1. 249's Easy (2.46 stars, 108 notes)
2. Hard (4.97 stars, 207 notes)
3. Insane (5 stars, 313 notes)
4. Stefan's Normal (4.24 stars, 139 notes)

KinomiCandy wrote:

Can I make a Taiko ~ ヽ(* ・ω・)ﾉ

kriers wrote:

how about ranking your own map? /stalk

KinomiCandy wrote:

kriers wrote:

how about ranking your own map? /stalk

God damn, I will later. At least I can make a taiko ;w;

1. 00:12:423 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,1,2) - You have Finishes on almost all these objects here! Did you make some sort of hitsounding mistake?
2. 00:35:696 (1,2,3,4) - And again here, and at 00:40:060 (3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - . Then in other various places. For sure there is a better alternative to spamming 1/1 Finishes.

those wrote:

[Easy]

1. 00:12:423 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,1,2) - You have Finishes on almost all these objects here! Did you make some sort of hitsounding mistake?
2. 00:35:696 (1,2,3,4) - And again here, and at 00:40:060 (3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - . Then in other various places. For sure there is a better alternative to spamming 1/1 Finishes.

TheNutritiousGuy wrote:

The Taiko Diff is missing. o3o
When I download, there's no taiko Diff.

TheNutritiousGuy wrote:

It's fine now. \o/

TheVileOne wrote:

General


Easy

Combo modding this is a pain. Played fine.

00:12:423 (1) - This should be a stand alone combo. You did so with all the other transitions. This should be a grey note. actually no. i made this blue because it matches the video BG. it'd look weird if i made this grey.
00:25:514 - Gap is so slow... I'm not a fan of skipping over sounds randomly. I wanted to change up my pattern, so for this one, i followed the instrumental instead of the vocals.
00:26:969 (3) - All your other combos didn't last 3 measures, so new combo here. umm 00:12:423 (1,2,3,4) - is, and so are a few others up ahead.
00:35:696 (1) - Since this hasn't transitioned to blue yet, I suggest grey combo here. Start blue combo here 00:37:151 (3) - . If you do so 00:39:696 (1) - should be a new combo to avoid the 3 measure long combo issue I mentioned before. no if i made that grey, it'd look ugly and it wouldn't blend in with the video at all.
01:17:878 (4) - I think this should be start of next combo. Either that or make a single grey combo. umm no. i made this a orange color to blend in with that fireball. i don't watch BRS so idk if that's a fireball or an ability for 1 of the characters.
01:21:878 (1,2,3,4) - orange, purple is a random combo color for the end. Make this a black combo? Then end it with a blue combo here 01:25:696 (1) - ? That seems more fitting. oh whoops that was a mistake. fixed >.<

standby

TheVileOne wrote:

General

Maybe extend kiai to the end of the song like in TNG's Normal?
Kinomi's tags are in a different order and not capitalized. Tags must be exactly the same Not really. As long as they show up the same on the beatmap info page it should be good.

Hard

There's next to no hitsounds at all in this difficulty. Please add more. I'm questioning the rankability when the whole difficulty sounds the same. Still a wip

00:02:242 (1,2,3,4) - Doesn't play right to me. Those sliders are too long to carry the beat. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/344747 I think a note focused pattern will carry the beat more effectively.
Where are the hitsounds in the intro?
00:04:060 (2) - clap
00:04:787 (4) - ^
00:05:151 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:06:787 (2) - end clap
00:07:333 (4) - start clap
00:07:696 (5) - ^
00:08:242 (2,5) - same as above
00:09:878 (2,4) - Claps on start?
00:13:878 (1,2) - I suggest breaking up into notes. This is a nope for multiple reasons. 1. Following the lyrics to this and its held longer here then previous. 2. Making them just notes to me will slow down the flow too much cuz I only want a slight slow down.
00:18:605 (1,2) - Transition is looks bad. There's a lot of better ways you could position that second slider.
00:34:242 (5,6) - I really didn't expect there to be so many repeats. It's fairly confusing. (also new combo- slow to fast section warrants it IMO)
00:46:605 (3) - Hard to know it's going to repeat that many times. Also breaks forward momentum, which I think should be present through this rhythm. You could stream it out? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/344762 Meant to fix this earlier.
01:05:514 (3,4,1) - Fix spacing

Combo mod
In order for the blue combo section to match the green section, the combos should look like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/344774 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/344775
(The difference is that blue has an extra 2 beat slider in it that is offsetting where the pattern is.)

Try to make the combo patterns a bit more consistent. There's some things that might need to be changed to make the patterns consistent enough for the combo colors. So I'll wait until the recheck to really look into what it's going to take to make the perfect combo color patterns.

Insane

Although I can't say I was able to give it the most thorough of mods, I tested enough to think that your compressed 1/2th streams are unnecessary. Spacing them normally plays decently. Although I will wait for the recheck since my meds have worn off, and my judgment on which ones don't work that great as a compression that I have not mentioned below has waned.

Why doesn't this have OD 8?

00:46:060 (1,2,3) - This doesn't flow. Flows good to me really.
01:09:514 (1,2,3) - I wouldn't have a 1/4th stream go intoa compressed half stream. I think overall spaced plays better.
01:10:242 (3,1) - Wasn't this a slider in previous patterns? Also maybe all sliders through here. I'm not 100 percent sure, but similar sound, similar mapping? Changed so I can do a new combo to match the vid.
01:13:514 (1,2) - I don't recommend compression. You didn't compress in the combo before it. I don't think it should be compressed.

Conclusion

I can't star this with Hard having next to no hitsounds. The other diffs have some form of beat but Hard does not. I would also like to recheck this difficulty, because I modded it quite late in the day and my modding skills might not have been able to point out everything that needed to be pointed out. So tomorrow I would like to give another run through of these maps and see what I missed. During the recheck I plan to go deeper into the hitsounds, and make sure the combos are absolutely as perfect as they can be. After I'm done, I probably could get these maps in bubble worthy shape.

TheVileOne wrote:

Normal

00:02:242 (4) - The main issue I have with this slider is that it skips over a part that's supposed to have a normal hit sound. It sounds weird. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/344715 < This seems to be the beat if 4 is not going to be the same length as that other slider. So I changed this Section to one slider and one Circle. I took your suggestion but did not add at 00:02:787 a Circle.
00:06:969 (1,2) - That half slider doesn't play right to me. It doesn't really start on something audible. This seems a lot more like the beat http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/344721 < timeline or you can include that note in the gap. I just think it sounds weird as the start of a slider. Removed the slider and added at 00:08:060 a circle.
00:21:151 (1,2) - Line up 2 slightly more with the end of 1? Moved a bit.
00:22:605 (4,5) - ^ Same as above.
00:28:060 (2) - Really this slider more gets in the way of the beat than benefits it. Just make a note? (You did so here 00:32:423 (5) - ) Okay.
00:29:514 (2,1) - This sounds like it should be just one slider. Please make one slider. Alright.
00:50:242 (1) - I recommend this be broke up to maintain the hitsound rhythm. The voice fits nice with a Slider here.
00:51:696 (1) - ^ (It plays nice broken up) Ok.
01:00:423 (3) - End as normal hitsounds? Done.
01:02:242 (1) - Sounds weird with Normal hitsounds It's okay, so no change.
01:03:151 (3) - ^ Same as above.
01:07:333 (4,5) - Sounds like 1/1 to me. Changed.
01:07:878 - This is a good place to go half if you decided to add a note here. Nah, Sorry.
01:13:151 (1,2) - Sounds like it should be slider, note. You have it note slider. I know I'm suggesting you to break up your pattern but flow trumps pattern. You're simply focusing on the wrong sounds.) Nope, I let it.

Kiddo-Kun wrote:

[Easy]

• 00:09:514 (1) - Can you open this loop up a little more, just so that it is a little more legible. I opened it up a bit. if i make a hole for this loop, it'll look ugly and the sliderlength would be different.
• 01:13:514 (1,2) - This pattern does not feel very intuitive, I recommend changing this pattern to something like this oh fixed. i ran out of ideas when i did this.


Just some suggestions. Starred.

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Kiddo-Kun wrote:

[General]

• You have some tagging inconsistency. Check Taiko's tags.

[Hard]

• 00:42:242 (3) - Missing a clap on this slider's end.
• 00:55:878 (8) - The pattern feels better without this note. It just sees like you're overdoing it.

[Insane]
*This difficulty lacks finishes compered to other difficulties. Add some in because it sounds fairly bland without it. Same pattern as hard and it seems perfectly fine to me.

• 00:30:423 (2) - Hidden repeat.
• 00:38:242 (4,1,2,3) - This spacing change does not play very well and the transition from jumps to anti-jumps is odd. I suggest using normal spacing for the blue sliders.

Just some suggestions. Starred.

Weez wrote:

PLEASE PLAY WITH VIDEO!! The combo colours are set to the background of the video. If you turn off video then it looks like a huge mess.

wmfchris wrote:

[Taiko]
- remove letterbox during breaks
00:50:242 - why not following the drum pattern? i feel like it's not enough here with simple 1/2 beats
01:28:060 - K since the tone is higher
In this song stuffs are mainly soft, and the hitsound is a bit too loud for me. Roughly checked and sounds fine with drums, though it often covers/ did not fit well with vocal. Yes, I know, I know.

Leorda wrote:

[TNG's Normal]
00:09:514 (1) - Add finish? I don't agree with this.
00:52:787 (1) - Why New combo? Because of the Video's Colour.
00:54:605 (3) - I think these slider needs more wavy I did what I can. :<
01:07:333 (4) - How about this stack with 01:05:878 (2)? Done.
01:22:242 (1) - The sliderbody is overlapped by hitbursts. Sometimes, beginners are slowly to read object, so this possibly hidden for them Fixed.
01:27:333 (3) - New combo? Colour would not fit.

wmfchris wrote:

[Normal]
00:55:696 (4) - imo there's no need to play an extra beat here, start the spinner right here because the coming vocal is the long one before kiai already Okay.
Sometimes the hitsounds don't fit very well each other, like 01:03:151 (3) - ; and you might want some slidertick hitsound to make heavy beats on the slidertick instead of a soft one. The Hitsounds are fine for now. And I did not find anything really bad.

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Artist:supercell feat. Hatsune Miku
Creator:Weez
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Combo2 : 0,0,255
Combo3 : 128,128,128
Combo4 : 255,0,0
Combo5 : 255,128,0
Combo6 : 0,128,0
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Leorda wrote:

Hi Weez

[249's Easy]
00:54:605 (2,3,4,5) - Make a pattern like this for better pattern? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/356074 no it'll ruin the triangle if i change this. if you notice the end of (1) to 5 are shaped like a triangle.

wmfchris wrote:

[Insane]
00:04:060 (2,3,4) - feel like these sliders are too close together and the spacing is not likely to change as indicated by the music. just for reference : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/359927
00:24:605 (1) - no matter what yo're going to do with the video, this still doesn't sound like a NC...
00:57:151 (1,2,3,4) - a regular pentagon can be made there
01:12:514 (1) - just make it 2 grid left for a equally spaced stream
01:15:333 (2,3,4) - the spacing is again easily misread as 1/4 - separated (and it make sense somehow)

well...it's not a bad idea to follow the video on the NC issue but sometimes when they're changing too frequently they don't look really good orz. Personally to me it looks fine. Almost all work out fine.

[Hard]
00:03:151 - feel like a note is missed here This was done on purpose.
00:34:242 (1,2,3) - try not to put like that because it's not expected that (1,2) is a 4-plet with (3) is triplet even with the music.
00:50:242 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2) - feel like the sliders can be placed in some other ways that look better.

Leorda wrote:

Hi Weez

[Hard]
00:29:878 (1) - Add finish at head slider?
00:35:696 (1) - ^ Nope cuz it doesn't fit here
01:18:242 (1,2,3,4,5) - Maybe arrange the pattern like this one? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/356119


[Insane]
00:46:605 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Make a pattern like this one? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/356126
01:09:514 (1) - Move 3 grid right for curve pattern? (Nazi)


Don't hate me ;_;
Why would I hate you D:

P.S.

Weez wrote:

PLEASE PLAY WITH VIDEO!! The combo colours are set to the background of the video. If you turn off video then it looks like a huge mess.

oh fuck, I forgot it to download w/ video..... ;~; how could you

Stefan wrote:

Didn't Frizz help?
Or why no KD of him/her?

Anyway, I only accepted the last Suggestion about the Spinner, because I don't like the other ones.
So could you fix this for me, Weez? It's only this, so not neccessary to send the complete .osu. =o=

pyransc wrote:

Nice map, i have only a few proposals.

[General]
249's Easy - add Taiko Time. You mean Kiai Time and nope, Byaku decided not to use it so it wont be used. Perfectly fine to have different kiai times for the guest diffs

[Hard]

00:19:696 (3) - remove one reverse, Nope, it doesn't really change anything so i'm keeping it the way it is.
00:20:242 - add circle, ^same
00:20:423 (4) - remove one reverse,^same
00:20:969 - add circle,^same
00:25:514 (1) - remove one reverse,^same
00:26:060 - add circle,^same
00:26:242 (2) - remove one reverse,^same
00:26:787 - add circle,^same

[Insane]
Nothing to do. All ok.

pyransc wrote:

Nice map, i have only a few proposals.

[249's Easy ]
00:25:514 - add circle no i'm following the drums, not the vocals for this.
00:25:878 (2) - delete slider, add circle no this follows the vocals.
00:26:242 - add slider, and at 00:26:605 didn't follow the last suggestion so ignored.
00:29:878 (1) - end slider at 00:30:969 don't forget i'm following the guitar as well, not only the vocals.
00:31:333 - add circle same as 00:26:242.
00:31:878 (2) - start slider at 00:31:696 and end it at 00:32:423 then that'll lead into a boring 1/1 rhythm...i add sliders at the 1/2 tick to challenge beginners on their timing.
01:26:969 (3) - start slider at 01:26:787 , 2 reverse, first reverse at 01:26:969 , end at 01:27:333 , add finish to end circle no because that rhythm isn't following the music and it makes me feel uncomfortable.
01:27:696 - add circle add finish no i'm keeping the repeat so that it'd be easier for beginners.

HanzeR wrote:

Random mod, <3 BRS, and fun mapset!

Easy -
I agree with the other poster .. there are way too many finishes here i think! that's the point. the finishes are meant to match the cymbals in the song.
00:25:514 - expected note here again no. this follows the drums, not the vocals.
00:31:696 - awkward :X so? not all noes don't have to be at the 1/1 tick. tbh i'd find that boring if i do that.
00:59:060 - unsnapped timing section 100% intentional. this is called a kiai burst.
01:10:696 - ^ ^
01:13:151 - x 264 y 332 no the mini triangle will be ruined.
01:16:941 - x 260 y 336 ^
01:26:969 - why here and not 01:26:787? sound really weird.. rhythm like this might work better http://puu.sh/PNrF no that rhythm would be hard for beginners to clear. i did this to follow up the instrumental for this.
01:28:151 - unsnapped timing section aww crap forgot to remove that. Weez can you remove that timing point for me?

Like i said, just some very small things, good luck!

Byakugan249 wrote:

pyransc wrote:

Nice map, i have only a few proposals.

[249's Easy ]
00:25:514 - add circle no i'm following the drums, not the vocals for this.
00:25:878 (2) - delete slider, add circle no this follows the vocals.
00:26:242 - add slider, and at 00:26:605 didn't follow the last suggestion so ignored.
00:29:878 (1) - end slider at 00:30:969 don't forget i'm following the guitar as well, not only the vocals.
00:31:333 - add circle same as 00:26:242.
00:31:878 (2) - start slider at 00:31:696 and end it at 00:32:423 then that'll lead into a boring 1/1 rhythm...i add sliders at the 1/2 tick to challenge beginners on their timing.
01:26:969 (3) - start slider at 01:26:787 , 2 reverse, first reverse at 01:26:969 , end at 01:27:333 , add finish to end circle no because that rhythm isn't following the music and it makes me feel uncomfortable.
01:27:696 - add circle add finish no i'm keeping the repeat so that it'd be easier for beginners.

HanzeR wrote:

Random mod, <3 BRS, and fun mapset!

Easy -
I agree with the other poster .. there are way too many finishes here i think! that's the point. the finishes are meant to match the cymbals in the song.
00:25:514 - expected note here again no. this follows the drums, not the vocals.
00:31:696 - awkward :X so? not all noes don't have to be at the 1/1 tick. tbh i'd find that boring if i do that.
00:59:060 - unsnapped timing section 100% intentional. this is called a kiai burst.
01:10:696 - ^ ^
01:13:151 - x 264 y 332 no the mini triangle will be ruined.
01:16:941 - x 260 y 336 ^
01:26:969 - why here and not 01:26:787? sound really weird.. rhythm like this might work better http://puu.sh/PNrF no that rhythm would be hard for beginners to clear. i did this to follow up the instrumental for this.
01:28:151 - unsnapped timing section aww crap forgot to remove that. Weez can you remove that timing point for me?

Like i said, just some very small things, good luck!

ty for the mods but i didn't make that much changes.

Kawayi Rika wrote:

[TNG's Normal]

1. 00:38:605 (1,2) - Use same spacing. To be honest, this can't be called as "Jump". However, Spacing does not have to be always hold. I won't change it, even you think it should be.
2. 00:42:969 (3,4) - ^ Fixed.
3. 00:45:514 (3,4) - Change a repeat slider here. Changed.
4. 00:52:787 (1) - Remove too short new combo. It fits with the Video, anyway I changed the Combos with 00:52:423 (2,1).
5. 00:55:696 (1) - This spinner should start to 00:56:060. wmf suggested me this Idea. And I actually like his Idea. <_<
6. 01:27:333 (3) - Add new combo looks better. It isn't really neccessary.

1. Letterbox during breaks: disable too in hard and insane diff for consistency like other diff?
2. AudioLeadIn: fix the audioleadin at easy, hard, and taiko diff into 2000 via notepad like other diff?
3. Folder:
   1. Remove .osb file since no sb in this map? just make your folder clean~
   2. Change "blackrock.png" format into .jpg? this way reduce some file size ouo

1. 00:00:423 (1) - add whistle? add something in here for make sense when starting~
2. 00:03:696 (2) - move this into x:248 y:356 for make symmetry with slider (1)? seems more tidier if symmetry
3. 00:16:787 (1) - remove this new combo for make same combo set with before pattern?
4. 00:19:696 (3) - would be better if add finish in the end for guitar sound imo
5. 00:25:878 (2) - move this into x:272 y:124 for make this seems tidier and symmetry >_<?
6. 00:55:333 (4,5) - move these notes into something like this or this? I think this is will make the pattern looks more better~
7. 00:58:969 (1,2,3) - ng,, this pattern is a bit weird to see since (2) not in center orz-- and (1) slider shape is a bit not symmetry.. maybe change like this? please don't worry about (3) stacked in (1)'s head.. I think that no make the player confuse-- in gameplay (3)'s head still visible really >_<
   

   260,52,58969,6,0,B|344:48|416:104|432:228|376:304,1,320,4|2
   260,188,61151,1,0
   260,52,61878,2,0,B|176:48|104:104|88:228|144:304,1,320,4|2

8. 01:07:696 (1) - add whistle in the end? I think that fit with vocal~
9. 01:12:787 (2) - ^ just add
10. 01:18:242 (1) - why new combo in here? remove for make same with 01:13:514 (1,2,3,4,5) -
11. 01:21:878 (1) - a bit overlap with hitburst after spinner? make more visible is more better imo
12. 01:28:151 - remove this timing point? I don't think this is necessary..

1. 00:05:514 (1,1,1,1) - remove this all new combo? since the spacing and rhythm is same 0.0 but I know you want to make an effect with music here : P
2. 00:06:242 (1,1) - move this 1 grid up for make this linear with 00:05:151 (1,1,1) - ?
3. 00:08:423 (3) - use this code below for fix the curve a bit? lol sorry--
   

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4. 00:09:514 (1) - add finish for cymbal sounder in the end spinner?
5. 00:14:605 (4) - add whistle for follow piano like (3)'s beginning?
6. 00:17:332 (5,2) - this is overlapped not good to look when gameplay imo-- consider to change into another pattern
7. 00:26:969 (1,1) - in here too-- consider to not overlap like this ><;
8. 00:28:423 (1) - remove new combo in here? too short combo set orz
9. 00:32:787 (1) - add finish in beginning for cymbal sounder?
10. 00:40:060 (3) - ^
11. 00:41:514 (1) - ^
12. 00:44:969 (2) - move this 1 grid up for make symmetry with (1)?
13. 00:46:605 (5,6) - try to move (5) into x:256 y:44 and (6) - x:176 y:132 for make perfect triangle pattern?
14. 00:47:333 (1) - add finish in beginning again
15. 00:51:696 (1,1) - remove this new combo for make consistent combo set with before pattern?
16. 00:52:423 (4) - add finish
17. 00:53:151 (1) - ^ in beginning
18. 00:55:696 (3,1) - feel weird in here-- try to follow the vocal? my suggestion is move the spinner into next long white tick (00:56:060) for follow the vocal "taa" and add an note in 00:55:696 ?
19. 00:56:060 (1) - from reason above, I suggest to end this spinner at 00:56:060 (1) - because guitar end heavy in there and ignore vocal "doushite" for make an epic part until kiai time begin~
20. 01:00:423 (3) - I think the slider end should be soft like you did at 00:58:969 (1) -
21. 01:11:696 (2) - move this 1 grid up for make more centered between (1) and (3)?
22. 01:26:242 (1) - hurr-- remove new combo in here and add in 01:27:333 (3) - for follow the pattern?

1. 00:04:242 (3) - 1 grid left for make spacing seems consistent with (2)?
2. 00:06:605 (1) - more be good if remove this new combo for "completing" the star pattern
3. 00:10:969 (1) - I guess this is weird if end in red tick-- I suggest to remove 00:12:423 (1) - and end the spinner in there
4. 00:21:151 (1) - add finish in here?
5. 00:32:787 (1) - ^
6. 00:35:696 (1,2,3) - make these notes pattern into something like this? I think that more make good flow~
7. 00:41:514 (1) - add finish in beginning. also try to move the reverse direction 1grid left for make that not touching slider (3)?
8. 00:42:787 - listen the music properly-- in here more better if add an note for follow the drum sound in music as well~
9. 00:47:333 (1) - add finish in beginning again
10. 00:52:423 (1) - remove the new combo for make combo set same with previous pattern and add finish in beginning~
11. 01:02:423 (2) - move the 2nd point into x:288 y:272 for make this blanketing properly with (1)?
12. 01:03:333 (1,2) - a bit strange rhythm in here and this is a bit hard to understand orz try this rhythm instead?
13. 01:09:151 (3) - I think in here is not 1/4 rhythm-- why not just add slider like 01:09:514 (4) - and make a pattern like this? don't forget add finish in beginning
14. 01:19:423 (1) - try to end this spinner at 01:20:787 for follow the vocal and map the empty part from 01:21:151 until 01:22:060 like this.. add whistle in (1,3) for follow the guitar sound
15. 01:26:787 (1,2,3) - add whistle for follow the piano in music as well?

1. 00:00:423 (1) - add whistle? add something in here for make sense when starting~
2. 00:06:605 (1) - consider to add jump in here like you did at 00:05:151 (1,2,3,4) - ? my suggestion is put this in top 00:06:787 (2) -
3. 00:07:423 (4) - I guess the triplet in the wrong place-- this note should be at 00:07:242 to follow the drum in music if you hear in 25%
4. 00:08:878 (5) - in here too-- the triplet not follow nothing orz-- in other word this is overmapped? also some note similar like this:
   
   SPOILER

   1. 00:15:787 (2) -
   2. 00:16:514 (5) -
   3. 00:27:423 (2) -
   4. 00:28:151 (4) -
   5. 00:48:514 (6) -
   6. 01:00:878 (2) -
5. 00:21:151 (1) - add finish in here
6. 00:29:514 (3) - add clap in beginning for consistency hitsounding?
7. 00:32:423 (1) - I think this remove this new combo and add in 00:32:787 (3) - more better because the pattern and the rhythm is different?
8. 00:32:787 (3) - add finish in here
9. 00:35:696 (1) - ^ in beginning
10. 00:36:333 - add an note for follow the drum sound in music
11. 00:40:060 (1) - add finish
12. 00:41:514 (1) - ^ in beginning
13. 00:41:878 (2) - stack with 00:40:423 (3,4) - as well? for make this seems tidier~
14. 00:42:787 - add an note for follow the drum sound in music
15. 00:47:333 (1) - add finish in beginning again
16. 00:52:424 (1) - add finish
17. 00:53:515 (2) - move this 1 grid up for make this stacked with 00:52:060 (4,5,6) -
18. 01:02:969 (3) - stack this properly with (1)'s end too?
19. 01:04:423 (4,5) - would be better if change these notes into just one slider like you did at hard diff
20. 01:09:151 (1,2,3,4) - aaa this too-- the stream should start in 01:09:878 .. not in here for follow the drum sound lol
21. 01:14:969 (1) - this reverse a bit overlap with 01:14:605 (3,4) - hitburst-- make more visible?
22. 01:16:060 (4) - finish sound here more better instead the clap o3o
23. 01:26:787 (1,2,3) - add whistle for follow the piano in music as well?

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hello ~ Weez ~

Random mod for my Queue ~

[249's Easy]

1. 00:18:242 (1) - Remove too short new combo. nope this follows the piano, and only the piano.
2. 00:24:060 (1) - ^ same as above, but the cymbals, and only the cymbals.
3. 01:26:969 (3) - Add new combo looks better.it does, but nothing in the instrumental changes here.

Hope this can help you ~

Good luck with rank ~

Yasora wrote:

m4m~

Easy

1. 00:00:423 (1) - add whistle? add something in here for make sense when starting~ no the finish should be loud enough for an introduction. it'll sound weird for me with i add a whistle and a finish next to each other here IMO.
2. 00:03:696 (2) - move this into x:248 y:356 for make symmetry with slider (1)? seems more tidier if symmetry alright fixed.
3. 00:16:787 (1) - remove this new combo for make same combo set with before pattern? no i did this to match the video BG.
4. 00:19:696 (3) - would be better if add finish in the end for guitar sound imo no i only add finishes for the cymbals.
5. 00:25:878 (2) - move this into x:272 y:124 for make this seems tidier and symmetry >_<? nope this is intentional because it'll ruin the triangle for (1,1,2) and i don't see that much of a difference during gameplay.
6. 00:55:333 (4,5) - move these notes into something like this or this? I think this is will make the pattern looks more better~ alright applied the 2nd one.
7. 00:58:969 (1,2,3) - ng,, this pattern is a bit weird to see since (2) not in center orz-- and (1) slider shape is a bit not symmetry.. maybe change like this? please don't worry about (3) stacked in (1)'s head.. I think that no make the player confuse-- in gameplay (3)'s head still visible really >_<
   

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   alright fixed.
8. 01:07:696 (1) - add whistle in the end? I think that fit with vocal~ added a finish instead.
9. 01:12:787 (2) - ^ just add ahh this sounds nice. fixed.
10. 01:18:242 (1) - why new combo in here? remove for make same with 01:13:514 (1,2,3,4,5) - because it matches the video BG.
11. 01:21:878 (1) - a bit overlap with hitburst after spinner? make more visible is more better imo
12. 01:28:151 - remove this timing point? I don't think this is necessary..orz i forgot to remove that ><. fixed.

Good luck desu~

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Artist:supercell feat. Hatsune Miku
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