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kamisamaaa

Joined July 2011

kamisamaaa 2014-01-16T07:20:05+00:00

mod来的有点晚额都是一些小意见
[insane]
00:01:834 无论是鼓点还是歌声这里感觉都不应该空啊感觉改成一个单点和一个短滑条节奏更合适
00:05:091 从这里开始和后面连着的三声是四个一组吧这里是第一声感觉用滑条尾部带过去不是很合适额
00:39:205 (3) - 感觉这里这个音放个反向梗更合适一些并且00:39:548 (4) - 这个感觉应该和3用对称的两个短滑条然后结尾那个强音用一个note 主要是从打击感的方面考虑感觉更好一些额
00:48:634 (5) - 同样这么强的两个音两个距离远一些的note比一个滑条合适
[hard]
00:01:319 (4) - 这个一开始节奏就感觉很奇怪
00:50:176 (1,2) - 这两个感觉flow不太好额
[normal]
遮挡和重叠好多。。。会不会有点太难了额别的倒是没啥问题
00:20:519 (2,4) - 像这种遮挡感觉有点难额

中间你可能有更新我不太清楚额家里网有问题基本啥都打不开非常抱歉额。。。

yf_bmp

Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper

1,630 posts

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

yf_bmp 2014-01-20T06:31:48+00:00

[_Crystal] wrote:
;w;

[Awaken's Easy]
00:39:205 (1) - 不怎么好看有点挤
01:10:748 (2) - 对歪了吧

百姐姐的ez不能多书

[Normal]
00:04:405 - 加个circle X
00:12:462 (2,3,4,5) - 不好看听起来也比较奇怪在00:13:662加一个circle或者slider 稍微改了下
00:21:548 (4) - 被2遮住了 fixed
00:29:605 (1,2,3,4) - 就用 00:28:234 (1,2) 的节奏就可以 X
00:33:205 (6) - 试试这样 fixed
SPOILER
00:35:605 (4,5,1) - 排列有点乱 fixed
01:15:376 (1) - 如果要这么下音的话和6分开一点 X
01:17:776 (1) - 结束在 01:20:605 fixed

柑橘这个normal需要大改一下;w;

[Hard]
00:01:662 (5) - 为什么在这里开始？听起来很怪 BGM
00:08:176 (3,4,5,6) - 看起来像一个团..不好看 X
00:32:176 (1) - 跳的有点远? X
01:03:548 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - 这种串对于Hard是不是有点难了? fixed
01:06:376 (5) - ;w;.. 不管是形状还是压音都比较莫名.. X 还好
01:09:034 (3) - 删掉这个然后调整一下前面的排列 X

[Insane]
00:01:662 (5) - 同Hard X
00:08:691 (5) - 平一点吧? fixed
01:24:462 (1,2,3,4) - 有点杂, 建议改成2分 X
01:28:148 (1) - 结束在 01:29:646 ? 延后了点

这个ins太赞

另外这里是我的Hard ~~考试前用了3天做的给加上吧;w;~~ 已加

kamisamaaa wrote:
mod来的有点晚额都是一些小意见
[insane]
00:01:834 无论是鼓点还是歌声这里感觉都不应该空啊感觉改成一个单点和一个短滑条节奏更合适先保留
00:05:091 从这里开始和后面连着的三声是四个一组吧这里是第一声感觉用滑条尾部带过去不是很合适额 X
00:39:205 (3) - 感觉这里这个音放个反向梗更合适一些并且00:39:548 (4) - 这个感觉应该和3用对称的两个短滑条然后结尾那个强音用一个note 主要是从打击感的方面考虑感觉更好一些额这部分改了下
00:48:634 (5) - 同样这么强的两个音两个距离远一些的note比一个滑条合适 X
[hard]
00:01:319 (4) - 这个一开始节奏就感觉很奇怪跟bgm
00:50:176 (1,2) - 这两个感觉flow不太好额还好
[normal]
遮挡和重叠好多。。。会不会有点太难了额别的倒是没啥问题改了一些
00:20:519 (2,4) - 像这种遮挡感觉有点难额上面改了

中间你可能有更新我不太清楚额家里网有问题基本啥都打不开非常抱歉额。。。没事上周不在家

Narcissu

1,744 posts

Joined August 2012

Narcissu 2014-01-20T11:55:40+00:00

没看过机巧少女……游戏王倒是用过某个卡组叫机巧XD

黑头发的看上去挺萌的~~

[insane]

SPOILER

变速太坑惹……所有的0.5*都用同一个颜色吧，然后其他的部分都跳过那个颜色，虽然我打图从来不看颜色XD……话说很多跳过了粉色是为什么？

这个排版风格和我……相差甚远不好多说%……&……

01:08:005 (2) - 感觉放五角中间舒服点……

01:06:291 (1) - 读成ctrl+g的版本然后断了……是不是我奇葩？……（捂脸

mod不出什么额……

[Crystal's Hard]

SPOILER

虽然打的很舒服……

看得出你想保持整洁的版面……不过貌似做的不太好……很多地方可以换个走向，比如00:02:005 (4) - ……完全可以放右边然后上去然后去左边……不过走向问题要改就基本remap了还是算了……~~用AR=0排版是保持整洁的利器~~

那个叫啥？包起来的那个梗的英文是啥？算了……如果不是故意不包好的话我觉得00:36:976 (3,4) - 是可以包的好一点的

00:12:634 (2,4) - 这个覆盖要么多出现几次……要么一次也不要出现……

00:30:891 (7) - 估计会被有强迫症的人指出来说距离不一样……咦？好像我已经指出来了XD

01:14:348 - 变速改0.85……缓冲一下……幸好下一个物件近不然我的SS就美丽

01:25:148 (5) - 全图最难的地方……设置的无法理解……我可以说断在这里的人心里都不好受

目测这个难度需要更多的mod……

[hard]

SPOILER

个人感觉是因为先打的insane已经适应这个版面风格的结果……

我觉得00:01:319 (4,5) - 这样的微小覆盖都可以取缔……

00:57:719 (4) - 直接按滑条中间貌似是可以的？

01:15:376 (1,2,3,4,5) - 肉眼可见的不标准……↓↓↓……

SPOILER

[normal]

normal用叠的话貌似不太适合？4.5的normal大概没关系吧……

好像有全局DS固定的规定……我不知道00:16:405 (4) - 的prev1.1还有那些0.7的滑条接滑条行不行……

[easy]

DS用1.2看上去比较舒服

排列……可以的话easy减少使用00:29:948 (2) - 一类的掉头……好像有点多

祝早日rank……

Crystal

Former osu!catch Champion: 2018

1,122 posts

Joined June 2012

Crystal 2014-01-22T14:46:30+00:00

zengdaen wrote:
[Crystal's Hard]

SPOILER

虽然打的很舒服…… o.o

看得出你想保持整洁的版面……不过貌似做的不太好……很多地方可以换个走向，比如00:02:005 (4) - ……完全可以放右边然后上去然后去左边……不过走向问题要改就基本remap了还是算了……~~用AR=0排版是保持整洁的利器~~ ;w;我还是不够有经验 ~~以后就用AR0来作图~~
那个叫啥？包起来的那个梗的英文是啥？叫blanket算了……如果不是故意不包好的话我觉得00:36:976 (3,4) - 是可以包的好一点的 fixed

00:12:634 (2,4) - 这个覆盖要么多出现几次……要么一次也不要出现…… 嗯..

00:30:891 (7) - 估计会被有强迫症的人指出来说距离不一样……咦？好像我已经指出来了XD QAQ窝太粗心了

01:14:348 - 变速改0.85……缓冲一下……幸好下一个物件近不然我的SS就美丽嗯..间距改了

01:25:148 (5) - 全图最难的地方……设置的无法理解……我可以说断在这里的人心里都不好受圈圈改了位置

目测这个难度需要更多的mod…… 谢谢

谢谢你xD

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164,136,41091,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,44,41262,1,2,0:0:0:0:
132,44,41605,21,8,0:0:0:0:
320,100,41948,6,0,P|368:108|460:76,1,140,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
453,80,42462,1,2,0:0:0:0:
352,248,42805,2,0,P|304:240|212:272,1,140
148,332,43319,1,2,0:0:0:0:
60,292,43491,2,0,L|48:140,1,140
92,64,44005,1,2,0:0:0:0:
176,116,44176,2,0,P|244:132|312:116,1,140
336,100,44605,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,80,44691,6,0,L|400:156,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,236,45034,2,0,P|400:292|384:320,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,364,45376,1,2,0:0:0:0:
236,308,45548,2,0,L|224:236,2,70
60,220,46234,2,0,B|44:188|44:188|56:152,1,70,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,80,46576,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,36,46748,2,0,P|276:24|372:48,2,140,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,128,47605,6,0,P|280:124|312:132,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,224,47948,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,324,48291,2,2,B|96:276|68:264|68:264|104:240|84:192,1,140
64,112,48805,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,140,48976,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,64,49319,1,0,0:0:0:0:
443,110,49491,1,8,0:0:0:0:
360,160,49662,1,8,0:0:0:0:
360,160,50176,6,0,P|372:216|360:252,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,300,50519,2,0,P|276:256|288:216,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,156,50862,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,236,51034,2,0,P|168:280|156:320,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,356,51376,2,0,B|68:304|88:272|88:272|64:228|80:176|128:160,1,210
304,124,52234,1,2,0:0:0:0:
304,124,52576,6,0,P|320:208|284:256,1,146.999995513916,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,268,52919,5,4,0:0:0:0:
164,296,53091,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,256,53262,2,0,P|56:316|64:340,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,172,53605,2,2,L|148:32,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,88,54119,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,48,54291,2,0,P|380:36|424:44,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,108,54634,2,2,B|460:172|460:172|452:184|452:184|456:252,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,344,55148,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,316,55319,2,0,P|328:308|296:316,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,332,55662,5,2,0:0:0:0:
120,300,55834,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,220,56005,2,0,B|48:180|48:180|60:128,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,76,56348,2,2,P|160:64|264:84,1,140,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,168,56862,2,0,B|368:176|368:176|352:168|352:168|284:180,1,140
196,168,57376,2,2,P|200:228|292:264,2,140,10|2|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,80,58234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,44,58405,5,2,0:0:0:0:
420,72,58576,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,164,58748,2,0,P|464:212|456:248,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,312,59091,2,2,P|352:324|292:264,1,140,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,208,59605,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,232,59776,2,0,L|76:372,2,140,0|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,136,60634,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,56,60805,1,8,0:0:0:0:
152,56,61148,5,2,0:0:0:0:
236,104,61319,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,56,61491,2,0,P|392:48|420:52,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,112,61834,1,2,0:0:0:0:
343,96,62006,2,0,P|409:111|434:125,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,192,62348,2,0,B|448:272|448:272|424:240|380:268,1,140
300,284,62862,2,0,L|256:292,3,35
216,296,63205,2,2,L|168:304,3,35
144,296,63548,22,0,P|112:240|124:128,1,146.999995513916,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,132,63891,5,4,0:0:0:0:
184,56,64062,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,88,64234,2,0,P|300:140|324:164,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,180,64576,2,2,P|456:168|460:72,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,24,65091,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,296,65434,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,296,65605,1,2,0:0:0:0:
108,268,65948,2,0,P|84:240|72:184,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,128,66291,6,0,P|150:154|163:186,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,240,66634,2,2,B|304:208|304:208|312:188|312:188|380:152,1,140
440,136,67148,1,2,0:0:0:0:
380,332,67491,1,2,0:0:0:0:
148,256,67834,2,2,B|112:228|116:200|140:176|140:176|132:124,1,140
160,36,68348,1,2,0:0:0:0:
248,76,68519,2,0,L|264:148,1,70
380,332,69034,6,0,P|324:336|304:324,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,276,69376,2,0,B|220:216|220:216|224:200|224:200|212:132,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,68,69891,2,2,P|96:48|56:48,1,70
44,136,70234,2,0,P|75:151|109:157,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,148,70576,2,2,P|380:132|436:48,1,140
427,78,71091,1,8,0:0:0:0:
388,272,71434,6,0,L|416:360,1,70
300,228,71776,2,0,L|308:308,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,176,72119,2,0,P|196:228|124:220,1,140,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,160,72634,2,0,B|60:92|60:92|84:80|84:80|92:24,1,140
188,52,73148,2,0,P|232:60|260:56,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,36,73491,5,2,0:0:0:0:
444,68,73662,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,68,74005,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,148,74176,1,2,0:0:0:0:
424,236,74348,6,0,B|432:272|432:272|444:280|444:280|452:312,1,83.9999974365235
360,348,74862,2,0,P|312:344|272:328,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,272,75376,2,0,P|192:316|156:348,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,284,76062,1,2,0:0:0:0:
40,208,76405,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,184,76748,1,2,0:0:0:0:
92,112,77091,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,112,77605,5,4,0:0:0:0:
248,88,77776,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,152,77948,2,0,P|424:196|384:272,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,336,78462,2,2,B|260:332|260:332|248:344|248:344|184:340,1,140
100,296,78976,1,0,0:0:0:0:
68,204,79148,6,2,P|64:140|104:56,1,140
152,148,79662,1,8,0:0:0:0:
216,72,79834,2,2,P|243:135|239:205,1,140
180,284,80348,2,0,L|96:296,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,340,80691,1,2,0:0:0:0:
260,340,81034,5,8,0:0:0:0:
344,292,81205,2,2,L|364:120,1,140
424,80,81719,1,2,0:0:0:0:
332,40,81891,2,2,P|272:32|248:40,1,70,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,132,82234,2,2,P|184:145|165:160,1,70
204,244,82576,2,2,P|152:276|139:297,1,70,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,356,82919,2,0,P|48:308|68:228,1,140
124,156,83434,1,8,0:0:0:0:
124,156,83776,5,2,0:0:0:0:
208,108,83948,2,2,B|280:92|280:92|348:108,1,140
408,180,84462,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,248,84634,2,2,P|320:292|392:340,1,140
384,341,85148,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,344,85319,2,2,B|192:320|144:360|84:324,1,140
52,248,85834,2,0,P|44:184|48:164,2,70,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,152,86519,21,8,0:0:0:0:
296,116,86691,2,2,L|408:64,1,119.000002269745
448,228,87376,2,2,L|336:276,1,119.000002269745
252,324,87891,5,8,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,88148,12,0,89605,0:0:0:0:

ts8zs

2,123 posts

Joined May 2011

ts8zs 2014-02-20T05:16:25+00:00

偶尔手贱一下为啥会有我名字……需要我给你diff么@大召唤术= =b
remove ts8zs in tag,kd please

yf_bmp

Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper

1,630 posts

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

yf_bmp 2014-02-20T05:24:07+00:00

ts8zs wrote:
偶尔手贱一下为啥会有我名字……需要我给你diff么@大召唤术= =b
remove ts8zs in tag,kd please

shouchoule

ts8zs

2,123 posts

Joined May 2011

ts8zs 2014-02-20T06:16:40+00:00

yf_bmp wrote:
ts8zs wrote:
偶尔手贱一下为啥会有我名字……需要我给你diff么@大召唤术= =b
remove ts8zs in tag,kd please
shouchoule

切~~( ﹁﹁ ) ~~~这算被拒了么

yf_bmp

Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper

1,630 posts

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

yf_bmp 2014-02-20T06:33:52+00:00

ts8zs wrote:
切~~( ﹁﹁ ) ~~~这算被拒了么

Diff满了……除非collab hard有可能

IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

3,905 posts

Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 2014-02-20T23:39:31+00:00

來支持我的後宮 \:D/

yf_bmp

Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper

1,630 posts

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

yf_bmp 2014-02-21T17:29:33+00:00

IamKwaN wrote:
來支持我的後宮 \:D/

\:D/

ZZHBOY

1,649 posts

Joined April 2012

ZZHBOY 2014-04-03T00:20:21+00:00

你好久没更新了啊
我看了看ez
则呢音效没加好
简单说说吧
00:51:380 (2,3) - 没blanket好
02:09:723 (5) - 应该在这里nc吧
02:14:866 (1) - 不如在缩短到长白线停还好一些
02:33:209 (4,5,1,2,3,1,2) - 为什么不把ez弄简单清爽点还搞这么一大坨都要赶上normal啦
02:45:380 (5) - 忘nc了?
03:07:323 (5) - 应该这里nc吧
03:15:551 (1) - 这谁的part啊偷懒?
美丽爱抚哥哥快快rank啊我都即可难耐了啊

yf_bmp

Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper

1,630 posts

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

yf_bmp 2014-04-03T01:38:07+00:00

ZZH:忘记wip了 hard还没完成等G♂D....

FastBoy

140 posts

Joined July 2013

FastBoy 2014-04-13T09:29:48+00:00

N9's Hard:

01:54:465 (1) - 好像弄短了1個16分音,聽下去怪怪的OAO

這是我第一次mod人家的beatmap OAO,我只發現這個問題,mod錯了請見諒OAO

啊!還有你介不介意我幫你弄1個difficulty?我想幫幫忙OAO

Sellenite

1,092 posts

Joined September 2013

Sellenite 2014-04-20T02:21:43+00:00

http://puu.sh/8fHod.rar

ZZHBOY

1,649 posts

Joined April 2012

ZZHBOY 2014-04-30T00:07:42+00:00

什么时候带我rank啊

[CSGA]Ar3sgice

4,298 posts

Joined July 2011

[CSGA]Ar3sgice 2014-05-01T14:23:57+00:00

https://osu.ppy.sh/s/128026

来带我rank啊

Chloe

1,160 posts

Joined April 2011

Chloe 2014-05-17T16:35:43+00:00

one diff requested

00:01:151 (3) - 你这里没有五角就算了至少 00:01:151 (3,1,2) - 这3个组成正三角如何不过NAZI 无所谓了
00:01:151 (3,1,2) - FLOW不太好 http://puu.sh/8PUub.jpg 建议这样放
00:08:523 (1,2,3) - 丑不要OVERLAP吧 http://puu.sh/8PUxC.jpg
00:09:894 (1,3,5) - 这3个可以根据音乐逐渐加速
00:13:494 (1,2,3,4) - 这4个应该是一组梗而你做成3+1 3+1就算了你这个3角还不是很好看也不好打直线1/4 SLIDER一般都用来走位而你这个显然是用来FLOW 弯了以后显然好看比如http://puu.sh/8PUIX.jpg 当然具体这边怎么处理还是看你
00:14:523 (1,2) - 有点远容易断建议近点http://puu.sh/8PUPb.jpg 并且滑条可以适当的朝上弯一点
00:23:951 (1,1,1,1) - 不要SPAM啊 OVERLAP都是可读要是烤老板像你这样用NC 他的图就爆了而且你这里节奏应该和00:21:209 (5,1,2,3,1,2) - 保持一致建议以后作图想同节奏的地方每两小节保持一致
00:30:809 (3,4) - add 既和前面保持了用梗的相似又成功的走位增加了节奏的丰满和全图的可玩性
00:36:294 - 没看到不下节奏的理由典型的空拍不当
00:41:609 (1) - 间距啊啥的都没变为何4个NOTE就NC 毫无意义
00:43:151 (2) - 应该这个NC而不是后面那个 00:43:837 (3) - 这个同
00:43:151 (2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - 这2组排列的整齐一点啊详见泡泡的图而且这2组应该用完全一致的排列啊
00:59:609 (3) - 这个是FLOW流建议包住下面那个滑条说起FLOW和走位的1/4 该如何分辨我觉得是这样的走位的间距一般不会太远 FLOW流就可能每组之间比较远而且一般1/4都是对准了方向
01:02:180 (1) - 这个是FLOW流建议弯一点现在这样十分之丑http://puu.sh/8PVk9.jpg
01:08:694 (1,2) - ^01:10:923 (2) - ^
01:03:209 (1,2,3,4) - 和前面说的一样不要OVERLAP吧
01:06:637 (1,1) - 这俩NC不需要 01:11:780 (1) - yiyang

新人图痕迹明显想法好像不错不过质量好像不怎么行需要一些MOD 加油吧

Cardigan Corgi

34 posts

Joined March 2014

Cardigan Corgi 2014-05-17T16:54:46+00:00

00.41.951 滑条加速想法很好，似乎是想要模仿PULTO？前奏的加减速完美，不知道这个连打是迷惑的作用还是，或者滑条加速倍数减小或者连打间距增大打着会舒服一些？
01.44.351 折返必要？此图最大爽点就是直线小滑条加大跳急速快感，折返会让人戛然而止，反正我感觉蹩脚。
02.55.323 这几个NC？另外还有很多地方一个一个的NC。个人而言不是很喜欢，NC是帮助分组读图，过多可能会带来困扰？

总之，此图巨爽，希望能够RANK，排列不拘小节，但无伤大雅！

另外星星得了KD再给。。

Sellenite

1,092 posts

Joined September 2013

Sellenite 2014-05-18T09:43:03+00:00

Chloe wrote:
one diff requested

00:01:151 (3) - 你这里没有五角就算了至少 00:01:151 (3,1,2) - 这3个组成正三角如何不过NAZI 无所谓了重摆
00:01:151 (3,1,2) - FLOW不太好 http://puu.sh/8PUub.jpg 建议这样放 ^
00:08:523 (1,2,3) - 丑不要OVERLAP吧 http://puu.sh/8PUxC.jpg 好
00:09:894 (1,3,5) - 这3个可以根据音乐逐渐加速后面加速就算了，这个长滑条加速有点太长
00:13:494 (1,2,3,4) - 这4个应该是一组梗而你做成3+1 3+1就算了你这个3角还不是很好看也不好打直线1/4 SLIDER一般都用来走位而你这个显然是用来FLOW 弯了以后显然好看比如http://puu.sh/8PUIX.jpg 当然具体这边怎么处理还是看你重摆
00:14:523 (1,2) - 有点远容易断建议近点http://puu.sh/8PUPb.jpg 并且滑条可以适当的朝上弯一点 ^
00:23:951 (1,1,1,1) - 不要SPAM啊 OVERLAP都是可读要是烤老板像你这样用NC 他的图就爆了而且你这里节奏应该和 spam是啥？不明白这句什么意思...O.O 00:21:209 (5,1,2,3,1,2) - 保持一致建议以后作图想同节奏的地方每两小节保持一致
00:30:809 (3,4) - add 既和前面保持了用梗的相似又成功的走位增加了节奏的丰满和全图的可玩性也是不知道什么意思...
00:36:294 - 没看到不下节奏的理由典型的空拍不当前面我没有空拍，后面打算空拍休息一下
00:41:609 (1) - 间距啊啥的都没变为何4个NOTE就NC 毫无意义这里换了音效和降音，所以四个NC
00:43:151 (2) - 应该这个NC而不是后面那个 00:43:837 (3) - 这个同 fix
00:43:151 (2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - 这2组排列的整齐一点啊详见泡泡的图而且这2组应该用完全一致的排列啊怎么整齐..我没抄泡泡的啊O.O
00:59:609 (3) - 这个是FLOW流建议包住下面那个滑条说起FLOW和走位的1/4 该如何分辨我觉得是这样的走位的间距一般不会太远 FLOW流就可能每组之间比较远而且一般1/4都是对准了方向唔其实我这里是overmap..那个滑条实在太短了所以一弯之后老跳大直线滑条会很怪
01:02:180 (1) - 这个是FLOW流建议弯一点现在这样十分之丑http://puu.sh/8PVk9.jpg 改了一下
01:08:694 (1,2) - ^01:10:923 (2) - ^ 重摆了一下，但好像都是直的
01:03:209 (1,2,3,4) - 和前面说的一样不要OVERLAP吧这个我想保持这样试试
01:06:637 (1,1) - 这俩NC不需要 01:11:780 (1) - yiyang fix

新人图痕迹明显想法好像不错不过质量好像不怎么行需要一些MOD 加油吧好，应该是需要很多篇论文

Sellenite

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Sellenite 2014-05-18T09:55:49+00:00

pupil zone wrote:
00.41.951 滑条加速想法很好，似乎是想要模仿PULTO？前奏的加减速完美，不知道这个连打是迷惑的作用还是，或者滑条加速倍数减小或者连打间距增大打着会舒服一些？间距增大会比较难，不想再提高难度了...
01.44.351 折返必要？此图最大爽点就是直线小滑条加大跳急速快感，折返会让人戛然而止，反正我感觉蹩脚。换成连个滑条
02.55.323 这几个NC？另外还有很多地方一个一个的NC。个人而言不是很喜欢，NC是帮助分组读图，过多可能会带来困扰？这个想保持一下

Thanks

Yaya

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lgdry15

205 posts

Joined November 2013

lgdry15 2014-05-26T11:48:11+00:00

Hi, 来自m4m queue, 爱抚！

你的图实在是好赞啊，果然是我的前辈……

嗯……开始吧！

[General]

~~虽然不知道为什么，但是 Natsu 曾对我说过，每个难度的combo color如果没有特殊目的应该是完全相同的……~~
（额……如果你觉得这条很没用就无视掉好了……）

[Insane]

HP7 OD7 我觉会更好……
图中有很多滑条突然变速了，也许是为了增加挑战性？但至少对我来说降低了游戏体验……

00:27:551 (7,1) - 两个滑条重合啦！我觉得这有点坑爹…… 让我们分清这是两个滑条就好……
01:03:551 (1) - NC了…… 我觉得一串连击是一个整体，最好不要出现NC，除非有什么特殊目的……
01:18:466 (2,3) - 重合的滑条……
01:28:580 ~ 01:39:209 - 我觉得这段节奏也很好啊，可以不用加Break Time，可以做得简单一点让玩家放松放松。
02:03:894 (10) - 可换成连击，就像这样：http://pan.baidu.com/s/1pJ6Xhft
02:12:123 (1) - NC……
02:20:009 (8) - 这个音有点多余，可以删掉……
03:52:409 (5,1) - 之间加连击！

http://pan.baidu.com/s/1jGFUOQE

啊，整体上来说，还是超级赞的，加油！

[N9 & yf's Hard]

整体来讲很符合我的水平，非常喜欢！

02:14:866 (4,5) - 反应不过来，像是Insane…… 换成两个圈圈就更好了
03:28:580 (5,6) - 稍微有点坑爹……5和6之间再加个圈圈就不坑爹了……

水平有限，只能mod出这么多了……
还请前辈指教哈~

lgdry15

205 posts

Joined November 2013

lgdry15 2014-05-26T23:00:04+00:00

嗨，爱抚！
给你射了一颗星哦~

加油，前辈！

yf_bmp

Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper

1,630 posts

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

yf_bmp 2014-05-27T02:30:34+00:00

谢谢star ＆ mod~
周末改摸

Nymph

osu! Alumni

3,243 posts

Joined December 2010

Nymph 2014-05-29T04:19:29+00:00

some suggestions

[YAYA]
你自己都说overmap啦那我就毫不犹豫的说勒

00:04:837 (2) - 像这种完全没有音啊加2连很奇怪的

00:05:266 (1,1,1) - 其实这里虽然能玩。。但是还是很overmap啊话说还不如把前面弄的简单点然后再衬托中间

00:06:294 (3) - 像这种开头不如跟音乐用clap hitsound 用whistle不怎么好

00:13:494 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里急缺hitsound啊

00:15:380 (1) - 这几个还是推荐向前面一样用长slider吧更适合一些

00:41:266 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - 这种连打最好摆个好看点的弧线造型现在看着有点强迫症

00:59:609 (3) - 节奏怪怪的

大概看一下第一段啊首先开头有点overmap太严重到中间和kiai倒正常了...
hitsound我觉得需要更充实一些现在还是有点略空虚了
排列梗新人感确实还很严重最好找个时间看能不能remap下？现在的梗比较散乱缺乏整体性

Sellenite

1,092 posts

Joined September 2013

Sellenite 2014-05-29T07:54:53+00:00

Nymph wrote:
some suggestions

[YAYA]
你自己都说overmap啦那我就毫不犹豫的说勒

00:04:837 (2) - 像这种完全没有音啊加2连很奇怪的为后面那个准备的

00:05:266 (1,1,1) - 其实这里虽然能玩。。但是还是很overmap啊话说还不如把前面弄的简单点然后再衬托中间这里其实是有音的

00:06:294 (3) - 像这种开头不如跟音乐用clap hitsound 用whistle不怎么好好

00:13:494 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里急缺hitsound啊好

00:15:380 (1) - 这几个还是推荐向前面一样用长slider吧更适合一些不想有重复的节奏

00:41:266 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - 这种连打最好摆个好看点的弧线造型现在看着有点强迫症好

00:59:609 (3) - 节奏怪怪的 o

大概看一下第一段啊首先开头有点overmap太严重到中间和kiai倒正常了...
hitsound我觉得需要更充实一些现在还是有点略空虚了
排列梗新人感确实还很严重最好找个时间看能不能remap下？现在的梗比较散乱缺乏整体性

由于这难度是我看了insane了以后，觉得有很多地方都能下物件，节奏能更加丰富，所以才这么弄。虽然已经删了一部分了，但应该还是救不了这diff，大量的overmap和抄了一个图的创意，可能会造成这个图很offensive，从而rank不了，而且这个ins已经足够好了，而我的被别人喷shit map了，想了想我还是在这里放弃这diff

有些地方我会remap和hitsound重新下一遍，虽然我排列的确不好，但我个人来说还是挺喜欢我做出来这个的，我不会放弃对这图的修改，但rank不rank就是另一回事了。在这里谢谢爱抚和摸这图的人了，我喜欢这首歌，希望这个能rank

Yaya is beautiful

-[Hikari]-

84 posts

Joined February 2014

-[Hikari]- 2014-07-14T15:30:33+00:00

m4m

[N9 & yf's Hard]

00:30:294 (5,6,7) - 三角形不漂亮，7往外拉点
00:38:866 (4,5,6) - stack试试，现在的6感觉有点怪
01:36:123 (7) - 间距太大，试试stack 4的末尾
01:45:037 (1,5) - 往上拉点，现在碰到2和4有点丑
01:50:523 (1,2,3,4) - 2和3间距加大地太突然
02:02:694 (1) - ~~不好看~~
02:05:437 (1) - ^
02:28:237 (4,5,6,7,8) - 这串是跟的颤音吧？再加两个note到红线吧，那里才是颤音结束的地方
02:39:551 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 4和2 stack，3做个blanket，试试这样
02:41:951 (3) - 这个间距有点大
02:43:666 (5) - blanket 4的尾，试试这样
02:52:237 - 02:53:523 - 加个转盘，之前一个在前一根蓝线结束
02:54:980 - 02:57:723 - ^
03:10:409 (3,4) - 向右移大约30像素点试试
03:14:866 (5,6) - 在时间轴上这样改一下
03:40:580 (2) - 摆歪了
03:51:894 (3) - stack 1的尾
03:52:923 (2) - Ctrl+G

渣摸……柑橘会不会一半以上都是没用的呢;w;

Mafumafu

Beatmap Nominator

3,361 posts

Joined August 2013

Mafumafu 2014-07-17T01:09:14+00:00

Hi, yf!

------------------------------

[ZZH]
00:22:237 (5,1) - 5的方向，新手会按反的
00:24:294 (3) - 这个间距怎么回事
00:40:580 (3) - 这个间距怎么回事
00:32:351 (3,4) - blanket再修一下
00:47:437 (1,2,3) - 00:48:809 (4,5,6) - 这地方的1/2违和感较大，只有这里没跟vocal啊，为什么不跟呢。
01:23:094 (4,5,6,7,8) - 这里的1/2也是
01:44:351 (5,6,1) - 5→6→1的角度太小，Normal的话破坏flow，建议做成正三角形。
01:50:180 (1) - 为啥NC了，Normal别单独搞NC啊
02:07:666 (2,3,4) - 包一下
03:28:923 (6,1) - 包好
[Hard]
http://puu.sh/aeFTz/1c33ccfc05.png
00:06:294 (2,6) - 不包上？
00:33:723 (10,11,1) - 这个三连打起来好蛋疼，存在感有点低啊
00:35:951 (7) - 前面空或者后面空，两头都空感觉不太好
01:05:094 (1) - 上一段都没NC，这里NC了，建议保持一致【其实我建议把前面的NC加上因为前面NC略长
02:34:237 (4,5,6,1) - 稍微包一下？
02:43:666 (5) - 弯的感觉有点大
======================
美丽~
Good Luck！~

ts8zs

2,123 posts

Joined May 2011

ts8zs 2014-07-18T08:31:44+00:00

23颜色换一下？现在的颜色是为了表示啥……？
[Hard]
00:09:894 - NC
00:33:723 (10,1) - swap NC
00:52:923 (1,2) - not same
01:07:837 (5,6,7,8) - 这啥
02:34:580 (1) - 有点挤
03:11:094 (6,1) - 不顺手
03:56:009 (3) - Ctrl+G
感觉怪怪的-________-''

OblivioN

OblivioN 2014-07-21T07:45:40+00:00

来晚啦对不起;w;
[YAYA]
od可以+1,因为这图并不难

00:05:523 (5) - 这里我觉得还是空着吧
00:06:809 (3,4,1,2) - 这几个slider开头压红线打起来感觉挺奇怪的……
00:12:123 (2) - 个人觉得这里是重音，拉远一些比较带感，可以尝试放在x328 y80,如果这样改了记得连同00:12:466 (1) - 一起移动噢w【我自己这样换了以后感觉好多了】

SPOILER

，不过你这样的话就有蛮多地方要改的;w;比如00:09:380 (2,1) - 这里00:14:866 (2) - 00:17:609 (2) - 00:19:494 (2) -
01:06:294 (4,5,6,7) - hmmm……感觉挺卡手的……因为要是01:05:951 (3) - 是起指，就算偶数连打了……试试把01:06:294 (4,5,6,7) - 换成两个1/4slider(~~是1/4么？;w;基础没学好orz~~)呢，又配合bgm也跟了vocal:

SPOILER

01:09:209-觉得还是加个note好，x20 y372
02:00:466 (6) - 个人觉得和02:00:809 (1) - //挺好

SPOILER

02:27:037 (6) - 这个……为什么要延长到02:27:294 呢？;w;在02:27:209就挺好呀
02:53:609 (1) - ~~hw既视感/w\~~
03:20:351 (7) - 可以给个加速
03:56:009 (4) - 最后的这个打了几次感觉都很微妙……尝试换个方向或者直接用两个note?;w;

[NM]
01:18:294 (2,3,4) - 我觉得这样的节奏更好……:

后面的01:23:609到01:27:723也一样
01:59:951 (3) - 太奇怪了……:

02:02:694 (3) - 02:03:123这个折返音在这里太显眼了……
03:13:666 加个note吧

[EZ]
good job！

[Hard]
也漂亮得挑不出什么……qwq我没有做过hard所以……

折腾了半天就写出了这么一点对不起!!><

Edit：AudioLeadIn: 2000吧 ;w; YAYA开始的有点快了

ZZHBOY

1,649 posts

Joined April 2012

ZZHBOY 2014-07-22T13:40:36+00:00

OblivioN wrote:
[NM]
01:18:294 (2,3,4) - 我觉得这样的节奏更好……:
后面的01:23:609到01:27:723也一样
01:59:951 (3) - 太奇怪了……:
02:02:694 (3) - 02:03:123这个折返音在这里太显眼了……好
03:13:666 加个note吧好

哦草我那时候做的都是什么aji

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364,68,190751,2,0,P|356:28|344:4,2,60,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
266,139,191437,2,0,P|250:195|278:263,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
347,343,192123,2,0,P|247:332|206:340,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,330,192637,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,298,192809,38,0,P|104:198|144:128,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,148,193666,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,194009,12,0,195209,0:0:0:0:
118,55,195551,6,0,P|188:82|297:97,1,180,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,99,196409,2,0,P|336:155|323:193,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,293,197094,1,0,0:0:0:0:
185,309,197437,1,0,0:0:0:0:
161,192,197780,2,0,L|74:213,2,60,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
219,178,198294,22,0,P|280:127|328:50,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
334,42,198809,2,0,P|417:51|473:98,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
366,158,199494,2,0,P|307:229|299:268,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
298,314,200009,2,0,L|367:366,2,60,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
186,269,200694,21,8,0:0:0:0:
65,270,201037,22,0,P|111:179|171:148,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
54,70,201723,2,0,P|155:56|209:75,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,93,202237,2,0,P|294:135|406:147,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
492,91,203094,2,0,P|495:199|469:252,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,262,203609,1,0,0:0:0:0:
415,296,203780,6,0,P|332:322|266:367,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
287,218,204466,2,0,P|204:244|138:289,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,297,204980,2,0,P|87:227|3:164,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
119,117,205837,38,0,P|74:81|15:61,2,120,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,215,206866,1,8,0:0:0:0:
150,328,207209,2,0,P|254:311|292:278,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,247,207723,2,0,P|338:155|428:108,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
290,64,208580,1,0,0:0:0:0:
193,135,208923,1,8,0:0:0:0:
73,149,209266,6,0,P|92:211|164:248,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
138,362,209951,2,0,P|220:324|258:260,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
257,245,210466,2,0,P|300:204|357:185,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
417,184,210980,6,0,P|464:207|493:233,2,60,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,82,211666,2,0,L|266:91,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
233,75,212009,6,0,P|153:71|72:83,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
53,68,212523,2,0,L|86:151,1,60,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
131,229,213037,1,8,0:0:0:0:
247,259,213380,2,0,P|221:338|228:383,2,120,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
338,337,214409,6,0,L|399:315,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
451,297,214751,2,0,P|462:210|428:146,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
479,127,215266,2,0,P|430:91|348:63,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
367,188,215951,2,0,P|265:198|110:71,1,300,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
233,64,217151,22,0,L|291:106,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,84,217494,2,0,P|415:90|458:135,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
410,232,218180,2,0,P|398:278|402:306,2,60,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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91,90,219551,2,0,P|111:174|98:220,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
78,260,220066,1,0,0:0:0:0:
36,303,220237,22,0,P|147:347|174:347,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
185,302,220751,2,0,P|243:315|294:345,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,287,221437,1,0,0:0:0:0:
390,167,221780,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,75,222123,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,64,222466,1,0,0:0:0:0:
24,129,222980,6,0,P|97:146|152:106,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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307,346,224180,1,0,0:0:0:0:
201,289,224523,1,0,0:0:0:0:
82,270,224866,1,0,0:0:0:0:
99,151,225209,2,0,B|135:69|135:69|243:69,1,180,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

Curisu

2,241 posts

Joined January 2010

Curisu 2014-07-23T08:30:24+00:00

Random Draw 便宜分

Suggestion
Important

Collab的话sb可以写上ID?

[YAYA]
大方向
变速overuse ~~比起前面妮妮说的overmap我觉着这个更严重点~~原来是你的我唔知啊
连贯性缺乏并且走这种图风的话blanket的精细程度还不太够
hitsound整体是略偏大声的特别是大量的soft-hit在有些安静的段落有突兀感

细节点
00:03:037 - 空的很违和
00:05:523 (5) - remove 如果是跟那乐器的话
00:08:609 (1,2) - 这里既然sv上去了音效就要跟上特别是后面那个缺点高打击感的hitsound
00:13:494 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这加速有点虾仁我是觉得并没有必要
00:18:980 (7,1,2) - 从节奏上讲前面两点slider后面用两个circle会合适点 btw我觉着这开头的加速留下这个就够了其他略overuse
00:22:237 (1) - ...这里又是为什么加速下同
00:29:609 (1,2) - ^
00:43:494 (5,1,2) - 5放上去(slider开头)后面的note上下位置相应顺延这里显得有停滞感
00:52:237 (1,2) - 前面remove NC;后面+NC 突出后面那个circle
00:58:066 (4,5) - vol-5~7%
01:02:866 (2) - 也觉得加速有点违和
01:11:780 (5,6,1) - 从曲子的节奏上来说6还是放中点位不放在1开头好些
01:11:951 - remove whis
01:24:294 (8,9,10) - 考虑blanket可以这样: http://puu.sh/anrZr/118afbc5c3.jpg
01:27:037 (7,8,9) - 这里和01:26:351 (3,4,5)叠在一起并不好看
02:09:380 (4,5,1) - 突然来个这样的1/4 jump不太好
02:40:409 (2,3,4) - 难读并且不那么好看 02:40:751 (4)考虑一下换个位置
02:41:094 (1,2) - 进减速段突然来两个高sv也是虾仁
02:50:866 (1) - 球滚到红点的时间稍微有点没合上拍子
02:53:609 (1) - 好看但是不合节奏和上面一样
03:34:409 (4,5) - 略吵

ganbatte

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yf_bmp

Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper

1,630 posts

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Topic Starter

yf_bmp 2014-07-23T10:10:56+00:00

之前的yaya diff不是我的现在去掉了后把insane改名成yaya了
mod checking

yf_bmp

Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper

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yf_bmp 2014-07-23T13:04:52+00:00

改了挺多的毕竟这图也挺久了....最近想拿出来rank 但觉得有挺多地方要改的...被你一说下了决心

大改还没完目前改到第一段kiai结束

谢谢尼惹

Edit:已经上传了改完的部分

yf_bmp

Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper

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Topic Starter

yf_bmp 2014-07-25T10:11:48+00:00

Yaya done.
Normal diff still need more working.

IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

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Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 2014-07-25T14:53:26+00:00

EZ小船的部份太難了弄得整個難度不平衡能叫他改容易一點?

yf_bmp

Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper

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Joined December 2011

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yf_bmp 2014-07-25T14:58:39+00:00

/w\ 我看看到时候找他啦君喵抱最近都感觉你一直瞎跑挺久不见你了..

IamKwaN

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IamKwaN 2014-07-25T15:28:01+00:00

抱抱 <3
我30號就回到家啦!
不要想念我 *w*

F D Flourite

811 posts

Joined March 2013

F D Flourite 2014-08-10T23:45:22+00:00

Sorry that I come here so late~

[General]

The timing in ZZH's Normal is different from other diffs according to the AIMod. Plz fix it.

[EZ]

00:09:038 (1) - 00:06:295 (1) - 00:11:780 (1) - 其实我觉得这几个开头都可以加Finish
00:24:295 (2,1) - Blanket没做好
00:25:495 (1) - 弧度比较诡异。红点前的部分过于平缓，不像弧形；后面就是弯曲过度。中间也没有明显的音乐变化导致这一弧度转折，建议把红点往下移，前后的弧度修的正常点。
00:28:238 (1) - 其实把这里Ctrl+G的话flow会好一些，但是后面就要跟着一起动。看着办吧。
00:54:123 (2) - 这个头是vocal重音，可以加whistle
01:09:380 (1) - 这个头是鼓点重音，感觉什么音效也没有显得有点空，我觉得加Finish没问题啊。
02:09:723 (5,1) - 交换NC
02:41:438 - 这个音比02:41:609 - 要重很多啊，尝试把spinner结尾提前1/2？
02:45:380 (5) - NC
02:49:666 (1,2) - 这里节奏有问题。1的slidertick音效是clap却落在红线上了。2没压到音。
03:07:323 (5) - 延长1/2拍对准音？
03:15:552 (1) - 直接用spinner盖过去？先不说这里本来音挺多的，在EZ里面转长转盘后没有休息并不友好。
03:51:209 (1,1,2,3,4,5) - 这一段压的节奏不明显OTZ，我replay了好几遍才听出来。建议换一条音轨。
03:56:180 (1) - 结尾静音。

[NM]

00:14:523 (3) - NC ?
00:28:237 (1) - 00:29:608 (2) - 能把这个Z修的前后平行么？
Kiai的音效声音太小了，至少要70%吧
01:23:094 (4) - NC
01:38:180 - 把break的结束时间拉到这里
01:50:180 (1) - 去掉NC
02:59:094 - Break开始时间拉到这里
Umm，整个diff的flow我不太喜欢OTZ（比如这种玩意：01:13:323 (4,5,6,7) - ）

[Hard]

00:11:952 (3) - 大跳+NC
00:54:123 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这个五边形不修修？
01:12:980 (4,1) - 距离不对劲。难读。
01:04:409 (3,1) - 修修overlap
01:52:066 (2) - 把红点往右移一点好看一些？
02:15:209 (1,2) - nazi，没包好
02:28:238 (4,5,6,7,8) - 这里的节奏不好。红线停连打本身就别扭，何况这还是overmap出来的。
02:36:809 (3,4,5) - 这里节奏不好。白线起三连打适合的情况较少，然后滑条尾部落在长白线上也不大好。重音的打击感体现不出来。
03:11:780 (2) - nazi，和03:11:266 (1) - 包好（和03:10:752 (5) - 尾部叠好）
03:27:723 (1,2,3) - 这里的白线起三连打就不好听
整个diff的flow还有可改进的地方。比如02:39:895 (3,4,5) - 看起来距离大丈夫，但是从3->4和4->5的角度就太小了，把5放在02:40:580 (6) - 的尾部打起来就要舒服一些。不过后面就要跟着改了。看着办吧。

[Yaya]
这也是个collab diff吧？

00:53:438 (3) -和00:56:009 (2) - 可以叠啊
01:04:238 (2,3,4,5) - 这个随机跳的flow不好，每次转的弯都太尖了
02:03:209 (2,3,4,5) - ^
02:09:723 (5,1) - swap NC
02:43:323 (4) - 减速NC
01:03:466 (6,1,2,3,4) - 修修弧度？
01:22:752 (6,6,8,9,10) - 移动8910干脆把10和6叠在一起做完全遮挡好看一些
01:25:838 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这个flow也比较尴尬
02:10:752 (5,1) - 看起来没问题，打起来还是flow不舒服
03:56:009 (3) - 我以为你最后会加速……这里可以加

Good luck~ 抱歉晚来了，star~

FastBoy

140 posts

Joined July 2013

FastBoy 2014-08-12T21:11:58+00:00

[KwaN & S.Boat's Easy]

03:29:266 (5) - 為什麼不把這再延長一個8分音呢=A=
這個我不清楚,我只是聽到03:29:952處有鼓聲才這樣想

其實樓上已經mod得七七八八了
我的出現根本可以無視...
其實我真正要的是M4M...
不如就在這裡放了
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/201880
感謝~

yf_bmp

Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper

1,630 posts

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

yf_bmp 2014-08-25T04:04:11+00:00

F D Flourite wrote:
Sorry that I come here so late~

[General]
The timing in ZZH's Normal is different from other diffs according to the AIMod. Plz fix it. OK!
[Hard]
00:11:952 (3) - 大跳+NC 算惹一改就乱了
00:54:123 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这个五边形不修修？换了个方式
01:12:980 (4,1) - 距离不对劲。难读。 OK!
01:04:409 (3,1) - 修修overlap OK!
01:52:066 (2) - 把红点往右移一点好看一些？umh.. 算了
02:15:209 (1,2) - nazi，没包好 OK!
02:28:238 (4,5,6,7,8) - 这里的节奏不好。红线停连打本身就别扭，何况这还是overmap出来的。还好应该后面接的是转盘
02:36:809 (3,4,5) - 这里节奏不好。白线起三连打适合的情况较少，然后滑条尾部落在长白线上也不大好。重音的打击感体现不出来。 OK!
03:11:780 (2) - nazi，和03:11:266 (1) - 包好（和03:10:752 (5) - 尾部叠好） OK!
03:27:723 (1,2,3) - 这里的白线起三连打就不好听 OK!
整个diff的flow还有可改进的地方。比如02:39:895 (3,4,5) - 看起来距离大丈夫，但是从3->4和4->5的角度就太小了，把5放在02:40:580 (6) - 的尾部打起来就要舒服一些。不过后面就要跟着改了。看着办吧。大体没啥影响..要改的话基本就算是remap了吧...
[Yaya]
这也是个collab diff吧？不是hh
00:53:438 (3) -和00:56:009 (2) - 可以叠啊时间隔得挺长的没必要
01:04:238 (2,3,4,5) - 这个随机跳的flow不好，每次转的弯都太尖了钝角跳才难受啦
02:03:209 (2,3,4,5) - ^ ↑
02:09:723 (5,1) - swap NC sure
02:43:323 (4) - 减速NC 前面也减速了
01:03:466 (6,1,2,3,4) - 修修弧度？改了个方式
01:22:752 (6,6,8,9,10) - 移动8910干脆把10和6叠在一起做完全遮挡好看一些这个..算了
01:25:838 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这个flow也比较尴尬还好啊qwq
02:10:752 (5,1) - 看起来没问题，打起来还是flow不舒服 ....先这样好了
03:56:009 (3) - 我以为你最后会加速……这里可以加这里换了些花样
Good luck~ 抱歉晚来了，star~ thx!

edit:
[NM]

00:14:523 (3) - NC ?
00:28:237 (1) - 00:29:608 (2) - 能把这个Z修的前后平行么？ OK
Kiai的音效声音太小了，至少要70%吧 kiai有所提升
01:23:094 (4) - NC OK
01:38:180 - 把break的结束时间拉到这里 OK
01:50:180 (1) - 去掉NC OK
02:59:094 - Break开始时间拉到这里 OK
Umm，整个diff的flow我不太喜欢OTZ（比如这种玩意：01:13:323 (4,5,6,7) - ）打包zzh

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