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wmfchris
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wmfchris
[general]
1)Need leading time. People need a few seconds to react with the notes... 2 seconds?
2)SB: hold the ending picture until the end of the song...? Also, show the "Gravity" during the break, not on the last note before break?

[normal]
according to the first part, the spacing is either 1.0x or 0.8x. Considering the part after the first break, it's 0.8x. Choose one and re-snap it.
NEED RE-SNAPPING
0:01:984 (3) spacing
0:05:121 (3) spacing
0:07:278 (1) add finish
0:13:553 (1) remove new combo and spacing
...
Just re-snap the whole diff, otherwise I can't mod about spacing.

[hard]
RE-SNAP it for 1.1x according to your first part.
0:12:376 (2) right 1 grid - spacing
0:20:317 (2) spacing?
0:37:278 (1) spacing?
0:57:474 (1,2,3,4) + spacing between sliders
*Within kiai time, dinstance between sliders aren't consistant.

[insane]
0:51:984 Starting from here, spacing of 1/4 streams should be the same? Otherwise spacing of 1/2 notes should be also increases gradually according to spacing of 1/4 streams.

Call me after you've re-snapped it <3

Star~
owl13
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owl13
thank you ^^

SB這提意不錯,,現在完結時也會顯示歌名,反正顯示兩次也沒關係吧XD

另外間隔部份大概照以上弄排列了一下,insane k-time的連點也排緊了一點點,可以覆查一下 =]
wmfchris
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wmfchris
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/13918

So this is m.o.e.v. OR m.o.v.e.?!?

[insane]
0:21:200 (1) spacing
0:21:788 (4) strange O_O

Much better~

依然建議將歌名SB推後
owl13
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owl13

wmfchris wrote:

http://osu.ppy.sh/s/13918

So this is m.o.e.v. OR m.o.v.e.?!?

[insane]
0:21:200 (1) spacing
0:21:788 (4) strange O_O

Much better~

依然建議將歌名SB推後
已改

可以在 youtube 找m.o.e.v.,所以我才是對的

SB的問題我終於了解到了,因為段SB這是為了配合Video而設的,在Video裹我感覺很好,可是當我刪了Video後在BG上看又真的是怪怪的...換BG後現在應該看似正常了
FunnyYing
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FunnyYing
give a star~~~
CHAS
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CHAS
star
tommyufo88
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tommyufo88
:)
owl13
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owl13
thank star ^^
vytalibus
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vytalibus
I'd like to clarify that the band's name is actually "m.o.v.e", and that I saw the video you got this particular song from. There isn't any band that's named "m.o.e.v".

Please change it.
Breeze
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Breeze
[SB]
  1. 在用SBE做淡出效果时最好检查下osb文件里的code是不是完全淡出了,意思就是在osb文件里F后code为0，你有些F效果并没有做到完全淡出,像0.004223115这类code虽然人眼看不出,不过一个未完全消失的图片有可能让烂的机器卡,所以建议把这些不为0的code改为0
  2. 字体颜色太深不太看得清 :roll:
  3. Gravity.png和mapper.png在最后一个note消失后都还一直留到mp3结尾,这样player就必须skip,最好找个合适的地方就让这两个SB item也消失
[General]
  1. Anime不用加到tag里去
  2. countdown没用,所有难度都取消掉吧
[Easy]
  1. 00:07:278 (1) - No whistle,用finish
  2. 00:10:415 (T) - 把这个timing section移到00:10:219去,以防玩的时候点早了音效不同
  3. 00:13:553 (T) - ^, 移到00:13:356,总之前移点都行
  4. 00:19:827 (1) - Finish
  5. 00:24:337 (3) - Finish
  6. 00:24:729, 00:25:121 (4) - Finish
  7. 00:25:513, 00:25:709 (5) - No finish,可以加whistle,00:25:905也可以加上whistle
  8. 00:28:454 (1) - 没finish会好些,不过加上也没问题
  9. 01:10:023 (3) - 加finish
  10. 01:16:298
[Normal]
  1. 00:19:827 (1) - No whistle,用finish
[Hard]
  1. 00:19:827 (1) - No whistle,用finish
  2. 00:25:513 (x) - 为什么这里要降低音量?
  3. 00:54:729 (2) - spacing稍微近了些
  4. 01:19:435 (1) - No whistle, 用finish
[Insane]
  1. 00:38:651 (4) - No whistle, 用finish
  2. 01:19:435 (1) - No whistle, 用finish
其他没什么了
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owl13
151 posts
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owl13
thank you , 已經修正了
owl13
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owl13

vytalibus wrote:

I'd like to clarify that the band's name is actually "m.o.v.e", and that I saw the video you got this particular song from. There isn't any band that's named "m.o.e.v".

Please change it.
In wiki find about this CD , らき☆すた ミュージックフェア

#3. Gravity

歌：m.o.e.v
作詞・作曲・編曲：神前暁
『らき☆すた』第6話、『頭文字D』のパロディシーンでの挿入歌。ショートバージョンがアニメDVD第3巻限定版同梱のサントラCDに収録されていたが、今回フルバージョンが初めて発表された。
アーティスト名の「m.o.e.v」は「頭文字D」の主題歌を多く担当したm.o.v.eのパロディである。その後パロディの対象となったm.o.v.eが2009年8月19日に発売したアルバムで『anim.o.v.e 01』に、m.o.v.eがカバーしたバージョンが収録されている。

So i will not change it. I must Followed this CD Content , but i can add m.o.v.e. on tag
wmfchris
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wmfchris

vytalibus wrote:

I'd like to clarify that the band's name is actually "m.o.v.e", and that I saw the video you got this particular song from. There isn't any band that's named "m.o.e.v".

Please change it.
Similar case has been happened twice
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/13918

It's originally typed as m.o.v.e. and changed to m.o.e.v. now~ lol
Saturio
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Saturio
star~
Diasios
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Diasios
[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.

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[General]

  • • Video Offset -600
    • Some SB images contains too much unnecessary transparency.
[Easy]

  • • 00:01:005 (1,2) - Spacing is wrong, keep "Distance Snap" active and fix it
    • 00:01:984 (3,4,1) - ^
    • 00:04:141 (1,2) - ^
    • 00:05:121 (3,4,1) - ^
    • 00:05:905 (1,1) - ^
[Hard]

  • • 00:36:102 (7,8) - Fix the spacing
owl13
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owl13
thank star =]


thank you , i fix this now
Furawa
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Furawa
;)
Kami_Kaze_old
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Kami_Kaze_old
☆
xipan_old
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xipan_old
8-) 不错 前面那一段 仿佛展现在我面前一段崎岖的山路
就是 好像还差一点点刺激的感觉 :?
ignorethis
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ignorethis
irc modded, seems fine.

star'd
owl13
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owl13
>SOGASOGAMO
thank star =]

>Kami_Kaze
thank star ^^

xipan wrote:

8-) 不错 前面那一段 仿佛展现在我面前一段崎岖的山路
就是 好像还差一点点刺激的感觉 :?
因為本來的circle size是小的,間距也比較大的
只是後來circle size加大了,間隔調小了但又沒對note作出改變
先就這樣吧,有空再研究一下有什麼改動


>ignorethis
感謝檢查
orioncomet
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orioncomet
Wow, I love this song.

a map seem fine. Star
Leorda
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Leorda
Hi again!

orioncomet wrote:

Wow, I love this song.

a map seem fine. Star
Map is fine, but SB seems wrong, unfortunately :(

[Skin]
The spinner-metre is missing

[SB]
1) Some SB is getting cut off, so the SB is bad to see!
Example :


If you already see this, you have to remove the glow, otherwise it's really bad looking

2) The t12.png is too big, so that sb makes offscreen in editor, you have to make it smaller

Overall : Well, you have to make an SB again. Are U using a Paint from Windows or using GIMP? Don't use Paint from Windows, use GIMP or Paint.NET

[Hard]
00:05:905 (5) - I think this is not following the vocal, please move backward to blue tick
00:48:062 (1,2) - How about this slider use normal sound? Not soft

[Insane]
00:07:474 (2,3) - Flip them by using Ctrl+R?
00:48:062 (1,2) - How about this slider use normal sound? Not soft

Good job
STAR
orioncomet
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orioncomet
yea lol I just checking about map, because when I'm playing I never notice other things :< They seem fine to me at all.
owl13
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owl13
OK NOW , I remade SB text now ,

thank you =]
tsuka
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tsuka
insane :

00:51:788 (4,5) - make (5) far away from (4) will be more easy to read
01:08:258 (10) - ^ too closed to the (9)
01:11:984 (13) - finish?

others fine

good work
owl13
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owl13

tsukamaete wrote:

insane :

00:51:788 (4,5) - make (5) far away from (4) will be more easy to read
01:08:258 (10) - ^ too closed to the (9)
01:11:984 (13) - finish?

others fine

good work
thank , i fix this now , and add some note in [Insane] 26s-31s
zerozaber
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zerozaber
in hard lvl you should change the 1/4 beat at 22-26 sec to became 1/4 beat slide

and before the first break [12-15] you strict to real beat to much, you should not add 1/4 mix with 1/2 beat or you can mix but rearrange to get the beat at same place will tell the player that these beat are different form other[I mean that player will not know when the 1/4 beat came if you use it like this] or try to change all 1/4 beat in to a slide [except alone beat]

i haven't try insane but already have a look at computer playing. in kiai you should speed up the velocity[change bpm to 306] to make other know which note are 1/4 or 1/2 [the beat are too close to seperate from eyes]

i know that this game use ears but sometimes the beat in player's mind are different from creator so we need to use our eyes to tell which are 1/4 or 1/2 too

sry for my bad english


pl. i love m.o.v.e.


edit

oh i sry to tell that in normal lvl, you change triple beat in to two beat at intro but that's not good, try to use reslided to make a 3 star tripple beat [i mean triple beat that 3 star map player can play]
owl13
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owl13
about this ,I think this not is problem , if not know when attack note, can retry until affirm

edit them if another mention them again
aesopl19193
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aesopl19193
Star. :)
NatsumeRin
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NatsumeRin
Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
在一个slider的各点上放whistle==点一个whistle的slider，请不要贪图省事，把一些不合理的slider whistle音消掉会比较好呢。例：00:34:141 (1) [Easy]

[Easy]
我不太支持Easy用那么多的circle在弱拍音= = 多用些slider？（像结尾那样？
00:01:005 (1,2) - 我觉得这类音效可能是whistle-normal更好，下同，省略了。
00:05:905 (1) - 是不是该后放1/2的？
00:10:415 (1,2) - 声音突变有点大了。
00:26:494 (1) - 能想办法弄对称吗？
01:06:886 (1) - 和前面的两个slider比起来略违和。。。
01:10:023 (3) - new combo?

[Normal]
00:05:905 (5) - 这不合拍啊……如果你想压yo的音，折返slider也压不上的（声音间隔不同）
00:11:788 (6) - ……其实比起前面突然增大这个突然减小更冷点……我猜你本意要这个音也是强音？那就这个绿线0.5x外加音量设置不变，之后1/2拍再加个绿线改0.5x外加调音量。
00:26:494 (1) - 还是觉得对称了会好看些。
00:50:023 (1--) - 我觉得好像一进kiai，note的间距就有点混乱了……再看一下会比较好？
01:22:572 (1,2,3,4) - 虽然没人说Normal不能用跳，但是那个= =……你明白吧……

[Hard]
00:05:807 (5) - 不合拍。
00:10:807 (3,1) - spacing?
00:20:513 (3) - 不合拍，一定要压的话可能还不如这样（如图）

01:12:376 (6) - new combo? 以及能不能把这个slider加长1/2拍压上high的那个音（可以用finish）spinner当然延后1/2
01:22:572 (1,2) - 怎么最后的强音反而音量弱了？

[Insane]
00:51:200 (1--) - 我只是觉得1 2 3 4 56789 10 这个节奏真的那么好，值得你用那么多遍吗= =。。。依我所见有几次根本没必要或不合啊
01:11:592 (11) - new combo比较好吧。
01:22:572 (1,2) - 同Hard
owl13
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owl13
THANK, 以參考意見作出相應的修改

好了, EASY變成咇咇圖了XD

[N]的kiai note 已開distance snap 修正一點點

[I] 的 1-10 beat 已刪掉兩排,當初只是想放多一點有手感的連打,所以一直重復用下去 :roll:

最後改了不小hitsound
Derekku
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Derekku
[General]
*Please add a hitcircle-overlay (even if it's the default one).
*Please add a scorebar-colour/scorebar-bg (even if they're the default).
*comboburst is a tiiiiiny bit too big (max width allowed is 500px). Also, one of her fingers looks like it's cut off and there's some gray lines around her that could be erased, I suppose.
*spinner-metre isn't drawn on the spinner-background correctly/exactly, and there ares mudges and imperfections on them.
*All SB/Skin objects' edges are choppy and a bit unappealing (especially on sprites such as the 2X warning, beatmap info at the beginning, and spinner-circle). I hope I'm not sounding too rude D: (sorry ._.; )
*SB has typos (papadise, eath, etc.)
*Please keep kiai consistent in all difficulties.

I don't have time to get to modding the difficulties individually right now, but while doing an offset check, hard/insane seem to have spots where the spacing is clustered and hard-to-read. Spacing feels a bit sloppy or inconsistent at times and could use a bit of work. I see a lot of potential, though, so good luck!
owl13
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owl13
o my god ,[I] kiai time is disappear @@ , i forget check kiai time as [I] :oops:

ok now , i will fixed your propose now
Sakura
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Sakura
Red = Major issue, you should fix this
Purple = Issue, It's better if you fix this, and can sometimes pass if justified
Blue = Minor issue, you can ignore if you dont want to change
Green = Feedback / Comments
Black = Suggestion
[General]
You cant see the star on all hitcircles, like for example: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8083 the blue ones

Otherwise looks fine +Star~
owl13
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owl13
ok thank , i fixed it now =]
Mok
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Mok
Updated Mod's Info:
Mine are all suggestions. You're free to follow or not this mod :3
If I found a beat who must be added, i'll write it.
Remember to check spacing after all modfies :3

[General]
Remove m.o.v.e. from tags.


[Easy]
Ok.

[Normal]
00:20:807 (4) - I don't like this slider, try to make a vertical one.

[Hard]
Make them like this: http://i43.tinypic.com/nl8y8h.png

[Insane]
Okay.
owl13
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owl13
[General]
Artist is m.o.e.v
Tag is m.o.v.e

some people say , i need add this m.o.v.e , So No Need Remove this

[Normal]
Done , Fix 19s-22s spacing

[Hard]
FIX spacing Done

OK NOW . Thank,=]
Eirene
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Eirene
[Insane] :
00:09:631 (3) - whistle
00:41:788 (1,2,3) - same spacing ?
00:43:356 (1,2,3) - ^

[Hard] :
00:05:905 (5) - odd shape

[Normal & Easy] :
nothing to say :3

I like the map ( but the spinner skin is :/ ) *.* STAR
owl13
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owl13
ok i will edit skin

thank
Sallad4ever
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Sallad4ever
I lol'ed at the spinner :lol:

[General]
- Car driver isn't needed in tag, I don't think there's anyone would use car driver when searching a map :?
- Mixing kanji word and romaji isn't good, you should change those romaji lyrics into kanji too
- Don't forget to fix the wrong word as suggested by Derekku_Chan
- Consider forcing the Lucky Star skin, but I see you have your own skin so I guess you don't have to

[Easy]
00:23:749 (3) - this slider will confuse novice player because of the previous 2 similar pattern ( 00:19:827 (1,2,3) & 00:21:396 (1,2,3) ), try changing it into 1 long slider start from 00:23:749 until 00:24:337
00:34:141 (1) - same thing, 4 repeats of 1/2 slider with this BPM can be harsh to novice
00:59:435 (1) - sorry I keep repeating my self, but this is not good for easy
00:13:553 (5) - It's better to use normal finish hitsound
Combo mod
SPOILER
00:51:200 (2) - NC
01:03:749 (2) - ^

[Normal]
00:13:553 (7) - It's better to use normal finish hitsound
00:35:317 (x) - add a circle here?
Combo mod
SPOILER
00:09:435 (1) - remove NC ( new combo ) to make it consistent with 00:02:964 (5)
00:24:729 (7) - NC
00:51:200 (2) - ^
01:03:749 (4) - ^

[Hard]
00:13:553 (1) - It's better to use normal finish hitsound
01:07:670 (3) - stack properly with 1
Combo mod
00:24:337 (8) - NC
00:43:356 (7) - ^
00:46:494 (7) - ^

[Insane]
Decrease the circle size by 1?
00:26:494 (1) - umm...can you make it into any other shape?
00:34:925 (5) - Make it into 1 repeat then ad slider in 00:35:513 until 00:35:905 (suggestion)

Well that's all I can find
My favorite Initial D parody :lol:
Star
owl13
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owl13
lol

All Done

Full words of a song very hard to find,

but i find it now :lol: ,

Now is fixed the wrong word
Bianco
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Bianco
:P
deepsea
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deepsea
Some parts in insane is ahhhh but well this is insane and really not insane compare with some maps.

So here we go.
minyeob
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minyeob
mmmm

[Easy]
I'm not forcing you to fix. But only this diff has many many Normal whistles.

[Normal]
00:22:964 (1) - I think this is too close from previous note 0.0
owl13
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owl13

minyeob wrote:

mmmm

[Easy]
I'm not forcing you to fix. But only this diff has many many Normal whistles.

[Normal]
00:22:964 (1) - I think this is too close from previous note 0.0
ok i fix this now , thank =]
minyeob
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@_@
owl13
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owl13
[2010/5/8]:Remove all update messages only

but the Bubble change to star.....

只是刪更新記錄,但思想泡泡變成了星星 :roll:

我手多了嗎 :o
Vikon
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Vikon
祝早日bubble再現 8-)
abalee
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abalee
刚好想戳掉..never mind.

Insane:
looks like the 0.5x BPM timing section in 75,905ms is useless. you don't use slider in this part at all. Maybe change it to 1.0x?

Easy:
lots of new combo mod:
00:02:964 (1) - remove
00:04:141 (2) - add
00:06:102 (1) - remove
00:07:278 (2) - add
00:09:435 (1) - remove

and notice that do not update your map after you got a bubbled.
owl13
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owl13
THANK , 已修正=]
abalee
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abalee
Bubbled.
gdeath
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gdeath
Sorry for my delay.
my university stuff killed me lol
anyway,i played this just now.
its seems all fine to me
Star~
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>.<b Ranked
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Selee
呵呵 终于RANK了 恭喜啊
很喜欢这歌
其实很早之前想MOD下的 >_<
owl13
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Joined December 2009
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owl13
THANK ALL =]
Miss You_old
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Joined October 2009
Miss You_old
支持受君~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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