Star Stream wrote:

From my queue
:>!!
[Normal]

1. 00:37:632 (1,2) - y:84 to be centered from 00:36:204 (3) - ?

yea but spacing will be messed up :<
[Hard]

1. 02:08:347 (6) - it was pretty confusing, maybe remove 2 arrow and use a circle at 02:08:704 - instead? yea I will change this.. I just don't know how yet
2. 02:48:704 (7,8) - replace with a 1/4 slider with an arrow? ok~
3. 02:59:775 (6) - make it 1/4 and add a circle at 03:00:132 - instead? too hard I think

[Insane]

1. 00:23:257 (7) - it doesn't really make sense imo, delete it and ctrl + g the '4,5,6'? mm~ maybe.. I will keep it for now
2. 00:26:204 (5) - maybe like this? looks better for me done~
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:34:061 (3,4) - for the drum sounds, make it 1/4 and add 1 arrow? ok
4. 01:14:507 - feels empty, i'd make 5hit stream and make last hit as a slider yea I made new pattern here
5. 01:59:061 (6) - NC? done~
6. 02:03:168 (1,2) - delete these notes and copy 02:02:454 (5) - for 02:02:989 (7) - ? ok~
7. 02:14:864 (1) - extend to 02:17:632 - ? no it's ok, it's following voice here
8. 02:31:382 - finish done~
9. 03:05:847 - i'd add 3 circles to the next red tick here maybe I will change it later :>

Awesome Map
Awesome Song
Awesome Chata
Awesome hoLysoup

Please take my star <3

intoon wrote:

[Hard]

00:46:382 (1) - have many unuse green line..
01:35:311 (2) - kinda bad shape
02:52:454 (2) - nazi x316 y32 (for distance snap)

[Insane]

00:38:257 - i'd like to add a note here
00:52:990 (3) - (nazi) x272 y112
02:12:454 (2,3) - hmm...
03:01:025 (3,4) - a bit look so bad... replaced?
fixed a few things ~ !
i agree so, too

and sorry for my poor modding

give my ★
Thank you!!!

Xierra wrote:

Sorry I'm really late, but here's my mod! Note that I can't play insane.
My modding are mostly suggestions, so don't trust me so much.

Normal

00:17:632 (3) - NC here
00:29:061 (3) - ^
00:30:847 (1) - Remove NC
00:33:704 (1) - ^
00:34:775 (2) - NC here
02:00:489 (3) - Add finish on slider start
02:01:561 (4) - ^
03:04:418 (2) - Add finish

I fixed a few NC's here and there :>
Hard

02:08:882 (7) - Remove this note?

maybe, i'll keep it for now
The flow is great and it's totally sweet and charming! Damn you, rank this map now!
/me throws a star!
Thank you!! :>

Saten wrote:

Hey~
hihi~ I'll just put the things I didn't change here
[Insane]
01:29:239 (2,3) - Reverse? (Ctrl+G) Since you already have a tricky slider here 01:29:597 (4) I didn't change this because I like the way it looks :>
01:46:204 (1,1,1,1) - finish on the head this I didn't change because I think it's too noisy with that many finishes
03:00:980 (3,5) - move these approx 4 grids down oh this placement was intentional
03:17:632 - why are you using regular claps from here? o.o because it's like the outro here, and I want to have a different hitsound, apart from the rest of the song and it feels more relaxed

[Hard]
00:43:882 (2,3,4) - finish in head these are same reason above
01:11:918 (1,2) - I would avoid stacking a 1/1 when the majority of the stacks are 1/2 yea.. but I can't think of a way to place this right now, because it still might be confusing if I place it apart
01:46:739 (2,3,4) - ^
03:17:632 - why regular hitsounds here? this is same reason as above

[Normal]
00:56:204 (3,4,1) - Rotating (3) by 13° would look better imo

SPOILER

actually yes it does. but then that would destroy the previous symmetrical slider :<
03:17:632 - why regular claps? this is same reason as above


That's all from me
Good luck :3 Thank yoU!! :>

Curisu wrote:

wow another Chata's song
Cute Voice
:>!!
[General]
BG is too moe that I can't focus on your map
yea I think so too ><
[Hitsounds]
c1soft-finish isn't loud enough 4 me...This sound feels comfortable but I can hardly hear it lol
It's not a issue just my feeling lol
mm maybe.. let me think about it more
[Normal]
no issue.
03:17:632 - hmm...all soft-clap?
yea I like the claps :>
[Hard]
OD+1
00:18:525 - +clap ; 00:18:882 - remove clap oh yea.. fixed!!
00:28:347 (6) - vol-10 lowered by 5
01:29:597 - +whis :O?? but I don't hear a whistle sound
01:35:311 (2) - ...strange shape? www but I like this shape :>
02:42:989 (4) - imo 0.82/0.83 sv-multiplier here to make a soft transition between 0.5×~1.0×(also quiet part/stronger part)ok i increased spacing
02:48:168 - +fin?no too loud i think
03:29:239 (1) - set your last green line at 03:31:918 haha actually I know what you mean but I really like the fact that the spinner suddenly has no sound near the end it fits well~

[Insane]
00:28:525 (7) - x,y = 56,216 mmm actually I think it's rounder the way it is right now
00:33:347 - remove clap
01:37:454 - ^
02:48:882 - ^
02:56:918 - remove clap ; +whis ok[/color]

awesome map Thank you!!!

- t e n n y a - wrote:

From our queue! :3
hi hoLysoup-san~!
hihihi!!
[Normal]

1. HP -1? fixed
2. 01:10:489 (2)- : add finish on slider repeat and slider end? owo mm probably no~
3. 02:00:489 (3)- : make them curve? since you make curved slider on previous and next sliders owo fixed

[Hard]

1. 00:32:454 (2)- : add finish on slider head? mm no too loud
2. 00:32:989 (3)- : ^ mm no too loud
3. 00:41:918 (2)- : add nc here, since you user 1 nc on 00:34:775 (1)- here ovo fixed
4. 00:51:204 (6)- : add whistle on slider head? since you use whistle on next notes owo fixed
5. 01:44:775 (2)- : same reason as 00:41:918- fixed
6. 01:54:061 (6)- : same reason as 00:51:204- this one probably no
7. 01:59:061 (4)- : nc here? since you use nc at 00:56:204- here fixed

[Insane]

1. 00:16:918 (10,11,12)- : remove clap? to equaling clap at 00:13:972 (3,4) wow long clap mod.. I just fixed a few, I didn't fix all of the ones below :>
2. 00:51:114 (8)- : add clap?
3. 00:53:972 (7)- : ^
4. 00:56:829 (4)- : ^
5. 01:02:543 (8)- : ^
6. 01:05:400 (8)- : ^
7. 01:08:257 (8)- : ^
8. 01:31:204 (5,6)- : remove clap? same reason as 00:16:918-
9. 01:45:400 (7)- : add clap?
10. 01:56:829 (7)- : ^
11. 01:59:686 (3)- : ^
12. 02:05:400 (4)- : ^
13. 02:11:114 (8)- : ^
14. 03:02:543 (8)- : ^
15. 03:08:257 (2)- : ^
16. 03:13:972 (4)- : ^
17. 03:19:686 (4)- : ^
18. 03:21:114 (3)- : ^
19. 03:22:543 (3)- : ^
20. 03:25:400 (7)- : ^

that's all I can find
rank good luck >w<
Thanks so much for modding!!

alacat wrote:

hoLysoup! (^^)/
yay alakyatto!
[Normal]
●HP Drain rate -1.I think this is a little difficult for beginners. >_< fixed
●00:11:918 (1) - try to move to x:292 y:52 (spacing?)
●00:17:632 (3) - add new combo ? fixed
●00:38:704 (2) - add whistle on the slider's repeat~ fixed
●00:39:775 (3) - try to bend slider to the opposite direction ? :3 flow is good imo fixed
●00:41:918 (2) - ^ fixed
●01:14:775 - try to put 40% volume ? loud a little >_< fixed
●02:00:489 (3) - add new combo ? same as here.00:57:632 (1) - fixed
●02:34:061 (3) - add calp on the slider's end mm not this one
●02:36:561 (3) - add whistle on the slider's head ^

[Hard]
●00:24:239 (2) - Change curve slider? :> www ok fixed
●00:26:739 (2) - add whistle on the slider's head mm not this one
●00:57:632 (1,2,3) - try to put gradually volume? :3 fixed
●01:30:847 (6) - add whistle on the slider's repeat~same as here.01:27:989 (6) -
●02:00:489 (1,2,3) - same as here.00:57:632 (1,2,3) - fixed
●02:26:204 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - no hit sound ? put more ~ but I don't know what to put.. haha
●02:34:775 (1,3) - add whistle on the slider's head fixed
●03:03:347 (1,2,3) - same as here.00:57:632 (1,2,3) fixed

[Insane]
●00:28:168 (3) - 1 grid down ? mm I'll think about this :>
●00:28:525 (7) - add whistle on the slider's end fixed
●00:39:240 (5,6) - switch these notes ? try to make jump :3 mm maybe~
●02:11:025 (7,8,9) - Rotate by around 10°? You could improve this flow a bit. fixed
●02:29:061 (1) - add whistle on the slider's head fixed
●02:45:668 (8) - try to change curve slider ? Aim for the next note :3 fixed
●03:26:204 (1) - more spacing? fixed


chata\^_^/ ganbatte ~ ! yay alacat! arigatou!