1. Slow (2,46 stars, 96 notes)
2. Speed Run (5 stars, 371 notes)

Mianki wrote:

Speed Run:

-00:04:716 (1) There should be at least a small break between the spinner and the circle. This is pretty much illegal.
-00:34:359 (1) ^
-00:35:706 (1) Distance snap this (and the following circles)
-00:53:307 (1) ^
-01:05:096 (1) Remove new combo and put it to the next circle
-01:18:907 (2) Distance snap
-01:20:255 (1) ^
-01:21:434 (1) Remove new combo and put it to the next circle
-01:26:823 (1) ^

Fixed that stuff

Extra:

First off I wanna say that I found lots of distance snap faults and I probably didn't found them all. So if you could check the map on your own, if there's any left. And the sound quality is poor. Dunno how to fix that though^^

-00:21:260 (8) Distance snap
-00:24:860 (1) Break between the spinner and the circle
-00:52:117 (1) Remove new combo
-01:03:260 (1) Break between the spinner and the circle
-01:06:003 (2) Distance snap
-01:07:203 (1.2.3) ^
-02:03:260 (2) ^
-02:07:031 (4) ^
-02:14:060 (4) ^
-02:25:374 (5) ^
-02:30:346 (1) The break
-02:31:889 (2) Distance snap
-02:33:603 (2) ^
-02:40:460 (7) New combo
-02:55:374 (7) Distance snap
-03:00:860 (7) ^
-03:09:260 Illegal spinner. There's this +2000 rule in which a spinner must get 2000 points in autoplay. So you either gotta remove the spinner or make longer. And if you do make it longer, remember the break ^^
-03:12:003 ^
-03:16:974 ^
Since there are so much spacing mistakes, i'll fix them on my own. Anyway, thanks <3
Nice map, but I don't think there's a high chance that this will be ranked because there's already 2 His World songs mapped and ranked. But since this is instrumental, the might be a slim chance . Anyways, good luck with this ^^
I know <3 That's why i mapped two versions which aren't mapped yet

Star~

arien666 wrote:

[Thunderstorm's Walk]
Add tag 'Thunderstorm'
01:47:88(5) - Not perfectly stacked

[Speed Run]
00:28:01(4) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid up? (Grid level = 2) I think it's better like it is now
00:33:49(Spin) - Extend 1/4 length and 2000+ bonus when Auto. Fixed
01:22:67(3) - How about move 1 grid down? (Grid level = 2) Moved it 1 grid right. Looks better

[Extra (ReidS)]
Offset seems... Little? :3 Hm, fixed?
Edit tag 'reids,' to 'reids' Fixed
14,457,910 is BIG score :3... 11,629,148 will be better? <3
01:03:26(1,3) - [Suggestion] Any reason why those notes are not on same point? The reason is my mistake
01:22:38(6) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid up? Looks not worse, fixed



Good song :3
And good luck for you XD
But not yet for another thing of mine XD<What?

Here's my star :3

Shinde wrote:

There are no hitsounds in Speed Run.

Approach circle makes it hard to play I suggest killing it along with the spinner circle. (It's not fully circular or centered either. =s) I guess fixed
If you do want to skin the spinner, skin all three elements though, not just one. Otherwise you'll get conflicting skins unless you force to default or something like that. Which I can't say I recommend.

"Combobursts should not be wider than 500px." "Backgrounds/Images should be at a maximum 1024x768 pixels, though 800x600 recommended." Fixed

The HP Bar is deceptive as it won't show you're losing HP unless you're under halfway. Fix this by making it longer. I think cropping the image works too as it only goes by the image width and you have blank padding which should be causing this, but I'm too lazy to fire up Photoshop and check. Just crop/resize. (There's too much whitespace either way.) Also the HP colour doesn't fill the right corner of the HP bar properly, there's some black space, fix this. Resize the scorebar-ki/dangers to 1x1 pixel. Fixed.

You have two .osb files in the folder, delete one. Fixed.

General
Set a preview point for all three difficulties.
Add tags and keep them the same for all three diffs cept for guest tag-diff. aka Sonic's only on one atm. Missing Thunderstorm tag. Fixed.
The 2 mp3 thing is kind of iffy in general, so you need to be careful when doing that. Reid's mp3 is over 7mb, I suggest resizing it. ~5mb would be good. 6,1mb. sorry, can't get lower.
Odd that you doubled the BPM for those two diffs, but it works.. I think. Having trouble playing these accurately with the spacing, lack of hitsounds on one, volume, and approach circle. I'll do something about it
As a sidenote, your volume's a bit high imo in some sections, this song's an instrumental and the beats aren't prominent, you don't need loud hitsounds, it'll drown the song out. ^

Thunderstorm's Walk
01:47:384 (4,5,6,7) - Not stacked properly.

ReidS
Either cut the mp3 or map further. You have a minute of nothing at the end. This ties in with the filesize issue. Fixed.

I'll just leave it at this for now.

Xgor wrote:

Soo needs an easier difficulty I can't map this song eaiser D:

[Background]
The Background proportions are pretty odd
I suggest you resize the backgrounds to 1024x768
It's a screenshot, these proportions are default. If I'll resize it, it'll look weird.

[All diffs]
Please add Sonic the hedgehog 06 to source or tags.
Okay.

[Title]
I think that you should call the song His World [Instrumental] as there is other maps with this song but with lyrics
Hm,oookay.
[Skin]
The Spinner is not centered... center it please.
Oh, i'd rather delete/remake it. D:

[Walk]
The speed of an Easy but beat placement as a Hard/Normal.
Higher the Slider velocity or make it easier (Or Both)

[Speed Run]
Please use less hitsounds. Ummm...okay.
Ugh it feels like you can't decide what to follow and that's makes it far less fun... please have a constant difficulty through the whole diff.

[Extra]
The Mp3 here ends just abruptly and sound awful. MAT told me to cut it D:
Otherwise it's pretty much the same problems as [Speed Run] It's pretty lame how it sounds horibly steamed for a bit and one second later and then there is nothing. o_O I'll recheck hitsounds on the map.

*star*

Whiss wrote:

Xgor wrote:

I suggest you resize the backgrounds to 1024x768
It's a screenshot, these proportions are default. If I'll resize it, it'll look weird.