1. Hard (4.9 stars, 223 notes)
2. Insane (5 stars, 402 notes)
3. Normal (4.14 stars, 144 notes)

Papcio wrote:

Hi~~
Random mod.

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[General]
Delete D-Frag! from tags. It's in source so easy to find.

[Insane]
00:13:872 (1) 00:14:711 (1) - These NCs aren't need.
00:37:158 (1,2) - Blank these two
00:37:368 (2,3) - And these
00:58:347 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Try to make this stream more pretty XD

[Hard]
00:14:186 (1,1,1) - Remove ncs
00:05:690 (1,2,3) - It's too confusing to hard
00:06:949 (1,2,3,4) - DS
00:13:662 (1,1,1,1,1) - NC spam
00:18:907 (1,2,3) - We don't want jumps in hard
00:19:746 (1,2,3) - ^
00:22:263 (1) - Try to not reverse sliders more than once
00:56:249 (3,4) - DS snap plz
01:10:096 (1,2,3,4,5) - Confusing and hard
01:14:606 (3,4,5,6) - Plz jumps in hard
01:20:061 (3,4,1,2,3) - ^

[Normal]
00:08:207 (1) - Reverse it
00:28:557 (4,1) - DS
01:09:466 (4,1) - Blanket

I like hitsounding in these diffs ^^

Raisa12 wrote:

Hello ~ From #modreqs

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[General]
I think we should eliminate the ''Roka'' label since the diff is insane
[Takao Normal]
00:08:837 - try this?

00:18:907 - try this? (this here is suggestion)

00:39:886 (3) - Error snap distance, the circle is close to the slider
I recommend not break DS in Normal D:
00:41:564 (6) - ^ same as above
00:48:277 (3) - ^
01:15:655 (3) - ^
01:23:103 (3) - ^
01:05:480 (1) - ^

[Chitose Hard]
01:27:087 (4) - Objec't end is snapped
01:30:444 (3) - ^

I can not mod insane
I hope I helped a little
bye and good luck with that

hopperhtkn wrote:

Roka~ <3

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[Roka Insane]
00:02:123 - vol. 40%
00:07:158 - vol. 50%
00:07:578 - vol. 45%
00:07:788 - vol. 40%
00:08:207 - vol. 55%
00:08:837 - vol. 50%


00:05:900 (4) - clap
00:06:110 (5,6) - clap
00:06:319 (7) - delete circle and add circle 00:06:424 - here
00:06:424 (1,2) - clap
00:06:739 (4) - all clap
00:07:368 (3) - clap 00:07:368 - 00:07:473 -
　　　　　　　Additions:Drum clap 00:07:578 - 00:07:683 -
00:07:788 (1) - Additions:Drum finish
00:07:893 (2,3) - sumpleset:Drum
00:08:207 (1) - add finish to slider's head
00:09:047 (3) - add clap slider's end
00:09:571 (5) - ^
00:09:886 (6) - ^
00:10:305 - add circle
00:10:935 (4) - clap
00:11:354 (7) - add clap slider's head
00:11:669 (8) - end 00:11:879 - here and add clap slider's end
　　　　　　00:11:984 - add circle
00:12:403 (3) - add clap slider's end
00:12:928 (5,6) - ^
00:13:242 (6,7,8,1) - would you like this pattern?

　00:13:557 (7,8) - is clap
00:13:872 (1,1,2,1,2) - Sumpleset:Drum
00:14:711 (1) - finish
00:14:921 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - clap
00:55:830 (5) -should use same DS

sry cheep mod
I like this map very much!!
gl

piruchan wrote:

Hi~

First try at modding here (can't help it, love to see this map gets ranked).

[General]
Add opening to the tags, you might want to consider removing Takao's Boobs.

[Takao Normal]
01:05:795 and 01:05:900 - the timing sections have the same settings as 00:52:473. Delete them?

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[Chitose Hard]
AiMod found this

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01:05:795 - Kiai time missing?

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I don't check Roka Insane because I don't play Insane yet.
I found nothing wrong with the flow and pattern.
Hope this help.
Good luck!

I'll download this map again the moment I saw it gets Ranked

Kazuya-sama wrote:

Hello, from #modreqs (My english =0 Sorry)

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AIMod:
"This mapset needs at 1 easy/normal diff"

Please make easy diff, because the normal is (4,10 star)!

All diff: Uncheck letterbox during breaks!

[Normal]

It's harder than normal.

AR: +2
HP: +1

Distance problems... Please resnap all notes. Suggested spacing: 1.0x

00:05:061 (2) - Better blanket? Slider center point: x: 312 y: 244? result: http://puu.sh/7F9QZ.jpg

[Hard]

AR: +1
OD: +1

00:02:438 (2) - Blanket: Center point: x: 228 y: 152 :
00:03:068 (3,4) - http://puu.sh/7FaqZ.jpg ?
00:19:746 (1,3) - CTRL+G ?
00:23:103 (2) - Slider end point: x: 316 y: 256 (better blanket) http://puu.sh/7FaDB.jpg ?
00:37:368 (2) - Blanket: e.g: http://puu.sh/7FaJ5.jpg
00:38:207 (4) - ^ http://puu.sh/7FaM5.jpg
00:43:452 (1) - Repeat slider sing can't be covered! 00:42:403 (1) - new position: x: 76 y: 160, and make curve. 00:43:452 (1) - new position: x: 212, y: 80. Result: http://puu.sh/7FaUm.jpg
00:54:151 (4) - slider center point (2nd white tick) x: 308 y: 72
01:02:753 (1) - center point: x: 404 y: 228, end point: x: 340 y: 156
01:09:466 (3) - New position: x: 88 y: 184, and slider center point: x: 84, y: 260, and slider end point (last white tick) x: 152 y: 316
01:10:515 (2) - move: x: 152 y: 316
01:12:193 (1) - center point: x: 112 y: 168 end point: x: 116 y: 288

[Insane]

AR: -1
OD: -1

It's okay

Good luck!

Fluttershy03 wrote:

Hey there o/ From #modreqs!

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General

No issues found!

Normal

00:09:256 (2) - Move this to x:80 y:195 so the start perfectly stacks with the end of 00:08:207 (1) -

00:12:613 (2) - Same kind of issue, move this to x:303 y:225 so it perfectly stacks with the slider end of 00:11:354 (4) -

00:38:207 (2) - Perhaps you could ctrl+g this for better flow?

00:55:830 (3) - Move this to x:95 y:96 to improve blanket.

01:08:417 (4) - Move this down to x:335 y:172 for perfect stack with the slider end of 01:06:949 (2) -

Hard

00:09:571 (3,4) -Why are these sliders different? You should copy and paste one of them so they are exactly the same shape, and it would look neater.

Insane

00:32:753 (2,1,2) - Turn this into a perfect triangle?

Guess that's it from me, really nice beatmap, gogogo rank it!

Erina wrote:

Hey! From my mod for voice queue!

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Nice song, and good anime

[Roka Insane]
00:11:354 (8,9) - Consider adding more curve to the first slider
00:18:068 (6,7) - These look kinda weird, consider adding more curve to the first slider
00:19:326 (4,5,4,5) - The hitsounds on these sound really unnecessary imo
00:33:172 (1) - Remove NC
00:40:200 (7,8,9) - Notes 8 and 9 dont seem necessary imo
01:11:774 (1,2,3) - Consider stacking with 01:10:515 (1) -

[Chitose Hard]
Consider increasing AR+1
00:21:844 (7) - Consider moving to x:256 y:212
00:33:172 (1) - Remove NC
00:39:466 (4) - Consider stacking with 00:37:998 (3) -
01:12:193 (3) - Remove NC, 01:12:823 (1) - Add NC

[Takao Normal]
00:05:061 (2,3) - Try making these sliders overlap (the end of one with the start of another)
00:13:662 (5) - Consider overlapping with end of this slider 00:12:193 (1) -
00:15:760 (1,2) - You could try overlapping these too (the end of one with the start of another)
00:28:977 (1) - This position is kind of hard to read for a normal
00:39:047 (1,3,4) - The positioning of these three notes look ugly
00:52:683 (3,3) - Consider overlapping these sliders too (the end of one with the start of another)
01:02:753 (1,4) - Try making these sliders have parallel/similar curves so its like a blanket

Nice map! Contact me later so we can figure out what part of Irony you're going to sing!

-S c a r l e t- wrote:

Hello~ Just passing by since I mapped this song too~

Just some things you need to add.

Add "arm" in your tags since is composed by ARM
Also, add "momoji yamamoto takaisan chiyoko" in tags too because this song is performed by Momiji Yamamoto, Takaisan, Chiyoko. IOSYS jk Girls is just the band name.
" ディーふらぐ！" and "d-fragment!" should be added in the tags too. Japanese name for D-Frag! and English title for it.

Last thing to point out, try not to add names in your diff like (Takao, Chitose, Roka). Well, not sure is rankable or not but I think that this is not necessary.

Good Luck~

Okoratu wrote:

From my queue:

[General]
Dunno the Offset seemed to be off to me:
Try 2.142 (+18ms)

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Note that this has only been done hastily, but i think the offset is off by at least that amount. FIIIIIXED

[Insane]

1. 00:11:058 - is there a specific reason for ignoring this vocal? D: Sounds bad to place a note here.
2. 00:20:603 (1,2,3,4) - these would make better for a stream imo, because there's a vocal on this one aswell 00:20:813 - Fixed
3. 00:33:610 (4) - Might consider stacking it properly with 00:32:351 (1) - Fixed
4. 00:38:960 - This sounds like a vocal aswell Fixed
5. 00:55:428 (1,2,3,4) - might move this one down and to the left 1 grid element in order for the stream to look a bit better: Partially fixed
   
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6. 01:06:547 (5) - Stack it properly *nazi* Fixed X2
   Maybe move it a bit aswell because the distance between those distance on the timeline between every element here is the same, so you might want to have this in your map aswell?
7. 01:08:435 (6) - Stack properly *nazi* Fixed
8. 01:11:372 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - ever tried something like this: Fixed
   
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   With these?
9. 01:18:190 (4,5,6) - I don't like that one, because most of your stacks are doubles and the triplet may be misleading now that you've used so many of those doubles, might consider doing something like 01:15:253 (1,2,3) - to them, so that it's clearly readable as a triplet?
10. 01:19:030 (8,9,1) - ^ Didn't really see where you were going with the above 2, so not fixed

Overall not my kind of map even though i like D-Frag, the overall spacing isn't as regular as it could've been, so it's a bit confusing to play even though it's certainly not a hard map at all.

Cheers,

~oko

Sniqht wrote:

Hi ^^ Noob mod is here!

[Insane]

I can't find much error.

00:23:121 (3,4) - I think here looks ugly. Fixed
00:35:918 (2,3,4,5) - Spacing problem Fixed
00:45:253 (3,4) - I think here looks ugly. You can move circle to x248 y108 Fixed
01:14:834 (1,2,3,1) - No, move 01:15:673 (1) - to x256 y324 Too big a jump

[Hard]
00:07:176 (2,3,4,5) - This can be better https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1509795 Fixed
00:38:855 (1) - Spacing problem. Near to slider. Fixed
00:55:848 (2,3) - You can blanket here. Fixed, i think

Sorry for my bad modding \;D/ good lucks

• 
  hmm opinion: sv bit high for a slow ish song

1. many overmaps here, not sure why you have these here. i really cant hear anything ie. 00:52:806 (2,3) -
2. 00:07:386 - not a good place to change to slider, i recommend here 00:07:491 - Reason? because i hear the guitar playing triplets and you should change the pattern only on the start of a triplet and which 00:07:491 - is the start of the triplet
3. 00:09:274 - this strong sound being expressed by a slider tail?
4. 00:09:589 (5,6) - the DS makes it seem like a 1/2 spacing
5. 00:10:323 (1) - bit of an overmap
6. 00:12:107 (1) - slider head is overmapped too. just put a circle at where the tail is
7. 00:13:575 (7,1) - i don't really understand why there are so many overmapped notes here
   There are other ways to make difficulties hard other than putting a bunch of 1/4 rhythms u know >_<. Use jumps and antijumps
8. 00:22:281 (1,2,3,4) - how bout end these 1/4 earlier so you can map out the littler percussion sounds at the red ticks
9. 00:26:477 (6,7) - can't explain well, just looks bad lol
10. 00:44:939 (2) - slider too short to be this curved
11. 00:45:253 (3,4) - 2 problems here, first of all wtf such a long and unexpected 1/4 jump. second, hard to read
12. 01:01:197 (3,5,8) - you can just like copy one slider and rotate it by 120

1. 00:03:505 (4) - remove one reverse and use a circle, more emphasize for that finish
2. 00:04:135 (1,2) - too close to look good
3. 00:09:589 (3,4) - rhythms, like these seriously need to be simplified down abit.. this is hard... not insane. suggestion for this
   
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4. 00:10:323 (1,2) - srsly like, these kind of patterns are a bit more understandable in insane but, srsly don't put them in hard >_<
5. 00:15:568 - again, slider tail for this strong sound here with finish?
6. 00:20:603 (1,2) - 1/4 slider with reverse might be better
7. 00:37:176 (1,2) - blankets also need a bit of work here
8. 00:39:274 (3,4,5) - whats with the ds change..?

1. 00:05:498 - add finish?
2. 00:05:079 (2,3) - bad overlap

Kibbleru wrote:

alright so i guess a quick look here

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oh i said this already but you need a difficulty 3 stars or below
mapset in general could be a little bit more refined..- that means like making blankets better, making sliders look better.. etc etc.

[Insane]

• 
  hmm opinion: sv bit high for a slow ish song

1. many overmaps here, not sure why you have these here. i really cant hear anything ie. 00:52:806 (2,3) -
2. 00:07:386 - not a good place to change to slider, i recommend here 00:07:491 - Reason? because i hear the guitar playing triplets and you should change the pattern only on the start of a triplet and which 00:07:491 - is the start of the triplet Fixed
3. 00:09:274 - this strong sound being expressed by a slider tail? Yup
4. 00:09:589 (5,6) - the DS makes it seem like a 1/2 spacing Seems to make good sense to me though
5. 00:10:323 (1) - bit of an overmap Fixed
6. 00:12:107 (1) - slider head is overmapped too. just put a circle at where the tail isFixed
7. 00:13:575 (7,1) - i don't really understand why there are so many overmapped notes here
   There are other ways to make difficulties hard other than putting a bunch of 1/4 rhythms u know >_<. Use jumps and antijumps Das just my kinda rhythm
8. 00:22:281 (1,2,3,4) - how bout end these 1/4 earlier so you can map out the littler percussion sounds at the red ticks Fixed
9. 00:26:477 (6,7) - can't explain well, just looks bad lol Made it look better... hopefully
10. 00:44:939 (2) - slider too short to be this curved Fixed, kinda
11. 00:45:253 (3,4) - 2 problems here, first of all wtf such a long and unexpected 1/4 jump. second, hard to readFixed
12. 01:01:197 (3,5,8) - you can just like copy one slider and rotate it by 120 Nomnom fixed

[Hard]

1. 00:03:505 (4) - remove one reverse and use a circle, more emphasize for that finish Fixed
2. 00:04:135 (1,2) - too close to look good Fixed
3. 00:09:589 (3,4) - rhythms, like these seriously need to be simplified down abit.. this is hard... not insane. suggestion for this
   Fixed this one, but the other with the patterns i kept because seems like you didn't notice the same in the start. Taking that as an indication that it still goes well with the song even though it's a hard
4. 00:10:323 (1,2) - srsly like, these kind of patterns are a bit more understandable in insane but, srsly don't put them in hard >_<
5. 00:15:568 - again, slider tail for this strong sound here with finish?
6. 00:20:603 (1,2) - 1/4 slider with reverse might be betterwobfix
7. 00:37:176 (1,2) - blankets also need a bit of work here Little fix
8. 00:39:274 (3,4,5) - whats with the ds change..? Just a lil jump

[Normal]

1. 00:05:498 - add finish? Fixed
2. 00:05:079 (2,3) - bad overlap Fixed