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fripSide - only my railgun (TV size)

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mike666234
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Joined May 2011
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mike666234
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, July 09, 2011 at 2:30:43 PM

Artist: fripSide
Title: only my railgun (TV Size)
Source: To Aru Kagaku no Railgun
Tags: Index Yoshino Nanjo
BPM: 143
Filesize: 3868kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.33 stars, 96 notes)
  2. Hard (4.86 stars, 193 notes)
  3. Normal (4.65 stars, 239 notes)
Download: fripSide - only my railgun (TV Size)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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[WIP]
This is my first map, so don't judge too harshly!
Currently looking for mods.

Storyboard: self
Beatmaps (Easy, Normal, Hard): self

Changes:

Raging Bull :
lots of stuff in easy.
normal not done yet.
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Weez
2,318 posts
Joined February 2009
Weez
Since i was pretty bored, I'm just gonna take a quick look at this :D

BPM: 143.00
Offset: 1,038

bitrate for MP3 should be between 128-192

Should be "TV Size"

Nice map, especially if you just started!

Just call me back when your ready for a full mod

Don't forget to kudosu!
mike666234
31 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
mike666234
Thanks for looking into it.

~~bzzz... calling Weezy back :D

aargh. Weezy... where are youu. sob.
OzzyOzrock
5,185 posts
Joined August 2010
OzzyOzrock
[General]
Uhh, the SB confuses me, but whichever image you're using as your BG, must be 1024x768.
Comboburst seems small too. Ask an SB expert.

[Easy]
Umm, are you using distance snap? That's needed for a ranked map. All notes have to be spaced correctly, so people can visualize the rhythms. Especially in an easy diff. So use distance snap with all the notes. Then I can check again lol. Oh! Make sure to use at least Grid Size 3. Though 4 is good too.

You also have A LOT of snapping errors. So go to Timing > Re-snap section. Or Re-snap all notes... bah, yeah, do that.

01:24:969 (68,1) - You can't do this. They're on the same place.
[Normal]
Same stuff. Aaah

You can do it~
[Hard]
Same same stuff. Though, you can be less strict, I guess.

Uguu, good luck, call me back when everything's fixed.
mike666234
31 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
mike666234
looking into it.

OzzyOzrock wrote:

You also have A LOT of snapping errors. So go to Timing > Re-snap section. Or Re-snap all notes... bah, yeah, do that.
what do you mean by snapping error? i'll just do what you say, but explain later :D
EDIT: nvm, i know what you mean. how did they get there?...
EDIT: oh.. i see.. changing the offset screws up the snapping...
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Weez
2,318 posts
Joined February 2009
Weez

mike666234 wrote:

looking into it.

OzzyOzrock wrote:

You also have A LOT of snapping errors. So go to Timing > Re-snap section. Or Re-snap all notes... bah, yeah, do that.
what do you mean by snapping error? i'll just do what you say, but explain later :D
EDIT: nvm, i know what you mean. how did they get there?...
whenever you change the bpm/offset you gotta resnap all notes.

Plus I didn't forget about this :U just been busy lately
mike666234
31 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
mike666234
everything's done :D see changelog. hi Weezy!

only thing left to do it fix the sb and beat sounds and combos.. oh man. school starting soon. gonna be pretty inactive, so I must get this working pretty soon.

EDIT:
bg-fixed
beat sounds-fixed
combos-fixed
distance-fixed
snapping-fixed

all done :D
wmfchris
osu! Alumni
5,072 posts
Joined March 2008
wmfchris
[general]
-the tags are quite not necessary, duplicated in source and artist.
-set preview time in EVERY diff~
-some of your BG image is in extremely high resolution, resize them into 800x600 (1024x768)?

general issue
-spacing problem still occur, like 00:08:380 (1,2,3), check the spacing multiple on the right-top corner, make sure to minimize the spacing different with the assitance of gridsnapping. If the distance snap spacing can't do you a favour in equal distance spacing, do it manually.
Check all of them while I won't talk much about them in the following mod.
-You don't need to clap so often, try to clap regularly (clap per 1 beat/2 beats?) except when you are going to emphasize some melody.
-00:10:268 (2,3,4) - A stright, multiple sliders are not preferred since they often cause confusion, I can't remember clearly but not so rankable. <---- Many sliders are arranged like this. Try to seperate each slider.
-The very short break can be removed.

[Hard]
00:13:100 (1) - remove new combo
00:27:786 - try to make this part a bit softer, 60%?, also, the 5-beat pattern doesn't not fits well in a "Hard" while the empty spaces are really odd.
imo, the new combo is put too frequently for a Hard, but you put that intentionally so it maybe fine. Instead you may raise HP drain by 1.

[Normal]
well, 1/2 streams of notes with some 1/4 inside it may be too hard as a normal. The stacking and arrangments looks lacking creativity orz.

Take some other mappers' map as reference and do some remap, and find me again? :3~
mike666234
31 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
mike666234

wmfchris wrote:

-some of your BG image is in extremely high resolution, resize them into 800x600 (1024x768)?
as long as the file size is not too massive, I don't see what's the problem. I really don't want to re-storyboard.

-You don't need to clap so often, try to clap regularly (clap per 1 beat/2 beats?) except when you are going to emphasize some melody.
You're right :D I'll reduce em.

00:27:786 - try to make this part a bit softer, 60%?, also, the 5-beat pattern doesn't not fits well in a "Hard" while the empty spaces are really odd.
mkay. I'll see what I can do. The 5-beat pattern fits into the background instrumental.

The stacking and arrangments looks lacking creativity orz.
:(
I'll look into the rest of your suggestions.
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mike666234
31 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
mike666234
will currently be less active as ima working on a Phy project.
Raging Bull
2,809 posts
Joined June 2010
Raging Bull
General:
Holy crap. That's a lot of high resolution pics. You need to tone them down to 800x600. That's the max (or so I've been told) for SBing.
Background resolution is good.
Maybe an extra combo color would be good

Easy:
Try x1.3 distance snapping notes are bunched up together too much
+1 Circle size
Use tick rate 1
00:35:443 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Uh. Move these around. Playing at the same spot for so long.
00:38:380 (4) - NC
00:54:744 (1,1,1) - Slider here?
00:56:422 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - I'm not sure if triples are best yet for easy.
00:58:940 (1,2,3,4,5) - I'm not sure about this too.
01:03:135 (2,1,2,1,2) - And this would be rather hard to see for beginners.
01:12:156 (4,5,6,7,8) - Uhh..Don't map to the vocals here. Too many beats could confuse new players.
Plays more like a normal really.

Normal:
00:28:940 (2,3,4) - Space properly. I don't really like wrong spacing for easy/normals.
00:30:618 (2,3,4) - ^
00:32:296 (2,3,4,1) - ^ You also changed spacing after 1 which would be even more confusing.
01:12:156 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing
01:14:464 (1,1) - Don't like how it got overlapped. Move the second slider somewhere else.
This plays like a hard.

Hard:
01:11:737 (2,3) - Space this properly. Looks like a triple but it isn't
01:27:471 (1) - Well since this is a hard, Just use 3 notes as you have been doing with your other 2 difficulties. You can make a jump with it if you like.
mike666234
31 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
mike666234
changed some stuff. normal not done for the time being. easy should be all good now.
Coro
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Joined September 2010
Coro
Star for now

Taiko difficulty on the way~
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