phaZ wrote:

00:18:634 - missing a beat here
->from 00:18:034 to 00:18:634 - http://puu.sh/1EjNI
00:37:714 (6) - move to 248;180
00:42:994 - the slider begins on the red tick -> http://puu.sh/1EjRO
00:48:754 (3) - ^ http://puu.sh/1EjTi
00:52:834 (4) - move to 464;112
00:53:074 (5) - 404;60
00:53:314 (6) - slider (340;104 - 296;104 - 248;128)
01:06:034 (7) - starts on the red tick
01:06:754 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - dont think like "ahh its not perfect but still good" . do it right!
->(2)=194;276 (3)=200;196 (4)=273;162 (5)=340;208 (6)=332;288
02:01:474 (2) - move to 156;48 to improve the curve
02:02:194 (3) - remove
02:02:434 (3) - 392;252 - 348;272 - 304;280
02:02:914 (4) - i dont recommend double-repeats
02:03:634 - circle at 296;224
02:03:874 - 218;200slider144;124
02:05:074 - starts on the red tick http://puu.sh/1Ek5Q
02:20:434 (2) - red tick http://puu.sh/1Ekll
02:21:874 - red tick http://puu.sh/1EknA
02:23:314 (10) - red tick http://puu.sh/1Ekqp
02:28:594 (5) - dont use double-repeats http://puu.sh/1Ektr
02:47:794 - delete (4), move (3) on the next white tick and stack a circle on the slider http://puu.sh/1Ekx5
03:15:634 - red tick
...i didnt mentioned all sliders wich start on a red tick because some of them fits

Kiyro wrote:

[HydeSama's Insane]
Ar+1 Okay, I like.
00:13:474 (6) - Add nc ✖
00:13:714 (1) - Remove nc ✖
00:36:514 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/539685 ✖
00:37:474 (3) - ^ ✖
00:45:634 (1) - The slider should ends on the white tick ✖
01:06:274 (5) - ^ ✖
01:08:674 (7) - ^ ✖
01:14:434 (9) - Add nc ✖
01:14:674 (1) - Remove nc ✖
01:23:554 (3) - Fix it Hmm?
01:36:994 (3) - The slider should ends on the white tick ✖
01:44:194 (5) - Add nc ✖
01:49:114 (1,2,3) - More nearer ✖
01:51:754 (3) - Straight Eh? D; I'm not gay (?)
01:52:354 (5) - The slider should ends on the white tick ✖
01:55:714 (1) - ^ ✖
02:14:194 (1) - The slider should ends on the red tick ✖
02:15:394 (4) - The slider should ends on the white tick ✖
02:18:274 (6) - ^ ✖
03:04:354 (1) - ^ ✖
03:05:314 (3) - ^ ✖
03:09:874 (1) - The slider should ends on the red tick ✖
03:11:074 (4) - The slider should ends on the white tick ✖
Anyway, nice map, especially the insane, good luck for rank. Thanks >:

Nichiyouki wrote:

Hi, blackabyss

My mod from your request in my modding queue (Sorry for mod delay.)

Red = Unrankable
Blue = You should modified
Black = My suggestion

HydeSama's Insane

[*]00:16:354 (9) - Add finish in slider end. √
[*]00:19:954 (2) - I suggest that remove finish. √
[*]00:53:554 (1,1) - Use them is 1 spinner. √
[*]01:44:194 (1) - Add NC here?✖

That's all that I can find them, and hope that my mod will be useful for you.
Overall, nice map. Give a star

Good luck & Merry Christmas~

blackabyss wrote:

Overall, nice map. Give a star eh a star? owo why i can't find it

blackabyss wrote:

btw tsusuko, badly i can't open your link ;w;
i don't know why.

HelloSCV wrote:

From my queue \m/

Easy
00:12:994 (7) - add clap on start forgot :"
01:03:394 (1) - add finish on start done
01:28:354 (1) - reduce slider's length by 01:29:794 - here and 01:30:754 (1) - add note? ( also 01:31:234 (1) - delete NC here ) Sorry no, cause the next Kiai start is same pattern with this Kiai
01:56:674 (1) - NC maybe? fix
02:24:034 (1) - add finish on start done
02:59:074 (1) - delete NC ^
03:00:034 (2) - add NC ^
03:07:714 (6) - ^ ^

Hard
01:56:674 (8) - add clap on start
01:58:354 (3) - ^ on end
02:24:034 (1) - 1 grid up ( last slider point )
*fix all

good mapped! good luck for rank thanks xD

1. AR 8 is better

1. 00:32:194 (2) - try something like this:
   
   
2. 00:38:434 - so short spinner ;_;
3. 00:59:074 (1,2,3,4) - it flows so bad :/ why dont you try to ctrl+g and to do in other way this 2 sliders like:
   
   random but something in this kind

   
4. 01:21:634 (5,6,8,9) - from here remove whistles it sounds like a spamm oly whistle at 01:22:354 (10) - beginning of the slider
5. 01:39:874 (5,6) - make they more simmetrical or stack try under the prev slider
   
   
6. 01:51:754 (3) - this slider is ugly à.à
7. 01:59:314 - try a finish here
8. 02:18:994 (7,1) - remove here all whistles they sond not good
9. 02:31:714 - unsnapped break time
10. 02:48:034 (4) - personally i don't like this slider it do a little slowdown where is not nedded

JudgeTheDude wrote:

Hi, from my queue. /o/

[Easy]
00:53:794 (4) - There's a problem with the shape, but I can't do it better, sorry It's not symetrical. i fixed it a little

Nothing to report in Normal and Hard

Good luck for rank ^^ thanks for your mod too o//

1. Hmm check the timing from BounceBabe
2. Combo colour 3 and 4 are so similar, you can change another color like a white or something
3. Lacks the letterbox during breaks in HydeSama and Hard diffs

• - 00:17:314 (1) - Add a note here to keep the rhythm
  - 01:36:514 (3) - You forgot to add a clap here?
  - 03:24:514 (1) - Considered to extend this slider to the white tick (1/1 to be more specific)

• - 01:45:154 (1) - I don't think the new combo as needed here, perhaps remove it?

• -- Looks nice.

• - 01:31:714 (7) - Unstack this note? To avoid the confuse when you play
  - 02:52:354 (5) - Ugly pattern, I suggest to move this slider to another place

BounceBabe wrote:

Hi, from the Queue! hi o//

Right timing
1. Offset: 9.648ms BPM: 125,00
Resnap sounds after and move the timing points fix thanks

General

I would replace the combo colour purple with orange since you can see a little bit orange and no purple in the BG
Also the 2nd combo colour is too bright imo, maybe you keep purple and replace this blue with orange? PM reply

Easy

03:25:248 (1) - Let the spinner end at 03:27:648 - and the kiai time too fix

Only thing i can find

Hard

00:10:594 (1) - Remove NC done
00:12:514 (1) - ^ ^
01:37:714 (9) - NC remove nxt ^
01:45:874 (8) - ^ ^
02:08:434 (5) - ^ ^
02:23:794 (5) - ^ ^
02:53:554 (1,2,3,4) - This plays odd, and imo even though there is this bg music you should find somethin else
-> delete this whole part 02:52:834 (3,1,2,3,4) - maybe and make a slider which goes from 02:52:834 - to 02:53:194 - and reserve, and this twice, the second one start it at 02:53:794 - Then just add one more circle at 02:54:754 - and done
02:55:234 - Add a spinner at this part maybe and then let it end at 02:56:434 - PM reply
03:11:314 (8) - Just make a tripple slider fits better fix

Fix this and i will tell jericho2442 to give a recheck! thanks for mod, i hope this will be re-check soon o//

BounceBabe wrote:

If you want a recheck, then change the red stuff please, send me a message if you dont want one

MoodyRPG wrote:

Hi there. hi owo//

General

1. Hmm check the timing from BounceBabe done
2. Combo colour 3 and 4 are so similar, you can change another color like a white or something
   how about i change it with this one?
   

   Combo1 : 255,128,0
   Combo2 : 98,196,0
   Combo3 : 255,128,128
   Combo4 : 196,108,210

3. Lacks the letterbox during breaks in HydeSama and Hard diffs
   No, no. At my diff and HydeSama diff are uncheck the letterbox. Maybe Tsusuko forgot to uncheck the letter box, i fix this for her.

Easy

• - 00:17:314 (1) - Add a note here to keep the rhythm did you means here 00:17:328 ? okay fix
  - 01:36:514 (3) - You forgot to add a clap here? no, i just forgot to remove the clap here 01:32:688
  sorry for inconssitant hitsounds pattern
  - 03:24:514 (1) - Considered to extend this slider to the white tick (1/1 to be more specific) okay, so i move this spinner atart to 03:25:488

Hard

• -- Looks nice. thanks :>//

Good job thanks for your mod btw o///

BounceBabe wrote:

Should be fine now, i tell him to check it soon

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi blackabyss ~ hi moe rika xD

Mod time for my Lucky Queue ~ sorry for delay,because i'm sick T.T sick? get well soon please owo)//



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]

1. #3 kiai time should change to 02:57:168 ~ 03:28:368. fix

[Hard]

1. 00:53:328 (6) - Flip this slider,flow much better,like this. fix
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:42:528 - Add a circle,follow with drum. added
3. 03:25:248 (1) - End to 03:28:368,sound much better. yeah, it's much better. fix

[Easy]

1. 00:41:328 (1) - Add new combo to here. added
2. 03:13:008 (1) - ^ ^
3. 01:09:168 (1) - The spinner should start on 01:08:928. um, is it no problem if the spinner satart earlier for newbie? owo) i just want to know. that's all~
   okay changed btw xD
4. 03:10:128 (1) - The spinner should start on 03:09:888. changed
5. 03:25:488 (1) - Start on 03:25:248 - End to 03:28:368. ^

That's all ~ Not bad for beginner mapper ~

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~ thanks rikacchi. okay after Tsusuko give me the update diff. :3//

_HydeSama_ wrote:

Updated

Thanks for wait me, Abyss :3

Kawayi Rika wrote:

[HydeSama's Insane]

1. 00:11:808 (7) - Move 1 grid right,symmetry with 00:11:328 (5). √
2. 01:56:448 (2) - ^,symmetry with 01:57:648 (3). √
3. 01:17:568 - Add a circle,follow with music. √
4. 01:28:128 (1) - The spinner should start on 01:28:368. √
5. 01:53:808 (2,4) - Make these slider no touch stuff,looks more beautiful. Eh? I don't understand.
6. 01:55:728 (1) - This slider isn't symmetry. Any recommendations?
7. 02:14:208 (1) - ^ The same
8. 03:09:888 (1) - ^ The same
9. 02:19:008 (7) - Add new combo and Remove 02:19:488,looks better. √
10. 02:29:568 (8) - Try make this slider overlapping on 02:28:368 (5),like this. How is?
    
    SPOILER

    
11. 02:51:888 (4,5) - Pls don't overlapping these slider,hitburst hidden by 02:52:368 (5)'s arrow,it's unrankable. √
    
    SPOILER

    
12. 03:09:408 (5) - Make symmetry with 03:08:688 (3) - end point. √
13. 03:23:568 (2) - Add new combo and Remove 03:23:088(1).√

Sorry xD

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Recheck ~ No kds pls ~

[General]

1. Inconsistency in Timing,pls make sure and fix they fix all~ hope this one could satisfied

OK ~ Call me back again ~ okay~

- t e n n y a - wrote:

ooow goo rank ~

Garven wrote:

[General]
Tick rate 2 fits this song best. kay, i thinks it's better too

[Easy]
01:54:528 (2,3,4,1) - I appreciate you're trying to finally mix up the rhythms a little bit, but this might be a little bit too much. Maybe extend the 01:53:328 (1) - by one repeat and make a slider with the same length with one repeat at 01:55:248 (3) - lol, i just try to mix it with vocal. okay, i fix it
03:25:248 (1) - Just end this at 03:27:168 - Where it ends right now doesn't really give a satisfying conclusion. yeh fix.

[Hard]
00:11:088 (4,2) - These aren't snapped correctly. Fix all of these instances. d-distances right? i use 1.20 at 00:10:608 (2,3,4,5,1) - for better flow imo
03:25:248 (1) - Just end this at 03:27:168 - Where it ends right now doesn't really give a satisfying conclusion.fix

Andrea wrote:

Another popped map that goes to graveyard \o3o/

- t e n n y a - wrote:

from popner's queueee

General

1. Green hitcombo is almost blend by the map's BG, please change them darker/lighter imo
   sorry i don't think so. cause i had checked it with default skins it seems not blend with the BG ;;
2. It's pretty weird, Normal use 1.20 sv while Easy use 1.40. Not a big deal, but it weird for me n_n for sure, for the first time mapping song till i mapping the Ib song in my graveyard map, i don't really know how too use SV :'D since the normal is guest diff. maybe this one isn't big problems, like you said.

Easy

1. 00:11:568 (5)- : NC here? cause current one combo is too long for Easy diff kay
2. 00:12:048 (6)- : clearly hear clap at here why don't you add clap on slider's head =w=?. My suggestion is add clap here and add Soft additions to make soft-clap hitsound, it'll fit :3 yeah, i think so XD
3. 00:13:968 (1)- : ^ ^
4. 00:15:888 (4)- : ^ ^
5. 00:17:808 (1)- : ^ ^
6. 00:19:728 (4)- : ^ ^
7. 00:20:688 (5)- : prefer to NC here rather than next slider fix
8. 00:23:568 (2)- : clap suggestion ^
9. 00:25:488 (2)- : ^ ^
10. 01:56:688 (1)- : move NC to 01:57:648 (2)- here would be good okay
11. 02:28:848 (3)- : copy and paste slider at 02:27:408 (1)- here would be good! c: no, i don't really like it at all. cause i think it'll cause too much curly slider owo
12. 02:51:408 (1)- : bad shape, move 2nd slider point 2grid to left kay
13. 02:56:688 (1)- : swap nc to 02:57:168 (2)- would be good fix
14. 03:07:728 (1,2)- : make them like this would be very good c: okay
    
    -

    

Hard

1. 00:10:128 (2)- : same clap issues as easy
2. 00:11:088 (4)- : ^
3. 00:12:048 (2)- : ^
4. uh, rest of them I think you'll know it :3 no need for me to wrote all of them rite?
5. 00:12:048 (2,3)- : fix the distance
6. 00:41:328 (4)- : make them straight? like move last slider point to 2grid to left?
7. 01:43:488 (4,5)- :
   my suggestion

   
8. 01:53:088 (10,1)- : pretty hard to read.
   is highly recommended
   fix all at hard

gl

Garven wrote:

The Insane is still pretty eh... the main problem is that you decided to map to patterns instead of the flow of the music, so a lot of the jumps and flow is really disruptive and feels counter-intuitive. The only part that stands out to me is the part that actually followed the music pretty well, and even that part needed a little adjustment due to the end of it going back into the status quo of mirror patterns. The spacing is pretty much random at best, which happens when you do pattern mapping like this. Would you consider rethinking how you constructed his map?

Also you never did reply if you were going to add tick rate 2 to it or not.

spboxer3 wrote:

Congratz blackabyss~
It's your first Ranked map. Joy it :3


Ranked

ThoomyyxD wrote:

Finally, Congratulations for you first map ranked :3