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Stereopony - Tsukiakari no Michishirube (Full ver.)

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TTTTTTTTTTTT
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010年2月11日 at 10:52:09

Artist: Stereopony
Title: Tsukiakari no Michishirube (Full ver.)
Source: DARKER THAN BLACK
BPM: 131
Filesize: 7459kb
Play Time: 03:47
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.35 stars, 390 notes)
  2. Insane (4.58 stars, 494 notes)
  3. Normal (4.33 stars, 351 notes)
Download: Stereopony - Tsukiakari no Michishirube (Full ver.)
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Stereopony - Tsukiakari no Michishirube (Full ver.)
Ni Hao!
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Kamina
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Kamina
star~
lwz_999
38 posts
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lwz_999
那个slider虽然有点..
不过就凑合下使用吧...XD~
MoonFragrance
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MoonFragrance
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TTTTTTTTTTTT
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Leorda
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Leorda
NI HAO!

[Timing]
Your timing feels off
1. Offset: 2.530ms BPM: 131,00
2. Offset: 37.797ms BPM: 131,00
3. Offset: 102.835ms BPM: 131,00

If you already fix this, PM ME
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LKs
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LKs
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TTTTTTTTTTTT
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Cyril Scarlet
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Cyril Scarlet
Nice song 　(ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉ
LKf_old
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Joined November 2009
LKf_old
Star~
TTTTTTTTTTTT
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S i R i R u wrote:

Nice song 　(ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉ
kou ku ka~
THX~ :)
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
NI HAO!

[General]
1) Tags?

[Skin]
1) default-comma is missing
2) spinner-approachcircle is missing
3) default-x is missing

[Kiai]
You need a kiai bit longer
00:17:186 ~ 00:36:423
01:07:110 ~ 01:20:163
01:21:766 ~ 01:40:774
02:12:148 ~ 02:25:201
02:26:804 ~ 02:45:812
03:29:094 ~ 03:48:331

[Normal]
00:06:194 (4) - Make symetric?
00:12:377 (8) - ^
00:36:423 (B) - The breaks are too short, remove it
01:18:102 (1) - The slider must be like this (because of timing)

01:47:415 (2) - Make symetric?
01:47:873 (3) - ^
01:49:247 (B) - The breaks are too short, remove it
02:23:140 (2) - The slider must be like this (because of timing)

03:24:284 (8) - Cut short this slider to 03:24:743

[Hard]
00:01:614 (2) - Make symetric?
02:12:148 (6) - ^

[Insane]
00:35:507 (1) - Unrankable spinner LOL (AutoPlay must a bonus score at least 2000, to fix this, the spinner must a have min. 2 beats)
01:40:087 (1) - ^
01:56:575 (1) - ^
02:45:125 (1) - ^
03:47:415 (1) - ^

PERFECT MAP!
Kudosu STAR!
SciSSorS_old
40 posts
Joined November 2009
SciSSorS_old
star!!!
Breeze
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Breeze
黑之契约者 :shock:
TTTTTTTTTTTT
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Breeze wrote:

黑之契约者 :shock:
是啊~
Saten ruiko
196 posts
Joined November 2009
Saten ruiko

H-boy wrote:

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010年2月8日 at 20:43:57

Artist: Stereopony
Title: Tsukiakari no Michishirube (Full ver.)
Source: DARKER THAN BLACK
BPM: 131
Filesize: 7459kb
Play Time: 03:47
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.29 stars, 391 notes)
  2. Insane (4.59 stars, 497 notes)
  3. Normal (4.2 stars, 345 notes)
Download: Stereopony - Tsukiakari no Michishirube (Full ver.)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
Stereopony - Tsukiakari no Michishirube (Full ver.)
It's the same with his map.XD
Ni Hao!
Saten ruiko
196 posts
Joined November 2009
Saten ruiko

Clement wrote:

H-boy wrote:

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010年2月8日 at 20:43:57

Artist: Stereopony
Title: Tsukiakari no Michishirube (Full ver.)
Source: DARKER THAN BLACK
BPM: 131
Filesize: 7459kb
Play Time: 03:47
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.29 stars, 391 notes)
  2. Insane (4.59 stars, 497 notes)
  3. Normal (4.2 stars, 345 notes)
Download: Stereopony - Tsukiakari no Michishirube (Full ver.)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
Stereopony - Tsukiakari no Michishirube (Full ver.)
It's the same with his map.XD
Ni Hao!
NatsumeRin
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4,032 posts
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NatsumeRin
[General]
能不能把note的不透明度弄高点...现在这个一到kiai我就觉得自己崩溃了...

[Normal]
00:01:613 (2) 3/4拍用意不明，对照歌的话，换成1/2折返两次会不会更好？
00:06:194 (4) 一样很尴尬的slider，建议改成一个1拍折返一次slider+ 00:07:568开始的两个叠1/2 circle
01:03:217 (1) 建议在01:04:820中止，并在之后的两个重音放下note
02:08:255 (1) ^
01:32:759 (1--) 这个长圈+circle+长圈+circle+短圈的卧槽模式能不能改掉，以及后面还有两处。
03:18:102 (4) 尴尬slider
03:33:217 (2) 这个4分音毫无必要且突兀，叠两个1/2或弄个slider就好了。

[Hard]
00:52:911 (1,2) 这个是个人意见，就是 oo oo而空掉中间本来应有的一拍不是太好……这样当然也可以，但总觉得小别扭。
02:54:056 (1) 跳的太突兀了，之前在这个间距上全是1整拍（几乎同形状），突然弄个1/2不太受的了。
03:33:217 (7) 同Normal，毫无必要。

整体不错。

[Insane]
03:33:217 和以上相同。
可以考虑加多些notes（当然，不超过10M分），现在这样比Hard难多了，而分数提高很有限，combos甚至比Hard少不少。或者考虑减少Hard和Normal的分数，比如把Slider Tick Rate降到1？


特别说下hitsounds处理让我感觉很不错。star。
TTTTTTTTTTTT
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NatsumeRin wrote:

[General]
能不能把note的不透明度弄高点...现在这个一到kiai我就觉得自己崩溃了...

[Normal]
00:01:613 (2) 3/4拍用意不明，对照歌的话，换成1/2折返两次会不会更好？ done
00:06:194 (4) 一样很尴尬的slider，建议改成一个1拍折返一次slider+ 00:07:568开始的两个叠1/2 circle 这个用别的方式改了，谢谢提醒~
01:03:217 (1) 建议在01:04:820中止，并在之后的两个重音放下note 这个建议好~当时没想到咋弄...直接放空了
02:08:255 (1) ^ 同上
01:32:759 (1--) 这个长圈+circle+长圈+circle+短圈的卧槽模式能不能改掉，以及后面还有两处。
这个估计是skin的一个给空白了...导致很别扭？
03:18:102 (4) 尴尬slider 这个同第2个
03:33:217 (2) 这个4分音毫无必要且突兀，叠两个1/2或弄个slider就好了。 done
[Hard]
00:52:911 (1,2) 这个是个人意见，就是 oo oo而空掉中间本来应有的一拍不是太好……这样当然也可以，但总觉得小别扭。 这个先这样..了
02:54:056 (1) 跳的太突兀了，之前在这个间距上全是1整拍（几乎同形状），突然弄个1/2不太受的了。 done
03:33:217 (7) 同Normal，毫无必要。done
[Insane]
03:33:217 和以上相同。done
可以考虑加多些notes（当然，不超过10M分），现在这样比Hard难多了，而分数提高很有限，combos甚至比Hard少不少。或者考虑减少Hard和Normal的分数，比如把Slider Tick Rate降到1？


特别说下hitsounds处理让我感觉很不错。star。
hard分已经降下来了...
DJPop
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DJPop
- Don't hide spinner-approachcircle.png
- Place timing sections in front of the note, not exactly on them.


~Normal~
-2 HP Drain
03:13:521 (2) - silence the middle note

~Hard~
00:45:583 (1) - +2 repeats
00:46:041 (2) - delete
01:43:293 (1) - extend 2/4 beat (middle note on right blue tick)
01:43:751 (2) - delete
01:44:209 - add note
01:46:957 (1) - use circle
01:47:301 (2) - move 1/4 left
01:57:949 (1) - +1 repeat
01:58:293 (2) - delete
01:58:407 - add note
01:59:781 (1) - +3 repeats
02:00:125 (2) - delete
03:47:415 (1) - silence it

~Insane~
00:06:194 (6) - new combo
00:45:697 (2) - end on left blue tick
00:48:675 (2) - end on white tick
00:50:507 (2) - ^
01:07:110 (1) - move right 1 grid (Lv2)
01:43:407 (2) - delete
01:43:522 (3) - move 1/4 right
01:43:751 (4) - delete
01:47:072 (2) - move 1/4 right
01:58:293 (3) - move 1/4 left
02:33:904 (3,4) - too far
02:48:102 (4) - sliderticks are weird
02:51:766 (4) - ^
03:47:415 (6) - silence it


No star until you fix all red texts.
LKs
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LKs
haha H-BOY~
you still have to fix much :P :P
need my strict modding??
Natteke
6,538 posts
Joined August 2009
Natteke
Hi.

If I put "(?)" - it means im not sure or its not important.

I see there are 2 maps on that song already, why make a 3rd one? :<

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Add some tags?

[Normal]

I see no spacing mistakes here.

However you can use my sound suggestions if you want to.
But it's not important:
SPOILER
00:17:186 (4) - Hitfinish at the beginning of the slider
00:26:117 (7) - Hitfinish
00:26:575 (8) - ^
00:27:033 (9) - Hitfinish at the beginning of the slider
00:51:537 (5) - ^
01:06:881 (4) - Hitfinish at the end of the slider.
01:30:697 (6) - Hitfinish
02:12:148 (5) - Hitfinish at the beginning of the slider
02:19:476 (4) - Remove hitfinish
02:21:079 (7) - Hitfinish here
02:21:537 (8) - ^
02:21:995 (9) - Hitfinish at the beginning of the slider
02:35:735 (7) - Hitfinish here
02:36:193 (8) - ^
02:36:652 (9) - Hitfinish at the beginning of the slider
03:29:093 (6) - ^
03:38:025 (6) - Hitfinish
03:38:483 (7) - ^
03:38:941 (8) - Hitfinish at the beginning of the slider


[Hard]

Looks fine to me, but your combo patterns are a bit weird. I'm not good at combos so I won't recommend any thing.


[Insane]

00:31:843 (6) - New combo, I guess o.o
02:36:193 (10) - Move it 2 grids left (using grid level 2)
TTTTTTTTTTTT
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LKs wrote:

haha H-BOY~
you still have to fix much :P :P
need my strict modding??
你明显应该说中文~
LKs
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LKs
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ah19980924
51 posts
Joined January 2010
ah19980924
nice map

太晚給星了>_>
starpun1
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starpun1
I like this song!!
Izy
35 posts
Joined October 2010
Izy
Awesome Insane, i like it.
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