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Luxion - High-Priestess

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Topic Starter
RikiH_
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on sabato 6 luglio 2013 at 10:51:11

Artist: Luxion
Title: High-Priestess
Source: BMS
Tags: Kloyd Flower Roxas
BPM: 196
Filesize: 3972kb
Play Time: 02:25
Difficulties Available:
  1. Flower's Hyper (4,98 stars, 385 notes)
  2. Kloyd's Advanced (4,68 stars, 215 notes)
  3. Overkill (4,79 stars, 613 notes)
  4. Roxas' Another (5 stars, 544 notes)
  5. Standard (2,17 stars, 95 notes)
  6. Sudden Death (5 stars, 690 notes)
Download: Luxion - High-Priestess
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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6th ranked map. Warning: Extra diffs are quite hard!
- Four Dimensions Sudden Death - By me
- Overkill - By me
- Another - By Roxas
- Hyper - By Flower
- Advanced - By Kloyd
- Standard - By me
Flower asked me to put the download link for his old Hyper, so here it is!
DeletedUser_1574070
take mine <3
Topic Starter
RikiH_

Kloyd wrote:

take mine <3
Totally pro <3
Roxas
chiedo scusamenti per la mia mappazione di alto qualitativo
Topic Starter
RikiH_
Moved to pending, enjoy Sudden Death diff <3
P A N
m4m :3

[Sudden Death]
00:29:384 (2,3,4) - 268|176 , 356|192 , 180|156 for make (4) perfect stack with 00:28:466 (3)
00:35:354 (1) - move tail to 180|312
00:45:150 (1) - move tail 1 grid down

[Roxas's Another]
01:19:589 (6) - make it perfect stack with 01:17:905 (8) would be nice

[Overkill]
01:35:353 (3) - move tail 1 grid left

[Flower's Hyper]
01:00:456 (9) - center: 512|160 tail: 520|200
01:23:415 (2) - 136|150
01:24:640 (2,3) - what about this blanket
01:44:537 (1,2) - what about add finish on both head
01:50:659 (1,2,1) - I think move (2) like vv is more symmerty for them
01:558:772 (3) - overlap but i guess its fine
02:11:170 (3) - maybe?

[Advanced]
00:28:313 (3,4) - move to 292|272 and move 00:29:231 (1) to 388|364 and move center 332|348
00:40:711 (7) - this slider is touch the spoiler key. try to avoid that
00:43:950 (1) - its out of the map
01:01:068 (1) - move center to 180|120 looks more blanket
01:05:660 (7) - maybe try this?
01:46:527 - try this beat I think its easier to read if you follow, change another three time that kind of this beat
02:02:904 (1) - isnt this beginner a bit short for normal? maybe try to add slider end at 02:03:516 instead, also add finish both head and tail
i think some part dont fit the song here. lets try
02:05:353 - lets try this beat, i think its fit better
02:07:802 -

[Standard]
00:47:599 (2,3,4,5) - lets make (2,3) or (4,5) to slide. I think the beginner cant get all of four notes :x
this diff looks nice D:

Good Luck! :D
Leader
Yo bello. M4M from my Modding Queue

[Standard]
  1. 00:24:333 (1,1) - Troppo vicini tra loro per un'easiest diff
  2. 02:20:047 (4,1) - ^
  3. 02:24:945 (1,1) -
[Advanced]
  1. 01:15:150 (1,2) - I'd remove beat and I'll add a repeat, fits better imo :3
  2. 02:22:190 (2) - Remove clap?
[Flower's Hyper]
  1. 02:25:022 (1) - Reduce volume at the end
    Great map, didn't find anything.
[Roxas' Another]
  1. 00:29:231 (1,2) - What.
  2. 01:12:701 (2) - Mi è venuto spontaneo fare CTRL+G qui, provaci, esce qualcosa di carino imo :3
[Overkill]
  1. 00:50:813 (6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3) - HORRIBRU
    Potevi farli più stackosi i pattern notanotaslider però, ci stanno bene :<
[Sudden Death]

  • Great. :3
Bella mappa, davvero. <3
Lucyii
MOD.

[TSANDRAD]
00:24:333 (1,1) - Diocristo son troppo vicini per una standard, in osu!standard non cambia un cazzo ma tipo in o!m lo spinner è come uno slider, QUINDI METTI SOLO LO SPINNER E LEVA QUEL BEAT.
00:42:701 (1) - MA PERCHE' METTI NC INUTILI, L'HAI MESSA OGNI DUE TICK GRANDI E CONTINUA COSI' CRISTO.
00:47:599 (2) - >kiai >nessuna nc. kk
00:57:395 (2) - ^
00:56:170 (1) - CANCRO
01:03:517 (3) - Ma tipo che le nc le metti ad occhi chiusi sbattendo a caso il mouse nel tuo culo. METTI UNA NC LI'.
02:20:047 (4,1) - CAZZO CHE RITARDATO. Capiscilo solo kiau
02:24:945 (1,1) - ANCORA

[OVAHKILL]
00:32:599 (3) - stack con 00:30:992 (4) -
01:15:150 (1) - Dagli una forma fallica da bzzt, INSOMMA NON SO SPIEGARTI. Quando c'è un rumore del genere non si dà una forma in modo che la sliderball sbatte da una parte all'altra?
02:04:435 (1,1,1) - LE NC MESSE CON L'ANO

[Roxas's Ano(ther)]
00:29:231 (1) - DIMMI CHE SENSO HA FARLO COSI' SE NON C'E' NESSUN BZZT
02:04:741 (1,1) - Sì ma anche tu le metti col culo le nc
02:24:945 (11) - NON PER NIENTE QUI MANCA

[FOUR DIMENSIONS Sudden Death]
00:23:721 (1,2) - more spaced NNNNNNNNNNNGH PORCO DIO
00:32:139 (3) - Ecco che si vedono i primi cancri
00:50:813 (7,8,9,10,11,12) - Ma 'sto coso è sperma di cavallo o cosa
01:15:150 (1) - TUMORE AI COGLIONI
01:22:497 (1) - why nc. WHY.
02:02:904 (1) - MA LI GUARDI GLI SLIDER QUANDO LI FAI O SALTELLI ALLEGRAMENTE SUL MOUSE MENTRE TI FAPPI SU UN PORNO GAY DI ROXAS?
02:04:129 (1,1,1,1) - nc pl0x

I BG ARRIVERANNO.
Topic Starter
RikiH_
Fixed almost everything, thank you. Updated.
CeilingPanda
Timings are good to go^^
(And please, do not give kd for that)
Topic Starter
RikiH_

Madlollipop wrote:

Timings are good to go^^
(And please, do not give kd for that)
Awesome :P Thanks
Roxas

P A N wrote:

[Roxas's Another]
01:19:589 (6) - make it perfect stack with 01:17:905 (8) would be nice Didn't fix sorry D:

Leader wrote:

[Roxas' Another]
00:29:231 (1,2) - What. Arte amico mio, arte.
01:12:701 (2) - Mi è venuto spontaneo fare CTRL+G qui, provaci, esce qualcosa di carino imo :3 Riki porcalamaiala perché fixi le cose per i cazzi tuoi. Fixato mi piace :D

Kiyromerda wrote:

[Roxas's Ano(ther)]
00:29:231 (1) - DIMMI CHE SENSO HA FARLO COSI' SE NON C'E' NESSUN BZZT Ma le hai le orecchie o cosa? :o
02:04:741 (1,1) - Sì ma anche tu le metti col culo le nc LE HA MESSE RIKI INFATTI AHAHAHAH E LE LASCIO COSI'
02:24:945 (11) - NON PER NIENTE QUI MANCA FIXATO DA QUELLA TROIA DI RIKI
Thanks :D Riki praticamente hai già updatato tutto tu
Roxas
QUALCUNO CANCELLI QUESTO POST HO FATTO DOPPIO POST PER SBAGLIO
Verlaren
m4m

[Standard]
01:30:455 (2) - maybe add whistle?
01:35:353 (2) - swap finish on whistle?
01:39:639 (1,2,3,4) - too many finishes....

[Kloyd's Advanced]
01:05:660 (7) - remove repeat and add note on 01:05:966 with wistle

[Flower's Hyper]
01:20:048 (3) - move on 1 grid right
01:32:598 (2) - ctrl+G for better flow
01:34:741 (1) - move on x:92 y:140 for symmetrical distance between 01:34:588(4) and 01:35:353(2)
01:38:721 (2) - ctrl+G for better flow
01:43:619 (2) - ^

[Overkill]
fine

[Roxas' Another]
^

[Sudden death]
00:32:139 (3) - shape is ugly. change pls


that's all, sry for small mod
Topic Starter
RikiH_

Verlaren wrote:

m4m

[Standard]
01:30:455 (2) - maybe add whistle? Added finish
01:35:353 (2) - swap finish on whistle? Nah
01:39:639 (1,2,3,4) - too many finishes.... Removed some finishes

[Kloyd's Advanced]
01:05:660 (7) - remove repeat and add note on 01:05:966 with wistle Done

[Flower's Hyper]
01:20:048 (3) - move on 1 grid right Done
01:32:598 (2) - ctrl+G for better flow Ok
01:34:741 (1) - move on x:92 y:140 for symmetrical distance between 01:34:588(4) and 01:35:353(2) Much better, done
01:38:721 (2) - ctrl+G for better flow
01:43:619 (2) - ^ Done both

[Overkill]
fine

[Roxas' Another]
^

[Sudden death]
00:32:139 (3) - shape is ugly. change pls No, sorry


that's all, sry for small mod
Thanks!
69653863
Mod for mod request
Guide
Red is unrankable and must be fixed.
Pink is you should apply this to any similar notes/parts/patterns/whatever it was stated on it.
Mods with question marks (?) are only suggestion/opinion. You're free to choose whether you're going to apply it or not.

Standard
  1. 00:43:925 (1) - If you could split this into one slider and one circle (just like 00:41:476 (1,2) - ) it'd flow and keep the pattern consistency better.
  2. 01:15:762 (1,2) - How about something like http://puu.sh/3aTgM.jpg ?
  3. 01:20:660 (1) - Why NC?
  4. 01:29:843 (1,2) - Remove NC please.
  5. 01:38:414 (3) - Too close to previous slider. Move 1 point to the left maybe?
  6. 02:05:353 - Sudden volume change, why?
  7. 02:10:251 (1) - Not symmetrical.
  8. 02:18:823 (3) - Just make this straight please, to maintain symmetry consistency from previous pattern ;~;
Advanced
  1. 00:37:803 (4,5) - Flows really bad. Combine these into one slider so it flows better.
  2. 00:40:252 (5,6) - ^
  3. 00:42:701 (4,5) - ^ and other notes similar.
  4. 01:30:608 - Add note here? So it feels less empty.
  5. 01:40:404 - ^
  6. 02:01:374 - Please add note, to fill emptiness in gap and keep pattern consistency
  7. 02:02:598 - ^
Hyper
  1. Most of the patterns mapped the same way like Advanced ):
  2. 00:45:762 (1,2,3,4) - Looks ugly. Atleast make something like square/diamond formation?
  3. 00:46:986 - Add note here, feels real empty without it
  4. 00:56:782 - ^
  5. 01:33:670 - ^
Another
  1. AR9? D: atleast please use AR8
    The rest is fine, I like this diff.
Overkill
  1. Looks good!
Sudden Death
  1. Looks good!
Nice mapset, good luck!
10nya
m4m from #modreq

[General]
  1. Please add guest diff-ers usernames on the tags
  2. Try offset 4744 (+2) ?
[Standard]
  1. SliderMultiplier:0.800000005960464 wut..
  2. 00:28:007 (2)- : last slider point 1grid up perhaps?
  3. 00:41:476 (1,2)- : player might be wrong to read this notes (they'll thought it was 1/1) so perhaps rearrange them like this?
  4. 01:03:517 (3)- : 1grid up
  5. 01:22:803 (1)- : since you use clap at previous slider how about change whistle into clap?
  6. 01:47:598 (5,6,1,2)- : rearrange them like this?
    here's the code if you lazy /runs (rearranged next note too)
    296,256,107598,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    256,324,107904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    184,360,108210,6,0,P|112:352|100:340,2,80.0000005960464,4|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    156,284,109129,1,8,0:0:0:0:
[Kloyd's Advanced]
  1. 00:33:211 (3,4)- : how about put this to x304 y156? (of course you need to rearrange next notes)
  2. 00:56:170 (1)- : add whistle?
  3. 01:26:170 (1)- : add finish
  4. 01:35:965 (1)- : ^
  5. 01:43:312 (1)- : ^
  6. 01:59:231 (4)- : 2nd slider point 1grid down and last slider point 1grid to left
  7. 02:25:098 (x)- : add spinner here too?
[Flower's Hyper]
  1. 00:46:221 (4)- : put this on x0 y180 or x152 y104
  2. 01:27:930 (x)- : add circle here, triplet should be at here (it follow music xD)
  3. 01:49:971 (x)- : ^
all insane diff should be fine ;w;

great map as always~ good luck~
Roxas
NESSUNO TROVA NULLA NELLA INSANE SONO TROPPO PRO

@inverness: AR9 is better
HelloSCV
M4M

Stadard

01:40:863 (3) - NC
02:23:721 (3) - ^

Easy

00:43:925 (1) - 제 화면으로는 오프 스크린인거 같아요
02:04:435 (1,1,1) - 강조를 위해 두신건가요? 노말에서는 그다지 쓸모 없는거 같은데..
02:20:047 (1) - 슬라 2개로 나누시거나 리핏 줄이시고 노트 쓰시는게 덜 헷갈릴듯


Flower's Hyper

00:35:889 (5) - add note here is better than 00:36:425 (8,9,1) - this tripet imo ( and other same parts too like 00:40:787 (3) - here and 01:30:379 (4) - here, etc. )
02:14:843 (1) - this NC ins't need?

Overkill

00:36:578 (1) - like Sudden Death diff, add finish here?
00:45:685 - add note here is better than jump for music
00:51:272 (1) - finish
00:58:007 (3) - how about making 3/4 slider like previous?
01:35:277 (3) - add note? since you added note like this all other parts and this fits perfectly nice with music imo

Roxas' Another

00:48:364 (5) - drum whistle on repeat fits well with music imo
00:58:007 (4) - need drum whistle for consistence ( and if you do above, add whistle on 00:58:160 (5) - here too )

nice diff

Sudden Death

00:34:282 (2) - touching HP bar
00:36:578 (1) - finis here fits awesome with song imo
00:51:272 (1) - why didn't you add finish on here?
01:08:874 (8) - hmm i think this note isn't really need since you didn't add a note on 01:07:650 - here :/
01:13:772 (8) - ^
01:51:731 (7) - i highly recommed to use ctrl g on this slider, feels really bad
01:55:251 (7,8) - same as before
02:14:231 (2) - this slider isn't snapped on 1/3 ( it fits with 1/4 )
02:24:027 (2) - ^


Good luck~
Topic Starter
RikiH_

inverness wrote:

Mod for mod request
Guide
Red is unrankable and must be fixed.
Pink is you should apply this to any similar notes/parts/patterns/whatever it was stated on it.
Mods with question marks (?) are only suggestion/opinion. You're free to choose whether you're going to apply it or not.

Standard
  1. 00:43:925 (1) - If you could split this into one slider and one circle (just like 00:41:476 (1,2) - ) it'd flow and keep the pattern consistency better. Nah, it's ok this way
  2. 01:15:762 (1,2) - How about something like http://puu.sh/3aTgM.jpg ? Good idea but I would break the spacing...
  3. 01:20:660 (1) - Why NC? There is a change in the song
  4. 01:29:843 (1,2) - Remove NC please. Ok
  5. 01:38:414 (3) - Too close to previous slider. Move 1 point to the left maybe? Ok
  6. 02:05:353 - Sudden volume change, why? Well, it's Normal set, so it's more loudy and so I decreased the volume. I changet it a bit, anyways
  7. 02:10:251 (1) - Not symmetrical. Ain't nobody got time for that
  8. 02:18:823 (3) - Just make this straight please, to maintain symmetry consistency from previous pattern ;~; Okay
Advanced
  1. 00:37:803 (4,5) - Flows really bad. Combine these into one slider so it flows better.
  2. 00:40:252 (5,6) - ^
  3. 00:42:701 (4,5) - ^ and other notes similar. Done
  4. 01:30:608 - Add note here? So it feels less empty. I don't know, maybe in the future
  5. 01:40:404 - ^
  6. 02:01:374 - Please add note, to fill emptiness in gap and keep pattern consistency The mapper is following the vocals, so I think it's ok for now
  7. 02:02:598 - ^
Hyper
  1. Most of the patterns mapped the same way like Advanced ):
  2. 00:45:762 (1,2,3,4) - Looks ugly. Atleast make something like square/diamond formation? Sure
  3. 00:46:986 - Add note here, feels real empty without it Yes
  4. 00:56:782 - ^ Yes
  5. 01:33:670 - ^ No
Another
  1. AR9? D: atleast please use AR8 Roxas has already answered
    The rest is fine, I like this diff.
Overkill
  1. Looks good!
Sudden Death
  1. Looks good!
Nice mapset, good luck! Thank you :3
I will answer other mods later :V
Lally
yo m4m here

[General]
  1. metti nelle tag chi ha fatto le GD per te
    -> è una e non
[Standard]
  1. 00:37:803 (3) - secondo me una cosa del genere è meglio
  2. 00:56:170 (1) - boh sto slider non mi ispira per nulla è troppo..hmm rigido come dire,dato che hai usato forme piu' leggere io ti consiglierei di darla anche a questo e anche di cercare di creare un flow migliore con il prossimo circle dato che atm non lo è molto
  3. 01:01:068 (1) - io avrei usato una forma piu' tonda qui dato che il flow viene rovinato un pochino dato i precedenti 2 slider
  4. 01:02:293 (2,3) - cerca di creare una linea migliore tra questi due
  5. 01:04:742 (1) - ci aggiungerei un whistle qui
  6. 01:18:211 (2) - oddio flowa malissimo sto slider D: cerca di darli un altra forma perchè usando una forma leggera e circolare per lo slider precedente e poi bum rigidità a livello over 9000 è una cosa da rovina flow >.< poi i due seguenti slider sono tutti e due tonti, perchè non fare anche questo con una forma piu' sofficie
  7. 01:43:312 (1) - whistle qui pls
  8. 02:10:251 (1) - questo slider rovina un sacco il ritmo,secondo me dovresti modificarlo e fare 2 slider da esso se non 3 o slider e circles :V
  9. 02:20:047 (1) - whistle o3o
[Kloyd's Advanced]
  1. 00:43:160 (6) - this slider should be more like :
    120,168,43160,2,0,B|56:160|16:112|16:112|-4:176,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  2. 00:47:599 (2,1) - is better to create a blanket here
  3. 00:51:272 (1) - make this slider like:
  4. 01:02:293 (2) - i think this slider will flow better with this form:
  5. 01:12:088 (2,3,4) - this 3 circles don't follow nothing, how about to remeve?
  6. 01:30:455 - add a circle here?
  7. 01:43:312 - what about to add a circle here and to start the spinner here: 01:43:465 - and maybe add a whistle to it?
  8. 01:56:782 (4) - what about to do it like this?
  9. 02:04:129 (1,1,1,1) - don't see a reason for this NC spamm,remove the nc o3o
[Flower's Hyper]
  1. 00:55:864 (4,1) - it looks just like an ugly overlap ;_;
  2. 00:59:690 (5) - new combo
  3. 01:01:527 (2,1) - can you try to don't overlap this 2? >.<
  4. 01:58:772 (3) - try to stack the end of this slider with 01:58:006 (1) - end
[Overkill]
  1. 00:57:395 (1,2) - meh non mi piace molto sto overlap che hai creato
  2. 01:05:507 (5,6,7,1) - che ne dici di una pattern del genere?

    ...stream o3o
[Roxas's Another]
  1. 00:30:150 (3,1) - cerca di eveitare l'overlap brutto con 3-1-2 e sistemalo in un modo del genere chè è piu' pulito o3o
  2. 01:50:583 (6) - bah una cosa un po' da nazi ; fallo cosi :

    ...stream o3o
[Sudden Death]
  1. 00:29:690 (4,5) - hmm potrsti cambiare non so come omg neinte idee per qui ma l'overlap è brutto :C
  2. 00:39:486 (3,4) - stessa cosa anche qui :V
  3. 00:41:935 (5,6) - cosa mi overlappi ò.ò ti picchio

    ...stream o3o

owob good luck
Roxas

HelloSCV wrote:

Roxas' Another

00:48:364 (5) - drum whistle on repeat fits well with music imo Fixed
00:58:007 (4) - need drum whistle for consistence ( and if you do above, add whistle on 00:58:160 (5) - here too ) Fixed

nice diff Thanks ♥

Lally wrote:

[Roxas's Another]
  1. 00:30:150 (3,1) - cerca di eveitare l'overlap brutto con 3-1-2 e sistemalo in un modo del genere chè è piu' pulito o3o Fixato ma in modo diverso dallo screen
  2. 01:50:583 (6) - bah una cosa un po' da nazi ; fallo cosi : I like nazi you know, fixato

    ...stream o3o what?
Thanks!

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SPOILER
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[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 125353
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.2
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Luxion
TitleUnicode:Luxion
Artist:High-Priestess
ArtistUnicode:High-Priestess
Creator:RikiH_
Version:Roxas' Another
Source:BMS
Tags:
BeatmapID:252003
BeatmapSetID:93398

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
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135149,-100,4,2,1,55,0,1
143721,-100,4,2,0,55,0,1
144945,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 49,206,199
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Topic Starter
RikiH_

- t e n n y a - wrote:

m4m from #modreq

[General]
  1. Please add guest diff-ers usernames on the tags I totally forgot it :/
  2. Try offset 4744 (+2) ? I think it's ok for now, thank you anyways
[Standard]
  1. SliderMultiplier:0.800000005960464 wut.. Goddamn bugs! Fixed
  2. 00:28:007 (2)- : last slider point 1grid up perhaps? Ok
  3. 00:41:476 (1,2)- : player might be wrong to read this notes (they'll thought it was 1/1) so perhaps rearrange them like this? I think it's ok at the moment
  4. 01:03:517 (3)- : 1grid up Ops, fixed
  5. 01:22:803 (1)- : since you use clap at previous slider how about change whistle into clap? Nah
  6. 01:47:598 (5,6,1,2)- : rearrange them like this? I don't think this causes problems during gameplay... THanks for the code anyways
    here's the code if you lazy /runs (rearranged next note too)
    296,256,107598,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    256,324,107904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    184,360,108210,6,0,P|112:352|100:340,2,80.0000005960464,4|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    156,284,109129,1,8,0:0:0:0:
[Kloyd's Advanced]
  1. 00:33:211 (3,4)- : how about put this to x304 y156? (of course you need to rearrange next notes) Done!
  2. 00:56:170 (1)- : add whistle?
  3. 01:26:170 (1)- : add finish
  4. 01:35:965 (1)- : ^
  5. 01:43:312 (1)- : ^ All fixed
  6. 01:59:231 (4)- : 2nd slider point 1grid down and last slider point 1grid to left Ok
  7. 02:25:098 (x)- : add spinner here too? Ok
[Flower's Hyper]
  1. 00:46:221 (4)- : put this on x0 y180 or x152 y104 It should be fine that way D:
  2. 01:27:930 (x)- : add circle here, triplet should be at here (it follow music xD)
  3. 01:49:971 (x)- : ^ I'd do it but this diff is ahrd enough :C
all insane diff should be fine ;w;

great map as always~ good luck~ Thank you a lot!

HelloSCV wrote:

M4M

Stadard

01:40:863 (3) - NC Already fixed in previous mods
02:23:721 (3) - ^ Ok

Easy

00:43:925 (1) - 제 화면으로는 오프 스크린인거 같아요 Ok
02:04:435 (1,1,1) - 강조를 위해 두신건가요? 노말에서는 그다지 쓸모 없는거 같은데.. Ok
02:20:047 (1) - 슬라 2개로 나누시거나 리핏 줄이시고 노트 쓰시는게 덜 헷갈릴듯 No

YAY I CAN'T SPEAK KOREAN.

Flower's Hyper

00:35:889 (5) - add note here is better than 00:36:425 (8,9,1) - this tripet imo ( and other same parts too like 00:40:787 (3) - here and 01:30:379 (4) - here, etc. ) Sorry but I don't understand what you are saying...
02:14:843 (1) - this NC ins't need? Not at all

Overkill

00:36:578 (1) - like Sudden Death diff, add finish here? Ok
00:45:685 - add note here is better than jump for music I don't agree, I also like that pattern
00:51:272 (1) - finish Ok
00:58:007 (3) - how about making 3/4 slider like previous? Sure, I made an epic pattern
01:35:277 (3) - add note? since you added note like this all other parts and this fits perfectly nice with music imo How?

Roxas' Another

00:48:364 (5) - drum whistle on repeat fits well with music imo
00:58:007 (4) - need drum whistle for consistence ( and if you do above, add whistle on 00:58:160 (5) - here too )

nice diff

Sudden Death

00:34:282 (2) - touching HP bar No big deal... I think
00:36:578 (1) - finis here fits awesome with song imo Yes
00:51:272 (1) - why didn't you add finish on here? Because I forgot it
01:08:874 (8) - hmm i think this note isn't really need since you didn't add a note on 01:07:650 - here :/
01:13:772 (8) - ^ Fixed both
01:51:731 (7) - i highly recommed to use ctrl g on this slider, feels really bad Ok
01:55:251 (7,8) - same as before :/ ok
02:14:231 (2) - this slider isn't snapped on 1/3 ( it fits with 1/4 )
02:24:027 (2) - ^ Fixed both


Good luck~ Thanks a lot!

Lally wrote:

yo m4m here

[General]
  1. metti nelle tag chi ha fatto le GD per te
    -> è una e non Fatto, comunque penso che le advanced siano Normal+ ed è meglio lasciare normal, anche perchè ci sono già 3 insane e la gente poi mi mena D:
[Standard]
  1. 00:37:803 (3) - secondo me una cosa del genere è meglio Provato a fixare
  2. 00:56:170 (1) - boh sto slider non mi ispira per nulla è troppo..hmm rigido come dire,dato che hai usato forme piu' leggere io ti consiglierei di darla anche a questo e anche di cercare di creare un flow migliore con il prossimo circle dato che atm non lo è molto VABBE' DATO CHE LO ODIATE TUTTI LO CAMBIO, TSK
  3. 01:01:068 (1) - io avrei usato una forma piu' tonda qui dato che il flow viene rovinato un pochino dato i precedenti 2 slider Nah, lascio così
  4. 01:02:293 (2,3) - cerca di creare una linea migliore tra questi due Done
  5. 01:04:742 (1) - ci aggiungerei un whistle qui Già fixato in un mod precedente
  6. 01:18:211 (2) - oddio flowa malissimo sto slider D: cerca di darli un altra forma perchè usando una forma leggera e circolare per lo slider precedente e poi bum rigidità a livello over 9000 è una cosa da rovina flow >.< poi i due seguenti slider sono tutti e due tonti, perchè non fare anche questo con una forma piu' sofficie SOFFICIE?!?!? Fixato. (Grammar nazi mode: off)
  7. 01:43:312 (1) - whistle qui pls Scusa ma secondo me non ci sta per niente D:
  8. 02:10:251 (1) - questo slider rovina un sacco il ritmo,secondo me dovresti modificarlo e fare 2 slider da esso se non 3 o slider e circles :V Sono lazy, magari poi provo a farlo
  9. 02:20:047 (1) - whistle o3o Okay
[Kloyd's Advanced]
  1. 00:43:160 (6) - this slider should be more like : Ho cercato di fixarlo
    120,168,43160,2,0,B|56:160|16:112|16:112|-4:176,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  2. 00:47:599 (2,1) - is better to create a blanket here ^
  3. 00:51:272 (1) - make this slider like: Non mi piace, però l'ho cambiato lo stesso
  4. 01:02:293 (2) - i think this slider will flow better with this form: Decisamente
  5. 01:12:088 (2,3,4) - this 3 circles don't follow nothing, how about to remeve? In effetti
  6. 01:30:455 - add a circle here? Ok
  7. 01:43:312 - what about to add a circle here and to start the spinner here: 01:43:465 - and maybe add a whistle to it? Messo un repeat sullo slider e aggiunto il whistle
  8. 01:56:782 (4) - what about to do it like this? Fatto un pattern molto più figo
  9. 02:04:129 (1,1,1,1) - don't see a reason for this NC spamm,remove the nc o3o Già fixato in un mod precedente
[Flower's Hyper]
  1. 00:55:864 (4,1) - it looks just like an ugly overlap ;_; True
  2. 00:59:690 (5) - new combo Meglio
  3. 01:01:527 (2,1) - can you try to don't overlap this 2? >.< In playmode manco si nota...
  4. 01:58:772 (3) - try to stack the end of this slider with 01:58:006 (1) - end Fatto
[Overkill]
  1. 00:57:395 (1,2) - meh non mi piace molto sto overlap che hai creato E' fighissimo
  2. 01:05:507 (5,6,7,1) - che ne dici di una pattern del genere? No ;_; Flowwa male

    ...stream o3o
[Roxas's Another]
  1. 00:30:150 (3,1) - cerca di eveitare l'overlap brutto con 3-1-2 e sistemalo in un modo del genere chè è piu' pulito o3o
  2. 01:50:583 (6) - bah una cosa un po' da nazi ; fallo cosi :

    ...stream o3o
[Sudden Death]
  1. 00:29:690 (4,5) - hmm potrsti cambiare non so come omg neinte idee per qui ma l'overlap è brutto :C
  2. 00:39:486 (3,4) - stessa cosa anche qui :V
  3. 00:41:935 (5,6) - cosa mi overlappi ò.ò ti picchio Guarda, flowwano bene quindi li lascio così, anche perchè non saprei come cavolo cambiarli, non mi picchiare

    ...stream o3o

owob good luck Thank you!
Sieg
Hallo

Standard:
02:13:925 (1,2,3) - fix spacing here

Kloyd's Advanced:
clear hard diff, I like it

Flower's Hyper:
00:36:502 (8) - is this triplet really necessary? it seems so random
00:41:400 (7) - anyway I guess this placed is sake of hardiness but hyper = hard and map is pretty fast and dynamic, this is really excess here, I will not mention this further
01:54:639 (2,3,4) - this flow is awkward, maybe move 2 http://puu.sh/3eVfc.jpg

Roxas' Another:
it's like FD in the end lol
nothing much to point out here

Sorry I can't suggest any on harder diffs because I can't play them well :\
But they seems quite interesting.

So good mapset, I'll drop a star here
Chyo-Kun
m4m,scusami per il ritardo ;_; Non ho voglia di moddare ultimamente.

[Standard]


  1. 00:45:150 (2) - Questo slider così com'è non ha molto senso,rivolgi la curva verso lo slider subito dopo
  2. 01:20:660 (1) - Why whistle? Sembra un momento troppo calmo per usarne uno
  3. 01:46:986 (3,4,5,6) - Fai una linea diritta a mo' di stream per questi beat,così il movimento dle mouse diventa più facile per i newbies
  4. 01:51:884 (2) - Questo slider non inizia nel punto dove dovrebbe iniziare,perchè il primo non ha una curva perfetta,quindi o piazzalo meglio oppure sistema la curva con lo slider prima

    [Kloyd's Advanced]

  5. RikiH_ wrote:

    - Advanced - By Kloyd
    If this is supposed to be a normal,then it's probably urankable,because it's too hard for beginners. The rhythm is not very intuitive,and the CS is way too high. Get the CS up by one and it will be fine in terms of stats. The diff itself it's nice thoug,nice job there,but i still can't consider this as a normal.

    [Flower's Hyper]

  6. 00:24:410 (1) - Get the volume of this spinner end down,it sounds really bad in a quiet moment

    [Overkill]

  7. 01:05:966 (1) - Usa un beat invece di uno slider,suona meglio imo

    [Roxas' Another]

  8. Niente da dire. Molto bella :3

    [SuddenDeath]

  9. NOTHING TO SAY TO YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU [Cit.]
Topic Starter
RikiH_

Sieg wrote:

Hallo

Standard:
02:13:925 (1,2,3) - fix spacing here How the f**k did it happen, fixed

Kloyd's Advanced:
clear hard diff, I like it

Flower's Hyper:
00:36:502 (8) - is this triplet really necessary? it seems so random It is, fixed
00:41:400 (7) - anyway I guess this placed is sake of hardiness but hyper = hard and map is pretty fast and dynamic, this is really excess here, I will not mention this further Deleted all triplets
01:54:639 (2,3,4) - this flow is awkward, maybe move 2 http://puu.sh/3eVfc.jpg Moved a bit

Roxas' Another:
it's like FD in the end lol
nothing much to point out here

Sorry I can't suggest any on harder diffs because I can't play them well :\
But they seems quite interesting.

So good mapset, I'll drop a star here
Thank you a lot for nod and star!

Chyo-Kun wrote:

m4m,scusami per il ritardo ;_; Non ho voglia di moddare ultimamente.

[Standard]


  1. 00:45:150 (2) - Questo slider così com'è non ha molto senso,rivolgi la curva verso lo slider subito dopo Non saprei come fare, per ora lascio così
  2. 01:20:660 (1) - Why whistle? Sembra un momento troppo calmo per usarne uno Beh, hai ragione, però l'ho messo pure nelle altre diff, quindi penso ch elo lascerò
  3. 01:46:986 (3,4,5,6) - Fai una linea diritta a mo' di stream per questi beat,così il movimento dle mouse diventa più facile per i newbies La linea dritta non mi ci sta, comunque l'ho modificato
  4. 01:51:884 (2) - Questo slider non inizia nel punto dove dovrebbe iniziare,perchè il primo non ha una curva perfetta,quindi o piazzalo meglio oppure sistema la curva con lo slider prima Al momento non riesco, comunque se qualcun altro me lo fa notare cambio tutto il pattern

    [Kloyd's Advanced]

  5. RikiH_ wrote:

    - Advanced - By Kloyd
    If this is supposed to be a normal,then it's probably urankable,because it's too hard for beginners. The rhythm is not very intuitive,and the CS is way too high. Get the CS up by one and it will be fine in terms of stats. The diff itself it's nice thoug,nice job there,but i still can't consider this as a normal. Sì ok, hai ragione, fixed

    [Flower's Hyper]

  6. 00:24:410 (1) - Get the volume of this spinner end down,it sounds really bad in a quiet moment Certo

    [Overkill]

  7. 01:05:966 (1) - Usa un beat invece di uno slider,suona meglio imo A me piace lo slider :C

    [Roxas' Another]

  8. Niente da dire. Molto bella :3

    [SuddenDeath]

  9. NOTHING TO SAY TO YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU [Cit.]
Oh, nessuno trova nulla nelle diff più difficili, ottimo. Grazie mille per il mod :3
Scorpiour
Hi there~~

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions


[General]
  1. Set Stack Leniency in Roxas' Another to 0.7
  2. Change BG to jpg format
  3. Uncheck Letterbox during breaks for short breaks used
[Sudden Death]
  1. OD+1 to avoid same difficulty setting?
[Roxas' Another]
  1. 00:50:813 (5) - feel weird a bit i may choose to rotate it to horizontal like this:
  2. 02:05:736 (2,3,4) - i may change these three to a slider also
    SPOILER
    http://puu.sh/3jH7Y.jpg
  3. 02:13:925 (1) - the reason of 1/3 here is..? and i think 02:14:231 (2) - should be 1/3 also if you select that
  4. 02:23:721 (1) - ^
[Overkill]
  1. 00:32:905 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - perhaps you can try to make them more smooth? it looks like simply spam notes by ds...
  2. 00:56:170 (1) - looked awful .. even a blanket is much better than current
    SPOILER
    http://puu.sh/3jHmo.jpg
  3. 01:15:762 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - the jump order is .. (2)->(3) is fine, but (4)->(5) completely break the flow..
  4. 01:19:742 (2,3,4,5,6) - i should say this kinda stream is really odd...also some other triplets like 00:39:027 (1,2,3) - & 00:41:476 (1,2,3) - & 00:46:068 (4,5,6,7,1) -
tbh this diff is not as good as another & sudden death.. i suppose this one still needs more workds

[Flowers Hyper]
  1. 02:08:567 (4) - rotate it to horizontal, looked better
[Kloyd's Advanced]
  1. 00:47:599 (2) - i'd like to reduce it to 3/2 and add a note at 00:48:823 -
  2. 00:57:395 (2) - ^, also re-consider the finish used of these two sliders plz:>
  3. 02:02:904 (3) - i think you can make a better shape
[Standard]
  1. 01:32:292 (2) - make it smooth a bit like this?
That's all, overall the map is fine but please try to improve the Overkill diff. I'd like to give you an "one chance recheck" when you think that diff is ready.
Topic Starter
RikiH_

Scorpiour wrote:

Hi there~~

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions


[General]
  1. Set Stack Leniency in Roxas' Another to 0.7
  2. Change BG to jpg format
  3. Uncheck Letterbox during breaks for short breaks used Fixed everything
[Sudden Death]
  1. OD+1 to avoid same difficulty setting? Ok, OD8 ftw
[Roxas' Another]
  1. 00:50:813 (5) - feel weird a bit i may choose to rotate it to horizontal like this:
  2. 02:05:736 (2,3,4) - i may change these three to a slider also
    SPOILER
    http://puu.sh/3jH7Y.jpg
  3. 02:13:925 (1) - the reason of 1/3 here is..? and i think 02:14:231 (2) - should be 1/3 also if you select that
  4. 02:23:721 (1) - ^
[Overkill]
  1. 00:32:905 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - perhaps you can try to make them more smooth? it looks like simply spam notes by ds... Changed
  2. 00:56:170 (1) - looked awful .. even a blanket is much better than current It looks definitely better
    SPOILER
    http://puu.sh/3jHmo.jpg
  3. 01:15:762 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - the jump order is .. (2)->(3) is fine, but (4)->(5) completely break the flow.. Changed, the flow should be fine now
  4. 01:19:742 (2,3,4,5,6) - i should say this kinda stream is really odd...also some other triplets like 00:39:027 (1,2,3) - & 00:41:476 (1,2,3) - & 00:46:068 (4,5,6,7,1) - What is the problem, exactly? Anyways I changed/removed all triplets like these, I hope it can improve this diff
tbh this diff is not as good as another & sudden death.. i suppose this one still needs more workds

[Flowers Hyper]
  1. 02:08:567 (4) - rotate it to horizontal, looked better Ok
[Kloyd's Advanced]
  1. 00:47:599 (2) - i'd like to reduce it to 3/2 and add a note at 00:48:823 -
  2. 00:57:395 (2) - ^, also re-consider the finish used of these two sliders plz:>
  3. 02:02:904 (3) - i think you can make a better shape Fixed all, also the sliders
[Standard]
  1. 01:32:292 (2) - make it smooth a bit like this? Ok
That's all, overall the map is fine but please try to improve the Overkill diff. I'd like to give you an "one chance recheck" when you think that diff is ready. I'll get some mods and I'll call you back, thanks a lot
Roxas

Scorpiour wrote:

[Roxas' Another]
  1. 00:50:813 (5) - feel weird a bit i may choose to rotate it to horizontal like this Fixed
  2. 02:05:736 (2,3,4) - i may change these three to a slider also Fixed
  3. 02:13:925 (1) - the reason of 1/3 here is..? and i think 02:14:231 (2) - should be 1/3 also if you select that Delete them and listen with 25% playback, they're correct the 1st 1/3 and the 2nd 1/4
  4. 02:23:721 (1) - ^ ^ same
Hi Sco, thx for modding~
Megurine Luka
Hi mod for mod as you request 0.0~

[Overkill]

00:28:925 (6) - Ctrl+G seems more fluent imo.
00:34:436 (2,3) - rotate 11° clockwise 0.0
00:35:966 (5) - hmmm I don't quite feel like this but maybe

00:55:558 (5) - make the tail down a little bit 0.0

00:58:619 (1) - something like

would be better I think?

0.0 This reminds me of CSY the Corrupt lol.

Anyway nice map

Good Luck !
Topic Starter
RikiH_

Megurine Luka wrote:

Hi mod for mod as you request 0.0~

[Overkill]

00:28:925 (6) - Ctrl+G seems more fluent imo. I don't agree, it would ruin the flow
00:34:436 (2,3) - rotate 11° clockwise 0.0 Sure
00:35:966 (5) - hmmm I don't quite feel like this but maybe Okay

00:55:558 (5) - make the tail down a little bit 0.0 I moved the whole pattern because it was a total shit :)

00:58:619 (1) - something like

would be better I think? Sorry, I like that kind of sliders :P

0.0 This reminds me of CSY the Corrupt lol. Oh lol

Anyway nice map Thanks!

Good Luck !
Thanks for modding!
Papysh
Irc mod, slavebitch
SPOILER
12:25 Papysh: hi
12:25 Papysh: 00:47:828 (2) -
12:25 Papysh: i would like to see that circle a bit left
12:25 Papysh: o3o
12:26 RikiH_: please
12:26 Papysh: 1 grid right 00:48:823 (1) -
12:26 RikiH_: write
12:26 RikiH_: it
12:26 RikiH_: in the topic
12:26 RikiH_: IN DA TOPIC PLS
12:26 Papysh: no plz
12:26 RikiH_: yes
12:27 Papysh: 01:03:976 (2) -
12:27 Papysh: a bit move it lel
12:28 Papysh: 01:35:353 (3) -
12:28 Papysh: 1 grid left
12:28 RikiH_: k
12:29 Papysh: my mdo cant be good
12:29 Papysh: if its mapped well :/
12:29 RikiH_: I don't care, it's a mod and so it's useful lol
12:29 RikiH_: And it's for bubble <3
12:30 Papysh: to swear
12:30 RikiH_: wtf
12:30 Papysh: the whistle osunds like microwave
12:30 RikiH_: they are totally pro pls
12:30 Papysh: i know
12:30 Papysh: i like food
12:31 RikiH_: hue
12:33 Papysh: man
12:33 Papysh: everything is perfect
12:33 Papysh: i mentioned
12:33 Papysh: everything that isnt
12:34 RikiH_: ok <3 ty
Poggo
hi ^^ Some suggestions from me :P


Overkill

00:31:527(6) - this note very uncomfortable for play, better put it in x24 y136, it looks much better
00:32:599(3) - it's a bit overlap with previous slider, better make so https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/830634
00:34:129(1) - OMG plz fix this overlap >.< it looks sooo ugly ;w; http://puu.sh/3n794.jpg
00:48:823(1) - 1 grid right bcz it to close for next slider~ http://puu.sh/3n7be.jpg
01:10:864 - sound 80% will better in this place
01:22:497(1,3) - I think claps will sounds better here~ it will consistency with previous clap pattern
01:24:946(1,3) - ^ same
01:35:812(5,1) - make it a bit more beautiful http://puu.sh/3n7iG.jpg
02:08:414 - you forgot NC here for consistency stream
02:16:374 (1,2,3,4) - you have different distance between this sliders fix it plz http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/830655
02:28:618 - better finish spin here bcz on next downbeat it's too late~


It's all for me~ Good luck :3
Topic Starter
RikiH_

Katty Pie wrote:

hi ^^ Some suggestions from me :P


Overkill

00:31:527(6) - this note very uncomfortable for play, better put it in x24 y136, it looks much better Sure!
00:32:599(3) - it's a bit overlap with previous slider, better make so https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/830634 Ok
00:34:129(1) - OMG plz fix this overlap >.< it looks sooo ugly ;w; http://puu.sh/3n794.jpg Yep
00:48:823(1) - 1 grid right bcz it to close for next slider~ http://puu.sh/3n7be.jpg Fixed in previous mod
01:10:864 - sound 80% will better in this place Done, fixed also in other diffs
01:22:497(1,3) - I think claps will sounds better here~ it will consistency with previous clap pattern I prefer whistles
01:24:946(1,3) - ^ same ^
01:35:812(5,1) - make it a bit more beautiful http://puu.sh/3n7iG.jpg There is no difference, I tried to do it anyway
02:08:414 - you forgot NC here for consistency stream Fixed
02:16:374 (1,2,3,4) - you have different distance between this sliders fix it plz http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/830655 Ok
02:28:618 - better finish spin here bcz on next downbeat it's too late~ Nah


It's all for me~ Good luck :3
Thanks a lot for your time ;)
Andrea
Moddo solo le tue difficoltà, se non ti dispiace.

~Standard~
  1. Riduci la AR di un tick, è troppo alta per la difficoltà più semplice del mapset.
  1. 02:02:904 (3,1) - Farei partire la new combo nel (3), dato che la musica cambia qui attualmente.
~Overkill~
  1. 01:05:966 (1) - Nonostante ci sia la new combo qui, questo slowdown è davvero inaspettato, farei un'altra pattern.
  2. 01:25:864 - Sembra che manchi una nota qui, perchè non ne aggiungi una? Seguirebbe molto bene la musica, con un whistle.
  3. 01:37:955 (7,8) - Questa pattern è davvero difficile da leggere al primo tentativo, ti consiglio di cambiarla.
  4. 01:48:210 (1,2) - Lo stack tra questi due sliders potrebbe essere migliorato notevolmente se disabiliti il grid snap.
  5. 02:04:129 (1,1,1,1) - Non credo sia necessario il new combo spam, rimuovilo.
  6. 02:12:088 (9) - Aggiungi una new combo qui, altrimenti è troppo lunga rispetto alle altre.
  7. 02:18:210 (9) - Stessa cosa qui.
  8. 02:24:983 (1) - Fai partire questo spinner 1/4 dopo l'ultima nota, non 1/8.
~Sudden Death~
  1. 00:32:139 (3) - Questo slider è brutto davvero, cambia la formazione per favore.
  2. 00:35:966 (1) - Non credo questo slider sia rankabile, però non ne sono assolutamente sicuro.
  3. 01:13:619 (7,8) - Spacing, sono troppo vicini.
  4. 02:04:129 (1,1,1,1) - Non credo sia necessario il new combo spam, rimuovilo.
Mapset molto interessante, mi piace.
Topic Starter
RikiH_

Andrea wrote:

Moddo solo le tue difficoltà, se non ti dispiace.

~Standard~
  1. Riduci la AR di un tick, è troppo alta per la difficoltà più semplice del mapset.
Va bene
  1. 02:02:904 (3,1) - Farei partire la new combo nel (3), dato che la musica cambia qui attualmente.
Ok

~Overkill~
  1. 01:05:966 (1) - Nonostante ci sia la new combo qui, questo slowdown è davvero inaspettato, farei un'altra pattern. Anche se è inaspettato si riesce a non rompere la combo, per ora lo tengo così
  2. 01:25:864 - Sembra che manchi una nota qui, perchè non ne aggiungi una? Seguirebbe molto bene la musica, con un whistle. Ci avevo provato, però se provi ad aggiungerla ti accorgi che non è sincronizzata proprio sul tick bianco ;;
  3. 01:37:955 (7,8) - Questa pattern è davvero difficile da leggere al primo tentativo, ti consiglio di cambiarla. Okay
  4. 01:48:210 (1,2) - Lo stack tra questi due sliders potrebbe essere migliorato notevolmente se disabiliti il grid snap. Fixato
  5. 02:04:129 (1,1,1,1) - Non credo sia necessario il new combo spam, rimuovilo. Ho voluto mettere il NC spam anche nella Sudden Death perchè sta per iniziare un deathstream, e con il NC spam la vita si ricarica del tutto. Vorrei tenerlo se possibile...
  6. 02:12:088 (9) - Aggiungi una new combo qui, altrimenti è troppo lunga rispetto alle altre. Fatto
  7. 02:18:210 (9) - Stessa cosa qui. ^
  8. 02:24:983 (1) - Fai partire questo spinner 1/4 dopo l'ultima nota, non 1/8. Ops, non so come sia successo, fixed
~Sudden Death~
  1. 00:32:139 (3) - Questo slider è brutto davvero, cambia la formazione per favore. Che palle che siete tra tutti :V Fixato, dato che sei almeno la terza persona che me lo dice
  2. 00:35:966 (1) - Non credo questo slider sia rankabile, però non ne sono assolutamente sicuro. Lo è, sennò Scorpiour me l'avrebbe detto penso
  3. 01:13:619 (7,8) - Spacing, sono troppo vicini. Giusto
  4. 02:04:129 (1,1,1,1) - Non credo sia necessario il new combo spam, rimuovilo. Già spiegato nella Overkill
Mapset molto interessante, mi piace. Thank you!
Grazie per il modding!
Scorpiour
recheck:

[General]
  1. Make the ending point of all last spinners the same across the diffs.
Topic Starter
RikiH_

Scorpiour wrote:

recheck:

[General]
  1. Make the ending point of all last spinners the same across the diffs.
Done, thank you a lot for your time
Scorpiour
Bubbled~~!!
Topic Starter
RikiH_

Scorpiour wrote:

Bubbled~~!!
YES.

Thanks!
10nya
yey rikih ^3^
ampzz
Random mod because I felt like it.

General
Timing is off by 4ms at the start so set it to 4738.
Image attached is with the additional timing section tweaked to match up to the changed initial offset as well.



Also, since everything else regarding kiai was consistent why not have the Hyper conform to it too?
It seems weird that it is the only one with a different layout.

Note: All of these mods are after the offset correction has been implemented.

Insane

  1. 00:39:482 (3,4) - Honestly didn't think stuff like this was allowed?
  2. 00:41:931 (3,4) - Heck you can barely see the (4)'s start in this.
  3. 00:54:635 (3) - This isn't 1/8th, it's 1/4 snap.
  4. 01:04:431 (3) - Same as above.
  5. 01:05:962 (1) - Could really use a finish at its start.
  6. 01:06:268 - I would really prefer if this beat was mapped either with a hit circle or repeat end on previous slider.
  7. 01:25:860 - This just needs to go; it is incorrectly mapped as both: that tone and the actual vocal beat you're attempting to map here falls on an 1/12th tick beforehand located at 01:25:834 - .

    This is also an issue with Roxas' Anotheras well.

    I'll also lovingly bring up the fact this is unintuitive to play considering its end actually starts off the new timing point, the kiai and covers up a really nice audible tone that players should be merging in to.
    Personally for this I would much prefer if you just simply had a lull section here from 01:25:554 (3) - until 01:26:166 (1) - with stacking these circles together to give the player this feeling that something big is about to happen.
  8. 01:35:655 (7,8) - These just don't work at all, either use a 1/4 kick slider or three circles, there is no beat on the blue tick located at 01:35:885 -.
  9. 01:47:977 (7) - Considering how you've been mapping so far in the combos this beat shouldn't exist.
  10. 01:52:569 (6) - Same as above.
  11. 01:57:773 (9) - Same as above.
  12. 02:04:125 (1) - From here until 02:05:349 (1) - is beyond comprehension. None of this section is 1/8th at all yet you've got four repeat sliders randomly?
    The correct rhythm for this is -
    SPOILER
    02:04:125 - 1/6th repeat slider until 02:04:431 -.
    02:04:584 - Circle.
    02:04:737 - 1/2 repeat slider until 02:04:890 -.
    02:05:120 - This is actually a 1/16th synthesiser (which lasts until 02:05:196 -) that happens here but I know how stupid Auto is and can't seem to understand that you're supposed to hold it until the slider ends so you could just map it as a 1/2 length slider or two circles.
  13. 02:13:614 (10) - This isn't 1/8th, it's 1/4.
  14. 02:14:839 (4) - Not 1/8th, 1/6th instead.
  15. 02:23:410 (10) - Same as above.
  16. 02:24:635 (1,2,3,4) - This is far from enjoyable at all.
Just thought I would get this out there.
dkun
please feel free to call me when you've gone through ampzz's issues. ;)
ampzz
The mod for that was for [Sudden Death]. *
Topic Starter
RikiH_
I fixed everything in ampzz's mod, thanks a lot, it was really useful.
All except the kiai in Hyper, I'm quite sure Flower would like to keep it that way
dkun
there was an offset change, so here's your bubble back!

great set. I can't wait to see this get ranked. :)
Topic Starter
RikiH_

dkun wrote:

there was an offset change, so here's your bubble back!

great set. I can't wait to see this get ranked. :)
I will look for another BAT, thanks a lot for everything :D
Armin
After some minor note placements on Normal in order to make it easier (considering the difficulty spread and considering the Advanced is just an average Hard)... let's rank that!
Topic Starter
RikiH_
Thank you a lot \:D/
Leader


Gratz <3
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