...and yet again WikiHouse is failing to deliver Futsuus and Kantans >_> I can't check for authenticity properly orzzzzzzzzzzz
[All osu!]
01:33:630 (1,1) - consider adding breaks in between these.
[Easy]
The insane lack of hitsounds at the start make this sound not as pleasing lol... But there's nothing we can do it about it orzviously
Add a Finish sound to the spinners?
Add Whistle to the sliders? They sound a bit dull with the normal drumroll
01:07:255 (7) - suggestion: New Combo
01:17:805 (1,2,3,4,5) - suggestion: symmetry (make the figure so that it opens directly downward)
01:42:860 (1) - haha, just commenting that this annoyed the hell out of me when I tried to play it. (signs of playing Oni too much)
02:14:838 (3,4,5) - blllllllllll spacing
[Normal]
I must say, this is already a bit more difficult than a Normal lol.
Orz spacings >_> Especially for a Normal, that dynamic spacing (at least on the first part) is a bit blargh. Ctrl+Shift+A for AIMod's comments, basically they tell most of the spacing issues I have to say.
00:30:992 (3,4,5) - just make it non-stacked? Goes the same with the previous stuff like this
01:52:751 (4,5,6,7) - wow, really tricky patterns already on Normal. Same comment on the previous ones like these too...
[Hard]
Blargh increase the OD by 1 plz
Maybe also check some of the things AIMod is pointing out. Some of the spacings here really look... blargh.
00:49:454 (4) - lol lacks 1 repeat (it's 5 dons)
01:28:189 (1) - slider too long, check wikihouse entry again (Sequence 67)
00:23:739 (11) - New Combo
00:30:332 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - pfffffft overlap abuse.
00:40:057 (9) - lol spacing.
01:08:409 (8) - ^
01:19:618 (1) - remove new combo
01:41:541 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - not fitting for a return stack like that.
...lol, I can tell someone's lagging from the old days of osu! mapping. Heh.
[All osu!]
01:33:630 (1,1) - consider adding breaks in between these.

[Easy]
The insane lack of hitsounds at the start make this sound not as pleasing lol... But there's nothing we can do it about it orzviously
Add a Finish sound to the spinners?
Add Whistle to the sliders? They sound a bit dull with the normal drumroll
01:07:255 (7) - suggestion: New Combo
01:17:805 (1,2,3,4,5) - suggestion: symmetry (make the figure so that it opens directly downward)
01:42:860 (1) - haha, just commenting that this annoyed the hell out of me when I tried to play it. (signs of playing Oni too much)
02:14:838 (3,4,5) - blllllllllll spacing
[Normal]
I must say, this is already a bit more difficult than a Normal lol.
Orz spacings >_> Especially for a Normal, that dynamic spacing (at least on the first part) is a bit blargh. Ctrl+Shift+A for AIMod's comments, basically they tell most of the spacing issues I have to say.
00:30:992 (3,4,5) - just make it non-stacked? Goes the same with the previous stuff like this
01:52:751 (4,5,6,7) - wow, really tricky patterns already on Normal. Same comment on the previous ones like these too...
[Hard]
Blargh increase the OD by 1 plz
Maybe also check some of the things AIMod is pointing out. Some of the spacings here really look... blargh.
00:49:454 (4) - lol lacks 1 repeat (it's 5 dons)
01:28:189 (1) - slider too long, check wikihouse entry again (Sequence 67)
00:23:739 (11) - New Combo
00:30:332 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - pfffffft overlap abuse.
00:40:057 (9) - lol spacing.
01:08:409 (8) - ^
01:19:618 (1) - remove new combo
01:41:541 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - not fitting for a return stack like that.
...lol, I can tell someone's lagging from the old days of osu! mapping. Heh.