1. Hanjamon's Futsuu (2.22 stars, 179 notes)
2. Kantan (1.2 stars, 100 notes)
3. Muzukashii (2.56 stars, 270 notes)
4. Nardo's Oni (3.53 stars, 428 notes)
5. Oni (3.12 stars, 403 notes)

- Love1yV1ruS - wrote:

From in-game PM

General: the TAG 'non non biyori' will be devided by 3 parts. How about just: 'nonnonbiyori'? Then it won't be devided. non non biyori=other ranked map.so keep
Romanized title: Nanairo Biyori(TV Ver.) need a space before the '(' okay.add space.
And you may use 'TV Size' instead of 'TV Ver.'? keep

Kantan

00:34:732 (39) - k? fixed
00:36:524 (42) - how about 00:36:972 fixed
00:37:419 (43) - finish keep
00:48:166 (56) - finish fixed
00:53:091 - d and 00:54:210 - d fixed
00:55:330 (65) - finish fixed
00:56:001 - d fixed
00:57:121 (68) - finish fixed
00:57:792 - k fixed
01:00:703 (71) - finish fixed

guest futsuu

00:21:300 (27,28) - move to 00:21:076
and 00:22:195 (30) - move to 00:21:972
and add k at 00:22:643
00:24:882 (37,38) - move to 00:24:658 and change 38 to k
00:25:778 (40) - move to 00:25:554
00:26:225 - k
00:26:673 - 00:31:598 original version: 'd kdd k ddk d k ddk d '
recommend version: 'dkd dk d dk d k d kd dk'
00:35:852 (65) - move to 00:36:300
00:36:524 (67) - delete and add k at 00:36:972
00:37:419 - 00:40:554 original version: 'd kkd k ddk d'
recommend version: 'd kd k kd dk k'
00:43:240 (83) - move to 00:43:464
.... and recommend kiai time: start from 01:02:494.
'D kkd k ddkd dk d kdd k dkkd dk d kd kkdd kd k ddk d kk k d k K dk dkk dkd dk d kkd kd dkd k.....'
just take the part (or the way) you want to change.

Muzukashii

00:13:016 (4,5) - ctrl + g fixed
00:22:867 (40) - delete? I think the simple 'dk' is very good here. And change ddd k to d ddk? fixed
00:26:225 (54) - k and move00:26:449 (55) - to 00:27:345 and change it to d fixed
00:30:479 (73) - k keep
00:33:389 (86) - k fixed
00:37:195 (101) - delete fixed
and i love those 1/3

oni

00:33:389 (104) - k keep
00:34:509 (109) - k fixed
01:04:733 (78,79,80,81,82) - how about kd kddk? keep
01:05:292 (81,82) - delete keep
01:19:620 (150,151) - delete keep

guest oni

00:19:173 (67) - may delete
00:26:449 (106,107) - delete to shorten the stream.
00:37:195 (165,166) - ^

Enjoy

- Love1yV1ruS - wrote:

From in-game PM

General: the TAG 'non non biyori' will be devided by 3 parts. How about just: 'nonnonbiyori'? Then it won't be devided.
Romanized title: Nanairo Biyori(TV Ver.) need a space before the '('
And you may use 'TV Size' instead of 'TV Ver.'?

guest oni

00:19:173 (67) - may delete I followed the snare sound there.
00:26:449 (106,107) - delete to shorten the stream. Retained for mapping the vocal.
00:37:195 (165,166) - ^ ^

Enjoy

Sayaka- wrote:

Hi! Here is the Taiko mod you requested via in-game PM!

[Kantan]

1. 00:23:539 (23) - delete? to be consistent with the previous pattern fixed
2. 00:28:912 - add a note here? for rhythm consistency fixed
3. 00:43:240 - ^ fixed
4. 00:57:121 (67) - remove finisher here? I don't think it's needed fixed
5. 00:58:912 (69) - change to d? to vary a bit fixed
6. 00:59:807 (70) - move to 00:59:583 - ? it sounds weird as it is now fixed.but...hard=V=?
7. 01:11:449 (86) - k? sounds better imo fixed
8. 01:23:539 (105) - delete? I don't think it's really needed fixed
9. 01:27:121 (110) - move to 01:26:897 - ? sounds better like this imo keep

[Hanjamon's Futsuu]

The diff overall sounds good, but I think you should try to remove some 1/2s? (yes I'm lazy to do a full mod on this diff)

[Muzukashii]

1. 00:07:979 (6) - move to 00:07:755 - ? the drum sound is here fixed
2. 00:11:561 (6) - move to 00:11:337 - ? same reason as above fixed
3. 00:14:919 - add a d here? fixed
4. 00:15:927 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25) - this stream is a bit long, cut it at 00:17:494 (15) - ? fixed
5. 00:18:949 (24) - ddk is a bit hard imo, delete? fixed
6. 00:23:203 (41) - ^
7. 00:23:315 (42) - change to d? for consistency fixed
8. 00:28:016 (59,60,61,62,63,64,65,66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73) - this is a bit long, cut this somewhere (I can't give you any suggestions for this, sorry ) keep
9. 00:37:531 (101) - delete? ddk is a bit hard imo keep
10. 00:43:464 (124) - delete? to cut the stream fixed
11. 00:51:748 (18,19,20,21,22) - change to this? fixed
12. 00:57:121 (36) - remove finisher? I don't think it's needed fixed
13. 01:13:912 (97) - delete? to cut the stream keep

[Oni]

1. 00:26:225 (63,64) - Ctrl+G? fixed

[Nardo's Oni]

Looks clean to me, have a star!

That's all, good luck for rank!

- Love1yV1ruS - wrote:

From in-game PM

General: the TAG 'non non biyori' will be devided by 3 parts. How about just: 'nonnonbiyori'? Then it won't be devided.
Romanized title: Nanairo Biyori(TV Ver.) need a space before the '('
And you may use 'TV Size' instead of 'TV Ver.'?

guest futsuu

00:21:300 (27,28) - move to 00:21:076
and 00:22:195 (30) - move to 00:21:972
and add k at 00:22:643
00:24:882 (37,38) - move to 00:24:658 and change 38 to k
00:25:778 (40) - move to 00:25:554
00:26:225 - k
00:26:673 - 00:31:598 original version: 'd kdd k ddk d k ddk d '
recommend version: 'dkd dk d dk d k d kd dk'
00:35:852 (65) - move to 00:36:300
00:36:524 (67) - delete and add k at 00:36:972
00:37:419 - 00:40:554 original version: 'd kkd k ddk d'
recommend version: 'd kd k kd dk k'
00:43:240 (83) - move to 00:43:464
.... and recommend kiai time: start from 01:02:494.
'D kkd k ddkd dk d kdd k dkkd dk d kd kkdd kd k ddk d kk k d k K dk dkk dkd dk d kkd kd dkd k.....'
just take the part (or the way) you want to change.

Enjoy

Sorry but no changes, all of these suggestions broke the consistency of the diff (and yes, i checked all), about the last part i tried to make changes but is too hard if i change the actual patterns :c

Sayaka- wrote:

Hi! Here is the Taiko mod you requested via in-game PM!

[Hanjamon's Futsuu]

The diff overall sounds good, but I think you should try to remove some 1/2s? (yes I'm lazy to do a full mod on this diff) nah, i think is okay, if someone more suggest i'll do

That's all, good luck for rank!

Sayaka- wrote:

Hi! Here is the Taiko mod you requested via in-game PM!

[Nardo's Oni]

Looks clean to me, have a star!

That's all, good luck for rank!

NeviltiS wrote:

Hi~

[Nardo's Oni]
01:11:673 (336) - delete? (breaktime, same as 01:09:210 (325,326,327) pattern) Retained for a better impact. If this is implemented, the length of the 1/2 + 1/4 stream would be the same as 01:02:942 and 01:06:524 -

good luck!

1. Seems fine

1. 00:20:181 k would emphasize better the following d
2. 00:27:345 ^

1. Fine too

1. 00:15:479 k for consistency ( 00:06:524 - 00:08:315 - 00:10:106 - 00:11:897 - 00:13:688 - all k )

1. 00:26:449 and 00:26:561 remove for break , or remove 00:26:785 only

NeviltiS wrote:

Hi~

[Kantan, Hanjamon's Futsuu]
good!

[Muzukashii]
00:37:419 (99,101) - Ctrl+G, and 00:37:531 (100) - move to 00:37:755? fixed
00:39:546 - add d, and 00:39:658 (110,111) - Ctrl+G? (Because most of other 1/4 pattern is ddd) fixed
00:54:882 (28,29) - Ctrl+G? fixed
01:00:255 (46,47) - ^ fixed

[Oni]
00:15:367 (9) - add d? keep

[Nardo's Oni]
01:11:673 (336) - delete? (breaktime, same as 01:09:210 (325,326,327) pattern)

good luck!

mliencheng wrote:

mod from mod queue request

a short mod ;w;


[ Kantan]

1. Seems fine

[ Hanjamon's Futsuu]

1. 00:20:181 k would emphasize better the following d
2. 00:27:345 ^

[ Muzukashii]

1. Fine too

[ Oni]

1. 00:15:479 k for consistency ( 00:06:524 - 00:08:315 - 00:10:106 - 00:11:897 - 00:13:688 - all k ) fixed

[ Nardo's Oni]

1. 00:26:449 and 00:26:561 remove for break , or remove 00:26:785 only

mliencheng wrote:

mod from mod queue request

a short mod ;w;

[ Nardo's Oni]

1. 00:26:449 and 00:26:561 remove for break , or remove 00:26:785 only Remain unchanged to map the vocal there.

Julie wrote:

My noob mod

General
Woahh nice mapset + GDer and GDer map!

Nardo's Oni
00:24:098 - add d, because hear drum noise + for voice too Retained so that the pattern constellation would be similar to 00:20:516 - which is more intuitive to play.
00:41:785 (195) - k like you did here 00:38:203 ddk here could emphasize the relatively high-pitched vocal more comparing 00:40:778 (189,190,191,194,195,196,199,200,201) -
00:42:569 (199,200,201) - ddk? owo dkd could fit the vocal and guitar in a way better.
01:20:628 - you usually add note when there is sound and voice, and there is one without note here xD I prefer keeping a break here since the vocal is just the stretch of "i" sound which is not prominent. The case is similar to 01:06:300 -

GL Charlotte! We need moar nyan pasu~! <3

Julie wrote:

My noob mod

General
Woahh nice mapset + GDer and GDer map!

Kantan
00:16:822 (14) - d, keep it consistent with the beginning, should be the same :3 fixed
00:44:583 (54) - replace slider for maybe this : http://puu.sh/dFWBP.jpg ? 13 notes slider, would be easy without , just a suggestion haha xD fixed
01:01:598 (74) - hmm delete? no really important sound except if you really want for voice keep
01:05:181 (80) - d ? fixed
01:12:792 (90) - delete, to keep the rhythm consistent from 01:09:658 fixed

Hanjamon's Futsuu
00:37:867 (68,69,70) - maybe not a triple here? since your triple are mostly to match voice, and this one there no voice at 00:38:315 , so 00:38:315 (70) feel awkward to play xD, so maybe delete 00:38:091 (69) ?
00:57:792 (1) - delete? since didn't add anything here 00:56:001 , and to make it consistent
01:01:598 (2) - hmm delete? no really important sound except if you really want voice

Muzukashii
00:09:434 (4) - d since the kat sound here 00:09:546 , so feel weird playing it xD
00:18:278 (20) - delete no sound or move it here 00:18:501
00:32:158 (77) - delete no drum sound
00:35:964 (94) - delete no sound, and voice kinda cut before :3
00:40:778 (114,115) - hmm ctrl+g? feel like these 2 should be the same 00:40:554 (113,114)
00:43:240 (123) - d
00:44:583 (128) - feel like slider ruining the real drum sound for a muzukashii, since I don't hear stream drum here, will be nice matching drum for this part since taiko \o/!! okay.add notes
00:49:285 (10,11) - ctrl+g
00:50:292 (13) - k :3
00:53:875 (24) - k
01:03:166 (54,55,56) - ddd the kat drum noise could be here 01:03:501 , so ddd should be fine + is muzukashii pattern
01:09:210 (78,79,80,81,82,83) - how about this pattern for drum and voice http://puu.sh/dG3OT.jpg Good~.fixed
01:11:449 (86) - d
01:14:807 (102) - K feel like should be stronger
01:15:927 (104,105) - ctrl+g
01:20:181 (119) - k
01:23:986 (133,134) - hmm how about delete 134 and add finish to 133

Almost fixed

Oni
00:11:560 (7) - move it here 00:11:337 , feel kat drum
00:15:927 (10,11,12,13) - this part feel weird, since the red tick sound more important then the blue tick sound, so it should be map >,< okay.try other pattern
00:16:710 - good drum noise here
00:17:046 - ^
00:23:091 (48,49,50,51,52) - feel like this part doesn't match the drum sound >,< like 00:23:315 (50) should be same as 00:23:091 (48) and since voice start at 52 xD okay.change pattern
00:31:486 (92) - add d? I hear drum sound~
00:32:494 (99) - k
00:32:942 (102) - k
00:44:583 (164) - too easy on oni, how about this : http://puu.sh/dG52w.jpg , I just followed the drum sound, nothing special from me lol oh..Nice idea.fixed
00:47:046 + 00:47:158 (4,5) - ddk?
00:47:718 (7,8,9) - ddk or kkd, can hear some alternance
00:48:166 (10) - finish
00:54:434 (31) - delete no sound, feel awkward to play xD
01:14:807 (133) - K, same reason as muzukashii

Almost fixed

Nardo's Oni
00:24:098 - add d, because hear drum noise + for voice too
00:41:785 (195) - k like you did here 00:38:203
00:42:569 (199,200,201) - ddk? owo
01:20:628 - you usually add note when there is sound and voice, and there is one without note here xD

GL Charlotte! We need moar nyan pasu~! <3

mliencheng wrote:

mod from mod queue request

a short mod ;w;

[ Hanjamon's Futsuu]

1. 00:20:181 k would emphasize better the following d
2. 00:27:345 ^
   All changed~

Julie wrote:

My noob mod

General
Woahh nice mapset + GDer and GDer map!

Hanjamon's Futsuu
00:37:867 (68,69,70) - maybe not a triple here? since your triple are mostly to match voice, and this one there no voice at 00:38:315 , so 00:38:315 (70) feel awkward to play xD, so maybe delete 00:38:091 (69) ? done and changed a previous similar pattern too
00:57:792 (1) - delete? since didn't add anything here 00:56:001 , and to make it consistent consistency with 00:52:419 (98) -
01:01:598 (2) - hmm delete? no really important sound except if you really want voice moved to 01:02:046 -

GL Charlotte! We need moar nyan pasu~! <3

Neku okazaki wrote:

Hi o/, Mod request from my modding queue...

[Nardo's Oni]
Ok, this are going to be hard to mod, but... im going to try lol

00:26:673 (109,111) - Ctrl +G? Is better imo d k could maintain snare consistency there.
01:27:009 (425,426) - Ctrl + G to follow the voice It's a good idea, but dkddkkd could result in a better flow at the end of the song.

Good look, take my star

Neku okazaki wrote:

Hi o/, Mod request from my modding queue...

[Kantan]
00:33:389 (37) - Delete it and make 00:32:942 (36) - D to follow the sound fixed
01:15:031 (93) - Move to 01:14:583 - with it you are going to start this partern 01:15:479 (94,95,96,97) - when the vocal start fixed
01:25:778 (110,111,112) - Try something like this: Mouse at 01:26:449 -
fixed

[Futsuu]
OD: -1
00:18:613 (20) - Seguro que no prefieres agregar un K?, quedaría mejor siguiendo la intensidad del sonido
00:26:449 - Podrías agregar un k para empezar junto con la voz, igual podrías hacer eso y después hacer ctrl + g en 00:26:449 (39,40) -
00:37:195 - Lo mismo que lo anterior, pero aquí si queda mejor kd, pero es solo mi opinión....
00:49:957 - 00:51:300 - Se ve muy vació, podrías probar agregando un k aquí 00:50:404 -
01:04:733 (8) - Considera hacerlo d para que quede con el patrón anterior

[Muzukashii]
00:43:464 - Add k fixed
01:24:658 (268) - Make it k and delete this: 01:24:546 (267) - Is more playable keep
01:26:225 (274,275) - ctrl + g follow more the vocal fixed

[Oni]
00:20:404 (38) - k? to follow more the voice fixed
00:23:091 (49,50,51,52,53) - Try something like this: kkddk fixed
00:38:427 (131) - k is more playable fixed
01:19:621 (327) - Delete it _(:3JL keep
01:26:225 (359,360) - Ctrl + G to follow more the voice fixed

[Nardo's Oni]
Ok, this are going to be hard to mod, but... im going to try lol

00:26:673 (109,111) - Ctrl +G? Is better imo
01:27:009 (425,426) - Ctrl + G to follow the voice

Good look, take my star

Neku okazaki wrote:

Hi o/, Mod request from my modding queue...

[Futsuu]
OD: -1 nope, me gusta conservar OD 4 en la Futsuu
00:18:613 (20) - Seguro que no prefieres agregar un K?, quedaría mejor siguiendo la intensidad del sonido pensaba no añadirlo ya que puede ser algo dificil, pero bueno, añadido
00:26:449 - Podrías agregar un k para empezar junto con la voz, igual podrías hacer eso y después hacer ctrl + g en 00:26:449 (39,40) - se que queda bien, de hecho lo habria hecho si no fuera por quise hacer un break
00:37:195 - Lo mismo que lo anterior, pero aquí si queda mejor kd, pero es solo mi opinión.... ^
00:49:957 - 00:51:300 - Se ve muy vació, podrías probar agregando un k aquí 00:50:404 - breaks xD
01:04:733 (8) - Considera hacerlo d para que quede con el patrón anterior es solo el principio del kiai, quiero intentar evitar subir mas la dificultad

Good look, take my star

1. Nothing

1. 01:20:404 (102,103) - How about swap these for consistency?

1. 00:15:927 (16) - k instead of d?
2. 00:46:375 (88) - I think it would be not bad to change to match the melody. How about change to this?

1. 00:18:166 (19) - k? It would be sounds better imo.
   00:46:375 (133) - How about remove this to follow melody?
   00:47:046 - Add d? It sounds empty.
   00:47:270 (136,137,138) - Try to ddd k. It would be better imo.
   00:54:434 (158) - It is a little weird. Remove this.
   00:59:919 (177) - Certainly, hear the drum sound at this point. but It would be better to move to 01:00:031 for consistency imo.

Underflow wrote:

via in-game pm

[General]

1. Nothing

[Kantan]

1. 01:20:404 (102,103) - How about swap these for consistency? fixed

[Hanjamon's Futsuu]

1. 00:15:927 (16) - k instead of d?
2. 00:46:375 (88) - I think it would be not bad to change to match the melody. How about change to this?

[Muzukashii]

1. 00:18:166 (19) - k? It would be sounds better imo. fixed
   00:46:375 (133) - How about remove this to follow melody? fixed
   00:47:046 - Add d? It sounds empty. fixed
   00:47:270 (136,137,138) - Try to ddd k. It would be better imo. fixed
   00:54:434 (158) - It is a little weird. Remove this. keep
   00:59:919 (177) - Certainly, hear the drum sound at this point. but It would be better to move to 01:00:031 for consistency imo. I try 01:00:028 - add d.

あまり役に立たなくてすみません…

Underflow wrote:

via in-game pm

[General]

1. Nothing

[Hanjamon's Futsuu]

1. 00:15:927 (16) - k instead of d? sounds fine with d
2. 00:46:375 (88) - I think it would be not bad to change to match the melody. How about change to this? this sounds weird for me and breaks my consistency..

あまり役に立たなくてすみません…

rew0825 wrote:

Hi from my mod request

[ Nardo's Oni]

1. 00:19:173 (67,68) - ctrl+g I followed the snare sound there.

Good luck

rew0825 wrote:

Hi from my mod request

[ Kantan]

1. 00:28:464 (29) - k keep
2. 01:10:554 (88,89) - ctrl+g keep
3. 01:13:240 (91) - k fixed

[ Hanjamon's Futsuu]

1. 00:14:136 (13,14) - ctrl+g
2. 01:09:210 (18) - k
3. 01:10:554 (21) - d
4. 01:11:225 (23) - k
5. 01:16:822 (35) - D and 01:17:270 (36) - k

[ Muzukashii]

1. 00:24:658 (46,47) - ctrl+g fixed
2. 00:29:583 (66) - Delete for some break That's right...but,now keep
3. 00:30:703 (71,72) - ctrl+g keep
4. 00:47:718 (137) - k keep

[ Oni]

1. 00:13:016 (5) - d and 00:13:241 (6,7,8,9,10) - change to kdddk or kkddk change d=keep,change to kkddk is good.
2. 00:16:039 (11) - move to 00:16:151 and 00:16:710 (15) - k keep
3. 00:30:703 (89,91) - k keep

[ Nardo's Oni]

1. 00:19:173 (67,68) - ctrl+g

Good luck

H i M E wrote:

Hi~mod req by forums pm :3

kantan

good~

Hanjamon's Futsuu

00:23:763 - add d?
00:30:479 (50) - move 00:30:031 - ?
00:38:091 - add d?
01:10:554 (21) - move 01:10:330 - ?
01:15:927 - add d?

Muzukashii

00:30:703 (72) - k? fixed
00:38:539 (102) - ^ keep
00:47:046 (135) - remove? keep

Oni

00:11:337 (6) - move 00:11:561 - ? keep
00:13:241 (6) - d? fixed
00:17:718 (22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32) - I think this is more suitable fixed
00:30:703 (91) - k? fixed

Nardo's Oni

not bad :3

Good Luck :3

rew0825 wrote:

Hi from my mod request

[ Hanjamon's Futsuu]

1. 00:14:136 (13,14) - ctrl+g changed
2. 01:09:210 (18) - k changed
3. 01:10:554 (21) - d no change here, maybe a bit hard k d k d kd
4. 01:11:225 (23) - k nah, is okay for me and fits well with kd too
5. 01:16:822 (35) - D and 01:17:270 (36) - k sounds good with the actual pattern

Good luck

H i M E wrote:

Hi~mod req by forums pm :3

Hanjamon's Futsuu

00:23:763 - add d? no, i want more easier this
00:30:479 (50) - move 00:30:031 - ? is okay with the actual pattern
00:38:091 - add d? same as before, more easier
01:10:554 (21) - move 01:10:330 - ? breaks my consistency.. also, too many doublets
01:15:927 - add d? break

Good Luck :3 No changes here, sorry :c

Icing_wind wrote:

Mod

[General]

D (Big don)
d (don)
K (Big kat)
k (kat)

[Hanjamon's Futsuu]

00:12:345 (11) - d nop, rhythm change

00:15:031 (15) - d ^

00:16:822 (17) - k changed, fits good with the next pattern

01:14:583 (1,1) - kd is okay for me with kk, and more easier

good luck

Icing_wind wrote:

Mod

[General]

D (Big don)
d (don)
K (Big kat)
k (kat)

[Kantan]

00:22:195 (21) - d keep

00:33:837 (37) - K keep

00:42:792 (50,51,52) - k keep

01:01:598 (75) - k fixed

01:24:882 (108) - k keep

[Hanjamon's Futsuu]

00:12:345 (11) - d

00:15:031 (15) - d

00:16:822 (17) - k

01:14:583 (1,1) - kd

[Muzukashii]

00:23:763 (43) - d fixed

00:24:434 (45,46,47,1,2,3) - kddkkd changed kdkkdd

00:47:494 (90) - k fixed

[Oni]

00:29:360 (81,82,83,84,85) - dkddk changed dkkdd

01:17:494 (313,314,315,316,317) - ddkdk keep

[Nardo's Oni]
nardo姐姐=w= gonbare

00:25:554 (101,109) - → https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2394352
棒棒棒。nardo姐求个mu

good luck

Icing_wind wrote:

Mod

[General]

D (Big don)
d (don)
K (Big kat)
k (kat)

[Nardo's Oni]
nardo姐姐=w= gonbare

00:25:554 (101,109) - → https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2394352 The current pattern could follow both the snare at 00:26:225 (106) - and the constant vocal pitch at 00:26:449 (107,108,109) - nicely imo.
棒棒棒。nardo姐求个mu 可以啊~

good luck

neonat wrote:

From PM, some feedback~

Kantan

00:26:673 (27,28) - 00:26:673 (27) is the lowest point in pitch here and 00:27:569 (28) the highest in the vocals, I think it should be d k instead of k d　fixed
01:14:583 (93) - you used some 1/2 or 1.5 beats before here, I think it will still be simple enough. I don't think this note fits well to the music, it feels out of place, this note would be better if shifted to 01:14:807 with the cymbals there in the music, this current note is just being too awkward right nowfixed
01:23:986 (107) - finish? fixed

Hanjamon's Futsuu

00:50:628 - really empty, should have d here
00:56:001 - ^
01:02:046 (2) - I feel you should remove this one, with a longer break/pause, there is more anticipation for the big note at 01:02:494 (3) - allowing it to have a greater effect, and in turn allowing for a grander entrance into the chorus
01:06:076 (11,12,13,14,15) - instead of d k d kk, I think k d k dk would be nicely fitting
01:23:986 (50) - finish for being the first note in the last phrase in the song

Muzukashii

00:26:897 (54) - change to d fixed
00:45:031 (128) - maybe change to k, goes along with the guitar fixed

Oni

00:42:792 (153,154,155,156,157) - kdkkd instead of kddkk, then change 00:43:464 (158) to k fixed
01:06:748 (265) - change to k fixed
01:06:972 (266) - change to d, because the vocal pitch here slurs a bit, it goes up and then down again fixed
01:10:106 (282) - change to k fixed

Nardo's Oni

00:30:031 (128,129,130) - dkd instead of ddd, then 00:30:479 (131,132) - k d instead of d k, it's a more fitting rhythm imo


Good Luck

neonat wrote:

From PM, some feedback~

Nardo's Oni

00:30:031 (128,129,130) - dkd instead of ddd, then 00:30:479 (131,132) - k d instead of d k, it's a more fitting rhythm imo ddd would be better since the vocal pitch is constant. Also, d k at 00:30:479 (131,132) - could fit the snare there.

Good Luck

peggaso wrote:

Hi, mod request via mp

[Nardo's oni]
Looks good Nice to hear that~

peggaso wrote:

Hi, mod request via mp

[Kantan]
00:54:210 (66) - Move to 00:53:986 - to make it more playable keep
00:54:882 - Add k to map this part hmm...keep now
01:23:986 (108) - Make it k keep

[Futsuu]
Lo veo bien

[Muzukashii]
00:19:509 (25) - Not necessary keep
00:23:203 (40) - ^ ^
00:23:986 (43) - Change to k fixed

[Oni]
00:07:979 (7) - k keep

[Nardo's oni]
Looks good

mrdumpling64 wrote:

Hi from mod queue

Kantan

00:21:300 (20) - d? fixed
00:28:464 (29,30,31) - ctrl+g? changed ddk
01:16:822 (97) - K? for pitch keep
01:18:613 (99) - k? same reason fixed

Hanjamon's Futsuu

00:14:583 (14) - k? it matches guitar better.
00:32:942 (55) - why is a finisher here? I don't see any need for it.
01:23:763 (50) - add d?
01:23:986 (51) - k or K?

Muzukashi

00:55:330 (162) - why do you put finisher here? suggest remove. fixed
01:05:404 (196) - d? fixed
01:14:248 (232) - suggest move to 01:14:024 (231) - because it plays better there. keep

Oni

00:13:241 (6,7,8,9,10) - How about http://puu.sh/dMfAE/9b7a9bda51.jpg? keep
00:21:412 (41) - k? for vocal fixed
00:35:964 (118) - delete? fixed
00:36:300 (119) - k? for vocal keep
00:37:419 (123,124,125,126,127) - ddddk? keep

Nardo's Oni

nothing really to point out.

Good map and song :3

Good luck.

neonat wrote:

From PM, some feedback~


Hanjamon's Futsuu

00:50:628 - really empty, should have d here the diff need breaks :c
00:56:001 - ^ ^
01:02:046 (2) - I feel you should remove this one, with a longer break/pause, there is more anticipation for the big note at 01:02:494 (3) - allowing it to have a greater effect, and in turn allowing for a grander entrance into the chorus i'll think about this, is not a bad idea
01:06:076 (11,12,13,14,15) - instead of d k d kk, I think k d k dk would be nicely fitting i don't want to break the consistency >.<
01:23:986 (50) - finish for being the first note in the last phrase in the song done, sounds good :3


Good Luck

mrdumpling64 wrote:

Hi from mod queue

Hanjamon's Futsuu

00:14:583 (14) - k? it matches guitar better. is okay with the actual pattern, no change for now
00:32:942 (55) - why is a finisher here? I don't see any need for it. listen carefully
01:23:763 (50) - add d? sounds weird...
01:23:986 (51) - k or K? is D now

Good map and song :3

Good luck.

Lunaris Filia wrote:

Hi~
From PM

Kantan

01:14:807 (93) - k? change to K
01:15:479 (94,95,96) - d k k keep

Hanjamon's Futsuu

Fine

Muzukashii

00:47:270 (136,137,138) - k d k change to k d d
01:05:852 (198) - k? fixed
01:15:479 (235,236,237) - d k k keep
01:16:822 (238) - K? fixed
01:26:225 (275,276,277,278) - d d k k keep

Oni

00:33:501にkを追加すると、いかがでしょうか keep
01:08:763と01:10:554にdkdがあればいいと思います.けどプレイヤーに休む時間がないですね..... keep
01:15:479 (308,309,310) - d k k keep
01:26:225 (359,360,361,362) - d d k k keep

Nardo's Oni

01:06:076 (307) - how about moving to 01:06:300?
01:20:404 (387) - ^

ランクさせることができるように頑張ってね! ありがとう=3=/

mrdumpling64 wrote:

Hi from mod queue

Nardo's Oni

nothing really to point out.

Good map and song :3

Good luck.

Lunaris Filia wrote:

Hi~
From PM

Nardo's Oni

01:06:076 (307) - how about moving to 01:06:300? I followed the drum kick there.
01:20:404 (387) - ^ ^

ランクさせることができるように頑張ってね!

ts8zs wrote:

[Nardo's Oni]
00:19:061 (66,67,68) - kkk 00:19:285 (68) - does not have the snare sound that 00:19:061 (66,67) - possess.
00:51:524 (245,246,247) - dkd fixed
01:05:516 (304) - move to 01:05:069 - I prefer keeping the current pattern since it does not sound bad.
01:23:427 - del I think a 7-plet could result in a better impact in the 2nd part of the kiai.
01:23:539 (406,407,408) - k k D k d K would be better since the vocal at 01:23:986 (408) - is really high-pitched.

ts8zs wrote:

[Nardo's Oni]
00:19:061 (66,67,68) - kkk
00:51:524 (245,246,247) - dkd
01:05:516 (304) - move to 01:05:069 -
01:23:427 - del
01:23:539 (406,407,408) - k k D
[Oni]
00:05:852 (5) - del or del 6 keep
00:09:434 (5) - del or del 6 ^
00:13:576 (9) - move to 00:13:128 - fixed
00:28:128 - d fixed
00:42:904 (153) - del fixed
00:45:815 (171) - del keep
[Muzu]
01:25:106 (271) - del hmmm...keep now
[Hanjamon's Futsuu]
01:07:419 (14,15,16,17) - kd kk
[Kantan]
00:33:837 - copy 00:19:509 - fixed
01:27:345 (1) - start at 01:27:121 - hmmm...keep now

eeezzzeee wrote:

Hi, from pm mod request!

[Kantan]
00:38:315 (43,44,45,46,47,48) - change (43) and (46) to k fixed
- i think this sounds more interesting

[Hanjamon's Futsuu]
00:50:628 - add a d here
00:56:001 - add a d here
- did you leave these out on purpose?
01:16:822 (35) - change to big D
- every other line in the kiai stars with a d
- maybe also change the next note to k to take same pattern as 01:02:494 (3,4,5) -

[Muzukashii]
00:12:569 (2,3) - ctrl + g fixed
- i feel like there needs to be a k on 00:12:792
00:31:822 (75) - delete 76　delete
00:32:718 (78,79,80) - change to kkk fixed
- i think this needs a k sound at 00:32:942
01:05:404 (195) - delete fixed
01:19:733 (249) - delete fixed

[Oni]
Good! Nothing

[Nardo's Oni]
00:32:830 - 00:47:942 - i think there should be some breaks here see below

SPOILER

- you can try to fix the rest of it to be like 00:22:643 (87,88) -
00:26:449 (107,108) - delete
00:37:195 (168,169) - delete
00:40:778 (189,190) - delete

That's all! Sorry for being a little late, and good luck!

eeezzzeee wrote:

Hi, from pm mod request!

[Nardo's Oni]
00:32:830 - 00:47:942 - i think there should be some breaks here see below

SPOILER

- you can try to fix the rest of it to be like 00:22:643 (87,88) -
00:26:449 (107,108) - delete I followed the vocal there.
00:37:195 (168,169) - delete ^
00:40:778 (189,190) - delete ^

That's all! Sorry for being a little late, and good luck!

Ilikecheese wrote:

All this is personal taste and suggestions, pick what you like and tell me otherwise. good mapset

Nardo's Oni

00:46:598 (224) - finisher? Remain unchanged since the cymbal here is weaker than 00:48:166 -

umm..... yea good map, lol

ts8zs wrote:

[Hanjamon's Futsuu]
01:07:419 (14,15,16,17) - kd kk changed :3

eeezzzeee wrote:

Hi, from pm mod request!

[Hanjamon's Futsuu]
00:50:628 - add a d here break..
00:56:001 - add a d here ^
- did you leave these out on purpose?
01:16:822 (35) - change to big D fits good with K
- every other line in the kiai stars with a d
- maybe also change the next note to k to take same pattern as 01:02:494 (3,4,5) - is actually fine..

That's all! Sorry for being a little late, and good luck!

Aldwych wrote:

nyan!
From sandwych's moddin queue, M4M as requested :

[Nardo's Oni]

Interesting the fact you didn't have the same style of map for this map. In fact I still followed the vocal mostly, but this time I maintained a stricter snare consistency here.

00:23:091 : After this you didn't use any breaks (so ye we have 3/4 yeye...), maybe delet some in order to have short breaks? I have considered this before. I didn't place breaks at places like 00:37:195 - because of the presence of vocal.

Also i didn't find something wrong, i really enjoyed the 3/4 spacing on the first part.

Gl hf for rank!

game rock wrote:

Hi From Game's Queue

d
k
D (Big d)
K (Big k)

[Nardo's Oni]

00:31:934 - Change to k? I think it's better, rhythm ago As the guitar there has a constant pitch, it'd be better to use ddd.


I hope what my mod has helped you , good luck

1. MP3 Title “Nanairo Biyori (TV Size)”, beatmap title “Nanairo Biyori (TV Ver.)”. After searching on Goog*e, and checking the Ranked beatmap.. “TV Ver.” Is correct
2. I don’t know but.. I think you should remove “Biyori” from the tags, because it’s already on the title imo

• look good

Aldwych wrote:

nyan!
From sandwych's moddin queue, M4M as requested :

[Hankamon's Futsuu]

00:48:501 : Here i've some trouble, because your next d, is really weir alone, adding a k here will make this next d more reason to exist, but i'm also aware that it's 3/4 distance which is unappropriate on a futsuu diff, or maybe delete this d because after it's really void in terms of objects (meaning 00:50:181). no change here, i never add notes in 1/4 beat in a Futsuu
00:49:285 : But here i found it nice to add a d, it makes more sense for the next k to be here + further you did the same (meaning dk combo). consistency with 00:49:509 -
00:56:001 : Add a d in order to follow the guittar and the previous patterns? break :c
00:56:449 : Also add a d like previous pattern? Plus battery and vocals are here. ^
00:58:912 : Interesting you're the only one to use a slider here. Yeah, i think fits good with the vocals (and remember me to the TnT authentic charts)
01:15:927 : The void here is really ugly, there's missing a k here. this will make the Futsuu more harder due to long pattern
01:17:718 : I would move it to 01:17:494, you will follow your main pattern (meaning dd, kd, kk etc...) on the kiai part, also you create the same distane between the 3 similar patterns after, and you follow lyrics. consistency
01:21:300 : Same, 1/2 before. ^

Imo a really dislike the part at 00:48:166 because the 3/2 distance is strange to follow moreover when there's battery, vocals and guitar which are both expressive, so imo i consider this part as hard to map for a futsuu, maybe more mods here could be interesting, but i really like your doublets on the kiai. I don't see this part bad, is a calm part so i tried to have less notes here and more breaks

Gl hf for rank!

game rock wrote:

Hi From Game's Queue

d
k
D (Big d)
K (Big k)

[Hanjamon's Futsuu]

00:50:628 - Agregar una d, es más conveniente. No, hay un break..
00:56:001 - Al igual que antes, agregar una d. ^
01:15:255 - Agrega una d, para hacer un kk dk por el momento lo dejare asi, no quiero aumentar la dificultad


I hope what my mod has helped you , good luck

Kazamastar11 wrote:

Special request via PM ^^

[Hanjamon’s Futsuu]
00:13:240 (12) – d
00:14:136 (13) - ^
00:14:583 (14) – k
00:15:031 (15) – d
00:15:927 (16) – k
00:15:927 (16) – d
00:33:389 (56) - ^
01:07:643 (15) - ^
01:18:389 (39) - ^

I was checking all suggestions, i don't see any reason for accept one of these

Sorry for this short mod..
GL then~

azintairin710 wrote:

From my mod Q

[Hanja's Futsuu]
00:22:643 - add k break
00:26:225 - ^ ^
00:31:598 - ^ ^ xD
2nd part mod is the same as above
00:57:792 (1,1) - i don't mind it owo)/
01:08:315 (16,17) - ctrl+g i'm following vocals and at the same time the instrumental
01:14:807 (32) - K no, can be hard for a Futsuu
01:27:121 (1) - i don't mind it okay... wut

i can't mod Oni tho.. ._. sorry

Ilikecheese wrote:

All this is personal taste and suggestions, pick what you like and tell me otherwise. good mapset

Muzukashii

I was thinking around here 00:28:016 - you can do keep
00:48:501 (138) - k fixed

Not much else to say. I was kinda surprised that you used more ddd than kkk but it's all good~

Oni

00:46:598 (175) - K finisher?
00:47:718 (181,182,183) - kkk
00:48:501 (185) - k
00:49:285 (187,188) - ctrl+g
00:49:957 (189,190) - ^
01:08:875 - add k
01:08:986 - add d
01:09:210 - chanage to k
01:10:666 - add k
01:10:778 - add d
01:15:255 - could've done so much more here like >

Almost fixed

now I think i'll leave since most of this will probably not be to your liking D:



Nardo's Oni

00:46:598 (224) - finisher?

umm..... yea good map, lol

Aldwych wrote:

nyan!
From sandwych's moddin queue, M4M as requested :

[General]

A bit same thing as my previous mod, difference between kantan -> futsuu and futsuu -> Muzukashii is a bit far.
K -> F : 60 objects , 0,5 stars
F -> M : 140 objets, 0,6 stars.

At least the star rating is quite close, so adding objects is not necessary, but just consider this could be good.

Also i didn't checked all the diff, but for the first part, you should increase the volume to 90% dons and kats are really shy. :<

[Kantan]

00:18:613 : Where's the finish? :'(
00:31:151 : The doublet before is kinda weird, maybe add d here in order to delete the void and the doublet created?
00:52:195 : You should delete this one, since the previous and next pattern are dk.
01:00:255 : I agree for this doublets, but with the previouses patterns, you sue 3/2 Distance, and here 1/1 which is confusing for beginers, so i advise you to delete this note.

All fixed

[Hankamon's Futsuu]

00:48:501 : Here i've some trouble, because your next d, is really weir alone, adding a k here will make this next d more reason to exist, but i'm also aware that it's 3/4 distance which is unappropriate on a futsuu diff, or maybe delete this d because after it's really void in terms of objects (meaning 00:50:181).
00:49:285 : But here i found it nice to add a d, it makes more sense for the next k to be here + further you did the same (meaning dk combo).
00:56:001 : Add a d in order to follow the guittar and the previous patterns?
00:56:449 : Also add a d like previous pattern? Plus battery and vocals are here.
00:58:912 : Interesting you're the only one to use a slider here.
01:15:927 : The void here is really ugly, there's missing a k here.
01:17:718 : I would move it to 01:17:494, you will follow your main pattern (meaning dd, kd, kk etc...) on the kiai part, also you create the same distane between the 3 similar patterns after, and you follow lyrics.
01:21:300 : Same, 1/2 before.

Imo a really dislike the part at 00:48:166 because the 3/2 distance is strange to follow moreover when there's battery, vocals and guitar which are both expressive, so imo i consider this part as hard to map for a futsuu, maybe more mods here could be interesting, but i really like your doublets on the kiai.

[Muzukashii]

00:18:501 : Triplet or finish hitsound on 00:18:613 ? Choose but both are good, but you didnt use twice triplets on a pattern from 00:05:180 to 00:19:509 .
00:28:016 : Imo, this combo is a bit long, maybe delete a note in order to create a break?
00:35:964 : How about adding a d here? Let's try this.
00:48:501 : This one diserves a k.
01:18:613 : Even if there's battry here, it's ugly to hear, i advise you to move it 1/2 before since you created your pattern with the vocals.

Almost fixed

[Oniiii-chan]

00:16:934 : I found the whole combo a bit complex for the beginning part, how about deleting this one, more over when it's not the end of the first part.
Nothing more found here. fixed

[Nardo's Oni]

Interesting the fact you didn't have the same style of map for this map.

00:23:091 : After this you didn't use any breaks (so ye we have 3/4 yeye...), maybe delet some in order to have short breaks?

Also i didn't find something wrong, i really enjoyed the 3/4 spacing on the first part.

Gl hf for rank!

game rock wrote:

Hi From Game's Queue

d
k
D (Big d)
K (Big k)


[Kantan]

00:32:942 - Change to k, To make a kd k dk fixed
01:17:718 - Change to d, I thing it's more convenient. keep


[Hanjamon's Futsuu]

00:50:628 - Agregar una d, es más conveniente.
00:56:001 - Al igual que antes, agregar una d.
01:15:255 - Agrega una d, para hacer un kk dk


[Muzukashii]

00:47:718 - I think it would be better a k. keep


[Oni]

00:30:703 - Change to k? rhythm ago keep


[Nardo's Oni]

00:31:934 - Change to k? I think it's better, rhythm ago


I hope what my mod has helped you , good luck

Kazamastar11 wrote:

Special request via PM ^^
[General]

1. MP3 Title “Nanairo Biyori (TV Size)”, beatmap title “Nanairo Biyori (TV Ver.)”. After searching on Goog*e, and checking the Ranked beatmap.. “TV Ver.” Is correct
2. I don’t know but.. I think you should remove “Biyori” from the tags, because it’s already on the title imo keep

[Kantan]
HP -1
00:12:345 (9) – k
Seems fine.
[Hanjamon’s Futsuu]
00:13:240 (12) – d
00:14:136 (13) - ^
00:14:583 (14) – k
00:15:031 (15) – d
00:15:927 (16) – k
00:15:927 (16) – d
00:33:389 (56) - ^
01:07:643 (15) - ^
01:18:389 (39) - ^
[Muzukashii]
00:36:300 (93) – k
00:55:218 – Add d
Good diff..
[Oni]
00:13:352 (8) – Remove
00:16:039 (11) – Better remove this
00:23:427 (51) - ^
00:37:755 (127) - ^
01:08:203 (273) - ^
[Nardo’s Oni]
Nothing ^^

Sorry for this short mod..
GL then~

azintairin710 wrote:

From my mod Q

[General]

• look good

[Kantan]
00:32:942 (36) - try K the cymbal sound clearer than 00:33:837 (37) -
00:37:419 (42,43) - ctrl+g fit vocal better i think
00:52:195 (63) - delete.. there's nothing you follow here.. if you want keep this, move to 00:52:419 -
01:19:509 (101) - d fit drum better

All fixed

[Hanja's Futsuu]
00:22:643 - add k
00:26:225 - ^
00:31:598 - ^
2nd part mod is the same as above
00:57:792 (1,1) - i don't mind it owo)/
01:08:315 (16,17) - ctrl+g
01:14:807 (32) - K
01:27:121 (1) - i don't mind it okay...

[Muzukashii]
00:06:972 (1,1,1,1,1) - i don't mind it ;w;
00:28:016 (58) - move to 00:27:792 - and change to d
00:36:076 (92,93) - either one change to k is good, if you change (92) it will follow snare, if (93) will follow vocal
00:55:330 (161) - D
01:24:434 (264,265,266,267,268,269,270,271,272) - maybe this pattern is too hard for SR 2.60 :3 consider re-map this

Almost fixed

i can't mod Oni tho.. ._. sorry

1. Red - Unrankable issue, you must fixed
2. Purple - Highly recommended, consider to use it
3. Black - Suggestion, feel free to fixed or not
4. Gray - Personal preference

1. Fine

1. 00:47:718 (58) - can be changed to k for consistency
2. 00:51:300 (62,63) - swap if you fixed above
3. 01:01:598 (74) - d?
4. 01:07:867 (83) - k
5. 01:16:375 (95) - maybe remove this, i will be a lot easier for beginners
6. 01:26:225 (108) - move to 01:25:330 -

1. 00:34:733 (60) - you can try d here, i know you want to use k to follow vocal, but i think continous 2-4kat fits enough
2. 00:41:897 (77) - same as above
3. 00:50:628 - add d here, i guess you want to put a break, but this part is slow enough, I feel quite empty here. Break in 00:56:001 - is a wise choice, no need to add one
4. 00:56:449 - but maybe add d here, it may keep consistency with 00:58:240 (2,3) - and make a lead
5. 01:15:927 - d here, also maybe 01:16:151 - too.

1. 00:24:434 (45) - d here plays better
2. 00:40:330 (110,111,112,113,114,115) - try dkdkkd
3. 01:25:778 (273) - d for pitch goes down

1. 00:30:031 (86,87) - k these?
2. 01:08:315 (273) - here has the same tune with 01:08:539 (274) - so change to k would be better
3. 01:20:852 (344) - k for consistency

1. Nice

OniJAM wrote:

From your PM request

1. Red - Unrankable issue, you must fixed
2. Purple - Highly recommended, consider to use it
3. Black - Suggestion, feel free to fixed or not
4. Gray - Personal preference

[ Hanjamon's Futsuu]

1. 00:34:733 (60) - you can try d here, i know you want to use k to follow vocal, but i think continous 2-4kat fits enough okay :3
2. 00:41:897 (77) - same as above okay
3. 00:50:628 - add d here, i guess you want to put a break, but this part is slow enough, I feel quite empty here. Break in 00:56:001 - is a wise choice, no need to add one okay
4. 00:56:449 - but maybe add d here, it may keep consistency with 00:58:240 (2,3) - and make a lead okay
5. 01:15:927 - d here, also maybe 01:16:151 - too. hmm i think is fine without note, yeah, adding two d sounds better, but tried to have break xD

Call me back

OniJAM wrote:

From your PM request

1. Red - Unrankable issue, you must fixed
2. Purple - Highly recommended, consider to use it
3. Black - Suggestion, feel free to fixed or not
4. Gray - Personal preference

[General]

1. Fine

[ Kantan]

1. 00:47:718 (58) - can be changed to k for consistency fixed
2. 00:51:300 (62,63) - swap if you fixed above fixed
3. 01:01:598 (74) - d? keep.
4. 01:07:867 (83) - k fixed
5. 01:16:375 (95) - maybe remove this, i will be a lot easier for beginners umm...I think k d k K is good.so keep
6. 01:26:225 (108) - move to 01:25:330 - fixed

[ Hanjamon's Futsuu]

1. 00:34:733 (60) - you can try d here, i know you want to use k to follow vocal, but i think continous 2-4kat fits enough
2. 00:41:897 (77) - same as above
3. 00:50:628 - add d here, i guess you want to put a break, but this part is slow enough, I feel quite empty here. Break in 00:56:001 - is a wise choice, no need to add one
4. 00:56:449 - but maybe add d here, it may keep consistency with 00:58:240 (2,3) - and make a lead
5. 01:15:927 - d here, also maybe 01:16:151 - too.

[ Muzukashii]

1. 00:24:434 (45) - d here plays better fixed
2. 00:40:330 (110,111,112,113,114,115) - try dkdkkd Nice pattern.fixed
3. 01:25:778 (273) - d for pitch goes down fixed

[ Oni]

1. 00:30:031 (86,87) - k these? fixed
2. 01:08:315 (273) - here has the same tune with 01:08:539 (274) - so change to k would be better fixed
3. 01:20:852 (344) - k for consistency fixed

[ Nardo's Oni]

1. Nice

Call me back

OniJAM wrote:

It looks nice to me

Bubbled!

DakeDekaane wrote:

ヽ(´□｀。)ﾉ

Popping because spread issues in Futsuu -> Muzukashii

While both difficulties are fine themselves, they don't have a nice spread. Specifically, in the beginning; Futsuu uses 2/1 and 1/1 patterns while Muzukashii has even 1/4 patterns and it's really closer to the Oni difficulty.





What I suggest is making the Futsuu a bit harder and the Muzukashii a bit easier in this part, so we can get some balance:
In Futsuu, add notes in 00:05:628 - , 00:06:524 -
And in Muzukashii, remove 00:05:404 (2) - , 00:05:852 (4) - and 00:07:643 (4) -





And now we get a nicer spread, you don't need to change it like this, if you can think in something that fits your style better, do it.

Now the additional modding that will include some stuff to improve spread too.

00:05:189 - 00:19:066 - I changed more easily.I used your pattern.

[ Kantan]
00:30:703 (33,34) - These notes could be removed to create a break. fixed
00:38:762 (45) - Remove for consistency with 00:23:539 - ? fixed
01:02:942 (76) - Remove for consistency with 01:17:270 - ? fixed
00:45:031 (55,56,57) - These notes could be removed to create a break, I know it may look big, but I also suggested to do it in Kantan so, it's really good.55,56=delete. 57=keep.
01:14:136 (91,92) - Remove this notes to create a break after all this 2/1 part, it will also fit with the vocal break. fixed


[ Hanjamon's Futsuu]
00:22:195 (30) - As I see you've been following vocals, moving this note to 00:21:972 - would be nicer to play.
00:25:778 (38) - ^
00:36:524 (65) - ^
00:40:106 (73) - ^

00:29:360 (47,48) - How about making a 1/2 ddkdd and then leaving a 4/1 break, it'd fit better with your vocalmapping (I guess).
00:43:688 (82,83) - ^

00:32:942 - Try a 1/2 kkk here, would fit nicely with the drums.
00:47:494 - ^

01:02:046 (2) - Remove this note, feels a bit awkward to play before the kiai.
01:03:166 - I think a note could fit nicely here for vocals, this will also help a bit the spread.

01:06:748 - ^
01:17:494 - ^
01:21:076 - ^

01:09:210 - 01:13:016 - I think you should focus only on vocals here (only doubles for them and maybe a don in the downbeats). If you do, you could remove 01:13:240 (27,28,29,30,31,32) - to create a fitting break.
01:15:927 - A note is missing here for vocals.
01:23:539 - ^

[ Muzukashii]
00:31:151 (73) - I think you could move this to 00:30:927 - and make it a don, then move 00:31:822 (75) - to 00:32:046 - and delete 00:31:597 (74) - , so you have a larger break to compensate the difficulty of the long pattern before. umm...73=delete.other keep
00:44:583 - You can do something similar to what I put above, this is a bit curious as you didn't put triples here, but in the pattern I pointed above you did, while the music is stronger here.
00:48:501 (140,145,151) - You could remove these notes to make it a bit different than Oni. fixed
00:55:666 (163,169) - ^ fixed
00:54:434 (158) - Remove. fixed
01:25:442 (271,272) - You could remove these notes so the vocals feels stronger in 01:25:778 (273) - due the break. fixed


[ Oni]
00:05:964 - I feel like a note could fit here if you listen to the drums, not really needed, just my opinion. sorry.keep
00:09:546 - ^ ^
00:13:352 (8) - ^ If you added the notes I suggested above, remove this for consistency ^

00:07:755 - A note is missing here, a kat would sound/play nice. add k.changed dkd
00:14:919 - ^Same here, if you add it, either kddkd or dkddd play nice. I changed dkddd

00:15:927 (10,11,12,13) - I don't think these notes matches the music nicely, you can make a 1/2 ddk for consistency, but if you want to keep it, you can remove 00:17:158 (18) - to make the whole pattern sound better. changed 1/2 ddk
00:28:128 (73) - Removing this note could be nice, so you could add a bit of emphasis in the vocals. fixed
00:29:136 (80,81,82,83,84,85) - d dkkdd -> d kddd k sounds better with the music, imo. changed dkddddk
00:31:151 (91) - Move it to 00:30:927 - and also move 00:31:486 (92) - to 00:31:375 - , this coulld sound better if you want a break here. keep.
00:45:815 (170,173) - You could remove these ones to make a small break here. 173=delete 170=keep
00:59:024 (223,227,228) - Removing these would make an interesting rhythm, imo. fixed
01:05:740 (256) - Remove to have consistency with 01:09:322 - ? fixed
01:20:068 (338) - ^ fixed
01:23:203 - I feel a dk d is missing here, like in the other parts. fixed
01:24:434 (361,362,363,364) - ddk d -> d kkd sounds better here for vocals imo. fixed

[ Nardo's Oni]
00:12:345 (35) - I think this should be a kat for consistency.
00:26:449 (107,108) - I'd like to see this removed to have small break like in 00:22:643 - , but you could keep it if you don't want to change it.
00:37:195 (168,169) - ^
00:40:778 (189,190) - ^
01:23:427 (405) - Remove for consistency with 01:19:845 - ?

That'd be all, poke me back so I can rebubble.

DakeDekaane wrote:

ヽ(´□｀。)ﾉ

[ Nardo's Oni]
00:12:345 (35) - I think this should be a kat for consistency. It is already a kat. I used it because of the increased vocal pitch when compared to the other similar parts.
00:26:449 (107,108) - I'd like to see this removed to have small break like in 00:22:643 - , but you could keep it if you don't want to change it. I prefer keeping it to map the vocal there.
00:37:195 (168,169) - ^ ^
00:40:778 (189,190) - ^ ^
01:23:427 (405) - Remove for consistency with 01:19:845 - ? I think a longer 1/4 note pattern here could give a greater impact when combined with the big kat at 01:23:986 (408) -

That'd be all, poke me back so I can rebubble.

DakeDekaane wrote:

ヽ(´□｀。)ﾉ

Popping because spread issues in Futsuu -> Muzukashii

While both difficulties are fine themselves, they don't have a nice spread. Specifically, in the beginning; Futsuu uses 2/1 and 1/1 patterns while Muzukashii has even 1/4 patterns and it's really closer to the Oni difficulty.





What I suggest is making the Futsuu a bit harder and the Muzukashii a bit easier in this part, so we can get some balance:
In Futsuu, add notes in 00:05:628 - , 00:06:524 -
And in Muzukashii, remove 00:05:404 (2) - , 00:05:852 (4) - and 00:07:643 (4) -





And now we get a nicer spread, you don't need to change it like this, if you can think in something that fits your style better, do it.

Now the additional modding that will include some stuff to improve spread too.

[ Hanjamon's Futsuu]
00:22:195 (30) - As I see you've been following vocals, moving this note to 00:21:972 - would be nicer to play.
00:25:778 (38) - ^
00:36:524 (65) - ^
00:40:106 (73) - ^

00:29:360 (47,48) - How about making a 1/2 ddkdd and then leaving a 4/1 break, it'd fit better with your vocalmapping (I guess).
00:43:688 (82,83) - ^

00:32:942 - Try a 1/2 kkk here, would fit nicely with the drums.
00:47:494 - ^

01:02:046 (2) - Remove this note, feels a bit awkward to play before the kiai.
01:03:166 - I think a note could fit nicely here for vocals, this will also help a bit the spread.

01:06:748 - ^
01:17:494 - ^
01:21:076 - ^

01:09:210 - 01:13:016 - I think you should focus only on vocals here (only doubles for them and maybe a don in the downbeats). If you do, you could remove 01:13:240 (27,28,29,30,31,32) - to create a fitting break.
01:15:927 - A note is missing here for vocals.
01:23:539 - ^

That'd be all, poke me back so I can rebubble.

DakeDekaane wrote:

Recheck.

[ Oni]
00:29:695 (84) - Remove this note, the stream is a bit long imo. umm...If use dkddd,I want to use dkddddk

[ Muzukashii]
00:12:345 (1) - Make this don to have consistency with having dons here. fixed
00:30:031 - You could try this rhythm to follow vocals a bit better, okay.but,not put 68.(image)

00:45:479 (126) - You could remove this note for a similar reason as above. fixed

[ Hanjamon's Futsuu]
Add notes in:
00:09:210 -
00:10:106 -
00:16:375 - ?

01:10:330 (22) - Move this to 01:10:330 - to follow vocals better.
01:13:016 - or 01:13:240 - You could put a spinner/slider here to have something to hit here. End it in 01:14:583 -

[ Kantan]
00:31:597 (33) - Move this to 00:32:046 - fixed
00:47:263 - You could add a kat in to follow nicely the drums. fixed
01:01:598 (69) - You could remove to have a small break before the kiai. fixed
01:13:240 - *optional* You could put a spinner/slider here to have something to hit here. End it in 01:14:583 - sorry.keep

That'd be all

DakeDekaane wrote:

Recheck.

[ Hanjamon's Futsuu]
Add notes in:
00:09:210 -
00:10:106 -
00:16:375 - ?

01:10:330 (22) - Move this to 01:10:330 - to follow vocals better.
01:13:016 - or 01:13:240 - You could put a spinner/slider here to have something to hit here. End it in 01:14:583 -

That'd be all

DakeDekaane wrote:

Okay, spreads is better so I can put the bubble back.

(。･∀･)ﾉ

1. 00:38:315 (42) - This note really doesn't hit anything audible in the song. It's not difficult to play, but I still feel like it's incorrect. Moving it 1/2 back is a way to solve the problem, or even maybe moving it to 00:38:763 - might work. I just don't believe this note should be where it is. (This somewhat gets involved with the mod below as well)
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2. 00:36:972 (40) - This note would be better back at 00:36:524 - imo. It feels like between the lyrics/guitar/drums that it still calls for a note. I don't really get the feeling at 00:36:972 (40) - as it gives a more lead-in taste. maybe try kkd in the new pattern? http://puu.sh/eBIBj.jpg
3. 00:40:106 (44,45) - Likewise the same as above. moving both of these back 1/1 each

1. 00:38:315 (75) - same thing as Kantan. This note doesn't hit anything, and since there are less notes on these two diffs (Muzu and Oni don't even map this) I would recommend mapping around this. A good way is to map on the 1/2 at 00:38:091 - and 00:38:539 - so it supports the vocals more.
2. 01:06:076 (11,20,41) - These three notes. The way you follow the vocals heavily in this difficulty. It makes me think you should move these all 1/2 back to match the vocals. For (11,41) try changing it to a k.

1. 00:20:181 (25) - Try a k here? This part gives off a bit up build up, especially with the vocals.
2. 00:34:509 (80) - ^
3. 00:35:628 (84,85,86,87,88) - 00:21:300 (29,30,31,32,33) - I found it a little odd these two were different on where you used the 1/4 note. I found the first pattern much easier to play. the (88) felt like it was supposed to be a k because of the first one lol. Maybe swap 84-88 so it's like 29-33? | not a big issue if you don't. Just personal preference I think.

1. 00:38:427 (129) - is this needed? It really doesn't hit anything in the song as the vocals / instruments are all played at 00:38:539 - You do this quite often the song, which is perfectly fine. I just don't understand the logic behind this specific one since it's the only one in this section played like this. The rest are all 1/1 gaps.

1. 00:39:882 (183,184,185,186,187) - Try ddkkd for this pattern? | It follows the guitar nicely.

Lanturn wrote:

[Nardo]
The one thing I'm worried about on this diff is that from 00:23:091 - to 00:48:166 - There isn't really much of a break. The most you get is 00:30:703 (132,141) - which are only 3/4. I highly suggest putting some 1/1 breaks in this 25 second section as it's a bit too much, even the Kiai has less density. (Talked to a person in #Taiko and they agreed with me) In fact, there is no lower limit regarding the number of breaks used in an Oni difficulty. As two 3/4 breaks (in Oni sense) are placed at 00:30:703 and 00:32:494 - respectively, you may regard the longest 1/2 + 1/4 stream as the one from 00:32:830 to 00:48:166 - , which is about 15.3 seconds. I did not put breaks at places like 00:26:449 - , 00:37:195 and 00:40:778 - because of the presence of vocal. On the other hand, the kiai looks less dense due to the lower vocal density.

1. 00:39:882 (183,184,185,186,187) - Try ddkkd for this pattern? | It follows the guitar nicely. It's a good idea, but I would like to follow the snare sound at 00:39:994 - more. Also, it would be more consistent to the previous 00:25:554 (101,102,103,104,105) -

That's all I really got to say. This map seems perfectly fine as is. You've got enough rest points and such (except the part in Nardo's diff) and everything else is correct. I'll talk to a few other Taiko people and if they say it's fine then I'll go ahead. Otherwise I'll at least rebubble until a more experienced Taiko BAT comes in.

Lanturn wrote:

[General]
Resnap your preview point. I thought it was snapped to 1/6 or something, but it's still off by 1ms. So just resnap all of it to wherever you want. changed preview point. (All diff)

[Kantan]

1. 00:38:315 (42) - This note really doesn't hit anything audible in the song. It's not difficult to play, but I still feel like it's incorrect. Moving it 1/2 back is a way to solve the problem, or even maybe moving it to 00:38:763 - might work. I just don't believe this note should be where it is. (This somewhat gets involved with the mod below as well) sorry keep.because, follow the vocal now.
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2. 00:36:972 (40) - This note would be better back at 00:36:524 - imo. It feels like between the lyrics/guitar/drums that it still calls for a note. I don't really get the feeling at 00:36:972 (40) - as it gives a more lead-in taste. maybe try kkd in the new pattern? http://puu.sh/eBIBj.jpg 00:35:636 - = 00:20:404 - same so keep
3. 00:40:106 (44,45) - Likewise the same as above. moving both of these back 1/1 each keep

[Hanjamon]

1. 00:38:315 (75) - same thing as Kantan. This note doesn't hit anything, and since there are less notes on these two diffs (Muzu and Oni don't even map this) I would recommend mapping around this. A good way is to map on the 1/2 at 00:38:091 - and 00:38:539 - so it supports the vocals more.
2. 01:06:076 (11,20,41) - These three notes. The way you follow the vocals heavily in this difficulty. It makes me think you should move these all 1/2 back to match the vocals. For (11,41) try changing it to a k.

[Muzukashii]

1. 00:20:181 (25) - Try a k here? This part gives off a bit up build up, especially with the vocals. fixed
2. 00:34:509 (80) - ^ fixed
3. 00:35:628 (84,85,86,87,88) - 00:21:300 (29,30,31,32,33) - I found it a little odd these two were different on where you used the 1/4 note. I found the first pattern much easier to play. the (88) felt like it was supposed to be a k because of the first one lol. Maybe swap 84-88 so it's like 29-33? | not a big issue if you don't. Just personal preference I think. changed same pattern

As I mentioned, I don't really know much about Oni diffs yet or am I good at modding the patterns you have and such. One big thing in Nardo's Oni that needs attention though.

[Oni]

1. 00:38:427 (129) - is this needed? It really doesn't hit anything in the song as the vocals / instruments are all played at 00:38:539 - You do this quite often the song, which is perfectly fine. I just don't understand the logic behind this specific one since it's the only one in this section played like this. The rest are all 1/1 gaps. sorry keep.because,my mapping style...

[Nardo]
The one thing I'm worried about on this diff is that from 00:23:091 - to 00:48:166 - There isn't really much of a break. The most you get is 00:30:703 (132,141) - which are only 3/4. I highly suggest putting some 1/1 breaks in this 25 second section as it's a bit too much, even the Kiai has less density. (Talked to a person in #Taiko and they agreed with me)

1. 00:39:882 (183,184,185,186,187) - Try ddkkd for this pattern? | It follows the guitar nicely.

That's all I really got to say. This map seems perfectly fine as is. You've got enough rest points and such (except the part in Nardo's diff) and everything else is correct. I'll talk to a few other Taiko people and if they say it's fine then I'll go ahead. Otherwise I'll at least rebubble until a more experienced Taiko BAT comes in.

Lanturn wrote:

[General]
Resnap your preview point. I thought it was snapped to 1/6 or something, but it's still off by 1ms. So just resnap all of it to wherever you want.


[Hanjamon]

1. 00:38:315 (75) - same thing as Kantan. This note doesn't hit anything, and since there are less notes on these two diffs (Muzu and Oni don't even map this) I would recommend mapping around this. A good way is to map on the 1/2 at 00:38:091 - and 00:38:539 - so it supports the vocals more. I'm doing consistency here, if I add a note here, this will cause a inconsistency, also that pattern is hard for a Futsuu imo :c
2. 01:06:076 (11,20,41) - These three notes. The way you follow the vocals heavily in this difficulty. It makes me think you should move these all 1/2 back to match the vocals. For (11,41) try changing it to a k. same ^ i'm not sure, i don't want to have more doublets.. u.u

That's all I really got to say. This map seems perfectly fine as is. You've got enough rest points and such (except the part in Nardo's diff) and everything else is correct. I'll talk to a few other Taiko people and if they say it's fine then I'll go ahead. Otherwise I'll at least rebubble until a more experienced Taiko BAT comes in.

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

In fact, there is no lower limit regarding the number of breaks used in an Oni difficulty. As two 3/4 breaks (in Oni sense) are placed at 00:30:703 and 00:32:494 - respectively, you may regard the longest 1/2 + 1/4 stream as the one from 00:32:830 to 00:48:166 - , which is about 15.3 seconds. I did not put breaks at places like 00:26:449 - , 00:37:195 and 00:40:778 - because of the presence of vocal. On the other hand, the kiai looks less dense due to the lower vocal density.

Thanks for your mod Lanturn~ :3