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Tristam & Braken - Flight (Original Mix)

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Topic Starter
Arf
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Wednesday, January 14, 2015 at 10:40:33 PM

Artist: Tristam & Braken
Title: Flight (Original Mix)
Tags: monstercat dubstep
BPM: 175
Filesize: 2095kb
Play Time: 01:50
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (3.68 stars, 216 notes)
  2. Normal (1.96 stars, 111 notes)
Download: Tristam & Braken - Flight (Original Mix)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Will I ever get back to this? I don't even know....
Old Stuff
BG Credit: (http://rekavm.deviantart.com/art/Tristam-and-Braken-Flight-Wallpaper-370583294)
Can I get a shout-out from the MC Montage fans out there?

(Yes, I know Normal diff sucks. Original plan was to do Hard and Insane, maybe GD out the Normal. We'll see.)
So this is Flight. One of the most famous Monstercat songs in existence, and I know many of you guys know this track. I originally worked only on Hard, making Normal purely in spare time, and it turned out...um, yeah. If anyone wants to GD any difficulty on this, I will gladly appreciate it [provided you reply to mods? ;)] I am trying to rank this, but for now, I still need to work on Insane, (and Normal...) so maybe try and get the Hard modded? PM or forum PM me if you want to talk about the map, or GD (or even just to yell at me to get it finished). Criticize away people, all feedback welcome.
DeletedUser_3886246
Hi! M4M from my queue :3
And like every mod, these are just suggestions, so ignore them or correct me, if you think I'm wrong with something. :)

You could disable "letterbox during breaks" in every difficulty, just looks nicer.
Also, use colours that fit the to the background. ^^

  • Normal

    "The difficulties in the mapset must be in a consecutive order. Easy or Normal can be skipped if the gap in the star rating spread allows it. If your mapset has two difficulties, one of them cannot be an Insane or Expert. The lowest difficulty must be below 2.0 stars."

    Reduce the star rating or make another difficulty!


    00:27:964 (6) - Place at X240 Y120 so it overlaps with - 00:25:564 (3)
    00:31:050 (4) - Add a note here.
    00:31:907 (2,3) - These are neary overlapping, do a blanket or move 3 a bit further away.
    00:38:078 (5) - move to X312 Y92 for blanket with - 00:36:707 (3)
    00:40:135 (1,2) - That pattern looks weird, make two different sliders at least.
    00:53:163 (1,2,3) - move to X176 Y244 so -00:53:506 (2) - blankets with - 00:50:420 (1)
    01:00:020 (4) - That slider looks weird.
    Remove 01:02:763 (4) - and add a note here - 01:02:249 (2)
    01:07:563 (4) - I think a 1/2 slider fits better than a 1/4 here.
    01:08:934 (1) - ^
    01:16:477 (2) - Try to make that slider symmetrical.
    01:25:391 (4) - Remove that note and add one here - 01:24:877 (2)
    01:26:077 (1) - Remove NC and add NC here - 01:25:905 (5)
    01:27:448 (3) - Try to make it symmetrical, it looks weird.
    01:33:791 (4) - NC?
    01:39:791 (1,2,3) - Add claps?
    01:43:905 (4,5) - That's really hard to read for new players, use at least 1/2 repeating sliders.

    You should read this article - https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Difficulty_appr ... y_elements :)
  • Hard

    Many notes aren't snapped. Snap them correctly please.
    00:41:508 (5) - Move the whole slider one to the left and the middle and last point one to the right, so it's curvier around - 00:41:337 (4)
    01:02:080 (1,2,3,4,5) - That looks weird, make a star out of it?
    01:04:823 (1,2,3,4,5) - How did you even make that pattern? Make it symmetrical please or do a new pattern.
    01:11:851 (5) - Move the middle point of that slider one down so it's curvier.
    01:19:908 (3) - Move to X344 Y92 for better blanket with - 01:17:851 (1)
    01:24:023 (1) - That slider looks weird. Try to use some sliderpatterns from other maps.
    01:34:308 (6) - ^
That's it with my mod! Hope it helped! :D
Topic Starter
Arf

G3m4sSt4ffLP wrote:

Hi! M4M from my queue :3
And like every mod, these are just suggestions, so ignore them or correct me, if you think I'm wrong with something. :)

You could disable "letterbox during breaks" in every difficulty, just looks nicer. Sure
Also, use colours that fit the to the background. ^^ Oops. forgot to change that.

  • Normal

    "The difficulties in the mapset must be in a consecutive order. Easy or Normal can be skipped if the gap in the star rating spread allows it. If your mapset has two difficulties, one of them cannot be an Insane or Expert. The lowest difficulty must be below 2.0 stars."

    Reduce the star rating or make another difficulty!
    I know this diff sucks, and an easy diff is incoming.
    00:27:964 (6) - Place at X240 Y120 so it overlaps with - 00:25:564 (3) Sure
    00:31:050 (4) - Add a note here.Ok
    00:31:907 (2,3) - These are neary overlapping, do a blanket or move 3 a bit further away.Moved 3
    00:38:078 (5) - move to X312 Y92 for blanket with - 00:36:707 (3) It used to be there, idk what happened.
    00:40:135 (1,2) - That pattern looks weird, make two different sliders at least.Did something different.
    00:53:163 (1,2,3) - move to X176 Y244 so -00:53:506 (2) - blankets with - 00:50:420 (1) Uh...adjusted without ruining another blanket.
    01:00:020 (4) - That slider looks weird. I think the little dips go with the music.
    Remove 01:02:763 (4) - and add a note here - 01:02:249 (2) Added note, but why remove that? White tick, plus there's music XD
    01:07:563 (4) - I think a 1/2 slider fits better than a 1/4 here. I liked 1/4 because it sounds a little different, but changed
    01:08:934 (1) - ^^
    01:16:477 (2) - Try to make that slider symmetrical. Isn't it already?
    01:25:391 (4) - Remove that note and add one here - 01:24:877 (2) Added note, but there's a drum on the other note. I know I didn't really follow that beat throughout, but I think it fits.
    01:26:077 (1) - Remove NC and add NC here - 01:25:905 (5) Oops, forgot to change that
    01:27:448 (3) - Try to make it symmetrical, it looks weird. Did my best
    01:33:791 (4) - NC? Yeah combo was too long anyway
    01:39:791 (1,2,3) - Add claps? I haven't really hitsounded this at all, but yes.
    01:43:905 (4,5) - That's really hard to read for new players, use at least 1/2 repeating sliders. I was worried about that. Changed.

    You should read this article - https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Difficulty_appr ... y_elements :) Well, I knew I needed an Easy. It gets harder to map good Normals when you don't play them as much.
  • Hard

    Many notes aren't snapped. Snap them correctly please. The HELL happened here? This is the 5th time I've had to do this. Keeps unsnapping.
    00:41:508 (5) - Move the whole slider one to the left and the middle and last point one to the right, so it's curvier around - 00:41:337 (4) Sure
    01:02:080 (1,2,3,4,5) - That looks weird, make a star out of it? That was a star, idk what happened.
    01:04:823 (1,2,3,4,5) - How did you even make that pattern? Make it symmetrical please or do a new pattern. Stole this from a map I liked playing. I know it looks funny, but I like playing it. If anyone else points it out, I'll change.
    01:11:851 (5) - Move the middle point of that slider one down so it's curvier. Why not.
    01:19:908 (3) - Move to X344 Y92 for better blanket with - 01:17:851 (1) Whoops, I shuffled around some things and forgot that,
    01:24:023 (1) - That slider looks weird. Try to use some sliderpatterns from other maps. I like odd sliders, but if anyone else thinks these are TOO weird, I'll change.
    01:34:308 (6) - ^ Oops, another oversight on my part.
That's it with my mod! Hope it helped! :D
Nice! Thanks for the help.
DreaM117er
From M4M Queue on IRC :)

I read your mod in my dinner time.
So this is yours ;)

[General]
If you don't want to add Easy diff, Please fix Normal's difficulty below 2 stars
After you do that, I'll turn back to mod yours again :)


[Hard]
00:24:878 (4,5) - Ctrl+G, better than your set, and try to add circle here 00:25:050
00:26:421 to 00:28:307 - Try this↓ 'cause your put is bad for Hard diff

00:32:507 (1) - ^
00:36:707 (2) - end at red line
00:37:392 (3,4,5) - same as 00:26:421 to 00:28:307
00:40:735 - add circle??
00:41:506 (6) - end at red line
00:42:192 (7) - ^
00:42:878 (8) - change a circle+1/1 slider
※Why you like to use 00:42:878 (8) , It's a good set at 00:54:020 (6) , not good at other way
00:53:335 (2,3,4,5) - I never seen this set at any Hard diff :?
Add circle at 01:03:277 and 01:03:363 ??
01:05:506 (5) - Why you ignore sounds here??
01:06:877 (9,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Try this↓

01:10:306 (1) - ^, same as 3 hits
01:11:334 - no any sound here
01:13:049 (1) - same as 01:10:306 (1)
01:14:249 (5) - same as 01:03:277 and 01:03:363
01:16:048 - circle??
01:16:477 (1) - Don't ignore any good sounds here, del spinner
01:19:906 (3) - end at red line
01:21:277 (1,2,3) - same as 00:26:421 to 00:28:307
01:26:763 (2) - no reverse slider, change 1/1 slider
01:27:962 (4) - don't ignore good sounds after 01:28:305
01:30:877 (3) - end at red line
01:35:848 (7) - no sense
01:39:962 (2) - move to 01:40:134
01:40:476 (4) - move to 01:40:648
01:42:705 (2,4) - ^, same as last two part
01:46:733 (4) - blue line start and end, no sense
01:49:391 (1) - Spinner start at 01:49:133

Try you best to mapping, good luck
I'll do for General mod.
Topic Starter
Arf

m1223961117 wrote:

From M4M Queue on IRC :)

I read your mod in my dinner time.
So this is yours ;)

[General]
If you don't want to add Easy diff, Please fix Normal's difficulty below 2 stars
After you do that, I'll turn back to mod yours again :)
Is 1.99 stars good enough? It seems too easy for a Normal. Maybe an Advanced diff between Normal and Hard is necessary.

[Hard]
00:24:878 (4,5) - Ctrl+G, better than your set, and try to add circle here 00:25:050 Didn't understand Ctrl+G, but started slider on that tick
00:26:421 to 00:28:307 - Try this↓ 'cause your put is bad for Hard diff Ok

00:32:507 (1) - ^Sure
00:36:707 (2) - end at red lineWhy not
00:37:392 (3,4,5) - same as 00:26:421 to 00:28:307Done
00:40:735 - add circle?? Added, did my best to make it natural.
00:41:506 (6) - end at red lineoops, it should have been that
00:42:192 (7) - ^^^
00:42:878 (8) - change a circle+1/1 slider ok
※Why you like to use 00:42:878 (8) , It's a good set at 00:54:020 (6) , not good at other way At 42 it doesn't fit I agree. But I like the repeating slider :/ - changed anyway though.
00:53:335 (2,3,4,5) - I never seen this set at any Hard diff :? Bah, this is doable XD - I seen it a few times
Add circle at 01:03:277 and 01:03:363 ?? I dislike little triples, but changed. Good idea
01:05:506 (5) - Why you ignore sounds here?? Fixed, I think.
01:06:877 (9,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Try this↓ Tried to use, don't know if done properly

01:10:306 (1) - ^, same as 3 hits Again, unsure of exactly what to do, but tried to fix
01:11:334 - no any sound here switched repeat to red tick
01:13:049 (1) - same as 01:10:306 (1) Sure
01:14:249 (5) - same as 01:03:277 and 01:03:363 yeah
01:16:048 - circle?? Good idea
01:16:477 (1) - Don't ignore any good sounds here, del spinner All right, why not?
01:19:906 (3) - end at red line Oops, that was the plan
01:21:277 (1,2,3) - same as 00:26:421 to 00:28:307Fixed
01:26:763 (2) - no reverse slider, change 1/1 slider Fixed
01:27:962 (4) - don't ignore good sounds after 01:28:305 er....Fixed
01:30:877 (3) - end at red line Fixed
01:35:848 (7) - no sense did something different
01:39:962 (2) - move to 01:40:134 Sure
01:40:476 (4) - move to 01:40:648 Why not
01:42:705 (2,4) - ^, same as last two part Ok
01:46:733 (4) - blue line start and end, no sense Oops, overlooked that from a previous change, Fixed.
01:49:391 (1) - Spinner start at 01:49:133 ^^^^

Try you best to mapping, good luck I guess I need it, huh.
I'll do for General mod.
Thanks very much! I dun like triplets, but I guess they work better here. Your help is very much appreciated :D
DreaM117er
No KD~~ :)

SPOILER
23:15 rfandomization: hi! sorry to bother
23:15 m1223961117: hi
23:15 m1223961117: your map WIP now??
23:16 rfandomization: it is?
23:16 rfandomization: no...
23:17 m1223961117: OK, I'll do online
23:18 rfandomization: ok
23:18 m1223961117: 00:22:821 - preview point
23:19 rfandomization: ok
23:21 m1223961117: 00:27:964 (6) - I think you can try -1 arrow, and add slider 00:28:478 to 00:29:164
23:22 rfandomization: good idea
23:24 m1223961117: many same rhythm can do ^
23:25 m1223961117: 00:31:050 (1,2) - (2)change slider??
23:25 m1223961117: 00:36:535 (2,3) - stack better
23:26 m1223961117: 00:38:935 (7) - -1 arrow
23:28 rfandomization: yes
23:28 m1223961117: 00:44:592 (1) - shange slider start at 00:44:421 -
23:29 rfandomization: remove both notes?
23:29 rfandomization: ok yes
23:30 m1223961117: no, just del 00:44:592 (1) -
23:30 m1223961117: 00:53:163 (1,2,3) - this part cag change a spinner
23:30 rfandomization: ok sure
23:32 m1223961117: 00:56:592 (2,3) - change like 01:13:049 (1,2) -
23:34 m1223961117: 01:13:134 (1) - move to white line
23:38 rfandomization: It is on white line?
23:38 rfandomization: I confused
23:39 m1223961117: 01:13:134 (1,2,3) - comine a slider?? If you confuse...
23:40 rfandomization: you want the three of them to be 1 slider?
23:40 m1223961117: yeah
23:40 rfandomization: ok
23:40 m1223961117: not bad
23:42 rfandomization: thanks
23:44 m1223961117: 01:15:791 (1,2,3) - try this→https://lh6.googleusercontent.com/-LSleQ3gY4P0/VKqxEE9zyLI/AAAAAAAAANg/1OX-076Ytvc/w520-h51-no/screenshot010.jpg
23:45 m1223961117: 01:19:220 (2,3) - combine a slider
23:45 m1223961117: 01:20:248 (5) - move to 01:20:420
23:46 m1223961117: 01:21:791 (3) - comfuse point
23:48 m1223961117: 01:26:077 (2) - I think this slider end 01:26:591 - better
23:48 m1223961117: and you can put object at 01:26:763 -
23:49 m1223961117: 01:30:020 - confuse point
23:50 m1223961117: 01:33:448 (3,4) - combine a slider
23:51 m1223961117: 01:35:505 - large confuse point
23:51 m1223961117: 01:38:077 (3) - change a circle+1/1 slider??
23:51 m1223961117: 01:38:934 (4) - -1 arrow
23:52 m1223961117: del 01:39:791 (1) - and put a 1/1 slider start 01:39:448
23:53 m1223961117: 01:39:448 -
23:55 m1223961117: 01:44:591 (5) - -1 arrow
23:56 m1223961117: 01:49:391 (2) - del this and move spinner to 01:49:219 -
23:56 rfandomization: two arrows there for consistency
23:56 rfandomization: beginners will be confuse? i think
23:56 m1223961117: where??
23:56 rfandomization: fixed everything else
23:56 rfandomization: at 1:44:591
23:56 rfandomization: 01:44:591 (5) -
23:57 rfandomization: fixed spinner
23:57 m1223961117: 01:45:105 - I think here empty better
23:58 m1223961117: or del all 01:43:905 (4,5,6) - and add breaktime
23:59 m1223961117: you choose
00:02 rfandomization: so delete the "5" slider?
00:02 rfandomization: i deleted that
00:03 rfandomization: and extended "4" 1 tick
00:03 m1223961117: where you work??
00:04 rfandomization: 01:43:905 (4) -
00:04 rfandomization: made this 3 repeats
00:04 rfandomization: and deleted next slider completely
00:04 m1223961117: Fine
00:05 m1223961117: don't forget to check difficulty... If it still too high, bad idea is reduce Distance Snap Space to 0.8
00:05 rfandomization: :c you sound mad
00:05 rfandomization: dificulty is 1.96
00:05 rfandomization: i think it's ok
00:05 m1223961117: OK
00:05 m1223961117: good job
00:05 rfandomization: XD thanks very much
00:06 m1223961117: ^^
00:06 rfandomization: good luck with your map! (not that you need it :/)

Good luck :)
Topic Starter
Arf
Thanks again very much for your help m117! Very happy with the changes.
Fryz3
Hi! sorry for the late mod.
modder came from: t/267877&start=0

General
  1. i think it's a pretty good map, the flow seems a bit weird, but there are a lot of gaps
    between notes, so that makes it up for it.
  2. more importantly, i haven't seen any hitsounds or heard any.
    I'm assuming you're still working on that, because there are some places you can add those.
    i think i gave an example of were you could put them.
Normal
  1. 00:24:364 (2) - you can add another repeat in this so it will end on: 00:25:050
  2. add note at: 00:59:849 (4) -
  3. these slider should all begin on the previous white tickle instead of the red one,
    and then let the slider repeat itself one more time:
    00:27:792 (6) - , 00:33:278 (4) - , 00:38:764 (7) -
    it has a lot of music theory behind it,
    so if you want to read it i'll give you a link to it:https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewtopic.php?f=56&t=58959
    else you have to trust me on this :p. i personnaly think it sounds a lot better this way.
  4. 01:11:677 (2) - you might want to add a note here for the same reason.
    if you want to prevent overmapping, i made an example of what you 'could' do:
  5. 01:42:534 (1,2,3) - give these hitsounds as well, 'clap' hitsounds, just like the previous ones.
Hard
  1. 00:24:878 (4,5) - blanket can be better.
  2. 01:34:134 (7,8) - ^
  3. 00:27:964 (5,6,7) - triangle can be better.
  4. 01:04:820 (1) - from this point till 01:12:363 (8) - , it is a bit of overmapping. maybe it isn't,
    but comparing with the rest of the map, it is a bit 'busy' here. maybe you can remove 1 or 2 notes to make
    the pace not suddenly change by a lot.
Gl with it!
samifox
really enjoyed the mod looking forwards to the final revision ^_^
thank you for sharing it :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :D
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