Sasaki Sayaka - Marine Blue ni Sotte · forum

lit120

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

lit120 2016-03-31T16:55:13+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, January 01, 2017 at 4:47:21 PM

Artist: Sasaki Sayaka
Title: Marine Blue ni Sotte
Source: ちいさな彼女の小夜曲
Tags: chiikano chiisana kanojo no serenade sayokyoku feng eroge galgame visual novel opening -hakurei- ecdonald davided kawaiwkyik rizia haruto haruto_aizawa doormat
BPM: 180
Filesize: 4179kb
Play Time: 01:33
Difficulties Available:

DavidEd's Normal (2.11 stars, 175 notes)
Doormat's Easy (1.57 stars, 116 notes)
ecdonald's Extra (5.19 stars, 371 notes)
Haruto's Hard (3.03 stars, 227 notes)
Serenade (5.76 stars, 341 notes)
wkyik's Insane (4.43 stars, 319 notes)

Download: Sasaki Sayaka - Marine Blue ni Sotte
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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DIFF

Doormat's Easy By Doormat
DavidEd's Normal by DavidEd
Haru's Hard by Haruto
wkyik's Insane by Rizia
ecdonald's Extra by ecdonald
Serenade by me

CREDITS

Laurier for lending me his mp3 + video =w=

Last edited by lit120 2017-01-01T09:48:07+00:00, edited 31 times in total.

Doormat

2,049 posts

Joined September 2013

Doormat 2016-04-03T06:03:37+00:00

beep beep delivery

http://puu.sh/o4cy2/dd061630d8.zip

i copied rizia's hitsounds, hope you don't mind :X

~~you butt making me post it via forum pm instead of just accepting it via irc~~

lit120

3,251 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

lit120 2016-04-03T06:29:52+00:00

updated Doormat's. ~~let's wait for ecdonald's fixed hitsound so i can start the hunt (?)~~ and ecdonald's new hitsound

let's get started

Kyouren

5,583 posts

Joined October 2012

Kyouren 2016-04-03T12:47:32+00:00

Hanae~ <3 (The vocalist sound almost same like Hanae <3)

Legend:
Black: Not to Important
Red: Is Unrankable
Blue: If not change, I'm ask with other BN and QAT

[General]

Need a source for metadata!
Inconsistent values Tags for Normal, Easy, Extra, Hard, Serenade, and Insane diff

[Easy]

01:24:254 (3) - Maybe can used a slider from 01:22:920 (1)

[Normal]

HP and OD +1

00:05:087 (3) - I don't understand, why you used revense part for new sound, i mean it's really new sound
00:19:754 (1) - Remove NC
00:31:920 - It's has strong sound but why not adding a note?
00:52:920 (5) - Blanket look bad D:
01:15:087 (1) - Blanket is error (^)
01:25:587 (1,2) - How about used this? Look better!
01:29:754 (3,4) - Look weird a rhythm

It's not finsihed mod, i will continue after test exam done!
Poke me in-game!

Free mod my map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/435555
Sorry if my mod is bad~ (NO KDS if not change all)

Good Luck~

Annadine

490 posts

Joined July 2015

Annadine 2016-04-03T13:07:39+00:00

Hello! NM from ~~modding queue~~ #indonesian~!
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaabcdefgh

UN sebentar lagi, aqu jadi terHaru's Hard[]

00:05:087 (3) - haruto goblom unnecessary slider point here
00:17:087 (3) - ini menurut gue agak mabok bentuk slider nya, soalnya curve nya ngga terlalu keliatan, tapi ahsudah kwkw
00:42:087 (2,3) - hard angle haruto. Coba ctrl+shift+r like 40 or something. Lalu curve mungkin
image
Jadi pas DS juga www
01:10:087 (2,3,4,1,2) - just my opinion sih, tapi keknya ini terlalu spaced. Trs abis itu kan 01:11:754 (3,4,5,6) - jadi mepet2 lagi, jadi berasa too spaced aja dah yang tadi wwkwk. Di hexagon ini yang gue miss miss di DT btw kan
Gue juga rada ga yakin sm break pas abis 01:15:170 (1) - sih. Jadi berasa mapp full ver kan gue bilang wkwk.
Gimana kalo add note di
1. 01:18:754
2. 01:19:087
3. 01:19:420 yg deketan

Serenade[]
diyem lu hakupoi

00:52:420 add a note? Bener anjir kedengerannya ada yang kurang
01:30:587 (8,9,10) - curve p l s

[]

Dah ah itu aja www gabisa ngemod 5*
Good luck~ bhay

-Tochi

Elite Storyboarder

1,444 posts

Joined November 2013

-Tochi 2016-04-03T13:23:28+00:00

General

Inconsistency in [Tags]
Check all diffs.

Serenade

00:31:754 - Why skip this beat?
01:12:087 (8,1) - Improve blanket.
01:12:087 (8) - Mute sliderend.

ecdonald's Extra

00:26:920 (1,2) - Maybe stack the circle on the slider?
00:52:420 (1,1,1,1) - This is really confusing to play, but meh.
00:55:087 (2) - Mute sliderend?
01:28:754 (3,1) - Awkward spacing here it feels weird to play, please make it more spacing.

wkyik's Insane

00:50:420 (1,2) - This spacing is a bit confusing because of the next jump 00:51:420 (2,3,4,5,6) - So maybe make 00:50:420 (1,2) - bigger?

Feedback

Nice map, good luck!

lit120

3,251 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

lit120 2016-04-03T13:38:08+00:00

Annadine wrote:

Hello! NM from ~~modding queue~~ #indonesian~!
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaabcdefgh

Serenade[]
diyem lu hakupoi
00:52:420 add a note? Bener anjir kedengerannya ada yang kurang ini ga perlu deh
01:30:587 (8,9,10) - curve p l s no
[]
Dah ah itu aja www gabisa ngemod 5*
Good luck~ bhay

-Tochi wrote:

General
Inconsistency in [Tags] fixed that
Check all diffs.

Serenade
00:31:754 - Why skip this beat? i better follow that piano note though. should be ok at least
01:12:087 (8,1) - Improve blanket. fixed
01:12:087 (8) - Mute sliderend. there's a note at 3/4 (drum)

Feedback

Nice map, good luck!

thx for mod!

Haruto

1,815 posts

Joined December 2013

Haruto 2016-04-03T13:47:21+00:00

Annadine wrote:

Hello! NM from ~~modding queue~~ #indonesian~!
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaabcdefgh

UN sebentar lagi, aqu jadi terHaru's Hard can u not[]
00:05:087 (3) - haruto goblom unnecessary slider point here intentional nad, gw sengaja buat slidernya curve btw
00:17:087 (3) - ini menurut gue agak mabok bentuk slider nya, soalnya curve nya ngga terlalu keliatan, tapi ahsudah kwkw fixed the curves a bit l o l
00:42:087 (2,3) - hard angle haruto. Coba ctrl+shift+r like 40 or something. Lalu curve mungkin noo nanti flownya ancur nad ;;
image
Jadi pas DS juga www
01:10:087 (2,3,4,1,2) - just my opinion sih, tapi keknya ini terlalu spaced. Trs abis itu kan 01:11:754 (3,4,5,6) - jadi mepet2 lagi, jadi berasa too spaced aja dah yang tadi wwkwk. Di hexagon ini yang gue miss miss di DT btw kan tbh disitu flownya kerasa loh, btw itu pentagon bukan hexa lol. keep for now i suppose
Gue juga rada ga yakin sm break pas abis 01:15:170 (1) - sih. Jadi berasa mapp full ver kan gue bilang wkwk.
Gimana kalo add note di
01:18:754
01:19:087
01:19:420 yg deketan
itu break juga sedikit, ga panjang, remove the break then r i p
[]
Dah ah itu aja www gabisa ngemod 5*
Good luck~ bhay

uwee thanks nad modnya =w=b

Update

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: feng7th.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 52170
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 32
TimelineZoom: 2.4

[Metadata]
Title:Marine Blue ni Sotte
TitleUnicode:マリンブルーに沿って
Artist:Sasaki Sayaka
ArtistUnicode:佐咲紗花
Creator:lit120
Version:Haru's Hard
Source:ちいさな彼女の小夜曲
Tags:chiisana kanojo no serenade sayokyoku feng eroge galgame visual novel opening -hakurei- ecdonald davided kawaiwkyik rizia haruto haruto_aizawa doormat
BeatmapID:941338
BeatmapSetID:436763

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:3.7
OverallDifficulty:6.6
ApproachRate:7.5
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
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//Storyboard Sound Samples

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lit120

3,251 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

lit120 2016-04-03T14:10:07+00:00

updated haru's

sahuang

2,293 posts

Joined December 2014

sahuang 2016-04-05T00:57:25+00:00

Hello, M4M from your QUEUE

[General]

Nothing in particular,and i suggest ending spinners at the same time for all the diffs 01:33:587 -

[Doormat]

01:04:254 (1,2) - maybe upward curve is better?
SPOILER
01:30:420 (3) - the shape isn't quite consistent with the previous 2

[DavidEd]

01:01:754 (1,2,3) - i don't think this pattern is well mapped....cuz 01:01:754 (1,2,3) - need to remain the flow
try sth. like
SPOILER
01:28:420 (1,2) - bad position imo....i'd rather move 01:29:420 (2) - to ~x366y44
Really nice diff,i love it lol

[Haru]

01:15:087 - 01:17:754 - these 2 green lines are the same,so delete one?
00:18:587 (2) - maybe trun around and like this
SPOILER
00:26:920 - add a note to be consistent with 00:27:587 (2) -
00:28:920 (3,5,1) - maybe stack well？
00:49:087 (1,1) - touch too much area
01:21:254 (4) - change an angle
e.g.
SPOILER

[wkyik]

HP=6/6.5
00:22:587 (4) - remove red dot and stack 00:22:587 (4,2) -
00:24:920 (2,3,1) - stack
00:44:920 (2) - maybe around x104y295 will be better shape
膜拜Rizia神麻婆(runaway

[ecdonald]

00:46:920 (4,1,2,3) - is it necessary to reduce the distance...? i think it's better if you remain the same distance lol
00:52:420 (1,1,1) - this is quite unexpected...you change from 0.5x to 2x,it's too rapid and hard to play/react.
I suggest 0.75x to 1.2x is ok tbh. 2x is too fast
01:03:754 (5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - Also no need to reduce distance
01:01:420 (1,2) - dont touch

[Serenade]

00:28:254 (1,2) - too close
00:29:754 (1) - looks bad,maybe try 00:30:420 (3) - or 00:30:920 (1) - shape
00:38:920 (1) - ^
01:07:420 (2,3) - still close
Nice jumps and streams,awesome diff!!!

Hope it helps and GL for ranked

lit120

3,251 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

lit120 2016-04-06T05:07:47+00:00

sahuang wrote:
Hello, M4M from your QUEUE

[General]
Nothing in particular,and i suggest ending spinners at the same time for all the diffs 01:33:587 - the note didn't end there

[Serenade]
00:28:254 (1,2) - too close of course i have to make it close due to 3/4 slider + 1/1 note
00:29:754 (1) - looks bad,maybe try 00:30:420 (3) - or 00:30:920 (1) - shape nahh
00:38:920 (1) - ^ ^
01:07:420 (2,3) - still close same answer from the first one
Nice jumps and streams,awesome diff!!!

Hope it helps and GL for ranked

thx for mod!

Doormat

2,049 posts

Joined September 2013

Doormat 2016-04-06T06:37:40+00:00

no change to my diff

@KittyAdventure - I wanted that shape to be intentionally different, but might change if others suggest the same thing

@sahuang - I wanted a more circular flow at those points, which is why those sliders are shaped the way they are

ty for taking a look (:

Rizia

3,114 posts

Joined January 2012

Rizia 2016-04-06T08:43:13+00:00

no change for 00:44:920 (2) - maybe around x104y295 will be better shape

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lit120

3,251 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

lit120 2016-04-06T08:47:03+00:00

updated Rizia's

Dilectus

1,727 posts

Joined April 2014

Dilectus 2016-04-06T16:34:29+00:00

KittyAdventure wrote:
[

HP and OD +1
00:05:087 (3) - I don't understand, why you used revense part for new sound, i mean it's really new sound
00:19:754 (1) - Remove NC
00:31:920 - It's has strong sound but why not adding a note?
00:52:920 (5) - Blanket look bad D:
01:15:087 (1) - Blanket is error (^)
01:25:587 (1,2) - How about used this? Look better!
01:29:754 (3,4) - Look weird a rhythm

sahuang wrote:
[DavidEd]
01:01:754 (1,2,3) - i don't think this pattern is well mapped....cuz 01:01:754 (1,2,3) - need to remain the flow
try sth. like
SPOILER
01:28:420 (1,2) - bad position imo....i'd rather move 01:29:420 (2) - to ~x366y44

Thanks

fixes

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 52170
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

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BeatDivisor: 2
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Title:Marine Blue ni Sotte
TitleUnicode:マリンブルーに沿って
Artist:Sasaki Sayaka
ArtistUnicode:佐咲紗花
Creator:lit120
Version:DavidEd's Normal
Source:ちいさな彼女の小夜曲
Tags:chiisana kanojo no serenade sayokyoku feng eroge galgame visual novel opening -hakurei- ecdonald davided kawaiwkyik rizia haruto haruto_aizawa doormat
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lit120

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Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

lit120 2016-04-06T16:45:05+00:00

updated David's

Haruto

1,815 posts

Joined December 2013

Haruto 2016-04-08T10:26:48+00:00

sahuang wrote:
Hello, M4M from your QUEUE

[General]
Nothing in particular,and i suggest ending spinners at the same time for all the diffs 01:33:587 -

[Haru]
01:15:087 - 01:17:754 - these 2 green lines are the same,so delete one? okay, deleted the 01:17:754 - one
00:18:587 (2) - maybe trun around and like this nope, i dont want to make any blanket here cuz it may broke the flow
SPOILER
00:26:920 - add a note to be consistent with 00:27:587 (2) - considering. i dont add circle there cuz for a gap. i also followed the instrument there.
00:28:920 (3,5,1) - maybe stack well？intentional :/
00:49:087 (1,1) - touch too much area its great tho
01:21:254 (4) - change an angle considering
e.g.
SPOILER

Hope it helps and GL for ranked

thanks for the mod

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TitleUnicode:マリンブルーに沿って
Artist:Sasaki Sayaka
ArtistUnicode:佐咲紗花
Creator:lit120
Version:Haru's Hard
Source:ちいさな彼女の小夜曲
Tags:chiisana kanojo no serenade sayokyoku feng eroge galgame visual novel opening -hakurei- ecdonald davided kawaiwkyik rizia haruto haruto_aizawa doormat
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Okoratu

Nomination Assessment Team / Elite Nominator

4,913 posts

Joined May 2012

Okoratu 2016-04-09T12:19:38+00:00

[General]

@lit120 i ithink it'd be nicer if you used a few whistles in your hitsounding, the thing that is most audible are the soft-hitnormals and that's kinda plain... you could also make the claps you use louder but right now most of this doesn't sound like it has much hitsounding at all

I needed like 40% music, 100% hitsounding to clearly make out your claps

I think you can use a proper widescreen version of this bg to avoid osu! upscaling the bg on its own: http://puu.sh/oaVCw/0c711b28fe.jpg

You can use http://puu.sh/oaVF2/a5e0f794ac.wav for drum-hitnormal79 or whatever and soft-hitwhistle, it saves a bit of filesize cuz it had 300ms of silence in the end or something lols. doesn't matter much though but you may do it if you like

can you decide where to end your last spinner, having different ending spots because of that doesn't seem necessary at all to be honest.
you either do 01:33:587 - 01:33:670 - or 01:33:754 - , so pls that's just 3 ticks find an agreement LOL

[lit120]

to be honest, this difficulty is so easy to accu because of the placement, you can easily increase OD to 8.5 or 9 and do something similar to the other difficulties as well, i think that would be more accurate and would allow ecdonald to take od8 as well which fits an extra better (i'd recommend talking this over with your guests as their ods are directly affected as well)

00:06:920 (1) - i think this needs more space, compared to 00:06:254 (3,4) - it doesn't have much higher spacing even though it's stressed a lot by the song. the slider leading into it smoothly makes this feel even closer so i think increasing spacing here between 00:06:587 (4,1) - would work nicely. 00:09:254 (4,1) - has more space and a direction change so it feels much more emphasised
00:11:420 (2,3) - is this really necessary? you didn't do this previously so i'm wondering as to why you extended a slider to mute its end... i think it would highlight the difference better if this was an 1/2 slider so it catches the drum on the red tick instead.
00:20:920 (3,4) - i don't see why these are part of the jump sequence, i do understand 00:21:254 (5,6,7,1) - being part of where the background instrument kicks back in, but what's happening for the first 2 objects, why are they part of this pattern? I think it'd suit the atmosphere better if 00:20:920 (3,4) - were a slider.
00:23:587 (4) - i don't really get why you do this at all, is this necessary to extend a lot of sliders in this calm part? you even do 1/1 sliders for the most part in the more intense part that follows so i'd naturally expect 00:23:587 (3) - and 00:24:920 (2) - to be 1/1 or 1/2 for this part to keep it more simple
00:26:920 - the last time this happened you used an 1/4 slider to lead in the next part in 00:16:254 (1) - , how about doing this here as well?
00:37:754 - i think this part should be a bit more calm in terms of jump spacing than the part that preceded it, simply because it's more calm than that part in terms of music (that's my interpretation i know but the way you opened that part is already more simple than the part before lol)
00:52:254 (2) - i think it'd be cool if this had more spacing to have some kind of climax to your buildup
okay in the kiai i understand that 00:54:754 (5) - 01:05:420 (5) - 01:12:087 (8,1) - are extended for the vocals but i don't really see the necessity to extend everything else like all the others. most of these other extended sliders have a constant drum going on and nothing really that hints at why they should be extended so all i can do is guesswork...
01:15:087 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - okay, so neat playing jump pattern, but i find it to be rather bland... that's because the spacing between these pairs of 1,2 1,2 1,2 circles remains almost the same from the beginning. like it starts at 2.7 and ends with 3.0 which is not really noticable. The drums are building up in intensity and so could your spacing here. I mean starting small and getting bigger and bigger towards the end (maybe even hitting 4.0x with the last one) might be more interesting while representing the song better

for the rest it repeats from here on because you kept the diff consistent, so if you do anything of the above, then

eh the diff is >ok<, i can't say i find it very interesting though, it feels exactly like all your other maps and I'd like to see you trying yourself with something different in the future, as well because after playing a few of your harder maps the whole thing becomes a bit monotonous if you ask me

[ecdonald]
hi again1!!1!1 xD

00:05:420 (1,3) - i would swap these combos as they fit the way the measure starts better then
00:10:254 (3,4,5,1) - that might just be me but i find this is focused too much on the x axis. I mean it looks like you're mapping ctb here lol. You could try using the other axis as well to create some kind of up down movement. http://puu.sh/obLp3/20ad013eeb.jpg would work better for me, tbh. applies to 01:24:920 (3,4,5,1) - as well
00:15:754 (4) - Nc? it's pairs of 3 and that is the 3rd thing so i think it should have a combo
00:18:587 (5,6,7,1) - I think the square is really forced here, how about trying to make a triangle like http://puu.sh/oaYY9/b00cfcd0c1.jpg
00:30:087 (2,3,4) - I think a less wide angle overall between these 3 objects plays better (currently it's like 160 deg in the middle, might try something like 100 deg)
00:32:420 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - this is a really cool vocal mapping pattern
00:38:420 (3,4,1) - i have the same problem as the 2nd point i mentioned, i think this is much too linear to feel nice, how about involving the y-axis a bit more here ;;
00:48:087 (4) - nc for looks? you split them up in 3s so this would make sense here imo
00:52:420 (1,1,1,1) - no matter how often i play this, it's not intuitive imo. you should find SV changes that are easier to predict and not jumping that much, or a placement that doesn't force so many 90 deg angles in stuff like 00:52:420 (1,1) - being really gigantic and not obvious that the 2nd slider which is longer is shorter in play
that confuses me a lot when playing that pattern and i hope you can find a compromise that works for your intentions and is predictable a working alternative could be making 00:52:420 (1,1) - 1/2 sliders and increasing their SV so they look longer again. the main problem for me was that i leave these really early so that should fix it and make the pattern more intuitive.
if you have other ways to go about this, go ahead
00:55:087 (2,3) - this spacing isn't the most intuitive thing ever, i think you should use 1/4 jumps more carefully or make 00:55:087 (2) - this an 1/2 slider so it becomes easier to read this pattern
01:01:420 (1,2) - i would either overlap their ends more, or overlapping them less because i think http://puu.sh/obMX1/a8db40c0f5.jpg or http://puu.sh/obMXy/c01e5e4a9b.jpg look better.
01:03:420 (3) - the "1/4 spacing isnt that intuitive" thing i mentioned applies to this a bit as well, try to make it more intuitive that 01:03:087 (2,3,4) - are all 1/4 through the usage of spacing
01:03:754 (5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - somehow i think you could make the curve of this stream look a bit more neat while still keeping the slowdown functional, the part around 01:04:004 (8,9,10,1) - looks a bit sloppy ingame as it breaks your curve
01:13:420 (5,6) - i see the reason for this spacing but i don't think it's that pleasant to play, you could try to nerf 01:13:254 (4,5,6) - overall to see if that works better

[rizia]

00:42:754 (6,7) - i think this should use less spacing, moving unevenly through 00:42:420 (3,4,5,6,7) - felt a bit odd to me
00:13:420 (4) - i don't think this neeeeeeds the extention, actually i think it'd make more sense with your overall concept to not extend this
00:52:920 (3) - i'd stack this with 00:52:254 (7) - because it hink that angle is more comfortable to play
01:17:420 (6) - i think moving this more to the left feels nicer because 01:17:087 (5) - is a dropoff anyway so 5,6 are a bit too close as a zig zag imo

[haru]
is tick rate 2 intentional everyone else uses 1 o.o

00:04:920 (1,2) - i think deleting these will not throw people into circles as the first thing, and the circles start on a red tick while players get the rhythm from the stuff on whites. so i think deleting these would be better
00:21:254 (3,4) - i don't think this jump is that necessary in a calm part like this
00:44:420 (1,2,3) - i don't think this makes musical sense, you should do something like http://puu.sh/obNyZ/70bb580a08.jpg to fit the vocals better

this is really close to the style i use for my own hard diffs lmao

[davided]
AR 6 please, the way AR 5 leaves everything cluttered with stuff might end up being harder to read for people who just start out

00:12:420 (3,4) - these look like you wanted something symmetrical, so why not make something symmetrical
00:13:754 (1,2) - 01:28:420 (1,2,3,4,5) - follow drums so 00:15:087 (3) - this is highly confusing because the drum is on the redtick, so a rhythm like http://puu.sh/obNN7/013e051aff.jpg would be closer to the song and not confuse people who just caught on that you're mapping drums
00:27:587 (2,3) - using circle, 1/1 slider for thse would follow the vocals even better than what you do right now to give the player a break you could make 00:28:754 (5) - just a circle on that red tick to make it even more obvious you're mapping vocals
00:39:587 (5,1) - i think mapping instruments over vocals will feel better for the player
00:41:587 (4) - something like http://puu.sh/obO50/5003121921.jpg would follow vocal better

[doormat]
00:15:754 (3) - 00:25:254 (2) - 00:35:920 (2) - really short sliders like these throw absolute beginners off, i recommend circles for the first and just 1/1 sliders for the others.

lit120

3,251 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

lit120 2016-04-09T16:58:38+00:00

Okoratu wrote:
[General]

@lit120 i ithink it'd be nicer if you used a few whistles in your hitsounding, the thing that is most audible are the soft-hitnormals and that's kinda plain... you could also make the claps you use louder but right now most of this doesn't sound like it has much hitsounding at all
I needed like 40% music, 100% hitsounding to clearly make out your claps say whaaa...?

I think you can use a proper widescreen version of this bg to avoid osu! upscaling the bg on its own: http://puu.sh/oaVCw/0c711b28fe.jpg got 'em

You can use http://puu.sh/oaVF2/a5e0f794ac.wav for drum-hitnormal79 or whatever and soft-hitwhistle, it saves a bit of filesize cuz it had 300ms of silence in the end or something lols. doesn't matter much though but you may do it if you like not taking that, cuz i prefer the old ones \o/

can you decide where to end your last spinner, having different ending spots because of that doesn't seem necessary at all to be honest.
you either do 01:33:587 - 01:33:670 - or 01:33:754 - , so pls that's just 3 ticks find an agreement LOL i even ended it at 01:33:670 - but guess that i'll leave this optional to them LOL

[lit120]

to be honest, this difficulty is so easy to accu because of the placement, you can easily increase OD to 8.5 or 9 and do something similar to the other difficulties as well, i think that would be more accurate and would allow ecdonald to take od8 as well which fits an extra better (i'd recommend talking this over with your guests as their ods are directly affected as well) umm, guess i'll go for 8.5

00:06:920 (1) - i think this needs more space, compared to 00:06:254 (3,4) - it doesn't have much higher spacing even though it's stressed a lot by the song. the slider leading into it smoothly makes this feel even closer so i think increasing spacing here between 00:06:587 (4,1) - would work nicely. 00:09:254 (4,1) - has more space and a direction change so it feels much more emphasised guess i'll move 00:06:587 (4) -
00:11:420 (2,3) - is this really necessary? you didn't do this previously so i'm wondering as to why you extended a slider to mute its end... i think it would highlight the difference better if this was an 1/2 slider so it catches the drum on the red tick instead. ohh great. that makes sense
00:20:920 (3,4) - i don't see why these are part of the jump sequence, i do understand 00:21:254 (5,6,7,1) - being part of where the background instrument kicks back in, but what's happening for the first 2 objects, why are they part of this pattern? I think it'd suit the atmosphere better if 00:20:920 (3,4) - were a slider. well ok
00:23:587 (4) - i don't really get why you do this at all, is this necessary to extend a lot of sliders in this calm part? you even do 1/1 sliders for the most part in the more intense part that follows so i'd naturally expect 00:23:587 (3) - and 00:24:920 (2) - to be 1/1 or 1/2 for this part to keep it more simple ohh well
00:26:920 - the last time this happened you used an 1/4 slider to lead in the next part in 00:16:254 (1) - , how about doing this here as well? nope
00:37:754 - i think this part should be a bit more calm in terms of jump spacing than the part that preceded it, simply because it's more calm than that part in terms of music (that's my interpretation i know but the way you opened that part is already more simple than the part before lol) ohh hell no bruh. i better use the spacing due to downbeat B)
00:52:254 (2) - i think it'd be cool if this had more spacing to have some kind of climax to your buildup increased the spacing a bit
okay in the kiai i understand that 00:54:754 (5) - 01:05:420 (5) - 01:12:087 (8,1) - are extended for the vocals but i don't really see the necessity to extend everything else like all the others. most of these other extended sliders have a constant drum going on and nothing really that hints at why they should be extended so all i can do is guesswork... guess i'll keep this
01:15:087 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - okay, so neat playing jump pattern, but i find it to be rather bland... that's because the spacing between these pairs of 1,2 1,2 1,2 circles remains almost the same from the beginning. like it starts at 2.7 and ends with 3.0 which is not really noticable. The drums are building up in intensity and so could your spacing here. I mean starting small and getting bigger and bigger towards the end (maybe even hitting 4.0x with the last one) might be more interesting while representing the song better increased some
for the rest it repeats from here on because you kept the diff consistent, so if you do anything of the above, then

eh the diff is >ok<, i can't say i find it very interesting though, it feels exactly like all your other maps and I'd like to see you trying yourself with something different in the future, as well because after playing a few of your harder maps the whole thing becomes a bit monotonous if you ask me

thx for mod okodad

i prefer to use 3/4 sliders a lot cuz it's sth special i can use if it is necessary weeee~~~~

updated Haru's like before he starts to fix stuff from yours LMAO

Dilectus

1,727 posts

Joined April 2014

Dilectus 2016-04-09T17:07:35+00:00

Okoratu wrote:
[davided]
AR 6 please, the way AR 5 leaves everything cluttered with stuff might end up being harder to read for people who just start out
00:12:420 (3,4) - these look like you wanted something symmetrical, so why not make something symmetrical not my intention
00:13:754 (1,2) - 01:28:420 (1,2,3,4,5) - follow drums so 00:15:087 (3) - this is highly confusing because the drum is on the redtick, so a rhythm like http://puu.sh/obNN7/013e051aff.jpg would be closer to the song and not confuse people who just caught on that you're mapping drums maybe
00:27:587 (2,3) - using circle, 1/1 slider for thse would follow the vocals even better than what you do right now to give the player a break you could make 00:28:754 (5) - just a circle on that red tick to make it even more obvious you're mapping vocals
00:39:587 (5,1) - i think mapping instruments over vocals will feel better for the player
00:41:587 (4) - something like http://puu.sh/obO50/5003121921.jpg would follow vocal better

thanks

fixes

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Okoratu

Nomination Assessment Team / Elite Nominator

4,913 posts

Joined May 2012

Okoratu 2016-04-09T17:58:08+00:00

lit120 wrote:
Okoratu wrote:
[General]

@lit120 i ithink it'd be nicer if you used a few whistles in your hitsounding, the thing that is most audible are the soft-hitnormals and that's kinda plain... you could also make the claps you use louder but right now most of this doesn't sound like it has much hitsounding at all
I needed like 40% music, 100% hitsounding to clearly make out your claps say whaaa...?

You can use http://puu.sh/oaVF2/a5e0f794ac.wav for drum-hitnormal79 or whatever and soft-hitwhistle, it saves a bit of filesize cuz it had 300ms of silence in the end or something lols. doesn't matter much though but you may do it if you like not taking that, cuz i prefer the old ones \o/

1st point: your hitsounding blends in too much for my tastes and the song offers plenty of room for default soft whistles and you don't use any, that's what i was saying

2nd point: there's literally no difference in terms of sound between those, the things i provided just don't have the unnecessary silence, that's all lol.

DavidEd wrote:
00:12:420 (3,4) - these look like you wanted something symmetrical, so why not make something symmetrical not my intention
00:13:754 (1,2) - 01:28:420 (1,2,3,4,5) - follow drums so 00:15:087 (3) - this is highly confusing because the drum is on the redtick, so a rhythm like http://puu.sh/obNN7/013e051aff.jpg would be closer to the song and not confuse people who just caught on that you're mapping drums maybe
00:39:587 (5,1) - i think mapping instruments over vocals will feel better for the player

1st thing: then you should make them to something that doesn't look like you screwed up symmetry...?
2nd point: maybe = no or maybe = i'll think about it and forget that anyways unless someone else mentions it?
3rd point: so you don't think so or what? Can you at least explain your intention or why you don't think so?

i'm a bit confused about this, that's all

Ujimatsu Chiya

2,480 posts

Joined December 2013

Ujimatsu Chiya 2016-04-09T18:11:15+00:00

Kwaii BG ww

[Doormat's Easy]

00:10:587 - add circle make more rich sound
01:22:587 - ^
01:25:254 - ^

[DavidEd's Normal]

00:04:420 (1,2) - we can see this notes during spining spinner. pls remove or change rhythem
00:28:087 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - that's stacks are really bad for new players, you can make more playable then now
01:15:754 (2) - follow piano better I think
SPOILER

[Haru's Hard]

00:04:920 (1,2,3) - stack better to start point
00:18:087 (5,1,2,3) - how about this? owo
SPOILER

[wkyik's Insane]

00:10:920 (1,3) - nazi, stack didn't well
00:18:254 (3,1,2,3,4) - this parttern didn't fit AR8 I think, kinda hard to reading x_x

[ecdonald's Extra]

00:05:337 (4,1,2,3) - follow kinda werid lol

[baka's diff]

00:16:254 (3) - no need to NC here
00:21:254 (4,5,6) - this jump kinda werid x_x I don't think this jump fit song enough
00:23:420 (2,3) - I know you want blanket here but this DS can longer then 00:22:920 (1,2) - this DS
00:35:087 (1,2) - don't stack better coz you stack circles on head already

Good luck

Haruto

1,815 posts

Joined December 2013

Haruto 2016-04-09T22:44:42+00:00

omg its okoratu

Okoratu wrote:
[haru]
is tick rate 2 intentional everyone else uses 1 o.o yea it was intentional. the main thing im using TR 2 is to fill out some drum sounds like 00:46:920 - . idk how should i explain this lol
00:04:920 (1,2) - i think deleting these will not throw people into circles as the first thing, and the circles start on a red tick while players get the rhythm from the stuff on whites. so i think deleting these would be better cool idea, removed both circles and extended 00:05:087 - to 00:04:920 - (added more reverse lol)
00:21:254 (3,4) - i don't think this jump is that necessary in a calm part like this nice catch, so ctrl+g'ed 00:21:254 (3,4) - to make it looks better
00:44:420 (1,2,3) - i don't think this makes musical sense, you should do something like http://puu.sh/obNyZ/70bb580a08.jpg to fit the vocals better tried this, awesome idea indeed
this is really close to the style i use for my own hard diffs lmao omg okoratu big fans

thanks oko!1!!

omg its eINess-kun www

eINess wrote:
Kwaii BG ww

[Haru's Hard]
00:04:920 (1,2,3) - stack better to start point did something else after applying oko's mod owo
00:18:087 (5,1,2,3) - how about this? owo nice catch owo but sorry uwu. i followed the string and vocal there, so there'll be an exception though, if ppl said this again *maybe* i'll change it lol owo
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Good luck

omg eINess-kun big fans, thanks for the mod senpais!

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Title:Marine Blue ni Sotte
TitleUnicode:マリンブルーに沿って
Artist:Sasaki Sayaka
ArtistUnicode:佐咲紗花
Creator:lit120
Version:Haru's Hard
Source:ちいさな彼女の小夜曲
Tags:chiisana kanojo no serenade sayokyoku feng eroge galgame visual novel opening -hakurei- ecdonald davided kawaiwkyik rizia haruto haruto_aizawa doormat
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Doormat 2016-04-10T04:03:36+00:00

Okoratu wrote:
[general]
can you decide where to end your last spinner, having different ending spots because of that doesn't seem necessary at all to be honest.
you either do 01:33:587 - 01:33:670 - or 01:33:754 - , so pls that's just 3 ticks find an agreement LOL
[doormat]
00:15:754 (3) - 00:25:254 (2) - 00:35:920 (2) - really short sliders like these throw absolute beginners off, i recommend circles for the first and just 1/1 sliders for the others.

keeping the first one short because there's an emphasis on both the white tick and red tick that i wanted to include. made the other two into 1/1 sliders though. regarding oko's last spinner comment you can change my spinner to match the other diffs if you need to- i'm not really sure where to end it myself..

eINess wrote:
[Doormat's Easy]
00:10:587 - add circle make more rich sound
01:22:587 - ^
01:25:254 - ^

added all circles. also added one at 00:07:920 -

http://puu.sh/ocFEA/4bc8ea42e5.zip

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