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Is lily <3
Hello, I'm Lily.
[Easy]
Fine. z(^_^)b
[Normal]
This is the second map where the Slider Velocity is the same in Easy as in Normal. T_T
[Hard]
Countdown doesn't sound right for this map. Go to "Song Select" then go to the "Storyboarding" tab and you'll see a "Countdown Offset". Make that 1.
[Snow]
Too hard. Too fast. T_T -1 or -2 on AR?
I think I'll mod better tomorrow. Very good map.
[Easy]
Fine. z(^_^)b
[Normal]
This is the second map where the Slider Velocity is the same in Easy as in Normal. T_T
[Hard]
Countdown doesn't sound right for this map. Go to "Song Select" then go to the "Storyboarding" tab and you'll see a "Countdown Offset". Make that 1.
[Snow]
Too hard. Too fast. T_T -1 or -2 on AR?
I think I'll mod better tomorrow. Very good map.
Actually, if the Snow difficulty is how it is now...this might go for Approval instead.
Just sayin'.
Just sayin'.
TAG+hvick225?
-SNOW-
AND AR9 IS BETTER.
-Hard-
00:47:084 (3) - 1 grid up.
00:58:124 (2,3,5) - sapcing is not good :<
02:40:124 (3) - move this circle down like this:
02:40:364 (4) - new combo here
02:43:004 (1) - remove new combo
02:43:244 (2) - new combo
03:23:564 (4) - add a repeat?
-SNOW-
max score is fine now. and it's not very hard, should be rank imo.Lilac wrote:
Actually, if the Snow difficulty is how it is now...this might go for Approval instead.
Just sayin'.
AND AR9 IS BETTER.
-Hard-
00:47:084 (3) - 1 grid up.
00:58:124 (2,3,5) - sapcing is not good :<
02:40:124 (3) - move this circle down like this:
02:40:364 (4) - new combo here
02:43:004 (1) - remove new combo
02:43:244 (2) - new combo
03:23:564 (4) - add a repeat?
Sorry, Sanae. T_T
Topic Starter
np.lilyLilac wrote:
Sorry, Sanae. T_T
Popped for now
-For the record default x . , % don't show up anywhere in the map. Delete them from the folder and do full submit (only the score ones do something)
-I don't really see why the custom offset for the countdown needs to be different? It sounds fine at 0 to me
-From what I have heard most people do not want Vocaloid in source. I would look into that quickly
-I kind of want to say cut your mp3 seeing as there is 1 minute unmapped, think about it~
-Try and keep the kiai time consistent on all of your difficulties
-None of the difficulties really need an audio lead-in
Easy:
Looks good
Neet's Normal:
Looks good
Hard:
00:11:804 (2,3,4) - spacing (jump doesn't fit)
01:09:164 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - jumps don't really fit to me
01:13:244 (2,3) - ^
01:16:844 (1,2) - ^
01:34:844 (6,1) - avoid hidden repeat
Some of the jumps are fine but others seem to be at random places and don't really fit with the song in my opinion
Snow:
This difficulty has be pushing the ranking line but I guess it can pass..
Don't like AR 9~ Also don't really think this song needs it
01:32:684 (3,1) - would look better if not overlapped
02:39:125 (1) - unsnapped
02:39:185 (2) - ^
02:39:305 (4) - ^
Call me back and I should be able to rebubble
-For the record default x . , % don't show up anywhere in the map. Delete them from the folder and do full submit (only the score ones do something)
-I don't really see why the custom offset for the countdown needs to be different? It sounds fine at 0 to me
-From what I have heard most people do not want Vocaloid in source. I would look into that quickly
-I kind of want to say cut your mp3 seeing as there is 1 minute unmapped, think about it~
-Try and keep the kiai time consistent on all of your difficulties
-None of the difficulties really need an audio lead-in
Easy:
Looks good
Neet's Normal:
Looks good
Hard:
00:11:804 (2,3,4) - spacing (jump doesn't fit)
01:09:164 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - jumps don't really fit to me
01:13:244 (2,3) - ^
01:16:844 (1,2) - ^
01:34:844 (6,1) - avoid hidden repeat
Some of the jumps are fine but others seem to be at random places and don't really fit with the song in my opinion
Snow:
This difficulty has be pushing the ranking line but I guess it can pass..
Don't like AR 9~ Also don't really think this song needs it
01:32:684 (3,1) - would look better if not overlapped
02:39:125 (1) - unsnapped
02:39:185 (2) - ^
02:39:305 (4) - ^
Call me back and I should be able to rebubble
Topic Starter
i dont cut the mp3 ..
and could i dont decrease snow's diff's AR.. because its easier to read the map in ar9
and could i dont decrease snow's diff's AR.. because its easier to read the map in ar9
Hi! Before this gets bubbled or something, I'd like to show you this slider ball set, maybe you could use it >w<
Download: Slider Ball Set.rar
No kds ~
Download: Slider Ball Set.rar
No kds ~
I apologize for the long time I took to get back to this
Randomly checked the folder and don't forget to change your default x . , % to score ones to show up in the map
Derek should be able to do his remod today before I rebubble~
Randomly checked the folder and don't forget to change your default x . , % to score ones to show up in the map
Derek should be able to do his remod today before I rebubble~
[General]
*Letterboxing looks kinda weird since it cuts off the top of Lily's head...
*Perhaps start the second kiai section at 01:20:684 instead?
*Use this spinner-background instead of your current one. That way, it'll be a nice/smooth transition from the normal bg to the spinner: http://puu.sh/Q49
*Since kiai affects the main menu, I suggest that the first kiai section end at the same spot on each difficulty. Either 00:30:764 or 00:32:684 would be a nice spot.
*Perhaps add a single kiai fountain at 02:39:404 since that's where most of the diffs end (and where a chorus would have been)?
And how about a kiai section from 03:25:484 to 03:40:844? That would put a fountain on the last note of Snow, and would look nice on the main menu (where kiai will show even if that part isn't mapped). If you want to, then add it to all diffs.
*Fix the score/default skin elements, of course.
[Easy]
*End kiai at 01:36:044.
00:55:724 (1,2) - This sounds strange because the vocals/cymbal ends on the blue tick before (2). How about just making this a slider like: http://puu.sh/Q2v The sliders after this have the same blue tick pattern, but it doesn't sound as awkward as these two single notes.
02:29:804 (1,2) - ^
[Neet's Normal]
*Diff settings are a bit low, so perhaps raise Drain/OD 1 tick each (and maybe approach rate 1 tick as well)?
*SliderMultiplier:0.999999999999999 - weirdddd :p
01:00:524 (2) - Maybe move this back to the blue tick and extend? http://puu.sh/Q68
[Hard]
*If you're going to have a kiai section at 03:02:444, then add it to the other difficulties as well (same reasons as up above with the main menu).
01:22:604 (1) - A bit hidden under 01:21:404 (2)'s hitburst (100/300/etc).
01:27:884 (6,1) - The overlap makes it look like 1 is only 1/4th of a beat after 6. Try fixing the spacing so that there's no overlap.
01:35:084 (1) - hidden under the previous hitbursts.
02:54:764 - Expected a note here.
[Snow]
*I really do not like the AR 9 on this map. It just feels too tough and isn't very fun imo. I really suggest lowering the approach rate one tick. If you do, then perhaps raise the OD/Drain one tick each since they would be a bit low.
*Tags:SnowWhite - Not a big deal, but why is white capitalized only on this diff? :p
00:55:484 (6,7) - The short slider makes this look like three 1/4 notes. How about stacking 6/7 like you did a couple of times before this?
00:56:444 (3,4,5) - Again, the short slider makes this pattern confusing.
01:36:044 - Expected a note here.
02:03:404 (4,5) - Maybe just make these into a single note stream?
02:39:125 (1,2,3,4) - Unsnapped? And these are hard to read/predict anyway. How about trying a 1/8th repeating slider like: http://puu.sh/Q7Q
*Letterboxing looks kinda weird since it cuts off the top of Lily's head...
*Perhaps start the second kiai section at 01:20:684 instead?
*Use this spinner-background instead of your current one. That way, it'll be a nice/smooth transition from the normal bg to the spinner: http://puu.sh/Q49
*Since kiai affects the main menu, I suggest that the first kiai section end at the same spot on each difficulty. Either 00:30:764 or 00:32:684 would be a nice spot.
*Perhaps add a single kiai fountain at 02:39:404 since that's where most of the diffs end (and where a chorus would have been)?
And how about a kiai section from 03:25:484 to 03:40:844? That would put a fountain on the last note of Snow, and would look nice on the main menu (where kiai will show even if that part isn't mapped). If you want to, then add it to all diffs.
*Fix the score/default skin elements, of course.
[Easy]
*End kiai at 01:36:044.
00:55:724 (1,2) - This sounds strange because the vocals/cymbal ends on the blue tick before (2). How about just making this a slider like: http://puu.sh/Q2v The sliders after this have the same blue tick pattern, but it doesn't sound as awkward as these two single notes.
02:29:804 (1,2) - ^
[Neet's Normal]
*Diff settings are a bit low, so perhaps raise Drain/OD 1 tick each (and maybe approach rate 1 tick as well)?
*SliderMultiplier:0.999999999999999 - weirdddd :p
01:00:524 (2) - Maybe move this back to the blue tick and extend? http://puu.sh/Q68
[Hard]
*If you're going to have a kiai section at 03:02:444, then add it to the other difficulties as well (same reasons as up above with the main menu).
01:22:604 (1) - A bit hidden under 01:21:404 (2)'s hitburst (100/300/etc).
01:27:884 (6,1) - The overlap makes it look like 1 is only 1/4th of a beat after 6. Try fixing the spacing so that there's no overlap.
01:35:084 (1) - hidden under the previous hitbursts.
02:54:764 - Expected a note here.
[Snow]
*I really do not like the AR 9 on this map. It just feels too tough and isn't very fun imo. I really suggest lowering the approach rate one tick. If you do, then perhaps raise the OD/Drain one tick each since they would be a bit low.
*Tags:SnowWhite - Not a big deal, but why is white capitalized only on this diff? :p
00:55:484 (6,7) - The short slider makes this look like three 1/4 notes. How about stacking 6/7 like you did a couple of times before this?
00:56:444 (3,4,5) - Again, the short slider makes this pattern confusing.
01:36:044 - Expected a note here.
02:03:404 (4,5) - Maybe just make these into a single note stream?
02:39:125 (1,2,3,4) - Unsnapped? And these are hard to read/predict anyway. How about trying a 1/8th repeating slider like: http://puu.sh/Q7Q
i really love it 
star <3
star <3I've been waiting for this song to be mapped >.<
Star~ <33
Star~ <33
wow i didn't star this.
Sorry for really long wait had more stuff to do than I expected~
-MP3 was slightly longer than it needed to be so here is a new one + a faded out end to it (offset doesn't seem to change but double check that)
http://www.mediafire.com/?gvrnvikd566uxel
-The default x . , % look odd with the custom numbers you have, try and make some score- things to match them (you had them named as default before)
-Lowering the stack leniency by 1 on every difficulty seems to make some of the stacks look better (try it on test)
-Move seleP from tags to the source (or put Vocaloid in the source but not as many people will like that)
-Do you need hvick225 in tags?
Easy:
00:25:964 (5,1) - you could go through and avoid some overlaps like these to make the map neater
01:39:884 (1) - sounds better extended to next white tick to me
Neet's Normal:
Might want to start this difficulty at the same place as the others for the sake of consistency
Hard:
-No tick rate 2? Seems to fit more
00:45:044 (3,1) - could be stacked better
00:15:404 (1,2) - nazi: some patterns like this could look cleaner
01:32:204 (1,2) - check stack leniency with stuff like this
01:58:124 (3,1) - could look neater
02:32:204 (5) - move so repeat is more visible?
03:06:284 (1,2) - avoid overlap
03:13:964 (1,2) - ^
Snow:
-No kiai at the end like the other difficulty?
02:38:924 (7,1) - move so repeat isn't hidden
Some spinner bugs fixed and..
Rebubbled~
-MP3 was slightly longer than it needed to be so here is a new one + a faded out end to it (offset doesn't seem to change but double check that)
http://www.mediafire.com/?gvrnvikd566uxel
-The default x . , % look odd with the custom numbers you have, try and make some score- things to match them (you had them named as default before)
-Lowering the stack leniency by 1 on every difficulty seems to make some of the stacks look better (try it on test)
-Move seleP from tags to the source (or put Vocaloid in the source but not as many people will like that)
-Do you need hvick225 in tags?
Easy:
00:25:964 (5,1) - you could go through and avoid some overlaps like these to make the map neater
01:39:884 (1) - sounds better extended to next white tick to me
Neet's Normal:
Might want to start this difficulty at the same place as the others for the sake of consistency
Hard:
-No tick rate 2? Seems to fit more
00:45:044 (3,1) - could be stacked better
00:15:404 (1,2) - nazi: some patterns like this could look cleaner
01:32:204 (1,2) - check stack leniency with stuff like this
01:58:124 (3,1) - could look neater
02:32:204 (5) - move so repeat is more visible?
03:06:284 (1,2) - avoid overlap
03:13:964 (1,2) - ^
Snow:
-No kiai at the end like the other difficulty?
02:38:924 (7,1) - move so repeat isn't hidden
Some spinner bugs fixed and..
Rebubbled~
[General]
*I forgot to resize the spinner-background last time. It should be 692px tall instead of 768px. Also, this one is a jpg to save nearly 1MB of folder space. http://puu.sh/19RD
*I know I've said it before, but how about disabling letterboxing?
*mp3 volume is so loud that it's sometimes hard to hear the editor's metronome and hitsounds. However, notes aren't TOO quiet, so it should be fine.
*Since kiai now affects the main menu, perhaps end the first section at 00:30:764 on all difficulties to be consistent?
*New score symbols look strange (too bold and they shouldn't be up so high). http://puu.sh/19QA http://puu.sh/19QB
*I thought the old symbols looked better, but you had them named -default instead of -score. James says that you deleted them, but I still have them if you want to re-add 'em. http://puu.sh/19QS http://puu.sh/19QT http://puu.sh/19QV http://puu.sh/19QW
[Easy]
00:51:884 (1) - Sounds a bit odd with nothing between this and (2). Maybe try a repeating slider on the red tick like http://puu.sh/19Ya or just add a finish to the end of the slider.
00:55:724 (1,2) - you could try a slider like the above (although you didn't map to many blue ticks on Easy, so I'm not sure if you want to keep any sliders on blue ticks)
02:25:964 (1) - same as 00:51:884
02:29:804 (1,2) - same as 00:55:724
[Normal]
Fine.
[Hard]
*I wish that this diff had been a bit more consistent in how difficult it was (turned from "Hard" into nearly "Insane" towards the middle/end), but overall it wasn't bad.
02:13:484 (1) - Felt a bit too short to have a note 1/2 a beat later. Perhaps delete 02:14:684 (1) to not make the pattern as difficult?
02:53:084 (6) - A bit hidden under the hit bursts from 02:51:884 (3,4). Try moving it below (7) like http://puu.sh/19Zb
[Snow]
*Snap the first kiai section to the tick at 00:15:404.
*It wouldn't hurt to raise the OD 1-2 ticks. I tested with +2 OD and ended with ~94% accuracy.
Mostly minor stuff, so I should be able to rank after you look at these.
*I forgot to resize the spinner-background last time. It should be 692px tall instead of 768px. Also, this one is a jpg to save nearly 1MB of folder space. http://puu.sh/19RD
*I know I've said it before, but how about disabling letterboxing?
*mp3 volume is so loud that it's sometimes hard to hear the editor's metronome and hitsounds. However, notes aren't TOO quiet, so it should be fine.
*Since kiai now affects the main menu, perhaps end the first section at 00:30:764 on all difficulties to be consistent?
*New score symbols look strange (too bold and they shouldn't be up so high). http://puu.sh/19QA http://puu.sh/19QB
*I thought the old symbols looked better, but you had them named -default instead of -score. James says that you deleted them, but I still have them if you want to re-add 'em. http://puu.sh/19QS http://puu.sh/19QT http://puu.sh/19QV http://puu.sh/19QW
[Easy]
00:51:884 (1) - Sounds a bit odd with nothing between this and (2). Maybe try a repeating slider on the red tick like http://puu.sh/19Ya or just add a finish to the end of the slider.
00:55:724 (1,2) - you could try a slider like the above (although you didn't map to many blue ticks on Easy, so I'm not sure if you want to keep any sliders on blue ticks)
02:25:964 (1) - same as 00:51:884
02:29:804 (1,2) - same as 00:55:724
[Normal]
Fine.
[Hard]
*I wish that this diff had been a bit more consistent in how difficult it was (turned from "Hard" into nearly "Insane" towards the middle/end), but overall it wasn't bad.
02:13:484 (1) - Felt a bit too short to have a note 1/2 a beat later. Perhaps delete 02:14:684 (1) to not make the pattern as difficult?
02:53:084 (6) - A bit hidden under the hit bursts from 02:51:884 (3,4). Try moving it below (7) like http://puu.sh/19Zb
[Snow]
*Snap the first kiai section to the tick at 00:15:404.
*It wouldn't hurt to raise the OD 1-2 ticks. I tested with +2 OD and ended with ~94% accuracy.
Mostly minor stuff, so I should be able to rank after you look at these.
Topic Starter
fixed 
Great; Ranked!
Congrats 
Topic Starter
thanks james and derek
Congrats !! >w<
触姐好触
你懂的
Topic Starter
卧槽我不懂
射死你
Wow, just wow... Snow diff is one of the best maps I have ever played (>_<)b