Hata Motohiro - Toumei Datta Sekai‬ · forum‬

iYiyo

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

iYiyo 2016-10-14T23:28:25+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on domingo, 22 de enero de 2017 at 1:51:26

Artist: Hata Motohiro
Title: Toumei Datta Sekai
Source: NARUTO-ナルト-疾風伝
Tags: shippuden shippuuden opening pkhg mugiwarasekai hazu- irohas
BPM: 168
Filesize: 8310kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:

Bijuu (5,08 stars, 369 notes)
Easy (1,33 stars, 79 notes)
Hazu's Normal (2 stars, 158 notes)
Irohas' Hard (3,14 stars, 250 notes)
pkhg's Insane (4,23 stars, 333 notes)

Download: Hata Motohiro - Toumei Datta Sekai
Download: Hata Motohiro - Toumei Datta Sekai (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#3

Easy by iYiyo | Normal by Hazu- | Hard by Irohas | Insane by pkhg | Bijuu by iYiyo

Nominated by Sonnyc & Mafumafu

Background source
Thanks missa1912 for providing me the video!

Last edited by iYiyo 2022-05-02T04:28:07+00:00, edited 98 times in total.

pkhg

2,507 posts

Joined May 2010

pkhg 2016-11-12T08:37:00+00:00

http://puu.sh/sgoYG/aa8010c157.mp3

Last edited by pkhg 2016-11-13T03:31:23+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

iYiyo

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Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

iYiyo 2016-11-12T13:07:23+00:00

pkhg wrote:
algun dia este post tendra 2 kudosus
believe it

I'll give you all my kudos if u find a better mp3
Algún día este mapa estará ranked.
believe it

edit: dirty kds farmer xd

Ela

111 posts

Joined November 2012

Ela 2016-11-18T20:19:55+00:00

pkhg wrote:
algun dia este post tendra 2 kudosus
believe it

so, this guy was the one from the legend......

iYiyo wrote:
dirty kds farmer xd

Hazu-

3,884 posts

Joined July 2014

Hazu- 2016-12-07T17:12:06+00:00

hi

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iYiyo

1,107 posts

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

iYiyo 2016-12-07T17:20:58+00:00

o: so fast Hazu xD updated ~

@mugi & pkhg for a good gap between diffs I guess a 3*~ and 4*~ would be cool

iYiyo

1,107 posts

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

iYiyo 2016-12-13T13:23:16+00:00

added pkhg's diff + more hitsounds files. Tell me if you want to copy mine or his or make ur own.

~~Gonna update metadata + tags after adding mugi's diff. Then should come the mods~~

edit: Metadata updated so redl

[hazu]
Quizás podrías aumentar un poco el sr para que llegue a 2.05 o parecido? Enrealidad no es problema para el gap pero se vería más bonito si es una 2* que una 1* ya que pasa de 1.99 a 3.14 xDD no pasa nada sino
00:55:285 (1,2,3) - Esta parte como que se siente un poco rara comparada con las otras partes, como que los círculos solos no quedan muy bien imo, por qué no mejor dejar el ritmo parecido a 00:56:714 (4,5,6) - o algo similar?
Aaa y faltarían los hitsounds, dime si quieres que copie los mios o los del pkhg

[pkhg]
00:23:499 - & 00:23:857 - clap?
01:00:910 - esa green line no hace nada aparte de cortar la sección kiai xd

Hazu-

3,884 posts

Joined July 2014

Hazu- 2016-12-13T21:51:06+00:00

iYiyo wrote:
added pkhg's diff + more hitsounds files. Tell me if you want to copy mine or his or make ur own.

~~Gonna update metadata + tags after adding mugi's diff. Then should come the mods~~

edit: Metadata updated so redl

[hazu]
Quizás podrías aumentar un poco el sr para que llegue a 2.05 o parecido? Enrealidad no es problema para el gap pero se vería más bonito si es una 2* que una 1* ya que pasa de 1.99 a 3.14 xDD no pasa nada sino Yo también estaba pensando en eso, por mientras lo aumenté a 2* pero seguiré intentando aumentar el sr xd
00:55:285 (1,2,3) - Esta parte como que se siente un poco rara comparada con las otras partes, como que los círculos solos no quedan muy bien imo, por qué no mejor dejar el ritmo parecido a 00:56:714 (4,5,6) - o algo similar? okay.
Aaa y faltarían los hitsounds, dime si quieres que copie los mios o los del pkhg Copia cualquiera de los dos.

Poi

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Winnie

1,343 posts

Joined November 2013

Winnie 2016-12-14T00:07:17+00:00

it's 10 SP now. PlaceHolder

iYiyo

1,107 posts

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

iYiyo 2016-12-14T00:10:46+00:00

Kocari wrote:
it's 10 SP now. PlaceHolder

Lol didn't expect that xdd

<3

Blobbability

126 posts

Joined November 2015

Blobbability 2016-12-14T01:52:05+00:00

Bijuu:

00:35:285 - 00:35:642 : The slider before was going clockwise, then your jumps switch to counter clockwise, which is disrupting the flow.
00:37:249 - 00:37:428 : The spacing between these two circles is too much. You're putting too much emphasis on a note that doesn't need much in the song.
00:38:142 - 00:39:214 : The spacing between the notes of the first combo and that of the second combo don't match the song because the emphasis on the beats are the same.

00:42:249 : Change the direction of the slider. I was expecting the next note to be above the slider, but the circle appeared beneath. It's disrupting the flow.
00:43:321 : The seventh circle in this combo could be better placed. Either decrease the spacing so that it matches the spacing between circles 5 and 6, or put the seventh circle to the left side of circle 6. That way the notes there will be more uniform (and will be following a distinct pattern) and it will flow better.
00:53:499 - 00:55:196: Do not change the direction of the flow of notes in the middle of a combo. It's weird. Your first slider went clockwise, but then the rest of your combo went in the opposite direction.
01:10:642 : You might want to push this circle a little more to the left so that the jumps look more uniform.
01:11:357 : This jump from 1st slider to 2nd slider is really awkward. Move the 2nd slider upwards a little bit so that you don't have to jump to the slider so much in a weird way.
01:23:857: From the last 2 notes of the previous combo, I'm jumping a freaking 90 degrees!!! Idrc where you put that last note, just don't put it there.

I want this ranked. It's good.

Affirmation

2,554 posts

Joined March 2015

Affirmation 2016-12-14T07:26:35+00:00

Q

[Easy]
00:02:428 (2,3) - looks weird for flow
00:12:428 (4) - NC

[Bijuu]
00:14:928 (1,1) - looks bad overlap
01:20:999 (1,2) - flow was awkward, you broke star patterns strange.

GL

pkhg

2,507 posts

Joined May 2010

pkhg 2016-12-14T08:32:59+00:00

iYiyo wrote:
[pkhg]
00:23:499 - & 00:23:857 - clap? ups
01:00:910 - esa green line no hace nada aparte de cortar la sección kiai xd exacto

a

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TitleUnicode:透明だった世界
Artist:Hata Motohiro
ArtistUnicode:秦 基博
Creator:iYiyo
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iYiyo

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iYiyo 2016-12-14T15:37:19+00:00

srijanfromsd wrote:
Bijuu:

00:35:285 - 00:35:642 : The slider before was going clockwise, then your jumps switch to counter clockwise, which is disrupting the flow. 00:35:464 (2,3) - ctrl+g 'ed
00:37:249 - 00:37:428 : The spacing between these two circles is too much. You're putting too much emphasis on a note that doesn't need much in the song.fixed
00:38:142 - 00:39:214 : The spacing between the notes of the first combo and that of the second combo don't match the song because the emphasis on the beats are the same. giving the proper nc for both parts gives structure to the map so it actually can support the music so players don't get confused on ds changes

00:42:249 : Change the direction of the slider. I was expecting the next note to be above the slider, but the circle appeared beneath. It's disrupting the flow.fixed
00:43:321 : The seventh circle in this combo could be better placed. Either decrease the spacing so that it matches the spacing between circles 5 and 6, or put the seventh circle to the left side of circle 6. That way the notes there will be more uniform (and will be following a distinct pattern) and it will flow better.I like th pattern that it currently has, it's all symetric and has good structure imo
00:53:499 - 00:55:196: Do not change the direction of the flow of notes in the middle of a combo. It's weird. Your first slider went clockwise, but then the rest of your combo went in the opposite direction.I don't find it weird, to me it has a smooth flow and plays fine for me so no change
01:10:642 : You might want to push this circle a little more to the left so that the jumps look more uniform. prefer to keep structure by stacking notes, right now plays fine imo
01:11:357 : This jump from 1st slider to 2nd slider is really awkward. Move the 2nd slider upwards a little bit so that you don't have to jump to the slider so much in a weird way. if you mean 01:10:821 (1,2) - there's no distance to be considered as a jump imo, it's not awkward so no change
01:23:857: From the last 2 notes of the previous combo, I'm jumping a freaking 90 degrees!!! Idrc where you put that last note, just don't put it there. it's actually less than 90° so it plays fine + also i wanted to give some emphasis since it's the very last note

I want this ranked. It's good.

Thanks!!

Neoskylove wrote:
Q

[Easy]
00:02:428 (2,3) - looks weird for flow
00:12:428 (4) - NC

[Bijuu]
00:14:928 (1,1) - looks bad overlap
01:20:999 (1,2) - flow was awkward, you broke star patterns strange.

GL

Well I just changed the NC on easy but the rest you don't give an argument in order to change it, like looks weird, bad overlap etc. Anyway thanks for the mod!

Winnie

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Winnie 2016-12-15T22:00:23+00:00

Hello from Modding Queue

[Bijuu]

00:11:713 (4,5,6,7,1) - I don't really like this pattern. Consisting of what I've seen throughout previous maps I think you can adjust this a little better. The patterns previously feels more natural, but the jump from (7) ----> (1) feels kinda unstable
01:04:392 (3) - Ctrl+G feels a lot better here imo

Welp I think it looks good to go imo

iYiyo

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iYiyo 2016-12-15T22:19:12+00:00

Kocari wrote:
Hello from Modding Queue

[Bijuu]
00:11:713 (4,5,6,7,1) - I don't really like this pattern. Consisting of what I've seen throughout previous maps I think you can adjust this a little better. The patterns previously feels more natural, but the jump from (7) ----> (1) feels kinda unstable yup, that part was like meh planned to rearrange it, so i did xd ty for pointing out~
01:04:392 (3) - Ctrl+G feels a lot better here imo idk but i feel like if i ctrl+g (3) then 01:03:857 (1,2,3) - this flow would feel a bit weird imo. idk but i don't really like that transition tbh

Welp I think it looks good to go imo oh mai gosh

Thanks Kocari!

Fanteer

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Fanteer 2016-12-16T15:26:10+00:00

Easy

00:10:999 (2,1) - For New players will be hard read this moment

00:12:428 (1) - pause ?

00:51:714 (3) - maybe crtl+J for beautiful a pattern

Normal

00:10:999 (4,1) - overlap

Mugiwara's Hard
01:05:285 (1,2,3,4,1) - very like a 00:53:857 (1,2,3,4,1) - lol

Insane

00:20:999 (1,3) - fix overlap

00:43:142 (4,1) - ^

01:00:285 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4) - and 00:40:285 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4) - Pls make different patterns

Bijuu

00:55:821 (3,6) - hmm maybe fix overlap

Nice map

GL

BounceBabe

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BounceBabe 2016-12-16T23:14:41+00:00

🕓⌛ TWENTY MINUTES ⌛🕓

insane

00:05:107 (1,2) - reverse nc, 00:05:285 - new bar

00:08:142 (1,2) - positions are a bit clustered compared to the rest of your arrangements

00:30:821 (5,1,2,3,4) - vocals are rather monotone so the spacing should be too imo instead of varying between bigger and then smaller for 1-4 to match vocals

00:40:464 (5,6,7) - drums are gradually getting louder dont think this small triplet arrangement is really necessary, kinda breaks the transition to the rest of the stream a bit. you could make them have gradual increasing spacing instead to match that volume increase http://puu.sh/sRWcN/0922da2323.jpg same 01:00:464 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - 01:11:892 (4,5,6,7,8,9) -

00:47:428 (3,4) - think this would work better if unstacked, rather blocking the flow like this same 00:58:857 (3,4) -

00:54:571 (3,4) - try http://puu.sh/sRWgO/eb31e9e5c1.jpg will make transition better

01:00:285 (3) - not quite sure if this circle fits so well as clickalbe elements. reversing 00:59:928 (2) - instead would make nicer transition and suit instruments more imo

01:07:249 (3,4) - flow is slightly too harsh here. try not to corner the 4 so much. try http://puu.sh/sRWqQ/ab21a95a95.jpg http://puu.sh/sRWrm/65211f1d7d.jpg

bijuu

try using 1 specific combo colour for all your speed up SV changes like 00:34:928 (1) - 00:14:928 (1) - since you have no slider ticks its hard to recognise the speed up. use the specific combo colour as indicator.

00:02:072 (4) - standing off from the rest of the pattern all by itself 00:01:000 (1,2,3) - . try arranging them so they are in the same playarea http://puu.sh/sRWwV/74c1c710fa.jpg

00:02:428 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - playing the same star pattern in the same position two times is a little bland. move the second half star pattern elsewhere for more gameplay variation.

00:17:607 (4) - you missed important instruments here, add a triple instead of following vocals to cover them. its the hardest diff after all.

00:24:928 (5,6) - flow is rather bad here due to the 1/2 slider shape going left. try moving 6 to the left to compliment that . http://puu.sh/sRWOB/e71e7b3435.jpg would work good also for vocal emphasis , can always use smaller spacing too ofc

00:29:035 (4,1) - flow is poor and the triple sound is not mapped either that is really important http://puu.sh/sRWUw/aff32cef00.jpg

00:30:464 (4,5,6) - rotate them slightly more vertical so its like 45° to make a better transition with the next circle

00:31:982 - 00:33:232 - important sound here imo should be mapped

00:38:499 (3,1) - 00:35:642 (3,1) - stacking 1 onto 3 would make flow better imo, rather blocky atm and the spacing is messed up like that too since the jumps are equal to this DS PLUS 00:41:357 (3,1) - you did it here and it suits nicely

00:42:249 (1,2) - flow is poor again due to the sliders direction and shape. something like this would be better http://puu.sh/sRX9E/ab68e725bf.jpg

01:00:999 (1,2,3) - ^ http://puu.sh/sRXd8/dc47486cf3.jpg

01:10:821 (1,2) - ^

about hitsounds, i noticed that they were not the same on both diffs. should be the same rhythm for hitsounds tho

00:51:714 (3,4) - claps on insane, 00:50:285 - 00:50:464 - no claps bijuu

00:49:928 - normal clap insane, 00:49:928 - drum clap bijuu

01:12:785 (2) - normal clap insane, 01:12:785 (2) - drum clap bijuu

for bijuu, follow the same pattern for the rest of the song from insane, you didnt place the normal claps on 00:35:642 (3,3) - for example, instead you used drum claps

as for this part 00:15:285 - drum claps on every white tick

accentuate the triple drums i mentioned earlier with drum whistle 00:16:178 (4) - 00:16:535 (5) - 00:17:428 - 00:18:857 (3) - 00:19:035 (4,6) - etc

Mir

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Mir 2016-12-17T16:56:55+00:00

From my queue.~

[General]

Seems fine.

Bijuu

[Insane]

00:06:892 (2) - This stack feels forced and the flow into 00:07:071 (3) - is much wider compared to most other places. To make the flow more comfortable you could stack 00:06:892 (2,3) - together.
00:10:285 (4,5) - The sound on this sliderend is really strong and feels clickable. If you make this slider two circles and space out 00:10:821 - you can give it some good emphasis. I know it would ruin the pattern but I feel like it's kind of wasting this beat.
00:15:642 (2,4) - Make these and 00:16:714 (1,3) - parallel.
00:32:785 (2,5,4) - This placement isn't really consistent, you could make them higher and higher like this: https://puu.sh/sSAZd/2c8bc1389a.png or stack them.
00:46:714 (1,2) - Make these symmetrical?

Mainly aesthetic, the map is pretty good.

pkhg's Insane

[Insane]

00:01:000 - 00:10:999 - These entire 10 seconds I have no idea what you're mapping to. Could you please explain this section's rhythm a bit better?
1. 00:01:000 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Seems like the background weeow weeow but then 00:02:785 (2) - appears and breaks consistency.
2. 00:05:107 - This sound appears sometimes on slider ends and slider heads and circles. It's really inconsistent.
3. 00:06:714 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - This section I have absolutely no idea what's being followed.
00:11:714 (1,3,1) - Space these evenly?
00:15:285 (1) - Definitely ends on the blue tick here. You can use the same rhythm you used at 00:15:999 (3,4).
00:20:107 (3,4) - Swapping these in rhythm would be more intuitive I find since the vocal is more powerful than drums on 00:20:107 - a 1/2 slider would fit better there.
00:24:929 (4,5,1) - This rhythm could be improved imo since the vocals are very strong here. 00:24:929 (4,5) - Could be a slider and 00:25:285 (1) - could be two circles.
00:35:285 (1) - 00:38:142 (1,2) - these rhythms are inconsistent for the same sound. I find the second way to be more representative of the sound.

The rest is fine.

Mugiwara's Hard

[Hard]

00:18:857 (3) - Putting a strong vocal on this slider end pains me. This whole rhythm really pains me. Try this: https://puu.sh/sSCfd/24b3100af1.png since you get the red tick on a reverse instead which would give it more feeling. And with the way you mapped this, that's about the best way I can come up with.
00:19:571 (1) - This also pains me, skipping this vocal note completely. It's really noticeable. I recommend this rhythm so you can get that note https://puu.sh/sSCiM/1cbcfb23a7.png and the "waSUre" part too.
00:20:999 (1) - Random node in the middle of this slider. Knowing this exists in this universe triggers me to no end - I might even get nightmares about this.
00:35:285 (1) - Remove whistle? Seems random.
00:55:999 (3,4) - Make these the same slider?
00:56:714 (1) - This also skips a noticeable vocal note. This rhythm might work better: https://puu.sh/sSCHq/e4400f5772.png
01:16:535 (1) - Another random whistle?
01:19:571 (1) - This rhythm is inconsistent with 01:16:535 (1) and 01:22:249 (1) - even though they're the same sound.

Also you're worse than Logic Agent with his slightly curved sliders. (this is a joke there's nothing wrong with that xD)

Hazu's Normal

[Normal]

01:14:214 - Add clap since it's inconsistent with everywhere else.
01:19:928 - ^

The rest is fine.

Easy

[Easy]

00:17:785 - Add clap? Seems inconsistent.
00:28:142 (2) - ^
01:14:214 - ^
01:19:928 - ^

The rest is fine.

Good luck!~

Irohas

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Joined May 2014

Irohas 2016-12-17T20:22:08+00:00

Mir wrote:
From my queue.~

[General]
Seems fine.

Mugiwara's Hard
[Hard]
00:18:857 (3) - Putting a strong vocal on this slider end pains me. This whole rhythm really pains me. Try this: https://puu.sh/sSCfd/24b3100af1.png since you get the red tick on a reverse instead which would give it more feeling. And with the way you mapped this, that's about the best way I can come up with. both suits, but keep sry
00:19:571 (1) - This also pains me, skipping this vocal note completely. It's really noticeable. I recommend this rhythm so you can get that note https://puu.sh/sSCiM/1cbcfb23a7.png and the "waSUre" part too. it doesn't feel good too me these 3 sliders, so keep
00:20:999 (1) - Random node in the middle of this slider. Knowing this exists in this universe triggers me to no end - I might even get nightmares about this. ok
00:35:285 (1) - Remove whistle? Seems random. no
00:55:999 (3,4) - Make these the same slider? no
00:56:714 (1) - This also skips a noticeable vocal note. This rhythm might work better: https://puu.sh/sSCHq/e4400f5772.png both works
01:16:535 (1) - Another random whistle? no
01:19:571 (1) - This rhythm is inconsistent with 01:16:535 (1) and 01:22:249 (1) - even though they're the same sound. lol but it's clearly not the same
Also you're worse than Logic Agent with his slightly curved sliders. (this is a joke there's nothing wrong with that xD) lol

Good luck!~

thanks!

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Battle

2,875 posts

Joined February 2014

Battle 2016-12-17T22:17:06+00:00

[Easy]
00:10:999 (2,3,1) - You could move 1 more to the left to avoid any chance of people clicking 1 instead of 3
01:05:285 (2) - This feels better with two 1/1 sliders instead, unlike the last verse during the first half of the chorus, there's vocals still going on and not being able to click 01:05:285 (2) - feels awkward

[Normal]
00:18:857 (2) - I dunno, I kinda find the rhythm here awkward since this allows the vocal to be mapped but the vocal on 00:19:392 - is ignored while it's on something again for 00:19:571 (3,4) - If you could find a way to make it so that the vocal on the red tick was mapped (00:19:392 - ) that would be nice

[Hard]
00:27:964 (5,1) - mm I can't really tell whether or not you have a really structure way of making your new combo'd jumps, but personally I don't see why this should have a bigger jump than 00:26:535 (6,1) - since that 1 is hitsounded with a cymbal and has a strong vocal
00:36:357 (4,1) - Maybe keep space similar to 00:39:214 (4,1) - ? The spacing for 00:39:214 (4,1) - emphasizes the vocal much more due to the sharpness of the movement it makes while the one time stamped doesn't really have anything stressing the vocal
00:47:964 (5,1) - Why stack? You haven't been stacking for the cymbal crashes even when there was stuff on the red tick so why start now
00:53:857 (1,2) - You might want to ds this instead, cuz if you emphasize the drums that are like the ones on 2 once, why not do it for other places like 00:56:357 (4) - as well? Same goes for when it happens again later on

[Insane]
00:10:642 (5,1) - Ctrl + G rhythm would be better imo since the beat on the red tick is really strong (It's like the strongest the acoustic guitar strums in this section lol)
00:34:749 (4,5) - Maybe emphasize 5 just a little bit more, the whole different sound in drum doesn't really stand out as much as it does in the music
00:54:571 (3,4) - With everything moving, this stack kinda just feels random lol movement pls (you only do it twice)

[Bijuu]
00:03:678 (8,1) - I don't really like how 1 is basically just part of the star pattern like the last few hitcircles, making so that it breaks away from that pattern would be nice since the repeating sound in the music isn't present anymore
00:14:392 (3) - Slider is meh here since it lands on the vocals and you've had the vocals clickable in this section
00:15:642 (2) - 00:16:714 (1) - Same, it just keeps flipping between the bg music and the vocals, you should pick which one to follow and continue following it because rn it just kinda follows both leaving weird inconsistencies
00:32:964 (3,4) - These sliders start of beats that are weaker than their ends so it's kinda awkward lol
00:34:928 (1,1) - Why not just make it a jump like you did for 00:14:928 (1,1) -
00:48:857 (3,4,5,6) - Might want to lower spacing for this tbh, since you've never introduced the concept of a stream with a slider jump, making it easier will make it a bit more forgiving for players even if they're surprised by it
01:06:714 (1,2,3) - tbh the way 2 is spaced rn it makes 3 not feel as strong as it is in the music, consider reducing the jump for 2 so that way the jump for 3 is bigger

GL

iYiyo

1,107 posts

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

iYiyo 2016-12-17T23:07:26+00:00

Fanteer

Fanteer wrote:
Easy

00:10:999 (2,1) - For New players will be hard read this moment kept pattern but moved 1 a bit to the left

00:12:428 (1) - pause ? Having a single note won't affect imo

00:51:714 (3) - maybe crtl+J for beautiful a pattern sure!

Bijuu

00:55:821 (3,6) - hmm maybe fix overlap it's not an issue imo also i want to keep start pattern D:

Nice map GL

BounceBabe

BounceBabe wrote:
🕓⌛ TWENTY MINUTES ⌛🕓

bijuu

try using 1 specific combo colour for all your speed up SV changes like 00:34:928 (1) - 00:14:928 (1) - since you have no slider ticks its hard to recognise the speed up. use the specific combo colour as indicator. kk

00:02:072 (4) - standing off from the rest of the pattern all by itself 00:01:000 (1,2,3) - . try arranging them so they are in the same playarea http://puu.sh/sRWwV/74c1c710fa.jpg nice

00:02:428 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - playing the same star pattern in the same position two times is a little bland. move the second half star pattern elsewhere for more gameplay variation. Tbh i feel like this part plays good following a "monotonous" rhythm, they're just 1sec or so so won't affect much imo

00:17:607 (4) - you missed important instruments here, add a triple instead of following vocals to cover them. its the hardest diff after all. gonna fix it

00:24:928 (5,6) - flow is rather bad here due to the 1/2 slider shape going left. try moving 6 to the left to compliment that . http://puu.sh/sRWOB/e71e7b3435.jpg would work good also for vocal emphasis , can always use smaller spacing too ofc kk fixed

00:29:035 (4,1) - flow is poor and the triple sound is not mapped either that is really important http://puu.sh/sRWUw/aff32cef00.jpg same as before

00:30:464 (4,5,6) - rotate them slightly more vertical so its like 45° to make a better transition with the next circle did something else but it's better now imo

00:31:982 - 00:33:232 - important sound here imo should be mapped I don't hear any sound that is worth to be mapped D:

00:38:499 (3,1) - 00:35:642 (3,1) - stacking 1 onto 3 would make flow better imo, rather blocky atm and the spacing is messed up like that too since the jumps are equal to this DS PLUS 00:41:357 (3,1) - you did it here and it suits nicely yup, would work better

00:42:249 (1,2) - flow is poor again due to the sliders direction and shape. something like this would be better http://puu.sh/sRX9E/ab68e725bf.jpg fixed

01:00:999 (1,2,3) - ^ http://puu.sh/sRXd8/dc47486cf3.jpg The transition you show there don't really like it D: prefer the actual one which follows good with 01:01:892 (4,5) - imo

01:10:821 (1,2) - ^ ^

about hitsounds, i noticed that they were not the same on both diffs. should be the same rhythm for hitsounds tho

00:51:714 (3,4) - claps on insane, 00:50:285 - 00:50:464 - no claps bijuu

00:49:928 - normal clap insane, 00:49:928 - drum clap bijuu

01:12:785 (2) - normal clap insane, 01:12:785 (2) - drum clap bijuu

for bijuu, follow the same pattern for the rest of the song from insane, you didnt place the normal claps on 00:35:642 (3,3) - for example, instead you used drum claps

as for this part 00:15:285 - drum claps on every white tick

accentuate the triple drums i mentioned earlier with drum whistle 00:16:178 (4) - 00:16:535 (5) - 00:17:428 - 00:18:857 (3) - 00:19:035 (4,6) - etc

About hitsounds, I fixed the triple with the drum whistle. For the other parts I don't really want to cover the whole song with drum claps on every white tick like on pkhg's so yeah.. Just different hitsounding, but still this hs check helped me

Mir

Mir wrote:
From my queue.~

[General]
Seems fine.

[Insane]
00:06:892 (2) - This stack feels forced and the flow into 00:07:071 (3) - is much wider compared to most other places. To make the flow more comfortable you could stack 00:06:892 (2,3) - together. I don't feel like stacking, imo it's good enough D:
00:10:285 (4,5) - The sound on this sliderend is really strong and feels clickable. If you make this slider two circles and space out 00:10:821 - you can give it some good emphasis. I know it would ruin the pattern but I feel like it's kind of wasting this beat. want consistence in these patterns so no change
00:15:642 (2,4) - Make these and 00:16:714 (1,3) - parallel. did for the first one you mention, the other was on purpose
00:32:785 (2,5,4) - This placement isn't really consistent, you could make them higher and higher like this: https://puu.sh/sSAZd/2c8bc1389a.png or stack them. sure!
00:46:714 (1,2) - Make these symmetrical? ok
Mainly aesthetic, the map is pretty good.

[Easy]
00:17:785 - Add clap? Seems inconsistent.
00:28:142 (2) - ^
01:14:214 - ^
01:19:928 - ^ oops, thanks for pointing out!
The rest is fine.

Good luck!~

Thanks for the mods!!!

updated mugi's diff too

edit: will get to battle's mod tomorrow or later I think. Too much time doing mods and checking all these for today x.x

Hazu-

3,884 posts

Joined July 2014

Hazu- 2016-12-18T01:58:02+00:00

Fanteer wrote:
Normal

00:10:999 (4,1) - overlap Fixed.

Nice map GL

Mir wrote:
From my queue.~

[General]
Seems fine.

Hazu's Normal
[Normal]
01:14:214 - Add clap since it's inconsistent with everywhere else. Okay.
01:19:928 - ^ ^
The rest is fine.

Good luck!~

Battle wrote:

[Normal]
00:18:857 (2) - I dunno, I kinda find the rhythm here awkward since this allows the vocal to be mapped but the vocal on 00:19:392 - is ignored while it's on something again for 00:19:571 (3,4) - If you could find a way to make it so that the vocal on the red tick was mapped (00:19:392 - ) that would be nice I will have to look for something to replace it.

GL

Thanks~

Poi

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Irohas

1,353 posts

Joined May 2014

Irohas 2016-12-18T12:09:29+00:00

Battle wrote:

[Hard]
00:27:964 (5,1) - mm I can't really tell whether or not you have a really structure way of making your new combo'd jumps, but personally I don't see why this should have a bigger jump than 00:26:535 (6,1) - since that 1 is hitsounded with a cymbal and has a strong vocal okay reduced
00:36:357 (4,1) - Maybe keep space similar to 00:39:214 (4,1) - ? The spacing for 00:39:214 (4,1) - emphasizes the vocal much more due to the sharpness of the movement it makes while the one time stamped doesn't really have anything stressing the vocal okay
00:47:964 (5,1) - Why stack? You haven't been stacking for the cymbal crashes even when there was stuff on the red tick so why start now consistency with 00:44:928 (4,5,1) -
00:53:857 (1,2) - You might want to ds this instead, cuz if you emphasize the drums that are like the ones on 2 once, why not do it for other places like 00:56:357 (4) - as well? Same goes for when it happens again later on oh sure

GL

thanks!

BG is 2good

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Kagetsu

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Kagetsu 2016-12-18T19:37:22+00:00

little irc

15:39 *iYiyo is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1106276 Hata Motohiro - Toumei Datta Sekai]
15:39 iYiyo: creo que le hice hartos cambios a la última diff
15:39 Kagetsu: hmm pero no me gustaba mucho esa diff ):
15:39 iYiyo: si sé xd
15:39 iYiyo: never forget
15:40 Kagetsu: aunque la nerfeaste si
15:41 Kagetsu: eso es bueno
15:41 iYiyo: se
15:41 iYiyo: y le cambié varias partes que encontraba que estaban como meh
15:43 Kagetsu: esta bonita la diff del pkhg
15:44 iYiyo: lo único que no me gustó de su diff
15:44 iYiyo: es el final
15:44 iYiyo: que según yo utiliza mucho el centro
15:44 iYiyo: y da vuelta ahí todo el rato xd
15:44 iYiyo: aunque no encuentro que esté mal, pero es como lo que me llamó la atención
15:45 Kagetsu: o
15:45 Kagetsu: no se
15:45 Kagetsu: no me molesta
15:45 iYiyo: no tampoco me molesta, pero como que pudo haber variado un poco quizás?
15:45 iYiyo: peorono está mal
15:46 Kagetsu: pero es que pkhg siempre se da vueltas
15:46 iYiyo: recicla patrones todo el rato xd
15:46 iYiyo: pero le quedan bien
15:47 Kagetsu: si aplico eso en todo el mapa
15:47 Kagetsu: solo que como el final es 1/2
15:47 Kagetsu: se not mas
15:48 iYiyo: yep
15:49 iYiyo: cuando salgai de vacas le podriai dar un modcito?
15:49 iYiyo: xd
15:50 Kagetsu: a toumei?
15:51 iYiyo: koeteee
15:51 iYiyo: hai
15:51 Kagetsu: pero es que no me gusta la diff
15:51 Kagetsu: ):
15:52 iYiyo: xd
15:52 iYiyo: </3
15:53 iYiyo: bueno
15:53 iYiyo: pero independiente de eso
15:53 iYiyo: qué no te gusta exactamente?
15:53 Kagetsu: le falta un poquito de estructura
15:53 iYiyo: así cómo
15:54 Kagetsu: hmm
15:54 Kagetsu: que muchas cosas se ven un poco al azar
15:54 Kagetsu: como cohesionar los patterns
15:54 Kagetsu: para que no parezcan tan distintos unos de los otros
15:55 Kagetsu: bueno , el ritmo igual es un poco cuestionable
15:55 Kagetsu: en algunas secciones
15:55 Kagetsu: y el hitsounding igual
15:55 Kagetsu: yo creo que seria mejor que copiaras el hitsounding de pkhg
15:57 iYiyo: no me gusta mucho lo que hace pkhg con los claps
15:57 iYiyo: como que abusa mucho de ellos segun yo
15:57 Kagetsu: hmm
15:57 Kagetsu: yo lo escucho bien
15:57 Kagetsu: en la intro sobretodo
15:58 Kagetsu: si escuchas la musica, se nota que las claps son 1/2
15:58 Kagetsu: despues desde esta seccion 00:15:285 -
15:58 Kagetsu: tu pattern no encaja muy bien a decir verdad
15:58 Kagetsu: basicamente estas usando el mismo pattern de antes
15:59 Kagetsu: cuando la musica es claramente distinta
15:59 iYiyo: ahora escucho mejor los claps del principio
16:00 Kagetsu: para el kiai creo que funciona bien
16:00 Kagetsu: el problema es que usas claps en 2 y 4
16:00 Kagetsu: basicamente en todo el mapa
16:00 Kagetsu: es como si todo el mapa fuera lo mismo
16:01 iYiyo: se xd
16:01 iYiyo: podria variar eso en e principio y el final
16:02 Kagetsu: deberias la verdad
16:02 Kagetsu: xd
16:03 iYiyo: xd
16:03 iYiyo: y con respecto a la estructura
16:03 iYiyo: como qué partes no te gustan
16:03 iYiyo: quizás de 00:15:285 - a 00:35:285 - podría mejorarlo
16:03 iYiyo: pero el resto encuentro que no está tan mal en estructura
16:04 Kagetsu: hmm
16:04 Kagetsu: las formas
16:04 Kagetsu: quizas estas tratando de ser demasiado creativo
16:05 Kagetsu: cuando la cancion no encaja realmente para eso
16:05 Kagetsu: cosas como 00:52:428 (1,3) -
16:05 Kagetsu: destacan mucho cuando la musica en realidad no lo hace tanto
16:05 Kagetsu: lo mismo con las estrellas de al final
16:06 iYiyo: ahá, eso de 00:52:428 (1,3) - lo puedo entender
16:06 iYiyo: las estrellas del principio y del final me gustan en lo personal
16:06 Kagetsu: uh
16:06 Kagetsu: se ven bien
16:06 Kagetsu: supongo
16:06 Kagetsu: pero no encajan con la musica
16:06 iYiyo: siento que sin eso, el mapa sería distinto xd
16:06 Kagetsu: si te fijas 01:20:999 (1,2) -
16:06 Kagetsu: sigue siendo parte de la estrella
16:07 Kagetsu: cuando hay un new combo
16:07 iYiyo: se, pero cambian el ritmo
16:07 iYiyo: se reducen en distancia con las otras notas
16:07 Kagetsu: eso es como un poco random
16:07 iYiyo: yo encuentro que e stodo lo contrario xd, como que aprovechan el pattern de la estrella para la otra seccion
16:08 Kagetsu: hmm
16:08 Kagetsu: es una opinion no mas
16:09 iYiyo: si sé, pero me rompiste el kokoro cuando dijiste que estaba fea </3
16:09 iYiyo: aunque si, voy a mejorar los hitsounds en esas partes
16:09 Kagetsu: pero si no dije que estaba fea
16:09 iYiyo: ver el ritmo en la segunda sección
16:09 Kagetsu: de hecho dije que se veia bien, supongo
16:10 iYiyo: y tratar de no resaltar tanto con figuras donde la musica no ofrece un cambio tan importante
16:10 Kagetsu: pero igual trata de ser un poco mas consistente
16:11 Kagetsu: por ejemplo cosas como estas 00:50:999 (1,2,3,4) -
16:11 Kagetsu: se ven quizas muy esparcidas
16:11 iYiyo: https://puu.sh/sTNAN/a93527c7a2.png
16:12 iYiyo: se demoró en subir
16:12 iYiyo: xd
16:12 iYiyo: a vers
16:12 Kagetsu: pero no dije las estrellas
16:12 Kagetsu: si comparas el espacio visual entre 00:50:999 (1,2,3,4) - ese pattern
16:12 Kagetsu: y eso 00:52:428 (1,2,3) -
16:12 Kagetsu: se ve super distinto
16:13 Kagetsu: o sea, quizas deberias tratar de mantener una cierta armonia entre los objetos
16:15 iYiyo: si, igual te estoy cachando
16:16 Kagetsu: xd
16:16 Kagetsu: creo que tambien deberias ser mas constante con los angulos que usas en los sliders
16:16 iYiyo: 00:58:142 (1,2,3) - como esos?
16:16 iYiyo: xd
16:17 iYiyo: los roto en 90 y luego 45
16:17 Kagetsu: si
16:17 Kagetsu: si vas a usar 3 quizas se vea mejor 120
16:17 Kagetsu: para hacer 360 con los 3
16:17 iYiyo: no sé, igual como que siguen una estructura
16:17 iYiyo: no me gusta estar haciendo ctrl+g ctrl h
16:17 iYiyo: mmm
16:17 iYiyo: puede ser
16:17 iYiyo: pero sería muy típico quizás
16:18 Kagetsu: pero igual
16:18 Kagetsu: 00:58:142 (1,3) -
16:18 iYiyo: ctrl+h ctrl+j*
16:18 Kagetsu: se ve muy junto en comparacion
16:18 Kagetsu: eso hace que 00:58:499 (2) - se vea como fuera de lugar
16:18 Kagetsu: no se, yo creo que mas comun es
16:18 Kagetsu: andar haciendo blankets con todo
16:19 iYiyo: podria hacer que 00:58:499 (2,3) - sean simetricos
16:19 iYiyo: eso quedaría mejor yo cacho
16:19 Kagetsu: hmm
16:19 Kagetsu: quizas
16:20 Kagetsu: pero incluso https://puu.sh/sTO9H/a55c6c9d34.png
16:20 Kagetsu: sin mover ningun angulo
16:20 Kagetsu: se ve mejor
16:20 Kagetsu: aunque solo es un ejemplo, porque realmente no encaja
16:20 Kagetsu: pero es para captar la idea supongo
16:21 iYiyo: si la capto xd
16:21 Kagetsu: o sea que se note que eso es un pattern
16:21 Kagetsu: y no 2 separados
16:21 Kagetsu: algo asi
16:22 iYiyo: yup, si creo que te voy cachando a lo que ibas
16:22 iYiyo: tocará retocar un poco la diff
16:22 iYiyo: hasta que te guste (?

gl

iYiyo

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Topic Starter

iYiyo 2016-12-18T19:39:47+00:00

Battle wrote:

[Easy]
00:10:999 (2,3,1) - You could move 1 more to the left to avoid any chance of people clicking 1 instead of 3 yup, fixed
01:05:285 (2) - This feels better with two 1/1 sliders instead, unlike the last verse during the first half of the chorus, there's vocals still going on and not being able to click 01:05:285 (2) - feels awkward fixed

[Bijuu]
00:03:678 (8,1) - I don't really like how 1 is basically just part of the star pattern like the last few hitcircles, making so that it breaks away from that pattern would be nice since the repeating sound in the music isn't present anymore it definitely is part of the star pattern, but it doesn't follow the same structure so it shouldn't feel repetitive for the music
00:14:392 (3) - Slider is meh here since it lands on the vocals and you've had the vocals clickable in this section I feel that it follows vocals good, just same as 00:13:857 (1) - D:
00:15:642 (2) - 00:16:714 (1) - Same, it just keeps flipping between the bg music and the vocals, you should pick which one to follow and continue following it because rn it just kinda follows both leaving weird inconsistencies agree with you, should be consistence now
00:32:964 (3,4) - These sliders start of beats that are weaker than their ends so it's kinda awkward lol yup but there I feel like following vocals. Compared from the "first" section which starts here 00:15:285 - I follow instrumental but then for 00:26:714 - this part I think is more worth it to follow vocals because they are more present in the music imo (more than the 1st part)
00:34:928 (1,1) - Why not just make it a jump like you did for 00:14:928 (1,1) - sure!
00:48:857 (3,4,5,6) - Might want to lower spacing for this tbh, since you've never introduced the concept of a stream with a slider jump, making it easier will make it a bit more forgiving for players even if they're surprised by it Well they're more spaced, but the kick slider 00:49:035 (5) - acts as a single note so there shouldn't be any problem
01:06:714 (1,2,3) - tbh the way 2 is spaced rn it makes 3 not feel as strong as it is in the music, consider reducing the jump for 2 so that way the jump for 3 is bigger u're right, fixed for the other similar pattern too~

GL

Thanks for the mod!

@updated mugi's & hazu's + added some claps at the start and the end for easy and bijuu (for hazu's too since he's using same hs sampleset, so u should redl i guess hazu)

Also thanks Kagetsu for the quick irc

ErunamoJAZZ

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ErunamoJAZZ 2016-12-19T02:24:20+00:00

Hola,

[Bijuu]

Antes que nada, un replay: https://puu.sh/sU8HZ/469eb9d4f4.osr
00:03:857 (1,2) - 00:09:571 (1,2) - 01:15:285 (1,2) - Estos cambios de spacing como que no los sentí muy cómodos. Es como que vienes con la intensidad de la estrella, y luego abruptamente se cambia pero la música es la misma. Es más, si hubiera un lugar donde cambiar el spacing un poco, sería en 00:03:500 (7,8) - imo, pero igual, se siente un poco como que hubieras hecho el patter solo para que se vea fancy sin ponerle cuidado realmente a la intensidad de la música xD
00:06:356 (6,7) - por qué el jump acá y no entre 00:06:535 (7,1) - ??
00:22:071 (5,6) - por qué diferente spacing que en 00:21:535 (2,3) - ??
00:35:285 (1,2,3) - creo que sería mejor si haces el spacing más consistente, como está ahora, es bastante raro.
00:35:999 (1,2,3) - bastante largo el DS para saber que la parte intensa es entre 00:36:357 (3,1) - xD
00:37:249 (4,1) - El spacing entre ellos no es 1.8x
No sé, en lo personal no me suelen gustar los mapas de tantas estrellas, porque siempre exageran las cosas. Sentí que muchos patters como que aun no los tenías del todo claro y los fuiste improvisando (Supongo que por la falta de experiencia haciendo mapas, es lo normal xD), por eso quizás la estética no es la mejor. Creo que aún puedes mejorarlo bastante, aunque tengas que cambiar muchas cosas u.u

[pkhg's Insane]

00:28:678 (3) - 00:57:071 (2) - xD https://puu.sh/sU9G0/e86805abb4.png
00:46:714 (1) - ufff, demasiado cerca xD https://puu.sh/sU9MX/ad62b73996.png
Se siente bien, pero no me gustan los streams así 01:00:464 (4,5,6,7,8,9) -

[Muguiwara's Hard]

Salut!
I felt like some jumps were not necessary:
00:02:071 (4,1) -
00:07:785 (4,1) -
00:16:357 (4,1) -
00:22:071 (4,1) -
00:27:964 (5,1) -
00:30:642 (4,1) -
(may be more, but well, pls consider fix jumps that are not supported by intensity in the music please!)
:3

[Hazu's Normal]

00:22:428 (4) - Este me confundió al jugarlo xD, no se por qué lo sentí como un jump y le di antes X.x
Te quedó chévere

[Easy]

00:13:857 - Creo que deberías agregar un break acá como lo hay en el hard :3
00:36:357 (3,4) - 00:42:071 (3,4) - Siento que estos no son muy apropiados para una dificultad fácil... no los siento muy "noob friendly".
Mi sugerencia es que sigas un ritmo como este, que es perfectamente aceptable para una dificultad fácil, y es mucho más intuitivo:
Haz algo similar en las otras partes donde hay un mal cambio de polaridad (por cierto, no sé si lo hayas visto ya, pero es interesante este video de Charles sobre el asunto: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=53PkFLrK8Ws )
00:49:571 (1) - Pienso que en estos sliders tan largos puedes tratar de poner las esquinas en esas partes donde haya algún cambio en el la voz o en el ritmo, en este por ejemplo en la mitad. En 00:01:000 (1) - por ejemplo, en los "oh oh oooh", etc.
01:07:785 (2) - 01:09:214 (4) - En vez de este, es mejor hacerle un repeat al slider anterior, y así evitar el cambio brusco de polaridad.
owo)b

Buena suerte con el set!!

pkhg

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pkhg 2016-12-19T06:44:45+00:00

15:43 Kagetsu: esta bonita la diff del pkhg

iYiyo

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iYiyo 2016-12-19T15:16:20+00:00

pkhg wrote:
15:43 Kagetsu: esta bonita la diff del pkhg

Te desea en secreto :$

pkhg

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pkhg 2016-12-19T21:04:10+00:00

Fanteer wrote:
Insane

00:20:999 (1,3) - fix overlap no

00:43:142 (4,1) - ^ ^

01:00:285 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4) - and 00:40:285 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4) - Pls make different patterns why

BounceBabe wrote:
🕓⌛ TWENTY MINUTES ⌛🕓

insane

00:05:107 (1,2) - reverse nc, 00:05:285 - new bar the sldertail its on the downbeat so i nc'd it

00:08:142 (1,2) - positions are a bit clustered compared to the rest of your arrangements i dont see how

00:30:821 (5,1,2,3,4) - vocals are rather monotone so the spacing should be too imo instead of varying between bigger and then smaller for 1-4 to match vocals the spacing is larger on the white ticks cuz they have kicks too

00:40:464 (5,6,7) - drums are gradually getting louder dont think this small triplet arrangement is really necessary, kinda breaks the transition to the rest of the stream a bit. you could make them have gradual increasing spacing instead to match that volume increase http://puu.sh/sRWcN/0922da2323.jpg same 01:00:464 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - 01:11:892 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - im not exactly trying to match the volume but the drums. 5 & 6 have kicks while the next notes snares

00:47:428 (3,4) - think this would work better if unstacked, rather blocking the flow like this same 00:58:857 (3,4) - i stacked them cuz both have kick sounds and there arent vocals on 4

00:54:571 (3,4) - try http://puu.sh/sRWgO/eb31e9e5c1.jpg will make transition better i dont think those notes deserves much emphasis so i stacked them. also moving it to the slider tail might cause reading issues cuz it may be covered with the hitburst of the slider

01:00:285 (3) - not quite sure if this circle fits so well as clickalbe elements. reversing 00:59:928 (2) - instead would make nicer transition and suit instruments more imo i dont really like using reverses on insane diffs and theres a kick sound in the music so i think it deserves to be clicked

01:07:249 (3,4) - flow is slightly too harsh here. try not to corner the 4 so much. try http://puu.sh/sRWqQ/ab21a95a95.jpg http://puu.sh/sRWrm/65211f1d7d.jpg stacking 2 and 3 will kill the emphasis on 3 which has a really strong beat and 4 its easy to hit cuz 3 is a slider and you dont need to move through its body to complete it

Mir wrote:
From my queue.~

[pkhg's Insane]
00:01:000 - 00:10:999 - These entire 10 seconds I have no idea what you're mapping to. Could you please explain this section's rhythm a bit better?
00:01:000 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Seems like the background weeow weeow but then 00:02:785 (2) - appears and breaks consistency. well theres no "weeow weeow" where 00:02:785 (2) - is so i mapped guitar
00:05:107 - This sound appears sometimes on slider ends and slider heads and circles. It's really inconsistent. theres a "weeow" on this note xd
00:06:714 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - This section I have absolutely no idea what's being followed. mostly vocals and when there are no vocals i switch to guitar
00:11:714 (1,3,1) - Space these evenly? i think its fine
00:15:285 (1) - Definitely ends on the blue tick here. You can use the same rhythm you used at 00:15:999 (3,4). im not following vocals on this section
00:20:107 (3,4) - Swapping these in rhythm would be more intuitive I find since the vocal is more powerful than drums on 00:20:107 - a 1/2 slider would fit better there. ^
00:24:929 (4,5,1) - This rhythm could be improved imo since the vocals are very strong here. 00:24:929 (4,5) - Could be a slider and 00:25:285 (1) - could be two circles. not mapping vocals here
00:35:285 (1) - 00:38:142 (1,2) - these rhythms are inconsistent for the same sound. I find the second way to be more representative of the sound. true
The rest is fine.

Good luck!~

Battle wrote:
[Insane]
00:10:642 (5,1) - Ctrl + G rhythm would be better imo since the beat on the red tick is really strong (It's like the strongest the acoustic guitar strums in this section lol) im focusing more on drums
00:34:749 (4,5) - Maybe emphasize 5 just a little bit more, the whole different sound in drum doesn't really stand out as much as it does in the music k
00:54:571 (3,4) - With everything moving, this stack kinda just feels random lol movement pls (you only do it twice) both have kicks and no vocals on 4 so i stacked them
GL

ErunamoJAZZ wrote:
Hola,
[pkhg's Insane]
00:28:678 (3) - 00:57:071 (2) - xD https://puu.sh/sU9G0/e86805abb4.png xdddd
00:46:714 (1) - ufff, demasiado cerca xD https://puu.sh/sU9MX/ad62b73996.png si quieres lo puedo mover aun mas cerca
Se siente bien, pero no me gustan los streams así 01:00:464 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - :)
Buena suerte con el set!!

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Kyuukai

Beatmap Nominator

1,541 posts

Joined December 2014

Kyuukai 2016-12-20T02:46:29+00:00

M4M from my queue

Easy

00:12:428 - Break ?
00:37:428 (5) - I'd CTRL+H it, gives a better transition for the next pattern
01:03:857 (1,2) - Flow's not really good in my opinion, you should try to aim the 1 towards the 2 since it's a slider reverse
01:12:428 (1,2) - I don't know why you made such a sharp angle transition here, because it's the only pattern with this type of angle
01:15:285 (1,2) - Transition's not really good since the 1 is aiming the opposite direction of the 2

Normal

00:09:214 (6) - I'd place it at 132,332 to emphasize 00:09:571 (1) - more, and I think it's better like this visually
00:09:214 (6,1) - Blanket is a bit off (if you don't apply the mod ^)
00:23:857 (1,2) - ^
00:37:071 (4,5) - ^

pkhg's Insane

00:08:499 (2,3,4,5) - I find it really uncomfortable to play, dunno if it's intentionnal, but i'm noticing it
00:20:999 (1,3) - nazi overlap

Bijuu

00:06:535 (7,1,2,3) - that jump transition is really bad to play, you are doing a circular flow with the jumps before, but that one feels really linear, and the 3 is directed in the opposite direction 1,2's direction. Dunno if you'll get what I mean tho, but keep in mind that I've found that pattern bad to play
00:54:392 (4,5) - Feels too straight, you're making a circular flow with 00:54:035 (2,3,4) - but the 4,5 completely breaks the flow you've made before, I suggest you moving 00:54:035 (2,5) - more on the left so 00:53:499 (1,2) - and 00:54:392 (4,5) - has a better transition and to keep the blanket of it
01:20:999 (1,2,3) - Feels uncomfortable to play

I'm not good at modding higher diffs zzzzzzz, and couldn't find anything on Mugi's diff tho.
Good luck~

iYiyo

1,107 posts

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

iYiyo 2016-12-20T05:17:58+00:00

updated pkhg's diff. Gonna reply to mods properly tomorrow I think

Irohas

1,353 posts

Joined May 2014

Irohas 2016-12-20T14:36:10+00:00

ErunamoJAZZ wrote:
Hola,

[Muguiwara's Hard rip]
Salut! baguette
I felt like some jumps were not necessary:
00:02:071 (4,1) - fine, since these finish sound deserve being emphasize imo
00:07:785 (4,1) - ^
00:16:357 (4,1) - consistency with 00:19:214 (4,1) -
00:22:071 (4,1) - it's not as big to be consider as a jump i think D:
00:27:964 (5,1) - same as 00:16:357 (4,1) -
00:30:642 (4,1) - jump here is fine imo
(may be more, but well, pls consider fix jumps that are not supported by intensity in the music please!)
:3
Buena suerte con el set!!

thanks but no change

Hazu-

3,884 posts

Joined July 2014

Hazu- 2016-12-20T15:17:48+00:00

ErunamoJAZZ wrote:
Hola,

[Hazu's Normal]
00:22:428 (4) - Este me confundió al jugarlo xD, no se por qué lo sentí como un jump y le di antes X.x ¿Como se supone que soluciono esto? xdd Creo que voy a cambiar ligeramente el lugar mas tarde.
Te quedó chévere thx
Buena suerte con el set!!

yaleufeu wrote:
M4M from my queue

Normal
00:09:214 (6) - I'd place it at 132,332 to emphasize 00:09:571 (1) - more, and I think it's better like this visually I prefer blanket
00:09:214 (6,1) - Blanket is a bit off (if you don't apply the mod ^) Ye
00:23:857 (1,2) - ^ ^
00:37:071 (4,5) - ^ ^

I'm not good at modding higher diffs zzzzzzz, and couldn't find anything on Mugi's diff tho.
Good luck~

Thanks for mods~

Poi

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Lami

1,756 posts

Joined June 2011

Lami 2016-12-20T15:42:09+00:00

hello

G

BG (1.62MB) can be make more smaller i think.

E

00:53:857 (2,3) - DS error
01:00:285 (2) - add something? they feel kinda huge rhythm room, despite of it's kiai.

N

00:15:642 (2) - add note? cause just 1/2 one slider little boring....

H

00:05:107 (1) - whistle no, if you really want, then add 00:10:821 (1) - too
01:16:535 (1) - ^

I

01:02:964 (2,3) - triplet can consider as its not unique triplet, there is 00:53:053 (4) -

X

00:16:535 (5) - x336 y34 make straight flow placement with 00:16:714 (1) -
01:10:464 (4,1) - more good if (4) placed in real center on (1)
00:34:214 (2,3) - consider to increase DS here, as (3,4) is pretty cool drum.
00:52:964 (3,1) - little weird overlap, despite of clean map style.
01:04:749 (4,1) - i think you can make more good flow here. + consider to increase DS

k gl

pkhg

2,507 posts

Joined May 2010

pkhg 2016-12-20T21:21:32+00:00

yaleufeu wrote:
pkhg's Insane
00:08:499 (2,3,4,5) - I find it really uncomfortable to play, dunno if it's intentionnal, but i'm noticing it how
00:20:999 (1,3) - nazi overlap intentional

I'm not good at modding higher diffs zzzzzzz, and couldn't find anything on Mugi's diff tho.
Good luck~

Lami wrote:
I

01:02:964 (2,3) - triplet can consider as its not unique triplet, there is 00:53:053 (4) - tru

k gl

e

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iYiyo

1,107 posts

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

iYiyo 2016-12-20T22:57:30+00:00

ErunamoJAZZ wrote:
Hola,

[Bijuu]
Antes que nada, un replay: https://puu.sh/sU8HZ/469eb9d4f4.osr updatié el mapa y no lo puedo ver x.x
00:03:857 (1,2) - 00:09:571 (1,2) - 01:15:285 (1,2) - Estos cambios de spacing como que no los sentí muy cómodos. Es como que vienes con la intensidad de la estrella, y luego abruptamente se cambia pero la música es la misma. Es más, si hubiera un lugar donde cambiar el spacing un poco, sería en 00:03:500 (7,8) - imo, pero igual, se siente un poco como que hubieras hecho el patter solo para que se vea fancy sin ponerle cuidado realmente a la intensidad de la música xD Puede que lo termine camibiando, pero no ahora que no tengo mucha imaginación que digamos xd
00:06:356 (6,7) - por qué el jump acá y no entre 00:06:535 (7,1) - ?? No tienen tanta distancia para considerarse bien, siguen bien la estructura imo
00:37:249 (4,1) - El spacing entre ellos no es 1.8x así es

Buena suerte con el set!!

yaleufeu wrote:
M4M from my queue

Easy
00:37:428 (5) - I'd CTRL+H it, gives a better transition for the next pattern prefer the actual transition, are quite the same tho xd
01:15:285 (1,2) - Transition's not really good since the 1 is aiming the opposite direction of the 2 I find it good D:

Bijuu
00:06:535 (7,1,2,3) - that jump transition is really bad to play, you are doing a circular flow with the jumps before, but that one feels really linear, and the 3 is directed in the opposite direction 1,2's direction. Dunno if you'll get what I mean tho, but keep in mind that I've found that pattern bad to play
01:20:999 (1,2,3) - Feels uncomfortable to play Gonna see what I can do with both

I'm not good at modding higher diffs zzzzzzz, and couldn't find anything on Mugi's diff tho.
Good luck~

Lami wrote:
hello

G

BG (1.62MB) can be make more smaller i think. gonna try

E

01:00:285 (2) - add something? they feel kinda huge rhythm room, despite of it's kiai. It might feel empty, tried to add a spinner but that would make same effect since they must wait 4/1 to recover from it so yeah... basically the same

k gl

Thanks for the mods!! Everything not mentioned was applied.

@updated all gd's

Irohas

1,353 posts

Joined May 2014

Irohas 2016-12-22T00:28:10+00:00

all fixed thanks

update

osu file format v14

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iYiyo

1,107 posts

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

iYiyo 2016-12-22T01:11:10+00:00

up-da-ted

Irohas

1,353 posts

Joined May 2014

Irohas 2016-12-23T20:43:20+00:00

rip mugi yiyo could you pls replace my old username by my new in my diff and don't forget to add my current username in tags :d

iYiyo

1,107 posts

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

iYiyo 2016-12-23T21:42:19+00:00

source

According to that i'll update it as Irohas'. If you want me to change it just tell me cause both seems to be correct (Irohas's)

sayonara mugiwara-ya u.u

pkhg

2,507 posts

Joined May 2010

pkhg 2016-12-24T16:45:03+00:00

rip mugi

Irohas

1,353 posts

Joined May 2014

Irohas 2016-12-24T17:41:47+00:00

mugi will always be in our heart

Hazu-

3,884 posts

Joined July 2014

Hazu- 2016-12-24T17:45:04+00:00

pkhg wrote:
rip mugi

-Sh1n1-

3,404 posts

Joined September 2012

-Sh1n1- 2017-01-04T06:20:28+00:00

Y donde esta el video? ( es el opening con la mejor saga de todo naruto "imo" ) El BG me dejo asi:

que tiene que ver madara con la saga de pain? orz me ganaste, yo tambien queria mapear esta cancion, bueno a hacer otra nomas... Good Luck

iYiyo

1,107 posts

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

iYiyo 2017-01-04T15:51:34+00:00

-Sh1n1- wrote:
Y donde esta el video? ( es el opening con la mejor saga de todo naruto "imo" ) El BG me dejo asi: que tiene que ver madara con la saga de pain? orz me ganaste, yo tambien queria mapear esta cancion, bueno a hacer otra nomas... Good Luck

Video... x.x xD Y el bg es muy bueno, pero si, no tiene nada que ver ajksajdkasd quizás lo termine cambiando.

Gracias!

Sonnyc

7,776 posts

Joined June 2008

Sonnyc 2017-01-17T06:47:43+00:00

Easy.
00:35:642 (2,3) - 00:38:499 (2,3) - 00:41:357 (2,3) - I'd be glad if you could get rid of these 1/2 click. This is an easy afterall, and 1/2 isn't really a beginner friendly element to use. Also I'm not really sure if those parts are the most intensed part of the song to demand the hardest mapping element in this diff.

Normal.
00:29:214 (5) - Missing clap.
00:48:499 (5) - There isn't a cymbol instrument at the song. Adding a finish didn't really felt well.
00:54:571 (5) - Consider lowering the slider curve rate. Sliders at the first part of the kiai were mostly low in curve rate, and this one kinda broke the consistency.

Hard.
od5 feels way too low on this level of difficulty. I'd suggest 6 as a minimal for a proper difficulty, and also for the spread.
00:05:107 - 00:10:821 - 01:03:499 - Normal whistles are really a distinct sound. Considering that the music wasn't really drastic to demand something, a normal-whistle usage felt quite abrupt.
00:35:285 - There also was a normal whistle usage here, and this one quite felt nice enough. Though if you want to make it less sudden, I recommend some constant usage. Adding at 00:36:535 - 00:39:392 - 00:42:249 might help. Besides, is 00:41:178 intentionally missing a normal whistle?

Insane.
00:40:464 (5) - 01:00:464 (4) - 01:11:892 (4) - This accelerating stream was quite a noticable pattern in your map. Setting the combo color also consistent will assure the consistency better. Or if you do not want to use the colorhax, you can just change 00:40:464 (5) as a regular stream so it wouldn't ruin consistency.

Bijuu.
01:03:053 - I feel this could be mapped, but it's fine to leave if you've got no idea how to deal this.

Irohas

1,353 posts

Joined May 2014

Irohas 2017-01-17T14:11:38+00:00

all fixed

sayonara

osu file format v14

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Hazu-

3,884 posts

Joined July 2014

Hazu- 2017-01-17T18:46:06+00:00

Lami wrote:
hello

N

00:15:642 (2) - add note? cause just 1/2 one slider little boring.... I would not like to add more notes just because it's boring.

k gl

Sonnyc wrote:
Normal.
00:29:214 (5) - Missing clap. Fixed.
00:48:499 (5) - There isn't a cymbol instrument at the song. Adding a finish didn't really felt well. I want to see the answer from iYiyo, because I copied the hitsounds from his difficulty.
00:54:571 (5) - Consider lowering the slider curve rate. Sliders at the first part of the kiai were mostly low in curve rate, and this one kinda broke the consistency. Fixed.

Thanks~
@iYiyo ¿Podrías ver tu lo del finish? x.x Si lo sacas hazlo en mi diff también.

Poi

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: toumei.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 49392
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
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[Metadata]
Title:Toumei Datta Sekai
TitleUnicode:透明だった世界
Artist:Hata Motohiro
ArtistUnicode:秦 基博
Creator:iYiyo
Version:Hazu's Normal
Source:NARUTO-ナルト-疾風伝
Tags:shippuden shippuuden opening pkhg mugiwarasekai hazu- irohas
BeatmapID:1150153
BeatmapSetID:520772

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3
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iYiyo

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iYiyo 2017-01-17T22:09:43+00:00

Sonnyc wrote:
Easy.
00:35:642 (2,3) - 00:38:499 (2,3) - 00:41:357 (2,3) - I'd be glad if you could get rid of these 1/2 click. This is an easy afterall, and 1/2 isn't really a beginner friendly element to use. Also I'm not really sure if those parts are the most intensed part of the song to demand the hardest mapping element in this diff. Well I already discussed it with ErunamoJAZZ here. It's in spanish but basically he recommended me this rhythm which is more intuitive than the rhythm that was before. I don't remember exactly but before his mod it was something like this and that was less friendly so yeah.
I wanted to really know if it was hard or no so I asked a few noob people to testplay it. The first one with 100pp FC'ed it with DT xd Don't have replay though. The other one with 94pp passed it without problem even using HDHR. Here's the replay. So yeah, don't really think it's that unfriendly. It's better than it was before xD

Bijuu.
01:03:053 - I feel this could be mapped, but it's fine to leave if you've got no idea how to deal this. I think mapping that wouldn't feel good following vocals, it'd like mess all the flow~~ Just imo tho xd
Fixed the finish issue you mentioned on Hazu's diff for this one aswell tho~

@Hazu: Oka

Updated ~~Mugis's~~ Irohas' and Hazu's

pkhg

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pkhg 2017-01-17T23:17:10+00:00

changing the stream would ruin consistency and i dont really feel like changing colors
ty

iYiyo

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iYiyo 2017-01-17T23:34:10+00:00

Updated a finish on pkhgs upon his request so everything is updated now.

~~Also if someone knows a good BG related to pain arc please let me know :d~~
nvm already found one

so redl

pkhg

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pkhg 2017-01-18T03:00:03+00:00

me tome la libertad de comprimir el bg sin perdida de calidad okhand

iYiyo

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iYiyo 2017-01-18T04:02:30+00:00

pkhg wrote:
me tome la libertad de comprimir el bg sin perdida de calidad okhand

wtf is this spanish, can't understand but I think you were talking about compressing the img, thanks m3n

Irohas

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Irohas 2017-01-18T09:39:31+00:00

rip madara bg

iYiyo

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iYiyo 2017-01-18T16:24:16+00:00

Irohas wrote:
rip madara bg

rip MugiwaraSekai

@Added Video \o.o/ big thanks to missa1912 for the courtesy :3

redl.

Hazu-

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Hazu- 2017-01-18T20:22:59+00:00

iYiyo wrote:
pkhg wrote:
me tome la libertad de comprimir el bg sin perdida de calidad okhand
wtf is this spanish, can't understand but I think you were talking about compressing the img, thanks m3n

No se porque me reí con esta wea xd

pkhg

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pkhg 2017-01-19T03:28:30+00:00

tepillamospocompadre.jpg

Sonnyc

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Sonnyc 2017-01-19T03:37:29+00:00

the whistle of 01:03:499 at hard wasn't removed. intended?

Irohas

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Irohas 2017-01-19T08:16:00+00:00

Sonnyc wrote:
the whistle of 01:03:499 at hard wasn't removed. intended?

oops yiyo could you pls remove that whistle instead of me

iYiyo

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iYiyo 2017-01-19T13:30:08+00:00

Irohas wrote:
all fixed

Sonnyc

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Sonnyc 2017-01-19T13:34:19+00:00

Nominated.

Mafumafu

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Mafumafu 2017-01-19T17:59:42+00:00

I will finish modding it tomorrow.

Irohas

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Irohas 2017-01-19T18:32:06+00:00

2fast

Mafumafu

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Mafumafu 2017-01-20T05:18:58+00:00

[Irohas' Hard]
00:40:999 (1) - Normal addition for slider tail too? To keep consistent with former ones.
00:53:499 (4,1) - A jump is needed here.
01:04:928 (4,1) - ^

[pkhg's Insane]
00:20:999 (1,3) - I actually feel a bit uncomfortable to see some slight overlaps with sliders.
00:46:714 (1) - Overlap with HP bar ahhhhhh

Call me back

Last edited by Mafumafu 2017-01-21T13:59:37+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Irohas

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Irohas 2017-01-20T06:09:26+00:00

Regraz wrote:
[Irohas' Hard]
00:40:999 (1) - Normal addition for slider tail too? To keep consistent with former ones. okay
00:53:499 (4,1) - A jump is needed here. there's not really need to have a jump here, since the intensity of the song is not as high imo
01:04:928 (4,1) - ^ ^

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