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Andrea
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MetaSlash
I think there aren't errors in this map. Good job ;D
Topic Starter
Andrea
Thanks :D
tieff
[Easy]
01:20:63 (3) - It's not problem, but... Maybe make this slider horizontal?

[Normal]
00:05:74 (5) - Sorry... But, maybe, left 1 grid? (Lvl 4 grid)
00:11:60 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:20:40 (1) - Maybe remove new combo here?
00:36:42 (1) - New combo?
00:44:76 (2) - Maybe remove this slider, then add note here 00:44:87 (x) and here 00:45:21 (x).
01:00:78 (2) - Maybe... Remove this slider, then add slider which return here 01:01:119 (return) and add note here 01:01:68 (x).

[Hard]
No problem here, exsept this:
00:11:60 (1) - new combo?
00:36:42 (8) - ^

DB. ^^ Star.
Topic Starter
Andrea
Thanks, updated.
DJPop
~Easy~
00:05:29 - suggest to add something here -_-
00:47:24 (6) - make it longer
01:30:55 (8) - add new combo
01:31:00 (1) - remove new combo

~Normal~
00:33:26 (8) - add new combo
00:33:71 (1) - remove new combo
00:58:07 (4) - add new combo
01:02:36 (4,5) - suggest to move it further
01:06:19 (3) - move ending point 1/4 backward
01:30:55 (9) - add new combo
01:31:00 (1) - remove new combo

~Hard~
00:11:15 (9) - add new combo
00:11:60 (1) - remove new combo
00:29:87 >>> - suggest to snap on vocal -_-
00:49:95 (7) - add new combo
00:58:07 (4) - add new combo
01:06:19 (3) - move ending point 1/4 backward
01:16:11 (9) - add new combo & hitfinish
01:16:57 (1) - remove new combo
01:30:55 (9) - add new combo
01:31:00 (1) - remove new combo


+Star
Zodiark1020
Ciauu, bella mappa, è abbastanza divertente :P

Devo dire k e' ftt abbastanza bene (cm tutte le tue mappe del resto^^)

Eccoti una STAR
Topic Starter
Andrea
Updated, thanks DJPop and Zodiark <3
Yumiko
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Hikato
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Topic Starter
Andrea
Thanks for your checking, updating...
Card N'FoRcE
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Topic Starter
Andrea

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

- Timing:
Offset = 322/324 A me suona bene il mio

- Easy:
ok ^-^

- Normal:
00:33:71 (2) - new combo Fixed
00:36:42 (1,2,3) - sovrapposizione un po' troppo stramba per una normal Fixed
01:01:68 (3) - errore, così sembra che sia distante 3/4 invece di 1/2 Fixed

- Hard:
00:21:53 (8) - 1 square right Fixed
00:40:02 (1) - crudele? D: Mi piace cosi ;P

Finalmente. Una mappa che riesce a piacermi :D GRAZIE <3
Non vedo l'ora che la finisci. Star'd <3
InuYaShA__
Grande Andrea ^^!!!!!
Luxary
I Think offset sounds better with 3.939 D:

Starred
Ultimate
Osuplayer111, I'm only suggesting these modifications. If you do not wish to use them, then dont.

Timing and offset is OK now.

Easy:

00:11:60 (2) - Put perfect under end of 1
00:28:29 (4) - Align vertical with 3 (same combo) (align the rest of the combo if you change this)
00:40:93 (3) - Align vertical with 2 (same combo)
00:43:18 (6) - Align horizontal with 5 (same combo)
00:50:85 (6) - Put perfect under end of 5
00:58:07 (3) - Put perfect under end of 2
01:31:90 (4) - Put perfect under end of 3
01:35:96 (4) - Put perfect under end of 3 ( So 1 pixel left xD )

Normal:

00:07:09 (6) - Align horizontal with end of slider 5 (same combo)
00:11:83 (3) - 1 (grid lvl 3) to the right
00:18:82 (3) - 1 (grid lvl 3) to the right
00:19:05 (4) - 1 (grid lvl 3) up
00:38:24 (7) - Align vertical with 6 (same combo) (align the rest of the next combo a bit if you change this)
00:45:44 (3) - 1 (grid lvl 3) to the left
00:46:57 (6) - Put perfect under end of 5
00:50:85 (10) - Put perfect under end of 9
00:54:01 (2) - Align vertical with 1 (same combo)
01:01:68 (3) - Put perfect under end of 2
01:06:64 (4) - Put perfect under end of 3
01:24:23 (3) - Align horizontal with 4 (same combo) (align the rest of the combo if you change this)
01:33:71 - (1),(2),(3),(4),(5),(6) put them all perfectly under eachother

Hard

00:04:84 (3) - Align horizontal with 2 (same combo)
00:13:86 (6) - 1 (grid lvl 3) down and left
00:27:17 (3) - Put perfect under end of 1 (same combo)
00:36:87 (3) - Align horizontal with 2 (same combo)
00:54:01 (2) - Align vertical with 1 (same combo)
00:54:91 (2) - Put perfect under end of 1
01:06:64 (4) - Put perfect under end of 3
01:14:31 (5) - Put perfect under end of 4
01:28:52 (4 & 5) - 1 (grid lvl 3) up and right
01:33:03 (7 & 8) - Put perfect under end of 8

other than this, verry facking nice ^^ star!!
Topic Starter
Andrea
Updated. Thanks for checking!
Alace
Normal is fine

<easy>
i really cant get the rhythm you putting
it is very very hard for a new player
00:18:37 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - too hard for new players
00:26:26 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i can`t get this too hard to follow
01:19:27 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - the same ^
01:33:71 (1,2,3,4) - ^

easy is hard to map IMO
maybe you can play other mapper`s easy
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/2355
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/2420
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/1428
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/302
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/119

look at those easy
strong beats
this is enough for a easy diff
Good luck
Topic Starter
Andrea
Updated. Now maybe is perfect.
Lokamp
Finally I can help an Italian skilled player like me (ehm...) with one of my FAVOURITE songs!
This time, I'll mod with full heart... but first, a little fact: the english name of this song is Road to victory!

Easy
[00:04:400] (2, 3) finish here (in the slider's end for the 3rd...)
[00:05:767] (4, 5) add a whistle here and a clap on 5th beat!
[00:08:464] (3, 5, 6, 7, 8) in order: whistle-whistle-finish-finish-clap
[00:13:302] (4, 5) claps here
[00:36:027] (6, 9, 10, 1-2) Clap on 6th and 9th, put a finish in the end of the 10th slider and whistle on the orange beats!
[00:53:532] (1, 2) other whistles here
[00:58:473] (3, 5, 6) clap-clap-finish!
[01:02:393] (1, 2) another couple of finish here
[01:04:716] (1) whistle ALL the slider
[01:07:378] set soft sounds for the spinner and the next two beats (in order: a finish and 2 whistles!)
[01:10:731] (4, 5, 6, 7) whistle on 4th, clap on the others
[01:14:381] (4, 5, 6) like upper (clap ALL the slider!)
[01:23:251] from now until 01:29:115, try to switch whistles with finish, just to create somethin' original!
[01:25:501] (4, 5, 6) other 3 claps here
[01:29:115] (5, 6, 7) same thing!
[01:33:275] a finish here

Normal
[00:05:718] (5, 6) for the slider, use whistle-finish-finish; clap on the beat
[00:09:881] (5, 6, 7) finish-finish-clap. Again! (oh, it's the reverse...)
[00:13:328] (5, 7, 1, 3) finish-whistle, clap-whistle
[00:31:923] (5) start with a clap, end with a finish.
[00:39:134] (2, 3, 4, 5) finish-clap, finish-clap
[00:47:204] (8) this slider is quite nonsense here... turn it into a beat further from the purple series or delete it...
[00:50:901] (10) Finish! (the sound, not the washing powder...)
[00:53:530] (1, 2) finish or whistle: choose!
[00:54:940] (2, 2) finish here (only in the end for the slider...)
[00:57:245] (1, 3, 1, 2, 5, 7) for the whites, clap (ending the 1st slider, starting the next one); for the bluies, whistle-clap, clap-clap
[01:00:842] (2, 4, 5) start the slider with a whistle; claps (or finish) for the others
[01:03:499] (2, 3) start with a whistle and end it with a clap (the slider, of course) ; plus, a clap for the beat
[01:08:902] from now, try to end most of the combo series with a clap and see if is better... (i hope so 8-))

Hard
[General] in this mode, there are situation like ones seen in Normal mode (most of them); try to follow Normal's tips here...

I've also seen a video which can fit very well for the song!
It's a gallery of the most epic moments in the Dragon Ball Series posted on youtube:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7gGfa3cAbbA
I'll return later, if you want to extend the song's lenght;
Meanwille... a Star 4 you!
Topic Starter
Andrea
Thanks for checking :3
Alace
you really got what i mean
good easy
star it

IMO hard is a little overmapped
don`t be so hurry to let your map be ranked
take your time and make your maps better ^^
Topic Starter
Andrea
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Zodiark1020
Omg already starred this, didn't know XD
See you, so...
Topic Starter
Andrea
AAAAAAAH, anyone check please.
m980
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Topic Starter
Andrea

m980 wrote:

Easy
That last spinner in the end is kind of harsh for an Easy Fixed.

Normal
Raise Overall Difficulty for this. Too many circles on the screen will confuse a lot of people. +2 Overall.

Hard
Yeah this is fine I think. Thank you.

(^_^)-b

PM me once you're done with that
m980
Here you go
Alace
rank~
nullPointLOL
Really beautiful song.

But could've been so much better...
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