[Hard]
00:31:049 - Beat spacing error. Basically if the notes are close together on the timeline, then you put them close together. However, your (3)(4)(5)(6)(7) are not the same distance from each other on the timeline, even though you put them the same distance apart on the map. Your (6) and (7) should be farther apart, like this:
http://puu.sh/6iwEF.jpg00:47:580 -
http://puu.sh/6iwYR.jpg You should move your (2) circle over there and arrange the circles like that in the picture so it flows better.
00:51:051 - Again, beat spacing. Try placing the (1) farther to the left, like this:
http://puu.sh/6ix7R.jpg00:53:332 - (4) should be placed farther away due to distance in timeline
01:48:583 - Your (1)(2)(3) looks kind of crooked, I think you need to straighten out the (2) so that the (1)(2)(3) goes in a straight line like your (1)(2)(3) at 01:49:743
02:49:622 - Beat spacing, try to place the (1)(-->)( ) and (2)(-->)( ) farther away from the previous (8) circle.
03:05:085 - Over here the (1) to (7) timing seemed to be off, so I put it into 1/12 beat snap divider at the top right corner and moved (1) to (7). Here is how you should place the notes (make sure you set beat snap divider to 1/12 first, you can change it back to 1/4 after you finish placing the notes)
http://puu.sh/6ixOY.jpg03:12:607 to 03:15:287 - Beat spacing, try placing the (1) (2) (3) farther away from the previous (6). Also timing errors. Try putting it into 1/12 and place the notes so they land on the beat that you want them to. A easy way to do this is to set the timing to 25% and play through it a couple of times, then place the notes on the timeline in 1/12 beat snap divider on the place that you think fits.
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Here's a helpful article on beat spacing and an illustration
http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Beatmapping#What ... Spacing.3F It is important that you beat space properly. Let's say you have (1) (2) (3) (4) on the map with equal distance between each other. (1), (2), and (3) are 1 second apart from each other in the song, but (4) comes 2 seconds after (3). Therefore, it is logical to place (4) farther away from (3) than you place (3) from (2). So instead of (1) (2) (3) (4), you would have something like (1) (2) (3) (4). I hope this clears things up.
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Overall, some things you should do are review your beatmap and look for any beat spacing errors and see if the notes flow correctly. Anyways, it was a pretty good map. The music was really good, partly because I could understand the lyrics
Given this information, you should fix up your beat map and your other difficulty as well. Have fun beat mapping!
