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Itou Kanako - Hacking to the Gate

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Topic Starter
Chloeleta
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年11月11日 at 15:05:12

Artist: Itou Kanako
Title: Hacking to the Gate
Source: Steins;Gate
Tags: 5pb nitroplus nitro+ AmamiyaYuko Skystar Chloe DakeDekaane
BPM: 161
Filesize: 7173kb
Play Time: 04:04
Difficulties Available:
  1. Collab (5 stars, 791 notes)
  2. Dekaane's Normal (3.04 stars, 252 notes)
Download: Itou Kanako - Hacking to the Gate
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Easy - Waiting....
Normal - Done.. By DakeDekaane.
Hard - Waiting....
Collab - Done.. By AmamiyaYuko and me.
lkx_Shore
offset用1201
tag加上5pb nitroplus nitro+
排版还需要多多参考正常图...
另外要多善用Ctrl+>,<,J,H.
还有Ctrl+shift+S/R/D
节奏比较单一...(3连用的地方不是很好之类的,抓节奏的时候要跟轨,歌词和背景音选一个吧)

offset不对,需要remap.remap以前就不mod图里面的东西了...
Topic Starter
Chloeleta

lkx_shore wrote:

offset用1201 fix
tag加上5pb nitroplus nitro+ ^
排版还需要多多参考正常图...
另外要多善用Ctrl+>,<,J,H.
还有Ctrl+shift+S/R/D R我有用S/D不太会...
节奏比较单一...(3连用的地方不是很好之类的,抓节奏的时候要跟轨,歌词和背景音选一个吧) 这个... 我大部分跟鼓点 偶尔跟VOCAL ;_;不行吗?

offset不对,需要remap.remap以前就不mod图里面的东西了...
lkx_Shore

Chloeleta wrote:

lkx_shore wrote:

offset用1201 fix
tag加上5pb nitroplus nitro+ ^
排版还需要多多参考正常图...
另外要多善用Ctrl+>,<,J,H.
还有Ctrl+shift+S/R/D R我有用S/D不太会...
节奏比较单一...(3连用的地方不是很好之类的,抓节奏的时候要跟轨,歌词和背景音选一个吧) 这个... 我大部分跟鼓点 偶尔跟VOCAL ;_;不行吗?感觉没跟到...

offset不对,需要remap.remap以前就不mod图里面的东西了...
Nagae-Iku
[General]
缺少2.5星以下的难度

[Chloe's Insane]
AR+1
00:08:468 (4,5,1) - 遮挡 (建议 00:08:468 (4) - nc 00:08:654 (1) - 取消nc)
00:30:082 (3) - 取消遮挡
00:49:648 (1,2,3,4) - 节奏需多加斟酌
02:19:089 (1,2,3) - ^
03:18:095 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - ^
03:42:381 (5) - 不可以重叠slider

对于insane难度来说 排列单一 节奏需多变
建议多参考些已经rank的图
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/30876 这张的排列比较大众化
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/30123 这张比较有个性
Topic Starter
Chloeleta

palmolive wrote:

[General]
缺少2.5星以下的难度

[Chloe's Insane]
AR+1 改了
00:08:468 (4,5,1) - 遮挡 (建议 00:08:468 (4) - nc 00:08:654 (1) - 取消nc) ^
00:30:082 (3) - 取消遮挡 ^
00:49:648 (1,2,3,4) - 节奏需多加斟酌 我再考虑一下好了
02:19:089 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
03:18:095 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - ^ ^
03:42:381 (5) - 不可以重叠slider 改了

对于insane难度来说 排列单一 节奏需多变
建议多参考些已经rank的图
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/30876 这张的排列比较大众化
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/30123 这张比较有个性
继续学习作图T.T
lkx_Shore
BG何在
图的信息界面表明GD的作者
那个,这图是认真的rank向还是简单的练手然后坟掉?
如果是rank的话,可以有三个红难度(Insane)一个橙难度(Hard)一个蓝难度(Normal)一个绿难度(Easy)
当然现在的Hard都变成红难度了也是很常见的...


Chloe's insane
00:02:691 (1) - 可以加Finish(一般情况下大白线加finish)
00:02:691 (1,2,3,4) - 这里包括后面的4方跳建议用ctrl+shift+D切到1/2重做...现在怎么看都不像是正方形(正方形会更加美观)
00:03:437 (1,2,3,4) - 突然反过来会不太舒服(当然了,坑人的话...)
00:04:182 (1) - 可以加finish(后面也是,看情况加finish)
00:08:468 (1,2,3) - 我觉得好不科学...建议换个位置(或者继续留着坑人)
00:10:890 (1) - 不太推荐用这样的滑条...还是用正常的弯滑条比较好
00:11:635 (1) - 用3个点就好
00:14:617 (1,2,3) - 3连带一个滑条更好
00:18:716 (6) - 放这不太好,向上调整点,和黄色的第一个note还有上一个滑条形成一个三角形会比较好
00:29:523 (1) - 又折返到右边不觉得很不顺手吗...
00:30:828 (6) - 这种形状的滑条不好看
00:33:064 (9,10) - 这个2连太勉强了
00:33:623 (1) - 漏了个clap
00:35:486 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里跟的是哪个轨...不要两个同时跟...感觉很奇怪
00:40:704 (5) - 建议删了这个note,这里用一个长滑条带过比较好(长连打起点一般都是白线...红线比较不科学少数歌曲除外)
00:46:294 (3,4,5) - 这个3连好勉强
00:50:020 (3) - 听起来很奇怪
00:56:169 (1) - 可以用个滑条带到00:56:542 -,后面同上
01:02:691 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里用大间距会比较好...如果要用小间距,全部note都放一个地方吧
01:05:207 (7) - 删了这个note,说起来这里放连打太违和,这歌也没什么地方有机会放5连打或者以上的...别放最好
01:06:604 (3,4,5,6,7) - 不适合用五连,可以改成从01:06:232 (1) - 红线这放一个note 01:06:418 (2,3,4) - 白线3连
01:12:381 (4,5,6,7,8) - 这里节奏抓得很好(其实就是正常啦)
01:17:132 (1) - 删了这个note
01:28:964 (3) - 为什么用太鼓的音效...原版的finish就挺好
02:04:927 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里有跟的那个轨...
02:03:437 (1,2) - 这种可以保留,蓝白搭配才是2连的精髓
02:13:312 (1,2,3,1,2) - 容我说一句卧槽,好吧这里太坑,打起来也不顺手
02:16:294 (6) - 。。。我只见过连打起点堆note,没见过结尾这样堆的
02:19:461 (3) - 听起来很奇怪
02:30:455 (3) - 这2连太勉强...finish也得去掉
02:41:263 (3,4,5) - 听起来好勉强
02:53:747 (2,3,4) - 同勉强
03:10:331 (1) - 用这么慢的速度干啥...音量为什么调这么低,而且这部分的节奏明显比较...如果抓不到节奏,可以留空
03:18:095 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - ...转圈带过比较科学,如果你不留空
03:51:325 (4,5,6) - 这里连打太勉强

Finish用得有点乱了...还有好多地方比较空,note结束以后会无所事事一会儿,这种地方善用滑条就能解决
排版不科学,滑条不美观,这次mod多数针对节奏来进行mod.
多看看别的图的排版再进行remap吧,remap的同时注意排版顺不顺手(当然留点小坑也是行的)
这图没什么大跳,可以适当增加,排版多注意左右对称,这样图会更美观
不是有gd么,可以多多参考别人的节奏
请多加油._. 作图还是得多实践
lkx_Shore
《论BG的重要性》
好的bg可以吸引更多的玩家,并且让玩家用bg来记忆这图(例如不记名字但记得住bg的玩家)
Topic Starter
Chloeleta

lkx_shore wrote:

BG何在
图的信息界面表明GD的作者
那个,这图是认真的rank向还是简单的练手然后坟掉?
如果是rank的话,可以有三个红难度(Insane)一个橙难度(Hard)一个蓝难度(Normal)一个绿难度(Easy)
当然现在的Hard都变成红难度了也是很常见的...


Chloe's insane
00:02:691 (1) - 可以加Finish(一般情况下大白线加finish)fix
00:02:691 (1,2,3,4) - 这里包括后面的4方跳建议用ctrl+shift+D切到1/2重做...现在怎么看都不像是正方形(正方形会更加美观)fix
00:03:437 (1,2,3,4) - 突然反过来会不太舒服(当然了,坑人的话...) 我还觉得蛮舒服的 不坑 算是尝试自己的专用梗(132式3正3反)
00:04:182 (1) - 可以加finish(后面也是,看情况加finish) fix
00:08:468 (1,2,3) - 我觉得好不科学...建议换个位置(或者继续留着坑人)这一段要REMAP
00:10:890 (1) - 不太推荐用这样的滑条...还是用正常的弯滑条比较好 ^
00:11:635 (1) - 用3个点就好 没看懂.. 什么意思?
00:14:617 (1,2,3) - 3连带一个滑条更好 先不改
00:18:716 (6) - 放这不太好,向上调整点,和黄色的第一个note还有上一个滑条形成一个三角形会比较好 这一大段都准备重排
00:29:523 (1) - 又折返到右边不觉得很不顺手吗... ^
00:30:828 (6) - 这种形状的滑条不好看 是吗T.T 我重拉一下
00:33:064 (9,10) - 这个2连太勉强了 fix
00:33:623 (1) - 漏了个clap ^
00:35:486 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里跟的是哪个轨...不要两个同时跟...感觉很奇怪 跟的重音;_;
00:40:704 (5) - 建议删了这个note,这里用一个长滑条带过比较好(长连打起点一般都是白线...红线比较不科学少数歌曲除外)
00:46:294 (3,4,5) - 这个3连好勉强 好 我改一下
00:50:020 (3) - ^
00:56:169 (1) - 可以用个滑条带到00:56:542 -,后面同上 我试试
01:02:691 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里用大间距会比较好...如果要用小间距,全部note都放一个地方吧 再考虑一下
01:05:207 (7) - 删了这个note,说起来这里放连打太违和,这歌也没什么地方有机会放5连打或者以上的...别放最好 fix
01:06:604 (3,4,5,6,7) - 不适合用五连,可以改成从01:06:232 (1) - 红线这放一个note 01:06:418 (2,3,4) - 白线3连 改了
01:12:381 (4,5,6,7,8) - 这里节奏抓得很好(其实就是正常啦) QAQ
01:17:132 (1) - 删了这个note 改了
01:28:964 (3) - 为什么用太鼓的音效...原版的finish就挺好 先保留...
02:04:927 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里有跟的那个轨... 同前
02:03:437 (1,2) - 这种可以保留,蓝白搭配才是2连的精髓
02:13:312 (1,2,3,1,2) - 容我说一句卧槽,好吧这里太坑,打起来也不顺手 这一段REMAP
02:16:294 (6) - 。。。我只见过连打起点堆note,没见过结尾这样堆的 重排了
02:19:461 (3) - 听起来很奇怪 同前
02:30:455 (3) - 这2连太勉强...finish也得去掉 我再看看...
02:41:263 (3,4,5) - 听起来好勉强 改了
02:53:747 (2,3,4) - 同勉强 ^
03:10:331 (1) - 用这么慢的速度干啥...音量为什么调这么低,而且这部分的节奏明显比较...如果抓不到节奏,可以留空 如果留空的话BREAK TIME就要35秒 太长了T.T
03:18:095 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - ...转圈带过比较科学,如果你不留空 暂时保留
03:51:325 (4,5,6) - 这里连打太勉强 改了

Finish用得有点乱了...还有好多地方比较空,note结束以后会无所事事一会儿,这种地方善用滑条就能解决
排版不科学,滑条不美观,这次mod多数针对节奏来进行mod. 重排!
多看看别的图的排版再进行remap吧,remap的同时注意排版顺不顺手(当然留点小坑也是行的)
这图没什么大跳,可以适当增加,排版多注意左右对称,这样图会更美观
不是有gd么,可以多多参考别人的节奏
请多加油._. 作图还是得多实践
:3 谢拉拉姐!
sherrie__fay
mod req via QQ

[Chloe's Insane]

  1. 00:27:101 (3) - 拿掉开头clap
  2. 00:31:760 (3) - 开头换clap
  3. 00:37:909 (2) - 去掉结尾clap 然后开头+finish
  4. 00:49:461 (8,9) - 和后面堆叠起来 或者一排都好 就是别搞这么蛋碎的排列
  5. 00:50:207 (4) - X:232 Y:28
  6. 00:56:169 (1) - 去掉NC
  7. 00:57:660 (1) - ^
  8. 同时建议这里不要stack 摆开了会比较好 否则看着太空了
  9. 01:01:946 (8) - 滑条拉到蓝线结束
  10. 01:02:691 (1,2,3,4,5) - 首先开头不要和01:02:319 (1) - 一起 尊重DS比较好 起床这里spacing最好放开 不要用这么小气的方式
  11. 01:05:393 (2) - 删
  12. 01:05:766 (5) - 删
  13. 01:05:859 - 在这加个三连
  14. 01:06:884 (6) - 删 然后7重新安排位置
  15. 01:11:356 (5) - 删
  16. 01:13:312 (6,7,8) - 挨太近不美观 拉开
  17. 01:14:617 (1,2,3,4,5) - 可以做成一整个串
  18. 01:17:319 (2) - 删
  19. 01:17:691 (5) - 删
  20. 01:17:784 (5) - 加三连
  21. 01:45:269 (6) - 删
  22. 01:45:455 - +note做三连
  23. 01:54:492 (4,5,6) - 切成1/6下四连
  24. 02:15:828 (1) - 删
  25. 02:16:200 (12) - 删
  26. 02:18:902 (10,11,1) - 和后面堆叠起来 或者一排都好
  27. 02:31:387 (8) - 折返延长一个拍
  28. 02:34:834 (3) - 删
  29. 02:35:207 (6) - 删
  30. 02:35:300 (6) - 做三连
  31. 02:35:300 (6) - +note
  32. 02:46:760 (3) - 删
  33. 02:47:132 (6) - 删
  34. 02:47:225 (7) - 三连
  35. 02:50:020 (9,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 自己拆三连
  36. 02:52:536 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
  37. 02:51:697 (5) - 分开来摆
  38. 03:10:051 - 什么都听不见了
  39. 03:18:095 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - 哦草这让HD情何以堪 不堆叠会死?
  40. 03:32:878 (1,2,3,4) - 歪了
  41. 03:37:722 (1,2,3,4,5) - 不堆叠会死???
还有那么多堆叠的note露出来都很好 叠在一起显得图无比的空旷
滑条可以不用那么弯曲 直来直去也显得很干净。 ;)
Topic Starter
Chloeleta

sherrie__fay wrote:

mod req via QQ

[Chloe's Insane]

  1. 00:27:101 (3) - 拿掉开头clap
  2. 00:31:760 (3) - 开头换clap
  3. 00:37:909 (2) - 去掉结尾clap 然后开头+finish fix
  4. 00:49:461 (8,9) - 和后面堆叠起来 或者一排都好 就是别搞这么蛋碎的排列 因为前2个NOTE是重音另外一个是VOCAL所以这么下 暂时先不改
  5. 00:50:207 (4) - X:232 Y:28 fix
  6. 00:56:169 (1) - 去掉NC
  7. 00:57:660 (1) - ^
  8. 同时建议这里不要stack 摆开了会比较好 否则看着太空了 remap了
  9. 01:01:946 (8) - 滑条拉到蓝线结束 不改
  10. 01:02:691 (1,2,3,4,5) - 首先开头不要和01:02:319 (1) - 一起 尊重DS比较好 起床这里spacing最好放开 不要用这么小气的方式 KIAI找人COLLAB了
  11. 01:05:393 (2) - 删
  12. 01:05:766 (5) - 删
  13. 01:05:859 - 在这加个三连
  14. 01:06:884 (6) - 删 然后7重新安排位置
  15. 01:11:356 (5) - 删
  16. 01:13:312 (6,7,8) - 挨太近不美观 拉开
  17. 01:14:617 (1,2,3,4,5) - 可以做成一整个串
  18. 01:17:319 (2) - 删
  19. 01:17:691 (5) - 删
  20. 01:17:784 (5) - 加三连
  21. 01:45:269 (6) - 删
  22. 01:45:455 - +note做三连
  23. 01:54:492 (4,5,6) - 切成1/6下四连 fix
  24. 02:15:828 (1) - 删
  25. 02:16:200 (12) - 删
  26. 02:18:902 (10,11,1) - 和后面堆叠起来 或者一排都好 跟前面一样 不改
  27. 02:31:387 (8) - 折返延长一个拍 ^
  28. 02:34:834 (3) - 删 从这里往后全都交给别人collab了 就不看了
  29. 02:35:207 (6) - 删
  30. 02:35:300 (6) - 做三连
  31. 02:35:300 (6) - +note
  32. 02:46:760 (3) - 删
  33. 02:47:132 (6) - 删
  34. 02:47:225 (7) - 三连
  35. 02:50:020 (9,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 自己拆三连
  36. 02:52:536 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
  37. 02:51:697 (5) - 分开来摆
  38. 03:10:051 - 什么都听不见了
  39. 03:18:095 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - 哦草这让HD情何以堪 不堆叠会死?
  40. 03:32:878 (1,2,3,4) - 歪了
  41. 03:37:722 (1,2,3,4,5) - 不堆叠会死???
还有那么多堆叠的note露出来都很好 叠在一起显得图无比的空旷
滑条可以不用那么弯曲 直来直去也显得很干净。 ;)
;_;
原先的DIFF取消 应用了一些到collab里
thiev
Hi

  • Hard:
01:11:821 (5) - remove this circle
01:12:567 (8) - remove the last reverse arrow and add a circle like this
01:16:294 (4) - remove the last reverse arrow
02:45:735 (4) - ^
03:39:586 (3) - remove this circle
03:52:908 (6) - ^


  • Collab:
Increase the stack leniency to 10
00:08:468 (1,2,1) - I think these cuirlce/slider need to be closer like this
00:49:461 (8,9,1) - Stack these 3 circle
00:55:797 (1,2,3) - Separate the 3 circle and the one like this
00:57:287 (1,2,3) - ^
01:21:511 (7) - Move this slider so the end cna be near the start of the next like this
02:09:772 (2,4) - Place these circle at the same location
02:10:331 (5,7) -
02:18:902 (10,11,1) - Stack these 3 circle
03:53:188 (51) - This slider is hidden , you must move it

Good luck~~
Topic Starter
Chloeleta

Shikinotsu wrote:

Hi

  • Hard:
01:11:821 (5) - remove this circle sry no change
01:12:567 (8) - remove the last reverse arrow and add a circle like this fix
01:16:294 (4) - remove the last reverse arrow fix
02:45:735 (4) - ^ fix
03:39:586 (3) - remove this circle fix
03:52:908 (6) - ^ sry no change


  • Collab:
Increase the stack leniency to 10 fix
00:08:468 (1,2,1) - I think these cuirlce/slider need to be closer like this
00:49:461 (8,9,1) - Stack these 3 circle I‘ll change it , let me see...
00:55:797 (1,2,3) - Separate the 3 circle and the one like this it means to change the nc? well.. fixed
00:57:287 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
01:21:511 (7) - Move this slider so the end cna be near the start of the next like this
02:09:772 (2,4) - Place these circle at the same location
02:10:331 (5,7) -
02:18:902 (10,11,1) - Stack these 3 circle
03:53:188 (51) - This slider is hidden , you must move it

Good luck~~

thx for mod ^^ It' helpful to me
Steph De Chine
其实本来我不想来Mod的,因为实在超越了我能接受的难度~
你真的想Rank的么?为虾米木有E/N难度?!

General
新手?怎么从这么难的做起?
这图……密集恐惧症了

Hard
果然是hard,有点读图困难+无力
那个~~为啥那么多直角和直线Slider?能搞多点带弧的么?
而且那个note的排列也是一行行的,好整齐的……就不能把它们搞成呈弧形排列的么?
00:24:865 (4) - 把它移开吧,会读图困难的
00:48:902 (1,2,3) - 做成跳会比盖住要好一些
00:56:169 (4) - 移开吧,读图困难啊
00:57:659 (4) - 移开吧,读图困难啊
01:09:772 (17) - New Combo
01:07:163 (6) - New Combo
01:27:660 (1,2,3,4,5) - 做成跳会比盖住要好一些
01:48:157 (6) - 移开吧
02:18:343 (1,2,3) - 做成跳会比盖住要好一些
02:31:387 (8,1,1) - 这里有些纠结,可以移开点吗?
02:37:536 (8) - New Combo
02:39:027 (14) - New Combo
02:57:101 (1,2,3,4,5) - 做成跳会比盖住要好一些
03:22:443 (1) - 在这后面加几个note吧,不要再Break time了,会接得好点
03:42:381 (5) - 把它Vertical Flip过来会好看点
04:02:691 (1,2,1,2) - 还是做成跳吧

Collab
00:07:163 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这段是太鼓模式么?怎么全部在一起?
03:41:263 (8) - New Comboooooooooo
03:44:244 (17) - New Combooooooooo
03:47:225 (27) - New Combooooooooo
03:49:648 (37) - New Combooooooooo
03:50:579 (42) - New Combooooooooo
03:53:188 (51) - New Combooooooooo
03:56:635 (62) - New Combooooooooo
03:59:151 (69) - New Combooooooooo
谁能解释下那个85Combo是怎么回事?!为啥不拆开啊啊啊啊
Topic Starter
Chloeleta

Steph De Chine wrote:

其实本来我不想来Mod的,因为实在超越了我能接受的难度~
你真的想Rank的么?为虾米木有E/N难度?!

General
新手?怎么从这么难的做起?
这图……密集恐惧症了 我也确实准备减小col的密集程度

Hard
果然是hard,有点读图困难+无力 .... ;_;
那个~~为啥那么多直角和直线Slider?能搞多点带弧的么? 而且那个note的排列也是一行行的,好整齐的……就不能把它们搞成呈弧形排列的么 好 这就改.. 因为比较偷懒
00:24:865 (4) - 把它移开吧,会读图困难的 我觉得还行 先不改
00:48:902 (1,2,3) - 做成跳会比盖住要好一些 改了 不过DS不高 毕竟只是HARD
00:56:169 (4) - 移开吧,读图困难啊 让我想想 会改的 看有什么好的梗
00:57:659 (4) - 移开吧,读图困难啊 ^
01:09:772 (17) - New Combo 改了
01:07:163 (6) - New Combo ^
01:27:660 (1,2,3,4,5) - 做成跳会比盖住要好一些
01:48:157 (6) - 移开吧
02:18:343 (1,2,3) - 做成跳会比盖住要好一些
02:31:387 (8,1,1) - 这里有些纠结,可以移开点吗?
02:37:536 (8) - New Combo 改了
02:39:027 (14) - New Combo ^
02:57:101 (1,2,3,4,5) - 做成跳会比盖住要好一些
03:22:443 (1) - 在这后面加几个note吧,不要再Break time了,会接得好点
03:42:381 (5) - 把它Vertical Flip过来会好看点 改了
04:02:691 (1,2,1,2) - 还是做成跳吧

Collab
00:07:163 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这段是太鼓模式么?怎么全部在一起?先不改 实在想不到什么梗 我觉得这样还行
03:41:263 (8) - New Comboooooooooo
03:44:244 (17) - New Combooooooooo
03:47:225 (27) - New Combooooooooo
03:49:648 (37) - New Combooooooooo
03:50:579 (42) - New Combooooooooo
03:53:188 (51) - New Combooooooooo
03:56:635 (62) - New Combooooooooo
03:59:151 (69) - New Combooooooooo
谁能解释下那个85Combo是怎么回事?!为啥不拆开啊啊啊啊all fixed. mapper太懒了-,-
thx^^
bo0O0od
。 转mapper了?
看下来总体排列节奏音效都比较一般 VIDEO不好看 格式好像也不对 哦 BG太丑了 等我给你找一个

Collab
00:40:517 (4) - 删 附近几个NOTE REMAP
00:51:511 (3) - ^
01:13:033 (2,3) - DS减小 建议1.5
01:21:511 (7) - DS1.8 如图
01:54:492 (4) - 减少1个1/3拍长度
02:08:840 (6,7,8) - 给个建议 这里重新处理一下 节奏慢一点 为后面做铺垫
02:20:766 (3,4) - 可以改成滑条
03:56:169 (10,11) - 打起来不太对劲
04:02:225 (1) - NC
04:04:042 (18) - 加个无声长圈? 可以到04:07:163 (19) -
Topic Starter
Chloeleta

bo0O0od wrote:

。 转mapper了?
看下来总体排列节奏音效都比较一般 VIDEO不好看 格式好像也不对 哦 BG太丑了 等我给你找一个

Collab
00:40:517 (4) - 删 附近几个NOTE REMAP
00:51:511 (3) - ^
01:13:033 (2,3) - DS减小 建议1.5
01:21:511 (7) - DS1.8 如图
01:54:492 (4) - 减少1个1/3拍长度
02:08:840 (6,7,8) - 给个建议 这里重新处理一下 节奏慢一点 为后面做铺垫
02:20:766 (3,4) - 可以改成滑条
03:56:169 (10,11) - 打起来不太对劲
04:02:225 (1) - NC
04:04:042 (18) - 加个无声长圈? 可以到04:07:163 (19) -
. 师傅大人 等我回家再改@@
bo0O0od
00:55:610 (1) - 00:57:101 (1) - 增加这2个点 详见我改过的.osu文件
00:58:871 (3) - 加NOTE 做成原地2连
00:59:151 (2) - 后面跟2连
01:00:455 (7) - 做成1/2的滑条
再来
PS:第二段你看着差不多就行
chaotic_iak
Yay from queue.

There are three levels of problems:
1. Red which means fatal problems that make the map unrankable; you must fix them.
2. Black which means non-fatal problems; you are recommended to fix them but you don't need to.
3. Blue which means plausible problems; the problem might happen because I'm not someone as great as those in the leaderboard; you may fix them if you find the problem to need to be fixed.

[Dekaane's Normal]
00:56:915 (4) - Hidden below 3; I suggest not stacking any object below a slider for Normal
00:58:405 (4) - ^
01:01:946 (4) - ^
01:15:921 (3) - ^
02:26:356 (4) - The problem with 00:56:915 is that this which is basically identical with that is not hidden >_<
02:40:145 (4) - Don't stack if it's not in smallest stack unit (expecting 1/2-beat gap, getting 1-beat gap)
02:57:101 (1,2) - Hidden below slider
03:45:735 (4) - Unexpected stack
03:48:343 (2) - Hidden below slider
03:49:275 (4) - ^
03:51:697 (7) - Unexpected stack
03:54:679 (4) - Hidden below slider
03:55:610 (6) - ^
04:02:691 (1,2) - ^

[Hard]
00:06:604 (2,3) - Sudden speed change (0.60x to 1.20x)
00:11:635 (1,2) - Slider path hidden below 5,6
00:24:492 (1,2,3,4,1) - Inconsistent timing in stack, might be misleading
00:36:791 (6,7,8) - ^
00:48:157 (7,1) - Might be unexpected (probably expecting 1/2-beat gap, getting 1-beat gap)
00:55:797 (1,2,3,1) - Inconsistent timing in stack
00:57:287 (1,2,3,1) - ^
01:01:760 (7,8,1,1) - ^
01:05:673 (15,1) - Might be unexpected (probably expecting 1/2-beat gap, getting 3/4-beat gap)
01:08:095 (5,6,7) - Confusing
01:10:331 (4,1) - Might be unexpected (probably expecting 1/2-beat gap, getting 1-beat gap)
01:23:188 (1) - Too short
01:53:933 (1,2,3,4,1) - Inconsistent timing in stack
02:17:598 (7,1,2,3) - ^
02:21:697 (12) - Might be hidden
02:25:238 (1,2,3,4) - Inconsistent timing in stack
02:26:728 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:31:201 (7,8,1,1) - ^
02:37:536 (1,2,3) - Might be confusing
02:52:629 (1) - Too short
03:21:884 (1,2,1) - Inconsistent timing in stack, also I expected 3 yellow circles
03:57:287 (5,6,7) - Might be unreadable

[Collab]
Meh I cannot do it, and also total time limit exceeded. So I'll do it later. A small suggestion: AR -1 (to 8)?

Good luck!
Topic Starter
Chloeleta

bo0O0od wrote:

00:55:610 (1) - 00:57:101 (1) - 增加这2个点 详见我改过的.osu文件
00:58:871 (3) - 加NOTE 做成原地2连
00:59:151 (2) - 后面跟2连
01:00:455 (7) - 做成1/2的滑条
再来
PS:第二段你看着差不多就行
都改了 第二段也改了 0.0
Topic Starter
Chloeleta

chaotic_iak wrote:

Yay from queue.

There are three levels of problems:
1. Red which means fatal problems that make the map unrankable; you must fix them.
2. Black which means non-fatal problems; you are recommended to fix them but you don't need to.
3. Blue which means plausible problems; the problem might happen because I'm not someone as great as those in the leaderboard; you may fix them if you find the problem to need to be fixed.

[Dekaane's Normal]
00:56:915 (4) - Hidden below 3; I suggest not stacking any object below a slider for Normal
00:58:405 (4) - ^
01:01:946 (4) - ^
01:15:921 (3) - ^
02:26:356 (4) - The problem with 00:56:915 is that this which is basically identical with that is not hidden >_<
02:40:145 (4) - Don't stack if it's not in smallest stack unit (expecting 1/2-beat gap, getting 1-beat gap)
02:57:101 (1,2) - Hidden below slider
03:45:735 (4) - Unexpected stack
03:48:343 (2) - Hidden below slider
03:49:275 (4) - ^
03:51:697 (7) - Unexpected stack
03:54:679 (4) - Hidden below slider
03:55:610 (6) - ^
04:02:691 (1,2) - ^

[Hard]
00:06:604 (2,3) - Sudden speed change (0.60x to 1.20x)
00:11:635 (1,2) - Slider path hidden below 5,6
00:24:492 (1,2,3,4,1) - Inconsistent timing in stack, might be misleading
00:36:791 (6,7,8) - ^
00:48:157 (7,1) - Might be unexpected (probably expecting 1/2-beat gap, getting 1-beat gap)
00:55:797 (1,2,3,1) - Inconsistent timing in stack
00:57:287 (1,2,3,1) - ^
01:01:760 (7,8,1,1) - ^
01:05:673 (15,1) - Might be unexpected (probably expecting 1/2-beat gap, getting 3/4-beat gap)
01:08:095 (5,6,7) - Confusing
01:10:331 (4,1) - Might be unexpected (probably expecting 1/2-beat gap, getting 1-beat gap)
01:23:188 (1) - Too short
01:53:933 (1,2,3,4,1) - Inconsistent timing in stack
02:17:598 (7,1,2,3) - ^
02:21:697 (12) - Might be hidden
02:25:238 (1,2,3,4) - Inconsistent timing in stack
02:26:728 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:31:201 (7,8,1,1) - ^
02:37:536 (1,2,3) - Might be confusing
02:52:629 (1) - Too short
03:21:884 (1,2,1) - Inconsistent timing in stack, also I expected 3 yellow circles
03:57:287 (5,6,7) - Might be unreadable

[Collab]
Meh I cannot do it, and also total time limit exceeded. So I'll do it later. A small suggestion: AR -1 (to 8)?

Good luck!
Well , I'll remap the hard diff... and waiting for dekaane to change his normal :>
DakeDekaane
All stacked notes pointed in chaotic_iak's post fixed c:

Update~ :3
osu file format v9

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Artist:Itou Kanako
Creator:Chloeleta
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Tags:5pb nitroplus nitro+ AmamiyaYuko Skystar Chloe Dekaane

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480,220,83561,1,8
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344,120,84492,2,0,B|256:168|256:168|168:120,1,200,8|8
216,44,85610,5,8
308,44,85983,2,0,B|408:44,2,100,0|0|8
100,128,87660,5,4
100,128,87846,1,4
164,192,88219,2,8,B|164:244|164:244|192:284,1,100
256,192,88964,12,0,90641
208,272,102567,6,0,B|256:292|304:272,3,100,0|0|8|8
348,192,104058,2,0,B|308:160|256:148|204:160|164:192,1,200,8|2
100,256,105176,1,0
72,172,105548,2,0,B|44:128|44:76,1,100,8|2
220,36,106666,6,0,B|280:36|304:80|304:80|404:80,2,200,8|8|0
228,124,108530,1,2
256,300,109275,6,0,B|300:328|300:328|348:328,1,100,8|0
436,344,110020,2,0,B|436:280|392:252|392:252|392:160,2,200,8|8|0
348,328,111884,2,0,B|296:328|296:328|256:300,1,100,8|0
112,192,113002,5,4
16,96,113561,1,4
148,67,114120,2,4,B|212:64|272:96|303:155|300:228,1,250
296,316,115424,2,0,B|236:312|204:272|208:216,1,150
144,152,116356,2,0,B|104:192|120:244|120:244|48:316,2,200,8|8|0
296,56,118592,5,2
276,144,118964,2,0,B|240:136|216:110|208:76,2,100,8|0|8
364,116,120082,2,0,B|388:88|396:52|380:20,1,100
348,200,121201,5,0
260,204,121573,1,2
292,288,121946,2,0,B|340:288|340:288|384:264,1,100,0|2
420,236,122505,2,0,B|444:192|444:192|444:140,1,100,0|0
444,96,123064,6,0,B|444:48,2,50,0|2|0
356,112,123809,2,0,B|256:112,1,100,0|0
164,112,124555,1,0
128,192,124927,2,0,B|168:260|256:276|344:256|384:192,1,300,2|0
380,148,126232,5,8
300,104,126604,2,0,B|300:56,1,50,8|0
212,56,127163,2,0,B|212:104,1,50,8|0
256,192,127722,1,4
256,40,145238,5,8
256,40,145424,1,0
256,40,145610,2,0,B|328:64|360:144,1,150
356,188,146356,1,8
272,152,146728,5,8
272,152,146914,1,0
272,152,147101,2,0,B|196:132|132:184,1,150
124,228,147846,1,8
176,300,148219,5,8
176,300,148405,1,8
176,300,148592,2,4,B|200:348|256:372|312:348|336:300,3,200
256,192,151387,5,8
176,152,151760,2,0,B|200:104|256:80|312:104|336:152,1,200,4|8
256,192,152878,1,0
256,192,153250,12,0,154741
356,268,155859,6,0,B|376:224|376:172,1,100,2|0
304,116,156604,1,0
228,68,156977,2,0,B|176:68|132:88,2,100,2|0|0
316,48,158095,1,2
444,288,159213,5,4
444,288,159399,1,4
488,208,159772,1,8
428,140,160145,1,8
344,168,160517,1,8
300,296,161076,6,0,B|200:296|200:296|120:236,2,200,8|8|8
340,216,162940,1,0
300,136,163312,2,0,B|220:76,1,100,8|0
128,80,164058,5,0
76,156,164430,2,2,B|16:152,2,50,2|0|2
168,160,165176,1,4
168,160,165362,1,4
124,240,165735,1,8
172,316,166107,1,8
260,312,166480,1,8
412,144,167412,6,0,B|308:124,1,100,0|2
236,172,168157,1,0
192,92,168530,2,0,B|96:72,1,100,0|2
52,92,169089,2,0,B|28:192,1,100,0|2
20,280,169834,1,0
20,280,170020,1,2
284,336,171138,5,4
284,336,171325,1,4
356,284,171697,2,8,B|376:232|356:188,1,100
284,132,172443,1,8
164,192,173002,2,0,B|120:212|120:212|72:192,1,100,8|0
120,116,173747,2,0,B|120:64|120:64|156:32,1,100,8|0
228,84,174492,5,0
228,84,174679,1,2
300,32,175051,1,0
372,84,175424,1,2
460,88,175797,1,0
460,88,175983,2,0,B|408:200|408:200|284:224,1,250,2|0
240,232,177101,5,4
240,232,177288,1,4
152,248,177660,2,8,B|96:260|96:260|64:288,2,100
256,192,178592,12,0,180082
104,104,190517,6,0,B|156:108|184:156|184:156|220:92|256:160|256:160|288:92|328:156|328:156|356:108|408:104,2,400
100,196,193871,1,2
184,232,194244,1,0
256,288,194617,1,2
328,232,194989,1,0
336,96,202443,6,0,B|372:96|440:212|376:328|300:328,1,300,2|2
256,332,203747,1,0
212,328,203933,2,0,B|136:328|72:212|140:96|176:96,1,300,2|0
256,56,205424,1,2
440,192,211387,6,0,B|340:192,1,100
340,284,212132,2,0,B|140:284,1,200
140,192,213250,1,0
232,192,213623,2,0,B|280:192,3,50
256,192,214368,12,0,217350
256,192,218840,5,4
256,192,219027,1,4
208,116,219399,2,8,B|256:96|304:116,1,100
388,156,220145,2,0,B|388:240|308:320|228:320,1,250,8|0
156,268,221449,6,0,B|136:224|136:172,1,100,2|0
208,116,222194,1,2
284,68,222567,2,0,B|336:68|380:88,2,100,0|0|0
196,48,223685,1,2
68,288,224803,5,4
68,288,224989,1,4
84,200,225362,1,8
168,168,225735,1,8
184,80,226107,1,8
320,80,226666,6,8,B|320:180|320:180|380:260,2,200
320,36,228343,1,0
408,48,228716,2,0,B|468:128,1,100,2|0
468,172,229275,1,0
468,264,229648,5,2
468,264,229834,1,0
468,264,230020,2,0,B|472:312,2,50
388,220,230766,1,4
388,220,230952,1,4
328,288,231325,1,8
244,320,231697,2,8,B|196:340|196:340|152:320,1,100
188,192,232629,6,8,B|88:192,2,100,8|0|8
276,172,233747,1,0
356,132,234120,2,0,B|428:60,1,100,0|2
460,32,234679,1,0
484,120,235051,2,0,B|484:224,1,100
484,264,235610,1,2
228,336,236728,5,4
228,336,236915,1,4
156,284,237287,2,8,B|136:232|156:188,1,100
228,132,238033,1,8
348,192,238592,6,0,B|348:240,2,50,0|0|0
344,100,239337,2,0,B|344:48|344:48|308:16,1,100,8|0
252,88,240082,1,0
252,88,240269,1,2
196,16,240641,5,0
144,88,241014,1,2
52,88,241387,1,2
52,88,241573,2,0,B|104:200|104:200|228:224,1,250
272,228,242691,5,4
272,228,242878,1,4
360,240,243250,2,8,B|416:248|416:248|452:276,2,100
256,192,244182,12,0,247163
DakeDekaane
Just noticed, add "DakeDekaane" in tags >_<
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Chloeleta

DakeDekaane wrote:

Just noticed, add "DakeDekaane" in tags >_<
Oh yeah !
Of course I'll do it. And I'll remap all my diff , but it's slowly.... T^T
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