Hello SNB, my part of the m4m!
[General]
The BG looks kinda blurry since its small but i guess it's okay
I really really dislike your combo colors. You used only 2, and they are too brown-ish. Maybe you could add a somehow reddish combo colour or add some variation.. it's too boring like this. These are the combos i'd use:
SPOILERCombo1 : 154,148,233
Combo2 : 188,45,3
Combo3 : 255,204,128
Combo4 : 181,92,228
^the red combo colour there fits with the gem that the girls have in the hands in easy diff:3
Folder seems okay[Easy]
00:17:303 (2,3) - You could improve this blanket, move the end of the slider 1 grid down.
00:30:009 (1) - Don't think this NC is really necessary
00:54:714 (2) - In order to have better flow, i'd put this slider here:
01:22:950 (4) - Maybe put it a bit more up? D: its too low
01:25:067 (2,3) - This looks better imo:
01:39:891 (1) - Move the return point to x228 y132 for a smoother curve
01:53:303 (2) - 1 grid up
01:53:303 (2,1) - This looks ugly like this, try to copy (1) and paste it on the place of (2) or something like that so they are equal and nicer looking.
02:01:067 (1) - Make it curved like this for a nicer shape? You can add a middle point at x180 y316. Then fix DS with the next slider
02:18:009 (1) - If you wanna make this more consistent, put it exactly where 02:15:185 (1) - was.
Nothing else, I like how you used the slider ticks for some beats.
[Normal]
00:18:009 (2) - This should be at x260 y248 for a better blanket
00:30:009 (3,4,5) - In order to flow better with (2,1)s line, move it a bit down:
00:55:420 (6) - Looks much better at x268 y56 imo
01:04:244 (3,4,5,1) - This curve could be better, like this:
01:24:361 (3) - As this note sound more quiet in the music, i would remove the whistle, sounds much better :3
01:32:126 (2) - Ehh this shape looks ugly with (1) :c maybe make a linear slider:
You decide whether or not you copypaste it to (3) afterwards :3
01:39:185 (1) - Move to x412 y220 for better flow
02:04:244 (8,1) - I would move both of these more to the left, like, put (8) at x164 y284 or something
02:44:832 (2) - Whistle sounds better at start instead of end
02:48:361 (3,4) - They look unpolite, make their curves nicer :3 maybe delete them and add them again so they use the new slider algorythm
02:49:773 (1,2,3,4) - As i pointed out in the previous whistle suggestion, following the 1/1 white tick for whistles would be better. Like, you can put the whistle at 02:50:126 (2) - 's return, and so on.
Nicely done.[Hard/Insane last diff]
00:19:420 (1) - Maybe this note should be further away from 00:18:714 (5) - ?
00:32:479 (2) - It touches the slider too much, move to x199 y186
00:46:950 (5,1) - Don't think it fits to curve it that much, do this:
00:52:597 (5) - NC?
01:01:773 (4,5,1,2,3) - Make a perfect square
01:06:361 (2) - I would delete whistle
01:10:950 (1) - Again, is it necessary to curve it that much D:?
01:22:244 (1) - I think it's funnier to play if you add a simple note here and another one at 01:22:950 (x) - with nothing in between, or a long slider there.
01:25:773 (2) - The blue tick feels weird :/ try a different thing? Like 2 small sliders so you dont put anything at the blue tick
02:43:244 (2) - I don't say it doesn't fit but.. it's kinda.. unexpected o_o as it's the first of many triplets you could make it a small return slider or something
02:58:591 (1) - I love this sound but you made the volume to low, maybe increase to 40ish.
Nothing else, nice and relaxing stuff.
If you apply some of these changes (which, in some cases, are kinda vital for the map) Kei will most likely come and take a look at this because the map will be much better. I'll talk to her.
Good luck!
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