1. Normal (2.12 stars, 221 notes)
2. Queen (3.81 stars, 448 notes)
3. SamiPale's Hard (3.15 stars, 363 notes)

ballban wrote:

遊女 - 散って、咲いて
ゆな ちって、さいて
yuna - chitte , saite

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Sprosive wrote:

STAR FOR THE TITLE!

kiddly wrote:

ballban wrote:

遊女 - 散って、咲いて
ゆな ちって、さいて
yuna - chitte , saite

无责任翻译

这个我懂啊我主要是想翻成英文

Natteke wrote:

oh man, such a great map ;-;

Queen
-- Offset is 1990. Don't worry about resnapping
00:54:280 (2,3) - This part feels very wrong. This feels better:

SPOILER

00:55:682 (6) - Remove this slider, add a hit circle
00:55:821 (7) - Add a hit circle here. Stack it with (6)
02:02:271 (4,5,6,7) - These jumps fit, but they aren't positioned well. See picture reference below

SPOILER

02:28:065 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This is an awesome part. Just thought I should point that out.
02:43:765 (1) - Kiai should end here.

SamiPale
00:11:663 (6) - NC
00:12:364 (1) - Remove combo
00:13:205 (5) - NC
00:13:485 (2) - Remove combo
00:23:999 (4) - Add a hit circle here.
00:32:971 (4) - ^
00:41:523 (6) - ^
01:57:364 (6) - ^
02:26:102 (2) - ^
02:43:766 (11) - Kiai should end here

Normal
-- Offset is 1990
00:01:990 (1) - I think it's safe to say that perhaps stacking 3 notes like this on a normal difficulty might be to difficult. Since this happens often in this map, I won't point it out elsewhere. If you decide against changing it, I trust your judgement.
00:44:607 (5) - Add a break time.
00:52:738 (6) - ^
01:03:672 (7) - Make this a slider that lasts one full beat.
Good difficulty

Easy
-- Why are you using 1/6? I assume this was a mistake done after you mapped stuff. Just in case, change it back to 1/4, 1/2, or 1/1
-- I think the start of the map is a bit empty.
00:02:831 (2) - Add a hit circle
00:04:513 (3) - NC
00:05:074 (2) - Add a hit circle
00:06:196 (4) - ^
00:06:756 (3) - NC
00:11:803 (2) - Add a hit circle
00:13:485 (3) - NC
00:14:046 (5) - Add a hit circler
00:33:112 (4) - Add a hit circle
00:43:485 (2) - Add a break time
01:00:588 (6) - NC

1. Fine, but some insconsistency kiai time in easy and normal diff. I suggest you map late the part of the song in easy and normal diff like samipale dan queen diff, and use kiai time.

1. I suggest using 1.0x distance spacing since you overlap note often in this diff. I think it's not good for beginner, because overlap note is hard to see for beginner.
2. 00:13:485 (3) - I think finish sound here will be great. And the hitsound rythim will be more consistent.
3. 00:15:728 (5) - ^ but in the start of the slider.
4. 00:20:214 (1) - ^
5. 00:28:065 (6) - space this a little bit further from 5. Since it have spacing that lower than 1.0x
6. 00:33:672 (1,1,1,1) - why are you have new combo spacing here? I don't agree with it.
7. 00:38:158 (1) - finish sound will be great here.
8. 00:42:084 (5,6,1) - space this further. You are using 0,72x spacing here. Also if you space this further, the circle will easier to see for beginner.
9. 00:43:485 (2) - ^
10. 00:44:887 - because the vocal song is still in the go. I suggest you put a spinner here? And it ends on 00:46:009
11. 00:48:813 (2,3) - space this further. same reason as above.
12. 00:52:738 (2) - ^
13. 00:53:859 (1) - ^
14. 00:56:102 (5) - finish sound at the start of the slider will be great.
15. 01:00:028 (4,5,1,2) - space further again please.
16. 01:06:196 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - ^
17. 01:18:532 (1) - it seems you forgot to add whistle at the start of the slider.
18. 01:40:962 (1) - ^ at the end point of the slider
19. 01:43:205 (2) - ^ at start point and second repeat.
20. 01:49:934 (1) - finish sound at the start of the slider will be great
21. 01:52:177 (2) - inconsistence spacing. Further it please. And add whistle at the start of the slider to make hitsound more consistence.
22. 01:54:420 (1) - Whistle sound at the repeat. Same reason as above.
23. 02:01:149 (2) - ^ at the start of the slider
24. 02:03:392 (3) - ^ at the start of the slider too.
25. I suggest you map the last part of this diff.

1. 00:01:990 (1,2,3) - orz, 1/4 triplet in normal difficulty? 1/4 note is suppose only exist on harder diff, not in normal. I suggest changing it into repeating slider.
2. 00:11:102 (1,2) - 1/4 stream again
3. 00:13:205 (1,2,3) - ^
4. 00:20:214 (2) - finish sound at the start of the slider will be great since it's the start of phase changing. Also the slider shape is little weird. I suggest you remove the red waypoint and make it arc slider instead. Example : http://puu.sh/7OJi
5. 00:25:822 (2) - slider shape is same as above which is weird. I suggest changing it into arc slider.
6. 00:29:186 (1) - addng finish sound at the start of the slider will be great.
7. 00:44:887 - same with easy, adding spinner here would be great.
8. 00:47:130 (1) - since the new part of the vocal start here, i think adding finish sound here will be great.
9. 00:51:616 (4) - This slider is overlapped by 1. I think that is not good. You can make the arc slider to avoid the overlap instead. Example :http://puu.sh/7OR4 .Also fix the spacing with 5 and 6 if you follow this suggestion.
10. 00:53:859 - same as above, the vocal still going. So adding spinner until 00:54:981 is good.
11. 00:56:102 (1) - finish? same reason as above.
12. 01:01:429 (3) - Since this circle is overlapped by the slider no 2, it's best to move this circle to x:232 y:360 or wherever you want but don't be overlapped by the slider.
13. 01:16:009 (1,2,3) - 1/4 stream again. Change it.
14. 01:20:495 (1,2,3) - ^
15. 01:24:981 (3,4,5) - ^
16. 01:40:682 (1,2,3) - ^ also add finish sound to the start point of repeat slider 3. Finish sound there is great.
17. 01:47:411 (1,2,3) - ^
18. 01:49:934 (1) - since there's 'bang' sound in the back, so adding finish sound to this circle will be great.
19. 01:58:626 (1,2,3) - 1/4 stream
20. I suggest you to map the end part of the song.

1. 00:10:682 (5) - i think finish sound at the end point of the slider is somewhat too loud. I suggest to decrease it by 20%.
2. Oh well, this difficulty is nice. I can't find anything less or wrong anymore. Well done.

1. Is this a guest diff? If it is yes, you should include the name of the maker into all diff tags. If it is no, then i suggest rename it to Insane.
2. 00:04:513 (2) - adding whistle sound at the start of the slider will be great and make the hitsound more consistent.
3. 00:11:242 (6) - same as Samipale diff, finish here is somewhat too loud. Decrease it by 20% or somewhat.
4. 00:20:214 (3) - finish sound at the start of the slider will be good.
5. 01:05:074 (1) - ^
6. 01:13:205 (1,1,1) - i'm not agree with spamming nc here.
7. 01:14:046 (1) - finish sound at the start of the slider? same reason as above.
8. 01:18:532 (1) - ^
9. 01:23:018 (2) - ^
10. 01:40:962 (3) - ^
11. 01:48:953 (8) - I suggest to remove the finish sound here. It doesnt fit with song at all.
12. 01:49:934 (2) - instead adding finish sound only at the start of the slider will be fit more better.
13. 01:58:906 (1) - ^
14. 02:07:878 (3) - ^
15. 02:16:850 (3) - ^