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DEARDROPS - Kibou no Senritsu

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iBananaPhonez
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iBananaPhonez
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, April 01, 2014 at 11:03:47 PM

Artist: DEARDROPS
Title: Kibou no Senritsu
Source: DEARDROPS milktub
Tags: video game visual novel ディアドロップス dear drops
BPM: 183
Filesize: 6388kb
Play Time: 03:38
Difficulties Available:
  1. Insane (5 stars, 658 notes)
Download: DEARDROPS - Kibou no Senritsu
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Last edited by iBananaPhonez , edited 10 times in total.
_koinuri
451 posts
Joined June 2012
_koinuri
Going to add mods in this post, don't kudosu until all the diff have been modded
[General]
Remove .osb file in your song folder, it's for storyboard and you don't have any, so you don't need it.
Add milktub to tags, they composed the music for DEARDROPS
Capitalize source? The logo (?) for it looks like it's all capital letters
Add ディアドロップス and Dear Drops on tag for the other possible way to write it.

[Insane]
Since you updated while I was modding, some of these things might not apply anymore.
The flows are nice. I think if you improve the visual side more, the map is going to play perfectly fine. Huge improvement from your first map :). I'm going to put some very opinionated mods to try polishing your patterns my way, feel free to ignore any/all of them.

00:03:733 (3) - I suggest something like this:
Assuming you wanted to kind of reverse the flow from the previous slider, this shape blankets 00:03:077 (2) and mirrors the flow better, while not moving the head to preserve the flow from 00:03:077 (2) to 00:03:733 (3).
432,76,3733,2,0,B|428:160|428:160|391:226|315:253,1,225.000008583069
The code for that slider, you might need to tweek it a little bit to blanket nicer

00:04:389 (4) - Move this to (220,270). It makes smooth curve from the previous slider 00:03:733 (3).
The new slider shows the curve 00:03:733 (3) is making. By placing the note at the coordinate, it keeps the curve 00:03:733 (3) created. I would also rotate this about -30 so it conserves the curve a bit more, but it'll change the map a bit too much. Don't forget to adjust 00:04:881 (5) after you're done with it :)

00:05:044 (1) - Try blanketing 00:04:389 (4,5) better like I did on 00:03:733 (3).

00:05:700 (2) - Copy 00:05:044 (1) and ctrl+H? The mirror looks better imo.

00:11:602 (1,2,3,4,5) - I suggest lowering the jumps in these notes, not impossible but a bit too big. Press ctrl+shift+s while the notes are highlighted to call the scale option and adjust the parameter until you find something comfortable. The scale will shorten the sliders so adjust all sliders afterwards. I recommend scaling it down to around .7x-.8x, but you choose

00:23:733 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - These can be made more smooth (? x_x). You should do the slider thing I'm doing, it really helps for making a smooth curve.
The coordinates that fit inside the big slider is, starting from 00:23:897 (3); (399,297), (399,297), (114,271), no change for 00:24:881 (6), and (77,48).

00:27:176 (7) - Blanket 00:27:012 (6)? Looks better imo. To blanket, scroll around on timeline until you find an approach rate perfect size for blanketing, and trace the approach circle with the slider you want to blanket with. At least that's how I blanket.

00:29:471 (4,5,6) - Move all notes to (63,329) for more curve from 00:29:143 (3) + blanket with 00:29:635 (5). I also suggest moving 00:28:979 (2) to the exact same spot as 00:29:799 (6), as moving 00:29:799 (6) will break the constant spacing between these 3 notes, and though it won't be obvious when playing, the halfway overlap made by 00:28:979 (2) looks ugly. If you do that, rotate 00:28:487 (1) so it points to the circle 00:28:979 (2) again. Stacking notes is great way to make your map look neater.

00:31:110 (1) - Just copy 00:30:782 (9) and ctrl+H? The copied sliders usually match perfectly with each other and I recommend doing that if you're going to make a similar slider anyway. Just like what you did with 00:27:667 (8,9).

00:32:749 (6) - >.>, I would avoid the heavy curving of the slider. Lower the red point further into the slider and lessen the curve to something like this
This is just me complaining because I really dislike heavy curves.
Also stack with 00:32:094 (4) more properly, it was slightly off even with the original shape.

00:36:520 (1) - I really like this slider, catches the flow from 00:36:192 (3) very well. I would move it to (86,79) though. This way, the sliders' end match.

00:39:962 (5) - Stack with 00:39:471 (3) :(

00:42:421 (2) - Nazi, (375,252) for same y coordinate with 00:42:094 (9). Though I feel like the stack leniency will break the symmetry. Also 00:42:585 (3) to (335,161) for more symmetry.

00:43:077 (5) - Move it to blanket 00:42:258 (1). It both looks better and flows better being here imo

00:44:389 (6) - Move this to (407,357) to go with the zigzag. You can blanket here too, but I personally think not blanketing is better in this case. Blanket gives you a more circular feel and you want this slider to point to the left, not circle around 00:44:225 (5).

00:45:372 (1) - Stack with 00:43:733 (1)

00:47:831 (7) - I think this would look nicer if it blanketed.

00:50:126 (4) - Since you go back to the original curve, why set the circle to the side like this? It breaks the flow

No positioning mod for the kiai parts because it's completely different from what I would map (I'm more of a pattern>flow person) and I really have no idea how to mod these kind of maps..

00:54:881 (1) - Blanket?

00:55:536 (3) - Those white points
Place the red point in the middle and you can curve the slider better
I don't really like these sliders though, they're too short to be curved imo. Now its path is so unclear and weird

00:56:684 (7) - Same thing here, though not as bad as before.

00:57:176 (9,10) - ctrl+g while highlighting these 2. The direction change from clockwise to counter clockwise was a bit too sudden imo. This way, the order is swapped and keeps the clockwise flow and also does that cross flow which feels really good to play.

00:57:503 (1) - I don't really like the slight overlap here :/. Maybe something like this is a better idea
(175,94), 21 degree rotation. Creates blanket and also softens the sharp angle turning you have here

00:59:307 (2,3,4) - Move it so that it blankets with 00:58:651 (5), looks nicer imo

01:07:995 (3) - D:
Last edited by _koinuri , edited 3 times in total.
captin1
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Erina
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Joined August 2012
Erina
best irc mod eva
22:17 Erina: ok
22:17 Erina: im just watching your deardrops
22:18 Erina: ill make a guest taiko
22:18 iBananaPhonez: lol go for it
22:18 Erina: 01:11:110 (4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1) -
22:18 Erina: wat is dat
22:18 Erina: you dont have to manually stack btw
22:18 Erina: osu stacks for you
22:18 Erina: js
22:18 iBananaPhonez: Yeah I know
22:18 Erina: 01:29:962 (4,5) - are these symmetrical
22:18 Erina: they dont look like it
22:19 Erina: if they arent make them symmetrical
22:19 iBananaPhonez: I tried the normal stack and it didn't work out so well
22:19 Erina: 01:31:438 (1) - overlap with 01:29:962 (4) - for a kawaii map
22:19 Erina: uh
22:19 Erina: idk i guess it works but it looks weird that stream i mean
22:19 iBananaPhonez: lol just fucking forum mod
22:20 Erina: 01:42:094 (2) - i feel like you could do something with placement with these notes 01:40:946 (2,4) -
22:20 Erina: like either overlap or put it after
22:20 Erina: wat
22:20 Erina: you want me to forum mod this
22:20 Erina: fk no
22:20 Erina: irc is so much easier
22:20 Erina: but if you dont want me to mod now i wont
22:20 Erina: im just giving it a quick check
22:20 Erina: right now that is
22:21 iBananaPhonez: lol fine
22:21 Erina: your new combos aren't really consistent in the second chorus
22:21 iBananaPhonez: It's just that I find irc a little short and cheap is all
22:21 Erina: i guess its not a big deal anymore
22:21 Erina: my forum mods are cheaper
22:21 Erina: i dont point out or say as much stuff generally
22:21 Erina: bc i dont know how to explain them
22:21 Erina: but this deardrops thing is just a quick check
22:21 Erina: for anything that is just wtf
22:22 iBananaPhonez: lol alright fine
22:22 Erina: 02:09:799 (1,2,3) - uhh does that fit with the music
22:22 Erina: ^like i wouldnt post that in a forum mod
22:22 iBananaPhonez: The beat brah
22:22 Erina: eh you're right
22:23 Erina: 02:18:815 (1,2,3) - ew what is this placement
22:23 Erina: 02:18:159 (8) - this slider's second curve is a bit sharp
22:23 Erina: ooh
22:23 Erina: 02:24:061 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - this part is good
22:24 Erina: now if you could just stack 02:26:684 (4) - with that central pile of stacks
22:24 Erina: 02:33:897 (8,9,10,11) - shouldnt these be together
22:24 Erina: also might be cool if you NC'ed each of those notes
22:24 Erina: to give emphasis
22:24 iBananaPhonez: omg that's perfect
22:24 iBananaPhonez: the one before that is
22:24 iBananaPhonez: kk
22:25 Erina: fk i might as well look throughouly now
22:25 Erina: ill mod to the end then recheck
22:25 iBananaPhonez: lmao fine
22:25 iBananaPhonez: I guess you'll end up seeing a song tonight maybe
22:26 Erina: 02:55:536 (1,2,3) - flow feels weird here
22:26 Erina: 02:52:913 (2) - why not stack with 02:52:094 (9) -
22:26 Erina: 02:54:389 (9) - this too
22:27 Erina: 02:58:979 (5) - move this to maybe x:324 y:184
22:27 Erina: looks better in alignment with 02:59:307 (7) -
22:27 iBananaPhonez: I feel like the only way to make a clean map is to overlap shit over and over
22:27 Erina: well overlap whenver you can
22:27 Erina: well not always
22:27 Erina: but yeah
22:27 Erina: there are some parts where overlapping makes it cleaner
22:27 iBananaPhonez: It's stupid and I don't like it <.<
22:27 iBananaPhonez: But I guess it does make sense
22:28 Erina: im gonna make an actual mapping suggestion here
22:28 Erina: 03:02:913 (10) -
22:28 Erina: consider moving to stack with 03:02:258 (7) -
22:28 Erina: then move 03:03:077 (1) -
22:28 Erina: to stack with 03:02:749 (9) -
22:28 Erina: back-forth jump
22:28 Erina: see if you like
22:28 Erina: up to you tho
22:29 Erina: if not, consider moving this slider 03:02:421 (8) - leftwards to make more of a blanket rather than straight reflection with the previous slider
22:29 Erina: then move the notes after it accordingly
22:29 iBananaPhonez: Alright
22:29 Erina: 03:07:176 (8,9) - try making them with the same reflected angle if that makes sense at all
22:29 Erina: if you actually follow any of those suggestions tell me
22:30 Erina: you see stuff like that i wouldnt put in a forum mod
22:30 Erina: 03:09:799 (6) - feels like a good place for an NC
22:30 iBananaPhonez: I don't understand that reflected angle thing <.<
22:30 Erina: 03:11:110 (10) - maybe decrease the curve to match up more with 03:09:799 (6) -
22:31 Erina: ok ill use proper terminology
22:31 Erina: 03:07:503 (9) - rotate by ~9 degrees around selection centre
22:31 Erina: makes it parallel to the previous slider
22:32 Erina: you should prob stop kiai time at 3:13 to keep consistent
22:32 Erina: oh
22:32 Erina: nvm
22:32 Erina: jk
22:32 iBananaPhonez: lolk
22:32 Erina: 03:15:700 (5,7) - ooh thats a nice blanket im totally stealing that idea
22:32 Erina: 03:18:323 (4) - what is this fat junk
22:32 Erina: diabeetus
22:33 Erina: lol jk i dont like that slider tho
22:33 iBananaPhonez: lmao
22:33 iBananaPhonez: alright
22:33 Erina: uh
22:33 Erina: 03:19:143 (7,10,11) - i dont like these either
22:33 iBananaPhonez: I was just coming up with random slider shaps
22:33 Erina: <3
22:33 iBananaPhonez: shapes*
22:33 iBananaPhonez: lmao okay
22:33 Erina: 03:17:667 (2) - this is good tho
22:33 Erina: ima steal that
22:33 Erina: ok back to the start
22:34 iBananaPhonez: It's a pretty generic shap
22:34 iBananaPhonez: shape*
22:34 Erina: i guess it is
22:35 Erina: 00:35:044 (6,7,8,9) - flow feels weird
22:35 Erina: 00:36:192 (3) - maybe give it a curve
22:35 Erina: like a reflected curve to 00:36:520 (1) -
22:36 Erina: your bridge-last chorus is a lot better than your beginning parts lol
22:36 Erina: js
22:36 Erina: 00:40:290 (1) - consider overlapping with 00:39:635 (4) -
22:37 Erina: 01:04:389 (2) - consider ctrl+g
22:37 Erina: 01:05:372 (1,2,3) - these are good
22:37 Erina: 01:06:356 (4) - this just breaks it tho
22:38 iBananaPhonez: I can see that
22:38 Erina: http://puu.sh/7SNRT.jpg
22:38 Erina: consider that
22:38 Erina: but regardless
22:39 Erina: 01:07:012 (6) - ctrl+g
22:39 Erina: and overlap with 01:05:700 (2) -
22:40 Erina: 01:38:323 (8) - consider overlap with 01:37:176 (3) -
22:40 Erina: i would be checking your NCs too but they're so inconsistent that i gave up
22:40 iBananaPhonez: rofl
22:40 Erina: 01:40:454 (5) - consider overlapping this with those too
22:40 iBananaPhonez: I think we all know my NC's are complete shit
22:40 Erina: it wont make like any difference to players but it looks good in edit
22:41 Erina: 01:55:044 (10) - consider stacking this with 01:54:471 (6) -
22:41 iBananaPhonez: wow you're right, my maps are fast
22:41 Erina: 01:55:208 (1) - you could make this a longer slider to fit the vocals instead of it all being 1/2 slider 1 note repeat
22:41 iBananaPhonez: and messy
22:42 Erina: ok thats basically it
22:43 Erina: so do i post both of these on both of your maps
22:43 Erina: this was best mod
22:43 iBananaPhonez: yes plz
22:43 Erina: you gotta admit
22:43 iBananaPhonez: Yeah it was the best you gave me so far
22:43 Erina: that i
22:43 Erina: its the best
22:43 iBananaPhonez: in other words less shittier
22:43 Erina: that anyone gave me
22:43 Erina: fk u
22:43 Erina: *anyone gave you
22:43 iBananaPhonez: rofl

ill recheck if you ever make more difficulties, in irc of course ha

now go sing
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