00:11:936 (2) - fix blanket with 1
00:12:423 (4) - if you make 1 more curvy you can blanket this note within slider 1. You can also move it to make a triangle with the head of 1 and 2, like this:
^ (if you do make a triangle, select 00:12:261 (3,4,5) - and move together)
00:15:342 (1) - blanket could be a bit better
00:16:153 (5) - blanket with 1
00:17:126 (2,3,4,5,6) - this could look better with the ctrl+shift+D function
00:19:720 (1) - maybe move it more to the centre of the curve of 00:19:234 (7) -
00:20:531 (1) - RNC from this one or 00:20:855 (1) - (not sure which one would be better, tho)
00:20:855 (1) - blanket with 00:20:207 (3) -
00:26:855 (1) - RNC
00:27:018 (2) - This should be a slider, lasting half a beat
00:31:234 (3) - stack with 00:30:099 (1) -
00:31:396 (4) - I think the guittar sound is way too loud here to no be mapped. Maybe a slider lasting 3/4th of a beat would be more fitting?
00:38:531 (3,4,5,6) - would look better with Ctrl+shift+D function. Also, 00:39:018 (5) - should be shapped like this IMO
^blanket end with 00:38:045 (2) - (will flow better considering the patterns used in this combo)
00:40:639 (4,5,6,1) - perhaphs something like this will flow better
00:42:423 (4) - restack if ^ is changed
00:42:747 (1) - fix blanket
00:44:531 (2) - ^
00:48:423 (3) - ^
00:50:531 (2) - this blanket could be improved a bit
00:52:639 (2) - this reverse feels odd for me.. maybe a triangle like this can help the flow better? (also, the jump from 4 and the next slider feels good with the music.. the triangle position may not be the best and you could try other different setups with this, but this jump from 4 to 5 should be a thing, IMO)
00:56:693 (3,4,5) - not really a mod but, what if you stack 4 with 5? < actually yeah thats a mod because there are several others that are made like this as we go more deep into the map
00:58:315 (1) - fix blanket
01:01:396 (3) - ^
01:03:180 (4) - this curve should be more open IMO.. if changed, blanket with 01:03:828 (2) -
01:04:396 (4,5) - select both, move to 352, 88
01:10:153 (2) - stack with 01:09:180 (3) - (the blanket of this one could be slightly better too..)
01:09:991 (1,2,3) - should have consistent DS, IMO
01:11:612 (2) - copy and paste previous slider and place it where this one currently is
01:15:180 (1,2,3) - you can make a triangle with 01:14:855 (6,4) - heads
01:18:585 (2) - maybe lowering the SV even more will build better for the kiai
01:20:369 (1) - maybe blanket with 01:20:045 (5) -
01:25:558 (1) - stack with 01:24:585 (2) -
01:26:207 (3) - blanket with 1 end if ^is changed (also stack the circle again)
01:27:099 (1) - ? should it really start here?
01:38:855 (2) - could make a blanket for 01:37:882 (1) - but 2 things: 1 while playing, this blanket wont show much anyway and 2 is too much workaround to fix that
01:40:153 (2) - should stack with 01:39:423 (4) - and 01:40:477 (3) - stack with 01:39:180 (3) - -- if changed, fix the DS to make them consistent again, as they are related
01:41:126 (1) - could blanket 01:40:477 (3) -
01:44:693 (1,2,3,4,5) - select all, stack with 01:43:720 (1) -
01:44:855 (2) - blanket could be better
01:46:153 (1) - ^
01:48:261 (3) - copy and paste previous slider, flip horizontally & vertically, stack with 01:47:288 (5) -
01:51:828 (1,2,3,4,5) - use the ctrl+shift+d for a better triangle shape and blanket 01:51:828 (1,4) -
01:57:504 (4) - stack with 01:56:531 (5) - end
02:01:720 (1) - blanket could be improved a bit
02:02:531 (4) - stack end with ^end
02:05:450 (1) - spacing with stream inconsistent, moving to 122, 50 fixes the DS
02:17:936 (2) - fix blanket
02:21:342 (1) - blanket the next circle
02:22:639 (1) - blanket could be better
02:31:072 (2,3,4,5) - select all and move so that 4 stacks with 02:32:369 (3) - (also move 02:31:720 (1) - up a bit and make a triangle with 5, 1 and 2
02:34:801 (2,3,4) - maybe its better shaped like this (4 stacks with the :
02:37:396 (1,2,3) - maybe something like this flows better?
^2 end is stacked with the first note of the stream
02:40:477 (5) - blanket with 02:39:991 (3) -
02:40:801 (1) - blanket with the new position of ^
02:49:558 (5,6,7) - I'd rotate these by like 10º or 15º to flow better to the next note
02:58:964 (1) - copy and paste 02:34:315 (1) - (this one is way better balanced)
03:00:504 (2) - ? not sure if this should start here, too
03:26:207 (1,2) - either unstack these or stack 03:27:504 (1,2) - , for consistency sake
03:31:882 (3) - stack on 1 end
03:39:018 (6) - this one could follow 03:38:531 (4) - around better
03:44:207 (7) - maybe here a slider would fit the finish sound better
03:58:639 (1) - make the DS even
04:00:909 (1) - RNC
04:01:882 (4) - NC
04:02:855 (1,1,1,1,2) - spacing could be made a bit more consistent
04:07:720 (1) - stacking with 04:06:747 (3) - looks better than with 04:05:612 (1) -
04:11:207 (2) - this is so weird lol.. it's not wrong as far as I can tell but kinda breaks the rhythm of the whole song so far... not really sure if I can express exactly what I mean...
04:18:099 (1) - inconsistent spacing with stream
04:33:666 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - copy 1 and paste over 2, flip horizontally. you can see in this image that some aren't really flipped like they should be
04:37:558 (1) - inconsistent spacing with stream (move the inherit one tick to the right so the stream and the slider are by the same DS.. after fixed, move back the inherit point
04:44:693 (3,4,5) - select all, stack with 04:43:882 (1) -
04:47:450 (5,6) - select both and stack 5 with 04:46:477 (1) -
04:58:315 (1) - blanket could be better
05:02:274 (1) - maybe make it start at 05:02:623 so it follow the timing spacing you used with previous hitcircles... about the end of the spinner I'm not really sure, but somewhere like 05:10:995 sounds ok.
^Also add some inherit points to reduce the volume of the slider as the sound vanishes (actually the hitsound volume should start slightly reducing since 04:57:666 (1) - , TBH)