abalee wrote:

insane:
00:32:076 (1,2) - claps at the ends?
01:39:276 (1) - auto只有1000恐怕會有問題.
02:33:276 (2) - ,02:34:647 (2) -前面那個縮到前一個白線好點，後面的話壓歌聲的話可以放紅線，對節奏的話還是前一條白線好點.

Normal:
00:12:190 (5) - 去掉(推薦)，或者改成soft-normal音效.
00:33:961 (1) - 延長到00:36:361 (x) - ?
00:55:390 (1) - silence the end

Alace這個tag放不放也可以，可以後面加上去.

FIXED thank you!

Mm...

Normal:
A very boring mapset... To make it you have to remake parts like 0:47:847 - 0:52:304 which are besically a bunch of 1/1s without a rhythem to the song. Most of your beatmap has got a break between notes of 1/1 which is not going to get liked by others in 2011. You've got to use other techiniques of mapping to make the mapset wanted.
The slider velocity is very weird also. a velo below 0,60 is probably is used in less than a fourth of Normal difficulties. I think 0,80 looks good. If you want to place slow slider at e.g when she sings I'm aaaaallliiiiivvvvvveeeee you can simply slow the speed to x0,75.
Anyways... Before you change the velo, see if you like this mod of your boring sequences:
0:08:076 - During this and the next combo you go a circle and then 2/1 slider. To make it more intresting you can shorten the lenght of second slider in each combo by a half and then repeat.
0:22:133 - slider slider slider slider circle circle circle circle... It even sounds boring when you say it... Make this slider double lenght after removing (3) and then add a note at 0:22:819.
Only by doing that the game is a little bit more intresting.

Alazy:
0:01:219 (1,2,3,4)- No other difficulty has finishes anywhere in this bit. Fix please.
0:33:790 - Straighten the wonky slider.
2:26:419 - No new combo

Insane:
2:05:333 - No new combo, this bit can truly get okay without it.
2:08:076 - ^
2:10:819 - ^
2:12:876 - Maybe a spinner here till 2:14:254
2:15:619 - And s pinner here also 3/1 long? You might also decided to do only one of them which also looks nice~
2:24:533 - No new combo.
2:30:533 - Would be nice if you kept a distance between combos so remove this note?
2:34:304 - No new combo
2:33:961 - Add a note
2:35:333 - ^

Fix something

Download: Becca - I'm Alive!(Full Ver.) (Neptunus) [Alazy].osu

Alace wrote:

Fix something

ADDED ~

Hmm.
Normal:
01:07:733 (1) - 這個slider的spacing好像壞掉了.

abalee wrote:

Hmm.
Normal:
01:07:733 (1) - 這個slider的spacing好像壞掉了.

fixed!

Hi~

[General]
去掉每个diff的BECCA Tag，因为已经在Artist上有了
在每个diff前面加上1-2秒的 lead-in

[Normal]
为什么只有这个diff这么多哔哔哔哔哔~~~~
00:29:333 (1,2...6,7) - (3) (7)+whistle (6)去掉
00:51:276 (3) - +whistle
01:04:304 (4,1) - 我觉得(4)的边缘叠在(1)上不好看
01:07:733 (1) - 左一格?
01:27:619 (2) - 去掉尾部的whistle?
02:22:476 (5) - 去掉whistle
02:23:847 (2,4) - 去掉尾部的whistle
02:58:819 (2,4) - ^
03:04:990 (7,8) - 去whistle
03:05:676 - 跟这里的重音怎么样

[Alazy]
找不到什么要改的 .

[Insane]
第三个combo color太暗了，在有些地方看不见approaching circle
00:27:104 (4) - 去掉clap?
00:29:847 (4) - ^
00:51:276 (2) - 尾部加clap
00:52:304 (5,6) - (5)加clap (6)去掉
01:30:704 (5) - 加C1 clap
01:33:447 (4,8) - clap?
02:29:333 (5) - new combo?
02:33:276 (2,2) - 这两个slider拉得不好看
02:37:904 (4) - clap
02:57:104 (3) - ^
03:00:704和03:02:247 - 这两条绿线用意何在?
03:10:647 - 删无用绿线

最后. A sweet star~

Shiki wrote:

Hi~

[General]
去掉每个diff的BECCA Tag，因为已经在Artist上有了
在每个diff前面加上1-2秒的 lead-in

[Normal]
为什么只有这个diff这么多哔哔哔哔哔~~~~
00:29:333 (1,2...6,7) - (3) (7)+whistle (6)去掉
00:51:276 (3) - +whistle
01:04:304 (4,1) - 我觉得(4)的边缘叠在(1)上不好看
01:07:733 (1) - 左一格?
01:27:619 (2) - 去掉尾部的whistle?
02:22:476 (5) - 去掉whistle
02:23:847 (2,4) - 去掉尾部的whistle
02:58:819 (2,4) - ^
03:04:990 (7,8) - 去whistle
03:05:676 - 跟这里的重音怎么样

[Alazy]
找不到什么要改的 .

[Insane]
第三个combo color太暗了，在有些地方看不见approaching circle

SPOILER

[attachment=0:a173f]19.jpg[/attachment:a173f]

00:27:104 (4) - 去掉clap?
00:29:847 (4) - ^
00:51:276 (2) - 尾部加clap
00:52:304 (5,6) - (5)加clap (6)去掉
01:30:704 (5) - 加C1 clap
01:33:447 (4,8) - clap?
02:29:333 (5) - new combo?
02:33:276 (2,2) - 这两个slider拉得不好看
02:37:904 (4) - clap
02:57:104 (3) - ^
03:00:704和03:02:247 - 这两条绿线用意何在?
03:10:647 - 删无用绿线

最后. A sweet star~

thanks!

Good luck.

star!!

General
- Your easiest diff has 3.19 stars. Make your Normal a bit easier than now or add Easy.
- I'm sure that your title must be "I'm Alive! (Full Ver.)" (with space between "Alive!" and "(Full" ). Full submit after that. <=
- Add "Alace" to the tags in all diffs, remove "anime" from the tags, it will be in genre.
- Make your combo colors constantly for the all diffs.
- I suggest to set slider tickrate 1 for all diffs.
- Add kiai to the Alace's diff like in other diffs?
So you'll need in full submit after title changing, try to fix this :
nor bg.jpg <-- link at the image seems ugly. try to remove this text from image.

Normal
HP+2, OD+2
00:01:219 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - unstack this notes please
00:12:190 - add break here?
01:51:276 - this break is TOO long ~26sec. Map it.
02:45:790 (1) - remove nc
Make this diff easier (sliders instead of notes etc)

So, try to ask some mods before rebubble please. You map is not perfect atm.

.

Popped

Looks like Aleks719 already pointed out the unrankable things.

Aleks719 wrote:

- Your easiest diff has 3.19 stars. Make your Normal a bit easier than now or add Easy.
- Add "Alace" to the tags in all diffs

I suggest you follow the rest of his mod too.

General
Remove anime from the Tags. It will be placed under genre. I also suggest you add Black Butler to the Tags.
Add a space between Alive! and (Full Ver.), so the artist - title should be, Becca - I'm Alive! (Full Ver.)
Make sure you follow viewtopic.php?f=56&t=24443 to avoid submitting duplicate maps.

Normal
00:14:933 (x) - Add note here?
00:33:790 (x) - Add note?
00:55:390 (1) - Since you're already following the vocals, move this 1/2 back. Since you're silencing the end of the spinner, I suggest ending it at 00:57:447 instead so the music matches the silent end.
00:58:819 (x) - Add note here?
01:10:476 (x) - Move the break start to here?
01:38:761 (1) - Move 1/2 back and make it end on the same time. It sounds better IMO - follows the music right after the note.
02:14:161 (x) - I agree that this break is very long. Map it.
03:05:676 (x) - Add note here?
03:06:019 (x) - Add note here?

Alazy
Add kiai too?
02:51:961 (1,2,3,4,1) - Suggestion: Don't anti-jump these notes.

Insane
Sliders don't look so neat.
00:04:989 (1) - Remove new combo to follow pattern at 00:02:247 (3)
01:10:476 (1) - I don't suggest a crumpled slider like this at this part. 1) They don't match the music at that part at all. 2) They attribute to the draining of the HP bar.
01:13:219 (2) - Same as above
02:29:333 (5) - Don't anti-jump this.
03:00:876 (x) - End kiai here to be consistent with Normal

NoHItter wrote:

Popped

Looks like Aleks719 already pointed out the unrankable things.

Aleks719 wrote:

- Your easiest diff has 3.19 stars. Make your Normal a bit easier than now or add Easy.
- Add "Alace" to the tags in all diffs

I suggest you follow the rest of his mod too.

General
Remove anime from the Tags. It will be placed under genre. I also suggest you add Black Butler to the Tags.
Add a space between Alive! and (Full Ver.), so the artist - title should be, Becca - I'm Alive! (Full Ver.)
Make sure you follow viewtopic.php?f=56&t=24443 to avoid submitting duplicate maps.

Normal
00:14:933 (x) - Add note here?
00:33:790 (x) - Add note?
00:55:390 (1) - Since you're already following the vocals, move this 1/2 back. Since you're silencing the end of the spinner, I suggest ending it at 00:57:447 instead so the music matches the silent end.
00:58:819 (x) - Add note here?
01:10:476 (x) - Move the break start to here?
01:38:761 (1) - Move 1/2 back and make it end on the same time. It sounds better IMO - follows the music right after the note.
02:14:161 (x) - I agree that this break is very long. Map it.
03:05:676 (x) - Add note here?
03:06:019 (x) - Add note here?

Alazy
Add kiai too?
02:51:961 (1,2,3,4,1) - Suggestion: Don't anti-jump these notes.

Insane
Sliders don't look so neat.
00:04:989 (1) - Remove new combo to follow pattern at 00:02:247 (3)
01:10:476 (1) - I don't suggest a crumpled slider like this at this part. 1) They don't match the music at that part at all. 2) They attribute to the draining of the HP bar.
01:13:219 (2) - Same as above
02:29:333 (5) - Don't anti-jump this.
03:00:876 (x) - End kiai here to be consistent with Normal

THANKS FOR YOUR MODDING! MOD FOR INSANE REALLY HELPS

hmm i don`t really like kiai time in my maps (i only use them in Taiko diffs)
fix the anti jumps

Download: Becca - I'm Alive! (Full Ver.) (Neptunus) [Alazy].osu

Neptunus wrote:

so,AFTER MANY TIMES TRYING , now you are able to post at some modding queue, congratulations
ALEKS719

Wuut? Maybe you want to say that this things are rankable? Really?

Alace wrote:

hmm i don`t really like kiai time in my maps (i only use them in Taiko diffs)
fix the anti jumps

ADDED

Better.

Normal
01:53:676 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Why did you just stack these?

Insane
01:53:676 (x) - So in [Normal] this break is mapped. Why in Insane, it isn't...

Fix these and I'll rebubble

NoHItter wrote:

Better.

Normal
01:53:676 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Why did you just stack these?

Insane
01:53:676 (x) - So in [Normal] this break is mapped. Why in Insane, it isn't...

Fix these and I'll rebubble

Fixed!
and for the 02:02:590 (1) -
in order not to disrupt the next rhythm, so I just snap with a spinner

Rebubbled

NoHItter wrote:

Rebubbled

THANKS!

NoHItter wrote:

Rebubbled

I popped myself since I think my work was not very satisfying, but also thank for your bubble~

Gogogo Alace

BUBBLED 2IC

Yay full version \o/

~Normal~
02:57:447 (1) – New combo (or else spinner won’t give hp boost at the end).


Good luck ^_^
Don't kudosu


~Twinkle twinkle little star~

Haneii wrote:

Yay full version \o/

~Normal~
02:57:447 (1) – New combo (or else spinner won’t give hp boost at the end).


Good luck ^_^
Don't kudosu


~Twinkle twinkle little star~

thank you but.......... ah.......it was a new combo, or am I wrongly understand your meaning?? :3

Umm...I do have the latest version...I think :S, well it does say "latest version but not approved"

checked it again it still isn't a new combo

Haneii wrote:

Umm...I do have the latest version...I think :S, well it does say "latest version but not approved"

checked it again it still isn't a new combo

FIXED NOW~

[Normal]
AR試試看3吧
00:27:961 (3,4,5) - 不均勻的spcing
00:40:304 (2,3,4) - ^
00:44:419 (3) -右,上一格 grid(size 3)?
00:52:819 (1,2,1,2) - 成一直線如何?
01:10:476 - break time在這裡不適合?[IMO]
01:18:019 (1) - 結尾的地方擺在01:20:419 - 如何?
01:31:733 (1,2,3,4) - 不均勻的spcing
01:39:104 (1) - 貌似是在01:39:961 - 結束的(?)
02:31:390 (2,3) - spacing
03:10:647 - 多餘了?

[胖胖](slap)QAQ
挑點nazi... 01:16:990 (6,7,8) - 結尾的位置間距排成一樣的會比較好看
01:40:304 (2,5,6) - ^
01:44:247 (5,6) - 後面好像也是複製的...也是一樣...

第一次mod 老師的diff呢~水準太高...很難mod阿lol

[Insane]
01:13:733 (3) - 歪了?
01:22:133 (1,2,3,4,5) - 也是歪了...
02:43:219 (4,5,6) - 容易讓人混淆的間距...
02:58:133 (1,2) - 堆疊起來
03:03:619 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 恩...覺得間距部份沒有處裡的很好
03:10:647 - 多餘了?

其實我覺得你的音效做的也不錯阿!!
star!!
((看到好像rebubble很多次了...我汗

spboxer3 wrote:

[Normal]
AR試試看3吧
00:27:961 (3,4,5) - 不均勻的spcing
00:40:304 (2,3,4) - ^
00:44:419 (3) -右,上一格 grid(size 3)?
00:52:819 (1,2,1,2) - 成一直線如何?
01:10:476 - break time在這裡不適合?[IMO]
01:18:019 (1) - 結尾的地方擺在01:20:419 - 如何?
01:31:733 (1,2,3,4) - 不均勻的spcing
01:39:104 (1) - 貌似是在01:39:961 - 結束的(?)
02:31:390 (2,3) - spacing
03:10:647 - 多餘了?

[胖胖](slap)QAQ
挑點nazi... 01:16:990 (6,7,8) - 結尾的位置間距排成一樣的會比較好看
01:40:304 (2,5,6) - ^
01:44:247 (5,6) - 後面好像也是複製的...也是一樣...

第一次mod 老師的diff呢~水準太高...很難mod阿lol

[Insane]
01:13:733 (3) - 歪了?
01:22:133 (1,2,3,4,5) - 也是歪了...
02:43:219 (4,5,6) - 容易讓人混淆的間距...
02:58:133 (1,2) - 堆疊起來
03:03:619 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 恩...覺得間距部份沒有處裡的很好
03:10:647 - 多餘了?

其實我覺得你的音效做的也不錯阿!!
star!!
((看到好像rebubble很多次了...我汗

thanks

yareyare

Download: Becca - I'm Alive! (Full Ver.) (Neptunus) [Alazy].osu

Alace wrote:

yareyare

ADDED

[Normal]
nothing to say ^^

[Alazy]
00:49:904 (5) stack it correctly under 4
01:22:819 (5) stack it correctly under 4
01:38:933 (8) stack correctly under 7

[Insane]
nothing to say ^^

nice song^^ star

I don`t know how those 0.01 happened XD
thanks for checking this kind of tiny stuffs

Download: Becca - I'm Alive! (Full Ver.) (Neptunus) [Alazy].osu

Alace wrote:

I don`t know how those 0.01 happened XD
thanks for checking this kind of tiny stuffs

ADDED!

Insane
00:47:847 - useless timing section
00:13:390 - move this inherited timing section, half not later, so the spinner bonus don't suddenly mute at this point in gameplay, or silence slider bonus (same to the others like this)
01:10:476 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - make this combo like this http://puu.sh/3uB5 see where is 3 and 4 ? the spacing will be consistent and the pattern will be the same too ^^
01:13:219 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - same
01:30:361 (1) - sounds good if you move half beat earlier, then remove 01:30:704 (3) ?
02:32:933 (1) - this big jump feels odd while playing it, maybe you could 02:32:933 (1,2,1,2) - flip horizontally?
02:43:733 (6) - wrong spacing
02:26:590 (1) - same as 01:30:361 (1)
02:45:790 (1) - same

Normal
same as insane about spinner bonus

Star~

Lissette wrote:

Insane
00:47:847 - useless timing section
00:13:390 - move this inherited timing section, half not later, so the spinner bonus don't suddenly mute at this point in gameplay, or silence slider bonus (same to the others like this)
01:10:476 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - make this combo like this http://puu.sh/3uB5 see where is 3 and 4 ? the spacing will be consistent and the pattern will be the same too ^^
01:13:219 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - same
01:30:361 (1) - sounds good if you move half beat earlier, then remove 01:30:704 (3) ?
02:32:933 (1) - this big jump feels odd while playing it, maybe you could 02:32:933 (1,2,1,2) - flip horizontally?
02:43:733 (6) - wrong spacing
02:26:590 (1) - same as 01:30:361 (1)
02:45:790 (1) - same

Normal
same as insane about spinner bonus

Star~

All fixed!
The only pattern that I would like to remain unchanged would be "01:30:361 (1) - sounds good if you move half beat earlier, then remove 01:30:704 (3) ?" well ah....this could be better for advanced players because keep up with rhythm would be more dynamic and excite than keep up with vocal, because the vocal sudden slow down there could cause combo break supposing that the player would be too focus on rhythm for the whole pattern of the map was that~ :3
By the way , I really like your Avatar, really~

little irc mod and....

Bubble~

Too busy being alive!

DeathxShinigami wrote:

Too busy being alive!

yeah....much more busier than I thought it would be when I was a child

-It shouldn't need (Full Ver.) on the thread title or the title in-game. Every song is assumed to be the full version unless stated otherwise

Normal:
-This is pushing it to be the easiest difficulty in the mapset and isn't too beginner friendly (especially looking at the other 2 difficulties). I suggest you try and lower the SV slightly more and simplify a few of the harder patterns that are around.
00:06:704 (2,3) - I wouldn't stack these in case beginners miss the repeat that is hidden for some of the time
00:34:133 (1) - end this at 00:36:019 or 00:36:361
01:18:019 (1) - end on red tick before or after as it fits more

Alazy:
01:10:476 (1,2) - the repeat is almost hidden so I would try moving this around slightly more

Insane:
01:09:790 (6,1) - try and space these out more
01:29:676 (2,1) - ^
02:11:162 (3,1) - ^ (you could rearrange the star)

A few too many anti jumps on Insane for my liking but a good mapset overall

Fix a bit, it may look better now
BTW lower the SV in a finished map is not wise, sliders will be broken XD, you need to remake all of them

Download: Becca - I'm Alive! (Full Ver.) (Neptunus) [Alazy].osu

James2250 wrote:

-It shouldn't need (Full Ver.) on the thread title or the title in-game. Every song is assumed to be the full version unless stated otherwise

Normal:
-This is pushing it to be the easiest difficulty in the mapset and isn't too beginner friendly (especially looking at the other 2 difficulties). I suggest you try and lower the SV slightly more and simplify a few of the harder patterns that are around.
00:06:704 (2,3) - I wouldn't stack these in case beginners miss the repeat that is hidden for some of the time
00:34:133 (1) - end this at 00:36:019 or 00:36:361
01:18:019 (1) - end on red tick before or after as it fits more

Alazy:
01:10:476 (1,2) - the repeat is almost hidden so I would try moving this around slightly more

Insane:
01:09:790 (6,1) - try and space these out more
01:29:676 (2,1) - ^
02:11:162 (3,1) - ^ (you could rearrange the star)

A few too many anti jumps on Insane for my liking but a good mapset overall

fixed thanks~

Looks like all of the main things have been fixed and normal was made slightly easier. Went through and fixed some of the more confusing anti jumps on Insane, the rest of them can stay for the sake of the patterns.

All checks out
Ranked~

Congrats on 1st ranked map

James2250 wrote:

Looks like all of the main things have been fixed and normal was made slightly easier. Went through and fixed some of the more confusing anti jumps on Insane, the rest of them can stay for the sake of the patterns.

All checks out
Ranked~

Congrats on 1st ranked map

Thanks for the mod!
Thanks for ranking!

/fangasm

/faints

Good mapset overall, congratulation on ranking!

I believe this map could use -10 offset, though that could probably be fine tuned.

congratulation

Insane 더 잘 할 수 있었다