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Mutsuhiko Izumi - Snow Goose

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[ UniCiTy ]
56 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
[ UniCiTy ]
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013년 2월 13일 수요일 at 오전 11:50:49

Artist: Mutsuhiko Izumi
Title: Snow Goose
Source: Jubeat
Tags: Mutsuhiko Izumi
BPM: 200
Filesize: 5420kb
Play Time: 01:37
Difficulties Available:
  1. Another (5 stars, 456 notes)
  2. Beginner (0.9 stars, 61 notes)
  3. Easy (2.34 stars, 92 notes)
  4. EXTRA (5.25 stars, 632 notes)
  5. Insane (4.91 stars, 300 notes)
  6. Normal+ (4.3 stars, 157 notes)
Download: Mutsuhiko Izumi - Snow Goose
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Beginner : Me Making
Easy : Me making
Normal : My making
Insane : My making
Another : My making
EXTRA level of difficulty addition
mod request T,T
thank you
Last edited by [ UniCiTy ] , edited 55 times in total.
B-1B
179 posts
Joined January 2011
B-1B
Remove tag 'snow' and 'goose'. cause they are already in music name. also remove jubeat tag.
and change source to Jubeat. Jubeat is Jubeat, not an [jubeat].
and... your map is bit overmapped. i recommend you fix it.
cirno-_old
cirno-_old
General
Combo color 1 and 4 are too alike.
I had an error occur when loading the file message. The custom background doesn't show up. You should look into that.
I think you did a great job mapping these. The spacing is good, timing is good, and I really like this song :)

Easy
SPOILER
Pretty good. It might be a little hard for an easy, but rightfully so for this song.
00:12:130 (5) - Pet peeve, not perpendicular with (6)

Normal
SPOILER
00:52:621 (4,1) - Overlapping looks ugly
01:27:730 (2,3,4,5) - Add finish to the start of each slider

Hard
SPOILER
AR is way too low. Should be at the very least 7, but this is more like Hard+ so I recommend 8. No higher than that though or else it would be considered an insane.

I think insane and extra are a tad bit overmapped, insane more so since it should just be a normal insane. I can't comment too much on the streams since I can't stream over 160BPM lol. I'll try to give examples.

Insane
SPOILER
00:14:530 (1,2,3) - 00:15:730 (5,6,7) - 00:16:930 (1,2,3) - These are hard to read kinda... the triplets before these give off the impression to hit these faster. But maybe I'm just bad :P

Extra
SPOILER
This diff is so much fun to watch autoplay on. It would be nice to see this ranked/approved and I can tell you put a lot of effort into it :)
00:30:130 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - Overmapped
00:38:830 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - A little overmapped
01:04:930 (1) - Add finish to first hit
01:06:130 (1) - ^
01:06:130 (1,2) - Unnecessary length/speed, but it's no big deal.
01:07:330 (1) - Add finish to first hit
01:08:530 (1) - ^

It looks real good already, but I'd still tweak it a bit. Make insane a little easier perhaps? Or maybe I'm just bad. Honestly, I recommend getting a MAT or BAT to take a look and make sure it's okay before doing much. You already put a lot of great effort into it. Good job :)
[ UniCiTy ]
56 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
[ UniCiTy ]
Revised completion.
beat map modification did my best.
thank you :) :)
[ UniCiTy ]
56 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
[ UniCiTy ]
background image problem solving
GugUCorn
936 posts
Joined October 2011
GugUCorn
카페보고 왔습니다

[Easy]

Distance spacing 1.0x로 맞춰 주시고 노트 간 거리를 맞춰주세요.(Alt키를 누르시면 Beat snap divisor에 표시됩니다.)
그리고 노트 끼리 겹치는 것이 없어야합니다.
adjust the distance snap multiplier so that hit circles only one beat apart don't overlap each other.(http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Easy여기서 가져온 내용입니다)

00:06:130 (1) - 시작부분을 00:05:980,끝나는 부분을 00:07:961
00:09:730 (2) - 슬라이드 중간 점을 없애고 세우는 건 어떨까요?
SPOILER
00:18:130 (3) - 펴주는게 어떨까요? 그리고 위치는 이 정도로...
SPOILER
00:31:330 (3,4,5,6) - 이지에 넣기에는 어려운 패턴이라고 보는데요?
00:49:330 (2) - Clap 제거해주세요
01:33:730 (1) - ^
01:34:930 (2) - ^
01:35:830 (3) - 노트 제거(이지에 겹침 노트는 ㄴ)

이거 말고도 겹쳐져있는 노트가 많이 있는게 고쳐주시고..

[Normal]
SPOILER
  • HP Drain Rate: 5 or below
  • Circle Size: 3 or 4
  • Approach Rate: 5 or below
  • Overall Difficulty: 5 or below
  • Distance spacing : 1.0x
00:19:171 (3) - 노트 제거(뉴비들이 어려워 할 수 있습니다..)
00:38:380 (4) - ^
01:32:380 (6) - Clap 제거

[Hard]
00:08:830 (2) - 중간 슬라이드에 whistle 제거
00:37:780 (6) - ^
01:11:080 (1) - 곡선슬라이드가 살짝 모양이 이상하네요 조절해주세요

그 이상의 난이도는 잘 못 보겠네요...ㅠㅠ
[ UniCiTy ]
56 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
[ UniCiTy ]
. :idea:
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[ UniCiTy ]
56 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
[ UniCiTy ]
[Easy]

00:06:130 (1) - 00:05:980, 00:07:961 스핀 조정 완료하였습니다.(Spin revise)
00:09:730 (2) - done
SPOILER
00:18:130 (3) -done
SPOILER
00:31:330 (3,4,5,6) - 제거 -> 변경(Delete -> solve)
00:49:330 (2) -done
01:33:730 (1) -done
01:34:930 (2) -done
01:35:830 (3) -done :D

[Normal]
[spoilerbox]
  • HP Drain Rate: 5 or below
[list]Circle Size: 3
[list]Approach Rate: 5
[list]Overall Difficulty: 5
[list]Distance spacing : 1.0 solve
00:19:171 (3) - done
00:38:380 (4) - done
01:32:380 (6) - done :D

[Hard]
00:08:830 (2) - done
00:37:780 (6) - done
01:11:080 (1) - done :D

답변 정말 감사드립니다~ 즐거운 게임 되세요~
(Thank you for your answer. Good game :) :) :) :) )
rezoons
rezoons
Hi ^-^,
I like this song and i must say i like your maps. *star*
I didn't find a lot of thing (which is good news) but still better than nothing.

BEGINNER
00:27:100 (3) - Maybe new combo.
01:12:100 (1) - I think the new combo is weird. Remove it or the one at 01:13:300.
01:19:300 (1) - Maybe a finish hitsound just before the break.

EASY
00:05:950 (1) - The spinner finish between two 1/2 beat. Also i think that it should start at 00:06:100 and end at 00:08:200.
00:15:700 (1) - Remove the new combo.
00:53:050 to 00:53:200 - Why did the kiai time stop here?
01:36:700 (1) - You put the finish hitsound at the beggining of the slider and not at the end.

NORMAL
00:15:700 (1) - I think you should either remove this new combo or put a new one at 00:16:900.
01:36:100 (1) - Start the spinner at 01:36:700 and add a finish hitsound.

HARD
*maybe rename it to insane n°2 because it seems more like an insane than an hard.*
00:20:650 - Add a note.
01:20:500 (1) - Maybe remove the new combo.

SUPERLATIVE/EXTRA
I can't mod this kind of map i'm not used to play sorry. But i can say that the maximum score in both maps is too high to be rankable.

INSANE
00:11:500 (3) - The distance spacing is awkward. Maybe invert the note with 00:11:800 (5).
01:37:150 (6) - Same here.

Good luck being ranked. ;)
[ UniCiTy ]
56 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
[ UniCiTy ]
Star give is Thank You :D

BEGINNER
00:27:100 (3) - Done
01:12:100 (1) - Done
01:19:300 (1) - Done
EASY
00:05:950 (1) - Done
00:15:700 (1) -Done
00:53:050 to 00:53:200 - Delete
01:36:700 (1) - Done

NORMAL
00:15:700 (1) - Done
01:36:100 (1) - Done/Spinner Interval is narrower Looks

HARD
Name : Hard -> Insane n2
00:20:650 - Done.
01:20:500 (1) - Done

SUPERLATIVE/EXTRA
I can't mod this kind of map i'm not used to play sorry. But i can say that the maximum score in both maps is too high to be rankable.
It's all right.

INSANE
00:11:500 (3) - Done
01:37:150 (6) - Done

Thank you. good day :)
[ UniCiTy ]
56 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
[ UniCiTy ]
Superlative level delete
beggner, Easy, Normal, Insane n2, Insane, Extra level finish
I add that there is nothing anymore.
mod Request
Cancel
958 posts
Joined August 2012
Cancel
ok.
Natsu
8,100 posts
Joined September 2012
Natsu
Hi~

Black is suggestion
Blue is Highly recomend
Red is unrankable


SPOILER
Background
bg.jpg is 2560x1920, which differs from the recommended size of 1024x768.


MP3 Bitrate
The bitrate for Snow Goose [jubeat].mp3 is 224 kb/s, which is above the maximum of 192 kb/s.

Inconsistency in Countdown:
- [Beginner] : 0
- [Easy] : 0
- [EXTRA] : 1
- [Insane n2] : 0
- [Insane] : 1
- [Normal] : 1

Inconsistency in Source:
- [Beginner] : Jubeat
- [Easy] : Jubeat
- [EXTRA] : [jubeat]
- [Insane n2] : [jubeat]
- [Insane] : [jubeat]
- [Normal] : [jubeat]

Kiai
Inconsistency in Kiai Times:

- [Beginner] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:52:900, ends on 01:21:550

- [Easy] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:52:900, ends on 01:21:550

- [EXTRA] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:52:900, ends on 01:12:100

- [Insane n2] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:52:900, ends on 01:12:100

- [Insane] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:24:100, ends on 00:24:250
Kiai #2: Starts on 00:52:900, ends on 01:12:095

- [Normal] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:52:900, ends on 01:11:956
[ UniCiTy ]
56 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
[ UniCiTy ]
BG : 2560*1920 => 1024*768

Inconsistency in Countdown
ALL Delete

in Source
all jubeat editing

Kiai
Inconsistency in Kiai Times:


all
1 start 00:24:091 ~ 00:43:291
2 start 00:52:900 ~ 01:12:100

thank you~ :)

I MP3 will not solve the problem
Last Bubble
Former osu!catch Champion: 2014
320 posts
Joined January 2012
Last Bubble
곡의 비트전송률(kbps)이 128~192범위를 초과하는군요... 여기 전송률을 낮춘걸로 올리겠습니다. (링크클릭)

http://puu.sh/2VgCr.zip

오프셋은 400입니다. 타이밍이나, 노트배치를 오프셋에맞춰서 해주세요 :D
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