1. Easy (0,73 stars, 85 notes)
2. Hard (4,98 stars, 369 notes)
3. Normal (3,58 stars, 183 notes)

1. 00:01:843 (3,1) - Umm, what's with the spacing inconsistency here...
2. 00:04:243 (3,1,1,1) - ^ (And they seem to be everywhere... Not like it's going to hinder playing a lot, but it can be confusing sometimes, like 01:32:743 (2,1,2) and 01:42:343 (2,1,2). Some of them seems forced to make a particular pattern, from what I've seen.)

1. 00:15:043 (3,1) - Err, the spacing...
2. 00:27:493 - Add note? Feels really empty here...
3. 00:32:293 - ^
4. 00:37:093 - ^
5. 00:45:043 - ^
6. 00:47:743 - ^
7. 00:50:143 - ^
8. 00:55:093 - ^
9. 00:55:543 - ^

1. 00:21:643 (2,3,1) - ...The flow is seriously bad around here. Can't give any suggestions for replacement, but I think it's because of the sudden 1/4 jump between 00:21:493 (1,2), and the way 00:21:943 (3,1) is spaced.
2. 00:25:543 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2) - ^ (The 00:26:293 (5,1) jump broke this part. Also, this kind of pattern made me hit 00:27:493 (2) too quickly sometimes.)
3. 00:45:343 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ...I'm not really sure if this anti-jump stream (?) is going to be readable on everyone's first try...
4. 01:54:793 (1,2,3,4,5) - The flow... The cursor movement on this part made the objects very, very awkward to hit, I swear.

1. Tick Rate 2 sounds better with the current BPM (Just look at the star slider in Easy at 01:16:243, don't you feel it?), and the SV changes in Hard will be more noticeable.
   You should add at least, 1 spinner in ALL DIFFS to avoid tie scores.

1. 00:27:493 (2) - I feel this circle really awkward for 2 reasons. 1- It's under of a slider and 2- It's just following nothing in the song. I suggest you to delete it.
2. 00:32:293 (2) - Hidden circle under of a slider, messy for beginner players.
3. 00:37:093 (2) - ^
4. 01:15:043 - I really love how you did them waterfall sliders ♥.
5. 01:21:043 (6) - Just a suggestion, seems better at my eyes http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/582472

1. 00:21:193 (4) - Sorry if I'm wrong, but I don't find any sense of that kickback-slider there.
2. 00:57:043 (3) - I suggest something like this... http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/582480 more beauty and not that generic as you're mapping by now.
3. 01:07:843 (3) - NC for consistency with Easy and Normal.

Mercurial wrote:

Let's try, so much time since my last mod.


General

1. Tick Rate 2 sounds better with the current BPM (Just look at the star slider in Easy at 01:16:243, don't you feel it?), and the SV changes in Hard will be more noticeable. Done.
   You should add at least, 1 spinner in ALL DIFFS to avoid tie scores. I know, but spinners don't fit this song. I could add one at the end (start: 02:03:043 - end: 02:05:293) but I don't like it.

Normal

1. 00:27:493 (2) - I feel this circle really awkward for 2 reasons. 1- It's under of a slider and 2- It's just following nothing in the song. I suggest you to delete it. I added these circles because people were complaining about too much empty space here. Anyway, 1- this doesn't really matter since this is a Normal and 2- it follows the guitar in the background.
2. 00:32:293 (2) - Hidden circle under of a slider, messy for beginner players. Same as above
3. 00:37:093 (2) - ^ ^
4. 01:15:043 - I really love how you did them waterfall sliders ♥. lol thanks!
5. 01:21:043 (6) - Just a suggestion, seems better at my eyes http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/582472 I don't like it, sorry. (to be honest, I don't really like this spacing too, if next modders will suggest me something better that doesn't break flow/spacing I'll be happy to change it)

Hard

1. 00:21:193 (4) - Sorry if I'm wrong, but I don't find any sense of that kickback-slider there. It follows the drums.
2. 00:57:043 (3) - I suggest something like this... http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/582480 more beauty and not that generic as you're mapping by now. I don't like it, sorry.
3. 01:07:843 (3) - NC for consistency with Easy and Normal. Hmm... let's see what the next modders think about it, for now I'm not going to add it.

Nice mapping, looking at all the Copy-Paste you have there. Good Luck.

1. Clear!

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:19:858 (3) - personally, i'd like to make a curve upward for artistic.~ since you used lots of straight line slider, maybe you can try a change here~ seems it's really suit the pattern. yea you can also do the same thing on 00:24:658 (4)~ my example~
      SPOILER

      
   2. 01:10:258 (4) - (highly recommended) umm.. since the refrain part has began, why not try a bit more complex rhythm to make the rhythm fit the song better?~ there has a beat on 01:10:708 and you can shorten the repeat slider to let it repeat at blue tick, after that adding a 1/1 slider to fill the rhythm~ just like.
      SPOILER

      
   3. 01:46:258 (1) - (emphasis) yea it indeed is a creative and beautiful star~ and also suitable for the music. but the overlapped of the repeat slider is also confused for beginners atm. the repeat icon is similar with the sign of combo(1).. try trimming the shape of the slider to avoid the overlap?~ would be looked better.
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   4. 02:03:058 (1) - since the circle here is set on the blue tick, people (beginners mostly) may confused for that, how about remove the repeat of that slider and adding a 3/4 slider which is start at 02:04:858 ?~ my example~
      SPOILER

      
   　
   [ Normal]
   　
   
   1. Unrankable stuff
      ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
      
      1. None!
      　
   2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
      ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
      
      1. 00:27:508 (2) - (emphasis) i'd prefer to aviod the stack under the tail of the provious slider like here, the combo burst of the previous is really confused for who is using the defult skin.. yea since the circle is on the blue tick, it's accord with the rhythm of the song but also a bit hard to read as in normal diff.~ and also the same problem i think you should fix on the following pattern such like 00:32:308 (2) etc.
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      2. 00:45:658 (4) - removing the nc here, it's useless and the beat here also sounds like on the same bar with the previous notes~. (the same problem is also appeared at 00:48:058 (1) and 00:50:458 (1) etc.
         ---
      3. 01:06:658 (5) - it's very suitable to put a 1/1 slider so why not convert the circle here to that slider?~ maybe you can try the arrange and the shape of slider like this. :>
         SPOILER

         
      4. 01:22:558 (2,3) - yea also the rhythm suggestion~. i can heard a sound from piano though it's a bit weak at 01:23:308.. but it can be a pretty variation to make the rhythm much more abundant and funnier to play.. try this rhythm? and also enclosed here with my position example~
         SPOILER

         
      　
   3. Hitsounds
      ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
      
      1. 01:34:258 (1) - since the tail of the slider is on the fourth white tick of this bar. it would be really suitable for a clap on that slider's ending~. try it?
         ---
      2. 02:04:858 (5) - also set a clap on that second repeat?~ it's here 02:05:158 . sounds pretty and suitable for the song from my heard.~
   　
   [ Hard]
   　
   
   1. Unrankable stuff
      ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
      
      1. None!
      　
   2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
      ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
      
      1. 00:21:658 (2,3) - the arrange between these two sliders looks not as well as the other places you did.. i think you can fix it better easily by the way of adjusting the shape and spacing of the slider (3)~ how about to try this? also flows better imo.
         SPOILER

         
      2. 01:30:508 (6) - umm.. how about changing the circle to a 1/4 slider for rhythm filling?~ would be sounds better imo.~ and also make the directing of the slider toward the same direction as the slider (1) of the following combo. just like this~(yea also the same thing at 01:40:108 (6)
         SPOILER

         
      3. 02:00:058 (2) - ctrl+g? would be much funnier during play imo~
      　
   3. Hitsounds
      ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
      
      1. 00:31:858 (5) - the clap fit the tail of the slider also~ (yea also the same thing at 00:36:658 (5) and slider 00:41:458 (4)'s repeat which on the blue tick etc.
         ---
      2. 00:33:658 (2) - sounds like you also missed a clap here~ consistent with the clap you already set at 00:36:058 (2) and 00:38:458 (2) etc. ~

Strawberry wrote:

Hey~ From my queue. :>
and happy chinese new year.~~ Happy chinese new year to you, too!

[ General]
　

1. Clear!

　
[ Easy]
　

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:19:858 (3) - personally, i'd like to make a curve upward for artistic.~ since you used lots of straight line slider, maybe you can try a change here~ seems it's really suit the pattern. yea you can also do the same thing on 00:24:658 (4)~ my example~
      SPOILER

      
      Done.
   2. 01:10:258 (4) - (highly recommended) umm.. since the refrain part has began, why not try a bit more complex rhythm to make the rhythm fit the song better?~ there has a beat on 01:10:708 and you can shorten the repeat slider to let it repeat at blue tick, after that adding a 1/1 slider to fill the rhythm~ just like.
      SPOILER

      
      Looks nice, but I want to keep a very simple rhythm.
   3. 01:46:258 (1) - (emphasis) yea it indeed is a creative and beautiful star~ and also suitable for the music. but the overlapped of the repeat slider is also confused for beginners atm. the repeat icon is similar with the sign of combo(1).. try trimming the shape of the slider to avoid the overlap?~ would be looked better. I already tried doing this but then the star looks horrible lol
      ---
   4. 02:03:058 (1) - since the circle here is set on the blue tick, people (beginners mostly) may confused for that, how about remove the repeat of that slider and adding a 3/4 slider which is start at 02:04:858 ?~ my example~
      SPOILER

      
      Done.
   　
   [ Normal]
   　
   
   1. Unrankable stuff
      ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
      
      1. None!
      　
   2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
      ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
      
      1. 00:27:508 (2) - (emphasis) i'd prefer to aviod the stack under the tail of the provious slider like here, the combo burst of the previous is really confused for who is using the defult skin.. yea since the circle is on the blue tick, it's accord with the rhythm of the song but also a bit hard to read as in normal diff.~ and also the same problem i think you should fix on the following pattern such like 00:32:308 (2) etc. I want to keep these stacks, it's not that hard to see/read these circles.
         ---
      2. 00:45:658 (4) - removing the nc here, it's useless and the beat here also sounds like on the same bar with the previous notes~. (the same problem is also appeared at 00:48:058 (1) and 00:50:458 (1) etc. There's an antijump here that's why I added these new combos.
         ---
      3. 01:06:658 (5) - it's very suitable to put a 1/1 slider so why not convert the circle here to that slider?~ maybe you can try the arrange and the shape of slider like this. :>
         SPOILER

         
         I want to keep this part empty to emphasize the chorus.
      4. 01:22:558 (2,3) - yea also the rhythm suggestion~. i can heard a sound from piano though it's a bit weak at 01:23:308.. but it can be a pretty variation to make the rhythm much more abundant and funnier to play.. try this rhythm? and also enclosed here with my position example~
         SPOILER

         
         Looks nice but sounds a bit weird to me.
      　
   3. Hitsounds
      ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
      
      1. 01:34:258 (1) - since the tail of the slider is on the fourth white tick of this bar. it would be really suitable for a clap on that slider's ending~. try it? Added.
         ---
      2. 02:04:858 (5) - also set a clap on that second repeat?~ it's here 02:05:158 . sounds pretty and suitable for the song from my heard.~ You're right, added.
   　
   [ Hard]
   　
   
   1. Unrankable stuff
      ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
      
      1. None!
      　
   2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
      ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
      
      1. 00:21:658 (2,3) - the arrange between these two sliders looks not as well as the other places you did.. i think you can fix it better easily by the way of adjusting the shape and spacing of the slider (3)~ how about to try this? also flows better imo.
         SPOILER

         
         I don't like it, sorry.
      2. 01:30:508 (6) - umm.. how about changing the circle to a 1/4 slider for rhythm filling?~ would be sounds better imo.~ and also make the directing of the slider toward the same direction as the slider (1) of the following combo. just like this~(yea also the same thing at 01:40:108 (6)
         SPOILER

         
         Looks nice, but I want to keep these little parts empty.
      3. 02:00:058 (2) - ctrl+g? would be much funnier during play imo~ I don't want to make spacing larger than 1,46x.
      　
   3. Hitsounds
      ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
      
      1. 00:31:858 (5) - the clap fit the tail of the slider also~ (yea also the same thing at 00:36:658 (5) and slider 00:41:458 (4)'s repeat which on the blue tick etc. Sounds a bit weird to me, but let's see what the next modder thinks about it.
         ---
      2. 00:33:658 (2) - sounds like you also missed a clap here~ consistent with the clap you already set at 00:36:058 (2) and 00:38:458 (2) etc. ~ Ops, you're right, added.

　
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that's all.

really beautiful song and map. GL with ranking~!

xxheroxx wrote:

About normal diff: the volume is the same on every diff, if you mean that I should add more hitsounds then I have to disagree with you, I think hitsounds are fine here.

About hard diff: It's fine imo, but let's see what the next modders thinks about it.


Thanks.

xxheroxx wrote:

volume is the same on every diff

• 
  - Nothing to say sorry D:

• 
  - 00:34:258 (3) - add whistle on end ( just like you did 00:29:458 (3) - here )
  - 00:41:458 (4) - ^
  - 00:43:858 (3) - ^ ( if you did above )
  - 01:21:058 (6) - looks little bit ugly http://puu.sh/23wci try this?
  - 02:04:858 (5) - delete clap on 3rd and add clap on 2nd is better ( as you did on Hard )

1. hmm why didn't you add clap on 2nd 4th short white tick? ( i mean like 01:08:458 (3) - this slider's start ) it feels really empty :/
   - 00:17:008 (5) - add note here with clap would be great
   - 00:26:908 (3) - why not clap here? i can clealy here drum sound here
   - 00:36:658 (5) - add finish on start and whistle on repeat
   - 01:10:708 (3) - how about add note here it will fits better for song imo
   - 01:27:808 (4) - delete this clap and 01:27:958 (5) - add clap on start fits better
   - 01:36:358 (4) - i'm expect to use ctrl G when i'm playing this part
   - 01:32:608 (4,5) - you may know this xD
   - 01:34:708 (7) - delete clap
   - 01:37:408 (4,5) - know this, right?
   - 01:42:358 (5) - ^
   - 01:44:308 (7) - and delete here
   - 01:51:508 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - looks like little bit crowded try other pattern?
   - 02:05:008 (2) - missed clap?

Pokie wrote:

Request from Forum PM

　General

1. Romanised Title should be Saigo ni Kimi ga Ita. The reason why I asked to, is that we use spaces to separate if Japanese particals exist. Are you sure? I mean, look. Anyway I guess I'm wrong, fixed.
2. Pluse.jpg isn't perfectly fit with 640x480, is it intentional? Yup, this is the reason.

　Easy

1. Rhythms are quite easy, plus it's a song with super low BPM. How about increasing OAD by 1? Ok
2. Well, I wonder if a reverse slider exists for 4 stanzas could be used here...
   01:59:458 (3) - Drums started from this point, consider adding a clap on? Ok

　Normal

• 00:27:508 (2) - hmm..It's kind of hard for sight-reading by recognizing this single circle on 1/4 beats, plus it's now stacking under a slider. I'd suggest to use a slider instead, for example:
  
  [list:11231]- For the reason why I chose 00:27:958 - for ending point: You can sightly hear that there's a soft drum sound from the music, should be a suitable place for ending this slider. Hmm... I actually don't want to have a slider here, I don't really like how it sounds.

00:32:308 (2) - 00:37:108 (2) - ^, same here. ^
01:19:858 (5,6) - oh wow, overlapping slider tracks by each other wasn't an good idea here. It'll be great if you can consider some different pattern like these: (needs spacing changes for following notes afterward)

SPOILER

Fixed in another way

　Hard

• 00:26:458 (1,2,3,1) - This pattern gives a better flow for my own, it'll be appreciate if you have the same thought too >_<
  
  SPOILER

  
  I'm sorry but I want to keep my pattern D:
  
  01:35:608 (1) - Probably missing claps for the whole slider? Ops, you're right.
  02:02:458 (7) - (slider's head) ^, missing a clap here. No, you're wrong, claps are following a specific scheme here. (01:46:258 ~ 02:03:058)

Awesome.
Sorry for taking it so long, I'm kinda stressed by too much requests orz.
And yes, please call me back when you've done changes!