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Topic Starter
Have you read the beatmapping FAQ?
It seems you didnt use distance snap / hitsounds.
The spacing is kinda unique, i like it, but I don't know what the BATs will say
oh, and add a bg, the map wasnt really done... please don't put this in a modding queue then.
[Face the noise]
00:37:60 (1) - ?? remove/remake this slider ._.
00:40:80 (1) - Stack this better on (4)
02:09:60 (2,3,4) - Try to make the spacing between these beats equal
02:46:40 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - ah finally some hitsounds, but please dont use these finish spams D:
[Defeat the noise]
This is a pretty easy diff ^^
01:09:60 (1) - Further away from (2) please
01:30:40 (1) - Further from (3)
01:43:60 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I like this ^^
02:10:40 (3) - put a break after this note
Add alot more hitsounds, maybe do something about the spacing with distance snap.
Read the FAQ if you haven't yet.
You did well on your second map, I see you put effort in this one
Here a star,
if you need help with anything pm me.
It seems you didnt use distance snap / hitsounds.
The spacing is kinda unique, i like it, but I don't know what the BATs will say
oh, and add a bg, the map wasnt really done... please don't put this in a modding queue then.
[Face the noise]
00:37:60 (1) - ?? remove/remake this slider ._.
00:40:80 (1) - Stack this better on (4)
02:09:60 (2,3,4) - Try to make the spacing between these beats equal
02:46:40 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - ah finally some hitsounds, but please dont use these finish spams D:
[Defeat the noise]
This is a pretty easy diff ^^
01:09:60 (1) - Further away from (2) please
01:30:40 (1) - Further from (3)
01:43:60 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I like this ^^
02:10:40 (3) - put a break after this note
Add alot more hitsounds, maybe do something about the spacing with distance snap.
Read the FAQ if you haven't yet.
You did well on your second map, I see you put effort in this one
Here a star,
if you need help with anything pm me.
Topic Starter
'K, thanks, I'll work on all that~
Offset: 820
-Hybrid [Face The Noise]
Use the distance snap, it's necessary! >_<
Select also on View > grid level 2 or 3, then remake the map using the distance snap.
Press alt+shift+A to see the distance snap errors.
For example:
-00:04:001
-Defeat the noise
The same as above. Use the distance spacing.
00:19:601 (2,3,4,5,6) Stack perfectly with the end of (1) [use the grid lvl 3 or disable the grid snap]
00:22:801 (2,3,4,5,6) ^
01:00:001 Remake this break
01:25:401 (2) Weird slider, move the last way-point
01:28:601 (2) ^
02:12:001 Remake this break
02:58:801 This spinner should finish at 03:02:601
-Hybrid [Face The Noise]
Use the distance snap, it's necessary! >_<
Select also on View > grid level 2 or 3, then remake the map using the distance snap.
Press alt+shift+A to see the distance snap errors.
For example:
-00:04:001
-Defeat the noise
The same as above. Use the distance spacing.
00:19:601 (2,3,4,5,6) Stack perfectly with the end of (1) [use the grid lvl 3 or disable the grid snap]
00:22:801 (2,3,4,5,6) ^
01:00:001 Remake this break
01:25:401 (2) Weird slider, move the last way-point
01:28:601 (2) ^
02:12:001 Remake this break
02:58:801 This spinner should finish at 03:02:601
Topic Starter
'K, thanks. I'm fixing some of that.
I only really disagree with the distance snapping. Though I didn't use the editor's distance snapping (I prefer the freedom of doing it myself), I did do all the distances manually. It might not be consistent throughout the whole song, but I've played a hell of a lot of ranked maps which are similar to this. I'm pretty sure the original game isn't perfectly consistent in this way either.
I am fixing everything else though. I didn't realize you could modify the grid level, thanks for that~
I'll be updating shortly.
I only really disagree with the distance snapping. Though I didn't use the editor's distance snapping (I prefer the freedom of doing it myself), I did do all the distances manually. It might not be consistent throughout the whole song, but I've played a hell of a lot of ranked maps which are similar to this. I'm pretty sure the original game isn't perfectly consistent in this way either.
I am fixing everything else though. I didn't realize you could modify the grid level, thanks for that~
I'll be updating shortly.
eeemod GO!!!
I'll lay off the distance snap stuff, although most of the manual snapping plays... okay at times, I see you don't want to use distance snap.
[Both Difficulties]
Timing -> Resnap All Notes & Recalculate Sliders
You should take a look at inheriting timing sections, 02:18:42 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,1) - places like these should be A) lower in volume or B) soft samples.
Inherited timing sections allow you to add a new timing section with the
To add a inherited timing section. CTRL+P at where you want to add it, then go to the timing setup panel, and select the inherit timing section checkbox. After that you can go to the volume tab where you will find a bar at which you can move the volume.
Also, remove your breaks and reinsert them shortly after, they're sort of off.
[Face the Noise]
01:51:62 (3) - this is quite close compared to the one before :/
end your difficulties the same place plz
[Defeat the Noise] isn't it [Hush/Crush the Noise?] I'm not really sure
01:11:02 (5) - I don't like the spacing from (4)
02:55:62 (1,2) - This is not allowed in a beatmap
I would star this... but it's not too. . . hmmm. . . . . I'll star to get you on your way
I'll lay off the distance snap stuff, although most of the manual snapping plays... okay at times, I see you don't want to use distance snap.
[Both Difficulties]
Timing -> Resnap All Notes & Recalculate Sliders
You should take a look at inheriting timing sections, 02:18:42 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,1) - places like these should be A) lower in volume or B) soft samples.
Inherited timing sections allow you to add a new timing section with the
To add a inherited timing section. CTRL+P at where you want to add it, then go to the timing setup panel, and select the inherit timing section checkbox. After that you can go to the volume tab where you will find a bar at which you can move the volume.
Also, remove your breaks and reinsert them shortly after, they're sort of off.
[Face the Noise]
01:51:62 (3) - this is quite close compared to the one before :/
end your difficulties the same place plz
[Defeat the Noise] isn't it [Hush/Crush the Noise?] I'm not really sure
01:11:02 (5) - I don't like the spacing from (4)
02:55:62 (1,2) - This is not allowed in a beatmap
I would star this... but it's not too. . . hmmm. . . . . I'll star to get you on your way
Topic Starter
Thanks, I'll fix all that now.
And the next two difficulties are Hush/Crush the Noise~
EDIT: Updated~
And the next two difficulties are Hush/Crush the Noise~
EDIT: Updated~
Spacing is very bad, can't really mod until spacing is fixed.
Topic Starter
I decided to fix some of the spacing as a few people have been criticising it, I think it plays a little better now~
defeat the noise / face the noisewould you mind if i made my own difficulty for this song?
SPOILER
overall, this is on-beat, it's just not good. It doesn't match the music much.
overall, this is on-beat, it's just not good. It doesn't match the music much.
Topic Starter
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Nice map ^^
Face The Noise
00:36:02 (3) - one more revert, ant then delete 00:37:22 (4), and theeen fix spacing
01:05:62 (5) - remove clap and add whistle?
01:08:82 (5) - ^
01:11:22 (3) - one more revert and then fix spacing
01:30:82 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - spaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaacing
02:32:82 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - spaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaacing
Defeat the Noise
00:06:40 (7) - very confusing for a normal difficulty
00:09:60 (7) - ^
00:12:80 (7) - ^
00:16:00 (7) - ^
00:33:60 (6) - spacing
00:36:80 (6) - ^
00:41:60 (2) - ^
01:06:02 (x) - note with finish here?
01:33:60 (1) - wtf spacing?
01:43:60 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - spaaaaaaaaaaaacing
01:53:60 (2,3,4,5,6) - spaaaaaaacing
02:05:60 (1) - unecessary jump
02:08:80 (1) - ^
02:21:60 (2) - spacing
02:24:00 (5) - ^
02:24:40 (6) - ^
02:28:00 (2) - unecessary jump
~
great map, star.
00:36:02 (3) - one more revert, ant then delete 00:37:22 (4), and theeen fix spacing
01:05:62 (5) - remove clap and add whistle?
01:08:82 (5) - ^
01:11:22 (3) - one more revert and then fix spacing
01:30:82 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - spaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaacing
02:32:82 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - spaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaacing
Defeat the Noise
00:06:40 (7) - very confusing for a normal difficulty
00:09:60 (7) - ^
00:12:80 (7) - ^
00:16:00 (7) - ^
00:33:60 (6) - spacing
00:36:80 (6) - ^
00:41:60 (2) - ^
01:06:02 (x) - note with finish here?
01:33:60 (1) - wtf spacing?
01:43:60 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - spaaaaaaaaaaaacing
01:53:60 (2,3,4,5,6) - spaaaaaaacing
02:05:60 (1) - unecessary jump
02:08:80 (1) - ^
02:21:60 (2) - spacing
02:24:00 (5) - ^
02:24:40 (6) - ^
02:28:00 (2) - unecessary jump
~
great map, star.
Topic Starter
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Topic Starter
Thanks, I fixed it, but I can't be bothered to upload it atm XD
Face the noise~
00:46:02 (3,4,5) - Either move these farther from 1 and 2, or make 3 a new combo.
01:20:82 (1) - Move closer to 3.
Defeat the noise~
01:59:20 (1) - Put a soft inherited section before this slider like you did in "Face the noise"
Mainly add the inherited sections that you did in "Face the noise" to this difficulty as well.
Hush the noise~
Same thing as "Defeat the noise"
I also won't be going through the distance spacing issues =P
Other than that, this map coming along... fine~
00:46:02 (3,4,5) - Either move these farther from 1 and 2, or make 3 a new combo.
01:20:82 (1) - Move closer to 3.
Defeat the noise~
01:59:20 (1) - Put a soft inherited section before this slider like you did in "Face the noise"
Mainly add the inherited sections that you did in "Face the noise" to this difficulty as well.
Hush the noise~
Same thing as "Defeat the noise"
I also won't be going through the distance spacing issues =P
Other than that, this map coming along... fine~
Hush the Noise
i recommend you to use the beat snap divisor in 1/4 for hard diff..
00:17:42 - add note (snap divisor 1/4)
00:17:52 - ^
00:26:62 (6) - end this 1/2 beat earlier
00:27:42 - add note
00:27:62 - ^
00:28:02 (1,2) - too close
00:29:82 (6) - doesnt matcht he music
00:44:42 to 00:50:42 - i think you could do something here more dynamic like for exemple:
00:53:02 - add note
00:56:22 - ^
01:45:02 (1,2,3) - move 1/2 beat later
01:48:22 (1,2,3) - ^
01:58:82 to 02:31:42 - how about make this section with soft-hitsounds?
02:39:62 (1,2,3) - wrong spacing
02:45:62 (1,2,3,4,5) - stack the end of slider
Face the Noise
00:46:02 (3,4,5) - to close together and to prev circle.
00:50:82 (1) - to far from prev circle.. use distance snap to get the an correct distance
you have some problems with spacing.. please use distance snap to place the notes... or look closely to the image that Armin posted.... if you dont understand something about correct spacing, feel free to send me a PM and i ll be glad to explain it to you..
Defeat the Noise
resnap all notes
the modding of Hush the Noise will help with this too, in rhythm stuff.
good luck
star
i recommend you to use the beat snap divisor in 1/4 for hard diff..
00:17:42 - add note (snap divisor 1/4)
00:17:52 - ^
00:26:62 (6) - end this 1/2 beat earlier
00:27:42 - add note
00:27:62 - ^
00:28:02 (1,2) - too close
00:29:82 (6) - doesnt matcht he music
00:44:42 to 00:50:42 - i think you could do something here more dynamic like for exemple:
00:53:02 - add note
00:56:22 - ^
01:45:02 (1,2,3) - move 1/2 beat later
01:48:22 (1,2,3) - ^
01:58:82 to 02:31:42 - how about make this section with soft-hitsounds?
02:39:62 (1,2,3) - wrong spacing
02:45:62 (1,2,3,4,5) - stack the end of slider
Face the Noise
00:46:02 (3,4,5) - to close together and to prev circle.
00:50:82 (1) - to far from prev circle.. use distance snap to get the an correct distance
you have some problems with spacing.. please use distance snap to place the notes... or look closely to the image that Armin posted.... if you dont understand something about correct spacing, feel free to send me a PM and i ll be glad to explain it to you..
Defeat the Noise
resnap all notes
the modding of Hush the Noise will help with this too, in rhythm stuff.
good luck
star
Topic Starter
Updated~
Hush the Noise
00:10:02 (5,1) - spacing
00:24:82 (1,2) - ^
00:29:82 (6) - revert at 00:30:22 and then...
00:30:82 (x) - add note here
01:12:82 (1) - OMG WTF JUMP
02:34:02 (3,4) - bad placement
02:37:22 (3,4) - ^
:3
00:10:02 (5,1) - spacing
00:24:82 (1,2) - ^
00:29:82 (6) - revert at 00:30:22 and then...
00:30:82 (x) - add note here
01:12:82 (1) - OMG WTF JUMP
02:34:02 (3,4) - bad placement
02:37:22 (3,4) - ^
:3
Topic Starter
Fixed up with some of Blue Dragon's suggestions~
[Overall]
I'd reduce hitsound volume by 1-2 steps, as it is now they are quite loud.
This is a matter of taste, but I think you've used far too many whistles/claps.
(I don't know if you're aware of this, but you can add a hitsound to a single point in a slider/spinner by selecting that point in the timeline or in the placement area. You'll notice the edge of the note change colour.)
Try to use Grid Level 3 for most accurate beat spacing (View -> Grid Level -> 3).
[Hush the Noise]
I'd increase hp drain by one.
02:00:02 (3,4) - I'd make this a slider.
02:01:62 (3,4) - ^
02:03:22 (3,4) - ^
02:04:82 (3,4) - ^
02:20:42 (5) - See X3ns0r's post.
02:23:62 (2,3) - ^
02:34:82 (5) - Spacing. (Do it like 00:35:62 (4,5,6,7) instead.)
02:38:02 (5) - ^
Keep up the good work!
I'd reduce hitsound volume by 1-2 steps, as it is now they are quite loud.
This is a matter of taste, but I think you've used far too many whistles/claps.
(I don't know if you're aware of this, but you can add a hitsound to a single point in a slider/spinner by selecting that point in the timeline or in the placement area. You'll notice the edge of the note change colour.)
Try to use Grid Level 3 for most accurate beat spacing (View -> Grid Level -> 3).
[Hush the Noise]
I'd increase hp drain by one.
02:00:02 (3,4) - I'd make this a slider.
02:01:62 (3,4) - ^
02:03:22 (3,4) - ^
02:04:82 (3,4) - ^
02:20:42 (5) - See X3ns0r's post.
02:23:62 (2,3) - ^
02:34:82 (5) - Spacing. (Do it like 00:35:62 (4,5,6,7) instead.)
02:38:02 (5) - ^
Keep up the good work!
Mapset is generally boring, as patterns are copied and flipped here and there. Keep to the same beats, but place them diffirently.
[Face]
You really need to use Distance Snap.
00:34:42 (1) - Remove slider.
00:34:82 - Add Beat.
00:46:02 (1,2,3) - A little too crowded, in my opinion.
01:33:62 (5,1,2) - ^ (Same as above)
01:58:02 (3,4,5) - ^ (Same as above)
[Defeat]
Too many stacks here...
Overuse of whistles in sliders. Use them at solo sliders like 01:16:02 (1), not those in a pair or more, like 01:17:62 (1) and 01:20:82 (1). Avoid use on long sliders like 01:50:02 (1).
00:19:62 (2,3,4,5,6) - Boring.
00:22:82 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
[Hush]
Overuse of slider whistles.
00:44:42 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Too many claps.
01:30:82 (1,2) - ^
01:34:02 (1,2) - ^
01:36:82 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - Plain horrid, in combos and hitsounds.
02:14:41 - Remove and readd Break.
Sorry, but this map needs more work to get a star from me.
[Face]
You really need to use Distance Snap.
00:34:42 (1) - Remove slider.
00:34:82 - Add Beat.
00:46:02 (1,2,3) - A little too crowded, in my opinion.
01:33:62 (5,1,2) - ^ (Same as above)
01:58:02 (3,4,5) - ^ (Same as above)
[Defeat]
Too many stacks here...
Overuse of whistles in sliders. Use them at solo sliders like 01:16:02 (1), not those in a pair or more, like 01:17:62 (1) and 01:20:82 (1). Avoid use on long sliders like 01:50:02 (1).
00:19:62 (2,3,4,5,6) - Boring.
00:22:82 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
[Hush]
Overuse of slider whistles.
00:44:42 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Too many claps.
01:30:82 (1,2) - ^
01:34:02 (1,2) - ^
01:36:82 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - Plain horrid, in combos and hitsounds.
02:14:41 - Remove and readd Break.
Sorry, but this map needs more work to get a star from me.
[Timing]
Seems on the spot
[General Impression]
Nice, I like this. Hope to see it get ranked soon
~
I don't do combo/nazi mods anymore.
~
[Face the Noise]
If this was intended to be a easy map, it really has some hard to read places.
Like notes under sliders.
01:33:62 (5,1,2) - < this too for example and places like this, is confusing =p for a easy. but fine I guess
01:59:22 to 02:30:420, lower hit sounds a little? to 70-80%.
[Defeat the Noise]
Awesome, cant see anything wrong. Some ugly sliders, but that is just me.
Nice Diff
01:59:22 to 02:30:420, lower hit sounds a little? to 70-80%.
[Hush the Noise]
Mods in IRC
&
01:59:22 to 02:30:420, lower hit sounds a little? to 70-80%.
Seems on the spot
[General Impression]
Nice, I like this. Hope to see it get ranked soon
~
I don't do combo/nazi mods anymore.
~
[Face the Noise]
If this was intended to be a easy map, it really has some hard to read places.
Like notes under sliders.
01:33:62 (5,1,2) - < this too for example and places like this, is confusing =p for a easy. but fine I guess
01:59:22 to 02:30:420, lower hit sounds a little? to 70-80%.
[Defeat the Noise]
Awesome, cant see anything wrong. Some ugly sliders, but that is just me.
Nice Diff
01:59:22 to 02:30:420, lower hit sounds a little? to 70-80%.
[Hush the Noise]
Mods in IRC
&
01:59:22 to 02:30:420, lower hit sounds a little? to 70-80%.
[Face the Noise]
00:46:82 (3) - Spacing~
00:50:82 (1) - Maybe this is a big jump for an easy diff, isn't it?
02:05:62 (1) - I'd move this 4 x 1/2 beats forward, and then delete 2.
02:48:82 (4) - New combo?
[Defeat the Noise]
Too many whistles IMO, and it seems a bit repetitive >.<
[Hush the Noise]
OK
Nice skin btw
Star~
00:46:82 (3) - Spacing~
00:50:82 (1) - Maybe this is a big jump for an easy diff, isn't it?
02:05:62 (1) - I'd move this 4 x 1/2 beats forward, and then delete 2.
02:48:82 (4) - New combo?
[Defeat the Noise]
Too many whistles IMO, and it seems a bit repetitive >.<
[Hush the Noise]
OK
Nice skin btw
Star~
Really good job Jibbers! First of all, all of this beatmapping speak has confuzzled me and I am now dreading ever starting a beatmap XD. I can hardly understand what any of this means.
But anyways, good work. I love this song (and TWEWY
).
But anyways, good work. I love this song (and TWEWY
).Indeed, this beatmap talk does confuse me too. I'll get used to it.
Still, this beatmap is coming along quite nicely. Well done.
Still, this beatmap is coming along quite nicely. Well done.
Suggestions:
Overall
02:33:320 ~ 02:45:620 : Kiai Time
02:46:020 ~ 02:58:420 : Kiai Time
And I'm concerned about the distance snapping. They're inconsistent.
Face the Noise
00:56:820 - Spinner ends ankwardly. Try ending it earlier. (Maybe at 58:420)
01:11:215 - Extend by one repeat
01:16:820 - IMO, remove this note.
02:46:020 - Add note
Defeat the Noise
01:11:020 - This slider really sounds weird for me. Maybe you can change it?
01:14:220 - ^
01:26:620 - Add note here, so it matches with the previous combos.
01:29:820 - ^
02:58:420 - Lower the volume at the end of this spinner.
Hush the Noise
02:58:420 - Lower the volume at the end of this spinner.
Other than that no problems.
Overall
02:33:320 ~ 02:45:620 : Kiai Time
02:46:020 ~ 02:58:420 : Kiai Time
And I'm concerned about the distance snapping. They're inconsistent.
Face the Noise
00:56:820 - Spinner ends ankwardly. Try ending it earlier. (Maybe at 58:420)
01:11:215 - Extend by one repeat
01:16:820 - IMO, remove this note.
02:46:020 - Add note
Defeat the Noise
01:11:020 - This slider really sounds weird for me. Maybe you can change it?
01:14:220 - ^
01:26:620 - Add note here, so it matches with the previous combos.
01:29:820 - ^
02:58:420 - Lower the volume at the end of this spinner.
Hush the Noise
02:58:420 - Lower the volume at the end of this spinner.
Other than that no problems.
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Try offset: 800 ^^
Face the Noise
01:11:20 (3) - add a repeat point on this slider
01:14:40 (3) - set soft sounds from here until 01:17:20
01:16:00 - new beat? (maybe a finish or a clap one...)
01:30:80 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - strange section... maybe try a new beat pattern here (maybe by adding some sliders...)
02:32:80 - kiai time from here until the end
02:45:60 (4) - add a slider strarting from here and ending on 02:46:00
Defeat the Noise
00:04:42 (2,3,4) - add a clap on 2nd, remove the other claps
00:07:62 (2,3,4) - ^
00:31:22 (1) - set finish here
00:34:42 (1) - ^
00:37:62 (1) - ^
00:40:82 (1,2) - WEIRD spacing... try to place the 1st beat 6 squares left and move the 2nd 4 squares down and 6 squares right
01:17:62 (1) - make this slider a tick longer
01:20:82 (1) - ^
02:10:42 (3) - finish this slider's end
Hush the Noise
00:19:22 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - move these beats and sliders 2 squares down
00:22:42 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - move these beats and sliders 2 squares up
01:05:82 (4,5) - switch hitsounds between these beats
01:09:02 (4,5) - ^
Try to fix overall spacing for this song! Star'd.
Face the Noise
01:11:20 (3) - add a repeat point on this slider
01:14:40 (3) - set soft sounds from here until 01:17:20
01:16:00 - new beat? (maybe a finish or a clap one...)
01:30:80 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - strange section... maybe try a new beat pattern here (maybe by adding some sliders...)
02:32:80 - kiai time from here until the end
02:45:60 (4) - add a slider strarting from here and ending on 02:46:00
Defeat the Noise
00:04:42 (2,3,4) - add a clap on 2nd, remove the other claps
00:07:62 (2,3,4) - ^
00:31:22 (1) - set finish here
00:34:42 (1) - ^
00:37:62 (1) - ^
00:40:82 (1,2) - WEIRD spacing... try to place the 1st beat 6 squares left and move the 2nd 4 squares down and 6 squares right
01:17:62 (1) - make this slider a tick longer
01:20:82 (1) - ^
02:10:42 (3) - finish this slider's end
Hush the Noise
00:19:22 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - move these beats and sliders 2 squares down
00:22:42 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - move these beats and sliders 2 squares up
01:05:82 (4,5) - switch hitsounds between these beats
01:09:02 (4,5) - ^
Try to fix overall spacing for this song! Star'd.
Here's my mod
Blue = Suggestion Red = Check this
[Face the Noise]
01:24:00 (1) - Could this maybe be smoothed out a little? it looks wonky, which clashes with the symmetrical style you have going.
01:33:60 (4,1,2) - Too close to the beat before it. This makes it hard to read, so can you move them at least a little further away please :3?
02:06:00 (5) - Add a beat here and sit it on top of the slider
Overall, this difficulty's distance spacing confuses me at times, I may suggest checking for beats which are too close/far apart, but the map is good so far.
[Defeat the Noise]
01:36:82 (1) - I'd try to extend this by a beat and resize the spinner
No problems found
[Hush the Noise]
02:52:02 (1) - Could this be made symmetrical?
No problems found
Overall, a good beatmap, and TWEWY
Starred
Blue = Suggestion Red = Check this
[Face the Noise]
01:24:00 (1) - Could this maybe be smoothed out a little? it looks wonky, which clashes with the symmetrical style you have going.
01:33:60 (4,1,2) - Too close to the beat before it. This makes it hard to read, so can you move them at least a little further away please :3?
02:06:00 (5) - Add a beat here and sit it on top of the slider
Overall, this difficulty's distance spacing confuses me at times, I may suggest checking for beats which are too close/far apart, but the map is good so far.
[Defeat the Noise]
01:36:82 (1) - I'd try to extend this by a beat and resize the spinner
No problems found
[Hush the Noise]
02:52:02 (1) - Could this be made symmetrical?
No problems found
Overall, a good beatmap, and TWEWY
StarredRemember, some of the errors posted are suggestions, not directions. Edit to what you see fit.
Non-Detailed Modding v.1.0 Go~
[Face the Noise]
This map needs a preview point.
You have a -20ms difference in the offset on this difficulty compared to the other two. Please look into that.
The spacing seems to fluctuate a bit in this difficulty. Make sure to double check the spacing so that it is less confusing to a completely new player.
[Defeat the Noise]
This map needs a preview point.
The spacing seems to fluctuate a bit in this difficulty as well. Make sure to double check the spacing and see that it is reasonable.
[Hush the Noise]
This map needs a preview point.
The spacing seems to fluctuate a bit in this difficulty as well. Make sure to double check the spacing and see that it is reasonable.
Overall: The map seems okay, but kinda questioning the setup of the spacing since the set up in some parts of the map can cause some confusion (Like 00:16:42 (5) to 00:16:82 (1,2,3) ). I can understand if you're trying to make it symmetrical, but the spacing must be done carefully as well. Also, why is this in the song folder when it is not being used? (Screen Shot)
Non-Detailed Modding v.1.0 Go~
[Face the Noise]
This map needs a preview point.
You have a -20ms difference in the offset on this difficulty compared to the other two. Please look into that.
The spacing seems to fluctuate a bit in this difficulty. Make sure to double check the spacing so that it is less confusing to a completely new player.
[Defeat the Noise]
This map needs a preview point.
The spacing seems to fluctuate a bit in this difficulty as well. Make sure to double check the spacing and see that it is reasonable.
[Hush the Noise]
This map needs a preview point.
The spacing seems to fluctuate a bit in this difficulty as well. Make sure to double check the spacing and see that it is reasonable.
Overall: The map seems okay, but kinda questioning the setup of the spacing since the set up in some parts of the map can cause some confusion (Like 00:16:42 (5) to 00:16:82 (1,2,3) ). I can understand if you're trying to make it symmetrical, but the spacing must be done carefully as well. Also, why is this in the song folder when it is not being used? (Screen Shot)
Topic Starter
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Face the Noise:
01:37:200 through 02:05:800: The spacing for this part is inconsistent with previous parts of the map. Things are too close together for 0.8 spacing.
Defeat the Noise:
00:41:200: Add a circle here or move the previous one into this place.
00:42:000: Add a circle here.
02:45:200 (7): Add a finish?
Hush the Noise:
The spacing here makes things feel really cramped. Try moving it up to 1 or 1.1.
01:37:200 through 02:05:800: The spacing for this part is inconsistent with previous parts of the map. Things are too close together for 0.8 spacing.
Defeat the Noise:
00:41:200: Add a circle here or move the previous one into this place.
00:42:000: Add a circle here.
02:45:200 (7): Add a finish?
Hush the Noise:
The spacing here makes things feel really cramped. Try moving it up to 1 or 1.1.
The artist should be SAWA. What you have as the artist now should be the source.
Topic Starter
Hrm, whenever I try to resubmit with the new artist, it says I've passed my submission cap.
Reinsert the breaks.
Resnap.
<Face the Noise>
00:44:40 (1) - Bad distance snap. I know this one may be supposed to be misleading, but this is not allowed in Easy difficulties. Uh I think these notes are easy to recognise. So I guess it doesn't matter :3
<Defeat the Noise>
01:59:22 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - (Personal suggestion) Change the hitsounds a bit plz? The same pattern repeats too many times.
<Hush the Noise>
Fine.
Star'd
Resnap.
<Face the Noise>
<Defeat the Noise>
01:59:22 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - (Personal suggestion) Change the hitsounds a bit plz? The same pattern repeats too many times.
<Hush the Noise>
Fine.
Star'd
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Sorry for the late mod
Remove some whistle?too noisy...
All the note havn't resnap,move them to the white tick?
[Face the Noise]
3 mins is too long for a easy map...
01:14:40(3)-Remove whistle?
01:26:40(2)-Move to 01:26:20?
01:29:60(2)-Move to 01:29:40?
02:28:80(1)-Start here 02:28:40?
[Defeat the Noise]
01:04:60(6)-End here 01:05:80?
01:12:20(x)-Add a note here?
02:58:00(2,3)-Spacing?
[Hush the Noise]
00:33:80(x)-Add a note here?
00:37:00(x)-^
00:40:20(x)-^
00:47:10(5,6)-remove them?
00:50:20(5,6)-^
00:55:60(4)-End here 00:56:20?
01:24:80(2,3,4)-Spacing?
01:28:00(2,3,4)-^
01:45:00(1,2,3)-Move 1/2 beat afterword?
01:48:20(1,2,3)-^
Star~
Remove some whistle?too noisy...
All the note havn't resnap,move them to the white tick?
[Face the Noise]
3 mins is too long for a easy map...
01:14:40(3)-Remove whistle?
01:26:40(2)-Move to 01:26:20?
01:29:60(2)-Move to 01:29:40?
02:28:80(1)-Start here 02:28:40?
[Defeat the Noise]
01:04:60(6)-End here 01:05:80?
01:12:20(x)-Add a note here?
02:58:00(2,3)-Spacing?
[Hush the Noise]
00:33:80(x)-Add a note here?
00:37:00(x)-^
00:40:20(x)-^
00:47:10(5,6)-remove them?
00:50:20(5,6)-^
00:55:60(4)-End here 00:56:20?
01:24:80(2,3,4)-Spacing?
01:28:00(2,3,4)-^
01:45:00(1,2,3)-Move 1/2 beat afterword?
01:48:20(1,2,3)-^
Star~
~Face the Noise~
02:58:40 (1) - extend the spinner, like other 2 diffs
~Defeat the Noise~
Resnap all notes.
00:05:22 (5) - add hitclap
00:05:62 (6) - remove hitclap at start
00:08:42 (5,6) - ^
01:04:62 (6) - end on the next red tick
02:44:42 (5,6,7) - align them
~Hush the Noise~
Resnap all notes.
00:26:62 (6) - don't overlapped with (5)
00:56:80 (1) - add hitfhinish
01:21:82 (5) - move 1/2 right
01:45:02 (1,2,3) - ^
01:48:22 (1,2,3) - ^
01:53:22 (5) - new combo
02:56:42 (4) - center it
+Star
02:58:40 (1) - extend the spinner, like other 2 diffs
~Defeat the Noise~
Resnap all notes.
00:05:22 (5) - add hitclap
00:05:62 (6) - remove hitclap at start
00:08:42 (5,6) - ^
01:04:62 (6) - end on the next red tick
02:44:42 (5,6,7) - align them
~Hush the Noise~
Resnap all notes.
00:26:62 (6) - don't overlapped with (5)
00:56:80 (1) - add hitfhinish
01:21:82 (5) - move 1/2 right
01:45:02 (1,2,3) - ^
01:48:22 (1,2,3) - ^
01:53:22 (5) - new combo
02:56:42 (4) - center it
+Star
Yo, RJ. Finally got to mod your map. x_x
[Face the Noise]
00:34:400 - Add a beat here? (Suggestion)
[Defeat the Noise]
No errors.
[Hush the Noise]
No errors.
Well done. Shame on me for not staring this before. Star'd~
[Face the Noise]
00:34:400 - Add a beat here? (Suggestion)
[Defeat the Noise]
No errors.
[Hush the Noise]
No errors.
Well done. Shame on me for not staring this before. Star'd~
I didn't find any major problems, but just double check your spacing. You might what to hold shift while snapping notes so it bypasses the grid snap.
~do not kudosu this post~
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~do not kudosu this post~
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[Overall]
BPM: 150,00 - Offset: 810 (Remember to resnap all notes.)
[Face The Noise]
01:53:021 (1,2,3,4) - This spacing is different from the others. Adjust it.
02:03:061 (2,3,4,1) - ^
02:21:061 (5) - New combo.
02:54:041 (4,1) - Spacing. Like a jump for an easy map.
[Defeat The Noise]
01:09:000 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:54:080 (4) - New combo.
[Hush The Noise]
00:16:040 (5,1) - Spacing.
00:33:080 (8,9) - Adjust spacing.
00:37:000 (8,9) - ^
00:40:020 (8,9) - ^
01:25:040 (3,4) - Spacing.
01:28:060 (3,4) - ^
01:55:020 (3) - Partially invisible slider.
02:55:060 (3) - New combo.
BPM: 150,00 - Offset: 810 (Remember to resnap all notes.)
[Face The Noise]
01:53:021 (1,2,3,4) - This spacing is different from the others. Adjust it.
02:03:061 (2,3,4,1) - ^
02:21:061 (5) - New combo.
02:54:041 (4,1) - Spacing. Like a jump for an easy map.
[Defeat The Noise]
01:09:000 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:54:080 (4) - New combo.
[Hush The Noise]
00:16:040 (5,1) - Spacing.
00:33:080 (8,9) - Adjust spacing.
00:37:000 (8,9) - ^
00:40:020 (8,9) - ^
01:25:040 (3,4) - Spacing.
01:28:060 (3,4) - ^
01:55:020 (3) - Partially invisible slider.
02:55:060 (3) - New combo.
Hiai
Face the Noise
01:31:020 (2) - Random placement by purpose?
01:34:040 (3) - Spacing -> Move this a bit up?
02:18:040 (1,2) - The gap here is way smaller than the rest of the combo
Defeat the Noise
00:37:060 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Weird spacing.. But it does seem to be symmetrical when all of it is highlighted. Anyway spacing is weird
00:41:060 (3,4,5) - The gap is larger than in the previous 1,2,3 circles
Hush the Noise
00:37:000 (8,9) - Spacing
00:40:020 (8,9) - Spa-.. Oh it was intentional, right?
01:03:040 (2) - Remove clap?
01:03:080 (4) - If did above, remove clap
01:06:060 (2,4) - If did above, same here
01:14:020 (5) - Somehow I feel like no-clap would fit better here :o Its your call
01:36:080 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - In these series of comboes, clap every circle with number 3. Will sound awesome
02:44:040 (3,4,1) - Spacing here is weird. See the gaps
Overall ~ Some spacing issues and maybe a bit overused claps and whistles but otherwise a neat map. Star
Face the Noise
01:31:020 (2) - Random placement by purpose?
01:34:040 (3) - Spacing -> Move this a bit up?
02:18:040 (1,2) - The gap here is way smaller than the rest of the combo
Defeat the Noise
00:37:060 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Weird spacing.. But it does seem to be symmetrical when all of it is highlighted. Anyway spacing is weird
00:41:060 (3,4,5) - The gap is larger than in the previous 1,2,3 circles
Hush the Noise
00:37:000 (8,9) - Spacing
00:40:020 (8,9) - Spa-.. Oh it was intentional, right?
01:03:040 (2) - Remove clap?
01:03:080 (4) - If did above, remove clap
01:06:060 (2,4) - If did above, same here
01:14:020 (5) - Somehow I feel like no-clap would fit better here :o Its your call
01:36:080 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - In these series of comboes, clap every circle with number 3. Will sound awesome
02:44:040 (3,4,1) - Spacing here is weird. See the gaps
Overall ~ Some spacing issues and maybe a bit overused claps and whistles but otherwise a neat map. Star
Mod Info's:
Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.
Starts Suggestions:
Offset = 820 (resnap all notes)
[Face the Noise]
It's ok
[Defeat the Noise]
01:57:700 - break
[Hush the Noise]
01:57:700 - break
02:05:080 (4) - Spacing + New combo
02:06:040 (1) - Remove new combo
02:08:000 (2) - Spacing
02:08:080 (3) - New combo
Starred~
Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.
Starts Suggestions:
Offset = 820 (resnap all notes)
[Face the Noise]
It's ok
[Defeat the Noise]
01:57:700 - break
[Hush the Noise]
01:57:700 - break
02:05:080 (4) - Spacing + New combo
02:06:040 (1) - Remove new combo
02:08:000 (2) - Spacing
02:08:080 (3) - New combo
Starred~
Timing could use some improvement.
01:58:800 - Around here is where the BPM changes...I think.
[Face the Noise]
Playing it feels a bit weird...but the timing is right.
[Defeat the Noise]
01:11:000 (5) - Hidden
01:14:020 (5) - ^
[Hush the Noise]
01:03:020 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Inconsistent Spacing
01:06:040 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - ^
01:58:800 - Around here is where the BPM changes...I think.
[Face the Noise]
Playing it feels a bit weird...but the timing is right.
[Defeat the Noise]
01:11:000 (5) - Hidden
01:14:020 (5) - ^
[Hush the Noise]
01:03:020 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Inconsistent Spacing
01:06:040 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - ^
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Topic Starter
Thank you very much for the Bubble
Updated with most of the latest suggestions, apologies for not updating for a while.
Updated with most of the latest suggestions, apologies for not updating for a while.
Ranked
Good job.
Good job.