Thanks for mod request 
Bakaleaf
Btw.Some modding info.
Color Help:
Red -> You must change it.
Blue -> Change it as well.
Black -> Suggestion only.
Let's go.
[Normal]
00:03:149 (3) - Left 1 gird as well.
00:06:830 (1) - Remove New Combo.
00:08:671 (4) - Yep. The New combo should be here.
00:23:027 (3) - In fact , I don't suggest any SV changing at the lowest diff in a mapset. And it's not been recommended. Add a Spinner here?
00:54:499 (6,7) - Hidden notes are a bit hard for new players >~< Well, but it's still fine. Just up to you.
01:06:278 (6,7) - ^
01:08:855 (3,4) - ^
01:11:616 (2,3) - Don't overlap here. Suggestion for this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/105307
Ok. That's all for Normal diff. Good enough.
[Hard]
HP Drain + 1
00:35:542 (T) - Why using speed down here? 1.0x as well.
00:54:131 (4) - I guess it shouldn't be speed down. Long slider is also ok.
01:08:855 (4) - New combo here.
01:11:800 (3) - Umm, overlap on 01:11:616 (2) - ? And suggestion: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/105309
Seems fine o.o
[Alarmable]
Add Kiai Time?
HP Drain + 1 ? More score XD.
00:17:137 (6) - New Combo?
00:32:045 (5) - Overlap at 00:32:229 (6) - ? to be smooth.
00:32:781 (7) - New Combo.
00:47:873 (1,2,3,4,5) - I suggest this : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/105312 more fun to play XD
00:56:892 (x) - Add a note here? sounds better.
Good job! Like this diff.
Sounds like 水樹 (?) ww
Good luck XD

Btw.Some modding info.
Color Help:
Red -> You must change it.
Blue -> Change it as well.
Black -> Suggestion only.
Let's go.
[Normal]
00:03:149 (3) - Left 1 gird as well.
00:06:830 (1) - Remove New Combo.
00:08:671 (4) - Yep. The New combo should be here.
00:23:027 (3) - In fact , I don't suggest any SV changing at the lowest diff in a mapset. And it's not been recommended. Add a Spinner here?
00:54:499 (6,7) - Hidden notes are a bit hard for new players >~< Well, but it's still fine. Just up to you.
01:06:278 (6,7) - ^
01:08:855 (3,4) - ^
01:11:616 (2,3) - Don't overlap here. Suggestion for this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/105307
Ok. That's all for Normal diff. Good enough.
[Hard]
HP Drain + 1
00:35:542 (T) - Why using speed down here? 1.0x as well.
00:54:131 (4) - I guess it shouldn't be speed down. Long slider is also ok.
01:08:855 (4) - New combo here.
01:11:800 (3) - Umm, overlap on 01:11:616 (2) - ? And suggestion: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/105309
Seems fine o.o
[Alarmable]
Add Kiai Time?
HP Drain + 1 ? More score XD.
00:17:137 (6) - New Combo?
00:32:045 (5) - Overlap at 00:32:229 (6) - ? to be smooth.
00:32:781 (7) - New Combo.
00:47:873 (1,2,3,4,5) - I suggest this : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/105312 more fun to play XD
00:56:892 (x) - Add a note here? sounds better.
Good job! Like this diff.
Sounds like 水樹 (?) ww
Good luck XD