This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, January 15, 2015 at 2:44:01 PM

Artist: Nishino Kana
Title: if
Source: Naruto Shippuden the Movie: The Lost Tower
Tags: Thank You, Love 劇場版 NARUTO-ナルト-疾風伝 ザ・ロストタワー
BPM: 123
Filesize: 8149kb
Play Time: 04:21
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy (1.26 stars, 169 notes)
2. Hard (2.93 stars, 449 notes)
3. Normal (1.67 stars, 235 notes)

Download: Nishino Kana - if
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Yaaay!!!!! Done! Mod please ~~~

omg the background is so beautiful

PureCreamy wrote:

omg the background is so beautiful

Thanks! (>///<)

Your map already looks great for me. Just change the volume around 10% - 15 % at the spinner, and I'll call it perfect
btw, sorry for my poor english

PureCreamy wrote:

Your map already looks great for me. Just change the volume around 10% - 15 % at the spinner, and I'll call it perfect
btw, sorry for my poor english

Okay!


Updated~~!

Modem wrote:

PureCreamy wrote:

Your map already looks great for me. Just change the volume around 10% - 15 % at the spinner, and I'll call it perfect
btw, sorry for my poor english

Okay!


Updated~~!

Now, it looks great. Take my star ~~~

PureCreamy wrote:

Now, it looks great. Take my star ~~~

Thank you very much!!! (>////<)

01:26:135 Add Timing Point~ ( Disable Kiai )
01:26:257 Add Timing Point~ ( Enable Kiai )
02:42:355 Delete Spiner (Suggestion)
02:42:355 Add A Timing Point ( x 0.5)
02:42:355 Add A Slider .
02:43:818 Slider End Here.
02:44:062 Add A Timing Point ( x 1.0)
03:17:355 Add Timing Point~ ( Disable Kiai )
03:17:477 Add Timing Point~ ( Enable Kiai )

EndlessShadow wrote:

01:26:135 Add Timing Point~ ( Disable Kiai ) I think the same . But it will make the kiai time toggle for less than 15 seconds
01:26:257 Add Timing Point~ ( Enable Kiai ) I think the same . But it will make the kiai time toggle for less than 15 seconds. But I'll think about it
02:42:355 Delete Spiner (Suggestion) I think it suits the vocal, so nope, sorry
02:42:355 Add A Timing Point ( x 0.5) Nope, sorry. But thanks for the idea
02:42:355 Add A Slider . Sorry, I prefer a spinner over there
02:43:818 Slider End Here. I still prefer spinner here, sorry.....
02:44:062 Add A Timing Point ( x 1.0) Actually, I wanna keep the SV the same until the end. But I'll think about it to make it slower or faster
03:17:355 Add Timing Point~ ( Disable Kiai ) But it will make the kiai time toggle for less than 15 seconds.
03:17:477 Add Timing Point~ ( Enable Kiai )

I think the same . But it will make the kiai time toggle for less than 15 seconds. But I'll think about it

Thank you very much for the mods (> w <)

here's m4m

• Hard

1. 00:31:623 (1) - seens can move to 280,174
2. 00:37:477 (2) - ctrl+g
3. 00:40:160 (4) -
   
4. 00:42:599 (2,3) - ctrl+g and fix
5. 00:58:696 (4,2,4) - overlap
6. 01:30:891 (4,5,6) - ^
7. 02:01:379 (4,5) - fix blanket
8. 02:03:330 (8,9) - ^
9. 02:12:599 (5,7) - overlap
10. 03:01:867 (1,2,3) - ^
11. 03:42:843 (1,4) - ^
12. 03:46:745 (4) -
    

    300,276,226745,2,0,B|328:248|392:244|404:176|424:132|408:76|380:52|352:44|308:40|264:60|244:112|244:112|212:64|152:56|108:76|96:104|80:140|80:188|116:252|160:292|232:268|240:328,1,840

13. 04:02:111 (5,2) - ^

goodluck~

AIR wrote:

here's m4m

• Hard

1. 00:31:623 (1) - seens can move to 280,174 Sorry, no change . I want to create a blanket over there
2. 00:37:477 (2) - ctrl+g Ok!!
3. 00:40:160 (4) -
   
   Sorry... No change
4. 00:42:599 (2,3) - ctrl+g and fix Sorry, no change
5. 00:58:696 (4,2,4) - overlap Sorry, no change. Because I think it's still playable
6. 01:30:891 (4,5,6) - ^ No change, sorry
7. 02:01:379 (4,5) - fix blanket Done!
8. 02:03:330 (8,9) - ^ Ok!!
9. 02:12:599 (5,7) - overlap I think it's fine
10. 03:01:867 (1,2,3) - ^ I think it's fine
11. 03:42:843 (1,4) - ^ I think it's fine
12. 03:46:745 (4) -
    

    300,276,226745,2,0,B|328:248|392:244|404:176|424:132|408:76|380:52|352:44|308:40|264:60|244:112|244:112|212:64|152:56|108:76|96:104|80:140|80:188|116:252|160:292|232:268|240:328,1,840

    That's nice . No change, but thank you very much!
13. 04:02:111 (5,2) - ^

No change, but thanks!!!

goodluck~

Thank you very much for the mod!!! (> w <)

Updated ~

It ok , Because A lot of Ranked Map also do that.
Disable > Enable = Flashing Effect

Try to do that~

EndlessShadow wrote:

It ok , Because A lot of Ranked Map also do that.
Disable > Enable = Flashing Effect

Try to do that~

Really?? I will think about it then! (Because I really want to add that too ) Thanks!!! (> w <)

from Paper modding team Queue!
Skin very good！
[Hard]
AR+1 HP-1？
00:43:086 (3) - x:264 y:104
01:06:745 (2,4) - Copy&Paste

[Normal]
03:52:111 (1,2,3,4) - circle Too much

[Easy]
00:17:964 (3) - x:272 y:228
00:19:428 (1) - x:184 y:204
03:43:818 (2,3) - Copy&Paste

Hello Mod from Paper Modding Team

[Hard]

1. Try to put ALL of NEW COMBO to the long white line. They're in chaos now
2. OD-1 or AR+1
3. The most important one: Your mapping style is a bit old. I mean you stick on the Distance Snap too much. Though your map seems in a good order, it's a bit boring. Don't use Distance Snap all the time when you are making a Hard diff or a harder one. You can just put some jumps or some reverse sliders in your map to make it more interesting.

No kds if you don't agree with me

from paper modding team

Wow! Papper Modding Team is so Wonderful!
I'll reply all of your mod when I have some free time . Thanks for the mods guys!!!

sodarose wrote:

from Paper modding team Queue!
Skin very good！Wow! Thank you very muuchh!!! (> w <)
[Hard]
AR+1 HP-1？Ok! I'll increase AR but I'll keep HP
00:43:086 (3) - x:264 y:104 Sorry. I wanna keep it
01:06:745 (2,4) - Copy&Paste Done! And I'll keep that three circles before kiai time

[Normal]
03:52:111 (1,2,3,4) - circle Too much I want to create some rythm over there

[Easy]
00:17:964 (3) - x:272 y:228 Sorry. I wanna keep it
00:19:428 (1) - x:184 y:204 Sorry. I wanna keep it
03:43:818 (2,3) - Copy&Paste Okay! Done

Thank you very much for the mods!!!

-[Hikari]- wrote:

Hello Mod from Paper Modding Team

[Hard]

1. Try to put ALL of NEW COMBO to the long white line. They're in chaos now Okay! All fixed!
2. OD-1 or AR+1 I'll choose AR+1 Thanks!
3. The most important one: Your mapping style is a bit old. I mean you stick on the Distance Snap too much. Though your map seems in a good order, it's a bit boring. Don't use Distance Snap all the time when you are making a Hard diff or a harder one. You can just put some jumps or some reverse sliders in your map to make it more interesting.

I agree . My beatmap looks not too interesting because I stick on the Distance Snap too much. But it's the way I mapping for now. I'm a beginner at mapping, so I don't think to make insane diff that needs a lot of jumps yet. I even still use DS at the hard diff. I do this because I'm still a beginner, and I'm not experienced enough to know about some rankable or unrankable jumps. So I'll increase AR to make it harder eventhough there are no jumps at this diff. This is all because I'm still a beginner . But I'll learn about jumps along with my experience. Thanks for your suggestion!
No kds if you don't agree with me

Thank you very much for the mods!

Alex Li wrote:

from paper modding team

[General]

• 
  You can't use this BG because it doesn't fit the song, try this Sorry. No change. But thanks for your recommendation
  many osu players and bats doesn't like the style that you are mapping with, just a reminder, try to change your style in your next map, also gl on ranking this Well, this is the way I'm mapping for now, because I'm still a beginner. But I'll learn more style in the future. So I still need some experiences. But for now I'll use this style . Even if it's boring or anything like that, but I'm fine with that because I'm still a beginner and lack of experience. So, this is the way I'm making a playable map . But thanks for your opinion . I'll definitely learn more about mapping in the future. Thanks!

[Easy]

• 
  00:17:477 (2,1) - stick with 2 Nope, sorry....
  00:17:964 (3) - if you did ^,blanket it with 1 well No change, sorry...
  00:46:745 (1,3) - stick 3 with 1's end Nope, sorry....
  01:00:891 (5,1,2,3) - not looking so good,try to sick 1's end with 3's head and 2's head with 5's end Nope, sorry....
  01:06:257 (1,2) - blanket I already make a blanket there
  01:10:647 (1,3) - separate 1 3 Sorry... I use DS, so it will be hard to move it away. But since I already make this 1st slider into a blanket with this note (2nd), so the 1st slider will be gone before the 3rd slider appear. So, it is fine I think
  01:17:964 (1,3) - stick 3 with 1 Nope, sorry....
  01:27:721 (2,3) - blanket I already make a blanket there
  01:31:135 (5,6) - ^ I already make a blanket there
  02:05:769 (2,4) - stick 4 with 2 Nope, sorry....
  02:11:135 (6,1) - blanket I already make a blanket there
  02:16:501 (1,2) - try to separate 1 and 2 That's hard.... Since I use 1.0 DS sorry.....
  02:24:306 (1,2) - fix blanket Fixed!
  02:24:306 (1,3) - 1 stick with 3 Nope, sorry.....
  02:28:696 (5) - nc Sorry.... I prefer use Finish hitsound at SC1
  03:03:330 (2,3) - blanket I already make a blanket there
  03:03:330 (2,1) - stick 1 with 2 Nope, sorry...
  03:09:184 (1,3) - how about 3 on 1's head That's nice! But I can't, sorry....
  03:52:111 (2,3) - blanket I already make a blanket there
  04:02:355 (2,3) - blanket I already make a blanket there
  04:07:721 (2,3) - ^ I already make a blanket there
  04:17:477 (1,2) - ^ I already make a blanket there

• 
  [Normal]
  00:39:916 (5,6) - blanket I already make a blanket there
  00:40:891 (6,1) - ^ I already make a blanket there
  00:53:086 (3,2) - 2 end on 3 end? Wow! That's nice! But I use DS, so it's hard to move it over there, sorry....
  00:56:989 (3,1) - blanket I already make a blanket there
  01:02:843 (1,2) - looks not right I think it's right. Since I follow the flow of the slider and the song, even if it isn't a blanket
  01:03:818 (2,3) - blanket I already make a blanket there
  01:04:794 (3,1) - blanket I already make a blanket there
  01:16:501 (4,5) - blanket I already make a blanket there
  01:23:086 (4,5) - blanket I already make a blanket there
  01:25:769 (1) - stick on 01:23:086 (4) - 's end No change, sorry....
  01:30:160 (1,2) - blanket I already make a blanket there
  01:31:135 (2,3) - blanket I already make a blanket there
  01:32:111 (3,1) - blanket I already make a blanket there
  01:32:111 (3,2) - fix over lap I think that's not an overlap. Since I make a blanket with this 3rd slider with this note (1, new combo colour). So, the 3rd slider will gone before this note (2, new combo colour) appear. So, it is definitely visible to play But, I'll fix it thanks! .
  02:07:233 (4,5) - blanket I already make a blanket there
  02:20:891 (1,2) - blanket I already make a blanket there
  02:20:891 (1,3) - stick on 1's end Nice! But since I use DS, so I can't. Sorry....
  02:23:818 (4,1) - blanket I already make a blanket there
  02:35:525 (4,1) - blanket I already make a blanket there
  02:39:916 (1,2) - blanket I already make a blanket there
  03:05:769 (5,6) - ^ I already make a blanket there
  03:19:916 (7,1) - ^ I already make a blanket there
  03:21:379 (1,2) - ^ I already make a blanket there
  03:22:355 (2,3) - ^ I already make a blanket there
  03:39:916 (1,2) - ^ I already make a blanket there
  03:43:330 (3,4) - ^ I already make a blanket there
  04:08:696 (5,1) - ^ I already make a blanket there
  04:11:135 (2,3) - ^ I already make a blanket there
  04:16:013 (6,3) - overlap Okay! This is really overlap! Fixed!!!

• 
  [Hard]
  00:18:696 (4,5) - blanket I already make a blanket there
  00:30:403 (5,6) - ^ I already make a blanket there
  00:36:501 (6,2) - separate Nope. Sorry.... I want to make stack over there
  00:36:501 (6,1,2) - blanket blanket I already make a blanket there
  00:58:696 (4,2) - stick Sorry..... I prefer blanket
  00:58:696 (4,1,2,3) - separate I think it's fine
  01:05:769 (5,1) - blanket blanket I already make a blanket there
  01:58:452 (2) - ctrl g Nope, sorry.... I didn't follow the flow, so it will make this diff harder a bit
  02:02:843 (7,8) - blanket blanket I already make a blanket there
  02:32:599 (1,2,3) - blanket blanket I already make a blanket there
  03:01:867 (1,2,3) - blanket blanket I already make a blanket there
  03:11:867 (2,3) - blanket blanket I already make a blanket there
  03:42:843 (1,4) - stick Nope, sorry..... I prefer separate it
  03:50:403 (6,1) - blanket blanket I already make a blanket there
  03:54:306 (8,9) - blanket blanket I already make a blanket there

Thank you very much for the mods!!!!

Updated~!

#m4m

Came from mod queue (M4M req.).
Good mapping. I like the map. *gifts stars*

[Easy]

1. 00:17:477 (2,1) - Stack circles. If not possible, just copy and paste one of them in the place of the other (DS still constant).
2. 00:19:916 (2) - Shouldn't you make this curve go to the opposite direction for better flow?
3. 01:02:355 (1,2) - Makes me wonder why those don't make blanket while 01:03:330 (2,3) - does.
4. 01:12:111 (2,1) - Again, you should stack.
5. 01:17:964 (1,3) - ^^
6. 01:24:306 (1) - Next note's too close of the spinner. You should make some long slider to replace it, since Easy players aren't used to hitting notes placed close to a spinner.
7. 02:05:769 (2,4) - Once more, stack.
8. 02:42:355 (1) - Shouldn't this end at next white tick (the big one)?
9. 03:03:330 (2,1) - Stack, please.

[Normal]

1. Make CS a little bit bigger. CS 4 too small for a Normal (there isn't problem if you make it CS 3, like Easy)
2. Also, I feel this diff doesn't map some parts of the song. I suggested below some parts you could map, so do it if you want to. Diff plays well, anyway; so it might not be needed.
3. 01:14:306 - Add a circle here to keep rhythm constant.
4. 01:16:257 - ^^
5. 01:29:916 - ^^
6. 01:33:818 - ^^
7. 01:34:550 (3) - You could turn this circle in a 1/2 slider with a reverse to keep rhythm constant. Delete 01:35:038 (4) - in that case. I mention it because it follows a rhythm that sounds like this: 01:35:525 (1,2,3) -
8. 01:56:989 (2,4) - You should stack sliders.
9. 02:42:355 (1) - Same as I said on Easy: End at next white tick.
10. 03:09:428 - Add a circle here and in 03:10:403
11. 03:21:135 - ^^
12. 03:23:086 - A circle here and in 03:24:550

[Hard]

1. 00:58:696 (4,2,4) - Stack those properly.
2. 02:42:355 (1) - Same as other diffs: End at white tick.
3. 03:42:843 (1,4) - Stack.
4. I fell in love with this diff. <3

That's it. Good luck, Modem!

Hard diff. Is readable and fun to play ♡

PureCreamy wrote:

Hard diff. Is readable and fun to play ♡

You played it?? Wow! Thanks Pure-san (>////<)

SEE's Modding Queue

M4M request

[General]

-I'd enable Epilepsy warning due to skin you used.
-Make Kiai less than 1/3 of the beatmap. The AIMod says it's more than 1/3.

[Easy]

-00:16:013 (1,3) - Make them the same (blanket to 00:17:477 (2) )
-If you corrected ^, 00:17:477 (2,1) - stack them.
-01:02:355 (1,3) - Stack tail of 1 with head of 3
-01:10:647 (1,3) - Move them a little to not overlap like this:
-01:12:111 (2,1) - Stack them
-01:24:306 (1,1) - As it's easy it must be space between spinner and first note/slider minimum 2 white ticks long. I suggest to change 01:24:306 (1) to slider 2/1 beat long.
-01:27:721 (2,3) - Correct blanket
-02:11:135 (6,1) - ^
-02:16:501 (1,2) - Make them like this:
-02:18:940 (3) - Change it a little to keep DS 1.0
-02:24:306 (1,2) - Correct blanket
-02:24:306 (1,3) - Stack circle with head of 3
-02:57:964 (1) - Make end a little more quiet
-03:03:330 (2,3) - Correct blanket
-03:03:330 (2,1) - Stack them
-03:18:940 (3,4) - Correct blanket
-03:29:184 (2,3) - Correct blanket a little of 2 to head of 3
-03:31:135 (3) - Make it 2/1 long instead of 3/1.
-03:50:647 (1) - Make it curved and blanket 03:52:111 (2)
-04:07:721 (2,3) - Correct blanket
-04:17:477 (1,2) - ^

Little mistakes, but generally nice mapped.

[Normal]

-00:28:696 (3,4) - Correct blanket
-00:39:916 (5,6) - ^
-01:02:843 (1,2) - Make them symmetrical
-01:23:086 (4,5) - Correct blanket
-02:09:184 (1,1) - At least 2/1 free space between spinner and 1st note
-02:33:575 (2,3) - Correct blanket
-02:35:525 (4,1) - ^
-02:57:964 (1,1) - Again there must be at least 2/1 free space
-03:47:721 (1,1) - ^
-04:11:135 (2,3) - Correct blanket a little

Again little mistakes, but nice mapped.

I end this now, because it's long song and I wanted to check these 2 diffs carefully. Maybe it'll help you. Good luck~

Thanks for mods guys ♥
I'll definitely reply to all of your mods when I have free time (^ w ^)

ohhhh oh ho! i like this song ,really , it is a really nice song~ star ☆

Flandre_ErMei wrote:

ohhhh oh ho! i like this song ,really , it is a really nice song~ star ☆

Thanks for the star Flandre-senpai (> w <) ♡♥♡♥

Kloyd wrote:

#m4m

• Easy

1. 00:19:428 (1) - need complete stack imo That's not stack. Because I'm using DS here
2. 01:12:599 (3) - can u make a bit apart from (1)? Okay! I changed it to another pattern. Fixed!
3. 01:12:111 (2,1) - stack Nope, I make it blanket. Sorry...
4. 01:22:355 (6) - remove one of those two white dots in the slider, reddot 192:72, whitedot on about 208:100 No change, sorry...
5. 01:26:257 (1) - reddot 252:192 No change, sorry...
6. 01:37:964 (3) - same on above (6) No change, sorry...
7. 02:17:477 (2) - rotate clockwise a bit No change, sorry...
8. 02:28:696 (5) - newbeat here so NC is needed imo Actually I use SC for this part. But, if what you mean about NC is Finish hitsound, okay! I'll add it!
9. 02:39:916 (5) - moving to 256:148 can have better flow and shape Cool! You're right! Ok! Fixed!
10. 03:03:330 (2,1) - stack

I wanna to keep it as blanket, sorry....

• Normal

1. 00:43:330 (4) - ctrl J Sorry..... No change. I wanna to keep it as the two symetrical-shaped slider
2. 02:12:111 (2,3,4) - two 1/2 sliders can be a good choice of rhythm. Well.... I wanna make some variation there, so I put two notes instead
3. 03:01:379 (1,2) - 1/2slider

Nope, I prefer two notes instead

• Hard

1. 00:58:696 (4,2) - stack Nope. I wanna keep it the way it is now. Because it will form star-shaped flow
2. orz im not good at modding cs5..... sry i couldn't catch out anything.

Thank you very much for the mod!!!

LixRei wrote:

Came from mod queue (M4M req.).
Good mapping. I like the map. *gifts stars* Thank you very much Rei!

[Easy]

1. 00:17:477 (2,1) - Stack circles. If not possible, just copy and paste one of them in the place of the other (DS still constant). Awesome! That worked! Ok, Fixed! Thanks!
2. 00:19:916 (2) - Shouldn't you make this curve go to the opposite direction for better flow? No, I wanna keep it for variations shape of sliders
3. 01:02:355 (1,2) - Makes me wonder why those don't make blanket while 01:03:330 (2,3) - does. Done! Fixed!
4. 01:12:111 (2,1) - Again, you should stack. Okay! Fixed!
5. 01:17:964 (1,3) - ^^ Done! Fixed!
6. 01:24:306 (1) - Next note's too close of the spinner. You should make some long slider to replace it, since Easy players aren't used to hitting notes placed close to a spinner. No change, Sorry....
7. 02:05:769 (2,4) - Once more, stack. Okay! Fixed!
8. 02:42:355 (1) - Shouldn't this end at next white tick (the big one)? The music stopped at red tick. So I should end it there
9. 03:03:330 (2,1) - Stack, please.

Okay! Fixed!

[Normal]

1. Make CS a little bit bigger. CS 4 too small for a Normal (there isn't problem if you make it CS 3, like Easy) I think that size is a bit too big for normal diff. So, I prefer CS 4
2. Also, I feel this diff doesn't map some parts of the song. I suggested below some parts you could map, so do it if you want to. Diff plays well, anyway; so it might not be needed.
3. 01:14:306 - Add a circle here to keep rhythm constant. After I map the vocal, then I map the song's rhytm. So, I didn't put a circle there
4. 01:16:257 - ^^ After I map the vocal, then I map the song's rhytm. So, I didn't put a circle there
5. 01:29:916 - ^^ After I map the vocal, then I map the song's rhytm. So, I didn't put a circle there
6. 01:33:818 - ^^ After I map the vocal, then I map the song's rhytm. So, I didn't put a circle there
7. 01:34:550 (3) - You could turn this circle in a 1/2 slider with a reverse to keep rhythm constant. Delete 01:35:038 (4) - in that case. I mention it because it follows a rhythm that sounds like this: 01:35:525 (1,2,3) - Sorry... I prefer this rhytm
8. 01:56:989 (2,4) - You should stack sliders. Okay! Fixed!
9. 02:42:355 (1) - Same as I said on Easy: End at next white tick. The music stopped at red tick. So I should end it there
10. 03:09:428 - Add a circle here and in 03:10:403 After I map the vocal, then I map the song's rhytm. So, I didn't put a circle there
11. 03:21:135 - ^^ After I map the vocal, then I map the song's rhytm. So, I didn't put a circle there
12. 03:23:086 - A circle here and in 03:24:550

After I map the vocal, then I map the song's rhytm. So, I didn't put a circle there

[Hard]

1. 00:58:696 (4,2,4) - Stack those properly. Done! Fixed
2. 02:42:355 (1) - Same as other diffs: End at white tick. The music stopped at red tick. So I should end it there
3. 03:42:843 (1,4) - Stack. Okay! Fixed!
4. I fell in love with this diff. <3

Re-really?? T-thank you very much! (>///<) *doki* *doki*

That's it. Good luck, Modem!

Thank you very much for the mod!

streeteelf wrote:

SEE's Modding Queue

M4M request

[General]

-I'd enable Epilepsy warning due to skin you used. I think there's no need to. Since I didn't make any toggled sotryboards
-Make Kiai less than 1/3 of the beatmap. The AIMod says it's more than 1/3. I think it's alright. (^ w ^) so, no change

[Easy]

-00:16:013 (1,3) - Make them the same (blanket to 00:17:477 (2) ) I already make it blanket
-If you corrected ^, 00:17:477 (2,1) - stack them. Okay! Fixed!
-01:02:355 (1,3) - Stack tail of 1 with head of 3 Okay! Fixed!
-01:10:647 (1,3) - Move them a little to not overlap like this: I will make another pattern so it won't overlap
-01:12:111 (2,1) - Stack them Okay! Fixed!
-01:24:306 (1,1) - As it's easy it must be space between spinner and first note/slider minimum 2 white ticks long. I suggest to change 01:24:306 (1) to slider 2/1 beat long. Sorry, no change.
-01:27:721 (2,3) - Correct blanket Okay! Fixed!
-02:11:135 (6,1) - ^ Okay! Fixed!
-02:16:501 (1,2) - Make them like this: Sorry... No change
-02:18:940 (3) - Change it a little to keep DS 1.0 Sorry... No change
-02:24:306 (1,2) - Correct blanket Okay! Done!
-02:24:306 (1,3) - Stack circle with head of 3 Okay! Fixed!
-02:57:964 (1) - Make end a little more quiet Okay! I changed the volume to 30% at the end of spinner
-03:03:330 (2,3) - Correct blanket Okay! Done!
-03:03:330 (2,1) - Stack them Okay! Fixed!
-03:18:940 (3,4) - Correct blanket Okay! Done!
-03:29:184 (2,3) - Correct blanket a little of 2 to head of 3 I think that's already a correct blanket
-03:31:135 (3) - Make it 2/1 long instead of 3/1. I'm following the clap sound of music's background. So I prefer 3/1 slider
-03:50:647 (1) - Make it curved and blanket 03:52:111 (2) Sorry... No change...
-04:07:721 (2,3) - Correct blanket Okay! Done!
-04:17:477 (1,2) - ^ Okay! Done!

Little mistakes, but generally nice mapped. Wow! Thanks! (> w <)

[Normal]

-00:28:696 (3,4) - Correct blanket Okay! Done!
-00:39:916 (5,6) - ^ Okay! Done!
-01:02:843 (1,2) - Make them symmetrical Okay! Fixed!
-01:23:086 (4,5) - Correct blanket Okay! Done!
-02:09:184 (1,1) - At least 2/1 free space between spinner and 1st note Sorry ... No change...
-02:33:575 (2,3) - Correct blanket I think that's already correct
-02:35:525 (4,1) - ^ Okay! Fixed!
-02:57:964 (1,1) - Again there must be at least 2/1 free space Sorry... No change...
-03:47:721 (1,1) - ^ Sorry...No change...
-04:11:135 (2,3) - Correct blanket a little Okay! Done!

Again little mistakes, but nice mapped. Wow! Thanks again! (> w <)

I end this now, because it's long song and I wanted to check these 2 diffs carefully. Maybe it'll help you. Good luck~

Thank you very much for the mod!

Updated ~~~ !

Hey, Mod4Mod from my queue.

Skin
- Consider finding a skin for the spinner; I can hardly see the bonus scores with that colour ontop of the default spinner.

Easy
- 00:16:013 (1,2,3) - These blankets aren't quite perfect. [00:17:111] If you look on that timestamp, you can see the body of 3 is closer than 1. This also messes up the blanket on 00:19:428 (1).
- 00:19:428 (1,2) - Have these line up, or offset them a bit more.
- 00:32:111 (2) - This blanket can be improved [00:32:721].
- 00:33:086 (3,2) - Stack these so the blanket with 00:35:525 (1) is consistent.
- 00:46:745 (1,3) - Stack 3 with the tail of 1 better for consistent blankets. Use Ctrl+G to find the position of a slider's tail.
- 01:02:355 (1,3) - Same as above.
- 01:06:745 (2) - Move this to 344:60 for the blanket. It looks like you nudged it by mistake.
- 01:12:599 (3) - This blanket can be improved [01:11:867].
- 01:24:306 (1,1) - I think this spinner is too close to the next note for an Easy. The next note is also visible from over half the spinner away, which will throw beginners off.
- 01:28:208 (3) - Same as above [01:27:477].
- 01:37:964 (3) - Remove the second to last slider point.
- 02:00:891 (4) - This blanket can be improved [02:03:086].
- 02:11:135 (6) - Impove this blanket [02:12:233]; it seems that you moved it, but moving it back messes with spacing.
- 02:15:038 (4) - Same as above [02:16:135].
- 02:17:477 (2) - This blanket can be improved [02:18:574].
- 02:24:794 (2) - Same as above [02:24:062].
- 02:31:135 (5,6,7) - The spacing is inconsisnt here.
- 03:03:818 (3) - This blanket can be improved [03:03:086].
- 03:52:599 (3) - Same as above [03:51:745].
- 03:54:550 (2,3) - These aren't quite lined up perfectly.
- 04:17:964 (2) - This blanket can be improved [04:17:223].

Normal
- 00:17:964 (3) - Move this to 339:120 for a slightly better blanket and triangle to follow.
- 00:23:818 (1,2,3) - These aren't lined up.
- 00:40:891 (6) - This blanket can be improved [00:41:501].
- 00:47:233 (1) - Same as above [00:47:843].
- 00:56:013 (2,1) - Stack these for a more consistent blanket.
- 00:58:696 (2,3) - Line these up.
- 01:02:843 (1,2) - Make it so that the slider head and tail are parallel with the x-axis, and then make these two the same shape.
- 01:06:501 (2,3) - These aren't quite lined up.
- 01:11:623 (4,5) - Improve the flow here; the slider points down while the combo moves horizontally.
- 01:16:501 (4) - This blanket can be improved [01:14:477].
- 01:24:306 (5) - Same as above [01:23:818].
- 01:23:086 (4,1) - Stack these for a more consistent blanket.
- 01:28:452 (5,6) - Line these up, but watch that the slider doesn't go off-screen.
- 01:30:160 (1,2,3) - Make all of these the same shape, and then improve their blankets.
- 02:03:330 (4,2) - Stack these for a more consistent blanket.
- 02:23:818 (4) - This blanket can be improved [02:24:428].
- 02:28:696 (1,2) - These aren't quite lined up (Check the tail of 1).
- 02:34:550 (3,4) - Same as above.
- 03:04:062 (3,4) - This feels too linear; I would move 4 down so the angle is more obtuse.
- 03:05:769 (5) - This blanket can be improved [03:06:257].
- 03:14:306 (4) - Same as above [03:15:282].
- 03:22:355 (2) - Move to 172:204 for the blanket with 1, and then improve the blanket with 3.
- 03:39:916 (1) - This blanket can be improved [03:40:525].
- 03:43:818 (4) - Same as above [03:42:964].
- 03:45:769 (6) - Same as above [03:44:916].
- 04:08:696 (5) - Same as above [04:09:794].
- 04:16:013 (6) - Same as above [04:17:111].

Hard
I think CS4 would be better for this difficulty personally.
I noticed a lot of circle combos tend to go parallel with the normal planes of axis, for example 00:29:672 (1,2,3,4,5,6) and 02:27:477 (6,7,8,9). This kind of gives the difficulty a linear feel that is present in many old generation maps, which is kind of bland. Whether you were aiming for this or not, I'm not sure.

- 00:18:940 (6) - This blanket can be improved [00:18:452].
- 00:23:818 (1,2,3,4) - This feels kind of repetetive. Change it up a bit.
- 00:26:745 (4) - This slider would look better if it didn't stick out on the right side.
- 00:30:160 (4,5) - Line these up if you want to continue with this style.
- 00:36:013 (4,5,1) - Same as above.
- 00:36:501 (1,2,3) - The spacing between these are inconsistent. The blankets could be improved too [00:36:989].
- 00:47:233 (1) - This blanket can be improved [00:47:843].
- 00:51:135 (1,2,3) - The spacing between these is inconsistent.
- 00:56:989 (6) - This blanket can be improved [00:56:379].
- 00:58:940 (1,3) - Perhaps avoid having these touch?
- 01:05:769 (5) - This blanket can be improved [01:06:257].
- 01:11:379 (3,4,5) - The spacing between these is inconsistent.
- 01:13:086 (1) - This blanket can be improved [01:12:660].
- 01:28:696 (1,2,3) - The spacing between these is inconsistent.
- 01:59:428 (3) - This slider is slightly skewed to the left.
- 02:01:379 (4) - This blanket can be improved [02:01:867].
- 02:13:086 (6,8) - Have these be the same shape.
- 02:22:843 (1,3) - Same as above.
- 02:27:477 (6,7) - This is poor polarity.
- 03:01:867 (1,2,3) - The spacing between these is inconsistent. Their blankets could also be improved [03:02:355].
- 03:11:135 (1,2,3) - These blankets can be improved. Just make it good for one, then copy it, Ctrl+G, and rotate and flip it.
- 03:45:526 (1) - This blanket cane be improved [03:45:038].
- 03:46:745 (4) - I think this heart slider can be improved. This is what I came up with (You may need to move it around for spacing):
- 03:50:647 (1) - This blanket can be improved [03:50:160].
- 03:53:086 (7,8,9) - The spacing between these is inconsistent.
- 03:56:013 (4) - This blanket can be improved [03:55:525].
- 03:58:452 (3) - This slider is slightly skewed to the right.
- 03:59:916 (4,5,1,2) - This square can be improved, 2 is not quite lined up.
- 04:06:257 (1,2,3) - The spacing between these is inconsistent.
- 04:08:696 (7) - This blanket cane be improved [04:08:208]. I think they look better when they are circular rather than parabolic.
- 04:13:574 (1,4) - Make these level with eachother.

Good luck

Hello, from my queue!

General

Hmm, not bad, but very beginner-like. There is still a lot of work to be done. You should care a bit more about the blankets you make, because there were only a few that looked good. Really, take time for these, I am not going to point them out because there are too much that have been done wrong. I also think that you are using vertical and horizontal follow-ups too much. Making the map less boxy looks better overall. (example: 00:35:525 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - in hard more like this http://puu.sh/cFZBV/4553c52eb9.jpg, though this looks terrible)

Hard

I think you overuse this slider 00:43:330 (1) - but if you think it looks great, ignore me.

00:19:916 (1,2,3) - You should move them so they are on a straight line.
00:42:111 (2,3) - There isn't really a reason for these sliders to start off-beat, I suggest moving them on the timeline and adding a circle.
http://puu.sh/cFZLQ/5cc57a5772.jpg
00:35:891 (3,1,3) - They don't look the same because Ctrl+G will change your slider shape sometimes (has to do with slider-points)
00:45:038 (4) - The downbeat (large white white tick) is now a slider end, and it shouldn't in this case.
00:45:525 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - An example of what I said in general. There are more people doing this in their early maps, but it's better to avoid this.
00:51:135 (1,2,3) - It looks better when both sliders have the same distance from the circle in the middle.
00:58:940 (1,2,3) - Same here.
01:00:647 (4) - Same about the downbeat, there has to be something that should be clicked, so not a slider end.
01:06:745 (1,3) - Sliders look different again.
01:59:428 (3) - I think your intention was to make this slider the same on both sides.
02:04:794 (1) - make this a 1/2 slider and make sure there is something on the downbeat.
02:11:623 (1,2,3,4) - This square kinda failed, use the polygon create option.
03:40:647 (5) - Again an example of something that should be clicked. Make this a circle follow by a slider.
03:41:379 (6) - A long slider doesn't fit here.
03:44:550 (5) - Downbeat that should be clicked.
03:46:745 (4) - Hmm, heart looks good, but it doesn't fit there because the voice is still changing halfway through the slider. Consider making it smaller and letting it start at 03:47:721 - .

Also http://puu.sh/cG53y/3ef3b931aa.png There isn't even 1 little jump, everything is mapped to the distance snap, which makes it a bit boring. Consider doing it different next time, a hard should be a diff to learn new things like jumps and inconsistent spacing.

Suggesting everything I think that could be better would make a much larger list, I just pointed the basic things out. I can't really help you further with it. Anyway good luck!

-Mo- wrote:

Hey, Mod4Mod from my queue.

Skin
- Consider finding a skin for the spinner; I can hardly see the bonus scores with that colour ontop of the default spinner. Okay, I'll try!

Easy
- 00:16:013 (1,2,3) - These blankets aren't quite perfect. [00:17:111] If you look on that timestamp, you can see the body of 3 is closer than 1. This also messes up the blanket on 00:19:428 (1). Whoops, that's right! Fixed!
- 00:19:428 (1,2) - Have these line up, or offset them a bit more. Okay! Fixed!
- 00:32:111 (2) - This blanket can be improved [00:32:721]. Okay! Fixed!
- 00:33:086 (3,2) - Stack these so the blanket with 00:35:525 (1) is consistent. Okay! Fixed!
- 00:46:745 (1,3) - Stack 3 with the tail of 1 better for consistent blankets. Use Ctrl+G to find the position of a slider's tail. Okay! Fixed!
- 01:02:355 (1,3) - Same as above. Okay! Fixed!
- 01:06:745 (2) - Move this to 344:60 for the blanket. It looks like you nudged it by mistake. Okay! Fixed!
- 01:12:599 (3) - This blanket can be improved [01:11:867]. Okay! Fixed! I moved it to x:340 y:196
- 01:24:306 (1,1) - I think this spinner is too close to the next note for an Easy. The next note is also visible from over half the spinner away, which will throw beginners off. Sorry... No change
- 01:28:208 (3) - Same as above [01:27:477]. Sorry... No change. That's already correct blanket I think
- 01:37:964 (3) - Remove the second to last slider point. Sorry... No change
- 02:00:891 (4) - This blanket can be improved [02:03:086]. Sorry... No change. That's already correct blanket I think
- 02:11:135 (6) - Impove this blanket [02:12:233]; it seems that you moved it, but moving it back messes with spacing. Okay! Fixed!
- 02:15:038 (4) - Same as above [02:16:135]. Sorry... No change.
- 02:17:477 (2) - This blanket can be improved [02:18:574]. Sorry... No change
- 02:24:794 (2) - Same as above [02:24:062]. Sorry... No change
- 02:31:135 (5,6,7) - The spacing is inconsisnt here. Okay! Fixed!
- 03:03:818 (3) - This blanket can be improved [03:03:086]. No change, sorry... I think that's already correct blanket
- 03:52:599 (3) - Same as above [03:51:745]. Okay! Fixed!
- 03:54:550 (2,3) - These aren't quite lined up perfectly. Okay! Fixed!
- 04:17:964 (2) - This blanket can be improved [04:17:223]. Okay! Fixed!

Normal
- 00:17:964 (3) - Move this to 339:120 for a slightly better blanket and triangle to follow. Sorry... I think x:340 y:120 is the right position
- 00:23:818 (1,2,3) - These aren't lined up. Okay! Fixed!
- 00:40:891 (6) - This blanket can be improved [00:41:501]. Okay! Fixed!
- 00:47:233 (1) - Same as above [00:47:843]. Sorry... No change. I think that's already correct blanket
- 00:56:013 (2,1) - Stack these for a more consistent blanket. Okay! Fixed!
- 00:58:696 (2,3) - Line these up. Okay! Fixed!
- 01:02:843 (1,2) - Make it so that the slider head and tail are parallel with the x-axis, and then make these two the same shape. Sorry... No change
- 01:06:501 (2,3) - These aren't quite lined up. Okay! Fixed!
- 01:11:623 (4,5) - Improve the flow here; the slider points down while the combo moves horizontally. Sorry... No change
- 01:16:501 (4) - This blanket can be improved [01:14:477]. Sorry... No change. I think that's already the right blanket
- 01:24:306 (5) - Same as above [01:23:818]. Sorry... No change. I think that's already the right blanket
- 01:23:086 (4,1) - Stack these for a more consistent blanket. Okay! Fixed!
- 01:28:452 (5,6) - Line these up, but watch that the slider doesn't go off-screen. Ok! Fixed!
- 01:30:160 (1,2,3) - Make all of these the same shape, and then improve their blankets. Sorry... No change. I think that's already the right blanket
- 02:03:330 (4,2) - Stack these for a more consistent blanket. Okay! Fixed!
- 02:23:818 (4) - This blanket can be improved [02:24:428]. Sorry... I think that's already the right blanket
- 02:28:696 (1,2) - These aren't quite lined up (Check the tail of 1). Okay! Fixed!
- 02:34:550 (3,4) - Same as above. Okay! Fixed!
- 03:04:062 (3,4) - This feels too linear; I would move 4 down so the angle is more obtuse. Ok! I'll do something else. Thanks!
- 03:05:769 (5) - This blanket can be improved [03:06:257]. Okay! Fixed!
- 03:14:306 (4) - Same as above [03:15:282]. Okay! Fixed!
- 03:22:355 (2) - Move to 172:204 for the blanket with 1, and then improve the blanket with 3. Okay! Fixed!
- 03:39:916 (1) - This blanket can be improved [03:40:525]. That's right! Ok! Fixed!!!
- 03:43:818 (4) - Same as above [03:42:964]. Ok! Fixed!
- 03:45:769 (6) - Same as above [03:44:916]. Ok! Fixed!
- 04:08:696 (5) - Same as above [04:09:794]. Ok! Fixed!
- 04:16:013 (6) - Same as above [04:17:111]. Ok! Fixed!

Hard
I think CS4 would be better for this difficulty personally. Nope. Because there is no Insane diff in this mapset also, because I still use DS in this diff. So I think CS5 is the best choice to increase the difficulty a bit
I noticed a lot of circle combos tend to go parallel with the normal planes of axis, for example 00:29:672 (1,2,3,4,5,6) and 02:27:477 (6,7,8,9). This kind of gives the difficulty a linear feel that is present in many old generation maps, which is kind of bland. Whether you were aiming for this or not, I'm not sure. Well.... Maybe it's because I'm still a new mapper here.... I still want to learn more about rankable or unrankable jumps

- 00:18:940 (6) - This blanket can be improved [00:18:452].
- 00:23:818 (1,2,3,4) - This feels kind of repetetive. Change it up a bit.
- 00:26:745 (4) - This slider would look better if it didn't stick out on the right side.
- 00:30:160 (4,5) - Line these up if you want to continue with this style.
- 00:36:013 (4,5,1) - Same as above.
- 00:36:501 (1,2,3) - The spacing between these are inconsistent. The blankets could be improved too [00:36:989].
- 00:47:233 (1) - This blanket can be improved [00:47:843].
- 00:51:135 (1,2,3) - The spacing between these is inconsistent.
- 00:56:989 (6) - This blanket can be improved [00:56:379].
- 00:58:940 (1,3) - Perhaps avoid having these touch?
- 01:05:769 (5) - This blanket can be improved [01:06:257].
- 01:11:379 (3,4,5) - The spacing between these is inconsistent.
- 01:13:086 (1) - This blanket can be improved [01:12:660].
- 01:28:696 (1,2,3) - The spacing between these is inconsistent.
- 01:59:428 (3) - This slider is slightly skewed to the left.
- 02:01:379 (4) - This blanket can be improved [02:01:867].
- 02:13:086 (6,8) - Have these be the same shape.
- 02:22:843 (1,3) - Same as above.
- 02:27:477 (6,7) - This is poor polarity.
- 03:01:867 (1,2,3) - The spacing between these is inconsistent. Their blankets could also be improved [03:02:355].
- 03:11:135 (1,2,3) - These blankets can be improved. Just make it good for one, then copy it, Ctrl+G, and rotate and flip it.
- 03:45:526 (1) - This blanket cane be improved [03:45:038].
- 03:46:745 (4) - I think this heart slider can be improved. This is what I came up with (You may need to move it around for spacing):

^

284,308,226745,2,0,B|296:212|512:188|400:44|340:4|280:76|256:116|256:116|232:76|172:4|112:44|0:188|216:212|232:316,1,840,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

- 03:50:647 (1) - This blanket can be improved [03:50:160].
- 03:53:086 (7,8,9) - The spacing between these is inconsistent.
- 03:56:013 (4) - This blanket can be improved [03:55:525].
- 03:58:452 (3) - This slider is slightly skewed to the right.
- 03:59:916 (4,5,1,2) - This square can be improved, 2 is not quite lined up.
- 04:06:257 (1,2,3) - The spacing between these is inconsistent.
- 04:08:696 (7) - This blanket cane be improved [04:08:208]. I think they look better when they are circular rather than parabolic.
- 04:13:574 (1,4) - Make these level with eachother.
Fixed almost everything in this diff. Except for the love-shaped slider Actually, I didn't follow the main singer's voice at this part. But group of peoples that sung along with her after she said "ni" . And, they began to sing at 03:48:208 . So I wanna keep that love-shaped slider
Good luck

Wow! Thanks for the nice mod that you gave Mo-chan! It really helped me a lot!

A Mystery wrote:

Hello, from my queue!

General

Hmm, not bad, but very beginner-like. There is still a lot of work to be done. You should care a bit more about the blankets you make, because there were only a few that looked good. Really, take time for these, I am not going to point them out because there are too much that have been done wrong. I also think that you are using vertical and horizontal follow-ups too much. Making the map less boxy looks better overall. (example: 00:35:525 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - in hard more like this http://puu.sh/cFZBV/4553c52eb9.jpg, though this looks terrible) Okay! I'll fix the blankets

Hard

I think you overuse this slider 00:43:330 (1) - but if you think it looks great, ignore me. Well... Maybe it's because I like the shape of this slider. There is a curved part in this slider that matches with the vocal from the song

00:19:916 (1,2,3) - You should move them so they are on a straight line. Ok! Fixed!
00:42:111 (2,3) - There isn't really a reason for these sliders to start off-beat, I suggest moving them on the timeline and adding a circle. Sorry... I wanna keep that pattern...
http://puu.sh/cFZLQ/5cc57a5772.jpg
00:35:891 (3,1,3) - They don't look the same because Ctrl+G will change your slider shape sometimes (has to do with slider-points) Sorry... I wanna keep it
00:45:038 (4) - The downbeat (large white white tick) is now a slider end, and it shouldn't in this case. I think it's fine as long as it has a reason. Since the music stopped for a while at the large white tick, so I think it's fine to end the slider there...
00:45:525 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - An example of what I said in general. There are more people doing this in their early maps, but it's better to avoid this. But, it follows the music as well as the claps from the song. So I think it's fine. Anyway, because I didn't make any Insane diff. in this mapset, so this is the best way to make it the hardest diff. in this mapset and balance things up.
00:51:135 (1,2,3) - It looks better when both sliders have the same distance from the circle in the middle. Yes it is! Fixed!
00:58:940 (1,2,3) - Same here. Ok! Fixed!
01:00:647 (4) - Same about the downbeat, there has to be something that should be clicked, so not a slider end. Sorry... No change. The reason is the same as before
01:06:745 (1,3) - Sliders look different again. Actually, it's the same shape as the slider before. But when I copy and paste it, then flip it, it turned out like that....
01:59:428 (3) - I think your intention was to make this slider the same on both sides. Yes it is. But no change. It looks symetrical enough for me
02:04:794 (1) - make this a 1/2 slider and make sure there is something on the downbeat. Sorry.... No change. I wanna keep that pattern
02:11:623 (1,2,3,4) - This square kinda failed, use the polygon create option. Sorry... No change
03:40:647 (5) - Again an example of something that should be clicked. Make this a circle follow by a slider. The same reason as before
03:41:379 (6) - A long slider doesn't fit here. It follows the vocal. So I decided to make a long slider over there
03:44:550 (5) - Downbeat that should be clicked. The same reason as before . But now, both vocal and music that stopped for a while. So I have the reason to make that pattern
03:46:745 (4) - Hmm, heart looks good, but it doesn't fit there because the voice is still changing halfway through the slider. Consider making it smaller and letting it start at 03:47:721 - . Actually, I didn't follow the main singer's voice at this part. But group of peoples that sung along with her after she said "ni" . And, they began to sing at 03:48:208 . So I wanna keep that love-shaped slider

Also http://puu.sh/cG53y/3ef3b931aa.png There isn't even 1 little jump, everything is mapped to the distance snap, which makes it a bit boring. Consider doing it different next time, a hard should be a diff to learn new things like jumps and inconsistent spacing.
Okay! It's because I'm still a new mapper and I want to learn more about rankable or unrankable jumps

Suggesting everything I think that could be better would make a much larger list, I just pointed the basic things out. I can't really help you further with it. Anyway good luck!

Thanks for the mods !

Updated ~~~ !

Hi Modem~ for m4m!







Good luck!

[Hard]
00:31:623 (1) - Mind stacking with (5) perfectly?
00:43:330 (1,3) - These shape differ because the slider points are different. It happens because of ctrl+G, so you should keep in mind to place the last slider dot where the slider actually ends in this case.
02:11:867 (2) - I think it's better to make this symmetry with (4).
03:09:672 (8) - The combo went a little long here imo.

Neat map. Have a star.

Hello, Modem! From my queue~ sorry for a bit delay.


Looks like i'm finished here, Nice song and Background!
Good Luck!

Thanks for mods guys!!! I'll certainly reply to all of your mods when I find some free time again! \(> ◆ <)/

Wow! <3

PureCreamy wrote:

Wow! <3

Ummmm.... Thanks! (>///<) *bluush*

Hello Modem! from my queue





I really like your map, it does needs some more fixing with flow and inconsistent NCs - but after that you'll have a wonderful mapset. I think you did a really great job considering you have no ranked beatmaps at all.

If you have any questions feel free to ask me o/

From my queue.

[Easy]

1. 00:21:379 (3) - Add whistle to match with 00:17:477 (2,1)
2. 00:35:525 (1) - Finish on head?
3. 00:35:525 (1,2) - Move (2) to stack under previous combo's (3), and move (1) to blanket properly: http://puu.sh/cXLOR/9aaf7b0d3b.jpg
4. 00:42:843 (1,2) - Minor spacing error.
5. 01:04:794 - The beat here is quite significant, so maybe it would be good to either change the rhythm so you can apply soft-hitfinish sound there.
6. 01:26:257 (1) - This object is much too soon after the spinner, and is too hard for Easy difficulty level. I suggest using other objects (circles/sliders) in place of the spinner to avoid this.
7. 01:59:916 (3) - Add a drum-hitnormal. It fits really well with the drum sound in the song: http://puu.sh/cXNkf/dc9567b172.jpg Also applies to any other notes that cover this sound in the song.
8. 03:13:574 (2) - Finish on head.
9. 04:02:355 (2) - Finish on head.
10. 04:05:769 (4,1) - Switch the new combo around to be consistent with the rest of the map.
11. 02:28:208 (4) - Add new combo for consistency.
12. 02:08:696 (4) - Add new combo.
13. 02:00:891 (4) - Add new combo?
14. 01:29:672 (4) - Add new combo.
15. 01:21:867 (5) - Add new combo.
16. 00:58:940 (3) - Add new combo.

[Normal]

1. 01:11:379 (3,4) - Spacing is too large. Reduce to 0.8x.
2. 00:21:379 (3) - Add whistle?
3. 00:38:452 (3) - Why are you using DC:1 when you have no custom drum hitsounds? This is just the same as D. The sliderslide is noisy, so I suggest that either you add a silenced drum-sliderslide or use SC:1 and add drum-hitnormal as I demonstrated for Easy.
4. 00:56:013 (2) - Clap on end?
5. 01:22:355 (3) - Finish to match Easy.
6. 01:24:306 (5) - I think maybe the reverse will play better: http://puu.sh/cXYGK/84ade8a083.jpg
7. 01:39:916 (1) - soft-hitfinish2 to match Easy.
8. 01:57:964 - Same hitsound suggestion as Easy with the drum-hitnormal.
9. 02:09:184 (1) - I think whistle will fit well on this spinner.
10. 02:12:843 (4,5) - Angle here feels awkward to play. Try making the flow more round: http://puu.sh/cXYRa/eea8ef23b2.jpg
11. 03:13:574 (3) - Add a finish?
12. 03:29:184 (3) - Finish?
13. 04:16:013 (6) - Why is there sliderwhistle here? It sounds really harsh and doesn't fit the song.
14. 03:43:818 (4) - Add new combo.
15. 03:05:769 (5) - Add new combo.
16. 02:13:086 (5) - Add new combo for clarity.
17. 01:17:964 (5,1) - Swap new combo.
18. 00:39:428 (4) - Add new combo.
19. 00:35:038 (4,1) - Swap new combo.

[Hard]

1. 00:18:696 (5) - Add whistle.
2. 00:18:940 (6) - Whistle on end.
3. 00:30:647 (6,1) - These are really close together, and the angle is weird. Maybe it would be better to move (1) away somewhere else.
4. 01:39:916 (1) - soft-hitfinish2 to match Easy.
5. 01:55:525 (1,2,3,4,5) - You can make this a regular pentagon using the Compose->Create Polygon Circles tool.
6. 01:59:428 (3) - Same suggestion of drum-hitnormal as Easy and Normal.

Not much to suggest for style, but needs more consistency in hitsound and combo.

Ninja Bunny wrote:

Hi Modem~ for m4m!

[General]
* The BG size does not follow the ranking criteria. I resized it: http://puu.sh/cRhMm.jpg. The ranking criteria can be found at: https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria

[Hard]
1) for your next map, try to also map out beats on red ticks, such as 02:14:306 – Umm... Okay!

[*Timing/composition/flow]
* 00:12:111 – 00:15:525 - add spinner? Sorry... I wanna to start the map at 00:16:013
* 00:46:257 (5,6) –ctrl G for better rhythm Sorry, I wanna keep this flow
* 00:44:306 (3,4) –ctrl + G for better rhythm b/c there’s a beat at 00:44:550 - I think I prefer mine
* 03:10:647 (10) –change to slider to cover up the beat at 03:10:891 - Sorry.... I'm following the singer's vocal over there, not the music's beat
* 04:15:769 (2,3) –ctrl G for better rhythm (and don’t forget to adjust hitsounds if you apply this mod Sorry... But I prefer mine better
* 04:16:502 (4,5) - ^ Nope, sorry....

[*Aesthetics/ patterns]
* 00:30:403 (5,1) –stack? Ok!!!
* 02:54:062 (1,2) –unstack because Kana’s pitch gets higher at 02:55:038 (2) - Nope, sorry... I prefer stack, because it still suits with Kana's pitch even if it gets higher
* 03:46:745 (4) –whoa nice slider Thanks!!! (>///<)

[*hit-sounds]
(This is just me being perfectionist XD) I don’t think it is necessary to add green lines for “D:C1” when you don’t have custom drum hitsounds. Also, it would have been easier if you used the sampleset on the left instead: http://puu.sh/cRgYb.jpg. Either way, things worked out Ok!!! I'll use sampleset instead, but just to the part that have the green line before

* 00:16:013 (1,4) - 00:18:208 (2,3,4,5) - 00:19:916 - 00:20:647 - 00:22:111 (2,3,4,5) - 00:25:038 - 00:26:013 (2,3) - 00:28:940 - 00:29:916 (2,3,4,5) - 00:31:623 (1) - 00:33:574 - 00:35:769 (2,3,4,5) - 00:40:647 - 00:42:599 - 00:44:550 - 00:45:525 (1,2,4) - 00:46:501 - 00:47:233 - 00:48:452 - 00:49:184 (5) - 00:52:355 - 00:53:818 - 00:56:257 - 00:58:208 - 01:01:135 (5,6,7,1) - 01:02:111 - 01:04:062 - 01:11:379 - 01:12:355 (6) - 01:14:306 - 01:15:282 - 01:16:257 - 01:16:745 - 01:18:208 - 01:18:208 (2) - 01:21:623 - 01:22:111 - 01:24:062 - 01:26:989 - 01:27:964 - 01:29:916 - 01:30:891 - 01:33:818 - 01:34:794 - 01:35:282 - 01:37:233 - 01:56:501 (5) - 02:01:379 (4) - change to drum sampleset? I’ll stop here because this is just gonna be spamming if you choose to not apply this mod

* 00:26:501 (3) – 00:34:550 - hitwhistle Nope, it doesn't fit the music
* 00:31:623 (1) –00:58:940 - remove hitfinish because there is no emphasis in the music, nor is it right at the highlight of this song (e.g. kiai time/end of the music) Nope, it fits the song. Sorry...
* 00:35:525 (1) –add whistle and remove whistle on 00:36:013 (4) - Nope, sorry....
* 00:39:428 (3) – This would be a better place for hitfinish because there’s a deep bell sound, and the beat frequency starts to change Ok!!!!
*01:56:501 (5) –add clap Ok!!!!
* 03:41:867 –change in timeline to drum sound

Umm.... Nope. Sorry.... Because the slider slide's sound will be noisy

[Normal]

[*Timing/composition/ flow]
* 03:13:574 (3) – try deleting this and make 03:14:306 (4) – into a reverse slider that starts at 03:13:574 - No... I make that flow for variations so the players won't get bored
* 01:33:574 –01:35:525 - 01:37:477 - add note Ok!!!! But at 01:37:477 I prefer 1/4 slider to let the player's fingers rest a bit (from the double-click moment)
* 02:39:916 - add a note here and more 02:39:916 (5) – to , then move spinner 02:42:477 (1) – to 02:42:628 – and end it at 02:44:062 - No change, sorry...
[*Aesthetics/ patterns]
* 03:43:330 (3,5) –stack Nope. I put (5) at x:156 y:144 to make a better blanket with (4,6) sliders

[*hitsounds]
* 00:50:160 –remove whistle (there’s VERY little chime sound, but most people won’t notice while playing)

Okay!!! I'll remove whistle and change it to another attractive hitsound

[Easy]

[*Timing/ composition/ flow]
* 00:19:428 (1) –move to 72,120 for better flow Nope, I prefer x:184 y:208
* I think you should map out this part instead of placing a slider.

No change, sorry....
Good luck!

Thanks for the mod!!!

Sonnyc wrote:

[Hard]
00:31:623 (1) - Mind stacking with (5) perfectly? Okay!!!
00:43:330 (1,3) - These shape differ because the slider points are different. It happens because of ctrl+G, so you should keep in mind to place the last slider dot where the slider actually ends in this case. Sorry... No change
02:11:867 (2) - I think it's better to make this symmetry with (4). Okay!!!
03:09:672 (8) - The combo went a little long here imo. I think it's fine

Neat map. Have a star.

Uwaaaaa (>///<) Thanks for the mod and the star ♡ ♥ ♡ ♥

Gray Veyron wrote:

Hello, Modem! From my queue~ sorry for a bit delay.

[> General <]

1. - Is the background's dimension is rankable? Since it's alike widescreen, shouldn't it be 1366x768?
2. - Remove "pop" and "japanese" from tags, It'll be counted on the Song Genre later on. Okay!!!
3. - Good skin, beatmap file is clean, pretty fine here~

Thanks!!! (^ w ^)

[> Easy <]

1. 00:29:184 (3) - The song/vocal track here sounds intense for a click, perferred this rhythm > http://puu.sh/cRubP/3d6a9487b7.png Nope, I prefer this slider's shape. Sorry....
2. 00:33:086 (3) - ^, also stack and blanket perfectly with 00:36:989 (2) - Ok! Fixed!!
3. 00:46:745 (1,2) - Try to make a double blanket, don't forget the stackings and the spacings > http://puu.sh/cRume/20314f72d7.png Nice!! Ok! Fixed!!
4. 00:49:184 (3,4) - nazi, recorrect your blanket. Ok!!!
5. 01:03:330 (2) - Ctrl + G for better flow, also stack perfectly Ok!!!
6. 01:27:721 (2,4) - Likely much a nazi, split to avoid tiny overlaps. Whoops! That's right! Okay, Fixed!!!
7. 02:00:891 (4) - Same as 00:29:184 (3) - Okay! I'll fix the blanket
8. 02:13:086 (2,4) - Overlaps like this on Easy diffs would look unrankable, due that beginners can't notice instant stack or overlaps since they've just started playing. You should split them and place it somewhere, or stack with the previous slider. Okay! I'll change it to another pattern and flow
9. 02:16:501 (1,2,3) - Not sure about you when these overlaps are intentionally made, so i'm just gonna say... the same reason as above. Okay, I'll make another pattern
10. 02:20:403 (1,3) - ^ Okay! I'll change it to another pattern
11. 02:35:525 (1,3) - ^ Okay! Fixed!
12. 02:39:916 (5) - Same as 00:29:184 (3) - Okay! Fixed!!
13. 03:03:330 (2,3) - Recorrect your blanket. Okay! Fixed!!
14. 03:05:769 (2,4) - Same as 02:13:086 (2,4) - Okay! Fixed!!
15. 03:09:184 (1,3) - ^ Okay! I'll change it to another pattern
16. 03:18:940 (3,1) - Small suggestion... Stack? Nice idea! Okay!!
17. 03:22:355 (2,1) - ^ Okay!!
18. - Diff is pretty fine, but a bit bugged wit hthe overlaps i've seen. So to tell my opinion, rework a bit of your few stacks and blankets.

Okay!! Thanks!

[> Normal <]

1. - To avoid making a huge mod just for one issue, i'll tell it here. The 1/2 beat circles you've made looks too straightic on the flow, it'd look boring to me. So i perfer you could curve them a little bit > http://puu.sh/cRveT/c80f82adf0.png Umm.... I'll think about it
2. 00:32:111 (2,3) - Recorrect the symmetry here. I think that's neat enough
3. 00:41:867 (1,4) - Overlap, try to flip slider (4) vertical for a bit of blanket, and also slider (5) for a continuous Symmetry. Okay!!! I'll change it to another better flow
4. 00:53:086 (3,1) - Try to blanket here, flow will still be the same, but pattern will be better. Also, stack slider (3) on slider (1). Okay!! Fixed!!!
5. 01:16:501 (4,5) - Recorrect your blanket here. Ok! Fixed!!
6. 01:32:111 (3,1) - ^ Okay!! Fixed!!
7. 02:07:233 (4,5) - ^ Okay!! Fixed!
8. 02:18:940 (3) - One grid up for symmetry, It's nazi... Nope, sorry. I think that's already symmetry enough
9. 03:43:330 (3,5) - Stack perfectly. Okay!! Fixed!!!
10. - Very good mapping here, just curve the 1/2 beat circles like i've said before.

Thanks! (> w <)

[> Hard <]

1. - Great mapping in this diff~ most mods here are just my opinions. (> w <)
2. 00:17:964 (1,2,3,4,5) - A bit straightic, try to make a Triangle formation here. Well.... That's one of my plans, so no change
3. 00:30:403 (5,6,1) - Check your spacing here, or is it an Anti-jump? Well... That's some kind of traps
4. 01:32:111 (7) - Just my opinion on this rhythm > http://puu.sh/cRvNO/9b115ce4ac.png Nope, sorry...I wanna keep it as reverse slider instead since it will form a blanket with the next note and slider
5. 02:18:940 (1) - ^I wanna keep that pattern, sorry.
6. 03:01:867 (1,2,3) - Weird blanket, recorrect it. Okay!! Fixed!
7. 03:11:135 (1,2,3) - ^ Okay!! Fixed!!
8. 03:23:330 (4) - Same as 01:32:111 (7) - I wanna keep that pattern too. Sorry....
9. 03:52:355 (4,5,6,7) - Recorrect the Square formation. I think that's neat enough, so, no change
10. - Almost the same suggestion for the 1/2 and 1/4 beat circles, but less often... The mapping here looks very good imo! Great job!

Uwaa... Thank youuu (>///<)

Looks like i'm finished here, Nice song and Background!
Good Luck!

Thank you very much for the mod!!!! (> w <)