2. 00:56:548 (5) - 스택 시키니까 리듬감이 없어보입니다. 적당히 거리를 두어보시면 더 재밌는 패턴이 나올 것 같습니다.
  3. 01:01:691 (2) - 앞 슬라이더의 변속을 알기 위해 뉴콤보 해주시는것 어떨까요? nope. 그럴 필요까지는 없어보입니다. 그리고 뭔가 이상해요.
  4. 01:24:234 (6,1) - 좋은 연타 흐름을 위해서 (6)은 오른쪽으로 한 칸 (1)은 오른쪽으로 2칸 가보세요~
  5. 01:28:263 (4) - 노래의 끝을 알리는 뉴콤은 어떨까요? 하드에서는 뉴콤보를 하셨는데...

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