val0108 wrote:

hey o/

[Easy]
00:21:092 (4) - 1grid up left - done
00:48:592 (1) - スピン終わりここかな？→00:48:592 (1) - no

[Normal]
AR5 - done
00:31:509 - add note - done
00:41:925 (1) - スピン短すぎるかな・・・？ - no
00:48:592 (1) - Easyと一緒です。 - no
01:06:092 (1) - remove new combo - done
01:06:925 (2) - new combo - done

[Hard]
00:25:259 (1) - こっちのほうがあってる気がします。http://puu.sh/2eBt - done
01:23:592 (1) - スピンスタートここかな？01:23:488 - done

KingsAL2 wrote:

[Hard]
00:28:592 (1,5) - Ugly of 1 is on the top of 5 - done
01:16:717 (1) - What is this....? - this is wing!!
01:28:488 (x) - You can make the sound of 5%. - done
The sound of calp isn't fix the song.
Please make it or make the sound smaller.

sound smaller - done

[All]
Nothing can find in Normal or easy.
Great. But it is so distance snap.

STAR. good luck.

Regou wrote:

Hi!May I mod your map?

[Easy]
HP drain -1
00:15:675(3)Delete this hitclap? - done
00:17:342(4)^ - done
00:20:259(3)Add a hitclap sound? - done(change whistle )
00:30:259(5)^ - done(change whistle )
00:31:925(1)Add a hitclap/hitfinish sound? - done

[Normal]
AP -1? - done
00:14:425(4)Add hitclap sound here? - done
00:18:175 May add a note here? - no
00:31:509 ^ - done

[Hard]
00:05:884(2,3,4)Place them more beatuiful? - done
00:07:789(2)Down 3 grid to form a triangle? - done
00:13:892(6,7,8)Place them more beatuiful? - done
00:16:895(4)Cancel this hitclap sound? - change whistle
00:17:342(1,2)Delete the new combo? - done
00:22:967(6)Cancel the hitclap sound? - done
00:55:675(3)^ - done
01:06:300(6)Delete the new combo? - done
01:06:925(4)Add new combo here? - done
01:16:717(1)Substitute this slider by a spinner? - no

Thx!! MOD!!

A nice map,star~

Good luck!!!

banvi wrote:

[Easy]
00:05:259 (1) 最初の方にfinish?
00:11:925 (1) 最初の方にfinish?
00:18:592 (1) finish?
00:25:259 (1) 最初の方にfinish?
00:31:092 (n) add note?
00:48:592 (1) finish?
00:53:592 (1) 最初の方にfinish?
01:00:259 (2) ^
01:06:925 (1) finish?
01:08:592 (3) ^
01:13:592 (1) 最初の方にfinish?
01:20:259 (1) ^
01:28:592 (T) 最後の音が目立ちすぎるので01:28:592にvolume10%の緑線を入れると良いと思います＞＜

[Normal]
00:05:259 (1) 最初の方にfinish?
00:11:925 (1) ^
00:18:592 (1) ^
00:24:425 (n) 何か入れると良いかもです
00:25:259 (1) 最初の方にfinish?
00:48:592 (1) [Easy]のように00:50:259まで伸ばしてfinish入れると良いと思います
00:53:592 (1) 最初の方にfinish?
00:59:842 (2) 最後の方にfinish?
01:06:925 (2) 最初の方にfinish?
01:13:592 (1) ^
01:20:259 (T) ここにkiai終了の緑線を移動
01:20:259 (1) 最初の方にfinish?
01:28:592 (T) 最後の音が目立ちすぎるので01:28:592にvolume10%の緑線を入れると良いと思います＞＜

[Hard]
00:05:259 (1) 最初の方にfinish?
00:05:259 ~ 00:10:675 hitsoundが不足していて寂しい感じなのでwhistleとか入れると良いかもです
00:18:592 (3) finish?
00:20:363 (1) remove new combo
00:28:592 ~ 00:38:175 ここもhitsoundが寂しいので普通にclap拍子を続けると良いと思います
00:38:592 (1) 最初の方にfinish?
00:45:259 (2) finish?
00:48:592 (1) 最初の方にfinish?
00:53:592 (T) ここをkiai開始にした方がいいと思います
00:53:592 (6) finish?
01:00:259 (1) ^
01:06:925 (4) 最初の方にfinish?
01:13:592 (3) finish?
01:20:259 (7) ^
01:28:592 (T) 最後の音が目立ちすぎるので01:28:592にvolume10%の緑線を入れると良いと思います＞＜

- ALL done!!

finishばっかでごめんなさいorz
全体的にfinish音が少なすぎると思いました＞＜
good map!! faito~~~ (^_-)-☆

Lunet wrote:

konnichiwa~

General


stack leniencyが低かったことが原因で
Rankedに躓いたケースが過去にあるようなので
ここの数値は上げた方がいいと思います

Easy
fine~

Normal
AR +1
28:592 - new combo
33:592 - ^
59:425 - ^

Insane
40:675 - new combo
51:092 - ^
51:196 - remove new combo
1:23:384 - add note
1:23:592 - (1:23:384's) spinner begins

ALL done!!

& sssstar ! =~=

Mercurius wrote:

[General]
You should set Preview Point
00:55:446 ?

How to set

[Hard]
01:09:009 (4) - Spacing ?
01:16:092 (8) - 1 Grid UP

ALL done!!

Star

1. Remove Tags misato aki yamao0404

1. 00:19:321 - unused timing section
2. 00:19:529 - ^
3. 00:20:154 - ^
4. 00:20:363 - ^
5. 00:20:988 - ^
6. 00:21:196 - ^
7. 00:21:821 - ^
8. 00:22:029 - ^
9. 00:22:654 - ^
10. 00:23:071 - ^
11. 00:23:488 - ^
12. 00:28:384 - addnote?
13. 01:28:696 - unused timing section
    見落としがあるかもしれません　確認してみてください>_<

1. 00:28:592 - clap
2. 00:29:009 - ^
3. 00:29:425 - ^
4. 00:29:842 - ^
5. 00:30:259 - ^
6. 00:30:675 - ^
7. 00:31:509 - Finish
8. 01:15:259 (3) - スライダーの頭にFinish

S o r d a wrote:

Random mod~
hi

[overall]:

1. Remove Tags misato aki yamao0404

[Hard]:

1. 00:19:321 - unused timing section
2. 00:19:529 - ^
3. 00:20:154 - ^
4. 00:20:363 - ^
5. 00:20:988 - ^
6. 00:21:196 - ^
7. 00:21:821 - ^
8. 00:22:029 - ^
9. 00:22:654 - ^
10. 00:23:071 - ^
11. 00:23:488 - ^
12. 00:28:384 - addnote?
13. 01:28:696 - unused timing section
    見落としがあるかもしれません　確認してみてください>_<

[Normal]:

1. 00:28:592 - clap
2. 00:29:009 - ^
3. 00:29:425 - ^
4. 00:29:842 - ^
5. 00:30:259 - ^
6. 00:30:675 - ^
7. 00:31:509 - Finish
8. 01:15:259 (3) - スライダーの頭にFinish

ALL done!!

[Easy]:
Fine

良いmapでしたー！
star(ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉ☆

136,144,73592,6,0,B|160:208|136:248|136:248|184:240|216:288,2,200,4|0|0
256,176,76092,2,0,B|232:112|256:72|256:72|208:80|176:32,2,200,0|0|0

136,144,73592,6,0,B|136:232|136:232|176:272|240:256,2,200
256,152,76092,2,0,B|256:64|256:64|216:24|152:40,2,200

256,144,71925,2,0,B|360:144,2,100,8|8|0
136,144,73592,6,0,B|104:192|104:256|152:288|208:288,2,200,4|0|0

320,216,76717,6,0,B|216:216|192:328|192:328|168:216|62:192|62:192|168:168|192:56|192:56|216:168|320:168,1,770

Louis Cyphre wrote:

[General]
- You don't need your name and Misato in tags. Please remove it
- Please add custom colors. Some custom colors on some skins (for example taiko skin) looks odd with such background. Set default colors as custom.
- Remove " . " from title.

[Easy]
HP OD -1
Most of all are just suggestion, so you can ignore them if you want.

00:21:925 (5,6) - I can't get where is the beautifull part these sliders. I suggest to use them linear, i don't think so that it's possible to make beautifull shape with such short slider.
01:28:592 - why not make volume 5%?
00:50:363 ~ - so short break. I recomend you to increase spinner length extend 00:51:925, keep finish hitsound there.
01:05:259 (4) - add finish at the start and add whistle as a sliderslide?
01:16:092 (2) - Really don't like such such sliders. May be do something more beautifull?
Some examples:
1

136,144,73592,6,0,B|160:208|136:248|136:248|184:240|216:288,2,200,4|0|0
256,176,76092,2,0,B|232:112|256:72|256:72|208:80|176:32,2,200,0|0|0

2

136,144,73592,6,0,B|136:232|136:232|176:272|240:256,2,200
256,152,76092,2,0,B|256:64|256:64|216:24|152:40,2,200

3

256,144,71925,2,0,B|360:144,2,100,8|8|0
136,144,73592,6,0,B|104:192|104:256|152:288|208:288,2,200,4|0|0

Imagine something unlike squarepatterns. More round and round, square/round. Well turn on your fantasy, but not overdo <_<
Same stuff with previous such style sliders. Well i'm a picky with slider shapes

[Normal]
HP -1 ~ -2

00:15:259 (1,2,3) - i guess you forgot to add some hitsounds, if you didn't, then please add some.
00:41:925 (1) - remove spinner or make it longer, or put this slider closer to the center 00:43:592 (1)
00:50:363 ~ - so short break. I recomend you to increase spinner length extend 00:51:925, keep finish hitsound there.
01:28:592 - why not make volume 5%?
I like slider here more then on easy, so please work on easiest difficulty a bit more :3

[Hard]
HP - 2

00:06:404 (3,4) - this pattern pattern might be unreadable. Please make another pattern. Seriously just take a look http://puu.sh/2ord
00:20:363 (4,5) - inconsistens in distance Remove grid snapping and space 4 and 5 properly.
00:20:675 (1,2,3,4) - why jumps? How it fits?
00:28:592 (1,2,3,4,4) - not sure about such anti-jumps. Better to fix them
00:30:050 (1,2,3,4,5) - uh... looks not good.
00:31:925 - starting from here and ending at 00:35:884 you have increased spacing, which dose not fit at all. Please keep same spacing.
00:38:592 - slowdown. Well ok, but please keep same spacing or reduce it a bit, try to avouid stucking with 1/2 notes :<
00:56:300 (1,1,2) - Are you sure dude? It's hard, not insane
01:06:300 (6,7) - highly suggest to place away, it may confuse.
01:06:925 (1) - ^
01:07:342 (2,3,4) - ^. suggested to remake these patter.
01:16:717 (1) - nice slider, nothing to say. it's better to make symmetrical, which more fits, because your slider feels like don't have pair. So do something alone. SOLO sliders. like this for example http://puu.sh/2osi

320,216,76717,6,0,B|216:216|192:328|192:328|168:216|62:192|62:192|168:168|192:56|192:56|216:168|320:168,1,770

- ALL done

Well what can i say, this difficulty has so many different places with different spacing and most of them dose not fit at all.

----

I enjoyed this map, but can be much better. So i'll add my star! :3

Aleks719 wrote:

General
Pending Beatmaps » Mizato Aki - Spread Wings (TV size), Your Artist : Misato Aki <= fix "z" - done
Remove dot from Title.
Set your combo colors? Similar for all diffs of course
Try to keep your hitsounds constantly. Try to aviod random claps, notes without hitsounds etc

Hard
HP -1
00:28:384 (9,1) - ridiculous jump and... - done
00:28:592 (1,2,3,4,5) - ...pretty confused anti-jumps after jump >< - done
00:35:467 (4,1,2) - a bit weird directions of sliders - sry
01:23:488 (1) - remove whistle - done

Normal
Set your point of the Kiai time end as in other diffs. - done

Easy
HP drain -1, OD -1
00:06:925 (2,3) - add whistles
00:08:592 (4) - add whistle to the start, remove whistle from the end
00:10:259 (5) - add whistle
00:44:425 (4) - ^
00:45:259 (1) - add whistle to the start, remove clap from the start
00:46:925 (2) - ^
00:55:259 (2) - add finish to the start, remove clap from the start
00:56:925 (3,5) - add whistles
01:01:092 (3) - add whistle to the end
01:03:592 (2,3) - add whistles
01:13:592 (1) - add whistle to the end
01:16:092 (2) - add whistle to the reverse
01:18:592 (3) - add whistle

Kitsuneko wrote:

hi from modreqs


ちょっと譜面覗かせてもらった時に下の事が目に付いたので合わせてmoddingを

[Hard] 00:07:134 (1) - reverse arrow が隠れてます。よほどのことがない限りUnrankableみたいなので要修正

hitosondsに関して…
全Diffでhitsoundsが全くついてない箇所あるようですが退屈に感じるので僕はあまり良く思わないです
一つの案としてですがHardなら以下の感じ等

suggestion for hitsounds:
00:32:342 (3) - add whistle
00:34:009 (4) - ^
00:40:259 (6) - ^ to head
00:41:925 (4) - ^ to head
00:43:592 (3) - ^ to head
00:46:925 (1) - ^
00:47:759 (5) - ^ to head
00:49:009 (2) - ^ to head
00:49:842 (4) - ^ to head
00:50:259 (x) - add finish
00:50:675 (2) - add whistle
00:51:092 (1,5) - ^

あとサビの音量が前半と同じで盛り上がりに欠ける感じがしますので
サビでの音量を50%から65%くらいに上げるのがいいかも知れません

ALL - done

がんばってね

star here ☆彡

frost-b-spec wrote:

#modreqs

[Hard]
0.31.509(6) - spacing(off grid) - done
0.56.925(4) - delete 2nd waypoint - no

[Normal]
1.23.384(1) - 刻んで音量を下げると尚良いかと思います。 - done

[Easy]
0.21.925(5) - (4),(5)と直線的に並ぶとより綺麗に見えます。and delete 2nd waypoint - done

+star~

Lissette wrote:

hihi~

Remove "Oretachi ni Tsubasa wa Nai" since is already in source, also remove "anime" since will be in genre.

Hard
00:11:397 - useless timing section
00:38:585 (1) - End it 1/4 beat later at 00:39:002 - plays and sounds better
00:51:821 - useless timing section
00:52:029 - same
01:19:418 (2,3,4,5) - If you listen the drums beat, here would fit a stream, just suggesting
01:20:252 - end kiai time here?
01:28:689 - useless timing section

Normal
Re-snap all notes
01:20:252 - end kiai time here?
01:28:689 - useless timing section

Easy
Re-snap all notes
01:13:592 (7) - new combo
01:20:252 - end kiai time here?
01:28:689 - useless timing section

---ALL done---

Star~

Thank you really

Lizbeth wrote:

Try this offset: 5267
Re snap all your notes and kiai timing points after changing offset

Hard
00:14:118 (7) - I suggest to remove this note, doesn't match - done
00:38:596 (1) - this is not snapped. Fix the lenght - done

Your new combo placement could be better in my opinion, don't know what you follow. but I suggest follow the vocals to set new combos for this map.
Example: 00:13:585 - new combo here - done
or 00:15:252 (1) - here
00:16:918 - here too is a good place. - done

With this examples I think you get my point, if not let me know and I'll try to explain better.

bye~~^^

blissfulyoshi wrote:

I'm getting 5261 for the offset, so can you get someone to check it over pls?

Easy:
01:02:766 (1) - Remove the new combo to be consistent with 01:09:433 (4) and 00:56:933 (3)?

Normal:
00:21:100 (4,5) - The overlap with 00:19:433 (2)'s 300 makes this part look messy. I suggest you change it.
00:35:683 (1) - ^(overlap with 00:34:433 (5))

Hard:
At the rate I'm going, I am probably just going to complain how messy this map is, so I highly advise that you play the map again and fix what is needed to make it look neater.

--- ALL Fixed ---

Just curious, what did you change in the map to pop your own bubble?

It is my mistake

==================
It seems like I only have issues with the messiness of the map. Everything else seems to check out. As a result, call me back later, and I'll remod.

blissfulyoshi wrote:

No need for kds, just trying to point out what I dislike in hard.

Easy and Normal are fine.

Hard: Does not look like much changed, so I am going to list eh overlaps I disliked to make things more clear.
AR(approach rate) seems a little high, you might want to decrease it
00:14:219 (2,1) - overlap
00:17:760 (3,5,3) - overlaps (this section gets feels a little messy)
00:27:761 (8,1) - overlap
00:45:885 (5,2,3) - overlaps
I think you get the idea now. If not I highly advise you get someone to translate this for you.

I corrected it

Sorry to trouble you, but please teach if there is a place still corrected　

===============

Lets see what you do from here. I'll await your changes.